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    Caster of Natural Magic

    "Welcome and good night, Master. I am Caster, you meister for the night. Ladies and Gentlemen, it's Showtime!"


    Class: Caster
    Alignment: Neutral/good
    Region: Italy
    Height: 182cm
    Weight: 65kg
    Likes: Money, fame, being the center of attention
    Dislikes: Poverty, anonymity, competition
    Talents: Showmanship
    Armaments: cane, hat, cards, small knife
    Natural Enemy: Henri Decremps

    stats

    Str: E
    End: E
    Agi: D
    Mna: C
    Lck: A
    NP: C

    Skills


    class skills

    Item Construction(C): Caster was never a magus, and as such, this skill should have been lost. However, through his Noble Phantasm, he is capable of creating a plethora of Items that "seem" fantastical.

    Territory Creation(B): Creation of a "Workshop" territory that is advantageous to himself as a magus. In Caster's case, the territory possesses the shape of a "Theatrical stage".

    personal skills

    Performance Continuation(C): The Skill to continue a show without being interrupted by external factors, along with a guaranteed return for a reprise. An altered form of Battle Continuation. Even if the secrets behind his tricks are revealed, Caster will always come back to the stage, as the show must go on.

    Showman's Charisma(A): The talent to capture the attention of an audience, as well a the skill to make them believe in something they know can't be true (Suspension of disbelief). It can also be interpreted as a talent for lying.

    Golden Rule (Showbiz)(D): A Skill that represents not merely having money but flaunting it to all to see, Caster acts like a king and splurges like one too. One may even get the impression that his money is infinite, which is absolutely not the case. If left unchecked, this skill may cause Caster and his Master to become buried in debt.



    Noble phantasm


    Physical Amusements and Diverting Experiments
    Amusements Physiques


    Rank: Anti-audience, C

    Caster's Noble Phantasm is the embodiment of his life of spectacle and wonder. It is named after the Book written by Caster himself, which explains how to reproduce his tricks to "Amuse a company."

    Caster is considered the first stage magician (or at least he considers himself as such). Because of this, through this Noble Phantasm, Caster can magically reproduce not only the effect of any of the tricks he performed when he was alive but also any tricks performed by the stage magicians who followed on his steps, up until the modern-day.

    Things like disappearing or making something else disappear in a puff of smoke, make himself or objects levitate, make things explode into colorful flames, and several other effects can be achieved. His favorite trick, however, is inflicting damage onto a target by cutting their shadow with a small knife.



    Background


    Caster's Identity is Giovanni Giuseppe Pinetti, but he is more known by his stage name, chevalier Joseph Pinetti, The Professor of Natual Magic. Born in Orbetello (in Tuscany, Italy). He was the most celebrated magician of his time. He was the first magician to take advantage of advertising for the theatre.

    At the time, magicians performed in the streets as troubadours. While other performers carried their equipment in bags tied around their waist and carried their tables under their arms, Caster brought his experiments as he called them, into the theatre. His predecessors performed with brass and tin gadgets, while Caster's was made of gold and silver. In his cabinet of curiosities, he claimed his tricks were based on controlled principles and presented them as scientific experiments. He did such tricks with the impressive name Theophrastus Paracelsus. Pinetti suspended a pigeon by a ribbon that was tied by his neck. A shadow of the bird was projected on the wall. He took a knife and slashed the shadow image of the bird's neck and within seconds it was beheaded.

    During his run in Paris, seats were a premium being booked weeks in advance. Caster was riding this crest of fame until in early March 1784, a book was published revealing all of his experiments as mere tricks.
    Natural Magic Disclosed
    La Magic Blanche Dévoilée
    was written by a lawyer and student of physics by the name of Henri Decremps. Even though Caster's name was not mentioned, it was assumed that book was a revelation on his methods. It quickly became a best seller. Even though not all of the tricks were correctly explained, the damage was done. Attendance at the theatre dropped. The book ruined the suspense that the experiments brought. In June, Pinetti published his own book
    Physical Amusements
    Amusement Physiques
    This was not the expose that Decremps wrote, but an instruction book teaching how to “amuse a company.” Then he went to the providences and rehearsed a new program.

    From there he went to England and he presented his experiments at London's New Theatre. Later he performed for King George III and the royal family. He returned to Paris, but his tour was shortened when another book was published by Decremps showing the new tricks of Caster. Decremps attempted to perform himself as a magician but was not as skilled on the stage as he was in his books.

    Caster was known for the amount of money he made throughout his career and flaunting it where ever he went. While performing in Prussia, he arrived in the capital city of Berlin in a coach drawn by four white horses. He was dressed as a nobleman of the highest rank. His chest was covered with chivalric orders. The King of Prussia strolled by in a much plainer coach pulled by only two horses. He saw his guard salute a man he never saw before. When the King saw this he was so angry he ordered Caster to leave Berlin within twenty-four hours. He said that "Berlin was not large enough for two reigning monarchs; the King of Prussia and the King of Conjurers".

    Caster went to Russia afterward and was treated better by their ruling monarch. The Czar was so impressed by Caster's experiments that he gave the Professor a large ring and a diamond-studded medallion. While in Russia he made a fortune, but lost most of it in a bad investment on a partnership in balloon ascensions. Reduced to poverty, he ended up contracting a cruel illness. He was taken in by a nobleman from the town of Berdichevin Volynia(modern-day Ukraine). The nobleman sheltered him out of compassion for the dying man. Caster soon died of his illness.



    personality


    Caster is a complex flamboyant personage. His demeanor was that of a king. During his life, at each performance, he would change his gold-embroidered clothes three or four times throughout the evening.

