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    Class: Rider
    Other Classes: Archer, Caster
    True Name: Filippo Bruneleschi
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Place of Origin: Italy (14th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: B
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 191cm
    Weight: 120lbs
    Likes: Sculpting, art
    Dislikes: Sinking
    Talent: Carving sculptures
    Natural Enemy: Louis Wain
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish, Male
    Armament: A chisel
    Catalyst: Summoning within the Florence Cathedral, his sunken ship, his patent

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance C: Rarely came across magic in life. However, he did have a chance to use magic to support the dome, but flatly refused, raising the rank massively.

    Riding C: Not particularly good at riding mounts.

    Personal Skills:

    Linear Perspective A+: The sublimation of his creation of "Linear Perspective", which allowed paintings to appear real. The ability to create andd transform two dimensional things into three dimensions, manifesting archways and pathways. However, these things can be nullified through vision.

    Soaring Firework B: The sublimation of the soaring statue designs he created using fireworks and light to cause the effects. The ability to fire blasts of fireworks and light that shape themselves into assorted statue forms. Some of these can act on their own to attack the targets, such as a gargoyle spitting a blast of light.

    Fortification Design C: The sublimation of his designing major fortifications for Florence in their battles against Pisa and Siena. The capability to create and use fortifications, "fortifying" himself through a stone armor or creating walls to defend cities or larger regions of land.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Il Badadone
    Marble Boat For Merchandise


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 100 targets

    The sublimation of his being granted one of the first modern patents for his innovative boat, as well as being active in shipbuilding. This manifests as a fusion of his innovative boat as well as Il Badadone, one of his boats in which he sent massive amounts of marble, which sunk. A stunning marble boat, extremely hard to damage. It is quite a bit faster then most boats, and is naturally capable of going through the air as well as the water. It is also capable of using its windmill, now filled with water, to fire blasts of air and water that are its main weaponry.


    Florence Duomo
    Glorious Dome Of Serenity

    Type: Anti-Fortress
    Rank: C
    Range: 100 meters
    Max Targets: 1000 targets

    The sublimation of his most famous creation, the dome to the Cathedral of Florence, which utilized stone chains to hold the dome up and hoisting machines to move them. This noble phantasm manifests as a set of titanic stone and iron chains, which cause anything they hit to rise, wrapping around them and sending them flying.

    Lore: Filippo Bruneleschi (1377-1446) was an Italian architect, designer, sculptor, and engineer, known as one of the founding fathers of Renaissance architecture. He most notably created the dome at the Cathedral of Florence, but was also one of the first people to get patents, in his case in boats.

    Personality: A proud and bold person. He loves building more and more architecture, tending to use his Noble Phantasms more as tools to build as opposed to as weapons or a ship. He loves challenges, always wanting to rise above expectations. His wish is to reincarnate and build more architecture in this world.

    Relationships:

    Louis Wain: "...Remind me to make sure you NEVER get in to architecture!"

    Tintoretto: "Yes! Marvelous design! Now my turn."

    Pope Julius II: "If we had lived in the same time period, maybe I would have been the one commissioned by you, hmm?"

    Mary Blair: "...Movies? Hmmm.... do you think I'd be good at set design?"

    Amaridevi: "Intriguing architectural design. I wonder how you'd do with a full palace?"

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    Source: Mantos No. 7


    Class: Foreigner
    Other Classes: Voyager
    True Name: The Wow Signal "Winslow"
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Place of Origin: Sagitarius / America (20th Century)
    Stars: 3/5

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: E
    AGI: A+
    MGI: B
    LCK: B
    NP: B

    Height: Fluctuates
    Weight: Fluctuates
    Likes: Making friends, surprising (in a good way) people
    Dislikes: Outer Gods, noise pollution
    Talent: Signalling from outer space
    Natural Enemy: Foreigners contracted with Outer Gods
    Attribute: Star
    Traits: Existence Outside The Domain
    Armament: N/A
    Catalyst: A record of the Wow Signal

    Class Skills:

    Existence Outside The Domain B: Denotes an entity existing outside of the Void of Space. Foreigner came from beyond the void of space and as such, they gain this skill. In their case, they can transform back to and out of radio waves, shifting their physical existence at will.

    Personal Skills:

    Otherworldly Transmission B: A signal from far away, most likely from the galaxy Sagitarius. Foreigner gains power from the stars and moon that are out, especially if Sagitarius is also out. Foreigner also gains resistances to other
    Foreigner
    entities from beyond the stars
    .

    One Time Signal B: Foreigner only appeared one time, but has been hunted by multiple people at multiple locations. This empowers Foreigner on their "first time", their first signal before any one target, significantly, causing them to move quite a bit faster and gain Stat rank ups. They also gain a weaker boost at every "first signal" during a battle.

    Return Transmission B: Several return signals have been sent back to the rough area where Foreigner apparently came from. This skill allows Foreigner to manifest those signals, echoing waves of sound that appear at Foreigner's call. Foreigner's radio waves and echos are their main weapon.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    6EQUJ5
    The Presence Is Upon You


    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: B
    Range: 100 meters
    Max Targets: 1000000

    The sublimation of foreigner's very existence, a signal of radio waves from outer space. This manifests in the form of a Noble Phantasm, allowing foreigner to once again become the full Radio Wave form. This also, however, brings along common causes of it, from bombardments of Lightning and solar flares, to the existence of a miniature and far weaker Black Hole.

    Lore: The Wow! Signal was a signal discovered by Jerry Ehman at the Big Ear Radio Telescope, commonly thought to be the strongest candidate for an extraterrestrial radio transmission. It gained its name of the Wow Signal due to Ehman's marking the word Wow! next to its marking.

    Personality: A peppy, friendly and hyper entity. Foreigner loves making lots of friends and speaking to lots of people, feeling it to be their purpose. They hate those who give a bad name to outer space, in other words Outer Gods. They also hate all the noise pollution that clogs up the signals. Their wish is merely to make more friends.

    Relationships:

    Voyager: "Oooh, the signal heading out! So nice to meet you!"

    Mirabai: "You're fighting against the Outer Gods too?"

    Mother Leeds: "What on earth is that?... Oh, I'm sorry ma'am!"

    Ambrose Bierce: "Nope! I'm just going to ignore what you say because I know a foreign entity is puppeteering you."

    Percival Lowell: "..What? WHAT? What is that 'Planet X'?"

    Argos: "Ooh! I'd love to be friends! Wait.... what is that shadowy hound thing? How did you befriend an Outer God?"

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    Yes I'm posting this in tandem with my Loki sheet in this month's contest. I couldn't help myself. :V
    and also trying not to be nervous about both. have i mentioned that yet?
    "Ah... I have been summoned? I didn't think anyone would, considering my husband. But...well, you have summoned me like this, in this vessel, so that in itself is proof enough that you won't mind either because you are like me in some way...

    "...or you were specifically hoping for me.

    "Aha ha! Ah, I wish my husband was here. I'm sure he'd love teasing you if the latter is the case.

    "Well, whether you know me or not...it is a pleasure to meet you. I am Sigyn."


    The woman remains seemingly calm, but you could've sworn her eyes gleamed with mischief as she smiled.

    "Here's to a worthwhile partnership."

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    Class: Lover
    Other Eligible Classes: Binder, Avenger, Ruler
    True Name: Sigyn
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Origin: Norse Mythology
    Attribute: Heaven
    Height: 205 cm / 6'9''
    Weight: 77kg / 170 lbs
    Traits: Servant, Female, Divine, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish, Trickster
    Catalyst: A seemingly nondescript bowl worn from snake venom; a rune bearing the title "Incantation-Fetter"; summoning a Loki Servant

    Talent: Dealing with Tricksters
    Natural Enemy: Odin, anyone who hurts children, oathbreakers

    Likes: Loki, his children, children, mischief
    Dislikes: Boredom, Skadi, Odin, earthquakes anyone who hurts children

    Parameters:
    STR:
    E
    END: A
    AGI: E
    MGI: A
    LCK: E
    NP: A

    BOND 0There once was a goddess who had been renowned, who had served a role to the people who worshipped her. But that has since been lost to time, with all that is left being her titles and her husband.

    "Incantation-fetter."

    "Loki."

    "The burden of the her arms."

    But that suited her just fine.

    "After all," she says with a small smirk. "I wouldn't really be 'Loki's wife' if I wasn't mysterious in some way, now would I?"

    BOND 1Class Skills
    Devotion EX
    Class Skill of the Lover Class. A skill which corresponds to the strength of the Servant's feelings towards those they love. With the skill increasing in rank the more people they loved and the more impressive their 'acts of love' towards those people were. As a Servant this means that the greater the Servant's 'love' for their Master is, the higher the boost in all parameters they will receive.
    As a goddess who is only remembered for her loyalty, some might think she was forced into the union and merely kept to her role as a "dutiful wife", but she does love him, for what else could inspire such devotion to stand by someone even to the end of the world but love? Thus her parameters are strengthened greatly when serving her Master, especially if they possess any "Loki" or "Trickster" traits. ...assuming they can earn her loyalty that is... She is the"Wife of Loki" after all.

    Object of Desire E++
    Class Skill of the Lover Class. A skill connected to the feelings of love and obsession which this Servant inspires in someone else. It functions as a passive charm skill on the level of a mental attack. So much as being in the same place as a Lover Servant can incite feelings of affection, obsession, protectiveness and lust.
    Perhaps, before, Sigyn did inspire adoration in others, but with who her husband is and her records lost to all except for those who knew them in life, her rank is much lower than it could be. It does, however, raise a rank should a "Loki-like Servant", "Loki-like person" or a "Trickster" view her, making her desireable for them, and raises even further in rank towards "Loki" Servants, inspiring fierce loyalty towards her that is hard to break without a skill that provides resistance to such at an appropriate rank.

