...Wow, I'm honored, but aren't we voting for creators as opposed to specific sheets? Del?
...Wow, I'm honored, but aren't we voting for creators as opposed to specific sheets? Del?
Oh shit didn't realize there's two of your sheets in my votes. But the last contest were voting for sheets only.
Edit: Fixed
Last edited by TQG Imaginatorious; September 22nd, 2022 at 04:53 PM.
Honorable Mentions:
Carl Tanzler: BnEl15 - As always, a cool sheet, and I love the personality you built and how you set up Elena.
1 Point: Marie Curie: NailsOnYourFeet - Cool idea, and I love how you set up the personality and the second NP.
2 Points: Martha Christina Tiahahu: BnEl15 - Impressive idea, and I love the dancebattle addition to her Second NP.
3 Points: Den Lille Havmand: Sutaa - I love how you set up Sea Witch's Gifts and the Air ascension! And really, creative idea!
1 Point: Vididii, for doing their own art and, more biasedly, having their Servant react to both my entries
2 Points: Sutaa
3 Points: BnEl15, though actually a bit more for Tiahahu than Tanzler
1 Point: TQG’s Nezha
Really liked how you leaned into their nature as an automata- also, extra points on the FC, that shit’s mad cool.
2 Points: Nails’s Marie Curie
There’s buff lady points in here, but like, this is just a really fun sheet to me. Great personality on her, potentially DEVASTATING abilities, and rather fucking balanced.
3 Points: Stein’s Raikou
Legitimately surprised this isn’t stolen from the Lasengle offices to be used for an upcoming event. Good shit, has that proper feel.
Okay, finally have free time!
Reviews!
Marie Curie: Fun concept. I’d probably dial up the crazy/zero impulse control more, but that’s the trade off with making a character more dynamic rather than more exaggerated. The second NP is super cool.
Sun Shangxian: I feel like making her a Zerker is kinda forced. Personally speaking, I think Berserkers should either be mindless, or so distorted that they don’t function at a normal human level, light Kiyohime or Nightingale. The Opposite Reaction skill is sick.
Summer Barghest: Anything with Best Dog Wife is inherently great. The Dog Days skill is really clever. I’m absolutely down for Sea Monster Fishing Expedition Summer.
Voyager II: For some reason, I’m not really feeling this one. I feel like Voyager works better solo, rather than as a duo.
The Little Merman: Huh. If you think about it, the Mermaid being a guy kinda works as a reflection of Andersen, since he struggled with the taboos regarding homosexuality during his lifetime. Clever take.I like the little parallel with his NP and Andersen’s.
Martha Christina Tiahahu: Once again, a solid rework of a past sheet that was already really cool. Unlimited Bamboo Works and Ghost Spears are just really fun NPs, The Bond CE slaps. Solid work.
Nezha: Yes, thank you! I can’t stand how undercooked canon Nezha is. There’s just so much more to do with her, designwise, characterwise, storywise, powerwise…
The spear NPs effect is sick, and a fun play on the whole “anti-trait” thing from FGO. Her monster form should ABSOLUTELY be a canon NP, so good job including it here.
The idea of actually using the gender dysphoria angle is awesome and I’d love to see a story that actually played around with it. Great sheet!
Votes!
3 Points: Imaginatorius' Nezha!
2 Points: BnEl's Tanzler and Tiahahu!
1 Point: Vididii's Barghest!
Last edited by DrStein; September 23rd, 2022 at 08:57 PM.
Reviews to come later hopefully, but for now! Voting:
3 Points: BnEl15 (Tanzler and Tiahahu)
2 Points: DrStein (Raikou)
1 Point: Vididii (Barghest)
1pt: Dr. Stein's Raikou
Mm, now that's badass. While I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, I've never felt especially bothered by canon Raikou's mommy kink. I just felt pretty neutral towards her, most of the time. Yours is a major improvement over the original, though.
2pts: Sutaa's Little Merman
A reverse genderbend? That's rare. And it actually works on top of that? Also, romance and angst? Those are just the two things I vibe with.
3pts: TQG's Nezha
An excellent rework of a Servant that I agree FGO has been sleeping on most of the time. I feel like I learned about and cared more about her through this sheet than her canon FGO appearances so far. Gotta admire how you integrated so much of her legend to her overall skillset. Nice work.
Honorable mentions:
Vance's Voyager II
Precious daughteru points.
Nails' Marie Curie
Compared to other depictions of her in this site, she doesn't feel as... science-y? Still, I welcome this different take on her. Radioactive mommy heck yeah.
Raikou is an incredibly good and complex character...in theory.
She just needs a Stay Night-tier deep dive into her history, world-view, and psychosis to actually get that across to most of the audience.
There's plenty of depth there if you go around analyzing all her appearances and profiles, but why bother for a character who comes of as annoying at first glance?
1 pt BnEl15
2 pts Dr. Stein
3 points sutaa
i count the votes in 4h or so
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Thanks for your participation, folks
If i had the drive to bring my rework of Yang Guifei properly to paper, i may have contributed too.
3rd place is DrStein with 10pts
2nd place is sutaa also with 10pts but the tie breaker were more 3pt votes for him
1st place is our boy BnEl15 with 14pts
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Congratulations to the winners! Not a whole lot of sheets but all of them were great.
Also, holy shit, 7 points for me?! That's like and correct me on this, if I counted correctly, 4th place if using the above list or 3rd place if you put sutaa and DrStein together... How is this happening? Am I dreaming? Have I improved that much or is the canon Nezha really that easy to rework?
EYYYYYY fuck yeah lads, congrats! Can’t wait for the next battle!
Hey, not bad for my first posted sheet. Thanks for the votes, guys!
greetings fellas
are you still exhausted from the juggernaut that was the previous contest?
Too bad, here is the next one
run wild, fellasDivinities.
Saints and prophets who feel especially close to their god(s), demigods and descendants of ancient deities, people deified posthumously, emissaries of eldritch beings... anything works, so long as the Servant has Divinity (or some similar equivalent) as a Skill.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
time for the 50th ~
mine would be the 80th.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
A perfect reason to check out my old, crappy sheets.
Oh thank god, I got an option on a technicality
Do I even have anyone...? I could post that chad Rider that I was going to put in F\lc before I settled on Kublai...
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