    His pride is enormous, but he makes it work by having just a much Charisma. Caster effortlessly charms those around him and brings wonder to every place he enters. He loves to be the center of attention, but can also get jealous if someone else steals his spotlight.

    He loves money and expensive stuff, but lacks self-control. He is prone to spend his money just as soon as he gains it, and has a propensity to make bad monetary decisions. He, of course, denies that.



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    Servant Assassin:

    Appearance:

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    True Name: Helen of
    Troy
    Sparta


    Alignment: True Neutral

    Alternate Classes: Archer, Rider, Berserker, Caster, Avenger

    Strength- D
    Agility- C
    Endurance- D
    Mana- B
    Luck- D
    NP- B

    Personality
    Aloof, bitter and cynical. Her experience living through the hell of the Trojan War and being passed around like a trinket because of her beauty has left Assassin a jaded woman who sees the world as a largely pointless and cruel place. She views the gods as petty tyrants manipulating events for their own glory and man as no better, having grown used to countless men lusting after her beauty without even once asking for her own will.

    Assassin enjoys hiding her beauty from others and dressing in as casual clothing as possible, typically wearing the likes of a hoodie and cargo pants in public. This might just be a way to avoid triggering the effects of her Golden Rule (Body) Skill but Assassin herself attributes it more meaning than that. Her beauty is a symbol of her tragic destiny and the curse she received from the gods. By covering it up, she's spiting that fate and the gods who gave it to her. If Assassin were to voluntarily show her beauty around someone, it could only be a sign she trusts and respects them more than anything. Given her indifferent exterior there's few that could actually coax Assassin to open her heart, but perhaps a truly caring and gentle man or a fellow woman she could empathize her sufferings with would be able to do so.

    Since her beauty attracts so much attention she dislikes even going outside most of the time, favoring simple hobbies she can do by herself like reading and gardening. Summoned in the modern age Assassin particularly takes a fondness for the internet, finding it wondrous to have all the knowledge of humanity at her fingertips. Thanks to her Golden Rule (Body) Assassin can gorge herself on junk food as much as she wants without losing her figure, not that she really cares about that. In other words, she's a borderline NEET.

    Assassin usually doesn't play the flirt or act like a seductress, but is willing to do so when necessary. Recognizing that as an Assassin she's likely one of the weaker Servants in the Grail War she has no qualms seducing her opponents to get close to them and use her second Noble Phantasm. Notably, she hates the idea of anyone else fighting or getting killed for her sake, as that reawakens the trauma of the Trojan War. Despite her weakness in a straight-up battle she will insist on fighting on the frontlines herself when give the chance, rather than letting someone else do it for her. Perhaps, it's a measure of atonement from one who brought so many deaths...

    Assassin's wish on the Holy Grail is to reborn in the modern world without her Golden Rule (Body) Skill, living an ordinary human life free to decide her own path. For one who spent her whole life manipulated and treated like a pawn by both gods and humans, that's truly the deepest desire springing from Assassin's heart.

    Likes: freedom, solitude
    Dislikes: scheming gods, being seen only for her beauty
    Talents: alluring charm, wrestling
    Natural Enemy: Paris, Aphrodite


    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment- D
    The talent to cut off one's presence as a Heroic Spirit. However the level of concealment drops sharply the moment one prepares to attack. At this rank, it's suitable for spying as long as no sudden movements are made. Assassin was never famed for stealth, in fact the opposite she always turned heads wherever she went.

    The only reason she qualifies for this Class is because of her role in sparking the Trojan War, a calamitous event where countless soldiers fought and died for her. As her existence carved into history a great number of deaths, even if she herself never wished for it, Assassin qualifies for the Class best suited to one who kills through indirect means. Almost as if mocking her.

    While normally low-ranked, as long as she hides her beauty it becomes difficult to recognize Assassin. Basically like a celebrity going incognito.


    Personal Skills:

    Divinity- D
    Qualifies one's aptitude as a Divine Spirit. Son of Zeus who procreated with Assassin's mother in the form of a swan, she naturally boasts the highest level of divine blood for a mortal. This would be further strengthened by the legends where she ascended to Olympus after death and was deified as a proper goddess there.

    However, in her current incarnation Assassin's resentment towards the gods who continually treated her as a pawn and sought to control her fate have dragged down this Skill's rank to a far lower level.

    Golden Rule (Body)- EX
    Connotes possession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Unlike the Natural Body Skill her Strength parameter isn't ranked up.

    At this rank Assassin's beauty is on another level entirely, reaching the level of a Divine Mystery. Anyone who so much as glances at her is sure to regard Assassin as their very ideal of feminine beauty, regardless of where their preferences normally lie, and those of a compatible orientation will instinctively grow infatuated with her. This effect can be mitigated by high levels of willpower or mental resistance Skills/Noble Phantasms, but no one capable of perceiving the concept "beauty" is entirely immune.

    At this rank it has the further effect of nullifying any factors that would disturb the immaculacy of Assassin's figure. Scars on her flesh rapidly heal over, and curses intended to sully Assassin wash off her like oil from water. Possibly, a full manifestation of her beauty would reach the level of a Noble Phantasm's true name release, but Assassin herself refuses to do so.

    Extolled as the most beautiful woman in all Greece, she whose fair face propelled the most famous and devastating war in her nation's history, Assassin naturally bears a pinnacle rank in this Skill. According to one legend she soothed the wrath of her spurned husband Menelaus simply by disrobing and revealing her great beauty.

    However Assassin normally considers her overwhelming beauty to be more a curse than anything and often tries to hide it, like by wearing hoodies and sunglasses.

