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    Five_X's Original Fiction, "Cool Winds"

    A small note, to whosoever reads this work: this will update every two days, no matter what. Under no circumstances will I miss a day of updating, so don't worry about that. I've set this all up so that with a day between each update I can get another whole update made with absolutely no impact on my existing schedule. Rejoice!


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    The subway system was a mass grave, with trains running like ghosts through the perpetually dark tunnels, their scant lights illuminating prowling mobs of scavengers. As they pulled into each lifeless station their horns echoed sadly throughout, as if signalling someone, anyone, to give them a purpose once again. Empty casings from old bullets disembarked as the doors rattled open, froze, then clanked shut again. Down the tunnel tapping footsteps could be heard, who's they were was anyone's guess, yet no one cared to guess at all. Day and night, the trains ran regardless.

    The brim of Eric Morris' trenchcoat swept the dust-covered steps leading down to the station, and his worn out shoes kicked aside casings and hypodermic needles alike while he cautiously stepped to the edge of the platform, the train long gone. Looking around at the area, lit up by dim bulbs on dull concrete pillars, the most useful thing that could be seen was a trickle of water leaking out from a busted pipe in the ceiling down a wall, making a black puddle where only mould would grow. Eric felt along the grey brick wall, sidling above the tracks on a raised curb that had been carved out of years of necessity by gangs that had come and gone. The kind of gangs Eric Morris was tracking down this melancholy night. It was hardly different than the night before, or the one before that.

    Eric wasn't the type of man to do anything for justice's sake. To him, to nearly everyone in this city, justice was either a forgotten piece of the past, or a twisted way of controlling this city that had grown and mutated unchecked for decades, like a vine crawling across the graffiti covered wall of the Arts Center downtown. It wasn't a place for justice, for it had moved far past that sort of organization. The only people to be found mourning that were the ones sipping centuries-old wine on imported leather couches. Eric wasn't that type of man either.

    From a holster on his belt he drew his pistol, black as the subway air, as quietly as he could. He crouched now, keeping a low profile, knowing this place better than his own home. Some nights, those were one and the same. The signal he had been waiting for was the train's wailing horn from far behind, back at the station. There was rumbling as it picked up speed again, and its lights, for a second, flashed Eric as the train passed him, then turned right, disappearing around a bend in the tunnel.

    The instant of light had shown an unused branch of the subway system, somehow darker than the rest of the underground. Eric made his way there, and found himself right behind a green, rusting old subway car with its back doors bent and wrenched open. Lifting himself up the brittle step into the filthy walkway, he was immediately swept by the smell of smoke condensed into all too small of a room. It wasn't just the smell of smoke, though, it was the smell of smoke mixed in with the sweet scent of gunpowder and oil, native to these tunnels. As Eric walked, yet more shell casings rolled along the floor, clanging sharply when they fell out of side doors onto the metal subway rails. He looked through the windows of the passenger car, looking through jagged remnants of glass that managed to hold on to the window's frame even after being bashed and rattled from bursts of seemingly random noise and the thundering of the larger trains that still ran down there.

    Ahead, through the chaotic first cars, was an orange light, the light of fire, glowing on the walls. Eric's shoes padded on their soft old soles along the floor and abandoned mattresses coated in an inch of ancient dust. On some were vague outlines of people who had slept there in the past, now more likely dead than alive. It was this kind of subtle sickness that reminded Eric of his home more than anything. Did it feel good to be here? No. It felt like this was where he was destined to stay, no matter what he may think. His life had seen changes, but he dealt with them as they met him. At least for this kind of trudging around he would be paid, usually.

    Eric coughed from the lingering, thickening smoke, but kept to his path, nearly at the fire, right near the driver's car where his objective, so he hoped, was awaiting him. But there was something strange, just as Eric stepped into the front most car or the derelict subway train.

    Fire. Warm, soothing fire filled the front car of the wrecked subway train. The splitting fabric of the seats lit up as if they were covered in gasoline, and the the plastic handles on the railings melted, drooping to the floor. Eric leaped back from the bursting flames, the heat licking his arms so used to the cold of the midnight air and the stagnant cool of the underground. The closest door, to his right, was rusted over and jammed, and the window was barred over. To the left was more of the same.

    Eric kept his eyes on the driver's door, past the crackling, flowing flames, looking as best he could into the inch wide space between that door and the wall. If it weren't for the fire, he could've easily opened it. He slipped backwards, heading to where he had first entered the train, scanning left and right as he went for the source of the sudden outburst of flame. He knew this place too well not to be suspicious.

    There was a metallic snapping sound from behind, clear and precise, as Eric stepped off onto the subway tracks. He froze. It was a gun, he could tell.

    "Good day, Eric. I'm assuming you were looking for me?" Came a light German accent, right in line with the cold metal of a pistol barrel that was pressed against Eric's skull.

    "For what I'm getting paid?" Eric laughed grimly. "Not bloody likely, Moritz. And by the way, it's not exactly very light out above ground, if you haven't checked that place yet."

    Moritz, too, laughed. "Oh? I should really have you tell me about everything that goes on up there, but I'm afraid it'd be bad for my reputation to work with an Englishman such as yourself." Eric felt the pistol being released from the back of his head, and heard the light slip of a leather holster. "You can face me now, Eric, don't be afraid."

    Eric raised an eyebrow as he turned, his hands going up in mock surrender. "I thought you wanted to kill me after that last round, Moritz! How much quid are you getting to keep me alive, then, O Moritz of the Coast?"

    The German man wore an amicable smirk. "Enough, Eric, that's how much. Just keep killing off my competition and we might have some kind of unsigned deal here."

    "Money's worth no less to me than to you, Moritz. We'll see where the paper takes us both." Eric began to walk off, his hands in his pockets.

    "Keep in mind, Eric," Moritz told him as he disappeared down the subway tunnel, "That I've only been paid for this one time." His voice echoed a bit through the underground before dissipating, ending their conversation there.

    The two flickering lights of a subway train drew closer and closer, and Eric hopped back onto the carved out ledge to let it pass, muttering "Shit!" under his breath, muted by the holler of the long metal creature snaking its rounds about the underground. Tonight was Eric's second failure in a row to catch either a gang member or information about the gangs that roamed about the tunnels, and now the second most famous hired gun in the city was out of work and out of money to pay rent. His resources and time were draining away into the gutter like the fresh blood that spilled down the subway station's steps in its daylight hours. He had to get his pace back to what it had been before, even to his bare minimum of the last month.

    Eric let out a self-deprecating laugh at his circumstances. The boy he once was had never dreamed of coming to a city like this, and all his education never taught him anything about being a contract killer. That option never was on the aptitude tests back home, or at least, what used to be his home: London.

    "London," said the advertisements, more like propaganda, "The last civilized city in the south! Join the dream, change your life." Eric, after his years in this place, made a habit of mocking all the new pamphlets tossed about and ads pasted on telephone poles, laughing in the face of what had defined his life as a boy, but haunted him as a man of twenty-one years. It was the kind of situation that changed people, and broke the common mold to truly etch out the left from the right, the red team from the blue, the incorruptibly good from the horrifyingly bad. London never was good.

    This place wasn't Earth. No, the Old Earth, as it was called, was long gone. It had been almost six whole centuries since humans had reached this new planet, Taas, leaving a home that was becoming increasingly hostile to them. They emigrated on great colony ships, each containing millions of people who would never actually see their promised lands, and even their children and grandchildren became a "lost generation" with no home but the darkness of deep space and the pristine white walls of the colony ships where they were born, and inevitably died. It was a full one hundred and two years before humans set foot on Taas, numbering two billion.

    They were two billion people who had forgotten survival, conflict, disease and all the ills of the Old Earth. Tass had been chosen because it was most like the Old Earth, with a calculated 98.6 percent similarity to a more hospitable Earth in regards to ecological stability, geological activity, habitability, and dozens of other categories. However, what was supposed to be a new Eden was soon revealed to be a world already taken by an industrial society of strangely evolved, intelligent alien creatures. The new humans raised entirely in the colony ships laboured to fight a bloody, reckless and seemingly boundless war over their chosen territory, winning a clear but ultimately Pyrrhic victory over these native "zerconiths". Taas was theirs.

    The hope of the people who had initially launched the mass emigration from the Old Earth had been to peacefully settle, to forget the ways of warfare, and to start mostly anew. Advanced technologies were rendered useless by the lack of people able to operate or understand them, and were soon disregarded in favour of older ways that were simple and did what was needed. The lengthy rebuilding process left industrial and scientific advance nearly stagnant for ages, and was compounded by the enslavement and gradual genetic modification of the native zerconiths into more humanoid shapes through forced cross-species breeding and evolution from the overwhelming humanization of the once-occupied sectors of the planet. zerconiths were subject to absolute subordination to humans, and over time lost their once terrifying figures, and became an oppressed minority. Over time, however, "zerks" gained rights in some cities, such as Eric's new home of New York, created from the Old Earth city of the same name, while they were still treated no better than pitiful slaves in London.

