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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    I missed the forums.


    I wonder If I should write some more Mirror-verse MSLD snippets?
    Please. Tis been hard the last few days with no snippits.

    And I'm quite interested to see what you will be doing.

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    Go for it Fraggle. My last few days have been too devoid of Soul Crushing Angst...Lime awesomeness or light heated silliness would also be welcome.

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    mirrorverse crack:

    besides Jail there is still another thread, known as the alliance, who fight a guerrilla war against the might of the empire. One problem is that they see Shirou as a political hero being kept under guard by the empire, due to several incidents leading to Shirou saving the lifes of many people by keeping Nanoha too flustered and happy daydreaming to keep blasting people.

    Thus Shirou has to deal with people trying to 'save' him from the empire, which is rather confusing to him. the Aces are less amused by this, mainly due to the high amount of female freedom fighter who attempt to come to Shirou's rescue ------




    Bigger mirrorverse crack:

    Teen Evil-Vivio, who develops an Electra-complex tries to seduce her father, which fails badly due to him not seeing the clue's at all.

    she wants a kiss, she gets a fatherly hug.

    she wants to 'play' , they play a real game.

    she wants to ' sleep with him' he tugs her in her own bed, and stays with her until she sleeps ( He does thinks she's getting a tad to big for having nightmares, but still humors her request).


    Teen Evil-Vivio gets frustrated :P


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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    mirrorverse crack:

    besides Jail there is still another thread, known as the alliance, who fight a guerrilla war against the might of the empire. One problem is that they see Shirou as a political hero being kept under guard by the empire, due to several incidents leading to Shirou saving the lifes of many people by keeping Nanoha too flustered and happy daydreaming to keep blasting people.

    Thus Shirou has to deal with people trying to 'save' him from the empire, which is rather confusing to him. the Aces are less amused by this, mainly due to the high amount of female freedom fighter who attempt to come to Shirou's rescue ------




    Bigger mirrorverse crack:

    Teen Evil-Vivio, who develops an Electra-complex tries to seduce her father, which fails badly due to him not seeing the clue's at all.

    she wants a kiss, she gets a fatherly hug.

    she wants to 'play' , they play a real game.

    she wants to ' sleep with him' he tugs her in her own bed, and stays with her until she sleeps ( He does thinks she's getting a tad to big for having nightmares, but still humors her request).


    Teen Evil-Vivio gets frustrated :P
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    Have some grimdark Mirrorverse:

    the resistance Kidnaps Shirou, believing that he will join their rebellion of justice ( Which means that they are just slightly less evil then the empire, its the mirrorverse remember?)/ When he refuses and tries to escape the members believe that Shirou has been brainwashed and try to break his programming. When the Aces finally find him and extract him he's a total wreck, violated both mentally and physically, not knowing who or what to believe----

    Except for the fact that those three girls are very important to him.

    Que a heartwarming moment as Nanoha ,Fate and Hayate carry him back to the ship, before we get a mood whiplash as they Blow up the entire planet in retaliation.



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    Ah yes, the great mind that is Fraggle appears. And leaves us scarred but wanting more. XP
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    Awesome.

    I'm stuck on Drakengard Caim getting summoned as a servant XD
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    On the topic of mirror-verses...how much of that was inspired by BetrayerS? I haven't read it myself, though I'd like to, but it seems like something that would spark these kinds of ideas...
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    Aaahhh too long sence I last read a Fraggle snippit. Keep it up Fraggle

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    On the topic of mirror-verses...how much of that was inspired by BetrayerS? I haven't read it myself, though I'd like to, but it seems like something that would spark these kinds of ideas...
    mirrorverse is based ton star trek's mirror verse, where nanoha, fate and hayate are the evil ones, and the men wear goatees.

    except for Shirou, as stated in the original posts, as he still manages to be good in this verse due to sheer luck :P
    Previous mirror universe posts

    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Now about a MSLD mirrorverse?

    Nanoha is the ultimate engine of destruction of the Empire, who's love for firepower and destruction has given her the title of 'white devil of the empire'.