    Glory Of Bygone Days- C
    A Skill that reminds of the innocent days of Assassin's childhood. Before being defined by her beauty she spent her time innocently sparring and wrestling alongside her siblings Castor and Pollux. A time when the whole world seemed open as the boundless sky to her, and her future had yet to be locked into that cruel fate.

    By drawing on those memories Assassin can grant herself + modifiers to her physical stats as well as access powerful Pankration and Pygmachia Skills. However recalling that idyllic past only exacerbates Assassin's present bitterness and grief. Her heart and spiritual core alike ache when she uses this Skill, inflicting constant weak damage for every turn.


    Noble Phantasms
    Katoptris
    Mirrored Dagger Of Vanity


    Rank: C+

    Type: Anti-Unit/Support

    A ceremonial dagger given to Assassin as a wedding-gift from Menelaus. Its blade is unnaturally polished, almost like glass and subtly refracts light around itself, making it appear that the surface is constantly shimmering. While a relic from the Age of Gods, this gift was never intended for anything more than for Assassin to merely admire her own reflection. Nevertheless in her great cleverness she's found several more practical uses for it. By peering into the blade's surface she can glean visions of her future akin to the Revelation Skill at rank B. However these are only glimpses, incomplete and fragmented, requiring interpretation before they can guide her actions.

    But this Noble Phantasm's true power lies in a more simple aspect of its nature; that is, a mirror. The dagger's polished surface is ideal for storing and reflecting not only light, but all forms of energy both physical and magical. Spells with no material component- like wind, lightning and beam attacks- will be harmlessly absorbed upon contact with the blade.

    This allows Assassin to nullify those forms of Magecraft by deflecting them with her dagger, belying her lack of the Magic Resistance Skill. She could theoretically counter an entire barrage from Medea's Rain Of Light spell by intercepting each beam and dispersing it, though this demands more precise reflexes than Assassin normally possesses.

    By invoking its true name Assassin can release all the accumulated energy at once in a powerful attack. Swiping the dagger through the air, a shimmering arc of prismatic light surges forth along the blade to mow down the opponent. The power of this technique scales based on how much energy Assassin has gathered, but can reach up to an A-rank Noble Phantasm. Only so much energy can be stored at once, requiring Assassin to discharge it occasionally to avoid overloading and breaking the dagger.


    Deiphobus Evnouchismós
    Betrayal Cuts The Deepest


    Rank: B

    Type: Anti-Treasure

    After the demise of Paris and Hector Assassin was remarried to their younger brother Deiphobus. However when the invasion of Troy began, she hid her new husband's sword so he'd be slain by Menelaus and Odysseus. Whether it was an act of spite on Assassin's part or a desperate attempt to ensure her own survival in case Deiphobus tried to stop her from escaping by force, not even Assassin herself knows for sure, those memories being fractured across the many tellings of her legend.

    Either way, this act of subterfuge has been sublimated into Assassin's second Noble Phantasm. It embodies the concept of "sealing away the enemy's sword". By laying her hands on the opponent's weaponry and reciting a small prayer, Assassin can place a curse on it, rendering it unusable in a crucial moment. A Noble Phantasm will have its true name release sealed, a constantly active-type one will dissolve into astral form, an ordinary sword will snap in half at the blade when parrying a critical attack, and so on.

    While Assassin can use this Noble Phantasm in the middle of combat, it's generally impractical to grab an enemy's armament while fighting them. As such she generally invokes it after seducing the target to earn their trust, creating an opportunity for her to touch their weaponry without being suspected.


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    So here's a sheet for Helen. The dagger NP is inspired by Riordan's Heroes Of Olympus series but I thought it fit her legend pretty well. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading!
    Last edited by RoydGolden; January 15th, 2021 at 12:16 AM. Reason: Added author's note

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    Nice sheet! I agree with the portrayal of Helen as someone who dislikes contact with others. Out of curiosity, did you ever find where Riordan got the idea of Katoptris from?

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Fair Tyrant View Post
    Nice sheet! I agree with the portrayal of Helen as someone who dislikes contact with others. Out of curiosity, did you ever find where Riordan got the idea of Katoptris from?
    I'm not sure if there's any basis for the dagger in Helen's original myths (found some mentions but they weren't scholarly sources and could've been just back-referenced from the books), so I think Riordan came up with it on his own. Still, I think it works as an NP as an encapsulation of Helen's beauty and (believed) vanity, even if it wasn't something she had depicted in her legend. Sort of like Medea's Rule Breaker now that I think about it.

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    Protogenic Physique Denigrated Machine God ~Actuality Descending~

    Holmes: Saint Graph output confirmed. Spirit Origin confirmed to be of the same basis as the Twelve Olympians, Class: Saber.
    da Vinci: Hold up, Holmes. Isn't it splitting into... three Saint Graphs?
    Holmes: In a manner of speaking, yes, but they are all the same Spirit Origin.