    It was in the year 584 of the Colonization Era that London's imperial eyes glared greedily at New York, rich with crime and the finest example of a land that needed London's "liberation" from its sin and corruption, to feel the cleanse of justice. In the earliest hours of the morning, when the seediest parts of the city were most alive, the long London airplanes clouded over the sky and dropped their burning black rain all across roads and bridges and railroads, and the thunder of the heavy tanks shook the rubble, advancing on the city with unwavering speed, steel juggernauts spreading the message of obliteration to the masses.

    It was an entirely expected invasion, and one where the Londoners found themselves on the unprepared side. Their blitzkrieg was met with an underground resistance more like an ambush, and the groups within the city with the most power, notably Zerconith businessmen and women displeased with the thought of being enslaved once more, fighting back with unhinged fervour and creative and scientific minds energized with the adrenaline of self-defence. Though the Londoners won the initial battles of the first days and their occupation stood strong for half a year, their opposition was far too great, and the city was retaken and any man woman or child from London unofficially declared an enemy of the people of New York. That all took place nearly nine years ago.

    Eric's family moved to New York as the first of several planned waves of London immigrants, to assimilate the city into the London way of life. After the occupation was forced out, they, like many other immigrant families, were victimized and were themselves assimilated into the fast-paced adventure that was life in New York, and life spiralled down from there for years, only improving as Eric became old enough to take on adult responsibilities. He had personally dropped all ties to London, and replaced his old family connections with new ones in the ever changing social landscape of New York. He hated London, cursing his heritage and only accepting the English accent he spoke in, belying his culture that was so outcast in this city.

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    Mh, it has potential. Waiting for the next chapter!

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    From a holster on his belt he drew his pistol, black as the subway air, as quietly as he could.
    I don't know exactly why, but I really liked this line.

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    Update time! This one's a bit longer than the last; around two thousand more words at most.

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    Eric held his grey coat shut tight with one fist, taking the pedestrian path of the great New York Bridge that crossed the wide, rushing Charleston river. A few of the lights on its high arch were dulled into blackness, but for the most part the brightest part of New York in its harsh nights was this bridge, where, nine years before, the London occupation was symbolically pushed out, being dragged underneath the river's screaming current. No trace of that day was left save for a darker stretch of asphalt that went on for several hundred meters, where the bridge had been snapped in half, the recoil of the cracking steel cables whipping through several Londoners, and their expensive white tanks and armoured cars tumbling into the black waves in the busiest night New York had ever mustered, an event young Eric had watched from the eastern half of the city, watching the flames and smoke from afar, a firsthand understanding of the futility of London's imperialistic dream being burned into his brain as with a red hot brand. That was one of the moments in his life he dreamed of often in the more restless nights in his stuffy, stagnant apartment.

    The calm whoosh of a car, such a rarity, passed Eric as he trudged on the flat sidewalk, its lights glaring in its eyes and its black spinning wheels splashing up a wall of water from a puddle just in its way on the road, wetting the thick suspension wires. A while later there was the slap of water hitting water deep below. At three equidistant points on the bridge were tall stone towers built into and supporting the structure, extravagant and beautiful, and relatively new additions.

    The wind on the bridge was merciless, trying to keep Eric to one side as it blew him closer to the road, at one point making him lose his balance and set a foot on the asphalt, but he knew there wouldn't be another vehicle passing him for a long time. His coat fluttered and flapped loudly. Eventually he reached the end of the New York Bridge, and the road from there sloped gently downward, the two and three story houses lined up on both sides past a long park at the foot of the bridge, the concrete borders of the individual lots getting taller to compensate for the slope, until reaching an intersection. The traffic light high up above blinked mechanically between red green and amber as if there was really any traffic to deal with, and Eric casually passed through the middle of the four way intersection, crossing the road and turning right. The slope went up, slowly as before, and the houses were just the same. In this asymmetrical lighting Eric couldn't see which of them were run down and occupied by the darker groups that filled the body of the city of New York like corrupted blood cells that were absolutely vital to the city's soul and viciously attacked those who would disrupt their lifestyle. It was a cycle of hedonism and hate that did well for no one but profited for those unofficially in charge of the city, the mafia and large gangs and various crime groups of extremely varying repute.

    It all made this place so vibrant, and despite its bleak greys and seeping hues it was so lively that Eric knew that this place and no other was his home. He could never go back to London, that clean land of clean people clean of all thoughts believed unnecessary.

    As he thought this and walked on, his apartment building stood ahead. It was a blue painted building, or at least, it once was. Now the paint was splitting and fading, collecting at the foot of the structure in piles to be blown around the small parking lot in front. A few of the windows were broken to various degrees, and all were closed and covered with plywood sheets or loose hanging blinds.

    Eric's hand gripped the unfriendly brass of the doorknob. With the slightest turn of the wrist the door pushed itself open and let a gust of wind blow through the first level of the building. On the walls the faded blue wallpaper curled, peeling off in thin strips, and the boards of the hardwood floor were stained black along the grains and in the cracks between each worn out board. At some points where the wall met the floor there were dark wet spots, thick and mould encrusted. There was an audible creak with each of Eric's steps as he made his way to the stairs just ahead, ducking his head as he went up the first step to avoid a loosely swinging lantern on a rusty chain. The was a musty odour lying all around the place, seeping in every possible pore of the ruined floorboards and walls.

    After an immediate right turn at the top of the stairway a long, darkened hall stretched out ahead. The end was barely visible beyond a fog of hanging dust. Thud thud, thud thud went Eric's booted footsteps like a tired heartbeat, tiredly walking to his apartment door, the sixth on the left. Just above eye level on the door hung the number 136, its only slightly dirty complexion contrasting a bullet hole splintering the cheap wood nearer to thigh level.

    The key, jammed in several times to varying degrees, eventually clicked the lock open and sent a wafting wavy smell of cheap convenience store food right to Eric's nose. It was only then that he realized how hungry he was. He glanced at the lopsided clock beside the door, across from a small opened closet. Just a couple hours before sunrise. Eric sighed, and trudged to the kitchen directly ahead where the smell came from that appealed to him only because of his fierce appetite.

    He lifted his head after taking his coat off and tossing it on a stand. Leaning against a corner of the counter, between the once-white stove and refrigerator, was an average sized man with a mottled grey coat that reached down to his ankles who wore a black hat that, along with his fully buttoned collar, hid his face in its heavy shade.

    Eric made a quick movement reaching for his pistol, but then realized exactly who had invaded his house. With that recognition he nodded, and the figure stood up tall and walked towards him.

    "Eric," he said, nodding back, "I take it you were unsuccessful tonight?"

    With a rueful laugh Eric responded, "Yeah, you could say that. I ran into Moritz again. It was a lot like before, now

    that I think about it."

    "He spared you." The man stated in his seemingly emotionless tone.

    Eric's lighthearted expression was quickly slipped off. "That he did. He was in the underground this time, and he just let me go. He barely harassed me, and when he said he'd let me go, there wasn't a catch." He sighed in frustration. "After our last encounter, it doesn't make sense that he did anything other than shoot me on the spot and drag me all through the streets and wash me in the ditches. He's a fuckin' weird bastard, I know that much now."

    "What happens now that you've failed to complete another contract?"

    "I'm dead." Eric admitted flatly. "Or at least, close enough to it. Giorgio was being generous when he gave me that second chance, said it's just because I'm the 'second best hired killer in this damned city'. A.G.," He said, referring to the enigmatic man in front of him, "A.G., this is serious. Moritz at least is somewhat predictable. I've got no clue what Giorgio would want with me a third time. The five hundred from tonight's contract was going to pay the rent, now that's all in flames."

    A.G. suddenly looked up, and marched past Eric. Without turning back he said, "Good luck, young master Morris. As always, I'll be watching." With that, he was gone. Eric could only hear footsteps going down the hallway for a few seconds, then silence reigned throughout his room and the building. The meal was still there on the counter.

    "Heh. That's nice of him." Eric said, giving a fork in the sink a quick slip of water under the tap before opening up the plastic container. Potato salad, the bland corner store variety. At least it was edible, and at least it was filling, somewhat.

    That meal sat in Eric's stomach like a barely digestible rock. Still, he had no choice but to accept that kind of nutrition. Hopefully tomorrow he could afford something better. He opened the fridge and let the bright artificial light flash in his face as the sun would soon outside, rising autonomously, as if it were an undesired chore. Eric pulled out a cool plastic water bottle and twisted the cap off, letting it fly off and land somewhere on the floor. He let the water, with its twinge of some strange flavour he couldn't quite put his finger on, flow freely down his throat to replace what he couldn't get from his meal, and when he was done he lazily tossed the bottle into the sink, letting it lay in the shadow of unwashed plates.

