Servant/Project Idea Thread, "The Womb"

[Random]

I'd recommend DelRey's formatting guide. It'll tell you everything you need to know.

[Dreamerless]

Where can I get a link to that? (Sorry for being an annoying newbie)

[Random]

It's in his signature.

[Dreamerless]

Reading it now!

[Spelror]

this.

hello

I'm Spelror. Otherwise Biscuit works fine.

a common application is to the noble phantasm's name, like for example:

Lightning Tree of Crucifixion

Blasted Tree

otherwise you can also use it for storytelling, I don't know how you can do it, but it's can be used to give double meanings to words. (even though the collapse function is better)

Again, Del made a very excellent guide on collapse and stuff like that. It would help a lot in your sheetmaking endeavors.

[Dreamerless]

This is my projected sheet for NULL

Identity: NULL
Class: Assassin
Other Data (such as height, weight, etc): ERROR: DOES NOT EXIST



Skills
Presence Concealment (EX): As he does not exist, he cannot be detected.

Devil Sign (EX): A skill designating his status as a conceptual entity, similar to Maxwell's Demon.

NULL (EX): ERROR: NO DESCRIPTION PRESENT



Noble Phantasm:

Name: NULL
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Existence
Description: He maps an enemy to the empty set, essentially removing them from existence. Upon this activation, they will be conceptually deformed and be sent to an unreal, empty, reality marble. Although it is theoretically possible to escape by breaking through the nonexistent barriers, it would take an extremely odd phantasm that can destroy things that do not exist.

Backstory: Assassin is the empty set. The set that contains no elements. How was he summoned? Grail bullshit.

This is more of a joke than a serious sheet.

[Alexcoene]

A joke kinda has to make sense.

[Random]

I think you just summoned Void Shiki.

[Spelror]

This is my projected sheet for NULL

Identity: NULL
Class: Assassin
Other Data (such as height, weight, etc): ERROR: DOES NOT EXIST



Skills
Presence Concealment (EX): As he does not exist, he cannot be detected.

Devil Sign (EX): A skill designating his status as a conceptual entity, similar to Maxwell's Demon.

NULL (EX): ERROR: NO DESCRIPTION PRESENT



Noble Phantasm:

Name: NULL
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Existence
Description: He maps an enemy to the empty set, essentially removing them from existence. Upon this activation, they will be conceptually deformed and be sent to an unreal, empty, reality marble. Although it is theoretically possible to escape by breaking through the nonexistent barriers, it would take an extremely odd phantasm

Backstory: Assassin is the empty set. The set that contains no elements. How was he summoned? Grail bullshit.

This is more of a joke than a serious sheet.

You remind me of my Tom. You'd better know what you're writing if you want to write it. Burnout is a fatal enemy.

[Dreamerless]

A joke kinda has to make sense.

Well, the sheet does make sense at least imho.

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I think you just summoned Void Shiki.

Isn't that Akasha?

[Alexcoene]

Not really. It's 'here's nothing'. There's no real gag or effort to build it up, and it only bring up questions.

[Dreamerless]

Oh. Do you have advice on how I can fix the sheet to make it more interesting?

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A funny question of this sheet is just "what kind of catalyst or mage would summon this guy"

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Like, how did he actually appear in a war?

[Alexcoene]

Well, I'd say base it on an actual figure or concept instead like a paradox or a thought experiment. So you can keep the joke while having its existence make sense to some extent, and answer the question it brings. And I wouldn't put the 'it doesn't exist' right on the table with the introductory infos, but keep it as a punchline. Also, using male pronouns doesn't really make sense for literal nonexistence.

For example giving it abilities that make some sense for it to have, then have the NP explain its true nature and be something 'as it does not exist, it cannot be interacted with or interact with anything, it is a theorical Reality Marble one can never enter'. Being useless is more fit for 'nothing' than being OP in my eyes.

[Dreamerless]

Is the current sheet op? As he has a single use phantasm that can delete someone. (Yeah, that's op as shit)

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Well, what kind of servant would be associated with the concept of nonexistence?

I just had an amazing idea. Nicholas Bourbaki. A psuedonym used by a group of mathematicians. A nonexistent man who brought the "slashed zero" symbol into existence, he has been associated with the concept of nonexistence upon his summoning.

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Assassin Class Nicholas Bourbaki. What a thought

[Spelror]

Is the current sheet op? As he has a single use phantasm that can delete someone. (Yeah, that's op as shit)

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Well, what kind of servant would be associated with the concept of nonexistence?

I just had an amazing idea. Nicholas Bourbaki. A psuedonym used by a group of mathematicians. A nonexistent man who brought the "slashed zero" symbol into existence, he has been associated with the concept of nonexistence upon his summoning.

My man Del made a sheet on this fella too. You can take a look.

[Dreamerless]

Has everyone been made already? Lol. Well, I guess this is the assassin version of Bourbaki.

[Random]

Isn't that Akasha?

Same thing.

If you really wished to pronounce this term, call it “Kara.”
Its meaning varied depending on each individual’s understanding. To put it in simple terms, it was the Spiral of Origin.
However, since the Spiral of Origin was called the Spiral of Origin, it was no longer “ ”.

[WhiteFrenzy]

Has everyone been made already? Lol.

I mean, considering we have THREE (3) Create-a-Servant threads, it is implied, yeah.

[Random]

And this isn't even the original version of Beast's Lair!

[pinetree]

Huh, was CaS already a thing in old BL?
I wonder if that's archived.