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    Don't worry, Shirou. The wimpy sidekicks often turn into superheroes after a couple of decades or so.

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    Dude. Not cool.
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    Hey, I did the same when I read Fraggle's post#11 about Nanoha meeting Archer, for the same reasons as Velsper.
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    final snippet before i sleep.

    Remember when fate grabbed that activated jewel seed in canon?

    Yeah, time for some body horror Shirou time.

    WARNING: CONTAINS SMALL CHILDREN PLAYING WITH DANGEROUS ARTIFACTS
    DO NOT TRY THIS AT HOME!


    Only a few moments ago the two girls had been fighting over the possession of the jewel seed until it activated. Now both were without a functioning sealing device, as the lost logia had overpowered both devices when it activated. Fate ran towards the jewel seed, determined to get her hands on it, even if she had to seal it with her bare hands.

    To bad Shirou beat her to it.

    All of them could only look in horror as the boy tried to contain the enormous power of the lost logia with his bare hands, the little reenforcement he could use no match for the raw power of the jewel seed.

    They could smell flesh getting burned away. The girls grasped their heads with their hands, as if the motion could help them reject the image of the boy burning away. Arf was in no better state, and yuuno was forced to look away.

    Suddenly the typhoon of power dispersed, leaving a smoking body behind. He was still alive, cradling the Jewel in his hands. His skin had been burned away on his hands and his arms, and most of his clothes had been destroyed.

    But the horrifying part was that where his skin was missing they didn't see any flesh.

    It was as if his body had been cover in chainmail, small knives covered his fingers, connecting together to form a crude protection, blood flowed between the small blades, as the flesh from which they had grown was bloody and torn.

    The side of the blades increased as they looked at his arms, the blades covering a large part of his flesh, yet even there blood was flowing down the blades.

    When he turned their head towards them they almost took a step back. From the broken skin of his forehead protruded several small blades, almost giving him the illusion of having horns.

    As he slowly moved his body, they heard a screeching sound, as if two metal plates were scraping against each other.

    Finally realizing they were staring at him, he slowly looked down at his arms.


    He screamed.


    AN: Good night everyone and sweet dreams!


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    Geez Frag, are you looking at my notes. That last one was dangerously close to the real thing.

    Anyways, this is the rough draft of the first half of Chapter 3.

    Enjoy



    Hero Slayer Presents:

    Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days

    Chapter Three: The Rival Appears



    The dream continued.

    The world around him burned. The buildings, the plants, even the ground itself is consumed by the fire.

    The boy had pushed his body past its breaking point to escape this hellish landscape but it was pointless. He had burned out. He had fallen to the ground and could do nothing more than stare at the sky. He could do nothing but wait for the last bits of his life to extinguish.

    The overcast sky brought a tiny bit of comfort. There would be rain and this fire would be gone.

    "It hurts." He whispers. Not for himself, no he doesn't have the right to say that he was in pain. The words were for the people that he passed up, for the others that screamed in pain as he ignored them. Those people that no longer had a voice, the words were for them.

    He closes his eyes and braces for the end.

    The flames flicker around him and grow closer. The boy makes no effort to track the flames growing closer to his body. It would make no difference as whether he had another minute to live or another hour. He has no more strength to turn his head but even if he had the strength he would not turn it. There was no point in looking at the remains of the town, no point in looking at the remains of the people around him, and no point in looking for a savior. So he waits patiently for death to come.

    But death does not come. The sky is covered and his view of the sky is blocked by another figure. It takes a moment for the almost dead boy's eyes to adjust but when they do he sees the sight that will haunt him for years to come.

    A man dressed in a wrinkled coat. His hair was black and messy like he hadn't had the time to wash it in ages. But the thing that caught the boy's attention was his expression. It was hard to grasp but the man had this expression of joy on his face. It was a look of relief and joy, a mixture of happiness that poured into the void that the fire had left in the boy.

    One last thought went through the boy's mind before he lost consciousness. As he watched the man fret over him and place something unseen on his chest, the boy stared at the man's expression of joy and thought.

    'Ah… I wish I could be that happy.'