    With swaying steps he made his way toward his room, where he had gone to sleep some nights for the past nine years. By now his bed was just a pathetic grey mattress laid out on the floor with a faded patchy brown blanket strewn out over it. Assorted clothes and the general mess of someone who couldn't afford to throw anything away littered the room, and through jaggedly hanging blinds came streams of bluish light from the streetlights that rose up alongside the sidewalk outside.

    Standing at the foot of his bed, Eric let himself fall to his still soft mattress, his arms stretched out loosely, reaching just past the sides of the bed to touch the wooden floor, one hand illuminated by the outdoor glow. The stress of the day eased out of him like air from a tube warming his body and cooling his mind, releasing all the pain of the long day and night he had gone through, and he could at last relax and let his thoughts all flow downstream. His eyes gradually closed themselves, and the fatigue that built up over the past twenty four hours finally overtook him.

    Years ago, he was in this bed a child. He recalled in his lucid dreams a father, dressed in a bright white button up dress shirt with dark rimmed glasses and ironed pants with a sharp crease down the middle, a father bending over to kiss the child's head as he was laying warm in his raised bed, with the steady light from outside flowing through an open, uncovered window in one strong ray. The calming late autumn breeze, too, was flowing inside to comfort the child ready to embrace the hazy, dreamy night. The father's shoes reflected the blue light as he turned and left the child, and reached the door. He turned again, waved good night, and closed the door, until there was one final click of the doorknob clasping shut. The room was infinitely quiet save for the flutter of wind always tossing and turning to get inside the single window.

    Across from the vivid white and brown bed was an open closet, darkened in the night. Carefully set outfits were hanging from wooden hangars: all pressed shirts and straight pants, the proper attire for a smart, up-and-coming child soon to be a true young man ready to follow in his father's strong set footprints laid out ahead into the bright, glimmering future with skies of blue and endless fields of the most outstanding, dark greens all around, flowers blooming in the paths of the father and son, with no past to escape from and only a hopeful future to run towards and finally, when the time had at long last come for him-

    To fall. That future of eight and a half years ago was a burning, distant picture before his tainted eyes of the past years, turned a lost grey from all his experiences. It was a postcard from a life that never was to be, signed, "Wish you were here..." in optimistic light cursive. Grass and flowers turned to their sickly dead browns and leaves withered and fell to the dusty paved sidewalk along the street as the sun dropped from the sky and was hidden away by the clouds and their hideous greys and their endless rain like a wall everywhere he went, settling a fog across the city of his life, the city of New York that was to be his home, his estranged friend that he could count on more than sparse people or the old father that had left him for the oppressive peace of London, that false, mechanical safety that was twisted, gone beyond any recognition.

    Six hours. That was how long Eric slept in his shoddy bedroom in his shoddy apartment before the late autumn sun forced its way through his window and beamed into his closed eyes, making restful sleep an impossibility. He sat up in bed, rubbing his eyes, still dressed in the same clothes he wore throughout the dirty, wet subways the night before. It was only now that he realized the upturned cuffs of his jeans were filled with unidentifiable gunk, and water had drenched his pants up to his knees, leaving a rancid stain. Ultimately, it was nothing too new.

    Eric shed his old clothes and took a bath with the sparse warm water he had, amounting to about three collected buckets. When he was washed and that water was used up, he filled up the same buckets and pissed in the emptiest one before dumping them all out the window like a peasant from days long, long past. The memory of working plumbing and sanitation had all but disappeared from his mind.

    Putting on his fanciest and most appropriate outfit of a dress shirt, pants and shoes he had once work to a funeral, he felt ready. At least if he died today, he thought, he wouldn't have to be redressed before he was buried, if he was buried. He hoped Giorgio, the famous mafioso, would show such generosity to someone like Eric, as unlikely as that seemed at the moment after all that had happened.

    After eating one of his stockpiled granola bars bought perfectly legally back when he still had money to spend, Eric put his long coat back on and was as prepared to head out as he could ever be. He swallowed his worry as he opened his door, locked it, and walked down the hall to the stairs. Outside, the city had finally come to life after the secrecy of the night. People trudged down the streets in scattered groups. Cars were an occasional sight at best almost everywhere across New York, so the streets in most places had become mere extensions of the sidewalks.

    The sun above was hidden by just a few clouds that had recently moved in, but overall the landscape was lightened. Eric saw through his groggy eyes the dark brown trees bare of leaves save for some lucky ones with leaves dyed red, orange and yellow, piled up along the streets like cool fires very slowly burning out to blowing all over the residential area, floating in opened windows and spiralling in small whirlwinds in spaces of flat, plain concrete once used as parking lots and playgrounds, and now devoid of people and decorated with used hypodermic needles and plastic bags and the more recent propaganda pamphlets that next to no one read.

    Eric weaved through the growing crowds of people to continue along his way, and once again crossed the long bridge over the river, where some of the only vehicles still in operation sailed about, ships of various kinds built long ago or rebuilt from sunken Londoner wrecks from the occupation nine years ago. The distant blare of a boat's horn reached Eric's ears. Probably a cargo ship coming into the vast New York port, the gem of the city that almost justified the London imperial ambitions of invasion.

    Like the night before, Eric passed over the small island and the bridge that connected it to the middle island of New York, where he could see some construction going on above the waters down below. Sometimes here the government was able to do some municipal duties, and perhaps this was evidence of legitimate powers gaining more control over the city. But, as Eric believed, this would pass soon enough, just as so many other things did in this vibrant, unpredictable city.

    A black, roughly square-shaped car, a simple design from the late twentieth century back on the Old Earth, passed by Eric from behind, barely bothering to avoid pedestrians walking seemingly mindlessly along the length of the road. The rear window of the car had been shot out, and exhaust visibly coughed out from the tailpipe, vocalized by the faulty muffler hidden in its lightly armoured frame. Eric ignored these sights and sounds of New York wealth and headed towards one of the most impressive buildings in sight.

    Stretching into the sky, it was a massively tall structure compared to nearly all around it as one came closer to the pulsating heart of the city. Giorgio's mansion, and his mafia group's base of operations. It was a place Eric had become too familiar with as of late.

    The mafia owned building rose up into the sky far above most other structures around it. Near the peak, the light brown of the painted concrete was mixed with a slab of greyish silver steel shaped to fit with the rest of the structure, covering a considerable hole from the war with London. A small, cheerful park made up the meagre grounds surrounding the tower, with a fancy cobblestone walkway leading to seemingly inconspicuous double glass doors, with two guards attired in classy suits standing on either side of the entrance, wielding top of the line assault rifles manufactured by the mafia group itself, and not looted, like Eric's pistol, from old weapons caches scattered about the city and countryside as reminders of the war with the zerconith hundreds of years before.

    The two guards recognized Eric as he passed them, nodding, and entered the doors unhindered. The interior of the building was dominated by a wide lobby with stone columns holding up the tall ceiling, chandeliers hanging from silver chains, and two sets of stairs curving up to a veranda overlooking the lobby. Banners on the walls facing the doors showed off the simple but effective logo of the mafia: a tightly closed, gloved fist with the letters "N L N R" on the four fingers of the black fist. Eric was unimpressed by this sight he had viewed more times

    before than he cared to recount, despite the initial shock it caused him, the first day he became involved with the mafia.

    Eric stepped up to the reception desk, built from solid, polished wood, and asked to see Giorgio. "He's expecting you." was the simple yet dreadful response he was given, and directed up the stairs to the elevator awaiting him, shining with a golden sheen, making all the right moves to imply wealth and power, but also hospitality.

    So, Eric ascended the curved stairs in his funeral clothes, his hand lightly feeling along the smooth wooden railing, sweat trailing from his palms. He took a deep, relaxing breath, calmly exhaling, then called the elevator. In seconds it arrived. He wasn't sure, but Eric had always thought that this building may have been a hotel or something similar once in the past. It had existed in this state far before the mafia took it over, after all.

    The elevator slowly rose up and up the mafia headquarters, rumbling in a low tone as it made its way to the third floor from the top, where Giorgio had his office. Jazzy muzak played softly from hidden speakers, another relic from the building's old life. There was an occasional 'ding' with each floor ascended, and a bright light on the elevator control panel indicating the current floor. Eric didn't mind the music or the harmless dinging, but kept his eyes locked ahead, and held his arms at his sides, as if set to attention in an army squad. His breathing was heavy and nervous, and he felt as if he was running out of air to breathe, inhaling and exhaling faster as he went up and came closer and closer to the uppermost reaches of the building. The confined space of the elevator, meant to hold six people semi-comfortably, didn't help much.

