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    Hiyo folks, Wyvern here!

    Today we have something of a special debut. My co-author decided he wanted to try and make a servant of his own with me. We tinkered together with some concepts and came with something that was originally supposed to be a profile for one of our OCs but turned into something with a life of its own. I hope you all enjoy it and let us know what we did right and what we need to correct for the future.

    As always, thanks for your time and good reading.

    Obizuth
    Profile
    Class
    Other Classes
    Alignment
    Avenger
    Caster, Assassin, Berserker, Ruler
    Chaotic Evil
    Height / Weight
    Region
    Source
    4’ 11”/ 98 lbs
    France
    Testament of Solomon
    Likes

    “Dark magical artifacts, forbidden knowledge, champagne, and pastries. Her special one.”

    Dislikes

    “People that call her short, infidelity, ungrateful children, and parents that hurt their children. The one who used to be her special one.”

    Parameters
    STR
    E+
    AGI
    B
    END
    D
    MA
    B
    LUK
    A+
    NP
    B
    Attribute
    Traits
    Sky
    Humanoid, Servant, Female, Feminine-looking
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    Background

    One of the 72 Demon Gods.

    Obizuth.

    No. That is incorrect.

    The Demon known as Obizuth was never counted amongst Solomon’s 72 attendants. Nor has it ever been seen amongst those entities. Strangely, however, this servant manifests abilities known to be within the purview of a Demon Pillar and possesses a strange and horrific authority.

    It could be said that she is a “Daughter of Lillith”, or perhaps something like that as she is most certainly a “demon of the night winds”. Obizuth herself confesses that much of her own knowledge and memories are sealed away. Instead, one could consider her to be the foundation upon which the 72 Demon Pillars were created. Or perhaps their prototype.

    The demon Obizuth is marked in legend as a creature which was defeated by Solomon, not created by him, with the Testament of Solomon claiming that “demons were fashioned from her flesh”. Instead, one can trace her roots back to ancient Mesopotamia, where she shares many traits with the bird footed woman, Lilith. While her exact descent is unclear, the Obizuth that Chaldea has met with claims to be “the Child of the Lord of Flies and Lillith”, though it’s worth noting that both Holmes and da Vinci suspect that this is something of a misdirection.

    Somewhat thankfully, she promises to “greedily and enviously protect those cute little children”. She does this by devouring anyone who would harm such children, even at the cost of breaking her own jaws.

    Perhaps she sees Chaldea as a way to finally have children of her own?

    Personality

    “Ah, Master, I see you there… don’t worry, there’s less fear and hate in your eyes than in Solomon’s. And, heh, I wouldn’t mind if you strung me up by my hair. Whether that’s in full view of the others or not is up to you, I’d be more than pleased either way.”

    A rather charming servant and one that is unashamed of her past, Obizuth is surprisingly easy to get along with. Unlike most Avengers, she shows no hostility except to a certain being, whom she would irrationally try to devour.

    That is not to say she is not “evil”, as she most certainly is. It is her nature to “devour children” and it could be said to be part of her fundamental existence to do so. If her master allows her to do so, then it is likely that Obizuth would more than happily pledge their very soul to such a being, eagerly doing anything they command.

    Yet, conversely, should their master be resolute and forbid such things… she will come to respect them. By keeping her in hand, a master would find her personality slowly shedding many of its malicious aspects and you would also find her more than willing to defend those she previously wanted to prey on.

    Though that is not to say that the desire to “devour” is gone. But, rather, she will find other ways to do such things. From the childish, such as devouring huge amounts of sweets, to the surprisingly high minded - such as “devouring their time” by using her immense magical knowledge to educate children.

    It is rare, but she does sometimes fall into a deep melancholy and can not be roused from such a state by any who could not be said to be her “special one”. In such a state she might be willing to share memories of the nearly endless torture she endured at the hands of Solomon, Arlaph, and Sissonimius, having spent as many as four thousand years being tormented by one champion of humanity or another.

    Most dangerously, her Master might dream of such a time and be exposed to those years of torment themselves, being tortured at her side as a heretic. Obizuth is quite willing to protect those she serves, though, and so such an experience would require the Master being willing to share her burdens and choosing that path.

    Class Skills

    Avenger D(+)

    Her hatred for things in general is weak, but should she encounter the one she hates in particular the power of this skill would be comparable to an EX ranked Madness Enhancement. Should it merely be one that she sees as comparable to them, then it would scale up compared to how similar they are.


    Oblivion Correction: B

    As one suited for the Assassin class, Obizuth delights in using every advantage in a fight to slay her opponent. A skill of the Avenger Class, Obizuth never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened.


    Self Replenishment C

    Sealed and mutilated as she is, Obizuth’s ability to surge her magical power is limited. Should certain conditions be met, this skill might transform into something far more dangerous.


    Sealed Evil B

    Still bound by ancient chains and constant torture, Obizuth’s powers are a shadow of what they could be. Should the seals be opened, she will gain more and more of her ancient abilities and her powers will grow too.

    Personal Skills

    Heir of the Dark Mother A+

    Ozibuth is a semi-divine being, descended from the union of Lillith and Beelzebub as she is. In particular, she is a lesser demon of Envy, who could be said to have the Authority of “the death of children”. Not only does this allow her to do incredible damage against beings who could be said to be “children”, bypassing any defenses that might protect them, but it has also given her a natural aptitude for dark magic. Whether it was her time as a plaything of Solomon, her torments by Gilgamesh, or her flaying by the Christian Saint Sissinious, she has been exposed to the darkest magics created by both Humans and Demons, granting her access to those dark powers regardless of her class.

    In combat, this usually manifests as curses, illusions, and spells that harm her foes while augmenting herself.


    Mystic Eyes of Evil Command C+

    Possessing mystic eyes that were plucked out in life by Solomon and used to fashion part of his famed Seal, she has authority to command any “evil” beings which are lesser than herself. In particular, snakes and fish are obedient to her and will call her sister. Her reduced state makes it so only those Servants of the Chaotic Evil alignment are under her sway. While those of Neutral Evil are affected only 75% of the time. And Lawful Evil 50% when exposed to her gaze.


    Tainted Love C

    As a “Daughter of Lilith” Obizuth has a fraction of her mother’s abilities and so may charm any “male” with great ease. As both she and Lillith are beings vaguely associated with vampiric practices, this servant is also capable of draining life energy from her enemies and augmenting herself. Interestingly enough, this skill also makes Obizuth susceptible to Noble Phantasms and abilities which target men and women.

    This is likely due to the fact that she is a shapeshifter, though the forms she may take are somewhat limited.

    Noble Phantasm
    Abyzou: Eight Fold Blessings of the Left Handed Path
    C-Rank / Summoning

    As a demoness herself, Obizuth is well versed in demonic lore and dark magic. It could be said that, if she was a mortal, she would be “the most powerful demonologist to live”. As a servant, this is merely an ability which lets her summon and command lesser beings of “evil”, as the requirements to actually use much of her dark knowledge is beyond her Spiritron Body.

    However, even against beings which are not evil, the sheer amount of dark magic will curse them ten thousand times and leave them, at best, weak and vulnerable while augmenting Obizuth and her allies equivalently for every curse that takes.