    BOND 2There once was a goddess whose life was plain. Well, plain as a Norse goddess, an ásynja, could be anyway. There was nothing plain about being one, not with Odin and his tricks, Thor and his adventures, and all the the revelry the æsir and her fellow ásynja partook. There was nothing plain about being worshipped by humans and answering their prayers when she felt they were worthy as a keeper of oaths from her abode in Asgard. And there was certainly nothing plain about sharing many domains with so many other of her kin that she would often take over their duties, or rather the duties that were more tedious for them, such as listening to prayers, which allowed them their fun.

    Yet still, it was all incredibly plain to her, as someone that knew nothing else, never stood out, and had not the courage to stand out.

    All but the exploits of one Loki, blood-brother to the All-Father.

    Sigyn never sought them, but still she would hear others regale of Loki's tales, and while they would be exasperated by his trickery, she found herself chuckling in amusement. Though she never went beyond her routine, she would often chance upon seeing the red-haired trickster himself, spinning his latest exploit to whatever he fancied as the most amusing in that moment, and while they would challenge his tale talls with their own, she would wonder what was the truth, hoping his story was true. And though she never actually met with him, while the other gods were absolutely befuddled at some people's worship of Loki as a hùsvættir god, she had known how, paying attention to the words of certain prayers she received, those of which promised to be good to a mischievous hùsvættir that mysteriously appeared, to keep the home safe from both outsiders and their mischief.

    So though she never did anything that would bother her fellow aesir and asynja...

    "Hello."

    ...one day, Loki stood before her with a mischievous grin.

    BOND 3Personal Skills
    Core of a Goddess EX
    The mark of a being that is a goddess.
    Sigyn is one of the ásynja, the female gods of Asgard. Though she is associated with Loki, whose core is usually deteriorated for one reason or another when summoned, hers has been kept as it is.

    Oath Keeper B
    The power to ensure any promise, any oath, uttered and sworn on an oath keeper or their name is kept, by ensuring it will never be broken.
    That was one of her roles when she was a goddess, lost to time, but she still remembers it. She might not compare to the goddess Styx of Greece, but she is still a goddess. Any oath sworn to her will not be broken without consequence.
    In more practical terms, it means that if you make a promise to her or involve her in a promise, whoever breaks the promise, whether that be the promise-maker or an outside force, will have their parameters lowered and a certain amount of damage dealt to them as "backlash", the degree of which depends on the amount of "promises" broken. As an example, if one "promises" to her that their skills or spells will empower allies and an enemy gets rid of those boosts or spells, that enemy will recieve the backlash. If two promise to her the same and one enemy breaks both, the debuff and damage is increased. Of course, that means should an enemy swear to her name and have their skills cancelled, her allies would face such effects. However, that would rarely occur, for what enemy would swear an oath towards their foe?
    Well...any enemy besides, perhaps...a trickster.
    This skill would be lower ranked because of people no longer remembering her role, however, thanks to her personal skill, Incantation-Fetter, a title that is still attributed to her alone, Oath Keeper is maintaned at the rank it would be should her worship have remained strong due to Incantation-Fetter being an extension of Oath Keeper in life.

    Goddess of the Husvaettir D
    A skill denoting the being a goddess of the hùsvættir, Norse house spirits.
    While Sigyn was not born into this role, thanks to her husband and her own efforts, she was worshipped a goddess of the husvaettir, and the husvaettir would then follow her. However, as that role has been lost, her rank in this skill has been diminshed greatly. With the rank she has, the most she can do with this skill is have her defensive parameters boosted should she be defending in a territory marked as "home" by her Master. The only reason she even has this skill at all is thanks to, oncr again, her tie to her husband and some still remembering his role as a hùsvættir, so they in turn remember her to a degree.

    Incantation-Fetter EX
    The words to cancel magic. The power to fetter strength. The ability to chain and bound others. That is the Incantation-Fetter, the skill which denotes the sets of ancient galdr that perform sealings of many kinds.
    And that is one of Sigyn's titles that still is known to us. As an extension of her role as an oath keeper, Sigyn is able to cancel spells and seal the powers of her opponents with but a few words. Of course, the higher the target's Magic Resistance, the longer it will take to have those effects be in action, but unless one can match her rank, she will be able to seal the magic and strength of her opponents eventually.

    Vow to a Trickster EX
    The promise to her husband, forever etched into her very core. No matter what place or era, if there is a Loki there just as Sigyn is summoned, then she will support him with all that she has. As such, she can grant him significant offensive and defensive buffs for a short bursts. Normally, it would only work on Loki, however, because she is so fond of her husband, anything that reminds her of her husband, that being Servants with "Loki-like" or "Trickster" traits or the "Chaotic" alignment, they also gain the buffs, if at a lower boost than what she can grant Loki.

    BOND 4She would come to learn why he appeared before her later, but right then, she had been surprised, just as Loki wanted.

    Even more so as he asked,

    "How was your day?"

    As if it was the most natural thing in the world for him to say to her.

    Just as much as she answered,

    "Dreadfully boring."

    If it was even possible, the mischief in his eyes gleamed all the brighter. "Mayhaps you would like me to make it less so?" he said, a hand open to her.

    Had it been anyone else, they would've eyed it in wariness.

    Had it been anyone else, they would've rebuffed it with annoyance.

    Had it been anyone else, they would've accused him of all manner of vile motivations.

    But she wasn't just anyone else.

    "I would be delighted," she said, taking his hand with a smile that had a hint of mischief.

    And so her life became weaved with his.

    He took her to see wonders she hadn't dared to venture to, turbulent locales that were exhilirating to explore, beautiful realms that would left her in awe at their majesty, and various settlements of the chaos that was humanity that left her bellowing and growling, sometimes all at the same time.

    She led him back to her home, so that they may rest their weary but satisfied bones, him watching her as she weaved blankets for them to snuggle within.

    He took her to see his various antics, from misplacing objects to the annoyance of the owners, to causing disturbances that left its residents baffled, to causing legitimate problems to the assir and asynja...until he was forced to fix them when he was found out...often because of her, whenever she felt it be more amusing if she tattled than not. Not that he minded...much.

    She led him back to her home, so that they may recount with laughter and banter over their lastest caper before scheming their next, him watching her as she contributed with passion.

    He took her to see his children, from cute Sleipnir, to cuddly Fenrir to adorable Jormangandr, to beautiful Hel, and to even his many other children, whose names were both lost and not-so-lost to time.

    She led him back so that he may air his grief and grievances over his inability to provide the very best to his children, him watching her as she was empathetic to his plight.

    And thus was their routine that was not quite a routine.

    Until, one day, on just another ordinary day for them in the middle of yet another adventure.

    "Marry me?" he said, the first and last time Sigyn heard him nervous.

    Even if he had no reason to.

    She smirked and kissed him. "I thought we already are."

    BOND 5Noble Phantasm


    (Source: the actual link I use; where the photo is from. Note that I am not entirely sure where the actual source is. Searching it up with "search Google for this image" isn't as helpful as it usually is)
    The Burden of the Incantation-Fetter's Arms
    Skál Sorgar
    By Your Side at the End of the World

    Rank:
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: A

    A simple, nondescript bowl.

    Under normal circumstances, that is exactly what it should be.

    But being summoned as a Servant is not a normal circumstance.

    And this bowl is the embodiment of her only legend.

    The legend where she stayed by her husband's side, and "gave him reprieve from him pain", until the bowl was full, only then to release cries that "shook the world".

    As such, the bowl passively redirects attacks aimed at her allies and absorbs it into her bowl, rendering them void. Of course, she is only able to redirect attacks that do not have solid form. So while she is able to redirect a blast of magic such as curses similar to Gandr, natural phenomenon like water or lightning or winds, or lasers and such, she cannot redirect a spear or arrow or projectile aimed at them. She has to be nearby her allies as well, the farthest she can be about three meters away from. Consequently, since it is a bowl, it does have a limit to what it can hold. While that amount is much, much larger than its appearance would suggest, it can still be "full". The amount of which directly tying to the bowl's other function upon True Name release.

    For when Sigyn had to empty the bowl, that is when tremors shook the world.

    And so she can do it again.

    Upon the container being full, though her husband isn't always by her side, she can recreate what happens whenever she emptied the bowl. With the activation of its True Name, Sigyn can unleash the energy the bowl has captured into a shockwave that is, if at maximum capacity, equal to and causing an earthquake of magnitude ten on the Richter scale. As such, the bowl is able to store, at maximum, the same amount of energy required to release the shockwave at maximum power. Sigyn is able to moderate how much energy she releases into a shockwave, but once it is used up, the maximum power diminishes, ie if she uses a "magnitude one earthquake", she can only cause at max a "magnitude nine earthquake" unless the bowl refills the needed energy. Unfortunately for her, and any would be allies, as the Noble Phantasm is a "temporary reprieve until full", her attack can and will hurt her allies if she or they have not taken precautions to prevent and/or withstand friendly fire.

    Unsurprisingly, she is not all fond that aspect of her Noble Phantasm, a constant reminder of the screams she heard, the tremors she felt, and the pain in her soul.

    But it is still her "burden of her arms".

    Her love for her husband.

    Her proof of where she would rather be.

    And she would never trade that for anything in this world or the next.

    BOND 6Still, though they didn't have to make it official, both wanted any and every excuse to call each other "husband" and "wife". And besides, it was yet another chance for a scheme, and so they wed, and as they both expected, all of Asgard was quite befuddled at the decision.

    Also as expected, once their surprise and confusion settled, they pitied how the oathkeeper was tied to a trickster.

    But it mattered not to them other than their amusement.

    Their life continued as before.

    Well, not exactly as before.