    At last the elevator let out its last ding and the gilded doors slid open once again, revealing a spacious office room with a number of desks arranged in a 'U' shape with the curve of the 'U' facing a heavily reinforced window that stretched nearly from the ceiling to the red carpet decorating the floor. The sides of the room were covered almost entirely by bookshelves so tall that two ladders were standing leaned against the shelves to access some of the higher books. Two potted plants flanked the elevator door like guards which were in turn flanked by actual guards, dressed and armed much like the men posted at the front doors at the ground level. On the opposite side of the room as Eric, sitting in a wheeled office chair with one hand operating a computer keyboard, was a sharp dressed man intently focused on a computer screen, operating with swift, precise clicks and fingers crawling across the keyboard like the legs of a spider all working independently and intelligently. As soon as Eric entered the room his eyes snapped to see him, and he put on a casual smile. His hair was cut in a short, styled 1940's way, and he had a fine trimmed but thick moustache, and no other facial hair whatsoever. His hands slipped from the computer and one lay relaxed on the shined mahogany desk while the other was rested on the elbow, his hand cradling his chin, making the atmosphere feel so much more cool and personal than it really was. Eric mentally thanked Giorgio graciously for his respect for his mind's well-being. Ever so slightly the stress that had built up bit by bit along his long walk to the mafia headquarters began to slip away, letting him think more clearly and critically. The bodyguards kept a few feet behind Eric and brought up a chair for him to sit in, and he accepted, quietly thanking them.

    Giorgio smiled his sly, mafioso smile, and his eyebrows tilted closer together to complete this half sinister, half generous look he wore. "I'm quite glad that you failed, Mr. Morris."


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    Good chapter, waiting for the next one!

    Just two minor nitpicking: weren't we in London last time? I am a little confused... and you should get into the plot sooner, because I have trouble following just exposition (but again, nothing to worry about this two things , they are more personal, confusing factors)

    when the time had at long last come for him-

    To fall.That future of eight and a half years ago was a burning, distant picture before his tainted eyes of the past years, turned a lost grey from all his experiences. It was a postcard from a life that never was to be, signed,"Wish you were here..." in optimistic light cursive. Grass and flowers turned to their sickly dead browns and leaves withered and fell to the dusty paved sidewalk along the street as the sun dropped from the sky and was hidden away by the clouds and their hideous greys and their endless rain like a wall everywhere he went, settling a fog across the city of his life, the city of New York that was to be his home, his estranged friend that he could count on more than sparse people or the old father that had left him for the oppressive peace of London, that false, mechanical safety that was twisted, gone beyond any recognition.
    It's a very good part in itself, but I liked it also because it reminded me of one the best song I've ever listened to...

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    The setting of the last part wasn't London, no. It's not really specifically stated until near the end of the first part, but before then it's mostly said to take place "not in London" due to a couple references to Eric coming from London.

    And as of this second part, the plot is starting. This is only about 6K words so far at least, and the little cliffhangery bit at the end of the second part is building up to something big! I just wanted to end it there to build some suspense, and so that people wouldn't have to read too much in one sitting.

    Thanks for reading and enjoying it, though! Hopefully there are other people reading this as well and just not commenting because they are silly. Riiiiiiiight?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Five_X View Post
    The setting of the last part wasn't London, no. It's not really specifically stated until near the end of the first part, but before then it's mostly said to take place "not in London" due to a couple references to Eric coming from London.
    Mh, ok. Since english isn't my first language, I tend to get a little confused if I read "too much" of it in one sitting...

    And as of this second part, the plot is starting. This is only about 6K words so far at least, and the little cliffhangery bit at the end of the second part is building up to something big! I just wanted to end it there to build some suspense, and so that people wouldn't have to read too much in one sitting.
    Actually, I wasn't sure about including that nitpick in the review (because I felt the plot is starting moving) but hey... if noone's hurt...

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    Today's the day, so another chapter for you all. Again, this one's long, even longer because I decided to start posting more in order to get to some of the later, better parts. Don't worry about me running out of material, since I've got a massive backlog of writing.

    Oh, and try to find all the various homages to stuff, especially visual novels and such. They are there, and they're intentional. Some are just more obvious than others.


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    "What?" Eric was stunned, and Giorgio could tell, with an amused smile crossing his face.

    "I meant exactly that, Mr. Morris." Giorgio stated, returning to seriousness. "It gives me an excuse to send you on a particularly dangerous contract. You're one of the few hired guns I know that isn't directly related to my group, so if you fail, which is certainly likely, there's little to no fallout for me to deal with. Does this sound like a proper way of sorting out your situation?"

    Eric grimaced. He honestly had not a single idea of what Giorgio had prepared for him. "What's the pay?" He mumbled.

    "Hm? What's that, Mr. Morris?"

    "I'll do as you wish me to, sir." Eric scoffed. "But more important to me, what is the pay, and what exactly is the contract?"

    Giorgio leaned back in his chair. "You're to assassinate the head of the Zephyr Corporation. That's all. The regular restrictions apply: no revealing who you work for, and leaving as few traces of your involvement as possible. Standard contract business. Your pay will be..." Giorgio looked to a drawer in his desk, opened it, and pulled out a memo printed on clean white paper, tracing his gloved index finger along the text. "Ah, the payment is five thousand dollars, plus five hundred if the kill is completely anonymous, and another twelve thousand if you, anonymously again, manage to steal the financial records of the Zephyr Corporation."

    For a long moment, Eric was simply shocked, his mouth hanging open in absolute confusion. Was this really happening? A single realization brought him back to his senses, blurted out mindlessly. "This can't be simple."

    Laughing, Giorgio handed him the memo, giving him some time to read it over. Eric nodded, understanding the content of the contract.

    "It's not simple." Giorgio answered plainly as Eric handed him back the memo, folding it neatly. "You have to infiltrate the Zephyr Corporation's main building, just down the road actually, and kill the CEO. Now, there are two notes that aren't mentioned in the memo itself, but the contractor told me by direct contact." Giorgio let his statement sink in for a while then continued once he was sure that Eric was fully involved in the explanation. "You see, this has to be done on an exact date and time, when it seems that the corporation's head will be most certainly in his quarters. That day is November twenty-third, at eight thirty at night."

    Eric nodded. Those instructions were specific, but memorable and not too difficult to follow. It wasn't looking to be the most time-critical contract he had been assigned over the length of his career.

    Giorgio leaned in for his next statement, beckoning Eric to lend him his ear. "Eric, I know the second note will interest you." He whispered, in a kind of secrecy Eric had never associated with the mafia leader. "The CEO? He's a zerk." That was all Eric needed to hear in order for him to grin in sick happiness. Some elements of his schooling in London has never quite worn away. It was a certain hatred that was instilled in all Londoners as soon as they entered public education, the hatred of those zerconiths that shared this world with humans. Zerks, the children were told, wanted to stop humans from spreading across the planet, in order to return to their former strength and cast humans down into the depths of the ocean and out to the quiet cold of outer space. Zerks were the enemy, they were told. Eric had remembered this, and nothing he had experienced in his life had contradicted what he was taught, so that lesson out of many stayed with him. Assassinating a zerk who had the audacity to attempt to make humans bend knee to him was the most satisfying kind of killing Eric could be contracted to do.

    Still smiling, Eric had a single question before he returned down the elevator. "This wasn't meant for me, was it?"

    Giorgio politely nodded. "Yes. To put it simply, I'm outsourcing this contract to you to avoid wasting my personal manpower and to avoid implicating myself in this assassination, whether it fails or succeeds. You will still receive all of the money, though I will admit that I am making a good sum out of this, off the record."

    Eric turned his back to the famed mafioso but Giorgio had one sentence left for him: "Don't worry, you'll have help. You'll find her at that pub you frequent, 'Dennis Sinned' or whatnot. That's all." Giorgio waved him off and eagerly returned to work at his computer.

    Eric shrugged, and descended to the ground floor in the gold elevator. It wasn't much of a detour to go to Dennis' pub, after all. In fact, he had been meaning to visit lately but couldn't, due to his jarring work schedule. It would be nice to have work and relaxation overlap for once, though the fear of Dennis calling in the massive debt that was his bar tab always crossed his mind when he thought of going there.

    The pub itself was located near the tip of the middle island of New York, South Point, farther from the high class, business-oriented downtown core than the mafia headquarters. The general area it was in could be accurately and efficiently summed up as 'under construction' as it was one of the last places to begin repairs after the London occupation ended. Resulting from that was a boom in employment in the labour sectors, something that certainly didn't pass by Giorgio's city-spanning gaze from up in his windowed office. Eric had no doubt that the mafia and a number of the other groups that unofficially controlled the city had their fingers deep in the construction efforts of South Point, all vying for financial control of the area which anyone could tell would soon be a sort of boom town due to the extensive harbour, the shining jewel of this otherwise grimy metropolis, a true diamond in the rough. Eric knew all about the economic intricacies of New York, if only because of his ties to Giorgio, and his career as the most legitimate kind of murderer. Construction may have paid well, but Eric

    would have no dealings with it beyond what his contracts ordered. Such was not the lifestyle for him, not in his state.