    Ars Lilith: Sins of the Father and Curses of the Mother
    B-Rank / Anti-Human

    As befits a “Daughter of Lillith”, she possesses an inferior version of her “mother’s” ability to curse the descendants of Adam and Eve. Any being which could be considered to have a “gender” or “sex” is either inflicted with “Sins” or “Curses”. This amounts to the sum total of evil committed by or against their entire bloodline.

    Like her “mother” this ability is conceptual and would bypass most defenses, unlike Lilith’s ability, this attack does not count all future generations as well.

    Moreover, a sufficiently righteous person might simply feel nothing at all from this attack as their purity outweighs the evil they would be subjected to.

    Obizuth: Envious Wind that Devours All in the Night
    B-Rank / Anti-Unit

    The invocation of her nature as a murderer of children, this ability allows her to become “as a dark wind”, gaining intangibility but retaining her ability to inflict horrific injuries. She will use the ability to most commonly possess a target and then either devour them alive from the inside out or use their likely physically superior bodies to attack their allies.

    Against “children”, this ability will kill them instantly, their bodies being crushed or shredded or simply swallowed whole in a moment as the evil spirit snatches them up and carries them off.

    Relationships

    Jack the Ripper:

    “Yes, I am your mother. Feel free to bare your fangs and sink your daggers into me whenever you feel the need, I will gladly bare my fangs right back. I am happy to embrace you always.”


    Carmilla:

    “Dear child, should we go visit your other selves? I know it’s disconcerting, but you are family. And family is the most important thing of all.”


    Medb:

    “How ungrateful a woman you are. So many lovers, such a beautiful child, even a kingdom of your own… yet you cast it all away for your desires. And they call me a demon.”

    Angra Mainyu:

    “Oh, sweet child, were you not so wicked I would embrace you. Still, your sins are the sins of all mankind. In a way, you are a hero just like our Master.”

    Gilgamesh (Youth):

    “You are yet a child. Hmm. Innocent, even if you have the seed of your later self. Still… it would be wrong to judge you. Here, take a sweet biscuit. And you’re welcome to a hug too.”

    Gilgamesh:

    “Are you going to hit me again, oh mighty king? Are you going to defile me, pillage my home and mock the gods? If so, I don’t mind. I won’t fight back. I never did.”

    Gilgamesh (Caster):

    “Your arrogance truly does know no bounds. It’s the divinity in you. A pure human, no matter how ugly, could be so foolish as this.”

    Enkidu:

    “In many ways you are still a child. So I shall not fault you for falling in with the wrong crowd, especially since you seemed to tame him for a time. Here, let me pinch your cheek.”

    Ereshkigal:

    “I sent many to you, before their time. Thank you for tending to them and thank you for honoring all of the fallen, even those who are forgotten.”

    Ishtar:

    You… you wasted so much with your pointless greed. Those things which are precious you forsook. Greed is your domain, for even your lusts were fleeting and greedy.

    Huwawa:

    “The gods truly were a mistake if you are the fruit of their works. It was my failing that I did not strangle you in your crib. Come, child, I shall embrace every last one of your souls. No matter if your fists crush me, your voices scream curses at me, or your anger burns me. I shall embrace you, daughter.”

    Tiamat:

    “YOU!”

    Karna:

    “My oh my. I remember when you were just a child, such a naughty lad who loved sneaking an extra treat when he could! It’s a good thing I failed to eat you up! Here, let me give you a hug and a cookie.”

    Arjuna:

    “Such a good boy. I’m glad you’ve found Chaldea and the peace that comes with it. I tried to devour you and I’m glad I didn’t succeed, let me pat your head and give you a honey cake.”

    Goetia:

    “Are you… are you really mine? Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please!”

    Solomon:

    “I remember your hands, oh great king. I remember your knives and your lips and your eyes. Sheba was never enough for you and you, who should have served the Almighty, committed so, so many sins. Did you hear your babe cry in the Bronze Bull? I did. I would have at least granted it a quick death.”




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    Source: Wallhere

    Class: Shielder
    Other Classes: Caster
    True Name: Gertrude Jekyll
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Place of Origin: England (19th Century)

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: D
    MGI: D
    LCK: C
    NP: C

    Height: 181cm
    Weight: 140lbs
    Likes: Preservation of flowers, beautiful gardens
    Dislikes: Natural destruction
    Talent: Creating beautiful gardens
    Natural Enemy: Van Gogh
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
    Armament: her Noble Phantasms
    Catalyst: A picture of one of the gardens she designed

    Class Skills:

    Territory Defense C+: A class skill of the shielder class. This allows her to spread a field of damage reduction to allies or an allied camp, though she isn't affected. As she worked to preserve many different species of plants, this is ranked up if she is within an area that has many plants.

    Magic Resistance E: She never encountered magic in life. Her class container provides her this bare minimum rank of magic resistance, allowing her to nullify the weakest of spells.

    Personal Skills:

    Impressionistic Gardens A: The sublimation of her style of gardening, which utilized planting like a brushstroke. She can "paint" utilizing either a brush or her fingers to paint her flowers into existence, growing them along the brushstrokes with the colors she imagines for them. Naturally, this is more effective the better quality the soil surrounding her is and the more vivid her imagination is, although she can even grow them on surfaces with no soil at all, the sublimation of her belief that plants should be displayed to their best effect even when cut for the house. She will use this to casually create beautiful gardens all the time.

    Colors of Ice and Fire B: The sublimation of her style of utilizing "Warm" and "Cold" colors. The flowers that she creates and utilizes, depending on the color, can store either heat or chill, allowing her to unleash the stored temperature in a wave of fire or a burst of ice. She loves using this to create the proper surroundings.

    Conservation of Plants C: The sublimation of her contributing a vast array of plants for the purpose of preserving them. This allows her to "withdraw" plants around her, storing them and being able to release them at her will. However, plants that are noble phantasms above D rank cannot be withdrawn by her. She will usually prefer not to use this.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Wall of Flowers, Evergrowing
    A Flower For Every Season


    Type: Barrier
    Rank: C
    Range: 60 meters
    Max Targets: N/A

    The sublimation of her most famous gardening creation, the Hardy Flower Border, a 200 foot long, 14 foot deep area backed by an 11-foot stone wall. This passively manifests into her shield, a 2.7 foot tall shield covered with vines, flowers, and berries which all constantly and rapidly change colors and types. This shield can also store temperature like her other flowers. When invoked, she slams it into the ground, recreating the wall. However, in this state, the wall is covered with the vines and flowers, not just with them surrounding it. It constantly regrows itself when harmed, with only noble phantasms at or above B rank burning through it. It also is capable of growing farther. Lastly, it can also store temperature, like the rest of her flowers, but can unite it into one huge blast.

    Lore: Gertrude Jekyll was a British horticulturist who created more then 400 gardens. She was known for her painterly approach to the gardens she created, as well as their radiant color and almost brushstroke-like appearance. She was also one of the first horticulturists to take into account color, texture, and experience. She also heavily inspired the idea of "warm" and "cool" colors in modern gardens. She wrote 15 books. Later in her life, she contributed a large amount of plants to assorted places for them to be preserved.