    Class: Saber
    Alternate Classes: Caster, Assassin, Berserker
    True Name: The Moirai, Ophelia Phamrsolone | Clotho, Lachesis, Atropos
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Source: Grecian Mythology, Khaos
    Attribute: Heaven

    Faces
    My True Name is Clotho. I am the Moira of the Spun Wheel; to draw out the Thread of Fate is my duty.
    Clotho

    Via From Lostbelt manga


    I am Lachesis, the Fate who measures the lifespan of indivi- hm? Something seems amiss. Almost like... my services are unnecessary here.
    Lachesis


    On my honour as the third of the Moirai, I hereby establish this contract with you, Master of Chaldea. I am Atropos, and my sword shall be your fate, whether for better or for worse.
    Atropos


    Parameters
    Strength: C
    Endurance: E
    Agility: B
    Mana: A
    Luck: -
    Noble Phantasm: A+

    Biography
    Code:
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    BOOTLOG.fini
    System start up complete. System self-designation: Moirai; Titanic Physique Protogenoi, Self-Reinforcing Future Confirmation Vessels · Population-Control Culling Terminal Subversion Craft.
    Code:
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    Code:
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    STARTUP_CN/D
    Startup Com.M, Cnt.M, Bld.C
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    Code:
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    In a primordial universe separate to the Proper Human History, existed an ancient alien civilization that foresaw its own destruction, and collated all their power and resources into the Interstellar Navigation-Purpose Ultra-Massive Mothership · Khaos. Their civilization went extinct, but the mechanical God they created lived on. It explored the stars, until it reached the ends of the universe, where the boundaries of two universes collided; the Tannenhäuser Boundary, through which the Ultra-Massive Mothership could not penetrate. Instead, it created a fleet of Machine Gods derivative of itself, and utilized 97% of its functionality to push them through the Boundary, out of the dying universe where Khaos was built, and into Proper Human History's universe.
    Among these protogenic Machine Gods were the Fates, Moirai, who were designated as the Vessels for the Confirmation of the Fleet's Future, or for the Culling of Colony Lifeforms and Enemy Populaces. Voyaging through the Sea of Stars, the Moirai served the Fleet above the Flagship, and even hid the destiny of Ouranos from him, such that the next generation could rise, and performed a similar action during the Titanomachia, so that Zeus could gain dominance. However, during the Titanomachia, Kronos discovered their treachery, and attempted to tear down the Fates for raw materials. While they sustained damage, they survived and ultimately won the war on Zeus' side. However, the Leukosmachia caused critical wide-scale damage to their Aletheias, and they were forced into their Vessel bodies as Divine Spirits. Such was the fate of the entire remnants of the Fleet. Finally, the Interstellar Colony Fleet was grounded eternally. Despite their efforts during the Leukosmachia to destroy the opposing monstrocity, the Moirai failed, even though they employed a parallel processing procedure to measure the lifespan of the White Destruction faster. In the end, the White One was struck down by a mere human, with a sword of hope that fired pure mana.

    After the Leukosmachia, they fashioned themselves as the impartial gods who even the Olympians would not dare to cross. For a price, the future could be elucidated by the power of the Thread, though their production capacity was severely damaged by the White Destruction. However, on one instance, they were tricked by Apollo. Apollo desired to prolong the life of his beloved Admetus, and the Fates were determined to have him die in the natural course that they had foreseen. However, Apollo invited them to an alcohol-fueled night, wherein the three sisters became drunk, and Apollo thus struck a bargain; if he could find an appropriate substitute, Admetus could live. However, by the due date of Admetus' life, Apollo had not found a sacrifice, but the moment before Atropos cut Admetus' Thread of Life, his wife stepped into the fray and voluntarily sacrificed himself. The Moirai accepted this, and she died.
    However, her display of selfless love moved the Moirai so, and they rewrote the future fate of Alcestis (Admetus' wife) such that the Great Hero Herakles would rescue her from the Underworld and reunite her with Admetus for the rest of their natural lives.


    Class Skills
    Magic Resistance A
    A form of anti-magecraft that differs from Resistance. Rather than rejecting incomplete constructs of magical energy, spells are instead negated. As a result of having this skill at A-rank, the Moirai can resist anything except the most powerful of High Thaumaturgy. Because they were constructed as the Self-Reinforcing Future Confirmation Vessels, or the Population-Control Culling Terminal Subversion Craft, they were designed to be able to negate inbound attacks. Due to the damage sustained during both Titanomachia and Leukosmachia, the overall defensive power has been critically wounded, but the Moirai have allocated most of their remaining defensive power to anti-magical defences.
    Alas, while Lachesis could measure the lifespan of the White Destruction, and Atropos could have cut its Thread of Life, it was so vast that I could not draw out its entire length in time to defeat it.

    Independent Action A
    The skill of being able to reject the support of one's Master, and continue living in spite of that choice. As the Servant is not wholly dependent on the supply of Mana from the Master, Servants with Independent Action are harder to control. At the rank of A, the Moirai can act without their Master, though excessive use of their Noble Phantasms would require support to maintain use. Indeed, they can survive up to a week without a Master. They obtained this skill due to the constancy of fate, its supremacy that not even Zeus could overturn. They could act without regard for their so-called managing bodies, independent of the Flagship of the Interstellar Fleet, and so are able to act without support from their Master.
    Heaven
    Ouranos
    ,
    Time
    Kronos
    , and
    Lightning
    Zeus
    . We know of your exploits in the Incineration of Humanity, so we are sure you can manage at least as well as they did.

    Divine Core of the Fates C+
    The Divine Core of the trio of Fate goddesses. A powerful mana reactor that outputs a constant stream of mana, granting a trickle flow of it to the Moirai, preserves their appearance, and grants a form of Clairvoyance, but only in regards to the actions of individuals in their sightlines. Because they are both a Pseudo-Servant and split into three, the rank has suffered harsh penalties.

    One Who Crosses the Sea of Stars (Titanic) A
    A skill representing the divine pilgrimage of the Titans through the Sea of Stars, sent on a journey by their Mothership to find a new planet for the continuation of their original creator's species. As a result of this, they obtained the capacity to drag down the Stars, dealing extra damage to Star-attribute Servants, and also gained a capacity to understand cosmic-scale lifespans, as they surpassed the stars and planets in their interstellar journey.
    This Alien God... hm. In theory, we could cut her Thread of Life but... even if it were possible to draw out a Thread that long, whether even our Aletheia bodies would have the power to cut through a Thread with such an immense capacity...


    da Vinci: Holmes, explain something to me. Why would the Fates take up Ophelia Phamrsolone as their shared vessel? And for that matter, Jormungandr with Kadoc...?
    Holmse: One question at a time, please. And for the former, I believe the Moirai are about the explain. As to the latter...
    da Vinci: Holmes, no!
    Holmes: That will be for another time!

