Fate/Natara

[Greedol]

Hello, I'm a new member here and want to share my fanfic.

Here's my fanfic : https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47890/fate-natara

Please help me to improve this fanfic by giving feedback and point out the mistakes I made because of my lack understanding of nasuverse.

[Greedol]

Can dark sakura 'eat' the weapons that gilgamesh throw at her ?

[warellis]

Maybe? I think she used her portals to try to swallow some of them (to prevent them from hitting her).