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    1: "European Aboriginals" A Servant of the Ancient to pre-Christian non-Greek/Roman Europe. A Person or God from the so called Barbaric Tribes of Europe, regardless if from Spain, to the border of Europe. Be it Chieftain, Warrior, or even a God or Goddess of the European Pantheon, like Slavic or Germanic Culture for instances.

    2: "Ancient Celebrities of the Polytheistic Levantine Cultures" A Person from the old Mesopotamian, Assyrian, Hittite, Babylonian Worlds and so forth. A Person of renown of the Polytheistic Age of the Near East be it legendary Ruler, Hero or Mage.

    3: "Antique Roman Statesman" A Statesman of Rome, be it a legendary King of its time as City Kingdom, a General or Official of the Republican Days or a Roman Emperor from the Imperial Age.




    Class: Caster

    Alignment: Neutral Evil

    Alternate Class: Avenger, Shielder(?), Lancer(?), Rider(?)

    Place of Origin: Finnish myth, Kalevala

    Traits: Humanoid, Servant, Female, Divine Spirit, Weak to Enuma Elish, Queen

    Attribute: Sky

    Parameters:
    STR - E
    END - D
    AGI - D
    MGI - A++
    LUK - C
    NP - EX

    Class Skills:


    Territory Creation: EX

    Creation of a "Temple", which is superior to a "Workshop", becomes possible. Furthermore, any territory no matter how big or small confers equal bonuses as if it was properly consecrated so long as it contains the properties of either “darkness” or “a cave.” Also allows for the creation of a special territory that combines these two parameters.

    Item Construction: B

    Things such as potions of immortality are frankly beyond her reach…no, it’s more that she never had a reason to try that hard. Enough skill to produce common magical items, but retrofitting a Divine Construct that was created while she was present and observing seems to be her limit.

    Goddess Divine Core: EX

    A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from changing no matter how much calories are absorbed.

    A daughter of Tuoni, god of death and the incarnation of darkness. Though she’s treated as an offshoot, Caster’s divinity never seems to lessen. The truth is that Caster’s identity varied from region to region within the Finno-Ugric world. Sometimes she was remembered as a simple witch of revenge, sometimes she was indistinguishable from the goddess of death. The Caster summoned here simply reflects the myth of a certain area of Finland. Because she is purely a Divided Spirit, she is able to exhibit this Skill at its maximum.


    Personal Skills:

    Protection of the Underworld: EX

    The Authority of the Queen of the Underworld. Until her rule comes to an end, she who controls the underworld is the underworld itself, as well as the queen protected by its bounds.

    The Hostess (Queen) of Pohjola. Caster’s occupation and title within the Kalevala. Pohjola, also known as Manala (“land under the earth”), Sariola (“land of sleep”), and Tuonela (“land of the dead”), is the Finnish Underworld. A land of darkness and spirits, with Caster at their head.

    Provides support to all allies within her territory.

    High-Speed Divine Words: A

    A Skill that assists with magical incantations via a power to activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. The language of the Age of Gods, back when words played a heavy role in spellcasting. As such, it is a power long lost by modern magi. It is particularly useful for direct attack magic.

    Not the Divine Words found within the world of the ancient Mediterranean, but those found in the taiga of the ancient Finno-Karelia region. Called runo or rune-singing, surprisingly it has practically nothing to do with the Magical System derived from Odin found in the rest of Scandinavia. The word runo is simply a loanword from Proto-Norse, which means “secret” or “mystery.” A secondary, sacred language that speaks directly to the Earth.

    Greater magecraft-level Magecraft can be cast at the speed of Single-Action spells.

    Shapeshift: C

    A Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change.

    Caster is capable of transforming herself either partially or completely into a variety of birds, which were her specialty in life. From doves to eagles, and even a giant bio-mechanical dragon known as Pseudo-Demonic Spirit of the Air: Kokko after modifying her body. Incidentally, this functions as a Noble Phantasm for Caster in one of her other forms.


    Noble Phantasms:
    Pohjola Pakkanen
    Extirpation of all Heat


    Type: Anti-Country
    Rank: A


    "Moon of gold and Sun of silver,
    Hide your faces in the caverns
    Of Pohyola's dismal mountain;
    Shine no more to gladden Northland,
    Till I come to give ye freedom,
    Drawn by coursers nine in number,
    Sable coursers of one mother!"