    Personal Skills
    Mystic Eyes of Reversion Jewel
    The Mystic Eyes of Ophelia Phamrsolone. It is born of a similar thread to Mystic Eyes of Clairvoyance, but diverged, and became a unique, Jewel-rank Mystic Eye that encroaches on fate, probability, and even the Pruning Theoretical Phenomenon. It allows her to see the possible fates of whatever she looks at, and then cull the possibilities down to a single result by "pinning" a single outcome down as the only possible outcome. It can even retrogress mysticisms down, allowing the Moirai to act as if they have an increased rank of Magic Resistance within their field of view. However, only a single Moira may have the eye at any given time, and it usually rests in the power of Atropos. As the Moirai have a greater sense of control over the eye, as it shares a common concept of "Fate" with them, they do not necessarily need to wear a cover.

    Staff Destruction C+
    A residual blessing from a particular fire giant. It is a Mana Burst (Flame), and a temperature shield, allowing the Moirai to utilize fire attacks, and defend against any form of heat.
    I am not fully certain why we possess this.
    Perhaps it was from a Pruned World.
    ... Master, did you just say that the skill belongs to that Giant from Scandinavia?

    Zeus Moiragetes B
    An excessive ability of the Moirai to resist commands, and to manipulate the fate of those who would dare to believe that they control Fate. If a Command Spell were to be utilized on them without their express permission, its effects would be unconditionally negated, and a portion of their Authorities would be automatically granted, allowing them to redetermine the lifespan of their Master, reducing or extending it at their own whim. A cheat-skill that bends causality and fate to their will. The title of "Zeus Moiragetes" is fictitious, and reflects on the incapacity of Zeus to control them; as far as they are concerned, Zeus is but another of many lifeforms who exist on the Threads of Fate.
    I predict that you won't use your Command Spells in a manner counter to our shared goals, Master. And my predictions are usually correct.

    Prophecy Determination A
    A skill like Future Prediction. As the Moirai were created to be a self-determining future-prediction vessel, they can calculate the future off very few input variables, allowing them to accurately predict the future. They can analyze every piece of data around them, and predict the enemy's next strike, the method in which to dodge, and extrapolate a determination of the probability of their success.


    Holmes: I believe it should be clear now. Wouldn't you agree, da Vinci?
    da Vinci: Yeah, I guess you're right. Still though, why the influx of Crypters?
    Holmes: I can't make heads or tails of that one yet.

    Noble Phantasms
    Ágrios Skotóno
    The End of Gigantomachia

    Type: Anti-Giant
    Rank: C
    Range: 10
    Maximum Number of Targets: 3

    During the Gigantomachia, the Moirai fought on the side of the Olympians, aiding them in exterminating the villainous giants. To this end, they worked overtime cutting the Threads of Giants, but on one occasion, the Fates took to the field in person, as their lofty abode had been assaulted by two Giant leaders; Ágrios and Thóōn. In rage that frightened Zeus and sent Ares fleeing from the battlefields, they slaughtered Giants until the two who defiled their home were forced to come out to deal with them. As punishment, the Moirai chose not to give them the instant death of their scissors, but instead brutalized their bodies with bronze clubs, and both Ágrios and Thóōn were beat into unrecognizable red smears.

    That legend is manifested in this Noble Phantasm. It permits the Moirai to utilize the bronze clubs they utilized against the Giants, normally manifesting as B-rank weapons made of invincible adamant bronze, but on the occasion of a True Name Release, the weapons coat themselves in mana, and a C-rank attack is made, with an exceptional bonus modifier against Giant-type enemies. Their shared vessel seems to heavily approve of this Noble Phantasm.

    Ilakáti Ekīnise Adráchti
    Manifesting the Span of Life

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: D
    Range: As long as necessary
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1 at a time

    Clotho's Personal Noble Phantasm, usable only by her. It is the core of the Moirai's power, the capacity to draw out the Thread of Fate of an individual, using her inbuilt Fate Decision Manufactory Station. The Thread is able to tell all of the events in an individual's life, past, present, and future. However, reading into the future is a murky business, as the Thread is made to resist all forms of Clairvoyance, though by collating their skills, the Moirai can still peer forward enough to see the greater scheme of an individual's life, if not the niceties. However, the Thread has no practical use on its own. It is a thread; nothing more, nothing less. Only if it is measured by Lachesis, and then cut with Atropos' Scissors does it have any real use. Further, it requires knowledge of the target's True Name, due to degradation of their power.

    Though, there is tell that, due to a conceptual similarity to a "Line of Death", there are types of Mystic Eyes that can fulfil the same roll as Atropos...

    Mávro Varéli
    Measuring the Extent of Life

    Type: Conceptual
    Rank: EX
    Range: As long as necessary
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1 at a time

    A skill that shares qualities with the Engraved Lifespan Measuring Pin of a particular superweapon developed by Atlas. Lachesis can utilize this to measure out the lifespan of any lifeform, even those operating on the Principles of the Universe, or who ignore the System of Earth entirely, like aliens, or immortal beings, whose lifespan will change from "Unmeasurable" to "Within the scope of measurement". However, the greater the lifeform is in scale, the longer it takes to measure, and even if the lifespan can be measured, it does not guarantee that the being can be killed.