    On a corner of a less than busy four-way intersection in South Point, the casual pub owned by a man named Dennis was open to all older than the city-wide legal drinking age of zero years and zero days old. On the outside, it was the same old place Eric remembered coming to years before: a classic flickering neon sign stating 'Dennis Sinned', with certain letters of the second word perhaps intentionally dimmed to create a more generic seeming place. The building was two stories tall, though the second floor acted as Dennis' house, right above the revelry and usually jolly bustle of the pub's first floor.

    Eric pushed aside the doors as he had the last time he had been here, and the time before that, and so on. He pulled out a stool a slight bit at the bar to sit down on, and ordered his usual drink, a tall, cool glass of genuine, imported orange juice, with the pulp left in. Dennis, a plump, slightly balding man who never ceased his cheery, understanding smile was behind the bar serving all the many kinds of customers his business attracted, and made sure to chuckle lightly as he slid the orange juice down the aged, dull dark wood of the bar to Eric. The regulars of the pub knew Eric's odd, somewhat childish habit of ordering orange juice instead of something more alcoholic, but they tried not to tease him too much. They had eventually learned after harassing him a little that he wouldn't allow drunkenness to affect his job performance, being a professional killer and all, and so kept to purely sober beverages.

    He breathed in the familiar air. Like always, there was the thick taste of whiskey and wine in the air, the characteristic odour of drunks, the always oddly fresh smell of well washed clothes whenever Dennis passed by, and the smells of the many varieties of smoke in the air. Eric had learned to distinguish them all: he knew the fiery smoke smell from behind the kitchen doors, a smell that erupted every so often, calling Dennis into the back rooms. It smelled pristine, like a real wood flame. Nearer to him, usually from one corner of the main room, was the scent of marijuana, very noticeable and very strong, almost intoxicatingly so, but not as prevalent as the classic, old style cigarette smoke's warm wispy clouds that traced their way around the pub, rising slowly to the ceiling that, over the years, had become a dirty black from all the smoke, like burnt coal.

    "Eric?" Dennis asked the daydreamer sipping his orange juice as if it were a serious drink. "If you didn't know, there's someone waiting for you at the table over there." He pointed, dish rag in hand, to a table in a corner beside a window where a woman sat, looking lost in her thoughts.

    "Ah, thanks, Dennis." Eric quickly replied, and drained the rest of his juice past his quenched lips, leaving a couple coins on the bar. He turned around on his stool and stood up to head over to the woman who he understood was the 'help' Giorgio had vaguely mentioned. She had long brown hair and brown eyes that seemed ever preoccupied with something far removed from the comfortable atmosphere of the bar. She brought a hand through her hair, sighing, and checked the small, feminine watch on her right wrist.

    With a few stoic strides Eric made his way over to her, taking his seat at the two person table, which was much too dusty and clean of food to have been used anytime in the past month. Even though Eric was right there in front of her, though, the woman continued to stare out through the window with a longing expression, sometimes scratching the skin under her long sleeved brown jacket.

    Eric leaned over slightly with an earnest expression. "Hello? I'm sorry if you've been waiting for me long, I'm afraid I had to walk a long way to get here."

    Her eyes lost their cold, sad glaze, and she glanced over at Eric who sat politely waiting for a reply while she regained her senses, once again tracing her hand through her hair. "Oh, jeez, I wasn't paying attention when I should have!" She cracked a smile, though it didn't look to Eric to have much honest emotion behind it. "You're Eric, right? I'm Kate Muller, and I think Don Ricazzi mentioned me?"

    Eric courteously offered his hand, and she shook it limply. Her hand was cold and pale in tone, much like how her white cheeks and face seemed. Eric smiled. "It's nice to meet you, Kate, and yes, Giorgio mentioned you, saying you could help me in some way." Kate was visibly shocked at Eric's offhand, casual mention of the mafia don's first name. A sliver of respect grew in her for this man dressed as if he was on his way to a memorial service.

    "Did you lose someone?" She enquired meekly, looking over Eric's attire, which included a deep red rose on his lapel, a common sign of mourning.

    Eric let out a true and relaxing laugh. "No, I only dressed for my own funeral I thought was going to be attending if Giorgio was less pleased with my success rates lately. The rose really adds that kind of sentiment, doesn't it?" Eric lightly brushed up the deep crimson flower with a touch of his fingers.

    Kate mumbled, "Oh..." and didn't say any more. With that idle conversation done, Eric clasped his hands together seriously on the table, staring intently into Kate's evasive eyes. "Now, we have serious business to talk about; that's why we're both here, right?" Kate nodded in a slow motion. "Since Giorgio said you could aid me in my next contract, a dangerously ominous one at that, what exactly do you have to offer me?" Eric's gaze went unbroken, and Kate found it intimidating to look back at him.

    "I can get you in the building," She said, "By poisoning certain staff members and disrupting their communications so that you can break in and out of the Zephyr Corporation main building without getting caught."

    Eric scratched his chin. "So, how do you know how to go about all this?"

    Now, Kate seemed more comfortable with their conversation, slipping easily into longer, less soft spoken sentences. "I used to work there for a number of years, but now I don't. I worked a while with the Moritz Coast gang in the west parts of the city, then I was hired by Don Ricazzi for infiltration missions just like this one, though not with these kinds of risks. I've made maps of the building for each floor, including where all the security cameras and guard patrols are. The CEO of Zephyr has had the entire place locked up lately so that only people with verified ID chips can enter, though I've figured out how to crack their identification panels and electronic locks, and if those still don't work, I've managed to make my old ID chip compatible with the upgraded systems that were installed during the summer. I can make sure you get inside, as well as out, but two people would be just too many for this, and I... can't help you in a fight."

    Eric was very impressed, raising an eyebrow in awe, partly due to her sudden shift in attitude. "Wow, you've really planned this out, haven't you? I doubt I'll need to bring out my old lock-picking set then, eh?" He called over Dennis, and asked Kate what kind of drink she'd like, and then, they spoke at length about Eric's newest contract.

    "November twenty third, huh?" Eric repeated all of what Giorgio had told him about the specific date the killing had to take place. It seemed like any other day: it would probably be cold, it would be dark early, and Eric would pack his pistol and wear his grey trenchcoat. He recalled his failures of the past two weeks, and reassured himself that this time he wouldn't be dealing with Moritz or the underground or any area of the western parts of the city, beyond the control of the mafia and a place even the government with its boundless tenacity had specifically, suspiciously, halted most infrastructural developments. Eric shuddered at the thought of ever going there. There was a place more aggressively hostile than the subways he frequented, as he barely knew that part of the city. For now, though, he had to focus on the middle section of New York, just north of the mafia headquarters, where the Zephyr Corporation building stood amongst similar buildings in the downtown core.

    "Eric?" It was Kate's turn to be the one waking someone stuck daydreaming. "You said something 'bout the seventeenth? You only have that day to assassinate the CEO of Zephyr, so I'm hoping you can prepare yourself for it by then. I know I'm ready."

    Eric laughed to lighten the mood. "What I'm worried about most is whether or not my landlord's going to call in my rent early. I wouldn't be surprised if he did, honestly." The reality of his joke made it backfire on himself, but Kate still chuckled softly, thinking he was exaggerating. His somber expression made her realize otherwise.

    "Don't worry about me." He reassured her, cracking a smile. "That wouldn't be the worst thing that's happened to me in the eight and a half or so years I've been here."

    That statement drew Kate's attention as her eyes flared back to colour, looking at Eric with earnest interest. "Ah, if it isn't too much to ask, are you one of the Londoners who came here during the occupation?"

    Grimacing, he responded, "Yeah, couldn't you tell from my accent and all the slang like me paying blokes with hard earned quid?" His lips formed a wry grin.

    "So, ah," Kate was obviously flustered as she prepared her next question, "So, what's happened to you that's worse than being evicted?"

    Eric sighed and wrung his hands, making little cracks sound out. "That's something I'd rather not tell. Perhaps once we've worked together longer I'll tell you all about the darkest reaches of my past. What I can tell you, to leave you unsatisfied and wondering,

    is that I haven't exactly had a happy time here, even in childhood." There was silence for a few minutes at the table, letting the ambient sounds of clinking glasses and varied, scattered conversations fill in this spot of quiet.

    "Well, if it means anything, I'm very sorr-"

    "Don't bother." Eric muttered, and pushed out his chair from the table, standing up.

    Kate stood up slightly and gestured for him to stay. "Eric, if I've offended you, I didn't mean it!"

    He scoffed, his back turned to her. "You didn't offend me, we just don't have anything more to talk about. I'll see you in two weeks, alright?"

    Relenting, Kate sat back down, and watched Eric's back until he had left the pub. Her gaze returned, cold, to the window so covered in dust that everything outside seen through it had a faded monochrome tone to it like an ancient film.