    With their marriage, Loki felt comfortable enough to show his dealings with humans and hùsvættir, how he would play with children, prank the adults, and the scold either should they harm the family. The hùsvættir were often exasperated at his presence, miffed that he was mimicking their role, but once Sigyn joined the fray and promised them they had no ill intentions, they trusted her word as an oath keeper, and soon let him and her help in the homes they would come and go through, answering prayers for safety, prosperity and more for the home that the hùsvættir alone couldn't grant.

    Not that anyone realised they did, always attributing any family protected from danger to Sigyn and any rumors and oddly done bindings and seals to Loki and any and all mischief done still attributed to her husband, when both would laugh in private at their inability to recognize when the antics were his idea or hers.

    But the biggest change, as with many couples, was when they had a child. Triplets, in fact. Vali, Narfi, and Nari, gods in their own right.

    Or rather, they could've been gods in their own right...

    ...had Loki not learned of the prophecy of Ragnarok.

    Had he not learned that so many of those who ruled Asgard knew of it.

    Had he not learned that, should it be necessary, Odin, would stage it all as was fated.

    That day, a part of Loki snapped.

    And Sigyn, ever faithful, was not surprised when her husband asked of her,

    "Shall we bring Ragnarok?"

    Instead, she smiled, broken and cruel,

    "Yes, let us shall."

    And so Sigyn wept when Baldr's mother asked the world to grieve for him, no one but Loki knowing those tears were not for the god of light, but their fate and the fate of their children.

    It came as no surprise that when Loki was punished, the aesir decided to have Vali turned into a mad wolf to kill Narfi and Nari and the gods forged their remains into the trickster's chains, bounding him before a snake that Skadi placed above him to burn him alive. Sigyn was not, no one knowing, or rather believing, she was in on the scheme of Baldr's death. But none of the gods stopped her as she took a bowl and stayed by her husband's side, giving him moments of reprieve before he shook the world with his wails quaking the ground, her resentment growing alongside his.

    With that, they continued their routine that now was most definitely routine and waited.

    And waited.

    And waited.

    And waited.

    Until at last, they were freed by Loki's brothers, and Loki rode out to participate in Ragnarok, Sigyn the ever present shadow by his side as their world came to an end, so the Age of Man could begin, following her husband in death.


    BOND 7And as but a shadow, and one who had stopped answering the prayers of what worshippers she did have, once the Age of Man began and went on, while stories of her husband, her children, and her kin went on to still be remembered past their deaths in the minds of humans and their many descendants...

    Sigyn wasn't.

    It was only a few things.

    "Incantation-fetter."

    "Loki."

    "The burden of the her arms."

    With such a weak impression on humanity, Sigyn should have been unsummonable by herself in the usual Servant containers. She should only be able to be summoned with her children, Narfi and Nari or Vali, or her husband, Loki, or even her many, many step-children through her husband, the harbingers of Ragnarök.

    But then it happened.

    An irregular Servant class container.

    A container that matched the one thing she is remembered for:

    The wife of Loki Laufeyson.

    "And so, I am here, answering your call. Ha... It seems now the incantation-fetterer has been fettered. Loki would've found that very amusing. Oh, don't look at me that way. I do not mind. I wouldn't have answered your call if I did. But then again, you wouldn't have called for me if you weren't the type to worry over this. So I assure you, I'm fine. You should be worrying about your other Servants. After all...I doubt many of them would like someone who's a trickster's wife. Especially the more uptight ones."


    BOND 8Personality: Calm, amiable, and quiet. That is how Sigyn comes off to others. She is a quiet woman, not speaking her mind often, but doesn't turn away conversation should someone strike up one with her, nor does she come off as curt when she does so. She is a compassionate woman who is more than willing to assist others even if it is of little or no value to herself, particularly when it comes to the happiness or safety of children. And she is gentle in her demeanor, rarely being fazed by even the most loud, rude or crude out there, nor is she forceful in her actions and words. A presence that neither stands out nor is completely ignored. A fairly "normal" temperament, you could say...if it weren't for the fact that she was a goddess.

    If it weren't for the fact that she was a goddess who was bound to Loki, a trickster.

    Because, in truth, Sigyn is a trickster in her own right.

    While she is not prone to cruelty, she is not against its use either. Fight fire with fire, as they say, is her thoughts on cruelty. If one is cruel to her, then she will return it tenfold. While she is not always the instigator, she quite enjoys mischief whenever she is witness to it, and is more than willing to be complicit in various schemes, both harmless and not so, as long as they seem amusing to her. And she has an extreme fondness for playing with words. Sometimes she is strict and to-the-letter of the words someone else spoke and sometimes she is loose with them, finding loopholes that is still within the meaning of others' words or her own. With her being an oath keeper, it is not always a good idea to make a promise to her, because she can very well twist it to her advantage. Truly, she is the kind of trickster that forgets about, her trickery the quiet and subtle kind, like shadows that are right in the corner of your eye.

    But at her core, Sigyn is a steadfast woman who always cherishes what she holds dear in her heart. Like her son gripping the world tree, like the chains that had held her husband, and like the fetters that she can cast, she will make sure those that she loves are safe, she will give her all in her role as a Servant, and most of all...

    ...she will be there for husband again.

    And she will not let anything stop her.

    Wish:
    "My wish? Ha ha... You wouldn't like it very much, I feel. Well, yes, of course I wish to be by Loki's side. But that is something I always do. The point of this wish is to grant something you couldn't have when alive, yes? Then I wish for a world where Loki is free to do as much mischief as he wishes, and be loved as he deserves."


    BOND 9Relationships
    Master:
    "Hello, Master. No, that little scuffle had nothing to do with me. Whatever are you talking about?"

    Scathatch-Skadi (Caster) (FGO):
    "...I'll admit, a part of me is bitter about seeing her...simply because I cannot bring myself to be mad at this Skadi over the one who had hurt my husband and I. She is like a child in as many ways as she is a mother. Still...I think it best I do not speak with her often, if at all. I have just as much of a sharp tongue as my husband. And I doubt you would want me to unleash that often."

    Cu Chulainn (Caster) (FGO):
    "You..."
    (Sigyn seems to bristle at his mere presence, even though she knows he isn't the one who she's enraged towards)

    Loki=Rod (Gatekeeper) (By yours truly!):
    "Ha ha. Hello, my love. It's so good to see that look on you again. Shall we look for a hearth and make mischief once again?"
    (She says, her eyes and smile tearful yet warm)

    Loki Laufeyson (Avenger) (RoydGolden):
    (Ah ha ha, I see you're up to your usual tricks, my love) Hello there, Shinji Matou. I believe you have my husband within you, do you not? Then would you mind terribly if I joined you in your schemes?"

    Loki (Avenger) (Shiki-pon):
    "...I know it will never be enough, but you are a hero in my eyes, my love."

    Loki (Caster) (ElioHerondale):
    "Aha ha ha... Hello dear. It's good to see you too."
    (A very soft and warm smiles plays on her lips)

    Baldr Jölnir (Saver) (DelRey):
    "Ah, Baldr..."
    (She seems nervous, not unlike a kid caught with their hand in a cookie jar)
    "I hope you're not mad at Loki?"

    Munch-Pesta (Pretender) (DelRey):
    "You... Oh, it is you... Or rather, not entirely... What happened to you, my daughter? ...I almost regret I followed your father to beyond your domain. You shouldn't have had to walk alone like that for so long."


    BOND 10Craft Essence

    My Eternal Vow

    "I swear to you

    "With the Norns as my witness

    "And my power as an oath keeper

    "Even if all the world is against us

    "Even if there is nothing but ash and fire

    "Even if it all comes to an end

    "I will be yours

    "In this life and every other

    "Now and forever

    "Until the end of time."

    With that, she had said her vow to her now-husband; a vow that went beyond those of marriage; a vow that, should she ever break it, would destroy her very existence.

    Not that she would ever want to.

    "...you didn't have to do that," the new husband said.

    "I know..."

    The new wife smiled.

    "...but I wanted to."

    For it was no burden at all, to have Loki forever in Sigyn's arms.

    Author's Notes
    Welp. For anyone who saw her in the Guess the Servant thread, here she is!
    Hopefully she's fine, because I really am fond of her. I've actually been working on her ever since two months ago, but it took a while to actually finish her because of constantly going back and forth on her FC, and also writing up her skills, so she was basically in the backburner...until now! In part of finally deciding on her FC, and my Loki sheet actually providing the finishing touches to her. Though I kinda wish I expanded a bit more on her personality section, but I think it's fine for now.

    Don't ask me why I imagine my version of Sigyn this way, with blue hair and ethereal. I just do.

    The name of the NP is basically me using Google translate to translate "bowl of grief" in Icelandic, aka the closest we got to modern Norse in terms of language. If it's wrong, feel free to correct me. I didn't ask about it because I felt it was good enough for me.

    Funnily enough, there are many, many fan interpretations of Sigyn that I've seen and they're just as varied as the forms that Loki can take. With what I've seen though, I've decided to go another direction with the "Incantation Fetter" title she got, by thinking of what kind of role she would have that would lead to someone getting that title. So I decided on an oath keeper. But I also made it that she also "helped" with the duties of the other gods as an explanation on why she was so easily forgotten. Well, besides the fact we probably just lost whatever would-be written text of her there might've been. Fittingly enough, as I said earlier, it was thanks to writing my Loki sheet did I add the finishing touches, mainly an even clearer "when and why" Sigyn was forgotten, along with tying her further to Loki. So I'm pretty happy about that.

    I did have a lot more to say about her, but I forgot a lot, if not all of it, so I'mma just leave it there. Might edit it in later. inb4 i dont

    or not apparently! Edit 1: the thing with that skills that had me to take a while was deciding on what to do with her. I had so much trouble with it...until I realized what to do and felt like an idiot afterward. Sigyn basically acts as a taunter and boosts the damage output and survivability of "Loki servants", with Chaotic servants also getting that buff because they remind her of her husband she loves dearly.