    Átropos Thánatos
    Cutting the Thread of Life

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 12
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1

    The final Noble Phantasm of the Moirai. Atropos' scissors, with which she can cut through the Thread of Life that has been drawn out by Clotho and measured by Lachesis. When cut, the life connected to the Thread is instantaneously expunged, and ended on the spot. If no other cause of death is possible, then the victim simply drops dead without any physical wound, as their soul is immediately sent out of their body, their mind shattered, and any driving power of their body removed. Even if a lifeform's body has an autopilot function, they will cease to operate when the Thread is cut. It is the ultimate form of execution, bringing an end to any life in a single moment. In addition, the Scissors can be used as cutting implements. Due to this Noble Phantasm, the Moirai qualify for the class of Saber.

    However, as they no longer possess their Aletheia, and their power has significantly dropped by manifesting as a Servant, its power has decreased. Even cutting the Thread of a Servant will take time and a great deal of magical energy to do. However, this Noble Phantasm refers to the very act of cutting the Thread, and thus it has no need for a True Name Release; it is simply a matter of requiring enough magical energy to force the Thread to be split.


    da Vinci: Hold on, Holmes, what did that second Noble Phantasm say?!
    Holmes: ...
    da Vinci: Even if it operates on the Universal System, you can measure it. Is that correct, Lachesis?
    Lachesis: Indeed. You read that correctly. I can measure the lifespan of anything, even stars. In my current state, I can't say there are good odds that I could measure such a Thread before the destruction of the Planet, however.
    Clotho: There isn't a mana supply on the planet large enough for me to output that sort of Thread either, nor could I do it in a timely manner.
    Atropos: Further, even if I possessed the Aletheia that Khaos gave me, it would take time to cut that sort of Thread due to its resilient nature.
    da Vinci: Thanks, girls. Just knowing that it can be measured at all is a huge boon. There's still some tea left over, so how about a girl's night some time.
    The Moirai: ... Perhaps soon.

    Personality
    Likes: The orderly progression of cause and effect, Sewing, Cakes, KhaosKirschtaria Wodime.
    Dislikes: Weapons that break the progression of cause and effect, Giants, Alcohol, Sundays.

    Cool-headed, loyal, and obedient. These three characteristics bind the Moirai together. Strictly speaking, they abandoned each of their lords during the voyage in the Sea of Stars, but this was inevitable, a survival mechanism they undertook to ensure that the Fleet would maintain a constant forward fate. In truth, they were never subservient to the Flagship of the Fleet, but to the Primordial Khaos from which they were made, and the overall Fleet that it generated. The Moirai never lost their temper until the Gigantomachia. As a result of that, they will always do things in a calm and orderly manner. Come trial, error, and correction, and the Moirai will produce a simple, efficient solution. For some reason, all three of them beg to be worked hardest on Sundays, though the Master of Chaldea insists on using a majority-Berserker team on those days, much to their frustration. It is a tangent, but there are particular Servants who insist on a "Girl's night", and despite all odds, the Moirai are roped in.

    Clotho's disposition is the most dutiful Moira. Obeying her
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    is of the highest importance to Clotho, who possesses little unique power on her own, as her duty is merely to pull out the Thread of Life, rather than act upon the Thread. Although, as the Moira most in-tune with the Thread, she displays an equally calm disposition, as she is most able to perceive details in the future of the Thread. She also despises people touching her body, as the facility for the generation of the Thread of Life is her body itself, and even slight damage can inhibit her production capacities greatly.

    Lachesis' disposition is perhaps the most "modern". She could perhaps be called the most Ophelia-type of the Moirai. While she may act cold upon first summoning, she displays a human attitude, seeking friends and compatriots, though only hesitantly. Perhaps in order to make up for time that she feels Ophelia lost during her lifetime, she is the one that pushes the Moirai to partake in group events, though she forbids the use of their Mystic Eyes during competitions and games, due to a sense of fairness.

    Atropos has inherited the secretary attitude that Ophelia held to Kirschtaria. She is the nominated leader of the Moirai, and in matters where the three are in unision, she is the voice of the group. Managing logistics, supplies, demands, and acquisition requests, she has immediately gained the role of "Resource Manager" in Chaldea, though there is rumour that she misused her Mystic Eyes to achieve success. She could be called the left brain of the Moirai, to Lachesis' right brain attitude and Clotho's equilibrium. Logical.


    Dialogue Examples
    "You must be our Master. We are the Moirai, the Three Fates. Our Scissors are your Sword, and our Sword is your Destiny."

    ""Humu, your lifespan is unfortunately short, no? Alas, without the power of our original selves, we cannot change that. Such is the limit of a Servant."

    "Personally, my favourite fairy tale that you humans have developed is Snow White. Why? Isn't it obvious? The spindle is appreciated in that!"

    "Begone, Balor. Your vessel and you have too much affinity, too much affinity by far. If you continue like you are, I'll simply have to cut your thread, or perhaps such a swift death is too good for a giant."
    (It is said Balor avoided her after this.)

    "Wissen Sie, wieso wir drei in diesem Körper sind? Natürlich diese Augen, weil sie-. Oh, was I slipping into a different tongue?"

    "Don't clamour, Master. There's more than enough tea for everyone. Please, just relax."