    "Ah…Tsukimura-san…" Shirou wasn't really sure how he got into this situation.

    He probably should have been paying attention when Nanoha invited him over to Suzuka's house before agreeing. He should have also been paying attention when Noel the head maid of the household dragged him aside for something. Being the helpful person that he was, Shirou followed along.

    "Is something the matter Shirou-san?" Suzuka smiled innocently as she turned to him. Alongside her was Alisa who looked like she was trying hard to contain her laughter and was failing badly. Nanoha was just smiling and Yuuno stared at him for a moment but dismissed it as Shirou getting into weird situations again before going back to cowering from one of the many cats that littered the backyard.

    "Why am I in a suit?" Shirou was dressed in a modified old fashion business suit. Noel had taken him aside after leading them to where Suzuka and Alisa were waiting for them. Before the boy could even ask what the maid had wanted he was donned in the suit and told that if he wanted to learn than he should have just asked. Shirou was then pushed outside with a confused expression on his face.

    "I thought it was a little unfair for Nanoha." Suzuka explained. Seeing the confusion on her friends faces the purple haired girl expanded. "Alisa and I both have attendants but Nanoha doesn't. Considering that you're always at Nanoha's house and you keep doing chores well…" She just gestured to Butler Shirou.

    Shirou twitched at the implication and scowled. "I'm not Nanoha's butler."

    "You could've fooled me." Alisa muttered to herself.

    Shirou twitched again but ignored the girl. She was the one to start the joke that he was trying to apply as the Takamachi Butler. The conversation eventually turned away from teasing Shirou to other topics. As the girls started to discuss the love life between Kyouya and Suzuka's older sister Shinobu, Shirou tuned them out and started playing with one of the many cats that were gathered in the yard. Seeing a potential safe haven, Yuuno immediately ran up to the boy and jumped onto his shoulders to evade one of the cats that was chasing him. Shirou yelped as the cat latched onto him and tried to climb up his leg.

    "Ah! Get it off!" Shirou tried to get the cat off of him. He couldn't just pull the cat off as that would rip the suit.

    Shirou stumbled around as he tried to get the cat to let go of him. The rest of the cats had gathered to either watch or join in the fun. Soon Shirou was flailing around with several cats latched onto his arms and legs. Yuuno had latched onto the boy's head in sheer terror of the sight of all the cats trying to climb up to get him.

    "Umm, shouldn't we help?" Nanoha looked over worriedly at the spectacle. "What if they get hurt?"

    Suzuka simply waved off her concern with a smile. "Don't worry about them. Cats land on their feet."

    Nanoha nodded and turned to watch Shirou struggled with the cats again. The boy could have to go through much worse than a few cats to get hurt. They all knew that. The safest thing to do was simply enjoy the chaos from a safe distance. They all watched in amusement as Shirou tripped backwards over one of the several cats running around the exact moment that Farin walked in with a tray filled with their tea and snacks. The maid's cheerful announcement that their tea was ready changed into a surprised cry as Shirou barreled into her. The girls watched as the boy into the maid sending the tray flying into the air. Yuuno had abandoned his post on the boy's head as he followed the same animal instincts that caused all the cats to vacate the area.

    CRASH!

    The girls winced at the sound of fine china smashing. Shirou groaned as he got off a stunned Farin and looked over at the mess in horror. The girls just groaned as Shirou ran over to the pile of broken china in a panic.
    The girls all sighed in unison as Shirou tried to clean up the mess. Eventually Farin came back to reality and dragged Shirou off for a lecture and to help her make a new set of tea and snacks.

    ...

    Shirou hung his head as he started laying out snacks on the replacement tray. "I'm sorry."

    Farin just giggled at the boy. "No no, it's my fault. I should have been more careful." Shirou always took these kinds of things too seriously. It was odd to see him so casual with Suzuka and her friends but so formal and tense with adults. The only ones that seems to be immune to his need to be formal was Kyouya and Miyuki. It was cute in a way to see him attempt to act all grown up.

    Shirou just felt miserable. He had been beaten by cats. Cats of all things. The furballs had beaten him completely. Maybe if he added all the cats together it would equal a decent opponent. He didn't think that would work. He continued to place snacks on the tray with a depressed cloud over his head.