    Edit 2: Yup. I went and made Vali, Narfi and Nali triplets. Because more self indulgence. This one being that I want Loki and Sigyn to have a daughter by blood as well as her step children, and Narfi is either that name or Nari, so whenever I do Sigyn's Binder sheet, she's gonna have both Narfi and Nari as son and daughter respectively.
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    Its Morgin' time

    “She shone like the moon by night,
    and she was radiant among the infidels like a pearl in the mire, since the people were soiled,
    and not yet purified of their sin by holy baptism."




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    "Is the Hearth in danger once more? I see. Then stay close to me, child. If they wish to approach the flame, then I will see them in ashes."
    ~ ♬ ~
    _A_V_E_N_G_E_R_
    Lost Embers Protecting the Hearth

    = St. Olga of Kiev =





    Class Avenger
    Alternative Classes Caster, Archer
    True Name St. Olga of Kiev
    Aliases Elena, Scourge of the Drevlians
    Origin East & North Europe, Historical Fact
    Height/Weight 158cm/52kg
    Alignment Lawful Neutral
    Attribute Human

    STR END AGI MAN LCK
    E C D A C

    Likes Children. Her husband. Caring for others.
    Dislikes Proposals. Foolishness. Losing what she cares for.
    Talent Caretaking. Governing. Cooking. Vengeance.
    Natural Enemy Drevlians, Brynhildr
    Armament Magecraft. Hair.
    Catalyst The preserved remains of the boat or people she had buried.




    ══════════╣ I ╠══════════
    Kindling

    Olga of Kiev. A saint whose path is caked in ashes and regret. A woman whose origins are shrouded in mystery but is venerated enough to be Equal to the Apostles. A mother known for mercy and cruelty in level measure.
    While this woman was lost in history, she was found in her marriage to Igor I, despite bearing no known noble heritage, at the supposed age of fifteen. She bore him a single son and remained content in the background to raise the boy until, greed clouding his judgment, her husband demanded a grand tribute from the Drevlians.
    The torture and murder of her husband did something to the quiet woman. She quickly took command as regent to her son and began planning her revenge.

    Avenger A+
    Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, and the deep hatred Avenger directs at those that harm her and her loved ones burns hot enough to raze a country to the ground.

    Reciprocated Slaughter A++
    An eye for a head. A tooth for a mouth. A nail for an arm.
    Avenger does not deal in equality when it comes to settling accounts. No matter what you take from her, she will take hundreds of times in return before she is satisfied. The activation of this Skill increases both the range and power of her abilities, but she becomes fated to once more tread upon ashes, even if it costs her life.




    ══════════╣ II ╠══════════
    Heat

    She would quickly get her chance as, not two weeks later, the Drevlians sent an envoy with a proposal to marry their prince who ordered her husband’s death.
    With a beatific smile, she accepted their proposal and told them to return the next day with the promise that her people would carry them in their boat through the city to honor them.
    Admiring the great honor she bestowed on them, they returned the following day to the people of Kiev, lifting them in their boat and carrying them through the city. So great was the honor that they didn’t notice the massive trench that had been dug the previous day. The messengers, boat and all, were cast into the trench and buried alive while Olga watched, asking if the honor matched their sensibilities.
    Olga herself then sent a message asking that their nobility come, so she would know Kiev was in good hands while she left to marry their prince. Unaware of what had occurred, they sent their men as she requested.
    Upon their arrival, she asked that they bathe in a specially prepared bathhouse before appearing before her. Seeing no issue, they entered the bathhouse, only to be locked within as the building burned down around them.

    Oblivion Correction B
    How could she forget with the emptiness evident in her life? How could they forget, treating her as though it didn’t matter? How could anyone forget what she did to them? All will know because she will never forget.

    Scarlet Strands B
    A magecraft of unknown origin that seems to have been combined with Slavic Alchemy. She can infuse her mana into strands of hair and remotely set them aflame. While they can take on many forms, from weapons to animals, she typically creates bird familiars. All her constructs contain considerable magical power and act semi-autonomously. The fire they generate are especially powerful against places recognized as 'Territory'.




    ══════════╣ III ╠══════════
    Fire

    Before leaving, she sent one final message for them to prepare a feast in the same city they murdered her husband, so she could mourn at his grave. Perpetually unaware, they did as she asked, meeting her retinue and feasting with them after her mourning.
    Having prepared, she had her people taint the mead brought for the feast, incapacitating the entire armed force of the city five-thousand strong and killing them. Having accomplished this, she returned once more to Kiev to prepare for war.
    In one year’s time, Olga drove the Drevlians back into their cities, laying siege to their capital. The desperate Drevlians begged her for mercy, offering her the tribute her husband desired and was murdered over.

    Self-Replenishment (Mana) A
    A restless flame stoked by loss. Even the deaths of thousands were not enough to douse the fires. Only complete eradication dimmed the coals.

    Red Banquet B
    A powerful Espionage variant that also applies a strong sleep effect to those she interacts with, named for when she drugged then slaughtered thousands of soldiers in a single night. It also gains a bonus if she actually offers them a drink in tandem.




    ══════════╣ IV ╠══════════
    Inferno

    In yet another act of seeming benevolence, Olga requested only three living pigeons and sparrows from every house in the city. Once they had delivered, she promised she would no longer siege the city. Overjoyed, the Drevlians delivered the birds, sealing their doom.
    Olga had her men tie sulfur to each of the birds, releasing them at night after lighting the sulfur aflame. The birds, terrified, attempted to escape the flames by returning to their nests and coops. Overnight, the entire city became a scorching hearth, Olga watching and having her men kill and enslave any who attempted to escape.
    While this is what history tells us, what was altered is even stranger. Rather than birds, Olga asked for several hairs from the people of every household. That night, Olga transformed the hairs into flaming birds through some unknown method, the constructs returning from whence they came.

    Iskorosten Raróg
    Vengeance Soars on Crimson Wings


    Anti-City

    Her blazing rage burns white-hot and ash falls from her silver hair. Avenger solemnly runs her hands through her hair before grasping tight. She pulls, the hair falling easily away and igniting fully as it leaves her head. She releases them, the blazing wire rising and curling through the air, swirling and intermingling together in an array of flame and light.
    When she first set her flames to work, a swarm of emberous messengers turned the city into a burning hearth. Now, in her summons, she will do so again, but their shape will not be the same.
    Flesh and feather of pure fire wrap around the massive wired frame of the hair she sacrificed to call it forth.
    The Raróg, a demonic bird of Slavic Mythology, both a great ravager and bringer of good fortune in equal measure. A protector of the hearth. This monstrous phantasmal beast does not heed Avenger’s commands, but does understand her will: the only reason she would call it forth is to raze everything around them to the ground.
    The manifested rage that scorches within Avenger’s chest. The Raróg has a natural advantage against spouse killers, whether the spouse is theirs or not, anything recognized as ‘Territory of the killers’, and burns away all the mana in the area over time. The flames with which it does these things are unquenchable, unable to be doused in any way so long as the Raróg continues to exist in this world.
    Should Olga become satisfied with the destruction, feeling her pyre has burned down to ashes, the Raróg will naturally vanish, having completed what it was summoned to do. However, should the Raróg be slain, it will release one final immense explosion upon death in an attempt to take its killer with it, razing a whole city and its people from the map and from history.




    ══════════╣ V ╠══════════
    Warmth

    Upon her ascension to sainthood, these events were either viewed as an early miracle from God or replaced with the story that survived to modern day. How she accomplished this is as shadowed as her own past, and is likely to remain there.
    Having completed her revenge, she returned to Kiev and began reforming several of its systems, including the tribute gathering that started the entire mess, all while evading even more marriage proposals from less revenge-oriented sources.
    She would one day visit Constantinople to help garner trade between them, only to have Emperor Constantine VII also extend his own marriage proposal. Olga, knowing an outright rejection would be dangerous, used a clever method of avoidance.
    Citing that she was a pagan and therefore unable to join in union with him, she declared that he would have to be the one to baptize her, as she would accept no one of lesser station. With aid from his Patriarch, the emperor baptized her and christened her as Elena only to realize his mistake that doing so made him her spiritual godfather, making any marriage between them forbidden by church law. In recognition of his own ignorance and her wit, he accepted the trade offer and sent her off with several gifts for his new goddaughter.
    From here on, Olga would continue her rule and begin distributing the faith across Kiev, even after her son ascended to the throne. She would fade once more into the background as her son performed several military campaigns, content to play the role of matron for not just her son, but her country.
    It is said all of Kiev wept at her passing, mourning the woman who did more than she should have had to in the name of both revenge and protection. A vengeful saint with an unyielding, flaming will.

    Equal to the Apostles C+
    A variant of Saint given to those with great works in spreading the name of God. A title acquired for being the first influential Christian that brought the faith to the Slavs. A bloodstained Saint that gains rank-up the closer she is to the Slavic Region.
    Alongside the usual abilities of Saint, she gains something akin to Revelation in the area of summoning. A subtle awareness of the happenings within that bestows greater knowledge.




    ══════════╣ Personality ╠══════════
    Personality

    Some may believe, given her actions, Olga is a burning inferno scorching whatever lays in her path or perhaps someone so icy their cold burns like a fire. However, neither of these things are true. In fact, the saint who orchestrated the deaths of thousands in revenge comes off as nothing less than a beatific matron, her inviting warmth like that of a hearth.

    Oh, undeniably there is fury that may rise from the flames, but that is not her natural state. Olga is a protector at the core of her being, and any failure to maintain that protection has all her anger directed at the cause. Even then, she will still give off a demure, motherly impression as she watches her enemies turn to ash around her.

    Her seemingly endless calm, her parental affection for those around her, and her protective streak endears her to most people, and she’s not afraid to reach out to those who aren’t. Not just because of her title as a saint, but because she knows what it’s like to be truly alone without a hearth to return to. If she can grant that happiness to another, she knows she’s done well.