    Eric strode down the sidewalk, his hands in his pockets as the late autumn breeze blew against him, making his straight black suit jacket flutter behind him like his grey trenchcoat. He mentally chastised himself for not dressing for the weather, with an audible grumble. There was nothing he could think of doing in the two weeks before the time came for his contract to be followed through, and just about all of his hobbies were in some way life-threatening, and he didn't want to die before getting at least one more payment from Giorgio. He doubted his spirit could rest peacefully with rent unpaid, even though he was the only person living in his run down apartment suite, and only A.G. ever visited, every week or so. There was little for him to get a thrill from besides earning money and experiencing the rush of combat, and the former at the moment was almost as rare as freely having sex. The vicious circle of life in New York made Eric sigh, but it was nothing new to him by now. He had plenty of time to get ready for just one night, and he wouldn't waste it.





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    The dirt had to be swept up sometime, so there she was, sweeping up the only problems the entire mansion had. With waltzing steps she stepped back and forth along the length of the hallway, leading the dirt into small piles, then sweeping it all into a dustbin. She preferred this feeling, the satisfaction of doing this job by hand rather than trusting a vacuum to the work. In New York, even in this rich house, that kind of technology was only sometimes reliable.



    The entire hallway was empty except for her, cleaning up the floors on the second level of the building, where few people but family visited. The lights on the ceiling lit up the length of the hall, all the way from the stairs at one end to the closed wooden door at the other. The dark mahogany floorboards made dust show up well; that was one of the simpler things she enjoyed here. For her, cleaning was a peaceful, zen time where she could focus her mind on all that faced her in the tumultuous months to come.

    "Amber!" Called a low, old voice from an intercom speaker beside a nearby door. "I need you up in my office. Unexpected events are unravelling before us, and you should see them." Amber heeded the man's orders and leaned her broom against the whitish-brown painted wall, heading to the stairs. She lifted her dress as she quickly ascended the steps, and at the top stood for a moment to remove her white cleaning apron and uniform, letting them drop to the floor at her feet to reveal a black suit, formal, but tighter and more appropriate for the kind of work she was expecting.

    The man called again, and in seconds Amber was by his side, tall beside this person who was slouching weakly in a chair in front of a wall of various screens, some filled over with text and some with camera footage on them, the only lights barely brightening up the room with their glow. The windows were all covered over with deep red curtains, even though it was night.

    "Yes, sir?" Amber asked curtly.

    The man pointed with his trembling, grey haired arm to one of the screens showing the street view of a tall building wedged between a number of others, lit up by a single street lamp illuminating just the corner of a gate, impossibly black, high and foreboding in its construction. Beyond that was a concrete yard, and beyond? The light wouldn't tell. All there was besides was a thin alleyway between the brick of an older building and the plain concrete walls of the yard, and then the painted faux brick of the towering main structure. A figure passed through that alleyway, their grey coat almost blending into the light grey wall, given away by its fluttering in the breeze. This footage repeated again and again, showing the same light streaming in a cone down to the sidewalk and empty street, and the person disappearing into the alley.

    Amber looked down at her master. "What is going on here?"

    "Amber, this is the Zephyr Corporation headquarters, in the downtown core of the city. This person you are seeing here is the third that has-" the man coughed, sputtering out the last few words, "-the third that has passed by here within the last half hour, including one of our agents." His arm raised up again, to another glowing screen, this one of text. "Here is documentation of her objective as stated by the IBHJ, to 'eliminate the commercial and suspected military opposition presented by the Zephyr Corporation in the independent state of New York through subversive, single strike tactics involving a maximum of two agents at any given time."

    Amber nodded, understanding his every word. This kind of mission was far from unknown to her. "What are your suspicions then, sir?"

    Another cough, and the chair swivelled toward her. "It's fairly obvious that more than just our interests are involved in this operation tonight. Two agents could be plausible since Agent Seven, though not specifically listed amongst the operation personnel, is in the area. However," he said, pointing again to the footage of the Zephyr building's entrance, "This third presence cannot be involved with us. I have reason to believe that this is an act by third party interests taking advantage of the situation one or more of our agents are involved in."

    "Do you wish for me to investigate this activity, sir?"

    The old man shook his head. "No, I do not want to potentially damage our own ongoing operation in the building. We will simply have to wait until the IBHJ finishes a post-mission investigation and objective report. That is all I needed you for tonight."

    Amber bowed, and returned to the stairs to put her uniform back on.


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    The gate to the Zephyr corporation's unkempt front garden opened with just a heavy push, the first sign that Kate had done her side of the work promptly, just as he'd hoped. Eric wasted no time looking around at the overgrown flora meant at one time for decoration, instead focusing on the dark corners that nearly oozed danger. He was in enemy territory, and as far as he knew, everything was out to kill him without any hesitation.

    Trying to make as little noise as possible, Eric sneaked up to the thick yellowish green main door, the kind used to close off radioactive hazard rooms, and less so the headquarters corporation once believed as legitimate as they came in this New York. Eric scoffed at the idea of a zerk heading a company that wasn't obsessed with greed and anti-human hate. At this time, though, getting past this door was far more important to him. He ran his hand across the access panel in a small inlay in the concrete frame surrounding the door, beside a metallic grey handle. A blue glow emanated from a small screen on the panel, and the handle's lock disengaged, raising up to be grasped by what the door system though was a friendly entity. Kate had done her job just as she promised. Eric smiled at her precise and successful planning.

    He pulled on the handle and with the exhale of depressurization, the door slid open along a path engraved almost invisibly on the ground. The lights inside the building were all on, revealing a long, bright hallway with the repetitive design resembling a prison, except with a metal floor. Eric took one step inside and the floor clanged as his boot landed, and he immediately recoiled. More carefully, he again went in, this time with a creeping pace like a vine crawling along the wall, out to silently strangle the life from the structure. The interior was completely quiet after the door close with another whoosh of air.

    About halfway down the hall was a left turn, and Eric opted to go a bit farther ahead, hiding behind the wall to remain in a blind spot for anyone coming past. When he held his breath to listen for movement, he could hear a single set of footsteps coming his way from the left hallway branch, moving ahead in a marching cadence, with boots clanking on the metal of the floor.

    In a single fluid motion Eric spun around the corner and stabbed the man in the gut, jerking his knife around in his stomach, then holding him up by the collar with his other hand to absorb a bullet that came from behind his victim. Eric's hand dropped from his embedded knife and to his pistol holster on his belt and he drew his gun as a classic gunslinger would and unloaded two half-blind shots ahead, eliciting a scream drowned out by another, better aimed, shot after dropping the knifed body. The echo reverberated down the hallway.

    Eric wrenched his knife out of the man at his feet and jabbed him in the neck for good measure. He patted down the guard's dark navy blue combat vest with rushing hands to find any ammunition, then to the belt and took the man's pistol and took off down the bright hall in a straight line, ignoring the left branch and abandoning stealth. He glanced at both walls for an elevator or stairs or even just some solid cover to make a quick stand against the guards that were surely heading his way, but he found none, just barren hallways that all looked the same and wound around and were far too brightly lit to be healthy. Eric excelled in a darker environment where he could hide. In this place, he was open on two sides, not including any possible hidden doors or tunnels located under floor panels.

    After one turn, Eric saw steps going up a few meters, then meeting a landing and turning. There was no handrail. He stopped for only a second to assess his new situation and sprinted up the stairway recklessly, turning at the landing and going up another flight of stairs that

    ended with yet another landing that turned to the right, to a plain grey door with a barred plate glass window at eye level. It was too tinted for him to see anything specific beyond; he only saw a hallway with many more branches than the one on the first floor, and a slightly dimmer look, though that could just be the black tint of the window doing its job.

    This door had a handle, and when Eric cautiously turned it, the door opened on its own, as if it wanted him to enter. The floor on this level was made up of more solid tiles instead of the raw metal below, and seemed more polished and well designed than the last. Eric stepped forward once, checked his left and right, then behind, in case more guards were on their way up the stairs. From the rapid tapping clanks from below, he assumed that they were.

    He rushed forward, slamming the door shut behind him and checking the first branches of the blank hall. Just as he was about to run forward once more, he heard a retching cry, then the upper half of a man flying into view from a side hallway, landing with a sickly soft thud on the ground; blood poured from the space where his legs and waist were once attached to him, decorating the bland light grey floor, filling in the thin dark gaps between each tile and streaming all the way down to Eric's feet as he stood shocked, unable to move. The sheer randomness and horror of half a man still living, bleeding out, screaming in his pain that no human should have to feel. Eric tried to shut out the desperate, wailing pleas from the man drenched in red, but that would not be. Each cry for help that could never save him echoed in Eric's mind, bringing him to his knees in pain, clasping his hands over his ears, but unable to close his eyes at the sight ahead. The dying man's entrails hung out of his torso like so much useless, slick meat disappearing down the side hall. How could Eric know that he had only been on his knees there for seconds, not minutes, when a long haired woman appeared from the same hall the man was tossed out of, and with a short rattling burst and a small fiery flash filled the wretched body with bullets, finally silencing the inhuman screams.

