Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days (FSN x Nanoha Crossover)

[crystalwatcher]

Probably berserkerk. And the work/diction slips probably from my lack of solid knowledge base.

OP-ed Shirou is always fun when befriending.

[fraggle]

first thought was ' mahou sentai kaiser '

SHirou was quite OOC, he is a badass, but he isn't the type to speak and/or taunt. His introduction is very non Shirou-like . Also, Saink kaser stuff is geneticly limited to Vivio, and SHirou doesn't work well with intelligent devices.

still interesting though.



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I had this idea for a 4-koma, but I cant draw....


Title " Bodies of steel"

first picture: The Strikers Main cast(including reformed numbers and SHirou) walking down the street.

2nd picture: They walk next to a giant magnet.

3rd picture: forwards and co are trying to pull the numbers of the magnet( I know they aren't made of iron, but humor me)

4rth picture: the aces are trying to pull Shirou off the magnet, with several blades sticking out of him as the tear him of the magnet

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[crystalwatcher]

Like I said. I winged a lot.

Wasn't exactly trying to keep anyone IC

[Prince Charon]

I once mentioned this as a crack pairing way back in the beginning of this thread. But recently I released that this pairing had some appeal after all.

contains some Lime, due to the nature of Nasuverse magic.

this snippet starts in the HGW arc, and lets assume hat the plot follows the story of the UBW route, with SHirou and Yuuno alone at the start, and reinforcements showing up just after Archer swiches sides to Caster.


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Awesome snippet is awesome.

Like I said. I winged a lot.

Wasn't exactly trying to keep anyone IC

Was entertaining, though.

[rajvir]

great snipper crystal it was interesting

[Flere821]

I meant the Fourth. Kiritsugu summons Lyrical!Shirou instead of Saber.

Also, before you read this please note: I winged a REALLY good portion of this because I never read Fate/Zero and took more liberties with this than I probably should have while writing it... But I love seeing Shirou as a badass and I couldn't get the Device idea out of my head.

Heroslayer is probably going to kill me for this.
*snip*

Yeah, I'd say you took quite a few liberties... but that snippet was still awesome, good job
(For one, I don't think Shirou's that talkative, or willing to expose what NPs he possesses)

[Heroslayer]

Fraggle... I...ha...what did I just read? I mean it was funny and heartwarming in some parts but it boggles my mind.

Though now I have the image of Vivio writing about Shirou-papa and Uncle Shiro getting into a fight and then Grandpa Shiro beating them both up for scaring away all his customers.

And Crystal, interesting and I'm glad you caught the manacle thing I've been spouting but really? Giving him a Railgun for Broken Phantasms? Really?

Considering how much damage a small piece of ordinary metal does shot out of a railgun. I would think a mystic sword capable of withstanding pressures that are unimaginable and can pierce Berserker's skin and shooting it out of a railgun is beyond Overkill.

[crystalwatcher]

I know. Took me until AFTER writing it what I did... so time to go back to the drawing bord on that one.

Epic Device is awesome.

[nununu]

snippet

I liked the idea of using the Cartridge System to overload NP's to create Broken Phantasms. Or did I misunderstood the scene and it was simply a delivery device?

[Heroslayer]

It was both. The Cartridge was used to break the NP and then converted into magnetic energy to launch the BP like a railgun. Overkill.

[crystalwatcher]

More or less. The railgun bit was somewhat of a side affect. I originally imagined using the cartridge system for insta-charging BPs and "large" scale blade spams.

Among other little tidbits I thought about nd mostly discrded as stupid ideas or continuity errors.

EDIT: Probably going to be annoying since I'm asking this on two seperate threads, but hows the next chapter?

[Nightblade]

I was just going to ask that as well crystal.

[Heroslayer]

Uh, 25% done. I'm still having a little trouble with the Fate and Arf come back scene, but it's getting there. It doesn't help that my midterms are coming up so my writing time has been cut. That and martial arts have been draining me of any energy I normally use to write.

Anyways, I'm getting there and you can probably expect the first half of chapter 5 at the end of next week at the latest baring a emergency or something.

[Nightblade]

so i can expect it on my birthday. That would be a great birthday gift hero.

[Heroslayer]

When's your birthday?

Maybe a deadline will motivate my lazy ass.

[Nightblade]

The 21st.

[rajvir]

The 21st.

thats 10 DAYS away longer tha a week which he says is the latist he will update ow about hero gives us the second part of chapter 5 on the 21st

[Heroslayer]

Yeah, no. College is picking up so you guys are going to have to deal with one half of the chapter. I do have stuff to do that's outside this story after all.

[rajvir]

Yeah, no. College is picking up so you guys are going to have to deal with one half of the chapter. I do have stuff to do that's outside this story after all.

aww... Still college is more important so I guess youre right

[Heroslayer]

Hmm, I think I'm enjoying this memory skip way too much.

My muse: "Well, I have no idea how Shirou got Arf and Fate to let him treat Fate's wounds. Well, memory skip that."

Me: *Facepalm*