Oh, good point.
Whee! Finished. It's still choppy and needs some beta love, but part 1 of Chapter five is finished.
*Throws his hands in the air to celebrate*
Freaking unplanned plot point nearly killed me, but I got through it.
EDIT: Okay, I was looking at the stats of this thread. Fraggle, I blame you for the ridiculousness of the hits and reply count. This thing has way too many hits and replies for the amount I've written and the quality of my writing.
Last edited by Heroslayer; October 16th, 2011 at 12:34 AM.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
Sweeeeeet.
Originally Posted by Hymn of Ragnarok
Originally Posted by RadiantBeam
That's all, folks!
Actually I think you have a good amount for your quality of writing.
Are you measuring how fast you should be writing your chapters by me? Because that is really not a good idea. I have a really erratic writing pace.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
I have to edit it a little, and then... who was my beta again? Soldat? I dunno, when whoever gets on I can get his/her email and then have them beta it.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
yesssssss that means we are going to see the chapter soon beta's get to working.
@Heroslayer: You rang?
Let the victor...be justice.
Yep. Let's use email because the PM system is too limited for this.
Er... well in a little bit. There is still a bit of tweaking I need to do.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
@Heroslayer: Well enough. I'll be waiting.
Let the victor...be justice.
Whatever. I'm good. Soldat can you PM your Email or something. Because I need someone else's opinion on this.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
@Heroslayer: Address sent.
Let the victor...be justice.
Got it, sent the file.
EDIT: Anyone know whether or not the Arthra has a infirmary and if its been shown? If it has, what episode so I can get a reference?
Last edited by Heroslayer; October 16th, 2011 at 09:09 PM.
Life at best is Bittersweet
-Jack Kirby
Most 'other' styles we see all involve some form of magic circle. If he hides his abilities, he can choose to revceal them as a trump. It would also help to reduce the attention he recieves with this unique 'style' of magic. If he is 'summoning' his swords, it would be a good excuse to give him a boost device for convenience of 'breaking' stuff...
Wasn't Fate in the infirmary aboard the Arthra?
Code:[07:55:59] <Spinach> Take off your clothes Kirby [07:56:07] <Kirby> I'm in class [20:37:34] <Lian|phone> there is a such thing as lingerie for guys? [20:37:54] <Kyokushi> yea [20:37:57] <Kyokushi> they're called jockstraps [20:38:02] <Lian|phone> :o [20:38:07] * Lian|phone googles [20:38:10] <Kyokushi> NO [20:38:11] <Kyokushi> DON'T [20:40:07] <Lian|phone> okay [20:40:16] <Lian|phone> I don't think I should have googled that [12:59:30] <Spinach> call me onii-chan, bitch [13:00:12] <kroyo> imma fuck ur shit up onii-fam
Nanoha EP 12. About 3 and a half minutes in you get a good look at the Arthra's infirmary.
@everyone: Beta test finished and sent. You should be seeing an update in a matter of hours, or whenever Heroslayer logs back on.
Let the victor...be justice.