    Nearly hyperventilating, Eric didn't have the time to process what was going on. He lifted up his knees touched with deep red, and limply threw himself around a corner, rolling more like a ragdoll than a trained killer, and the woman's charge at him ended at the closed door, and just as she turned back to him, aiming her gun coldly, the guards chasing Eric and the sounds of violence from this level reached the top of the stairs and forced open the door, distracting the woman. Eric was graced with one glimpse of her figure, wielding a sword and thickly bloodied up both of her arms up to just past her elbows. That was more than enough for him. He ran stumbling down the hallway he had rolled haphazardly into, and followed each and every one of its sharp turns, trying not to listen to the sounds of violent close quarters fighting behind him. He knew it must have been a massacre.

    Along the length of this hall the occasional light had been shot out, creating a dim environment that Eric could start feeling comfortable in again. Despite even that, his breathing was still fast and arrhythmic; he couldn't get the sights and sounds out of his thoughts. With that weighing on him, he continued forward, one hand sometimes pressing on the wall close by for support.

    When the fighting could no longer be heard from the main hall, Eric had reached another set of stairs going upwards. He breathed a sigh of deserved relief, and ran up as fast as his rapidly tiring legs would take him. There were two flights, just like the last stairway, and only the door at the top was different: it was constructed of light, stylish oak, and had only a small view hole instead of a full window. Eric pressed his eye to the hole, but saw nothing but blackness. He impatiently tried the silver handle, and when it failed to move he noticed a panel like the one at the very front of the building at ground level. He passed his hand lightly over it, and is authorized him to go through with another blue light. The handle twisted freely, and Eric stepped through and pressed the door shut, searching for a locking mechanism and when he couldn't find one, he took a nearby desk he saw out of the corner of his eye and barricaded the door with it.

    It took Eric a while to notice the drastic shift between this room and the ones before. Instead of cold steel tiles there was a carpet covering the entirety of the floor, delicately engraved wood panels on the wall, and instead of a hallway there was a small, comfortably lit space that looked to be a reception area. In one corner was a curved desk with an opening at one side for people to enter. No one was at work here. Eric crossed the room, going right from where he entered, and went through another door into a hallway, which was built much like the reception area. The lights, instead of being bare bulbs like the ones found below, were fancy and old styled, and provided a warm yellowish glow instead of a sterile white glare.

    Spaces where paintings or decorations of some kind may once have been were conspicuously on the wall, existing as dusty outlines on the light wood. Eric pressed forward, following each sharp turn of the hall until the passage went on no more, ending at a windowless oak door. Eric tested the knob; it was unlocked.


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    As usual, I hope this has been an entertaining read for everyone who's reading it! Though sadly so far that seems to be only one person, so thanks to my only reader! ;_;
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    It's back, right on time!

    *clap clap clap*

    I don't have particular criticism, but, as always, let me sum it to see if I got it: Eric enters the building, kills the guards but finds out that someone is already killing people, right?

    I fear this is a very, very nasty trap set for our hero... () and very good cliffhanger... what lies in the mysterious room?
    I think I already like the character of Amber.

    so thanks to my only reader!
    (yeah, unfortunately I don't think the doujin project section is well followed... )

    P.S.: is it just me, or do I spot some (futuristic) "noir" traces in this?

    P.P.S.: I didn't found even one homage ;_;



    If I'll think of something else, I'll post or edit.

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    Yes, this is very much a sort of sci-fi noir. I've tried to put some really 40's detective style narrative in most parts. And I'm glad you like Amber, she doesn't do much (yet) but later on...

    Oh, and the main homage so far? Well, there's a red-haired girl named Amber, who is a maid...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Five_X View Post
    Oh, and the main homage so far? Well, there's a red-haired girl named Amber, who is a maid...
    *smacks his own forehead*

    Kohaku! Well, you didn't say she has red-hair!

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    Yay, people ARE reading this in a relatively notable number! I am happeh now!
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    Two days have passed, so it is time for an update! This one has more homages, and it's even longerrrrr! No, not really.


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    He pushed the door slowly open, letting it express every creak and groan held in the hinges in such a cacophony that it made Eric wince. His right foot went forward just one step onto the red carpet, and the lights shut off absolutely. The hallway provided an arch of illumination into the first few feet of this new room, casting Eric's perplexed shadow onto the carpet, a simple, obvious target.

    There was the rush of bare, thudding footsteps from within the darkness, and Eric blindly drew his pistol and fired forward. The muzzle flash for barely a second revealed a figure in the small room with him. Eric ran ahead without thinking, firing off a few more shots randomly, hoping to get at least one wound on whoever was there. He couldn't see the metal pane he collided with, he only knew it was cold and that there was a long, straight crack going down a part of it. Pressing his back to the metal wall, Eric looked around, now directly across from the light shining in from hallway beyond the open door. To his left he noticed a green glowing panel, providing barely enough light to read the numbers on each of the round, flat buttons. He desperately bashed his hand against the panel and then turned back to the darkness, aiming his pistol straight forward, his arms shaking and making his aim jittery and useless. He felt a hot slice on his thigh, and he nearly dropped to one knee. Someone's shoulder careened into him, and just as he waved his pistol about trying to get a good shot, he toppled over backwards into a brass and tile room, very small and with a single light on the low ceiling. There was a panel right beside the new opening on the inside of this room. He knew then that he was in an elevator, with someone laying in top of him. Eric felt the tip of a knife bite into his shoulder, being pressed deeper and deeper. With a yell meant both to let out his pain and to energize himself, he grabbed hold of his foe and pushed him off, then made a rush at the panel.

    Eric pressed the topmost button in the descending line, and was pulled back by his shin, then fell to the ground, smashing his head on the tiles. The hair on the back of his head felt warm and wet and, ignoring that after the initial shock, he jumped at his attacker stuck in the elevator with him. He lost his slight advantage when the jolt of the elevator starting upwards took him by surprise, but he still managed to draw his knife and create a space between himself and the other person there. He saw in his quick analysis that this man wore a light blue coat and jeans and had a fierce, crazed look in his eyes as he gripped his knife, a switchblade, and came at Eric with a duck and a stomach-bound slice.

    Only the very tip cut him as Eric leaned forward to bring his stomach inward, dodging most of the attack. He utilized the window created by his attacker's missed slice to swing at his forearm. Blood flew out in a few dark red drips onto Eric's light grey trenchcoat, another stain.

    The man in blue tackled Eric to the ground, growling. His slender knife, gleaming with blood both fresh and cold, came down like a bolt of lightning, stabbing hard into Eric's clavicle. Eric's right arm nearly went dead limp, but even if it was only numb he didn't notice it as he lifted his injured arm and clamped his sanguine hand around his enemy's neck, locking in place as his elbow was pressed against the elevator's floor tiles from the weight of this man.

    With his other hand, Eric thrust his knife forward with all the strength he could muster and, yelling, impaled the attacker directly in his stomach, pushing both of their weapons deeper and deeper into each others flesh. Eric winced at the pressured pain, and through clouded eyes he could see that the man on top of him was much the same, but was completely quiet despite the biting penetration right through his coat and into his vital organs. Eric, on the other hand, was taking laboured breaths in and out through teeth clenched so tight that he felt that they might just all shatter if this went on any longer.

    An innocent "ding" chimed from the elevator, taking both combatants by surprise, if only for barely any longer than a second. Eric used this quick distraction

    to twist his knife around before his opponent could, and curled his wrist as much as it could in his enemy's flesh, then tore out harshly. Blood coughed out in an audible splatter both on Eric and the elevator floor, and the man wearing blue seemed to have had enough. He muttered a few words through heavy, panting breaths, then fell off of Eric, rolling slightly to the side. He looked dead, but Eric wasn't quite so sure as he left the elevator backwards for the first few steps, holding his sight on the beaten, reckless body lying there. Eric nodded slowly, solemnly, at his enemy for the good fight, and turned away.

    There appeared to be only one room on this floor, at the very peak of the Zephyr Corporation headquarters, far above the rest of the city. On one side of the hallway Eric found himself in was a wooden window, matching the similarly styled walls, and the curtains were drawn, offering a view of the nighttime vista. Looking out south at the city, there were a scant few lit up buildings, and only one or two near the harbour.

    The double doors to the next room, the only room, were of dark wood, engraved with a beautiful pattern, the same as on the red and gold rug at their feet. Eric wiped his blood stained boots on the rug, leaving a reddish brown smear across it, and looked for an access panel that controlled this entrance. There was none to be seen. He scoffed at this simplistic trick, and felt around the walls until he noticed a square section where the grains of wood didn't quite match. He pulled this out by the tips of his fingers and set it gently on the ground before getting to work on the panel.

    Kate had discreetly told him the seventeen digit password to the CEO's office on one of their meetings in the pub. It was an ears only affair that Eric couldn't write down on paper lest it be found by someone who had best not have that kind of knowledge, but he was good with numbers, and held it in his mind until this day.