    Personality: A kind, grandmotherly, and supportive figure. She always carries around a huge teapot made of red and blue flowers, which she keeps filled to the brim, chilling and heating as desired, along with assorted fruits and cookies. If she were to ever meet a servant who was a plant, she would immediately become extremely surprised, and ask to obtain a seed of it for posterity. Her wish for the grail is to be able to keep copies of every plant that ever grew safe, so that if anything ever went wrong, she would be able to restore that species

    Relationships:

    Jekyll and Hyde: "...why does it seem like I know you? Anyway, dearie, would you like a glass of milk and a cookie?"

    Jack the Ripper: "Aren't you a sweetie, dearie. Here, would you like a plum? Wait, you're who?"

    Barghest: "I admire your courage. Say, would you like to have a cup of tea with me, dearie?"

    Morgan: "Running the kingdom by yourself for all this time? My, you must be exhausted. Here, have a cup of tea, kick up your feet, give yourself a chance to relax, dearie."

    Europa: "My goodness, a pleasure to meet a fellow member of the 'Grandmother's Club', dearie. Would you like a cup of tea?"

    CREATER'S NOTES: WOW! That was a pretty impressive debut servant for your coauthor, Wyvern. It's quite nice!

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    Obizuth-Holy shit, you call that a debut servant, Wyvern's co author? That's something that could win a monthly contest!
    Gertrude Jekyll- Now that's a interesting and great way to interpret a horticulturist especially with the skill.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TQG Imaginatorious View Post
    Gertrude Jekyll- Now that's a interesting and great way to interpret a horticulturist especially with the skill.
    Hi, thanks so much for the feedback!

    And I adore that Obizuth, it's incredible

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    indeed. an impressive first sheet. good job
    Behold! The works of a maniac!
    Servants!

    And my other contribution to this community!
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    Call me Formatting-sensei.

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    Source: Bohdana Hryzhiuk on ArtStation

    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: N/A
    True Name: Luella Miller
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Place of Origin: America (20th Century)

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: E
    AGI: D
    MGI: A+
    LCK: C
    NP: A

    Height: 171cm
    Weight: 80 lbs
    Likes: People taking care of her
    Dislikes: The death of her caretakers
    Talent: Convincing people to take care of her, leeching their life
    Natural Enemy: Baobhan Sidh
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Fae, Female, Humanoid, Demonic, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: No weapons
    Catalyst: A copy of the eponymous short story

    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment E: She is nigh-incapable of concealing her presence, unfitting for a member of the Assassin class. In life, she never attempted to pretend she wasn't there or hide herself, so this has a miniscule rank.

    Personal Skills:

    Glamour A: A passive glamour spell surrounds her, causing her to appear to be the most beautiful person anyone has ever seen. This also makes anyone who is affected by the glamour far more susceptible to her first Noble Phantasm. This is a constant thing she has had for a very long time, though she never created it.

    Powerless Shell A+: She gives off no impression of actually being a servant, appearing to be merely an extremely frail and ill girl who needs your help. No matter what she does, the impression is maintained.

    Information Erasure B-: In battles that she's in, her true name, appearance, characteristics, and abilities will be forgotten after she leaves, making her return to seeming like a frail person. At her rank, this maintains even if her events happen in broad daylight. However, if there is a camera or other video evidence, that will not be altered. The sublimation of her seemingly nonexistent past.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Obsessive Devotion
    Working to Death

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 10 meters
    Max Targets: 1

    The sublimation of her causing people around her to work themselves to death. A special effect spreading in a field around her. If no one does anything to help her, her mana will rapidly drain. However, if anyone does anything for her, even something as simple as picking up something she dropped or opening a door for her, she will immediately fully revitalize. In addition, the person who did something for her will have a spell placed upon them, constantly leeching their mana away to give to her while forcing tem to do more things for her. If they die while under this curse, their soul will become stored in her saint graph.

    Specters in the Moonlight
    Return, One Last Time, To Aid My Rest


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B~A
    Range: 100 meters
    Max Targets: 1

    The sublimation of the spirits returning to guide her to death at the end of her life. This noble phantasm is automatically activated upon her death. The spirits stored within her saint graph, those of the people who died due to her first noble phantasm, are released and perform one more deed for her. This can restore her for a time, but the most used one is for them to attack those beings that she believes are responsible for killing her. Notably, there are always six spirits stored in this saint graph, causing it to always at least have the rank of B. It can achieve the rank of A.

    Lore: Luella Miller was known as the fictional villainess of the eponymous short story. A young woman who entered a town as a schoolteacher, but it soon turned out that she wasn't able to do anything by herself, instead pushing others to do it all for her. She appeafed to waste away whenever anyone didn't help her, but anyone who helped her worked themselves to death. However, the truth is... Luella Miller was a modern and young Faerie, bearing the shell of an "Ideal noblewoman". However, in her, this exaggerated, causing the events in that town. Once she realized what she was doing, she tried to stop, but she wasted away. Then, more people aided her, and died. She finally died after a month without anyone who wasn't resistant aiding her. The spirits of those who died due to overwork when taking care of her returned at the end of her life to help guide her to the afterlife.

    Personality: She is taciturn, rarely willing to share anything to anyone, as she has been summoned from the end of her life, after she realized what she did. She will try anything to seal her first noble phantasm, so she doesn't drain people, and doesn't have to do that. That is also her wish. She admires other fae, especially those who don't need to feed off of people.

    Relationships:

    Baobhan Sith: "Why are you complimenting me for... the death of my caretakers? I don't want it to happen..."

    Anastasia: "Oh.... so there were fae even after me.... I guess I really was that forgettable..."

    Barghest: "So brave...and strong.....I hope... you find your happiness..."

    Habetrot: "....no....I do not wish to be paired...."

    Melusine: "...Impressive....a dragon...."

    Yu Mei-Ren: "...you were...still around....even with so low mystery....that's impressive..."

    Oberon: "...you're stuck....aren't you.....you have to.....that's why you lie....poor thing."
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    This time around… I WILL BE THE ONE TO TAKE HENRY’S HEAD! HENRY! HENRY!!!!!!

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    True name: Anne Boleyn


    Class: Avenger

    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    H/W: 170cm/65kg

    Armament: Executioner’s axe

    Wish: To destroy the kingdom of Britain

    Natural Enemy: King Henry VIII, all servants originating from the island of Britain

    STR: B+
    END: B+
    AGI: A
    MNA: A++
    LCK: E
    NP: B+

    Lore:
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    Avenger’s true name is that of Anne Boleyn, the Second wife of Tyrannical King Henry VIII, and Queen Consort of England.

    Born to the powerful and influential Boleyn family, she was versed in Boleyn’s magecraft which heavily focused on summoning Familiar spirits, chief among them was the Demonic three headed bull, an ancient phantasmal species though to be distantly related to demon boars, hence the Boleyn Coat of arms, this has of course, created rumors of witchcraft within the family.