    Fate, the artificial mage who, after helping her gather several jewel seeds, slaughtered her own mother after the kind woman revealed that she was originally a clone of Alicia. She then traded the jewel seeds with a local Empire commander for citizenship and privileges. Commander Lindy saw a potential tool for future politics/ revolutions and took her in. Fate is a ruthless sadist, who can barely restrain her bloodlust outside the battlefield.

    Then we have Hayate, who is currently under probation after she tried to use the BoD to take over the earth and declare herself supreme ruler. The Empire has decided that her powers should be used for the sake of the 'greater good' ( or else face elimination). She reins over her wolkenritter with an iron fist, and threats everyone else the same way. All those in front of her are simply tools that she can use to assume her rightful place as the Empress of the known universe.

    Shirou..... is exactly the same as in canon. He misinterpreted the final words of the mass murderer Emiya Kiritsugu, who saved Shirou on a whim after the purified grail drove him mad, and has been trying to become an 'Hero of Justice' ever since then. He and Nanoha have been friends since childhood( Nanoha wanted a servant at first, and Shirou didn't say no.) and he was there when Nanoha fought the rogue mage Fate during the jewel seed crisis, and assisted with the 'queen of earth' incident.

    He joined the Empire, knowing that they are evil, because he believes that he can make a difference for the better in the end. The empire is simply studying him for now, until they know enough about him to ether 'reeducate' him, or dissect him for more information.

    The biggest problem? The Aces all have fallen for the nice Shirou, as all bad girls like the nice guy.

    Nanoha's love for firepower, death and destruction is only surpassed by her love for Shirou, and she will hold back on the death rays if he is around. Without knowing this Shirou has been saving the lives of countless of innocent persons who will now not get blasted to oblivion because Nanoha felt like it.

    Fate turns form a psycho killer into a nice blushing girl when Shirou is around , but will go full yandere on anyone who tries to get close to Shirou. Several female junior officers have gone missing after expressing interest into Emiya Shirou.

    Hayate has no need for an equal,----- but a male figure head to sit next to her as she is crowned Empress would be nice. I-It's not like she likes it when Shirou calls her Hayate-chan as he pets her on the head. And it's not like his cooking is that good, she just have her knights steal it because Shirou would feel bad if someone wouldn't finish it all.....


    Lets not get started on Vivio........
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    Also: no Need for Tsukihime. Jail Scalietti is our hero in this verse...
    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Mirrorverse Vivio.....


    My god what have I done O_O



    ----------------- Biding her time-------------------

    After her father had wished her pleasant dreams as he left her room, Vivio's smile quickly faded from her face as the facade that she bore in public washed away in the darkness of her own room. In his attempt to destroy the corrupt core of the Empire, Scalietty had needed a key for the greatest warship from the Belkan Wars, and only one bearing the bloodline of the Saint Kaiser, the cruel queen who enslaved hundreds of planets under her diabolic rule, could ever activate the harbinger of death. The scientist had tried to raise the young girl with kindness, as he tried to pass on his ideal of justice and a brighter world onto her.

    To bad that the genetic memory of the Saint Kaiser was much more robust then even Scalietti had knows, the countless battlefields, the feeling of bathing in her opponents blood firmly engraved into the girl's mind before she saw light for the first time.

    Vivio shivered in anticipation for the day that she could unleash her true self and take of this mask of innocence, but for now she had to play the act of an innocent child to keep her enemies off her back. The empire would not take kindly to a new Kaiser who threatened to take their place in the universe after all. Even more so, the persons currently watching over her, in this makeshift family that she had ended living in.

    Takamachi Nanoha----- The woman could be a useful asset, a weapon she could manipulate for her cause. But in the end she was too destructive to keep around. Vivio would just have to use her to her full potential before she would be forced to discard the White devil. The same went for Fate Testerossa. The bloodlust of that woman made her a liability, if Vivio could not control the blonds temper she might go rogue again, just like ten years ago. In the end the blond would prove to be too great a risk to keep alive. Yagami Hayate was the most dangerous one. The deluded woman saw herself as the true ruler of the worlds, that fact alone made Vivio's expression shift into one of disgust. By now the so called 'master of the book of darkness' was probably planning on how to manipulate Vivio to further Hayate's own goals. There was no need for any competition, even if the opposition was as insignificant as the delusional and power hungry woman. Her death would be swift, efficient and none of the woman's servants would be left standing.

