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Thread: Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days (FSN x Nanoha Crossover)

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    If you guys dont mind using torrents, you can easily find the movie in nyaatorrents.

    Just search for nanoha with the highest number of seeders and the movie should be in the first 10 to 20

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tiresias View Post
    What I meant was that shouldn't the operators be standing by in front of the control panel, so it's impossible for him to "press the button" without being noticed?
    I think Amy's the one who operates the teleporter, from her panel where she does various other stuff.
    And, considering that she knows he is capable of fighting (even if not on the level of Nanoha) and she hasn't heard Chrono telling him that he can't go, it's possible that Shirou only got teleported because Amy thought he is supposed to go with them and activated the teleporter for him.

    And even if it was anyone else, they would just assume that Shirou was capable of fighting and unless Chrono or Lindy explicitly told them that he isn't allowed to go (and, getting back to the point, I don't think they would remember to do that with all the chaos there), they would just activate it for him because they'd just think he was supposed to go with Nanoha and Chrono but was a little tardy.

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    So yeah, I'm going to rewrite this one and make it into just Chapter Seven.
    I think it's fine the way it is. Especially with the first part of the chapter being about getting to Presea, and the second part being confrontation with her.
    “Evil or not, I refuse to accept this 'fate'.”

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    There is a need to give your reader relief with comedic scenes. Therefore, you need them short, and cut off from the drama.
    There is a need to create suspense with drama scenes. Therefore, show the thoughts of your characters, make readers relate to their problems.

    And there is a need for you in all of your scenes.
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    Well, I finally found the Nanoha Movie.

    I took the time to watch the NanoFate fight real quick to see what Daneel was talking about Spark End, and meh, I added it to the fight. It's a cool way to finish the Photon Lancer Phalanx Shift.

    Chapter Seven is getting revamped with me not held back by the fact that I was hoping to end this thing at Chapter Seven and I'll probably be adding a few pages to it and editting it so I can add the parts I originally took out because there was too much stuff there before reposting it.

    After the retreat I'm going to over the weekend I mean. No tech for the next few days. It's going to be awesome to hang with my friends and not be bothered by things like facebook and forums.

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    That Starlight Breaker. My god.

    I think my children will be born having seizures.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    That Starlight Breaker. My god.

    I think my children will be born having seizures.
    ...so it's worth getting the movie even if you've watched the original series?
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    Quote Originally Posted by qsurf View Post
    ...so it's worth getting the movie even if you've watched the original series?
    Yes, if for nothing else but eye candy. Can't wait for Reinforce's Starlight Breaker in the next movie.

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    Fraggle presents:



    a Mahou Senki Prism Days omake:




    -------------------------------------------------Odd man out----------------------------------------------------------------




    "I.......I kinda missed how it ended up like this." Signum admitted as she suddenly found herself seated at the crowded table of the Emiya estate along with her fellow knights, her master, the Tome's spirit who was now known as Reinforce, and the young TSAB mages who had fought against them only days ago. To top things off they were now at the home of the redheaded boy who has stubbornly refused to give up untill they all could be saved, dragging everyone he knew into their mess: his scruffy looking father who's distant look concealed his sharp mind mind and skills, his ever smiling mother who had abducted their master on two different occasions simply for her ' harem plot development' and the small girl who's nature as a wish-granting-device had been able to turn their downer happy into a brighter end.


    Or, as Irisviel had put it, a "100% completion ending!"


    Signum was having a little trouble figuring out what Irisviel was thinking of sometimes.


    "Why.. are we here right now?"


    "Well ,it's obviously that we should end our second season with a fun and relaxing scene, like our current dinner!"Irisviel stated with her signature smile. "That way we can skip stupid stuff like Law and order and courtroom hijacks for the upcoming time skip!"


    "...ahh" Signum replied, not following Irisviel's string of though but to scared to ask what it meant. Smile and nod, and the craziness will go away---hopefully.


    "Anyway," Nanoha interrupted. "Let's all be glad nobody died this time and that we have gotten all these new friends trough superior firepower!"


    " Thats because you simply wouldn't stop shooting me until I agreed to be your friend!" Vita replied as she pointed her finger at the white devil. "You're insane!"


    "I'm not In-sa-ne! I'm Na-no-ha!"


    "You'd make the worst friend ever!"


    "Now now Vita, " Nanoha shook her head as the smaller redhead was staring at her with a look that could burn trough a wall. "Just because you're a tiny bit different form the rest of us doesn't mean that we won't treat you like friends!"


    Takamachi Nanoha was very open with that: If it breaths you can shoot it. If you can shoot it it can become your friend.


    Yet for some reason her statement was drawing some odd looks from the other occupants in the room.


    "It's... odd that you would say that Nanoha" Yuuno slowly began. 'Because--- you're pretty much the exception here compared to us."


    "EH!?"


    "Myself, Illya and our maids are homunculi," Irisviel started counting heads. "Daughter in law Fate is artificial as well..."


    "DAUGHTER IN LAW!" the brunette shrieked.


    "~Tehe!" The blond replied as she was long gone in her happy fantasies.


    "Don't '~Tehe' me!" The while devil furiously spat out, leveling her weapon towards the blond.