    The inherent power to manipulate the forces of freezing, snow, and congealing. A frozen Underworld forcibly applied to the surface.

    Though Caster is the originator and mother of frost in the Finno-Ugric texture, this ability is both unrelated and of far more potency than her normal Authority.

    At the climax of the Kalevala, with the Sampo already lost to the sea and her other methods of revenge failing her, Caster chose to be reckless. If she couldn’t hurt the heroes of Kalevala directly, she would bring her fury to bear against the prosperity of the very land itself. The Sun and Moon were neatly excised from reality, instantly creating an immobile world of silence.

    Not the “generation of ice and snow” but rather the complete removal of heat value at a conceptual level. Water molecules in the air itself may undergo instant sublimation, ice at the level of glaciers can be casually willed into existence and dissolved with a thought.

    A Bounded Field originating from Caster that fundamentally rejects the Concept of “heat” as well as those held under the umbrella of “Sun” and “Moon.” Magecraft aligned with the element of fire is functionally negated completely, while enemy combatants with strong ties to the Sun (Karna, Tamamo, etc) or the Moon (Artemis, Caligula, etc) will be at a severe disadvantage.

    However, because the Sun and Moon still exist within a domain under Caster’s control, the heat sapped from the world can be temporarily reconstituted; concentrated into a single point in order to create a facsimile of the heavenly bodies she’s stolen away. Because she has no Authority in this area, however, it’s nothing but an imitation. Quite similar to the Idea Blood of a certain Dead Apostle.

    Sammas Marjatta
    Fragment of the Lost Dream


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: C

    A Divine Construct created by the hero-god of smithing and forges, Ilmarinen. A pre-ordained existence, one promised to Caster after she saved the principal hero of the Kalevala, Väinämöinen, from drowning after a fateful encounter with the villain Joukahainen. After rejecting several other rewards for her hospitality, Caster asks for “the Sampo.”

    Väinämöinen, incapable of doing what Caster wished, assured her that he would have Ilmarinen construct the Sampo for her in exchange for safe passage back to Kalevala. After Ilmarinen is tricked into going to Pohjola by Väinämöinen, the smith god eventually acquiesces after Caster promises him her most beautiful daughter. After recreating his forge in the Northland, Ilmarinen gets to work.

    But four times he fails.

    Four times he creates a thing of evil.

    And then at last, the promised treasure. But this Noble Phantasm doesn’t encapsulate the completed Sampo, rather it’s a combination of the “items before the Sampo” as well as “what was left” after the Sampo was destroyed. At the climax of the Kalevala, Caster was only left with the “lid-in-colors” of the Sampo, deprived of its completed power.

    However, the failures Ilmarinen created were still existences that could be verified by the World.

    Combined with her own personal nature, Caster was able to take the remnants of the shattered Sampo and reconstruct it into a modular Mystic Code based on Ilmarinen’s previous attempts. It’s capable of reshaping itself into a flying ship or a self-operating plow, but Caster tends to keep its “rest state” that of a small orbiting weapons platform conducting protocols that automatically guard Caster with showers of powerful curses. This of course is derived from the Sampo’s first ever initial form, that of a divinely evil crossbow:

    On the first day, Ilmarinen
    Downward bent and well examined,
    On the bottom of his furnace,
    Thus to see what might be forming
    From the magic fire and metals.
    From the fire arose a cross-bow,
    "With the brightness of the moonbeams,
    Golden bow with tips of silver;
    On the shaft was shining copper,
    And the bow was strong and wondrous,
    But alas! it was ill-natured,
    Asking for a hero daily,
    Two the heads it asked on feast-days.

    It’s not that Caster really needs the extra help when it comes to combat–far from it–the fact remains that she more than most is fully aware of the treacherous and conniving nature of mankind, and thus refuses to leave openings in her defenses out of any sense of pride.

    If she can be convinced to calm down, or if she has a need for gathering information, Sammas Marjatta can also take the form of a mechanical familiar mimicking the form of a great cow.



    Sammas Marjatta
    Heavens, Sing the Song of the End


    Type: Anti-Fortress / Anti-Divine
    Rank: EX

    The Sampo as an artifact has been notoriously hard to define by modern mages and scholars.