    'Shirou!' Yuuno's voice rang out in the boy's head causing him to halt his work. 'There's a Jewel Seed nearby!'

    'A Jewel Seed?' Shirou froze at the thought. 'How close is it?'

    'Too close. I'm going to put a barrier around the area to keep the damage contained. I need you to get into the woods right away.'

    'I'll be right there.' Shirou sent back before he felt the link close off.

    "Farin-san. Do you mind if I head back out there. I think I missed some of the tea pot and I don't want anyone to hurt themselves." Shirou grinned at Farin turned around to face him. He grabbed a broom that was nearby and ran out before she could say anything. "Thanks!"

    "Ah, Shirou!" But he was already gone, running out of the house. “Hmm, odd. You’d think he would love the chance to make some tea with his kitchen ban. Oh well, another time then.”

    ...

    Intermission

    It was a fated meeting. On one side was a golden haired girl dressed in black. On the other side, a brown haired girl dressed in white.

    "Another mage. Another person searching for the Lost Logia." The girl's voice was monotone and quiet but it cut through the air all the same.

    Nanoha took a step backwards at the serious tone that the girl was using while Yuuno's focus narrowed onto the girl.

    "There's no doubt about it now. She comes from my world." Yuuno tried to figure out why there would be a Mid-ch- mage looking for the Jewel Seeds. "And this girl, she even knows the true identity of the Jewel Seeds."

    The girl ignored the familiar in favor of the girl in front of her. She looked over the staff in the girl's hand in interest. "Just like my Bardiche. You hold an Intelligence Device."

    Nanoha looked over at the staff in the girl's hand in surprise. "Bardiche…?"

    "The Lost Logia… or rather the Jewel Seed." The girl spoke calmly as she swung her staff to the side. It quickly shifted shapes and released a blade of energy from its tip, making it resemble a Scythe. She held the weapon in front of her. "I'm terribly sorry, but I will be the one to claim it."

    The girl rushed at Nanoha with his blazing scythe trailing behind her. The first battle for the Jewel Seed had begun.

    ...

    Shirou ran out of the house and ran deep into the woods. Yuuno had mentioned he placed a boundary field of some sort to keep anyone from noticing the battle and he swallowed deeply as he felt magic wash over him. Magic seemed to envelop the entire woods and the world seemed to shift just a tiny bit. He wasn't sure what had changed, but whatever Yuuno had cast had definitely worked.

    Shirou ran further into the forest and it wasn't until he was deep into the woods that he even heard a trace of the magical battle that was underway. The familiar feeling of Nanoha's power washed over him once he got past the barrier's entrance but there was another one intermingled with it. He didn't really understand it, but when he sensed magic it came in the form of smell. Nanoha's magic was hard to describe and he hadn't been able to label it to any specific smell so he just qualified it as Nanoha. As he got closer to the battle site he realized what the other smell resembled.

    Ozone, like someone had shorted out a battery and let out the sparks in the air.

    The sounds of explosions and the flashing lights were much closer and Shirou dashed into the clearing just in time to see Nanoha blasted into the air by a bright yellow light.

    "Nanoha!" Shirou ran out to catch the girl but he quickly realized that he was too far. He wouldn't be able to make it. He watched in fear as the girl fell closer and closer to the ground. However, just before Nanoha would have crashed into the ground, a trio of magic sigils appeared beneath her and caught her.

    Shirou let out a breath of relief and ran over to check on his friend. He looked over at Yuuno who was checking the girl for any injuries.

    Despite the force of the magical attack, Nanoha was fine. She was unconscious but Shirou couldn't see a mark on her. It seemed like her barrier had done its job admirably.

    "Yuuno, take care of her." The ferret looked up at Shirou and saw a determined expression on his face. He wanted to tell him to stop, that he would have no chance at all against this girl, but he already knew that Shirou wouldn't listen. So he nodded and watched as the boy picked up the broom handle he had brought with him along with a broken branch off the ground.

