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    Awesome snippet awesome.

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    Nice snippet, indeed. It shows that you don't fuck with the magus with unlimited blades and tells the tale unharmed. Or alive.

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    Shirou. And if not him, Nanoha. Hands down.
    Well, we know that Shirou likes to argue with Rin and that he likes things rough, so yes, he is the main candidate. Nanoha would qualify, too, but she is the White Devil, and the multiverse would colapse if the White Devil and the Red Devil were to fight in the same town, so it's dangerous XDD

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    Rin: "I wanted Saber..."
    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
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    AC!Rin. Fixing problems one moan at a time.
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    Denizens of another dimension, meet Rin Tohsaka, Tsundere of Mass Destruction
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    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ergast View Post
    Nanoha would qualify, too, but she is the White Devil, and the multiverse would colapse if the White Devil and the Red Devil were to fight in the same town, so it's dangerous XDD
    And poor Shirou would get caught in the middle like always.
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    AS I say, he likes things rough so... XD

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    Rin: "I wanted Saber..."
    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
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    AC!Rin. Fixing problems one moan at a time.
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    Denizens of another dimension, meet Rin Tohsaka, Tsundere of Mass Destruction
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    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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    Really Shiro is a Macoshist.

    He doesn't seem that way to me.

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    And in specific cases he is also sadistic.
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    @Nightblade Nah, I was referencing an scene in HF, where Shirou, being barely on his mind thanks to the GARm, says something about him liking it rough (and yes, he was talking about sex)

    But taking into account that he actually likes to argue with Rin, you could say that yes, he is a masochist (although I guess that the few times he wins, it would be way sweeter than if he would win 9 times of 10)

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    Rin: "I wanted Saber..."
    Archer: "What? But Archers are all insanely OP, it's like a rule or something, why would you think Sabers were better?"
    Rin: "Sabers are more molestable..."
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    AC!Rin. Fixing problems one moan at a time.
    Quote Originally Posted by Sage of Eyes View Post
    Denizens of another dimension, meet Rin Tohsaka, Tsundere of Mass Destruction
    Quote Originally Posted by Christemo View Post
    I dont even know what Lunatique is. I assume it's terrible for the sake of argument.

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    Quote Originally Posted by crystalwatcher View Post
    NasuVerse: Need comic relief? Go with da Nekoneko!

    Crud, now I'm on some kind of odd Omake bindge :/ wth?

    Edit: Like I said, had an omake bindge from something. And this sounded like something Shirou would do when pissed off.

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    The world shattered in an instant. The massive steel doors that hid the base from outside eyes were blasted apart like a porcelain vase with a firecracker inside of it. Flying fragments of steel screamed through the air, shattering the gadgets that had been guarding them before Caladbolg II erased them from existence. From the massive inferno at the entrance emerged a red-clad human with white hair and grey eyes, eyes that were colder than the void of space around Mild-Childa, and filled with a rage that was nearly indescribable.

    It was the rage of a friend. The Wolkenritter wounded, having been ambushed while Christmas shopping for the upcoming holidays to celebrate the end of the JS Incident.

    It was the rage of a lover. Nanoha having been stabbed from behind, and hospitalized by the traitorous bastards he was now hunting.

    And most of all, it was the rage of a father. Vivio having been kidnapped as Nanoha was left for dead. Stolen from them, her family, for the single reason she was a confirmed clone of the Saint.

    Shirou Emiya strolled into the criminal base like Judgment. The instant he cleared the inferno he had created the massive numbers of stolen gadget drones swarmed towards him, the more intelligent personnel fleeing for their lives in recognition for what was coming. The light from the fire flickered and a hailstorm of steel roared at the onslaught of machines. Countless swords, great and small, simple and masterful, magical and mundane, met the swarm: smashing it like an insect and sweeping it aside like a snow bank to a tsunami, and in seconds the horde of stolen machines were little more than scrap metal.

    At a constant strolling pace that he had not broken since the doors were shattered Shirou strode across the large entrance way to the farthest passage, and entered it, following the unique smell of his daughter’s magic. He had left Hayate and Fate to take care of the political nonsense and to keep an eye on the Knights and Nanoha, leaving the annihilation of the base to him: he preferred it like that, TSAB members were not allowed to use lethal force, but being a sanctioned freelancer allowed him to use any force he deemed necessary. And to the people who had dared harm his loved ones and take his daughter nothing less but death he would allow.

    He turned the corner, a line of illegal mages firing down the hallway at him from what cover they would cobble together. Pity, they apparently thought he used Belkan or Midian style magic. Otherwise their cover would be a lot sturdier. Without even a gesture He summoned a wall of steel. Hundreds of swords, interlaced like some kind of nightmarish scale armor filled the corridor between him and the mages. After several seconds they stopped, bewildered by what he had called forth and did the second stupidest thing they had done so far: step out of cover. Without ever breaker stride and without a gesture, he accelerated the wall of metal at the fools in his path, smashing them against and through the final wall between him and his daughter.

    He stepped through the ragged hole that was once the side of a powerful anti-magic cell and for the first time since entering the base paused for an instant to take in the situation. Two mages or at least one since only one had a staff were there and alive. The one with the staff cowering against the corner, and the other holding a gun to Vivio’s head thinking that it would make him surrender and for an instant Shirou pitied the fool.