    Some call it a magic mill, a wish-granting vessel with properties similar to the First Magic. A Holy Grail of the North. This definition stuck mostly due to the prosperity the Sampo heaped on its owner.

    The truth of the matter is that the Sampo, derived from the earlier sammas (pillar) was the World Pillar of the Finnish texture. The true purpose of Ilmarinen’s magnum opus was a mere manufactured replacement meant to keep the three distinct worlds of Finnish cosmology separated and held in eternal stasis.

    The original Finnish World Tree, a divine oak, was corrupted and evil from its very sprouting. The primordial sea dragon Iku-Turso’s fire was responsible for stoking the growth of the World Tree, but like a cancer the tree grew so tall that it threatened the very heavens. After its destruction at the hands of Väinämöinen and his allies, Caster–concerned with the balance of the universe as a magus–never stopped hoping for a proper replacement. When Väinämöinen drifted ashore in Pohjola on that fateful day, she knew her opportunity had come.

    But, that mindset wasn’t one that could last amid harsh reality.

    Mankind’s greed and evil nature revolted Caster to her core, an opinion continually reinforced by the constant harassment and death that followed the heroes of the Kalevala wherever they went.

    After killing her children. After killing her husband. After all of that, those monsters came for the only thing she had left.

    Why?

    …No. It’s far too late to ask a question like that. Complete and utter destruction is the only fate waiting for those who are truly evil.

    Even if it takes a thousand years, my grudge will outlast the world you belong to, Son of the Waters.

    As a Noble Phantasm, the True Release of Sammas Marjatta is a reenactment of the Sampo’s destruction, and Caster’s curse which followed. A spear falling from the heavens to enact judgment on the World itself. It’s no surprise that it’s very similar to its conceptual “sister” Rhongomyniad.

    As with the battle at Camlann signifying the end of the Age of Gods in Britain, the destruction of the Sampo inevitably led to the passing of Mystery within Finland. The “Marjatta” portion of the Noble Phantasm’s name refers to the final runo of the Kalevala, in which the new protagonist Marjatta appears as the heroine of a changing, Christianizing Finland. Väinämöinen, berated by Marjatta’s Christ-like child, senses that the time of heroes like him has finally come to a close. The Kalevala ends with Väinämöinen sailing away, the Age of Gods and the heroes it epitomizes never to be seen again.

    Caster’s revenge on the whole world given form.

    Ah…but…

    It hurts too.

    It won’t bring any of them back. It won’t make any of the others reconcile with what they did.

    Therefore, isn’t it best to start over?


    Lore:


    The Witch-Goddess of Finland: Louhi.

    A child of the god of death Tuoni, Louhi has existed in some form since the beginning of the Finnish conception of time. A goddess in her own right. However, due to the way the gods interacted with the people within the Finno-Karelian texture, she is also remembered as a mortal being. In the end the dichotomy is meaningless. Louhi is Louhi, and her true value lies in her role within the Kalevala.

    She first appears in person as Väinämöinen’s savior after the immortal sage narrowly avoided being assassinated by the Sami villain Joukahainen. The Hostess of Pohja readily heals the hero’s wounds, asking for the creation of the Sampo in exchange for safe delivery back home. Väinämöinen reluctantly agrees, tricking Ilmarinen the smith-god into helping. After receiving her prize, Louhi is more than happy to be a passive force for the rest of the story, were it not for the heroes of Kalevala.

    Lemminkäinen, one of the triumvirate of southern heroes, steals away Louhi’s daughter Kyllikki. After Kyllikki broke a promise made between her and Lemminkäinen, the hero storms Pohjola and demands Louhi’s official permission and blessing. In a role similar to the Greek Eurystheus, Louhi functions as an overarching obstacle to the given hero she encounters by providing them with increasingly difficult labors. Louhi and her challenges are ultimately not the ones responsible for Lemminkäinen’s death, it was his own recklessness and disregard for others. And yet, upon his resurrection, he derides Louhi as evil.

    Later, in a fight over Lemminkäinen’s supposed snubbing of Ilmarinen’s marriage, he assaults Pohjola again and murders Louhi’s husband the Master of Pohjola.

    And that was the first loved one they took from her.