    The magical prowess of her family aside, she wished to use King Henry to spread the reformation to Britain, to do this she manipulated him into divorcing his first wife, by rejecting the catholic church and instituting the Anglican church in England.

    With Henry’s rule uncontested, anyone who opposed his position as the supreme head of the English church would be executed, in what can only be described as a mass homicide, more than 57 thousand people were executed for dissenting against Henry, and in the background Anne was watching and reveling in her great accomplishment.

    Yet privately, she detested henry as a simple brute that she used as a political tool to spread the reformation to England, after getting pregnant four times, and having failed to give him a male heir, Henry ordered that she be executed for alleged incest and adultery. It is said that she devoutly prayed in her cell and in her last moments, however this was merely a cover-up of what truly happened.

    In her cell she cursed Henry day and night… She swore that she would have his head one day, her mind reached the peak of insanity as she began writing symbols on cell walls, cursing her own impending death, but also the Catholic Church, the protestant church which she once supported, and the entire kingdom of England as well as the island of Britain and its entire people.

    And on the day of her execution, she walked up to the headsman’s chopping block and laid down her head, with an ulterior motive in her mind.

    Driven by anger, moments before the axe reached her neck, she released the full power of the Boleyn magical crest, and forcefully fused her own soul with the Spiritual Core of the Demon bull, releasing a light that blinded the crowd that had gathered as well as the executioner.

    Before the axe could even reach her neck she grabbed it and wildly swung it at the executioner, beheading him in one fell swoop, as the smoke cleared the image was no longer that of the soon to be Executed queen but that of a Demon queen that grew horns and a tail, lightning and flame coming out of her body. Fueled by pure malice, she rampaged through London, massacring anyone who stood in her way, making sure to take the head of anyone she recognized, friend or foe.

    In her rampage she managed to reach the Windsor Palace, planning to kill King Henry and declare herself as the Demon Queen of England, however just before she could land a blow on the King, the mages of the clock tower managed to land a blow on her just in time, King Henry watched in shock as her body, strained from the pain of fusing with a phantasmal species spirit origin and her rampage through London, started to disintegrate. The incident was covered up and anyone who survived her rampage was threatened by the mages association to never speak of the incident again, even King Henry had to agree to this arrangement, he ordered the axe destroyed and records be changed that she was beheaded with a sword instead. As she was disintegrating, she was cursed the King one last time, before perishing.


    Class Skills:
    Spoiler:
    Avenger: A
    The class skill of the avenger class, representing the state of an Avenger that gathers the people’s grudges onto oneself. The rate of mana generation becomes higher when receiving damage.
    She will not rest until she has become the Demon queen of England and anyone who stands in her way will suffer a terrible fate.

    Oblivion Correction: A
    The skill representing the inability of Avengers to forget those who wronged them. Her strength will increase exponentially when attacking servants that have lapses in their memory.
    She will never forget how her king betrayed her and set her to die, she will continue cursing him and his kingdom until her dying moment, indeed, until the concept of England as a nation exists, she will curse it, unless she is able to usurp it.

    Self-Replenishment: B

    A skill representing the Avengers class endless hatred, their bodies will flow with mana.
    Until she either Destroy Britain, or Becomes the Demon Queen of England, her body will flow with endless magical energy.


    Personal Skills:
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    Phantasmal Species modification (Demon Bull): A+
    A skill representing union of a human with a Phantasmal Species less than that of a dragon, in her case, it is the demon bull that was once the familiar of the Boleyn family, a Phantasmal mana reactor core has formed, giving her access to the bottomless magic energy reserves of a Phantasmal species, however because the quality is less than that of a dragon, she cannot mobilize independently.

    Charisma of the King’s consort: A+
    Representing the ability of a servant to charm and captivate those around them, Avenger’s beauty is well known for captivating even the King of England, due to Avenger’s nature as queen consort, it is especially effective against male targets.

    Mana Burst (Black Lightning): A-
    The natural lightning magecraft originating from the demon bull that is fused with the spirit origin of avenger, the mana of the bull demon amplifies feelings of anger and resentment, and causes the body to surge with Black Lightning, the bolts of lightning are capable of bypassing magical defenses and strike the target directly.

    Strategy (Scheming): A
    Her personal skill that represents her ability for political scheming, different from charisma, she can plot the downfall of any opponent perfectly through intrigue.


    Noble Phantasms:
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    The executioner’s axe that beheads all enemies of England.
    Execution Lightning
    (B+) (Anti-Army/Anti-Unit)

    "Behold my royal authority... The queen hereby sentences you to death!"

    The very axe that beheaded her, or was supposed to-
    In reality, for 36 years, the axe beheaded more than 57 000. People, it bathed in the blood of those who committed heresy against the newly formed Anglican Church, and all those who still had their loyalty to the Catholic Church in Rome.

    It has become a conceptual weapon that deals immense damage against those who were members of the Catholic Church, and especially against saints canonized by the Catholic Church.
    However in Anne’s hands, it becomes a terrible tool of vengeance against all of England, And it gains a new attribute, dealing quadruple damage against servants who originate from the island of Britain and Ireland, and dealing double damage against anyone Avenger considers to be an “Enemy” to her vengeance.

    When charged with mana, the Axe will glow bright purple and blue, giving of sparks of lightning in the surrounding air, when Avenger jams it with full force into the ground, the ground will explode, and a blast of lightning that tears up the ground will charge forward, once released, the blast hones in on the one target she designated as her enemy, if either multiple, or no target is chosen, the blast will instead cover a wide area, striking multiple targets.

    Paradoxically, she wants to destroy England and at the same time wants to become the new Queen of England, whenever she uses this noble phantasm, her own spiritual core will receive half the damage her target receives, if overused, it can even destroy her own spiritual core in the process.

    A terrible weapon that represents the absolute political power of the Consort of the King, one able to order the execution at her will, a fitting weapon for one such as Anne Boleyn

    The queen is dead, long live the queen!
    Queen's Demonic Execution
    (A) (Anti-Unit [self])

    “I shall show you the despair i felt that day, the cold of the cell, the strike of the executioners axe marks the end of your life!“

    The noble phantasm that represents Anne’s last days as a human, before she fused with her own familiar.

    Despite the forged reports that she prayed to the lord each day, the reality is that her resentment of King Henry drove her to the depths of insanity, indeed at any point, she could have used her familiars to escape the cell, but she plotted that her revenge would be at the day of her execution.

    By using her own weapon to slit her own throat, Avenger is capable of coming to the same mindset she had that day, the bottomless rage that welled up inside her as the headsman’s axe is about to strike her neck

    Upon doing so, her axe becomes coated in her own royal blood, and flows with even more magical energy than before, her stats all become raised by +1 and her personality changes to that of the “Demon Queen of England” In this state she is capable of dealing immense damage against any servant that is a member of royalty, if they are a king, or a queen, the axe will always strike true, and instantly destroy the spiritual core of whoever it strikes, unless the target has some sort of protection.

    In this state, she is incapable of distinguishing friend from foe, she will merely rampage killing anything in her sight, for it is the right of the demon queen.


    Lore 2:
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    Ordinarily, she should not even qualify for the avenger class, but the mages association has kept the true circumstances of her death a secret, the truth of her own death is that she went on a rampage after fusing with the demon bull.