    Kriemhild:
    "Twenty years to take revenge, only to find it was all for naught. I can perfectly understand, but honestly, dear, you have few others to blame but yourself. Now cease this childishness and go talk to him."

    Brynhildr:
    "Both of you utterly mad in your grief. Yet, both of you also twisted by the machinations of others. So why do you continue to repeat a cycle you no longer need to follow. Foolish children, no matter the time."

    Irisviel von Einzbern:
    "Another finds more meaning in family. I can hardly believe how blind I was back then."

    Irisviel (Alter):
    "Isn’t this quite ironic? I’d love to know more, but you are simply an existence I cannot tolerate."

    Illyasviel von Einzbern:
    "Hm. Two thousand years in the making."

    Apostle Paul:
    "To be called equal to one like you is an odd sensation. There is blood on both our hands though, so perhaps it would not be too great a comparison were the scales not so uneven."

    Kiyohime:
    "I suppose turning you to char will have to suffice. Perhaps you will understand love in the next life."

    St. Jane Frances de Chantal
    "Let us burn these candles down to their wick. Just close your eyes and let go. I will be here till the flames stop burning."

    Pedro I (by Spartacus):
    "We all carry the shades of those we lost, some more than others. I’m thankful each day that Igor rests."

    Marguerite de Bressieux (by WhiteFrenzy):
    "We’ll burn them all, yes? I’m more than willing to start a few pyres personally."

    Kullervo:
    "You foolish child, how you frustrate me. Your vengeance was righteous, yet you cast off everyone who would have made it of worth. It is little wonder you fell on your own sword after having discarded so much."




    ═════════╣ Craft Essence ╠═════════
    Craft Essence

    A Wandering Ember Finds a Hearth

    "Failures. That’s all we were. All I was.
    Ashes scattered to the wind in our despair. Purposeless and divided.
    I didn’t know how far I wandered. I simply swayed across the land with every gust, ignored and scorned.
    As I believed I should be.
    Days. Perhaps weeks? I could not see, could not tell the passing, as I was carried along.
    Then one day, I could no longer feel the breeze. I fell to the ground, though I had been dead for longer before.
    Yet, I was not granted release, for that was when he found me. He saw fit to bring me back to life.
    With gentle coaxing and fresh kindling, he gave me new hope. More than that, he gave what none had before.
    A loving hearth, safe from the wind."






    ═════════╣ Notes ╠═════════Notes:
    Making a sheet with Morg is a challenge. Our styles differ in many ways. We have our fingers in different sheets of the others, but this is a natural conclusion to our habit of clashing ideas.
    You'd be surprised how much our discourse impacts each other's sheets already.

    My description of the NP was flashier btw ~ (He means overly dramatic)
    I meant excitingly cinematic. I wanted a scenic description of how she turns her hair into dozens of birds, which then would fly away from her and ten upwards, leaving a trail of embers behind that make it appear as if a city is put inside a fiery bird cage, similar to Doflamingos ability in One Piece. They would meet in the sky and THEN form Rarog, who I reinterpreted as a beast of vengeance that feasts upon conflagration of souls. If Morg had his way, the NP would be "Angy Birb goes BRRRR" and "let the audience imagine it for themselves".

    I had the wish to do Olga since my first month on here. idk anymore when, but I suggested Olga to Morg. Months ago we started brainstorming and we fought over potential FCs. I was for Makima. Ya know how this ended months later.
    How it ended was that I was right.
    It ended with Makima being a better faceclaim choice for my Binder Frances. So his choice was left! But dear heavens, try to argue with someone like Morg and find another picture.

    Like with my previous collabs, I had a rough concept, Morg did the writing and certain...hints were his hard fought and earned rewards.
    He gave me the Skills and NP and I took it from there. Descriptions, lore, character, CE, and just general touching up. Even got the music. He's more a concept man while I prefer the concrete details.
    Do not forget the impeccable formatting. I let him choose the color tho. Throwing him a bone, ya know~
    jokes aside, this was fun to do
    Behold! The works of a maniac!
    Servants!

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    He means excessively melodramatic. The many birds becoming one and the allusion to a cage was all fine and dandy, but it was framed as her wailing and tearing her hair out in furious anger and grief, not to mention he culled the notes that the Rarog was also seen in positive lights that relate it to her, all of which went against her character. "Angry birb goes BRRRR" is a much better way to describe his original description than mine.
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    Class: Saber
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Nakazawa Koto
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin: Japan (19th Century)
    Stars: 2/5

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: D
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 191cm
    Weight: 100lbs
    Likes: Strength
    Dislikes: Chaos
    Talent: Swordsmanship
    Natural Enemy: Robert of Geneva
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Swords
    Catalyst: The Shinshogumi banner

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance E: Never came across magic in life.

    Riding E: No anecdotes of riding anything, thus merely a bare minimum rank has been granted.

    Personal Skills:

    Entrancing Features B: As a tale written about her says, "When Koto dresses as a man, many women fall in love with her. When Koto dresses as a woman, many men fall in love with her." Sublimated, her face possesses a powerful charm effect that causes her to appear as the "ideal love" and charm anyone she sees.

    Breaking the Formation B: The sublimation of her breaking the formation of twelve samurai encircling her and defeating them all. A bonus to power based on the more enemies that she is currently fighting. In addition, she gains a "resistance to getting trapped", being able to cut her way through imprisonment.

    Training Swordsmen C: The sublimation of the Shinchogumi, a unit of police she cofounded, and trained. This allows her to bestow the status of a "Member of the Shinchogumi" on anyone she chooses, increasing their Agility and granting them basic proficiency with the sword. This can be bestowed on willing allies, but can also be bestowed upon enemies. However, as it doesn't come with any form of control, why would she use it on enemies?

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Mohai Ketto
    Perfect Victory


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 1

    The sublimation of her status as an "Unbeatable Swordswoman" who never lost a single duel. When the true name is called, she begins a duel with a target, nullifying outside interference, up to and including Command Seals, for both sides. Her strikes become far quicker and more harmful, naturally getting closer to victory at any moment.

    Shinchogumi
    At Our Will

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C
    Range: Infinite
    Max Targets: 100

    The sublimation of the decay and corruption which swept through the Shinchogumi, which she was one of the only members unaffected by it. This Noble Phantasm allows her to reenact it, corrupting all currently granted Shinchogumi status, causing them to spiral with endless hedonism and greed. She then gains a bonus against all of them.

    Lore: Nakazawa Koto (1839-1927) was a Japanese swordswoman during the Bakamatsu period. She fought for the Tokugawa Shogunate during the Meiji Revolution. She was also one of the founders of the Shinchogumi, a police force in Edo originally akin to the Shinsegumi, but which spiraled quickly.

    Personality: An extremely peppy and friendly person. She loves all battles, enjoying the thrill of matching wits with an opponent. She hates poor fights, but also hates chaos, preferring battle to be correctly ordered. Her wish for the Holy Grail is for the Shinchogumi to not have sunk into chaos.

    Relationships:

    Okita Rintaro: "Rin-kun! How have you been? And why are you disguised?"

    Robert of Geneva: "You're just... brutal. Not tactical, not strong, just brutal."

    Han Xin: "Send your armies! I can't wait to crush them!"

    Nohime: "Wow! You were an inspiration!"

    Fukuda Chiyo-ni: "Well, you're out of place, but I do admire your work."

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    Class: Caster
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Snorri Sturllson
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Place of Origin: Iceland (13th Century)
    Stars: 5/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: C
    MGI: A
    LCK: C
    NP: A

    Height: 192cm
    Weight: 145lbs
    Likes: Laws, collecting mythology, poetry
    Dislikes: Traitors, captors
    Talent: Speaking law, collecting mythology
    Natural Enemy: Andvari
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Male, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
    Armament: His speaking
    Catalyst: A copy of the Prose Edda

    Class Skills:

    Item Creation (false) A: He can manifest most items from the Prose Edda.

    Territory Creation B: Can create a Studio equal in rank to a Workshop.

    Personal Skills:

    Ut Vil Ek B: The sublimation of his words, Ut Vil Ek, I Shall Go Home, which have became an icelandic proverb. This allows him to throw off any resistance below B rank when he is heading to any location which he defines as "home", whether it actually be his home or not or even actually not be a home, even if this is an "order from the king".

    Lawspeaker A: The sublimation of his job of Lawspeaker, the most famous one. The ability to recite the laws, and naturally to minorly alter them, although of course these changes only hold as long as he is the primary source for those laws and even then for a short time.

    Heimskringla A+: One of his most famous works, the Heimskrigla, a history of the Nordic kings. This allows him to take on the powers of the kings he wrote about: for example borrowing Illusions from Haakon the Good, Expansionism from Halfdan the Black, Animal Bond (Wolf) from Harald Greycloak, and so on.

    Rune Magic C+: He was trained in norse runes, but not extremely effectively, especially as magecraft had massively weakened during his time. This grants him some proficiency in that branch of magic, enhanced massively when combined with his noble phantasm Prose Edda.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Prose Edda
    The Compiled Norse Mythology

    Type: Anti-Fortress
    Rank: A
    Range: 100 meters
    Max Targets: 1000 targets

    The sublimation of his masterwork, the Prose Edda, a compilation of all of Norse Mythology that is one of the primary sources. When the true name is called, he layers the surroundings into Valhalla, the domain of Odin. In this state Snorri gains the ability to utilize armaments of the legend, although they are weaker, such as Hod's Mistletoe Arrow, Thor's hammer, Ran's net, and so on, charging his runes with the powers of them.

    Bar Dodelig
    Merely a Mortal

    Type: Anti-Divine
    Rank: B
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 100

    The sublimation of his labeling all the divine entities in Norse myth as being “merely super powerful mortals”. This manifests in the form of a Noble Phantasm that allows him to strip the divinity from a target, rendering them merely mortal.