    Shirou looked over to saw the other magical girl for the first time. She had long blonde hair that was tied up with black ribbons. She was wearing a black outfit but he couldn't really see much past the black cape that she was wearing, and in her hands was a Device. It was in staff form like Nanoha's, but this one looked more like a pole arm or an axe then a magical focus.

    Her focus was on the large cat that held the Jewel Seed. While she went through the motions of sealing the Jewel Seed, Shirou prepared his own weapons.

    "Trace On!" He went through the processes quickly. Analysis, creation of the Magic Circuit, activation of the Circuit, and flooding the broom with Od. The broom handle was Reinforced perfectly, but he was pretty sure he screwed up on the branch, so it wouldn't last long.

    The girl was done sealing the Jewel Seed by the time Shirou had finished his Reinforcing his makeshift weapons. She turned just in time to see Shirou charge at her with both weapons in hand. She raised her staff up to defend herself, but Shirou was faster. He swung out with his right hand and knocked the staff out of the way before twisting around and slashing at her. A bright yellow light flared in front of him and flung his weapon back. Too slow, she had raised her barrier in time to block him.

    "Another one?" The girl whispered in surprise before pointing her staff at him once more. The smell of ozone intensified and Shirou threw himself to the side just in time to dodge the blast of lightning that the staff released.

    Shirou rolled back to his feet and charged the girl once more. He had to keep close to the girl and press the offensive. If he gave her even a little space then she could simply summon a barrier that he wouldn't be able to break and the fight would be over. He struck out with both of his weapons and was rewarded with another flash of yellow and being repulsed backwards. The girl had flinched from the hit and taken a step backwards like she took a hit. Good, that one had hit the Barrier Jacket.

    She schooled her emotions once more and simply adjusted her grip on her Device.

    "Scythe Form, Set Up!" The device toned out and Shirou noted that it could shift shapes like Raising Heart. Rather than disassembling and summoning new parts for a different form, this device shifted the blade like aspect upwards to change from looking like an Axe to a Scythe. Before Shirou could question how such a small blade would work as a Scythe the Device began to glow before summoning a curved yellow energy blade.

    She shot forwards at surprising speeds and lashed out with the energy blade. Shirou sidestepped and tried to parry the blade with the broom handle, but the wooden pole, even strengthened by Magecraft, was no match for the magical blade and was sliced to pieces.

    "Not good!" Shirou cried out at losing the better of his two weapons. He berated himself for thinking that he could block something like that with a broom handle. He jumped backwards in a vain attempt at gaining some room to think but he had forgotten that this girl wasn't as limited in range as he was.

    "Arc Saver." Shirou's eyes widened as he heard the device tone out again. The girl swung the scythe forward and the energy blade was released out like a boomerang. Shirou dove under the attack and fought the urge to flinch at the explosion behind him. The girl didn't wait for him to get up and charged him again with his weapon pulled back. Shirou realized that he couldn't block the blade and that he had no real chance of dodging. So he improvised.

    He waited until the last moment before the girl swung the Scythe and shot forward. He barely made it past the scythe's blade before it cut into him. The pole holding the blade was stopped by the branch Shirou was holding. Shirou's triumphant gaze fell onto the girl's surprised ones. And then his world froze.

    Shirou knew that he had no real way of harming the girl at this point. His only weapon was locked against the device next to him and there was no way he could hit the girl hard enough to get past the Barrier Jacket. However, even if he did possess a weapon that could harm the girl, he wouldn't have been able to. His entire being was focused on the girl in front of him, and her eyes. He watched as the surprise quickly fell away to a glimpse of anticipation, then to confusion and finally to an expression that he couldn't put into words. It was that expression that had frozen him, it was a familiar expression and he wondered where he had seen it before.

    However the eternal moment had to end and when it did, it did violently. The girl released a hand from her Device and pressed it to Shirou's chest. The boy's eyes widened as he remembered where he was, but it was too late.

    A flash of yellow blinded Shirou and he felt something slammed into his body like a wreaking ball. His body flew backwards until its flight was interrupted by one of the trees in the area. Shirou fell forward but even as his vision swam and was invaded with darkness he kept his gaze on the girl.

    That emotion in her eyes, right before she had blasted him, he kept trying to recall what it was. Finally the darkness won and the boy's eyes closed as he lost consciousness.