    After her death the Boleyn family name was tarnished, and the mages association forbade any practice of magecraft by their members. No one knows exactly how she managed to fuse with her own familiar, not that it matters to the mages association, who wanted to prevent further incidents like this from happening.

    Anne herself had never considered using the magecraft she was taught, as she did not want to be accused of witchcraft and suffer the more painful death of being burnt on the stake as a witch.

    She knew that if she used her magecraft, the mage’s association would hunt her down, even so, she did it on the day of her execution, becoming the very incarnation of vengeance against King Henry.

    To kill King Henry, usurp his throne, restore her status as queen, then massacre all of Britain to make it a breeding ground for demons and familiars, a goal similar to a certain evil king from the Arthurian period, yet she failed at the first step.


    Lore 3 (personality):
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    The Demon Queen of England, her personality is mostly unchanged from her original self, capable of both manipulation and scheming, yet remaining calm and courteous as befits a royal, unusual for the avenger class

    In the middle of battle however, her personality changes drastically, doing justice to her class, she will rampage and use her axe to behead her enemies, she charges in without thinking of consequences, always going for the throat of her enemies, and if their enemies do not have a throat, she will instead destroy their bodies with lightning. Despite not having any martial prowess in her life, she is capable of going toe to toe with the three knights classes, due to her fusion with her own familiar.

    Her relationship with her master boils down to “If she can use them to get her vengeance, she will” her master is important to her in so far as she cannot achieve her goal without them, to this extent, she will fulfill their every wish as long as they supply her with magical energy to remain in this world, if her master has a similar personality to her however, she will treat them with unusual respect.

    If she were ever to meet King Henry VIII, she would likely be unable to bear it, and would attack him immediately.

    Interactions:
    King Henry VIII: HENRY!!!!! THIS TIME I WILL BE THE ONE TO ORDER YOUR EXECUTION.

    Artoria Pendragon (all variants): To think that the legendary King of England would be a girl, fuhu, fuhuhu… I cannot stand it, i must behead her as well, all of England must be beheaded, you are no exception, girl.

    Oberon-Vortigern: That good looking boy is Oberon… no? Vortigern? The insidious plan to turn Britain into a kingdom for fairies makes my blood boil with excitement!!!


    Lines:
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    Summon: Servant, Avenger, Anne Boleyn, Demon Queen of England! I ask that you take good care of me, master…

    Attack Selected 1: Ooooh?

    Attack Selected 2: Ordering me around like this!?

    Attack Selected 3: Of course, allow me to take their head.

    Attack 1: Die.

    Attack 2: Perish.

    Attack 3: You will pay for your impudence!

    Attack 4: Hyah!

    Attack 5: Be beheaded

    Extra Attack 1: The queen orders you to die!

    Extra Attack 2: The queen’s orders are absolute, NOW DIE!

    Noble Phantasm selected 1: I order you all to die, DIE! DIE! DIE!

    Noble Phantasm selected 2: Henry… HENRRRYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!

    Noble Phantasm selected 3: The headsman’s axe calls for your final words.

    Noble Phantasm 1: Behold my royal authority... The queen hereby sentences you to death! EXECUTION LIGHTNING!

    Noble Phantasm 2: The Queen’s orders are absolute, and I shall be the new Queen of England, therefore I order your execution! EXECUTION LIGHTNING!

    Noble Phantasm 3: There is nothing sweeter than the taste of power, bow down to your new queen, and accept your death! EXECUTION LIGHTNIN!

    Defeat 1: Henry… CURSE YOU AND YOUR PRECIOUS ENGLAND.

    Defeat 2: My vengeance is absolute. I will kill you all one day.


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    I was reading her page on wikipedia, then i saw that the Boleyn coat of arms has a Bull's head, creativity goes brr and this sheet is what came from it, nasuified for sufficient wanking.
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    Class: Archer (Additionally qualifies for Rider, Caster, Berserker)

    True Name: Vampire Killer

    Aliases: Johnathan Harker, Abraham van Helsing, Quincey Morris, John Seward, Arthur Holmwood

    Alignment: Lawful Good

    Parameters:

    Strength: D
    Endurance: D
    Agility: C
    Magic: D
    Luck: C
    Noble Phantasm: D

    Skills
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    Magic Resistance: E
    A skill granting protection from magical effects. At this rank it cannot cancel spells, but magic damage is reduced somewhat. To make up for naturally poor resistance, preparations can be made to temporarily raise its effectiveness. This is, however, contingent upon Archer already having information on the sorcery he will be facing.

    Independent Action: B
    The ability to remain independent even without a Master's Magical Energy. At this rank, Archer can persist for two days on his own by conserving mana and avoiding battle. This rank is due to Archer's naturally minimal energy consumption as a modern Servant whose soul is not overly weighed down by history. One might make a comparison to a low-power vehicle, but Archer insists he is just fuel efficient.

    Personal Skills

    Medicine (Occult): B++
    Mastery of medical techniques of the past, present, and future. At this rank, one may call themselves a Doctor. While its rank is below that of an expert surgeon, Archer's broad field of expertise incorporates techniques and treatments that border on the magical, and their integration is the proud achievement of a truly open mind. Unlike the normal Medicine skill which struggles against supernatural affliction, Archer's treatments are able to extend even to poisons on the level of hydra venom or cursed blood. Truly it is a near perfect fusion of modern medical theory and ancient healing rituals.

    Survival Strategy: C
    The ability to plan ahead for the sake of defeating an overpowering foe. A composite skill of Subversion, Strategy, and Hypothetical Reasoning that enables one to slowly build up information and knowledge until they are perfectly able to take advantage of the target's weak points. With enough preparation, it is even possible to seal an opponent's Noble Phantasm for a short time. Many of Archer's achievements, while heroic in their own right, have a tinge of the ordinary about them, as if saying anyone can slay a monster if he puts his mind to it... so long as there is someone sensible beside him to pull on his ears when he inevitably overreaches.

    Renaissance Man: B
    A skill representing access to many professional skills as well as fields of study, including science, law, religion, maths, tactics, and linguistics. Rather than achieving this level of mastery through a trick of some kind, Archer merely holds all this accumulated understanding as the minimum necessary to act as he does. It would be no exaggeration to say that, if he does not possess the answer to a question, he will assuredly know how and where to find it. In particular he enjoys psychiatry, legal paperwork, and shooting flying rodents for sport.

    Magecraft: D+
    Knowledge of modern thaumaturgy. At this level, Archer is clearly a learned amateur and not a practiced magus. Nevertheless, by supplementing his lack of experience with knowledge and research, it is possible to manifest effective spells - in particular sacraments against the unholy.


    Noble Phantasm
    Quintuplex Virtus: We Bleed for Thee
    Rank: D
    Type: Anti-Unit (self)

    Quintuplex Virtus is a passive Noble Phantasm that grants Archer the vitality of five men. Hit points, mana capacity, and other such variables are all increased to 500% of normal. Additionally, anti-unit abilities are reduced to one fifth of their usual effectiveness. Even his willpower is quintupled, or so Archer claims.