    Lore: Snorri Sturluson (1179-1241) was a famous Lawspeaker, historian, and poet noted mostly for his writing of the Prose Edda, one of the primary sources for all of Norse Mythology, as well as the Heimskringla, one of the primary sources for the history of the past kings of Norway.

    Personality: A stern and grumpy person. He hates those who try to command him or order him around, in life even ignoring his king's ask for help. He loves history and mythology, finding them tending to massively intertwine. His wish for the grail is merely to have been able to analyze more.

    Relationships:

    Scathach-Skadi: "...Hmmph. Fascinating."

    Andvari: "Fie, you greedy dwarf! Actually, I'll analyze you first."

    Puteri Gunung Ledang: "The boundary point, isn't it?"

    Frau Gauden: "For a justification of the wild wind you're remarkably similar to me."

    Anna Kommene: "Pfah! Those 'epics' aren't worth the paper they're printed on."
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    Snorri: I wonder if you could give him an NP based on his responsibility for Christianizing/euphemizing Norse myth. Something like rewriting gods into mortals and Pagan artifacts into Christian ones. Also Norse Runes should probably be renamed Rune Magic for more standardization with the existing Skill name. Lastly I'd consider if Item Construction should be (False) given he doesn't seem to be really crafting these tools, but rather manifesting them from his NP.

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    Thanks for your comments royd I have added a second Np and switched the names.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jishara View Post

    Source: TypeMoon

    Class: Saber
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Han Xin
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: China (3rd Century BC)
    Stars: 4/5

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: B
    LCK: D
    NP: B

    Height: 187cm
    Weight: 100lbs
    Likes: Valiant battle, glory
    Dislikes: Unfulfilled battle
    Talent: Perfecting bloodshed
    Natural Enemy: Xiang Yu, Yu Meiren
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Male, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Shi Mian Maifu
    Catalyst: A painting of him

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance B: He lived in the age of gods and fought magecraft, leading to a fairly high rank of magic resistance.

    Riding A: He is capable of riding all mundane steeds easily, as well as low-level phantasmal beasts.

    Personal Skills:

    Zhui Hanxin B: The sublimation of the saying that "Xiao He chases Han Xin under the moonlight" The ability to control moonlight, tending to use it as a shining armor surrounding him that makes him seem like "the true glory" to anyone who sees him, fitting for his mindset of endless but careful battle.

    Duoduoyishan A: "When Han Xin commands forces, the more the better." A saying created by his statement to Liu Bang. This allows him to easily command and control massive armies, ranking up the stats of all within, although as a demerit the individuality of those under his control is not respected, as the saying was comparing Liu Bang's commanding of generals with Han Xin's of soldiers.

    Mingxiu Zhandao A+: The sublimation of his most famous stratagem, the Mingxiu Zhandao, which became part of the 36 stratagems. In it, he built connections to one location to be able to surprise those at a different location. The ability to "seem like" he's heading in a particular direction, while heading in a different one.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Shi Mian Maifu
    Ambush on Ten Sides


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 100 meters
    Max Targets: 1 targets

    The sublimation of one of his most famous stratagems, his "Ambush on Ten Sides". This manifests into the sword he holds, which allows him to create up to ten shadows of himself, emerging from it. Each of these has no individual thought and as such are prime for Duoduoyishan's commanding force. When the true name is called, all the shadows converge on a singular target, striking before Han Xin lands the finishing blow from above.

    Kanjian he Zhanli
    Falsified Vow of the Emperor

    Type: Support
    Rank: D
    Range: 0 meters
    Max Targets: 0 targets

    The sublimation of the vow of the emperor that if he faced heaven and stood firmly on earth, he could not be harmed by weapons wielded by soldiers. This vow manifests in a fairly straightforward form as a servant. As long as he "Faces heaven" (that is, can see the sky), and "stands firmly on earth" (that is, his feet can touch the ground), "No weapons wielded by soldiers can harm him" (no weapons that are standard military weapons can harm him. However, bare hands or non-standard weapons can). In addition, noble phantasms above Rank C ignore this ability.

    Lore: Han Xin (231-196 BC) was a Chinese general and politician who was a major player during the founding of the Han Dynasty, siding with Liu Bang over Xiang Yu and aiding him in several occasions. However, he was severely slighted by Liu Bang, even demoted to merely Marquis. So he attempted to rebel but was crushed.

    Personality: A bloodthirsty and fierce man who loves destroying and crushing the enemy. However, he is also fairly focused on tactics, tending to use ambushes and more hidden attacks before all out pummeling them when they cant stop it. His wish is to be able to win every battle he enters.

    Relationships:

    Xiang Yu: "....I wish I hadn't sided against you..."

    Yu Meiren: "I'm... truly sorry for my role."

    Gao Changgong: "Poison? How terrible."

    Xi Shi: "Poor soul."

    Yuenu: "You're very similar to me, aren't you?"




    Just giving some opinions on the naming for some skills and the Np. (Mainly the names)

    Zhui Han Xin can be changed to Yue Xia Zhui Jun (月下追君) (Directly translates to: "Chasing You under the Moonlight)
    I absolutely understand the Moonlight part, but using it as armor... kinda confusing. The fella was running from old Liu, so I find that a speed boost will do fine. Perhaps the np can be and overdrive version of this?

    Mingxiu Zhandao can be changed to Andu Chencang (暗度陈仓), since that was the one that ended up in the Thirty-six Strategems.

    Shimian Maifu (Eh? Yan Qing's NP?) can be changed to Simian Chuge (四面楚歌)(aka the part where Xiang Yu kills himself). Basically same meaning, but this is the military campaign Han Xin took part in at Gaixia (Mountainous Strength, Conquering Might came from this event as well).

    Kanjian Zhanli can be changed to Sanqiwangling: Wubusha (三齐王令: 五不杀) (Directly translates to: Order of the Duke of Qi: Unkillable by Five)
    same meaning, just to your original name means (see and stand), so I felt it was kinda weird.
    so yea. really, feel free to pm me if you guys are uncertain about China shit.
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    @St. Olga: Now those are some real Angry Birds! But joke aside, it's a very good sheet of an Avenger who's not that edgy for once. I like the progressing story mixed in with the skills.

    @Sigyn: Now that's just wholesome. Sweet wife and her gremlin husband.

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    *Sniff*, I heard you kids were having problems with the "Syncretism" prompt for the Monthly Contest. Well, apropos of nothing I ended up finishing a sheet that I feel could teach you stragglers the possibilities of what you can do.



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    Lancer

    "True pride is something you trade your life for! When you said that, it really struck a chord with me! You made it clear; in order to die a proud death someday, I can't live in a way I'd be ashamed of!"



    True Name: Mars-Loucetios
    Epithet: "Sharp-Eyed Impaler of the Divine House"
    Region: Gaul (Gallo-Roman Mythology)
    Hidden Attribute: Heaven
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Likes: Travelling, Women
    Dislikes: Barbarians, Dishonour
    Talents: Fast-Talking, Music
    Natural Enemy: Altera the Hun

    Parameters

    STR: (B) END: (C) AGI: (A) MGI: (B) LCK: (C) NP: (A)

    Character
    Lancer takes the form of Mars-Loucetios, the Gallic God of Thunder whose worship survived Imperial Roman rule by being syncretized with the God of War, Mars - their compatibility being due to the common Celtic kenning of using thunderstorms (torannchless) as a metaphor for battles. However despite the grandiose name, Loucetios is unable to completely manifest the extraterrestrial powers of Mars in a Servant container and so is more akin to a Divided Spirit with bits of both individuals in this form.

    A brash and confident young man, Loucetios is not afraid to say what’s on his mind no matter who it might upset. This is reflected in his summoning to the Holy Grail War, treating it as nothing more than a game to test his might against the other heroes. Part of this is due to his eyes being able to read a person’s true intentions and so in order to mitigate the guilt of involuntarily reading everyone’s mind, he tries to be an open book himself. It was this power that allowed him to bond with the elusive foreign goddess Sulis, since they both were troubled with having supernatural eyes. Thus exposes his other infamous trait as despite claiming to love his wife Nemetona, Loucetios is an unrepentant womanizer who took many mistresses over the course of his travels, Sulis having been his “girl in Britain”. Even now in the present day, Loucetios will do anything for a pretty face and if that person happens to be his Master, then feigning crocodile tears is the perfect way to coerce him into focusing on his duties as a Servant.

    However despite his carefree energy and eternal sass, deep down Loucetios was an insecure fellow. He deeply feared being forgotten without leaving a mark on the world, and so despite the risks he convinced his fellow Gallic deities to be syncretised into the Roman Pantheon in order for their cults to survive the Empire’s conquest of Gaul. While his mind stayed mostly intact after becoming one with Mars due to his strong willpower, Loucetios often experienced disorientating cognitive dissonance when some of Mars’ memories bled into his own and the War God’s destructive and violent tendencies influencing him made him fear for the safety of his wife and followers so he took to aimlessly wandering the land as a vagabond who cut down enemies of the Empire or just general villains who harmed women. The isolation he felt was remedied by the constant meeting of new people and gratitude they showed for his aid. Yet despite the hardship, not once did he blame either Mars or Rome and instead he was full of pride for serving the Divine House. To that end he started re-examining his goals in life and tried to focus on living his life in an honourable way that his cult would be proud of, rather than trying to infinitely extend their worship.

    His Wish upon the Holy Grail? To his shame, there is one villain he was never able to best. A certain King of the Huns who brought devastation to Rome and its people. Even when they combined their might into one ultimate being, Mars and Loucetios were unable to defeat Altera and although they survived the battle, they lost the Photon Ray to her. Loucetios never forgave himself for the disgrace of that outcome and has spent a lot of his free time training both mentally and physically. If he were to obtain the Holy Grail, he would use its power to travel back to that fight and replace his younger self with the hope that this time his advanced experience will alter history and protect the smiles of his people, even if it meant giving his life to do so…

    "People may ridicule my noble ideals as fantasy and naïve, but with determination and effort I shall reach my soaring ambitions. I will have no regrets disdaining fleeting glory even when my hour comes."