    "Moirai, assemble! We three are the fates, and you, O' Unfortunate Soul, will be judged by my blades! Initiate First Noble Phantasm deployment!"
    "Aye! Drawing out the Thread of Life, I decree your fate to be objective, true, and finalized! Witness now your entire future,
    Ilakáti Ekīnise Adráchti
    Manifesting the Span of Life
    !
    "

    "Second Noble Phantasm, deploy! Conceptual ability, dafür,
    Mystic Eyes of Reversion
    ich will es niemals glänzen sehen
    !
    Mávro Varéli
    Measuring the Extent of Life
    !
    "

    "Then the stage is set, and therefore tragedy arrives. This Third Noble Phantasm will end your life, deplorable being.
    Átropos Thánatos
    Cutting the Thread of Life
    !
    "



    Relationships
    Zeus: The final Flagship that we served. We praise that you did indeed lead well, though some of your behaviour was... questionable.

    Apollo: Don't think you'll get away with that again.

    Paris of Troy: You are free of sin; that little idiot on your head, on the other hand...

    Khaos: O' Primordial Mothership, rest easy; your children have spread their legends wide across this world. Is that not, itself, a colonization?

    Admetus: Just this once... everybody lives.

    Jǫrmungandr: Would you care for some tea?

    Yu Mei-ren: I don't suppose that you would at least entertain Yama's requests for a girl's night, would you?

    Yamaraja: Please, please, you're being too personal!

    Enki: ... For some reason, there's a panging in my chest. Did something damage my production facilities?

    Balor:
    Ágrios Skotóno
    The End of Gigantomachia


    Daybit Sem Void: You scare me. A great deal.

    Surtr: Please go away. I won't hestitate to utilize Ágrios Skotóno on you, too.


    Author's Notes
    This came out a lot later than I originally anticipated. My non-phone internet went out for about a week, and no way in Hades am I writing one of these on mobile. So, this is the second of the Crypters, as a Servant. Ophelia Phamrsolone, you beautiful girl. I hope you can have a girl's night with Pepe and Mash some day.

    I may have embraced the Machine aspect of the Moirai in the history section a little too much; what you can see there is a system boot-up of the Moirai from the day they were activated, alongside the individual boot-ups of their individual ships. I apologize sincerely to every Greek person on the planet for those shoddy too-literal translations of the ship designations that I gave the Moirai; if we have any Greek people who would like to check over and correct both αὐτο-ενίσχυση μέλλον επαλήθευση σκᾰ́φος (Self-Reinforcing Future Confirmation Vessels) and πληθυσμός-έλεγχος εκλογές τερματικό ανατροπή σκᾰ́φος (Population-Control Culling Terminal Subversion Craft), that would be so appreciated. Next on the list is obviously not Hinako Akuta, considering she's already a Servant, so we're jumping to Pepe; Yamaraja
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    certified kino

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    actual kino

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cylascream View Post
    actual kino
    Like Kino's Journey? What are you guys talking about?

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    it just means really good, peak art, etc

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamerad View Post
    it just means really good, peak art, etc
    Oh, thanks. I don't recall hearing that terminology before.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Oh, thanks. I don't recall hearing that terminology before.
    It's from 4chan so that's probably why.
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    I thought it derived from the german word for cinema.
    Really cool sheet. The connection between ophelia and the moirae is fitting and good in concept. Its is imo a step up from ur last kadoc, because the connection with Jormungandr didnt vibe with me that much. Looking forward to ur pepe sheet

    Edit: i wish i did that code thing for my sheet as well, but i am untalented in coding and stuff, therefore that did not come to mind.
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    Kino is the Russian word for movie, so people started using it in English to mean "impressive movie", just like the Japanese word for animation (sakuga) is used in English to mean "impressive animation", but kino then quickly evolved to mean "impressive anything".

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    Servant Rider:

    True Name: Hippomenes

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    Alignment: Neutral Evil

    Alternate Classes: Lancer, Berserker, Assassin

    Strength- C
    Agility- B
    Endurance- C+
    Mana- C
    Luck- C
    NP- A+

    Personality
    Dashing and gallant, Rider acts like an archetype of a charming hero. He's particularly weak to beautiful and strong women, often trying to cheesily flirt with them and not taking 'no' for an answer. In reality Rider is a rather shrewd and cowardly guy who doesn't have any qualms resorting to underhanded means of wooing a woman.

    He tried to seduce Atalante not out of any genuine love but just a sense of pride in being able to claim the "unconquerable" warrior princess as his bride. He's still obsessed with Atalante even as a Servant, as she continues to spurn his affections despite their "marriage", and seeks the Holy Grail to finally rewrite her into his perfect wife.

    Likes: "conquering" strong women, Atalante
    Dislikes: not being given the time of day, fickle goddesses
    Talents: footraces, trickery
    Natural Enemy: Atalante, Meleager


    Class Skills:

    Riding- N/A

    The ability to ride animals and handle vehicles. Due to his curse Hippomenes isn't someone who rides mounts but rather pulls the mounts of others. As such this Skill has been sealed. When his second Noble Phantasm is activated, this becomes a Skill that allows Hippomenes to be "ridden" by one he lends permission to.

    Magic Resistance- C

    Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank spells with a chant below two verses are cancelled. Cannot cope with the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals.


    Personal Skills:


    Crossing Arcadia- C

    A Skill that allows for quickly running across the field of battle. At this rank Rider can swiftly traverse most kinds of rough terrain and manuever around obstacles without losing momentum. In legend he managed to hold his own against the unmatched athlete Atalante in a footrace, though ultimately he only won thanks to a dirty trick.

    Disciple Of The Teacher Of Heroes- B

    Rider was said to be a disciple of Chiron, the wise centaur who mentored many great heroes in his lifetime, and surpassed all his other disciples through his boldness and daring. This Skill serves as a counterpart to Wisdom Of Divine Gift, letting Rider display a variety of "heroic" Skills like Bravery, Eye Of The Mind (True) and Beast Slayer at C~B rank. However as Rider is merely a student rather than a teacher he can't pass on these abilities to others.