    Archer during life embodied in five parts the highest virtues of his age, and was possessed of selflessness beyond any single mortal man. There is much to be said of the ideals of chivalry, but in truth it was to all who wore it an armor riddled with holes, like a Holy Grail whose contents could only be drunk by the worthy, and thus stayed empty forever. Only after the waning of chivalry's glory days was it finally realized in full, not by hero knights but by ordinary men, bound in brotherhood woven around their pure love for a single maiden. Their blood came together, spilled with shared purpose, and with it so too did they bind their destinies together until their beloved could be freed from her curse. In that moment they shone as one, like a bright sun that could banish any horrible night, and none since have ever recaptured that virtuous gleam.

    While it is not a flashy Noble Phantasm by any means, Archer will say it does not need to be, for his true worth is shown in the quiet moments, not the loud ones.

    As a side effect, it appears Archer is easily enamored (in a purely chaste way) by virtuous women, and will manifest plus modifiers when acting in their service. The more tragic the situation, the better; "A man shines brightest when protecting the lady he loves!" he would shout without reservation. It is the price to pay for chivalry in this day and age.


    Background
    Johnathan Harker was a British solicitor and lawyer in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

    Arthur Holmwood was a British Lord in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

    John Seward was a British psychiatrist and asylum administrator in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

    Quincy Morris was a Texan cowboy in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

    Abraham Van Helsing was a Dutch professor, doctor, and polymath in the mid-1800s. Though only an ordinary person, he joined ranks with four other men, taking up arms against a certain Dead Apostle terrorizing London. All to save the souls of the woman he loved and her best friend.

    Though all different, and none fit to reach the Throne on their own, the souls of this band of brothers were forged together in blood. As virtue reached its peak within each of them, they achieved a level of synchronization and shared purpose that borders on the impossible. Wielding blades and guns and miracles crafted by the hands of man in order to fight the terrifying creatures of darkness, they ventured forth and became a reminder that the monster under one's bed can be felled by faith and fortitude.

    That, Archer says, is his only wish: for those who are cherished to sleep soundly at night.

    And, perhaps, a second chance for dear Lucy.

    He is rather cross about what Stoker did to their manuscript, though.


    Description
    The very model of a proper gentleman. In all aspects, Archer is kind, generous, devoted, insightful, brave, loyal, caring, adaptable, ferocious... the list of positive adjectives to describe him is altogether too long. While his unstable core should by all rights result in an temperamental personality, it seems the opposite has happened, resulting in the distillation of all that is just and true in a Victorian man.

    In short, Archer's a bit of a Mary Sue, and is so capable and perfect that it's almost annoying.

    Once you get past that superficial perfection, however, you may find a melodramatic man with a flair for the theatrical (perhaps a consequence of Bram Stoker's playwright-ish embellishments). Archer has a habit of going on tangents, and is easily overcome by the mildest of stimuli. If you were to do him a small favour he would get down on one knee and tearfully proclaim that you are a true friend and confidante now and forever. Easily moved by the slightest of gestures in others, and by his own emotions, Archer embodies the extremes of whatever mood he is in, though of course he would never allow himself to behave in a foul way.

    Archer's greatest flaw is a knightly sort of chauvinism that insists upon protecting the person he cares about even to the detriment of the situation. For example, telling a certain ally that she should stay away from the day's foul business for fear of seeing her come to harm, even though her aid was necessary and leaving her alone ended up backfiring in the end. When rational thought and feelings clash, all too often emotion wins the day and strays from logic. This trait ought to be properly wrangled out of him quickly, lest it become a problem in the battles to come.

    Otherwise, Archer is rather scholarly and cautious, and likes to sit and ruminate on the situation before ever lifting a finger, though on odd days he may become restless, manifest a gung-ho attitude, and start talking like a cowboy.

    He despises creatures of the night and monsters that prey on humanity, and will happily set aside his own goals in order to see such terrors eradicated.

    Archer's primary armaments are a Winchester rifle and a Kukri knife, alongside a bevy of miscellaneous tools. Due to not qualifying statistically for the Saber class, he was made an Archer instead. In truth that class is also a poor fit, but he is not the sort to complain about being judged a third-rate Heroic Spirit. He also possesses a whip enchanted with holy magic, though he claims it is for horses, not men.


    Interactions
    Vlad III: They can't get along. No, of course it's not because of the vampire thing, don't be silly.

    Karna: "I say, what are you doing with yourself, you poor fellow? Where is the righteous fury in your eyes? Why does your soul not burn for justice!? Come back in a hundred years, once you learn what it means to be a true man!"

    Mina Harker: "Honey, is that you!? Oh dear, this is quite awkward... ah!? Um, yes, of course I'll go. Right. My apologies..." <---Instant Defeat

    Sherlock Holmes: "I say, you've grown up well, lad! Still solving mysteries then, are we?" Archer's behaviour would become that of a proud uncle. It seems there was some interaction between them in the past.

    Billy the Kid: "...Master, this is bad. He's got his gun trained on us. In a shoot out, ain't no chance of me coming out on top." Archer's demeanor and accent would shift noticeably towards the West. He holds a healthy respect for certain folk heroes.

    Elizabeth Báthory: "What's with this sassy lost child?" Archer's instincts towards her are initially that of a grumpy old man. His further actions would depend on her predilections, and he may even take on a grandfatherly aspect. Nonetheless, they are inclined towards conflict with each other, whether it be lighthearted or deadly. A monster's scent is not easily disguised, after all.
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    Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.


    Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.

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    Avenger: Damn she is edgy. Thats a unique take on her for sure.

    Archer: neat, been a while you posted something here. this is a good sheet and the character is done well.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.


    Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.
    i haven't gone wild with a sheet since my avenger galileo, so yeah, i did go a bit overboard. Avengers are pretty fun to write. I'll take the note and be a bit more subtle the next time i write a servant.

    Having one of Henry's wives as avenger was such a obvious and cool concept tho, i don't see why i was the first to do it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    Anne Boleyn: The lore and concept is pretty cool and interesting, and I like how you make her a magus and the involvement of the Clock Tower in her lore. That said, the execution (no pun intended) is a bit all over the placeI think you took a few steps too far with the evil Avenger shenanigans, which don't really have much positive impact to her personality and motivation. Now that I think about it, I wonder if the Demon Familiar that her Boleyn family has could be integrated into my Demon God Pillar host project.


    Dracula Vampire Killer: Damn that's a pretty clever Phantom Fusion Servant. Pretty great and entertaining sheet overall. In particular, I really like the concept of somewhat regular dudes being able to overcome things such as a Dead Apostle. That said, while the sheet itself is perfectly well balanced, personally I think it lacks something that can highlight their conceptual strength. It doesn't need to be a ridiculously powerful Skill or NP, just an ability that can capture their what these four men represent.
    Thank ye, I couldn't really think of any zany conceptual stuff that would fit, so in the end I decided to just release it as-is. The component souls' experience from different walks of life is reflected in their myriad of flexible skills, sort of like Hundred-Face Hassan in reverse. Then again, isn't it fine for a third-rate Servant to lack a conceptual ability?