    The next instant the idiot was nailed to the far wall with a seven foot blade through the head. Vivio ‘eeped’ and dropped the floor at the sudden relief of pressure and absence of danger. It took Shirou only moments to walk over to Vivio and pick her up, “It’s alright. Papa is here to save you. We’re going home now.” He didn’t here Vivio’s scared reply, as he turned away from the cell she had been trapped in for the eighteen hours that it had taken Hayate to track the base. He didn’t spare the cowering mage a glance as he stepped from the ruined cell, a relieved sigh being cut off as another sword finished of the last bastard who had thought it a good idea to even imagine harming his daughter. “Shhh, your safe now.”
    amazing omake I love it

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    I liked the omake too. But I really liked chapter four ending with what happen to shirou.

    I can also see shirou having memory issues as well. I mean who wouldn't with what happened to his mind. All that forced infomation pumped into his head.

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    Yeah, I figured that would happen. My mind is kinda throwing ideas randomly for Chapter 5 as I hadn't planned this plot point out before writing it. I wrote the chapter and then thought about it and couldn't find a reason for Fate not to grab Shirou now that he has a Jewel Seed embedded in his body.

    I was all like, "Why aren't you taking him home with you?"

    And Fate was like, "Oh, I didn't realize that was an option."

    Then I went "It is."

    And then before I could finish, Arf went "Yoink!" and the two of them ran off with the Chibi Shirou who was having a seizure from the info overload.

    ...Yeah... my mind is a weird place.

    EDIT: Anyways, I was thinking of restarting my Magical Knight Kaliedo Archer story which is basically Kaliedo Ilya or whatever the title is which Shirou getting Ruby instead of Ilya. It'll slow down writing for this story as I would be splitting my focus, but yeah... what do you think?

    Note that Kaliedo Archer was written like a year ago and it's plot is not well thought out and shouldn't be taken seriously... at all. Because I just want to write Avenger!Shirou showing up instead of Kuro and Ilya having a Seizure over having another Onii-chan.

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    *cue Gendo Ikari smirk + steepled hands*

    Obligatory: "Subete wa... scenario doori."

    My own opinion on the matter should be obvious.

    EDIT: More seriously, though, only resume work on Kaleido Archer if in doing so allows for a clear head and relatively straightforward output, as opposed to what seems to be temporary burn-out/lack of inspiration as with Lyrical Days.

    As your primary story, Lyrical Days should deservedly gain the majority of your focus, but inadvertently turning Kaleido Archer into a similarly dedicated/willpower-draining production on your free time/concentration should be avoided at all costs.

    Too often, more than a few authors who turn out reasonable-to-excellent quality fanfiction these days make the mistake of working on too many such projects simultaneously/concurrently.
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    I never have seen the fate stay night magical girl show. To be honest i am pretty knew to most of the nasuverse.

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    What I did like was the negima one. Thats was interesting.

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    Watch the double posts. I did enjoy writing that one because I thought it was apt and I really wanted to have Shirou in Mahora trying to help Negi but ultimately getting pulled into other problems from the lesser written students. That and I want Eva's reaction to him admitting that he could have just Rule Breaker'ed her out of the school at anytime.

    And TimeDiver, you're right. Right now, Kaliedo Archer would just be a drain on me. I'm not a good enough author to write multiple stories, or rather I don't have enough energy for it with all my other activities. So yeah, I'll be sticking to Lyrical Days and maybe some more omakes for my Omake files because I abandoned it after starting Lyrical Days.

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    Oh my god. Can you imagine Negi rasied by Shirou. He was destined for greatness before. I wonder if Negi would have any survival instincks.

    And the BAR its self would be passed on to Negi as well.

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    Not really. He would just be a bit more combat oriented when he got to Mahora more than anything. I don't see Negi following Shirou's example since he has his own father's image burned into him like Shirou did. It was more of an excuse to throw Shirou into Mahora more than anything.

    And the BAR wouldn't be passed to Negi. He already has his own appeal that wouldn't mesh with the BAR. Or have you not seen the entire class of girls (and female population of Mars) that are shota for Negi?

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    Oh I noticed. I was just suggesting thats why with that version of Negi. I mean he rarely gave up before. Can you imagine him with an example like Shirou who never gives up untill he dies?

    Edit: and even then Shirou didn't give up atleast in one ending of heavens feel he was brought back to live or something by his sister.

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    Ok, ok, ok, ok, ok! We're just starting to get side-tracked even worse then before. Time to get back on track people.

    @Heroslayer
    Chances of re-watching episodes? You might get a muse-revive and I know where to go to find subbed compleat seasons for Lyrical, A's, and StrikerS. And I also agree, no real reason not to have Fate steal Shirou, it opens possible plot points. For Kiritsugi, my suggestion to get his fans off your back is give him a small role when they attack the garden then shove him into a surport-role like they did to Arf in A's. Use him as a source of info to explain things on Earth Magus side of magic when required but you can let him fade: letting him die sometime after the end of A's or during A's. That's just my suggestion. I also suggest leaving off the use of NP until towards the end of A's and allow him to take elvels in badassery by just unlocking sections of weapon information as the story goes on. I'd say have the first NP he unlocks be Kanshou and Byakuya about mid-way through A's in a fight with the Wolkienritter(Possibly as a counterpart to when Nanoha and Fate get the cartige system) and the second be Rho Ais because Rho is a staple of Tracing and it's own badass level is pretty high anyway. But it's all to you since your in charge of the story and have the Word of God rank A++ ....... I just got the Word of Fandom rank D.
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    Concerning Shirou at Mahora and my limited knowledge of Negima, IIRC Shirou has extremely weak/nonexistent mental defenses.

    So what stops Eva from sneaking Shirou with a hypnotic suggestion and making him do whatever she wants? As unbelievably entertaining as I find the idea of her being outraged that Shirou can free her more or less whenever he feels like it, there's gotta be something keeping her in check.

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    The fact he has he could trace black keys to use on her.

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