    Skills

    Class Skills

    Divinity - (A+)
    The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit - a demi-god. This Skill has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. As a god himself who is fused with the deity of another pantheon, Loucetios naturally has this Skill at the highest Rank.

    Magic Resistance - (A)
    The protection granted against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. As a deity from the Age of Gods, Loucetios has a strong immunity to magical effects even if he is not a master of them himself. He will naturally cancel out spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what Greater Magecraft it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title Loucetios a "Magus Killer" whilst as a Servant.

    Personal Skills

    The Beauty of Trouble with Women - (A)
    A type of “awareness” of women whose infamy borders on that of a curse. Despite supposedly loving his long suffering wife Nemetona, Loucetios was a well known scoundrel who would instantly proclaim his love for any woman with a pretty face that he met in his travels which caused all manner of shenanigans. It is for this reason that he will find it difficult to harm a female opponent and even worse, in spite his high Magic Resistance, he is abnormally vulnerable to Charm effects from the opposite sex. This does go both ways though, and if he is defending a maiden from a villain who seeks to make her cry, Loucetios’ righteous fury will grant a boost to his Parameters for the battle. It is said however, that the only “beauty” he will not fall for is a certain ruler of the Huns who he will not forgive for the humiliating defeat he suffered at her hands.

    Clairvoyance - (C)
    The superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture, such as to supplement the long-range aiming of projectile weapons. While not an Archer Class Servant, Loucetios nevertheless has amazing eyesight that forms the basis of his name. Simply looking from a high vantage point is sufficient to fully survey a town and search for enemies of the Divine House which he can snipe using his spear as a throwing weapon if he deems them unworthy of the honour of direct combat. But the true advantage is how Loucetios can understand what a person is thinking by looking into their eyes which allows him to understand without words as well as making it hard to deceive him. It was this peculiarity that allowed him to bond with the foreign goddess Sulis who was also isolated due to having Mystic Eyes.

    Ride Like Lightning, Crash Like Thunder - (A)

    The Authority over thunder and lightning, or in other words conceptual power through general electromagnetism. An ability that does not find its origin in his patron Mars but rather in Loucetios’ original Gallic dominion over thunderstorms. By channeling his unique magical energy throughout his body, Loucetios is able to generate an electric aura around his body to use in various ways beyond just making his hair spike up for intimidation. Releasing it through his spear and pointing it towards an enemy allows the electricity to arc through the air and attack them, or alternatively he can reverse the polarity and use magnetic levitation to ride the spear after people like a hoverboard. The possibilities are only restricted by his imagination, or he can just use it for more mundane things like turning his hands into a defibrillator. But Loucetios’ favourite move is to supercharge his vocal chords so that the rapid expansion of air that his voice creates a sonic wave - which he dubs his “thunder shock surprise” and is often accompanied by an electric guitar and him belting out anime theme songs in order to clear out waves of enemies.


    Noble Phantasm

    Perkwunos
    Striker of the Scattered Clouds

    [Type - Anti Army], [Noble Phantasm Rank - A], [Maximum Range - 1~1000 Meters], [Maximum Number of Targets - 500 Units]

    The crystalized union of both Mars and Loucetios’ weapons in one form. Shaped like a normal Celtic spear, but upon closer inspection one will see the faint glow of futuristic technology pulsating from within the junctions. Because photons are a quantum of the electromagnetic field, Mars’ Photon Ray sword seamlessly morphs its shape into the Perkwunos spear to better suit Loucetios’ powers and fighting style. Aside from being used as a normal spear in combat, Perkwunos can channel Loucetios’ Authority for various effects.

    But the true power is that when the Noble Phantasm is fully invoked, the futuristic machinations hidden inside the spear activate and reveal themselves to be capable of modifying atmospheric particles for the purpose of weather manipulation. Once unleashed, the sky will quickly turn cloudy as a thunderstorm rolls in from out of nowhere and bolts of lightning strike down to recharge Loucetios’ energy reserves. It may seem strange that the deity of Lightning would be worshiped so strongly, but it is because destruction and regeneration are merely two sides of the same coin and with the thunderstorms that formed Loucetios’ wrath came fructifying rains that healed the land and prevented droughts. Now as a Noble Phantasm, the mystical rain that Perkwunos creates will heal Loucetios’ allies and will turn freezing cold to immobilize his enemies.

    But since the spear was once Photon Ray and used by the God of War himself, the syncretism between Mars and Loucetios causes Perkwunos to resurrect an ancient memory that neither user knew of. A nameless deity who served as the Origin of the Lightning God, locked in an epic battle with a multi-headed water serpent to destroy it and bring water to the people who worshiped him. Now in a Holy Grail War, when Loucetios has his back to the wall, he can throw his spear into a large enough body of water and it as well as the mystical rain previously summoned will all be sucked up and merge to form that very same giant water serpent once again. As the facade of the ancient creature is centered around Perkwunos acting as its core, Loucetios is able to command it and use its many long necks and as if they were his spear to bite down and crush the opposition. However this mode of Perkwunos is quick to drain energy and Loucetios cannot maintain it for long periods of time and it also leaves him vulnerable to direct attacks without his weapon since commanding the serpent also requires a lot of concentration. Thus it is wise to use it more as a surprise attack or a final resort.


    Relationships

    Altera - “You…you are the one person I cannot forgive. No matter what, I will stop you from going on another rampage.”

    Arjuna - “Hmph, it seems that in a lot of other pantheons, the Lightning Deity is also the King…except for me. I’ll have to work hard to change that.”

    Artoria - “I suppose since you are the descendant of a Roman Emperor, I could lend an ear to your troubles.”

    Artemis, Heracles & Perseus - “This is awkward. I might not be quite Ares, or even Mars right now, but I am still a friend to you nonetheless.”

    Cú Chulainn - “This aura…you remind me a lot of my younger self. That’s not a compliment though.”

    Kriemhild - “How you could even think of getting married to that monster is completely inconceivable to me.”

    Qin Shi Huang - “My wife was always very fond of terracotta tributes, if it’s no bother, she’d be ecstatic if I saw that mausoleum of yours and told her about it.”

    Romulus - “My heart swells with pride to see your face again, boy. Rome truly is a wonderful place isn’t it?”


    Creator's Notes
    The Faceclaim is Juan Cán Yún from Urobuchi’s “Thunderbolt Fantasy”. I was originally going to use Kazuma from Konosuba to parallel the prior Sulis-Minerva sheet I did which had Aqua as the FC, but Kazuma didn’t quite fit the character I envisioned for Loucetios.

    Something from Konosuba I didn’t discard though, was the interesting way the deities interact with their “cults” and their unique attempts to grow them.
    "Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"

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    The idea of a god convincing others to be syncretized is very amusing, and I really enjoy how his personality and motivations are shaped by that. He's very fun.
    But I think there's some confusion there with the greek lore. I'm pretty sure human Altera never fought the gods, she got Photon Ray back during her first attack as Velber.

    Why not submit this to the contest though?

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    Source: AnimeHinata

    Class: Archer
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Wanda Landowska
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: Poland (20th Century)
    Stars: 1/5

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: D
    LCK: D
    NP: C

    Height: 168cm
    Weight: 100lbs
    Likes: Harpsichord, playing music in the style intended
    Dislikes: Interpretations that alter style
    Talent: Popularizing Harpsichord
    Natural Enemy: Erik Satie
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Female, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Pleyel Golden Notes
    Catalyst: A copy of one of the many pieces written for her

    Class Skills:

    Independent Action D: Not particularly independent, she gains a minimal rank merely allowing her to last for a short time without a master.

    Magic Resistance E: She never encountered magic and as thus has a minimal rank.

    Personal Skills:

    Protection of the Music Gods (False) C: The extreme quality of skill possessed by her, so that she could even be mistaken for "one blessed by the Muses", in composition and harpsichord. Bestows an extremely effective ear, Eye for Art (Music), and the ability to produce a masterful musical performance whenever she wishes to.

    I'll Play Him His Way A: The sublimation of her deep care for the style played at the time of the music she plays. The ability to "get into the feel" and the "time period" of any particular person, more effective with those strongly connected with music, whether composers, performers, conductors, or even people who music was written for or about.

    El Ratablo de Maese Pedro B: The sublimation of the many pieces that were written for her to play in particularly, with one of the most famous being El Ratablo de Maese Pedro, a puppet opera written by Manuel De Falla. The ability to serve as an "inspiration for ideas" to her allies. In addition, the capability to manifest puppet versions of her at her will.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Pleyel Golden Notes
    Revitalizing the Harpsichord

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 1 target

    The sublimation of her incredible playing, referred to as a "shower of stinging needles and glorious golden rain" by one notable critic. This passively manifests as a Pleyel harpsichord, akin to the one she normally plays. It "shoots" golden musical notes that feel akin to needles. When the true name is called, she links into one particular "time period and feel" of an enemy, showering them with golden notes that sting emotionally, reminding of the worst times in their life, as well as physically, or an ally, with glowing golden notes revitalizing their spirit.

    Lore: Wanda Lankowska (1879-1959) was a Polish pianist, harpsichordist, and composer who played a huge role in revitalizing the popularity of the harpsichord. When she was young, she decided to focus on the harpsichord, and gained massive amounts of success, with many pieces written for her to play or even just for her.

    Personality: She is almost never seen not playing her harpsichord. She is devoted to the "style of the times", and thus hates those who "modernize", feeling that they should remain how they were. She also hates secrets, especially those hidden by composers, as those can completely change the meaning of a work.

    Relationships:

    Carlo Gesualdo: "What on earth are you? What a horrible being."