    Meanwhile, both Väinämöinen and Ilmarinen vy for the Maiden of the Rainbow (sometimes known as Ilpator), another of Louhi’s daughters and the one promised to Ilmarinen in exchange for the Sampo. Ilmarinen is finally wed, and for a time things are well both in Kalevala and in Pohjola.

    Until the arrival of the cursed child, Kullervo. Adopted by Ilmarinen, the Maiden of the Rainbow’s fear and hatred for Kullervo eventually leads to her death. Even her husband, a demigod, did nothing to save the Maiden.

    And that was the second loved one they took from her.

    Saddened and angered at the loss of his wife, Ilmarinen confronts Louhi in Pohjola and demands a “replacement” in the form of her second daughter. The Hostess refuses, and Ilmarinen, like Lemminkäinen before him, kidnaps her. Unlike Kyllikki, this daughter makes no attempt to hide her hatred of Ilmarinen. Finally, Ilmarinen reaches a boiling point and transforms the daughter into a seagull, never to be seen again.

    And that was the third loved one they took from her.

    And yet, throughout these ordeals, Louhi is never described as anything less than evil.

    Why?

    It didn’t matter. The definition of “evil” had been applied to her against her will, regardless of her feelings. Regardless of how much she had lost. She had become a mere scapegoat that the childish heroes of Kalevala could blame for all of their many misfortunes. If that were the case…if that were the case, then she would become the evil they had so desired.

    The war between Kalevala and Pohjola came to a head when the three heroes of Kalevala sought to steal back the Sampo for themselves, jealous of the prosperity it had brought to Louhi and her land of frost and death. But the witch queen would not let it go without a fight, one she would end up losing. Fragments of the Sampo would be recovered by Väinämöinen, sown into the land of Kalevala to impart it with the Sampo’s blessings of prosperity. The reality of the situation was too much to bear for Louhi, who could never return to the peaceful woman who had only ever acted in self-defense. Her bitterness and hatred would cause her to lash out at Kalevala with increasing ferocity, no longer wishing for any sort of understanding or forgiveness.

    But even this was not enough. Even though she knew she was justified. Even though she sent monsters and thousands of undead warriors to war with Kalevala. Even though she altered the very cosmos itself with her passion, Louhi’s fate was never to be remembered as a winner. Her final scene in the Kalevala has her fleeing in terror from Ilmarinen, who had sworn to bind her with an iron choker to the same rock in which Louhi had hidden the Sampo.

    Because Louhi had been wrong all this time.

    The one thing she truly had left to lose had been her own freedom. Freedom from her own rage, a prospect that surely must have been terrifying.

    She will never be remembered as a hero by anyone other than her own countrymen. To everyone else, she will always be the duplicitous, callous, evil Louhi.

    Perhaps that is enough.


    Relationships


    Medea:

    “Witch of Betrayal…is it? That name is ill-fitting, so I refuse to use it. What, modeling? Don’t be ridiculous, I’m not worth your time.”

    An extreme case of similarities. Though Louhi respects her as an individual, she’s incapable of ignoring the similarities between their two stories. She’s happy for Medea that, while her story ended poorly, she did indeed make memories with friends along the way. Unfortunately, Louhi was never able to experience anything like that for herself…so jealous.

    Because of the age difference, the shattered remains of her motherly instincts are stirred. Medea Lily might give her a heart attack. From a distance. From a distance…

    Luviagelita Edelfelt (Astraea):

    Nothing but sneers. Louhi pays no attention to the spirit within, only the girl that is the shell. The Edelfelt family’s tendency towards theft and rampant opportunism reminds Louhi to a debilitating degree of Luvia’s countryman Väinämöinen. She’ll gladly compare Finn Shots, however…no, maybe that’s a bad idea.

    Sitoni:

    A High-Servant who boasts Louhi as one of her components. Though she takes a backseat to both Sitonai herself and the shell that is Illya, Louhi is of course able to sense that a fragment of “herself” is contained within. Awkwardly watches her from a distance, but the girl’s clear maturity is something the witch queen has trouble reconciling.

    Senji Muramasa:

    A mixture of disgust and fear, resulting in instant violence if Louhi doesn’t run away to hide first. The young body and belligerence of Lemminkäinen, the forging ability of Ilmarinen, and the aged personality of Väinämöinen. Perhaps it’s shallow, but seeing all three combined in one vessel is too much.