    A good example was necessary to convey a message to the people after all.

    As for her Father--------

    There was no need for him to get involved. Although his 'reality marble' was a feat most deserving for a position as a general to fight at her side, his mindset was far from the one necessary for the position. It would be best if he was distracted with a local case or disaster on an unadministrated planet as the coup d'état took place. Hopefully he would accept the new leadership without problems, and join her in his rightful place as father to the supreme ruler....

    Perhaps she could spare the lives of the woman close to him. With their powers sealed perminently they would pose no threat, but they could still offer her father their love and 'support'.

    It would he hard, and capturing them instead of just killing them would take many recourses, but it might prove to be a helping push for her father to join her side. In the end he would choose his beloved daughter over the Empire anyway.

    He just had to----------

    But for now she could lay low. Play the role of the innocent girl in need of guidance and protection as this makeshift family eluded her enemies from her true goals. There was no need to be worried, as her Father and his ----'lovers' would protect her.

    She cluched onto the plush bunny her father had given her this afternoon, as she calmed herself.

    It wasn't a bad way to live at all, until the time had come.
    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Just wait until mirror-Vivio grows into her teens, gets a massive Electra-complex and tries to off the Aces to have her father to herself.....


    It's the Mirror-verse, what did you expect?

    Also, Chrono, Yuuno and the other males besides Shirou have a evil mustache, the females wear even shorter miniskirts and Subaru and Teana have this 'evil sexy lesbians' thingy going on.
    Quote Originally Posted by Flere821 View Post
    *imagines Yuuno with a evil mustache*

    ...

    [Does Not Compute] - Abort mental image.

    ^ That's even harder to imagine GARcher with a mustache... it'll lower the GAR, so EMIYA can't possibly have one of those >.>

    (I'd like to also think every female human in the mirrorverse wants to jump Shirou if the Aces are gone, but it might just be me)
    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Shirou did have several females with less the pure intentions who were planning to seduce, blackmail, abduct or one one case simply brainwash him.

    Did I mention that Fate is a very possessive yandere in this verse?




    Wait, I did.....



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    Who is that in your new avatar Fraggle?

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    Now that that has been explained to me...I find it all the more amusing.
    But I can't quite identify what Nanoha apparently is for Shirou, since Fate is Yandere and Hayate is Tsundere...
    Would this mirror Nanoha be Kuudere or what?

    Also, no answer on if anyone knows BetrayerS, but that's not a big deal. XP
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    Quote Originally Posted by fraggle View Post
    Have some grimdark Mirrorverse:

    the resistance Kidnaps Shirou, believing that he will join their rebellion of justice ( Which means that they are just slightly less evil then the empire, its the mirrorverse remember?)/ When he refuses and tries to escape the members believe that Shirou has been brainwashed and try to break his programming. When the Aces finally find him and extract him he's a total wreck, violated both mentally and physically, not knowing who or what to believe----

    Except for the fact that those three girls are very important to him.

    Que a heartwarming moment as Nanoha ,Fate and Hayate carry him back to the ship, before we get a mood whiplash as they Blow up the entire planet in retaliation.



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    interesting omake idea fraggle but I would have liked it more if I could read the actual interactions in omake formats.

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    Well to counter Fraggle's Grim Dark Mirror Verse I'll have to set up a light and fluffy one:

    Emiya Shirou is the protagonist of a Visual Novel, but it's more of a story based VN more than anything. Even with the Heroines, Shirou is the one that gets the most attention. So we must create a normal 'choose a girl' VN like scenario for him. We'll do this Key style. Just a hint of supernatural with mostly fluff and character development with a conflict somewhere.

    Targets:

    Nanoha Takamachi

    The Childhood friend of Shirou's. A family friend that is always chasing after Shirou. She is Shirou's oldest friend and probably the one that he's closest to initially. She is very protective of Shirou because of a certain incident that happened a while ago. Nanoha had been burning herself out studying and nearly got hit by a Car only for Shirou to push her out of the way and get hit himself. Everyone was sure that he was going to be paralyzed, but miraculously he recovers. We go into their past in this route and see how their relationship has grown.

