You used the sexy, grizzled canon WoL as the art so points for that
You used the sexy, grizzled canon WoL as the art so points for that
Current FGO setup
As per your suggestions Royd, I made edits to Josiah's 3rd NP. I hope you find it to be a bit better now.
I was amazed at how quickly this next sheet was coming together and then i got to the NP and...things might slow down.
Saber
"I see, this must be my punishment for being so powerless back then. I will not repent, but I will devote myself to atoning for what happened. As such, if blood is to be shed, then we shed it together Master."
True Name: Hildebrand
AKA: Hildibrandr
Epithet: "The Master-at-Arms of the Amelung"
Region: Lombardy (Germanic Mythology)
Alignment: Neutral Good
Likes: Family, Honour
Dislikes: Annoying Requests, Betrayal
Talents: Counsel, Duelling
Natural Enemy: Kriemhild
Parameters
STR: (C) END: (B) AGI: (A) MGI: (C) LCK: (D) NP: (B)
Character
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Relationships
Creator's Notes
T'is been a while folks. All comments and criticisms are (not) welcome~
Last edited by Skull; March 22nd, 2023 at 06:37 PM.
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
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Caster of the undead
Class: Caster
Other Classes: foreigner
True Name: George Andrew Romero
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: North America,USA
Parameters:
STR:E
END:C-
AGI:C
MGI:A+
LCK:C
NP:
Height:6,4
Weight:160id
Likes: scaring people for fun, film making, classic zombies adoptions, anything that is naturally scary
Dislikes: modern zombies adoptions, maliciously scaring poeple
Talent:film making
Natural Enemy:???
Attribute:Man
Traits:Hominidae Servants,male,week to Enuma Elish
Armament:no weapons but is always holding a small handheld camera
Catalyst: a original draft of night of the living dead
Class Skills:
Item construction D: He's able to only create things that are relevant to his shows such as costumes, props, things like that.
Territory creation B+: He's able to create a movie studio one almost identical to the one that he used to make his iconic works, if this is used in combination with his noble Phantasm, it can accelerate the process quite rapidly.
Personal Skills:
Mystic eyes of fear perception A: Caster revolutionized a whole medium through how well he could scare people. It was all thanks to these eyes of his. With this skill Is able to look at someone and instantly know what their fears are from the slightest to the most deepest darkest ones, Caster becomes aware of them. On top of this, he also knows what is currently scaring someone if they are currently frightened.
Charisma C-: Even though Caster is a master at knowing how to frighten people, he doesn't come off as it most of the time More often than not. He'll just come off as a quiet, nice old man. That is quite pleasant to talk to giving off almost a grandfather like vibe.
Noble Phantasm(s):
The Dead walking
Title My wonderfully scary creation
Type: anti-unit/anti army
Rank:E-A
Range:1-40
Max Targets: ( as many bodies as caster can get)
A noble phantasm which represents caster's biggest mark on the world. His creation of the modern day zombie with this noble phantasm casters able to make zombies, the zombies require a physical host to be made more specifically. A deceased host. The longer the host has been dead, the stronger the zombie will become. This process normally takes quite some time for caster to do. But if he's given the time to also set up his territory creation, the process can be sped up quite a bit. In the very unlikely scenario that Caster gets a hold of a heroic spirit that he can turn into a zombie that zombie will quite literally turn into a zombified version of that heroic spirit, although it will not be able to use the noble phantasm of the spirit it once was it will still retain the skill parameters at once had, although all being decreased by one rank.
Lore:
caster's true name is George Andrew Romero. The person that is quite widely recognized as the creator of the modern zombie movie. His 1968 cult classic night of the living Dead is what the foundation for the modern interpretation of zombies. And is what led to the zombie craze of the modern era
Personality:
Caster, despite what some might think is actually a quite Nice quiet men living to talk and get to know people. He comes off as just a very enjoyable elderly man to be around. That's his on the surface anyway, below the surface. He's a bit more of a prankster almost he loves to scare people plain & simple. He loves to craft ways to bring out their deepest fears and bring them to the forefront. He does this in a very almost lighthearted way. He doesn't do it. Maliciously and if he seen that he's gone too far he will be wholeheartedly apologetic.
Creator Notes: (attempt number 2 at a servant hoping i did better then last time once again like how this turned out even tho i don't know how to do the fancier stuff yet )
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'Winner' of the Legendary Jack-Off
What anju said
Also literally raising the dead for a 20th century guy is too much. Charisma is not a skill for him
Also think about the consequences of zombies running around
You could use the mass hysteria skill of foreigner abby or something to reflect it
If you have a cool skill like those eyes have another skill that works well with it, like some sort of zombie tactics to control the undead and lead them.
And skull made another really cool servant. Is it just me or did you use more flowery language this time to convey all his abilities?