    ...

    Uminari City was different. Shirou couldn't really remember much about Fuyuki City, but he could tell that these two cities had more differences than similarities. Even the house that they had moved into was much different than the one from before. The house in Fuyuki had been a large Japanese styled house that in Shirou's opinion was much too big for the two people staying there. Their new house was a much more modest Western styled house. It had a small backyard but it was nothing compared to the large yard that had been apart of the former Emiya residence.

    Shirou wasn't really sure which one he liked better just yet.

    But it didn't really matter where he lived really. He could have moved into a small shack on a cliff as long as he could follow Kiritsugu. The man, no his father he amended quickly was odd. He was a doting father and loved to spend time with Shirou but there were times when he was in his own world.

    One time in particular stood out of Shirou. It had been a while since they moved to Uminari and Shirou had raced back home from school. After months of pleading, bargaining and begging, he had finally gotten Kiritsugu to agree to teach him magic. He had gone out on a short trip and said that the day he got back he would start their lessons. That day was today
    .
    Shirou had a grin larger than life when he saw the Emiya house. As he got closer he saw a figure waiting on the porch of the house and his smile only grew in size. Even at a distance, Shirou could recognize the unkempt appearance of Emiya Kiritsugu. However as he got closer he paused as he saw the expression on his adopted father's face
    .
    The man was leaning against the house while smoking. A habit that the man hadn't been able to kick, but had managed to stop in front of Shirou if only to set a good example. But it wasn't the cigarette that caught the boy's attention. The man's eyes were staring into the sky but they had no real focus. It was as if he was looking past the sky at something in the distance. Shirou was reminded of the day that Kiritsugu had rescued him and he couldn't help but compare the man from before to the man in front of him.

    There was no happiness, there was no life changing joy. It wasn't a sorrowful expression either. The name of the emotion on the man's face was not something that the boy could name yet but it was bittersweet all the sam.. But he would learn what it meant latter. For now, the boy shook off his confusion and ran up to the man who adopted him. Kiritsugu caught sight of him and tossed away the cigarette guiltily. He greeted Shirou with a smile and when Shirou told his father what he had been doing this week he tried to find the smallest hint of that earlier expression. He would catch small glimpses of it at times, but it was never as clear as on that day.

    'Ah… that's what it is…' Shirou compared the girl's eyes to his father's. He felt the knowledge of that emotion slowly work its way into his mind. 'Resignation.'

    ..
    .
    "Shirou!"

    Shirou groaned lightly at the shouting. He felt something on land lightly on his chest. He opened his eyes to see a small ferret on his chest. It only took him a moment to remember what had happened. He shot up to a sitting position which threw Yuuno off of him. “Where is she?!”

    Yuuno shot Shirou a glare but sighed at the panicked expression on the boy’s face. “The girl left after she knocked you out. It seems that she just wanted the Jewel Seed.”

    Shirou didn’t even notice. He was too busy scanning the forest for any signs of the girl coming back. When he saw nothing, he sighed in relief. Yuuno grabbed his attention again. “We need to get going. I can’t hold this barrier up for much longer and I have no doubt that everyone is looking for you and Nanoha by now.”

    Shirou looked over at the girl and saw that the Barrier Jacket was gone by now and that the girl was still unconscious. Yuuno caught his worried look and reassured him that she was fine. “The Barrier Jacket worked fine. She’s going to be a little sore when she wakes up, but that’s it.” He turned his gaze over towards Shirou and examined the boy carefully. “I’m more worried about you. You took that blast head on. I’m surprised that you woke up at all.”

    Shirou looked down at his chest to see a large burn in his suit and raised a hand to the back of his head where it hit the tree. There wasn’t even a bump. He didn’t feel any pain at all. “I’m fine, she probably held back.”

    Yuuno watched Shirou check himself out curiously. He was right that the blast wasn’t at full power, but that didn’t mean that it shouldn’t have knocked out the boy for much longer than the short period of time he had been out. He was broken out of his thoughts when he heard Shirou cry out in surprise. The boy had fallen over and was face down on the floor. “Did something happen?” Yuuno berated himself for believing Shirou’s assurance that he was fine. The boy had a stubborn habit of understating his injuries.