    Notes


    So this was the sheet mentioned in the Womb thread, obviously. While I couldn’t help myself from committing the sin of comparison, I think I brought enough to the table to differentiate Louhi from the other two(?) sheets she has floating around here. If she comes across as basically a wanked Medea, I don’t exactly blame you but their shared archetype exists for a reason.

    Shoutouts to Verg and Adlet for their own takes, which are also great. However, we have bits and pieces of Finnish myth finally represented in the form of Sitonai (some Skills and Pohjola Pakannen are just Illya’s but tweaked) and Riyo Saber, who is very very obviously ya boy Väinämöinen. I think I’d like to do my own takes on him as well as a Rider Lemminkainen, but those will probably come later.

    Something interesting I found in my research is the general perspective on magic in the Finno-Ugric culture, building off what was mentioned in Louhi’s Divine Words Skill. The magicians in the Kalevala are described as “singing their target into [X]” like with the fight between Väinämöinen and Joukahainen which is clearly reminiscent of Water aligned alchemy (I couldn’t stop thinking of Heine from CF and his Living Stone), but further research seems to imply that it is in fact closer to shamanism: the magician falls into a trance, manipulating the spirits within everything in order to cause physical change. The third option is there are two distinct styles of magic, one endemic to Kalevala/Finland (runo singing) and one that’s more associated with the Sami (shamanism). I think that if Louhi were a magus of the modern day, she would definitely be closer to a shaman, but because she’s a goddess I think giving her Divine Words is still appropriate, especially given the context of the story.

    This does make me wonder about things like Gandr and Luvia. Gandr is described as Rune Magecraft without actually using Runes…so I’m wondering if the Finnish runo, which is its own term that hasn’t had any relation to the mystical alphabet in centuries, was shoved under the umbrella of Rune Magecraft because reasons. Either way, if Luvia’s Gandr is strong enough to physically affect reality at the level of a pistol shot, Louhi’s would be closer to a ballistic missile.

    I might have missed a few cases of italics when referencing to the Kalevala as a book instead of a place. It's like if the Iliad was just called Troy and they go to Troy and also somebody's name is Troy.

    I would have tried for a second sheet but I was sick as a fucking dog for the first week of the contest. I hope whoever receives her enjoys!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pool 14
    Physicist or Theorist: This one is simple create a servant based on a scientific advancement of physics or a theory that they crafted.

    Chemist/Alchemist: Servants based on scientist that have made advancements in the field of chemist

    Engineer/Inventor: A Servant that made their mark on history based on their inventions



    Happy Christmas and a belated New Year to you, my mysterious Secret Santa friend! This sheet is smeared all over with my blood and tears, I hope you like it.





    “It comes down to this, then... I wonder how am I supposed to go on, now. —Oh, no, it’s not your fault! It was me who was careless. ——Well! No use dwelling on the past! I’m definitely not one of those who are supposed to come with a serious summoning line, anyway. I’m Avenger, Antoine Lavoisier, a most useless Servant. Sheesh, what horrible breach of trust, right? I bet that now you’ve lost all curiosity since I already revealed my true name, right? I bet you want to give up reading more, right? ——Not really, no? Ugh.”




    Avenger
    — A FLAME OF HOPE —



    Class: Avenger
    Other Classes: Caster
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Origin: Historical Fact

    Height: 146 cm | 4'9''
    Weight: 39 kg | 85,9 lbs

    Natural Enemy: Abbé Grégoire
    Attribute: Human
    Traits: Humanoid, Servant, Male, Child Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish


    STRENGTH: E

    ENDURANCE: E

    AGILITY: E

    MANA: E


    LUCK: E

    NOBLE PHANTASM: E






    BOND 1
    CLASS SKILLS





    Avenger: E-

    The flow of time, avenged.

    His story, purified.

    A Skill that became meaningless by design and by circumstance, both working in tandem. At this Rank, he cannot naturally gather hostility from others anymore—and in the event of being on the receiving end of antipathy, the mana generation of such an event isn’t even noteworthy.



    Oblivion Correction: E

    Humans easily forget with the passage of time, but the ones trampled by destiny never forgets...

