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    On one hand I don't really have an incentive to write a Lucifer right now, and also I still have lots of literally whos in my backlog to take priorities, so at this point we might as well see Beast VII/True Demon lore reveal first before I do one.

    Well, maybe if I can find a FC so perfect for Satan that can change my mind...

    /shrug

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    Thanks for the response.

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    "Hey yooo! Lancer Class servant Maeda Matsu here to kick ass and take names!"

    True Name: Maeda Matsu
    Class: Lancer
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Region: Japan
    Source: Historical Fact
    Armament: Limbs, Fire, Spear

    Parameters:
    Strength: C
    Endurance: C
    Agility: B
    Mana: D+
    Luck: A

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance D
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

    Personal Skills:

    Eye of The Mind (True) C+
    A heightened capacity for observation, refined through training, discipline and experience. A danger-avoidance ability that utilizes the intelligence collected up to the current time as the basis in order to predict the opponent’s activity and change the current situation. This is not a result of talent, but an overwhelming amount of combat experience. Being both a shrewd politician and experienced martial artist, Lancer has a decent rank. However, what's more is that due to her lifetime of taking risky action, the rank jumps to A when she takes an action that is essentially "high risk, high reward".

    "I may seem like a brat but that's part of the plan, ya know? You have Chacha and Nobu, right?"

    Derisive Encouragement C
    A charisma-like skill that increases morale but comes with the chance of bestowing Madness Enhancement. As a naturally sassy person, the skill fits her well. What's more is that such a nature encouraged her husband into battle.

    "Hey, get up. Act like a loser later!"

    Self-Preservation B
    The Skill to preserve one's health so that the user can escape. Gained from an anecdote used as an example of her loyalty to her clan where she had advanced straight into a battlefield to ask Toyotomi Hideyoshi to spare her clan.
    ...
    "Ah. No, no. I was just protecting my future, not my clan. Oh come on, you're making me blush!"

    Noble Phantasm

    Omatsu Burnout: My Flames Grow As Defeat Draws Near
    Rank: D~B+
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)

    The first Noble Phantasm of Lancer. The crystallisation of the words said to Maeda Toshiie before he headed off to battle. A threat that if fortune turned against Toshiie, Lancer would burn down their castle and families. A threat that continues to this day. Manifesting as jets of flame that emerge at Lancer's bidding, at their basic level, they supplement Lancer's melee actions. However, a trait that exists within the flames is what Lancer calls a "
    dread
    passion
    that grows with the increasing chance of death". The higher chance that Lancer is becoming closer to death, the hotter flames burn and the more encroaching they become, appearing now within the surroundings until everything is consumed in fire. In the case, Lancer dies while the Noble Phantasm is active, her body will explode in a conflagration that will cremate most servants. This aspect of the Noble Phantasm cannot be used while Gin-Kin is active.

    Gin-Kin: Spear of Silver-Gold
    Rank: C+
    Type: Anti-Unit

    The second Noble Phantasm of Lancer. An alternate telling of the words said to Maeda Toshiie. A goad to bring his riches with him to battle by piercing them onto his spear. Manifested as a spear made of gold and silver, the Noble Phantasm works well as a weapon; however, she fights with it as a tertiary weapon. Not out of distaste for it but out of the awareness of its purpose. It is meant to be a Master's Noble Phantasm, enhancing their physical prowess to near servant level, allowing triumph in terms of physical confrontation against other Masters. Nonetheless, in the event that the spear is rejected out of lack of desire rather than incompatibility, the blade will shatter revealing a second stronger blade underneath it. The spear of Maeda Toshiie is allowed access for the Master, empowering them even further. This aspect of the Noble Phantasm cannot be used while Omatsu Burnout is active.


    Personality

    A genki girl type servant. Cheerful and crazy in equal measure, Lancer is someone who frequently does what she wants without concern for the opinions of others. That isn't to say she isn't aware, being a very accomplished politician in her time, it's just that manifest as a Lancer brought out the more proactive side of herself. She assures that her "shrewd, nerdy self" is in the Assassin class. A core part of herself, or rather Maeda Matsu as a whole, is her loyalty. Earn it and while she may mock you, act sassy, or generally ignore, she will follow you into the most dangerous battlefield if she deems it necessary.


    Craft Essence

    An Inner Flame

    "Ah geez. It's really annoying this time. I almost fell unconscious in front of the Master that time."

    There is a particular quirk that comes with this Noble Phantasm. It's that I'm not exactly exempt from it. That inner flame. The fire of
    dread
    passion
    that grows with defeat. It may not harm but it sure does hurt. Maybe that's why I encourage people. So that defeat seems like a far off possibility. So that victory becomes a certainty. So that pain stops becoming inconvenient at times! I...wonder how Yodo-dono can easily handle it without some complaint.