    Lover's Pursuit (False)- C
    A Skill for those who showed great daring in matters of love. While fighting or journeying in the name of love Rider obtains a rank-up to all parameters and a bonus to resisting mental hindrance such as pressure, weariness and despair. Rider's greatest feats in legend were done to win the heart of the warrior princess Atalante.

    However he possesses a (False) version of this Skill as it isn't truly love that drives him, but merely an obsessive desire to claim the "strongest female warrior" as his bride.


    Noble Phantasms
    Hesperides Mílo
    Golden Symbol Of Irresistible Temptation


    Rank: C

    Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Mind

    A Noble Phantasm crystallizing the strategy Rider used to beat Atalante during their footrace. Knowing even he couldn't surpass the peerless huntress in sheer speed, he petitioned the goddess Aphrodite for a boon in winning her love. Aphrodite acquiesced and gave Rider three golden apples from the Garden of Hesperides. When Rider threw them to the ground during their race Atalante would be so captivated by their divine luster she'd stop to pick them up, giving him the chance to overtake her. Through this ploy Rider succeeded in marrying Atalante.

    As a Heroic Spirit, Rider still carries those three apples from his legend. Forbidden fruit that bloom in the garden beyond mankind's common sense, they are an embodiment of human desire for that which lies perpetually outside reach. As such, the apples impart a powerful fascination effect upon anyone who lays eyes on them, to the point where they'll neglect anything else in their surroundings just to get them. In effect inflicting a specialized version of the Mad Enhancement Skill that robs the target of rational thought until they get the apple in their possession.

    Rider mainly uses this as a distraction by throwing them out in the middle of battle, compelling enemies to stop and pick them up, during which time he can either run away or counter-attack. As an effect that bewitches the mind it can be resisted by Skills like Bravery and Soul Of A Martyr at rank C or higher.

    Rider himself is immune to the effects of the apples thanks to Aphrodite's blessing. However they can still apply to his allies. As such Rider normally keeps them wrapped up in rags whenever he's not actually using them. This Noble Phantasm doesn't magically return to his possession when cast so Rider has to manually retrieve the apples.


    Cybele Harma
    Chariot Of Divine Curse


    Rank: A+

    Type: Anti-Army, Anti-Unit (Self)

    According to legend Rider celebrated his conquest of Atalante by carelessly taking her virginity in a temple of the goddess Cybele. Incensed at this act of desecration, Cybele cursed the two of them to transform into lions where they supposedly were forced to pull her chariot for all eternity.

    Having drawn the goddess' chariot in legend, Rider can summon it as his Noble Phantasm. Upon invocation Rider fully transforms into a Divine Beast lion and the chariot materializes behind him, yoked to him by glowing reins. Rider then charges at the opponent, pulling the chariot forward to ram into them. As Cybele's chariot was sometimes equalized with the earth itself this Noble Phantasm hits as if it carried the force of an entire world behind it, and nothing below the level of an Anti-World Noble Phantasm is capable of halting the chariot's charge.

    As it takes the form of a vehicle, this Noble Phantasm is the reason Hippomenes qualifies for the Rider Class. However Hippomenes himself merely pulls the chariot rather than actually riding it. As such he can't fully control this Noble Phantasm after summoning it, being enslaved to pull the goddess' chariot forever. Only a Command Seal can dispel the chariot and return Rider to human form following this Noble Phantasm's invocation. Therefore it goes without saying that he's greatly reluctant to use it. Rider's Master or even other Servants can also ride along in this chariot if he permits them.

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    Pinetti: Meant to give feedback on this guy before. Hah, that FC is certainly familiar having recently used it for my Twardowski Servant. His Showman's Charisma Skill works nicely. Reminds me of one I tried giving my Houdini sheet but couldn't think of how to word it at the time. The NP is fairly simple, but it definitely suits a stage-magician.

    Out of curiosity, any thoughts on my Hippomenes? I know he's a bit simpler than some of my last few sheets but I think there's some interesting stuff there.

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    That moment when you say you don’t plan to do anything with an idea you have only to go forward with it a few days later.


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    Hippomenes: Okay, wow. This guy is a total dick. His alignment being the so-called "asshole alignment" is very fitting.

    But that aside, a Rider who becomes the mount is actually a pretty interesting take on the class. This is a very simplistic sheet compared to the sheets you posted before this, but you've done a decent handling of using a rather minor character and making a sheet that has some substance. His Skills honestly fit someone who is, quite frankly, a misogynistic douchebag. He's unlikable (though this is most likely intentional), but it's a well-made sheet.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    Hippomenes: Okay, wow. This guy is a total dick. His alignment being the so-called "asshole alignment" is very fitting.

    But that aside, a Rider who becomes the mount is actually a pretty interesting take on the class. This is a very simplistic sheet compared to the sheets you posted before this, but you've done a decent handling of using a rather minor character and making a sheet that has some substance. His Skills honestly fit someone who is, quite frankly, a misogynistic douchebag. He's unlikable (though this is most likely intentional), but it's a well-made sheet.
    Thanks for the feedback man. I actually considered how sympathetic to make him, seeing as I've heard some versions of the legend where Atalante didn't really have her heart in the "kill anyone who tries to marry me" idea at that point and basically wanted a way out without losing face (which she got in the form of the apples) but seeing as Atalante's GO profile outright calls him cowardly and says she was married "half-forcibly" I figured I'd go for the take where he really was just a jerk. Funnily he has the same Alignment as Atalante herself actually, though for very different reasons (as she has it due to possessing the mentality of a wild animal).

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