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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    Uh... I think I was trying to get started writing fanfiction again. I had tried before but they fell flat because of my lack of writing skills. One of my friends had gotten me into reading/playing Fate Stay Night and I got started reading the fanfics for it and I wanted to write something with Shirou because I thought his character was interesting.

    I think I was reading a Nanoha cross when I thought about what would happen if Shirou fought Nanoha and whether or not Excalibur can beat Starlight Breaker. I wrote my first draft (which was a battle between overpowered child shirou against fate and Nanoha) and then retooled it for this story.
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    Quote Originally Posted by crystalwatcher View Post
    Thus we gain a glimpse of the labyrinth that is Haroslayer's mind. O.o
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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    Uh... I think I was trying to get started writing fanfiction again. I had tried before but they fell flat because of my lack of writing skills. One of my friends had gotten me into reading/playing Fate Stay Night and I got started reading the fanfics for it and I wanted to write something with Shirou because I thought his character was interesting.

    I think I was reading a Nanoha cross when I thought about what would happen if Shirou fought Nanoha and whether or not Excalibur can beat Starlight Breaker. I wrote my first draft (which was a battle between overpowered child shirou against fate and Nanoha) and then retooled it for this story.
    That's a rather interesting origin. Thanks for sharing it. =3

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    Humm...I think I remember seeing that. You posted it as an Omake if I am not mistaken.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Santo View Post
    Humm...I think I remember seeing that. You posted it as an Omake if I am not mistaken.
    I think that was that one short story when Shirou was facing against Nanoha and Fate in a mock battles of sort to choose which movie to watch... I think.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    There's compromise and then complete stretches. The circle is more of a mathematics equation than an actual magic circle. At least for Mid styled magic, they never really went more into detail about Belka style. Yuuno's circle isn't going to activate the Holy Grail. For one, the circle that Irisviel drew in the shed actually had a purpose towards the servant system. I like to think that the botched summoning had more to do with the circle than Shirou's ability as a Magus.
    Word of God has spoken, and so I'll concede.

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    When is the actual fanfic gonna be updated?
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    Some time between now and the end of time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Curious Fan View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    I...just repeated what was stated in the novel. Unlimited Blade Works, Day 15, Einzbern Castle.

    "Tohsaka Rin did not have a catalyst to summon a heroic spirit.
    Therefore, she thought that she had no connection with the Servant she summoned.
    But no heroic spirit is summoned by chance. A physical connection is absolutely necessary between the summoner and the heroic spirit."

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    If he's right, there can only be one answer.
    If Tohsaka did not have a catalyst connected to Archer, then

    "Yes. It is when the heroic spirit has a catalyst connected to the summoner."
    That's also why its possible for Shirou to summon Caster Rin, if there's a Rin on the ToH. Its just that Avalon is usually closer to him than the pendant is, at the moment of summoning, so the only way he's likely to get Rin without something bizarre going on is for someone else to have already summoned Arturia (say, they have a fragment of Caliburn, for example, or another artifact from her Legend).


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    Quote Originally Posted by Prince Charon View Post
    That's also why its possible for Shirou to summon Caster Rin, if there's a Rin on the ToH. Its just that Avalon is usually closer to him than the pendant is, at the moment of summoning, so the only way he's likely to get Rin without something bizarre going on is for someone else to have already summoned Arturia (say, they have a fragment of Caliburn, for example, or another artifact from her Legend).
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    I think he's in the wrong thread.
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    Yeah... I wasn't really sure where I was going now that I look back at it. I think my original path for Shirou was something along the lines of UBW Shirou at nine years old because of the Jewel Seed and random sword wings somewhere. It's hard to remember because it didn't make much sense.

    The chapter half'll be out when it's out. I'm a slow updater.

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    Quote Originally Posted by qsurf View Post
    What?
    Some cruddy fanon theory of Rin as a Caster-class Servant that has no way to happen.
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    Quote Originally Posted by YamiheKazeto View Post
    Some fanon theory of Rin as a Caster-class Servant that is extremely unlikely to happen.
    Fixed for you. nitewind is correct that this is not the thread to discuss it in, though.


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    I think he meant "If there were a Counter Guardian/Legendary Soul Rin in the Throne, Shirou should be able to summon her thanks to the pendant, if it weren't for the fact that Avalon has an highest priority as a catalyst".

    And I wouldn't say "has no way to happen" when we are dealing with an infinite multiverse. In this kind of setting, the limit is the sky if you manage a good enough asspull.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ergast View Post
    And I wouldn't say "has no way to happen" when we are dealing with an infinite multiverse. In this kind of setting, the limit is the sky if you manage a good enough asspull.
    You got me there.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

    Spoiler:
    There is a need to preserve tension in battle scenes. Therefore, if the protagonist is strong, show battles from his foes' perspective.
    There is a need to pull reader in with emotional scenes. Therefore, when creating one, write it as if you were describing a painting.
    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

    And there is a need for you in all of your scenes.
    Create things you want to create; shape the world to your whim.
    For you are the author of your tale.


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    wrong thread peeps, gotta go somewhere else for that discussion.

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    Helllllooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    Is anyone alive out there?

    helllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    When's the next chapter?

    Anybody gotta an idea for a snippet?









































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