    “That is indeed a thing, but I think we can all agree that’s still a little upsetting. I’d rather think about something nice. —Oh! I know! Reading is nice. What sort of literature do you modern humans fancy?”

    A wishy-washy personality so pervasive that manages to degrade even the highest of Ranks to their lowest possible limit.



    Magic Resistance:

    Because of the personal Skill Self-Stagnation, his Magic Resistance Rank seems to fluctuate so much that it is currently as good as being non-existent.



    Item Construction: EX

    A consequence of his Darkness for the Light personal Skill. At this point, he is able to bypass the whole gathering of materials stage and jump straight into the creation process. A Skill reserved to the most experienced of Alchemists, usually, but it somehow manifested within his Saint Graph.

    One can notice him widening his eyes at the Rank and then mumbling something about 「not managing to hold it in」or something.






    BOND 2
    PART I





    It’s about working hard, resting when you need to, leading a healthy life, and having a support structure around you. It’s about remembering every day to not to fall into the trap of resting on your laurels and doing the same thing the next time, believing it’ll work twice in a row. Quite simple, huh?

    Who knew leading a proper life could be so difficult when we apply these variables to it!

    —Truly, to live is an ever-changing science that he still fails to grasp.


    “Thank goodness that’s a burden reserved only for you, living beings.” He declares, unabashedly enjoying the prospect of an iddle life. Hey, who told you that one has to actually learn these lessons in one lifetime?

    “By the way, nice to meet you! Oh, oh! But I told you already, right? That I’m Antoine Lavoisier? What a shame... There’s really nothing else for you here, I bet you know everything about a person like me already, so... ——Eh, what do you mean, you want to keep going!?”






    BOND 3
    PART II





    Height / Weight: 146cm・39kg
    Source: Historical Fact
    Region: France
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Gender: Male


    “Oh? Why am I wearing these oversized clothes, you ask? Well, let’s say that’s definitely not because I’m trying my best to find every imaginable excuse to not be put in a fight in the foreseeable future... If that’s not it, then maybe I’m channeling that young moe-sode appeal, what about that hypothesis? ——No, no, I’m definitely not going to grow into them!”

    His cheeky smile sours for the briefest of moments with this mere thought. Please, refrain from implying such a future ever again, yes?






    BOND 4
    PART III





    “Ehhh...! Do we really have to do this!? Aren’t you satisfied if I say I’m an Avenger, I’m kinda useless, but I’m cute so I’m the perfect company for an ice-cream date?”

    —Uhh, no. That’s definitely not enough.

    “Fine, fine! But really, it’s not going to be interesting at all, I’m warning you—”


    Once upon a time, chemistry was not as rigorous a science as it is today.

    Chemical elements and compounds were not yet well understood, and the phlogiston theory was still prevalent—a theory in which the 「element phlogiston」 was contained in combustible materials and released during combustion. The composition of air was largely unknown, for it was still considered an element. The conservation of mass during chemical reactions was not considered a universal law, and chemical experiments were seldom quantitative.

    Antoine Lavoisier made breakthroughs in all of these topics and, thus, is often considered the father of modern chemistry.

    Born into a privileged family on 1743 in France’s capital city, Paris, between the ages of 11 and 18, he was educated at Collège des Quatre-Nations, a college of the University of Paris. He studied general subjects there, including the sciences in his final two years. Although he was very attracted to the sciences, he enrolled in Law school, aiming to pursue the same career as his father.

    Although Mr. Lavoisier had encouraged his son to believe that science was merely a hobby, and after two years studying law and being awarded a bachelor’s degree, he still decided against this. In the same year he obtained his license to practice law, he also published his first scientific paper. For this, he was elected to the French Academy of Sciences.


    “Oh, oh! I know a story of my times in the Academy! Me and some colleagues all bought a pretty diamond and then, for some reason, we placed it in a closed glass jar. One of the guys thought it would be funny to use a giant magnifying glass to focus the sun’s rays on the diamond... I suppose he wanted to see a rainbow or something... Or maybe, he was one of those who just wanted to see the world burn... Anyway! Instead, the diamond burned and disappeared! Isn’t that swell—uhh, I mean, cool?”

    Did you just... Said swell, like an old man?

    “*GASP* I’d never!”