    As for the NP, it's halfway a justification of their fusion into one person via pure gentlemanly devotion to justice, and half a reference to how all five of the characters are written very similarly in the book; it's actually incredibly hard to tell Arthur and Johnathan apart without mentioning who they're married to or what their jobs are.

    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Avenger: Damn she is edgy. Thats a unique take on her for sure.

    Archer: neat, been a while you posted something here. this is a good sheet and the character is done well.
    Thank ye, I reread Dracula on a plane flight last week and got a burst of inspiration.

    Haven't posted here much for lack of good ideas; you guys have done all the cool historical figures already! A wikipedia reader like me can't keep up with the CaS meta anymore.

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    ey, if nothing holding you back to do your own take an any character you want. Especially if its from a legacy creator like you. You are still one of the big names in the creation scene, even if a new generation took over.
    I heard you are in the roleplay scene now, correct. Have you posted all your submitted sheets for them here already? And you can show off your old sheets for the new people here in the revision contest that starts in a few days.
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    Vampire Killer. Really cool sheet. I never would've gotten the idea to throw the entire Vampire hunter crew into one person. I'm kinda disappointed that Quincy doesn't take over more often, just out of nowhere. Because going from sophisticated English man to "I have never spoken to an American in my life"-Texan that is Quincy, would have been funny I think. I really like the NP they have too. I'd think it'd be easy to make it a more generic one maybe tied to hunting, or something something about being super effective against monsters, but this is really cool.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    ey, if nothing holding you back to do your own take an any character you want. Especially if its from a legacy creator like you. You are still one of the big names in the creation scene, even if a new generation took over.
    I heard you are in the roleplay scene now, correct. Have you posted all your submitted sheets for them here already? And you can show off your old sheets for the new people here in the revision contest that starts in a few days.
    Was I ever a big name? I'm flattered, but it feels like that's a title reserved for the folks like you, Daneel, and Sunny, who have blog posts full of Servants and provide feedback on other sheets regularly. I'm just a rando who occasionally drops by and leaves a sheet or two behind.

    I was considering the revision contest actually, just not sure what sheet to revise. The old Mina Harker sheet could use a touch-up, but it would hardly be anything close to a rewrite. I'm generally happy with how my previous eligible sheets have aged... mostly. There are three old RP sheets I haven't shown here because they either use RP-specific classes, have already been done by other creators, or were rendered noncanon by FGO. Not sure they'd be worth posting. Otherwise I'm mostly playing DnD nowadays, and for newer roleplays I generally prefer making non-Servant sheets.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DesReploid View Post
    Vampire Killer. Really cool sheet. I never would've gotten the idea to throw the entire Vampire hunter crew into one person. I'm kinda disappointed that Quincy doesn't take over more often, just out of nowhere. Because going from sophisticated English man to "I have never spoken to an American in my life"-Texan that is Quincy, would have been funny I think. I really like the NP they have too. I'd think it'd be easy to make it a more generic one maybe tied to hunting, or something something about being super effective against monsters, but this is really cool.

    Also... was I just "You kids"`d?
    Alas I'm not good enough to express just how great Quincey is. You'll have to settle for an accent switch whenever a suitably American servant pops up.

    27 is ancient enough to start acting like an old man, right?

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    Source: Larry on Fanpop

    Class: Archer
    Other Classes: Caster
    True Name: Marie-Anne Lenormand
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Place of Origin: France (19th Century)

    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: C
    AGI: D
    MGI: B
    LCK: A
    NP: B

    Height: 181cm
    Weight: 140lbs
    Likes: Her fortune telling
    Dislikes: Disbelief
    Talent: Cartomancy
    Natural Enemy: Napoleon, Marie Antoinette
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Female, Weak to Enuma Elish, Humanoid
    Armament: Das Spiel der Hoffnung
    Catalyst: A deck of Lenormand cards

    Class Skills:

    Independent Action C: It is possible for her to stay in the world for one day without a master. She was fairly independent in life, and thus managed to achieve this rank.

    Magic Resistance C: She lived in an age with little magic. However, due to her own fortune-telling, she has achieved a C rank of this skill. This allows her to cancel spells with a chant below two verses.

    Personal Skills:

    Fortune-Teller A+: The ability to tell someone's fate. Her preferred technique is using a deck of cards. At this rank, anything that she sees in her visions is guaranteed to be true, though the time tends to be more vague.

    Coupez B: The conceptual ability to "shuffle" the deck. This causes more random things to constantly happen around her, conceptually reshuffling the deck so that things that "will happen" become things that "might happen". Naturally, this also makes her nigh-impervious to reversed causality attacks such as Gae Bolg.

    Malignant Hecate B: An ominous visage that constantly frightens anyone around, combined with an aura that "her fortune-telling truly works". The sublimation of her supposedly dreadful visage and the parapherinalia that she proudly displayed of assorted magic-associated items.

    Expert of Many Specializations (Magecraft) B: Although in her time magecraft had dwindled, she learned many types of magecraft, including Kabbalah, pythagorean, druidic, astrological, and Greco-Roman. This allows her to utilize any of those styles of magecraft which she learned at an adequate proficiency, though none well enough to defeat a master.

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Das Spiel der Hoffnung
    Your Life Was Written In The Cards

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 20 meters
    Max Targets: 1 target

    The sublimation of her entire legend as a fortune teller. This manifests as a deck of Lenormand cards. Naturally, she is easily capable of predicting the future. But when this Noble Phantasm is activated, it goes beyond merely seeing the future and becomes changing it herself. Anyone who she targets, she can alter the fate of to place an "event", such as gaining a very high position, or being violently killed. However, she is not able to know when the event is placed, relying on the luck of the draw to have it land where she wants it to. Good thing that she's always been quite lucky.

    Lore: Marie-Anne Lenormand was a fortune teller known for her immensely accurate predictions. At age seven, she correctly predicted the removal of the Mother Superior at her convent school and who would replace her. At age 14, she began studying magecraft, learning many different styles before professionally setting out at the age of 17. Her most famous predictions were to Josephine Bonaparte, and to the leaders in the French Revolution, Saint-Just, Marat, and Robespierre.

    Personality: Calm, elegant, and dignified. She knows that what she sees in the cards is the "truth", but often wishes to compete with the "lies" of others to see which wins. She adores her afternoon tea, and whenever she gets a chance will take the time to sip it. However, she does have one great regret. The death of her dearest friend, Josephine. She believes it was her fault, because she didn't predict it, so her wish is to have predicted it and then to be able to make the most of the remaining time with her.

    Relationships:

    Napoleon: "Ah, Monsieur Napoleon. Enchante, lovely to meet you. Perchance, have you happened to see your wife around?"

    Marie Antoinette: "Madame Antoinette. Would you like your fate told to you?"

    Louis Antoine de Saint-Just: "Monsieur Saint-Just, perhaps next time you wil listen to my predictions, hm?"

    Cu Chulainn: "It appears that the 'truth' has won against your 'lies'. What a pity."

    Avicebron: "A pleasure to meet one of the greatest Kabbalah practitioners. I dabble in it myself."