    His fingers instinctively jabbed out the combination, confirmed it, and checked the door. There was no change from when he last saw it, but when he pressed his hands against it to open it, both doors pulled back on their own, and slid behind the wall, revealing a harshly decorated space over a dozen meters across that was the true antithesis of Giorgio's office. The floors were of grey steel, bathed in dim blue light, and the one area of any class was at the far end, too dark to detail beyond the outline of a painting, a desk, and the edges of a rug like the one just outside this room. To the left, the entire wall was covered with technical equipment, glowing softly, that Eric could only partially identify. There was a large computer with a small, active monitor, and a glass case embedded into the wall holding something beyond fogged glass. Two tall generators stood like silent guardians.

    A figure strode out of the darkened office beyond the computer equipment. He wore a grey pinstriped business suit with a matching tie, and held his hands clasped together behind his back in a way that wasn't suspicious but implied a level of habit or discipline that reminded Eric of soldiers back in London. They impressed him once, but not anymore. He stared at the man grimly. This was the final step to completing his contract, and the closeness of success and the rewards associated with it re-energized him.

    "Good evening." The CEO's words shocked Eric. He never expected him to be this calm, or put up so little resistance. "Good evening," He said again, "I know it may surprise you, but I did expect you. In fact I was told you were going to be infiltrating my company's tower here in order to kill me. Money is an incentive for all the sins of mankind, isn't it?"

    It was with that word, 'mankind', that Eric noticed how the man was... different. His eyes were a bright, expressive green and his skin had the cold paleness he associated always with zerks. He wasn't sure, but if he could see this man's ears at a better angle, they would have the distinctive sharpness of a zerk. He had all three qualifiers that visually identified a zerk from a human, the genetic modifications pressed onto their race for these exact purposes. Eric frowned. He was darkly amused that a zerk could actually ascend to command a business, but it wasn't enough to raise his opinion of these spiteful things barely better than wild animals. Their forced semblance to humans disgusted him, that they should share the same form as beings so superior.

    Eric drew his pistol and directed it directly at the zerk's chest. "I don't give a fuck about you and your motives for doing whatever the hell you're doing. I'm just here for the money."

    The zerk sighed. "Colin Richardson. That's my name, though I somehow doubt you would ask me that in the first place. Please, take my life now." With that, Eric shot him in the chest three times, and he fell backwards, his body shaking with each shot, but no matter how many bullets Eric fired into the zerk, his expression of near meditative calm never disappeared. Eric spat on his corpse as he walked by to get to the computers.

    Glowing lights of soft greens and blues and one yellow surrounded him. There was an alcove of sorts in between the generators and sprawling computer system, where there was a blank monitor and a rather simple set of controls set up.

    The monitor flashed on when Eric pressed what he assumed to be the power button, and fetched his USB flashdrive from his jeans pocket underneath his heavy coat. Once the computer had fully started up and the monitor showed a complexly laid out program, he plugged his flashdrive into a slot in the computer. Using the keyboard set up in front of the monitor he navigated around the program that had automatically started once the machine had booted up. There were dozens upon dozens of registry entries related to this one program, Eric had found, with seemingly randomly named files such as '33333333r+ag4444444444444gstrp1" and so on, all unrelated. After some time, though, Eric managed to discover a pattern to the names, and after even more searching he found a set of files that laid out the Zephyr Corporation's financial records, operating history and, in a case Eric found more than strange, the company's plan for the next year, going exactly to this same day in November, one year ahead.

    Eric copied all of the relevant files he found to his USB flashdrive, and as he finished going through all of the program's files, he found an unnamed function that had apparently only been added recently, according to system files. With unchecked curiosity fuelled by his excitement at having nearly completed his mission, Eric activated the function and removed his flashdrive.

    There was the sound of an electronic lock disengaging, then air decompressing, a whoosh reminiscent of the main door to the building Eric had first passed through. A klaxon light turned on right beside Eric's head, and when he looked over he saw that the glass case he had noticed earlier was open, and a technological marvel that in itself both answered and formed questions about the Zephyr Corporation, at least in Eric's mind. It was a rifle, its stock made from normal wood, but the body looked to be of well polished steel, and the barrel was surrounded by a greyish white coil that was tight to the barrel's metal. Otherwise, the scope and trigger were the same as just about any rifle Eric had seen before, and there was no clip, only a chamber that looked like it was ripped off of an Old Earth bolt action rifle, the kind find so very often in the hands of what New York had as national soldiers, or less than lawful gang members, like Moritz himself.

    Once he had climbed up a small stepladder to its level, Eric, with reverent hands, took the glorious piece of technology from its glowing white pedestal and gripped it tight, aiming towards the door, getting a feel of the rifle itself. It was remarkably comfortable; it felt right.

    It seemed Eric would get his chance to test out his new weapon sooner than he had hoped. Bursting through the still open doorway came a woman wielding a sword, with a submachinegun strapped to her hip. She was wearing a version of the London army uniform that Eric didn't recognize - he immediately assumed special forces. No ordinary soldier, at least one from London, would go in alone, and with a sword no less. He wasn't afraid, though, not with this rifle in his hands. He braced for an especially strong kickback, and aimed along the scope directly at her chest, hoping to bring her down if not kill her outright.

    The coils circling the barrel charged up with electricity held invisibly inside, unnoticeable save for a feeling of numbness on Eric's finger, a tiny crackle right by his ear against the rifle's body, and the gun becoming lighter and lighter with each passing second. The further Eric depressed the trigger, the more intense the snapping of the electric charge became, until he squeezed it fully.

    All the electricity built up within the rifle dissipated, building up to nothing. "Shit," Eric said to himself, "I didn't even put a bullet in there."

    The woman strode carefully over to him, her eyes diverting left and right, looking for anything that might be hiding in the plentiful shadows all across the room. Her curved, vicious sword was held loosely in her hand, letting the tip drag along the ground, leaving behind it a long black scar on the steel floor.

    "It's all or nothing." Eric whispered, and pulled a grey glove out of a pocket of his trenchcoat. The knuckles were studded with dark metal tips, matching the mesh covering the back of the hand that shined against the light glimmering behind Eric. He slipped the glove on his left

    hand without a hitch, and when the female soldier tried to fell him in one downward slice, he caught the blade in his gloved hand, and squeezed. Circuits underneath the mesh glowed, pulsing with life for a second, then dimming to a pale white. With this one hand Eric pushed back the sword, tilting the woman off balance, but not for very long.

    It was a one-sided battle, with Eric managing to get no strikes in on the woman who repelled his grabs and punches with precise swings of her sword and acrobatic leaps over his head and behind him, to the side, so that Eric lost track of her many times, only noticing her again when it was almost too late to react. It was when Eric was being pressed against the tightly bolted office desk at the other end of the room that they both stopped for a vaguely threatening announcement from speakers hidden up in the corners of the walls.

    "Server database has been compromised. Beginning internal purge."

    Eric looked around at the ceiling for the source of the voice, but it seemed to just be an automated message. The CEO was still lying there, the area around him thinly misted with blood spattered from Eric's gunshots. He flipped backwards over the desk when the woman pressed her assault. He was lying on his back on the office's carpet, right in front of the viewing window that was much like the one in Giorgio's office. Pressed against his neck was the sword, close enough to his flesh for him to feel it vibrating at a blindingly fast speed, invisible to the unaided eye and never before felt by anyone who wasn't about to be killed.

    The woman had a stoic frown on her face, framed by the lights of the computers and the hall outside. "I am out of ammunition. If I were not, you would already have been-" she began, but was cut off when Eric caught her just at the right moment with his left hand, grabbing her by her sword, standing up, and tossing her over his shoulder out of the window. She shattered the delicate framed glass, and her sword followed her descent to the street three hundred feet below.

    The announcement continued, repeating over and over again. While that woman had him pinned down, he had noticed dozens of soldiers, guards of the now deceased CEO, rushing in through the door in twos, all armed with assault rifles, and all aiming at this man standing directly behind their late leader's desk. One stepped forward, their face masked by a tinted visor attached to a black bulletproof helmet, and they effortlessly swung the hard stock of their rifle up to the side of Eric's head, knocking him straight to the ground, and deafening him to all the commotion that rose up just afterwards. In a state of drifting consciousness, the last image he saw was the blood of the same soldier erupting out through new holes in his body, then his corpse falling into Eric numbly, and a tall man standing over them both, holding a heavy gun that looked like it belonged on a helicopter, not in a man's hands. Then, all his senses faded.


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    I had to decide what I was going to do with this, and I decided to go for the short but good and cliffhangy route. You don't get to meet a new character as I had planned, but that will all come on Sunday. Be prepared!
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    Good, waiting for the next chapter.

    I am prepared.



    ... I need a little help with the homages (the woman is Ryougi? ).

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    Not everyone is an homage, though the man in blue with the knife certainly is.

    I'm glad to hear that YOUR BODY IS READY.
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    ... Nanaya? Lio?

    inb4 DERP.

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