    Shirou just pushed himself up with one arm and looked over at the other in confusion for a second. He made a fist with the hand a few times before shaking his head with an odd look on his face. “It’s nothing.”

    Yuuno frowned at the dismissal but let it go. They needed to get Nanoha back to the mansion before the others worried too much.

    Shirou picked up Nanoha and after a few moments of awkward handling got her into a piggyback position and let Yuuno rest on top of his head. He felt the odd magic that was in the air disappear and the forest seemed to suddenly become more vivid. Yuuno’s barrier must have fallen. He managed to take a single step towards the mansion when a thought struck him.

    Yuuno looked down worriedly at the boy when he froze. Was he more injured than he thought?

    Shirou swallowed and tilted his eyes up towards the ferret. “Yuuno, what am I going to tell the others?”

    Yuuno had forgotten about that detail. Nanoha being unconscious could be explained simply as her fainting or something similar. Her Barrier Jacket had made sure that there wasn’t a mark on her. But Shirou was a bit more complicated. The boy was physically fine, but the large burn mark on the chest portion of the butler outfit would be a bit harder to explain.

    “Leave your jacket here.” Yuuno quickly thought up of a vague story. “Hopefully she didn’t burn through the undershirt, so we can just say you lost the jacket. Hopefully the burn mark will simply be thought of as mud.”
    Shirou put Nanoha down gently before pulling off the jacket and listening to the story that Yuuno was quickly weaving. It was a simple story with only a few lies, but it could work.

    “Shirou?” The boy froze as a familiar voice called out through the trees. “Shirou is th- Oh my god! Nanoha!” Alisa and Suzuka had both come through the trees and saw the state that the two of them were in.

    They both quickly ran over to the girl and began to panic. It was Alisa that turned to Shirou and started questioning the boy. “What happened? Where were the two of you? Why isn’t she walking up?!”

    It was at that moment that Suzuka looked over and found the butler jacket she had given Shirou. “Shirou, what happened to your jacket?” She held up the jacket to display the large burn through stomach area of the uniform.

    The red headed boy looked back and forth between the two girls who were worried about their friend and channeling that worry into fury directed at him. “Eh, uh, um…” He had forgotten the story that Yuuno had come up with and was now grasping at straws. “I don’t know! I just went looking for Nanoha and then everything went blank. The next thing I know I was waking up next to her. The jacket was like that when I woke up!”

    “Urgh! You’re useless!” Shirou winced at the accusation. It hit home a lot closer than it should have. “Come on, we need to get her to the house. And you’re going to carry her. No complaints!”

    Shirou nodded and let the girls order him around as he picked up Nanoha and followed the girls back.



    AN: Now comes the hard question. The next section is where Nanoha and her friends go to a Hots Spring. We learn more of Fate and Arf is introduced. But I feel like sticking to just Canon is odd. So I offer two choices.

    The first is that Shirou follows them to the Hot Springs and makes a mess of that meeting as usual.

    The second is that Kiritsugu comes home and Shirou learns more Magecraft from him. This'll happen anyways if we go with the former, but Shirou just doesn't get to go to the hot springs.

    I'm conflicted on which to chose. Give me your thoughts, they feed me.

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    Its in IRUN's 'Xth loop' fanfic tread. Its part of a series of snippets i wrote.go read them if u dont mind Lemons


    Illya is best servant

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    I think that Kiritsugu should come back at this point since I don't see Shirou fitting so well in the hot springs scene.
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    Somehow, he manages to defy all odds and deny this fate.
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    If only I could be respected without having to be respectable.

    What Fate/Stay Night character are you?
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    You are Kirei. You've always been a little different from the rest. You probably have low social skills. Whatever, it's not like what they think matters anyway. Ever searching for something missing within you, you probably don't experience the same happiness as everyone else. Good and evil are just labels, you are who you are.

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    I say, go for the magecraft. A training montage is something that Shirou needs, right now.