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
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Hildebrand: So far so funny but hold up i havent read the story of Dietrich but is that true that he was forced to be sufleur for Dietrich as he were to clueless at bedtalk ? Good and Well made profile otherwise .
and has the Hildebrandslied something to do with him ?
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Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !
When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
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Huh ya know in hindsight that would have been pretty cool to give him illusions also I did not know about the Learning with Manga stuff might retry yo make him because I think he could be really cool. As a servant there tons of writers as servents I think adding filmmakers to that would be really cool. Someone's probably already done it though. I'm doing my crack at it
Top Level Notes:
"This will be fun."
Amour sacré de la patrie,
Rends-nous l’audace et la fierté;
A mon pays je dois la vie.
Il me devra sa liberté.
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"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
There stood a Tree. The most beautiful Pillar of Hardwood pierced the Blue Above.
Proud it stood, but from the same Blue descended a Star and razed it to the ground. Not even ash remained.
But the Pillar's roots run deeper than just the ground.
The depths of the earth not even a Calamity could reach.
Despite being underground there was still life - Life in the Realm of Death.
He was one of the Guardians of this Pillar.
Now he lives on the brink between the world of Life and the Darkness.
War. There was a war beneath your feet.
The place of the souls was vacant because both the crown of the Tree and of the Underworld vanished when Destruction came.
Years afterward they came drifting. Drifting from the West, the Broken Pillars from the Sky.
He made his home far below the roots. But he wanted more.
Greedy Fool.
The god hiding in the dark wished to access the sacred remains of the Tree.
"It is dead," he said. "Death is my domain. Therefore it belongs to me" he uttered.
Despicable Fool.
The tree that is life can not be dead. Even if, what does it matter to the guardian?
He vowed to protect the Tree, he lived for it. As long as something of the Divine Tree Sylvanus exists in this forsaken world,
he will protect it.
Even if the opponent is the King of the Underworld. Hades, Dis Pater, Pluto, whatever you may call this fool.
He will not get his hands on it. No one will.
For his name is…
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"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Auber: Fun sheet and the Lenny FC definitely fits. His NP is interesting where it empowers the people to fight for their ideals. How strong are the physical buffs, like could it allow ordinary humans to fight on par with low-tier Servants? I'm sort of surprised by the twist at the end, where it looks like it'll be the setup for a hidden sheet (maybe Faker/Pretender) but just gets summarized briefly instead. Then again you did something similar with your Assassin Munch, so maybe there just wasn't enough material for a second fully-fledged sheet?
No, the ordinary could not fight with Low-tier Servants, it is just an unlock of what their body could do in that moment. Think of that one Revolutionary Army Leader of the East Blue from One Piece that can rally the townsfolk to repel pirates. Revolutions were something along those lines after all, sheer human will, nothing magical and stuff.
The reveal was just inspired by the depicted scene. So I looked up some fairies in that region and that particular fairy just fitted in few points. I did not wish to derail the sheet further and went with a small unexpected twist. I could have made some uninspired skills, but that would draw the attention from the fun to just some little force of nature.
I do Pretenders in a similar way, yes. I want both parts of the Pretender to have the same skills, opposite to regular Fakers who have other skills instead. So I only need to write a sort of short story to explain why those skills are theirs too and how they are connected.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Decided to swap out Guthrum's FC again since I found another one (Zenon from Black Clover) I felt more fitting. Really sits the vibe of "opulence yet emptiness" that I had in mind.
I'm going to follow DelRey's example and repost the Hayreddin Barbarossa sheet I made for Secret Santa over to this thread as well! It was made for Pool 5 Prompt 1, provided by Kamera!
Originally Posted by Pool 5
Class: Rider
Appearance
True Name: Hayreddin Barbarossa
Alignment: True Neutral
Source: Historical fact
Place of Origin: Lesbos, then belonging to the Ottoman Empire
Parameters
Height: 193 centimetres
Weight: 90 kilograms
Likes: The sea, contradictions, beautiful women
Dislikes: People who can't handle a situation unexpectedly escalating
Talent: Sea legs, pottery
Natural Enemy: Andrea Doria, Charles V Habsburg
Attribute: Human
Armament: Scimitar, homing missiles
Catalyst: His mausoleum, together with either fragments of a flag he flew (if it still exists) or a ship flying a recreation of his flag (flashier alternative but more available to modern Masters)
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Interactions
Notes
Interesting sheet, though that third skill of his sure is a mouthful.Hayreddin Barbarossa
Just a quick question, when he's firing off missiles with his sword, does the missilie launch from the sword itself or does he just motion with it and then the missile materializes afterwards?
Thanks! The missiles are not from a built-in missile launcher, the scimitar looks ordinary at first glance; but the missiles always materialise right next to the scimitar and then from there proceed to pursue the enemy; he can't have them materialise, say, directly 30 metres away from him and right next to an enemy or anything.