    Medea: "A magus from the Age Of Gods? Say, would you like to sit and have me tell your fortune? What do I want in exchange? Oh, nothing at all, madame. Merely a few lessons in your magecraft style."

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    The Caster of Andalusia

    Source: やけん on pixiv.

    “Caster, Santiago, at your service. Surprised? Haha, you’ve no need to worry! I’ve foretold this interaction years past, so it was only a matter of time. Ah, before I forget, I’ve got a little gift for you. Urim and Thummim, holy divination stones. In case my skills aren’t available, use these. We never know what the future holds in store, right Master?”

    True Name: Santiago
    Origin: Literature
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Gender: Male


    Background
    A young man who had his adventure chronicled in "The Alchemist", written in the 20th century. A simple shepherd who fulfilled his life’s purpose as guided by God, he has arrived to nudge others in the right path. His knowledge of omens and the nature of the world told in this book has granted him a future prediction skill much similar to fortune telling. It’s said that anything divined from his future prediction is guaranteed to come true with any attempt to change it being completely useless. Though, he commonly says, “The future is not always written for the victors.”


    Parameters
    Strength: D
    Agility: C
    Luck: B
    Endurance: A
    Magic: A
    NP: C++

    Likes: Reading, traveling the world, helping others.
    Dislikes: “When people become older, they think that their dreams are as good as dead. I want to tell them that they can do what they want, when they want. Throw caution to the wind and trust the future, you know?”
    Talent: Divination
    Natural Enemy: “Those who aim to destroy history. You can’t imagine how many times it’s come to me in my dreams.”
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Servant, Male, Divine, Hominidae Servants, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish
    Armament: Crook
    Catalyst: A worn jacket, a shepherd’s crook, and a disk of gold.


    Class Skills
    Territory Creation EX
    Through his journey, Caster has been across the Sahara Desert and became its very essence. Thus, Caster has access to the desert sands, winds, and sun to aid him in battle.

    Item Construction C++
    Perhaps an effect from traveling with an alchemist, Caster holds the fabled Philosopher’s Stone. Since it is not his own, he is only able to create items made of a select few elements as long as he has a pure element base. Otherwise, he is only able to create sand. This is only possible on a small scale and is similar to Alteration.

    Divinity E
    Normally, Caster would possess no divinity at all. As a shepherd with no divine relatives, the possibility of Divinity should be completely zero. But, as he had once understood that his soul holds the same divinity of gods, he was summoned with a small amount of that power. Since he understands his divinity as fact, the effect is heavily diminished.


    Personal Skills
    The Language of the World C+
    The knowledge of the universal language once sealed away by the Tower of Babel. At this rank, Caster is able to read minds of those with a Divinity of B or lower. Mad Enhancement at C or lower and Mental Pollution at any level will nullify the effects. This only works if the person is either (physically or mentally) vulnerable or has already started verbal conversation. Otherwise, he is only able to read their emotions.

    Actualization B
    A skill that originates from the completion of Caster’s personal legend. He is able to help others achieve their own life and realize their full potential. This essentially acts as a future prediction through omens and dreams. The dreams shown are sporadic and can or can’t happen at any time. They may show events ranging from years into the future or even hours in the future. In addition, these dreams may show the result of various events in different situations, such as the possibility in one dying.

    Ambition of the Humble Shepherd C
    The manifestation of Caster’s strong will and determination into a skill. It is this strong will that propelled him forward to his destiny even after being robbed thrice, threatened with death, and beaten. It allows him to survive a single fatal hit, regardless of strength. Though after the attack, Caster becomes unable to move and is weakened.


    Relationships
    Paracelsus von Hohenheim: “Another alchemist, huh? Is that how Master got the gold…?”

    Christopher Columbus: “So you too had never given up on your dreams…”

    Paris: “Ah, what a nice little sheep! That’s…who? I-I apologize! Instincts kicked in and I just…Really, I’m sorry!”

    Francis Drake: “You went the whole way around the world?! Aw, next time you gotta bring me along!”


    Noble PhantasmNoble Phantasm

    Maktub
    True Soul of The World

    Type: Anti-Army
    Rank: C++

    “I will only trust in what I know, in what the omens have told me. Through me, through The Soul of The World, it is all written. Your fate has been decided. Maktub.”

    A manifestation of Santiago’s journey to the Egyptian Pyramids, summoning the Soul of God to the battlefield. With this Noble Phantasm, his Divinity increases as he becomes infused with The Soul of God. It is cast on the whole battlefield, with a very extensive cast time and no way to escape. But, if successfully cast, it can easily wipe out armies of 500-5,000. It divines the fate of the enemies through omens and future prediction. If the opposing side is fated to win, then the Noble Phantasm will be less effective and vice versa. However, if the opposing side’s fate were divined before they attacked, usually tied to the knowledge of weaknesses, it is more likely to be effective than not. This is Santiago's ultimate gambit, to trust in the future more than anything else.



    Creator's Notes: Debut servant! Thought I'd try my hand at servant creation with a character I'm familiar with and it became something I couldn't stop writing. Hope you enjoyed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bloble View Post
    Was I ever a big name? I'm flattered, but it feels like that's a title reserved for the folks like you, Daneel, and Sunny, who have blog posts full of Servants and provide feedback on other sheets regularly. I'm just a rando who occasionally drops by and leaves a sheet or two behind.

    I was considering the revision contest actually, just not sure what sheet to revise. The old Mina Harker sheet could use a touch-up, but it would hardly be anything close to a rewrite. I'm generally happy with how my previous eligible sheets have aged... mostly. There are three old RP sheets I haven't shown here because they either use RP-specific classes, have already been done by other creators, or were rendered noncanon by FGO. Not sure they'd be worth posting. Otherwise I'm mostly playing DnD nowadays, and for newer roleplays I generally prefer making non-Servant sheets.
    without sucking your wiener too much, but you made your name with your consistently great sheets. You probably didnt notice, but your sheets are still quoted in relationship sections today. I checked and this one here is your 20th sheet I think. To still be mentioned in talks about the previous generation of CaS shows that you are remembered fondly. Same goes for Sunny of course, who is still a favorite among some creators here.

    People forget that the revision contest can simply be a repost to show off your old gems. We have thousands of sheets on this site. Who knows if some ever took a peek inside the CaS2 days or the older contests. I made the contest with the wish to get creators like you at least kinda back in the game.

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    Archer: Expert skill seems like a standard low-ranked magecraft skill. it is not unusual for mages to dabble in various fields. Fate alteration is a bold effect for someone like her, but it is decently balanced. Coupez skill is really good.

    Caster: what a nice coincidence considering the sheet prior. TC seems odd, because rather than making a territory, you imply a sort of blessing from the desert. NP is also a bit vague in what it does. Does he sweep the enemy with his divinity or does he do other stuff? One can see the interest in this person, it comes across. Nice job.
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    Santiago-Man does it feel weird not being the newest creator anymore (despite it being so for weeks now) but welcome! For a first servant, this is pretty good, the descriptions are not too long but still conveys your intended message. The TC seems iffy to me, are you going for he doesn't need a territory because he is the territory? And yes the NP's effects when the target is destined to lose is vague.

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