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    Magecraft. He'll also spend some time beating up on himself when he learns that they ran into Fate again, but he seems to spend a good chunk of time doing that anyway. Which I don't necessarily approve of or agree with, but that's how he is.

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    Magecraft. Shirou needs to start powering up more.

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    Mmm... have to agree on option 2. Shirou doesn't need to be everywhere Nanoha is. It hints a bit too much of canon rehash. However on Kiritsugu, shouldn't Shirou be telling him everything that's going on?

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    Option zwei.
    Let the victor...be justice.







    Quote Originally Posted by Mcjon01 View Post
    Metal Gear's conception of cyborgs has now convinced me that the real reason there were no more Holy Grail Wars is because Servants became obsolete in the near future, and that past humans and their superiority can just bend over and take it from modern technology.
    @Bloble: You shut the hell up, you're like in every RP on the page, you MIRACULOUSLY LUCKY whore-monger. You not getting in is like me winning the lottery in two states, obtaining a girlfriend, and not ending up nursing another migraine, simultaneously, by the end of this evening.

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    Option Drei, Shirou tells Kiritsugu everything and gets additional training with Yuuno tagging along to learn more about this worlds magic.
    Words to live by: Fate is a B****, Destiny is a whore, while Karma is just doing her job.

    Violence solves all problems. If its not working then you are not using enough.
    Even though I am male after taking a 'Which Fate/stay night Character are you?' quiz I am...

    Tohsaka Rin You are Rin. Cool and collected, you think logically about most situations. You strive for self-perfection, and rely on others only for your benefit. You may be cold toward most people, but you can be friendly when you try. Indeed, it could be said you enjoy helping others that you care for. Whatever the case, you tend to think logically and don't let emotions cloud your judgement.

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    Naw, it would be suspicious if Yuuno didn't tag along with Nanoha. And after finding Nanoha knocked out, I doubt anyone is going to let him take care of a pet.

    And as for Shirou telling Kiritsugu. Well, that scene is going to be interesting to write if I don't just time skip it. So far I'm getting the vibe of Magecraft, so Shirou doesn't get to go to the hot springs. Sorry little guy, but your not quite awesome enough for the BAR to do anything for you. Maybe after you're tortured horribly by the Jewel Seed.

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    I just had a horrible thought.


    Kiritsugu = Dying from illness/Curse.

    Precia = Dying from illness



    Kiritsugu x Precia Ill shipping!


    ...

    Yes. You can shoot me now.

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    Have so the Jewel Seed's power actually fuses with Shirou and that should have some interesting results.

    Edit:I'm not going to shoot you Muramasa.
    Words to live by: Fate is a B****, Destiny is a whore, while Karma is just doing her job.

    Violence solves all problems. If its not working then you are not using enough.
    Even though I am male after taking a 'Which Fate/stay night Character are you?' quiz I am...

    Tohsaka Rin You are Rin. Cool and collected, you think logically about most situations. You strive for self-perfection, and rely on others only for your benefit. You may be cold toward most people, but you can be friendly when you try. Indeed, it could be said you enjoy helping others that you care for. Whatever the case, you tend to think logically and don't let emotions cloud your judgement.

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    @Muramasa: While the two's situations do share some common ground, Precia doesn't care about Fate as her 2nd daughter, whereas Kiritsugu is barred from meeting w/ Illyasviel again. So unless we can get a Bright Slap to instigate some non-canon character development before it's too late...

    {Shrugs.}

    @Velsper: The Yuno x Hayate pair, huh? So much for Yuuno x Shamal...or is it?

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    Let the victor...be justice.







    Quote Originally Posted by Mcjon01 View Post
    Metal Gear's conception of cyborgs has now convinced me that the real reason there were no more Holy Grail Wars is because Servants became obsolete in the near future, and that past humans and their superiority can just bend over and take it from modern technology.
    @Bloble: You shut the hell up, you're like in every RP on the page, you MIRACULOUSLY LUCKY whore-monger. You not getting in is like me winning the lottery in two states, obtaining a girlfriend, and not ending up nursing another migraine, simultaneously, by the end of this evening.

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    Kiritsugu bright slapping Precia? Lulz.

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    Oh, hey, you brought this over too? Cool.



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