    Creator's Note: Still working on the Christmas sheet to go with Bakkerhexe. Here's this for the meantime. I got inspired by the Faceclaim.
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    Pretty good.

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    Name: Demophon
    Class: Caster
    Alignment: Lawful Good

    STR: E
    END: A
    AGI: C
    MAG: A
    LCK: B

    Image Claim, a tad spicy



    A Greek Prince from a young Age of Gods, before Hades marriage to Persephone. As myth tells Demeter wandered the world seeking Persephone at her disappearance and only when all of the land was searched she gave into grief and rage giving fertility way to the horrible winter that nearly killed the world, as she wandered in the form of an elderly sage she visited King Celeus and Queen Metanira. Enchanted by the baby Demophon and possessing of a logic alien to mankind she attempted to make the baby a god, Metanira wandered by the ritual and screamed in fear for her baby, with the ritual failed Demeter simply set the baby down and continued her wandering.

    Nonetheless the initial steps were taken and Demophon was lifted to a status above mankind, a fated hero blessed by Demeter who earned her 'love' (obsession) and due to her parents' fears she was initiated into the mysteries of Demeter alongside her brother Triptolemus, pointless for Demeter had no feelings for anything but Persephone by that point and in her terrible anger Winter arrived and under the relentless cold humans died by the droves, such was the damage caused by Demeter that Zeus intervened and revealed Persephone's location. At the Underworld by Hades side and as for the conclusion of the event Persephone would pass half the year in the Underworld and half in Olympus, time divided between Demeter and Hades and in an irony of fate such became times of thriving and times of dying in accordance to Demeter's moods.

    A young priestess who alongside her brother, Triptolemus, fought against the unending winter caused by Demeter. As one who was once beloved by the goddess Demophon at times could pierce through the cold rage dominating Demeter and received boons and gifts but at the same breath the goddess at times lashed out for Demophon not being 'good enough' (Persephone) and thus she endured the rage of the divine point-blank for the sake of mankind. Due to being an episode of one-sided tyranny and villainy this story was not passed down due to fear of Demeter and instead it is said that the funeral games common in Eleusis were mourning for the failed ritual that took the baby Demophon's life

    Personality

    One who can be described to be Persephone in human form as such it was only natural for Demeter to love her. A girl who knew nurturing and death by the same hand. Inheriting the mysteries of the priests she correctly did all the rituals and Demeter distracted from her pain for a second would rain great blessings upon Eleusis in gratitude. When the winter came Demophon again and again danced, sung, prayed, until her feet bleed, until her voice was gone, until she could not even feel her shivers, and upon such dedication Demeter temporarily let up the winter at Eleusis, only for it to return later, a vicious cycle that battered Demophon again and again until her soul and body gave out. Post the episode Triptolemus was tasked with re-establishing agriculture and gathering the survivors by Demeter herself and was given a chariot driven by dragons, successful in his tasks he alongside Demophon were lifted to the ranks of gods within the Eleusinian mysteries.

    Despite the mature air around her she is not younger than she appears to be, she died very young becoming the shield of her people, a natural martyr-princess type seen in certain princess and saints, a girl who is silk and steel in equal measures, always open to dialogue but at the same time she is unbending and unconquerable. In moments of relaxation she is the ideal 'cutest little sister' wanting to share all moments of joy with those she consider friends, in moments of war she will resolve herself and when it's all done she will quietly mourn that the fight had to happen in the first place and hold the memory of the defeated within her

    However she tends to get carried away in festivals and feels like sharing all of the pleasures with her comrades. All.of.them so please keep her away from certain types otherwise disaster will strike. Oh we are not talking about her Rider Brother running everyone down with his dragon chariot. We are talking of her using the same strength that overcame Demeter to overcome everyone else, turns out even servants can get blackout drunk


    Skills

    Item Creation (A+): Demeter's domain is all that grows. Agriculture itself, civilization only exists thanks to her and thus all Kingdoms hold her in high esteem or else starvation awaits them and not even Zeus is able to interfere lightly with Demeter's moods and decisions, a strong position unexpected for a non-warrior goddess. As one who is Demeter's 'daughter' and was taught all of the mysteries and was later lifted to a god Demophon can be considered to be a subordinate goddess of Demeter and possess an absurd amount of knowledge when it comes to 'all life that grows from the earth'.