    " Shirou's other mistresses are a ancient program bound to a Tome and her master who is pretty much walking Lost Logia at this point. My manly son could also be classified as a walking Lost Logia. "


    "How manly can he be if he's pretty much a walking sheath? " Vita asked, before said master and the ancient program knocked her on the head with their fists.


    "Chrono, Lindy and Amy are aliens from space, Arf's a dog and Yuuno is a ferret---"


    "HEY!"


    "---so that leaves Nanoha as the only 'normal' human!"


    "~EEEEEEH!" Nanoha let out a cry of utter surprise as she dropped her weapon, the other people in the room( even Shirou ) nodding their heads at Irisviel's statement.


    "I-I'm the odd one out?" Nanoha whispered as her lips trembled, her eyes suddenly watery for no apperant reason.


    "---What about dad?" Shirou suddenly spoke up, causing a dozen sets of eyes to gaze at Kiritsugu, who was suddenly very aware of the attention.


    "Darling---"Irisviel slowly spoke up "Is pretty much a regular magus too---"


    " heh, now you call me regular"


    "well, only outside the bedroom off course!"


    "Mom!"Shiru cried out indismay. " Did not need to know that!"


    "Kiritsugu-sama..." Nanoha stared at the old man with starry eyes. "We are the same then, right?"


    "err....... I guess so?" The magus killer slowly responded as he tried to make sense of the ridiculous situation. Hadn't Nanoha been talking about how it didn't make any difference if one was different only a minute ago?


    "YAY!"She cried as she glomped the man. "Then, Father-in-law, ill properly represent us regulars in the upcoming seasons!"


    "right--- do your best then, I guess." he meekly replied at the beaming girl.


    "W-Wait!"Hayate jumped up as she processed Nanoha's latest statement. "What do you mean by 'Father-in-law' !?"


    "I'm not going to loose to Fate or anyone!" The brunette replied with puffing up cheeks.


    "Ara ara, my boy is so popular these days!" Irisviel ruffled Shirou's hair as she passed by him, the boy obvious to the entire situation as Illya had already started playing around with his hair, drawing his full attention to her.


    "Lunatics--- I'm surrounded by Lunatics" Vita muttered, before slamming her head against the table to find sweet sweet release from this acid dream.


    It only took her 3 hits to pass out.
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    Illya is best servant

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    Fraggle, that was EXCELLENT, you know that?!
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    More, lord fraggle!
    BTW, Anyone ever though of doing a Night Sky and Lyrical Days cross?
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    Word of God says that won't happen, lhklan, at all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Xamusel View Post
    Word of God says that won't happen, lhklan, at all.


    I said I wouldn't to it untill F/NS is done to prevent spoilers of the actual ending.I might end up with 3 possible endings---- ME3 style :P



    Destroy: destroy both the book and the greater grail. everyone dies.


    Control: Take control of the Tome, and take down the black grail. Illya still dies and Reinforce I is destroyed to prevent a relapse.


    Synthetis: Reinforce fuses with Illyasviel, and the tome and the grail are reformatted, destroying both the corruptions. in 60 years a new war will start, but with the system overseen by the newly created Illyasforce core.


    Shirou doesn't survive any ending.



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    Oh? Is that so, Fraggle?

    If so, oops.
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    Destroy the Book

    Control the Book

    Become the Book

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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    I said I wouldn't to it untill F/NS is done to prevent spoilers of the actual ending.I might end up with 3 possible endings---- ME3 style :P



    Destroy: destroy both the book and the greater grail. everyone dies.


    Control: Take control of the Tome, and take down the black grail. Illya still dies and Reinforce I is destroyed to prevent a relapse.


    Synthetis: Reinforce fuses with Illyasviel, and the tome and the grail are reformatted, destroying both the corruptions. in 60 years a new war will start, but with the system overseen by the newly created Illyasforce core.


    Shirou doesn't survive any ending.



    U MAD READERS?


    Color-coded for truth.

    Also, fraggle, the snippet was awesome xD

    Also *cracks whip* Get back to that porn mister! It wont write itself~! >83c

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    From what I read all I could translate that as.

    Vita Route.

    Signum Route

    Reinforce/Ayako Route.


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    Poor Signum - in the/a Prismaverse, teh krazy nevar ends!

    And the blue and green endings aren't too bad here


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    Quote Originally Posted by Anonnermus View Post
    Poor Signum - in the/a Prismaverse, teh krazy nevar ends!
    You'd think she'd have gotten the hint the first time she got hit by a car in midair... on another planet...

    But you have to admire her tenacity.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    You'd think she'd have gotten the hint the first time she got hit by a car in midair... on another planet...

    But you have to admire her tenacity.


    --------------------------------------------- Delusional-------------------------------------------

    "I'm sorry Signum-chan," Signum though she heard her attacker speak, the distant female voice barely penetrating the pain that was caused by the impact of--- something. "... But you are a tad to old to join us on this onsen episode. I'll be taking Hayate-chan with us though so you will heal aaaaal about it next week!"


    Signum decided that she must have been hit harder then she had though, because she was obviously delusional at this point.


    Illya is best servant

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    Did Signum just joined the Back-Alley Alliance?


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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafreak7793 View Post
    Did Signum just joined the Back-Alley Alliance?
    If so... that would be awesome!
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