    Bedrich Smetana: "Madness isn't an emotion I try to capture much."

    John Phillip Sousa: "Sousaphone? Sounds very odd."

    Erik Satie: "OUT! I will not have discussion of musical secrets here."

    Teresa Teng: "The joy you put in is beautiful."

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    Servant Saber is ready to fight. I wonder who will be my opponent in this war?

    Class: Saber
    True Name: Alexander Suvorov
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: Russian Empire
    Armament: his Noble Phantasm

    STRENGE — B
    ENDURANCE — A
    AGILITY — B
    MANA — B
    LUCK — A
    NP — A

    Class skills:

    Riding(B)

    The skill of the Saber and Rider classes. Saber has enough rank to ride any military vehicle

    Magic Resistance(B)

    Provides protection from magical effects. Unlike the resistance effect, which simply rejects magical energy, this ability completely cancels spells.


    Personal skills:

    Divinity(D, B with NP)

    Measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit - a demi-god. Those who have A Rank Divinity or above have reached the Throne of Gods, although they are still just short of being a true god due to lacking a Divine Core. The level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast rises; it can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. This Skill has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defense" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig.

    Saber has no kinship with the gods, however, after his death, a monument was erected to him depicting him in the form of the Roman god of war Mars, which gives Saber a bit of divinity

    I declare right away that no god helped me in my victories. But my soldiers - how they helped.

    Expert in many specializations(B)

    During his lifetime, Saber had many talents. In his spare time, he paid attention to many disciplines and fought his laziness. Among his skills are Charisma, Military tactics, Eye for art, Mentoring, Swordsmanship, Presence Concealment (Saber often dressed up as a simple soldier so that even his own people did not recognize him) and so on.

    Never waste time. No teacher can teach you what you yourself can master, you need to show perseverance and diligence

    Golden rule(Body)(A)


    Saber can temporarily rank up his STR. Furthermore, even without training, he's still beyond brawny. No matter how many calories he ingests, his body shape will not change. Also this skill allows him to remove negative effects from himself after a while, such as debuffs, downgrades, mental curses, etc. below A rank.

    At the beginning of his life, Saber was a weak and sickly person. However, since childhood, he began to temper himself with Spartan methods, thanks to which he acquired a good physical shape and lived longer than he could live.

    That was my very first victory, heh. I wonder if I can become the most successful doctor? After all, they also fight against diseases, and in this case I ate a dog. What? It is Russian idiom, I have never eaten dogs in my life

    Noble Phantasm:

    Фанагорийский полководец
    Undefeated regiment of the god of war and victory
    B

    Sublimating all of Saber's victories and recognizing him as the incarnation of the God of War, as reflected in the monument erected to him.

    It is a saber with a red blade. When sealed, the saber has the ability to give Saber the ability to win in battle. This NP has no specific properties - it all depends on the opponent fighting against Saber. The sword will acquire those properties that are needed to defeat the enemy. Against God, the sword will acquire anti-divine properties. Against the demon, the sword will become an anti-demonic weapon. If the servant has a weakness to fire or poison, then the sword will become fiery or poisonous.

    When Saber proclaims that NP's true name, the sword will disappear, becoming Saber's Roman armor. This armor raises Saber's divinity rank to B, but that's not all. Now Saber is able to create any weapon of war, from a sword to a rocket launcher, but there are conditions.

    1) Saber cannot create weapons he invented, only those that exist and have been used in wars

    2) Weapons must be created by human hands

    3)Weapons can be held in hands, for this reason Saber will not be able to create tanks and planes

    Saber is also able to summon the ghostly soldiers he commanded in life from his armor. These soldiers can also use weapons summoned by Saber.

    Moreover, once this NP is activated, Saber can no longer lose a fight. Like one Irish warrior's spear, which always strikes at the heart, breaking causality, so this armor will always give Saber the opportunity to end the fight on his own terms. However, Saber is by no means invincible and NP has one weak point - Saber can be killed by a surprise attack from a third party, someone who has not participated in the battle and whom Saber could not identify as his enemy. In other words, to defeat Saber, you should not engage in combat with him.

    Description:

    Likes: Battles, worthy opponents, his soldiers, Russia, play the fool
    Dislikes: Turks, Austrians, Prussians, scoundrels, luxury, lazy people
    Natural enemy: Emelyan Pugachev, Napoleon Bonaparte, Tadeusz Kosciuszko

    Saber’s True name is Alexander Suvorov, Russian commander, founder of Russian military theory. Field Marshal General, Generalissimo, Field Marshal of the Holy Roman Empire, Grand Marshal of the Piedmontese troops, holder of all Russian orders of his time, awarded to men, as well as seven foreign. He is also known as a commander who didn’t lose a single battle.

    Suvorov, which may come as a surprise to many, is not a serious person in everyday life. He can talk some nonsense, and at times inappropriate and bad jokes. He is very ascetic and does not like luxury - in any weather he walks in light clothes, and even with a bare torso.

    However, this is all a sham. Suvorov pretends to be a fool, but in battle he shows himself to be a dangerous opponent. He has his own code of honor as a commander and really dislikes dastardly tactics, such as using civilians as human shields. Many modern wars disappoint him.

    Even in battle, Suvorov retains his childishness and gaiety. He is unflappable, and is quite capable of having a polite conversation with his opponent during a fight, even explaining to him where he made a mistake. Alexander will be very happy to cross swords with famous generals whom he respects.

    True, Suvorov is somewhat boastful. He doesn’t mind exaggerating the number of enemies with whom he fought, adding something from himself, attributing an extra reward to himself. Nevertheless, he does not underestimate the merits of the allies, however, if they also distinguished themselves.

    Relations

    Iskander — My dear namesake, it is a great honor for me to meet you. You can consider my victories as yours too. By the way, I have one request for you - can you show me how to play this Admirable Great Tactics?

    Napoleon Bonaparte - Your imperial majesty, and so you lost to my student, but still you want to challenge me to battle? I love this kind of perseverance.

    Jack Churchill - What a dashing soldier. And you play the bagpipes, and you know how to swing a sword, and you shoot from a bow. I regret now that I never visited Scotland during my lifetime.
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    bro, just wondering, what sort of weapon has he invented?
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    Who knows? That sheet clearly has no interest in the actual figure beyond the fact he got a Mars sculpture, anyway. There's even a cheat skill so you're not distracted too much from the war god stuff.

    No, but seriously. Giving him an association with Mars because of that sculpture is fine, but you have to go into efforts to represent the actual man and his accomplishment, else the True Name just feel like it was tacked on. Foreigners incorporate Elder Gods, but they still have plenty of abilities and themes tied to who they were in life, for example. Also, Golden Rule (Body) is supposed to represent a naturally perfect body, which is the exact opposite of training your entire life to surpass a naturally weak constitution.
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    Quote Originally Posted by pinetree View Post
    But I think there's some confusion there with the greek lore. I'm pretty sure human Altera never fought the gods, she got Photon Ray back during her first attack as Velber.
    Eh, during the writing process I had the idea of one of his flaws being a hypocrite for wanting to stand apart from his other half, Mars but at the same time refusing to see Altera as an individual apart from Velber. But most of that got left on the cutting room floor other than general antagonism towards Altera so your confusion is justified since I should have cleaned up that aspect.

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    Why not submit this to the contest though?
    The whole contest thing isn't really my style.
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    Source: Kotora Hu

    Class: Lancer
    Other Classes: Caster, Assassin
    True Name: Malik Ambar
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Place of Origin: India (16th Century)
    Stars: 4/5

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: B
    AGI: C
    MGI: D
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 178cm
    Weight: 134lbs
    Likes: Effective warfare, beautiful architecture, good governance
    Dislikes: Losing battles
    Talent: Guerilla warfare
    Natural Enemy: Gandhari
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Male, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: A spear
    Catalyst: The Nahr Canal System

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance C: He came across some magic in life and thus gains an average rank of this class skill.

    Personal Skills:

    Guerilla Warfare A: He was extremely renowned in his guerilla warfare, being regarded as a pioneer in that tactic. As a skill, he can weaken enemies nearby, more effective against larger groups of enemies, visually appearing as a set of miniature spears launching into them at his will.

    Prime Minister B: He was an extremely effective and noted prime minister with impressive skill for administration, serving as the power behind the throne. The ability to utilize the "skills of a prime minister", such as Eye for Art, Charisma, Tactician's Advice, and other such skills.

    Fixing Revenues C: The sublimation of his Revenue Settlement of Deccan, fixing revenues and costs at a certain amount, a precursor to many other such skills. The ability to "fix" mana intake at a certain level for all those within an area. However, he may also be affected by this skill.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Nahr Aurangebad
    Awash, The River's Water Flows

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 100 targets

    The sublimation of his creation of the city Aurangebad. In this class, the primary focus is on the canal system, Nahr, he built through it, an incredibly innovative and effective design. When the true name is called, his spear "charges" with energy and water from the surroundings, before releasing it in a blast of liquid that heals allies and harms enemies.

    Lore: Malik Ambar (1548-1626) was a Siddi military leader noted for his extremely effective guerilla warfare. He was the power behind the throne and prime minister for the Ahmadnagar Sultanate, and built the famous city of Aurangebad. He is also noted for his revenue settlement that was a precursor to many others.

    Personality: A calm and strategic person. He always tends to plan out and carefully analyze any given situation, using strategies as much as he can, and hates having to wing anything. This naturally tends to throw him off whenever someone doesn't act how he planned. His wish is to hold back the Mughal emperors he warred against.

    Relationships:

    Gandhari: "Planning will.... no, it will always work. It must always work!"

    Carlo Gesualdo: "How.... how utterly irrational."

    Mirabai: "Well, I suppose the best-laid plans... always succeed."

    Kamaladevi Chattophadyay: "Your strategy was impressive. And traditions.. good choice."

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