    Territory Creation (C): "The earth, the wind, the water. Whenever life grows I can call upon Lady Demeter!" Extreme versatility and fast building but due to using already existing temples and Demeter finding the establishment of such a bore to teach Demophon is more akin to a wandering priestess

    Personal Skills
    Steel Determination (EX): Resolute before the Human Consuming Winter she called upon Demeter again and again and again until her voice got through the blizzard and Demeter accepted an audience, something unseen before, even the other Olympians could not move Demeter yet a simple human, a weak 'sapling' did so. The brilliant soul that shines with unending strong. "Ah if only she possessed a body to match that soul"- A certain goddess laments, perhaps one of her few regrets

    Affection of the Goddess (B-): Demeter's affection overflows and all status receive a boost.....but there's a chink in the armor....."There is no need to be strong, there is no need to be a warrior, there's no need for such gaze! Insolent human who do you think you are?!". "I am Demophon of Eleusis and I ask if the being before me is still a god worthy respecting!"

    Battle Continuation (C): One's ability to continue moving beyond death, the higher the rank the greater one's will moves the body further. "One more step, one more breath, c'mon c'mon move move this is nothing compared to what they are suffering!"


    Noble Phantasm

    Elysium Thermasia- My Soul become a Furnace
    Anti-World
    Rank A
    As Demeter gave into her grief and despair she abandoned her responsibilities and the world became encase in ice, or perhaps she has just shown another side of her face. The mother that could not let go and would drown the world in her rage for no other being would be allowed happiness if she was not happy, such traits were kept even after the return of Persephone, this time 'only' half of the year would face such drought, nonetheless humans struggled and survived, learning, preparing they adapted and the cruel whims of the gods became just another occurrence. None embodies this more than Demophon who stood at the winter's strongest and surpassed it, making sure her country and people survived the goddess' rage, some would say that she became a sacrifice, others would speak of Demeter's 'mercy', in truth Demophon became a blaze that warded away the winter and pierced through the goddess' darkness

    At the same breath she was awed, at the same breath she was enraged but by the time the goddess decided to move it was already too late Demophon's body reached it's limits and gave out. Perhaps the blessings upon Triptolemus were an attempt to catch that light once more but the boy fed-up with the goddess and grieving his sister who had her story hidden to not anger the gods, only acted due to obligation mandated by the divine and nothing more or less, not once he reached out in genuine prayer, not once he spoke of gratitude and not once he spoke of the 'bond' between humans and gods

    A flame born of a human's soul manifests, beyond the logic of the divine, it's not the flame of wisdom granted by Prometheus to mankind but perhaps the flame of their potential. Underneath the flames wounds are healed, curses are driven away and the heart is emboldened to face any challenge, it is not in Demophon's nature to simply give paradise to her people, she feels it is insulting towards their sacrifices and struggles and entrusting all unto a singular being is to repeat the mistakes of the past. To entrust their fates to a few beings and suffer their vices and rages without any chance of striking back
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    Pretty good. Lowkey thought that faceclaim was actually a femboy for a bit. I like how her NP heals instead of destroys.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Pretty good. Lowkey thought that faceclaim was actually a femboy for a bit. I like how her NP heals instead of destroys.
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    Demophon: Cool sheet. I can see fleshing out backstories for mythical "literally who?"s is your forte. I'm not sure if Battle Continuation is really necessary since it feels covered conceptually by Steel Determination but I can see you wanted to give her a third Skill.

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    Maeda Matsu: A fun servant. I like the fire theme and also how literal treasure is her spear. It's like gilgamesh but literal. I like it.

    Demophon:... is that an smt faceclaim? I swear if seen something from smt with a similar design. Huh... anyway the servant itself is pretty fun. Good job.
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    Y’all motherfuckers should probably start your Christmas sheets if you’re planning on doing one because Christmas is just 30 days away now.
    Last edited by NINE-lives; November 25th, 2021 at 02:13 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Y’all motherfuckers should probably start your Christmas sheets if you’re planning on doing one because Christmas is just 20 days away now.
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    Still pretty close.

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    Huh, who knew it's the 26th already? In fashion of malls playing Christmas songs starting from November and FGO (usually) holding Christmas reruns in the same month, I'll try to finish my Christmas sheet before December hits.
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    Gotta a quick question for you veterans of the thread. There isn't a Voltaire servant, is there? I think I might have an idea for one such sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lodrago View Post
    Gotta a quick question for you veterans of the thread. There isn't a Voltaire servant, is there? I think I might have an idea for one such sheet.
    I recall someone came up with an idea based on his love of using heteronyms in his work but no one actually made one far as I can remember.

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    I am surprised no one did voltaire yet
    Looking forward to your take on him


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    Quote Originally Posted by Baron Magnus View Post
    Demophon:... is that an smt faceclaim? I swear if seen something from smt with a similar design. Huh... anyway the servant itself is pretty fun. Good job.
    It appears to be Demeter with a design which originates from SMT strange journey

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    ew loli

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    Average loli Demeter fan vs average milf Demeter enjoyer.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    Average loli Demeter fan vs average milf Demeter enjoyer.
    I actually liked SMT loli Demeter.
    It's pretty funny, especially because whenever I say I do some idiot on the internet goes batshit insane about it.
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