    Fate Testarosa

    A transfer student that enters Shirou's class. A rather serious girl that excels in everything, both Shirou and Nanoha notice that she seems a lot sadder than she looks. Shirou will have to help her get through her family problems in her route. We're keeping the clone motif here and Shirou will have to work here through that as well. She is a bit obsessive over Shirou after he gets close to her so we might have a bad end or two in the late parts if you make a wrong turn.

    Hayate Yagami

    A friend of Shirou's that he met in middle school. She is a mischievousness girl that constantly likes to tease Shirou just to see him flustered. Shirou is helping her through her rehabilitation after a surgery to help her walk again. She makes parallels to his own struggles, but Shirou doesn't like to talk about the steps he had to take to walk again. Lots of Cooking talk in this one.

    Finishing the 'Ace Routes' unlocks the 'Knight Route'

    Signum Yagami

    The guardian of Hayate, she is the one that took over Shirou's swordsmanship training after middle school. A rather strict person, Shirou enjoys making her flustered with occasional sharp comments (he likes to say that Hayate is a bad influence). This route goes with Shirou being conned into helping out the Kendo team for a championship and training with Signum to brush up his skills again.

    ...

    I have been playing way too much Little Busters. It doesn't help that I plan on finishing Clannad or Air after this. I can't think of a good scenario for a Vita route here so I'll leave that for later.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Heroslayer View Post
    Well to counter Fraggle's Grim Dark Mirror Verse I'll have to set up a light and fluffy one:

    Emiya Shirou is the protagonist of a Visual Novel, but it's more of a story based VN more than anything. Even with the Heroines, Shirou is the one that gets the most attention. So we must create a normal 'choose a girl' VN like scenario for him. We'll do this Key style. Just a hint of supernatural with mostly fluff and character development with a conflict somewhere.

    Targets:

    Nanoha Takamachi

    The Childhood friend of Shirou's. A family friend that is always chasing after Shirou. She is Shirou's oldest friend and probably the one that he's closest to initially. She is very protective of Shirou because of a certain incident that happened a while ago. Nanoha had been burning herself out studying and nearly got hit by a Car only for Shirou to push her out of the way and get hit himself. Everyone was sure that he was going to be paralyzed, but miraculously he recovers. We go into their past in this route and see how their relationship has grown.

    Fate Testarosa

    A transfer student that enters Shirou's class. A rather serious girl that excels in everything, both Shirou and Nanoha notice that she seems a lot sadder than she looks. Shirou will have to help her get through her family problems in her route. We're keeping the clone motif here and Shirou will have to work here through that as well. She is a bit obsessive over Shirou after he gets close to her so we might have a bad end or two in the late parts if you make a wrong turn.

    Hayate Yagami

    A friend of Shirou's that he met in middle school. She is a mischievousness girl that constantly likes to tease Shirou just to see him flustered. Shirou is helping her through her rehabilitation after a surgery to help her walk again. She makes parallels to his own struggles, but Shirou doesn't like to talk about the steps he had to take to walk again. Lots of Cooking talk in this one.

    Finishing the 'Ace Routes' unlocks the 'Knight Route'

    Signum Yagami

    The guardian of Hayate, she is the one that took over Shirou's swordsmanship training after middle school. A rather strict person, Shirou enjoys making her flustered with occasional sharp comments (he likes to say that Hayate is a bad influence). This route goes with Shirou being conned into helping out the Kendo team for a championship and training with Signum to brush up his skills again.

    ...

    I have been playing way too much Little Busters. It doesn't help that I plan on finishing Clannad or Air after this. I can't think of a good scenario for a Vita route here so I'll leave that for later.
    I swear to god please someone do this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Sylentnight View Post
    I swear to god please someone do this.
    seconded

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    So many good ideas so little time and too few writers that is always the theme here.

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    Huh. Nanoha's and Fate's story sound a bit like fraggle's snippits. But they fit so well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lycodrake View Post
    But I can't quite identify what Nanoha apparently is for Shirou, since Fate is Yandere and Hayate is Tsundere...
    Would this mirror Nanoha be Kuudere or what?
    Nanoha is all for friendship, so she would probably recognise him as a friend, and just that.
    Unless she would want to become his "buddy", if you follow my train.

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