    BOND 5
    PART IV




    Piggybacking this anecdote, Lavoisier noted the overall weight of the jar was unchanged, even though all of the diamond had disappeared. This observation would later be part of the evidence convincing him that his law of mass conservation was correct.

    “Boy, I remember I didn’t sleep at all that night, all giddy by this revelation! —I suppose it’s like... The feeling of chugging Mountain Dew and deciding to pull an all-nighter to finish all your papers? Except I was looking forward to it?” So that’s nothing like pulling an all-nighter!?

    ——Anyway, not only that, but whether diamond or charcoal were burned by the giant lens, the same gas was produced—we now call it carbon dioxide. He then realized that diamond and charcoal are different forms of the same element.

    He gave this element the name 「carbon.」


    Also, in 1772, people still did not understand the process of burning. They had inconsistent and confused theories, mainly the one in which existed in every combustion the 「element phlogiston」, an undetectable substance which sometimes had negative mass.

    “Crazy, right!? If anything, I’m glad that people these days laugh at it instead of even entertaining the idea.” ——Please, stop interrupting me.

    Anyway, an English colleague helped to determine what exactly is added and lost during combustion: in 1774, Joseph Priestley isolated oxygen, which he still considered a form of air deprived of 「phlogiston」. And during a visit to Paris, Priestley informed the Academy of Sciences of his discovery. Lavoisier repeated Priestley’s experiments and concluded that the type of air isolated by Priestley was reponsible for the weight gain during combustion. Since Lavoisier’s work enjoyed a great advantage over many other scientists, namely his great passion for making accurate measurements since he pursued quantitative rather than qualitative science, he then coined the name 「oxygen」 for the element released during the experiments. He found that this 「oxygen」 made up 20% of air and was vital for combustion and respiration. He also concluded that when phosphorus or sulfur are burned in air, the products are formed by the reaction of these elements with oxygen.

    Lavoisier published the first modern list of chemical elements in 1789. It contained 33 elements, of which 23 are chemical elements in the modern sense. In the same publication, Traité Élémentaire de Chimie, which is considered the first modern chemistry textbook, he formulated his most famous theory and gave an early definition for the chemical elements. In it, the well-known definition of his theory of conservation of mass is found: 『Nothing is lost and nothing is created—everything is transformed.』

    “That being said... You do have a librarian here, right? Do you think they’d have some Science books lying around? I’m not trying to get my groove back or anything—please! I wanna rest!—but I also would hate being stuck reading only chick lits. Oh, my wife loved those, though...”

    —Wow, don’t say such things with this appearance!






    BOND 6
    PART V




    In addition to his scientific research, Lavoisier was industrious in other fields. At the age of 26, he bought into a company that gathered tax for the French government. Having done this, he tried to reform tax law to help poorer taxpayers. He also served on the government’s gunpowder commission, improving the quality of French gunpowder considerably.

    —However, then came the year of 1789.

    Looking back, perhaps it had not been a very good idea to be involved with taxation in the middle of the French Revolution...

    During these trying times, wealthy people and anyone who had worked for the government were under threat. Although at first he managed to remain unnoticed, in 1793 the revolutionaries put an end to the French Academy of Sciences and other academic societies. And in the following year, Lavoisier was branded a traitor because of his wealth as a tax farmer—but he was also unpopular with revolutionaries because he had supported foreign scientists whom the revolutionaries wished to strip of their assets.

    Naturally, Lavoisier was sentenced to death by the revolutionaries. Trumped-up charges against him included stealing money from France’s Treasury and giving it to France’s enemies. He died by the guillotine on May 8, 1794 in Paris. His father-in-law, a tax collector, and 26 other people were executed on the same occasion.


    “So, that’s all there’s to be said about my life—and I guess this is my origin story, too?”

    Yeah? How’s that?

    “I mean... The Reign of Terror was something that deeply shook humanity’s memory. Maybe, they thought I’d want to return to get back at those pigs who killed me unjustly and desecrated my name and fortune, right? It’s a charming story about a relatable underdog, right? ——A shame, though. Avenger is not my most flattering Class.”

    But before one can think about the gaping holes in his theory (the worst one being the 「relatable underdog」bit, people still hate the bourgeois, man), Avenger puts his finger over his mouth.

    “—Hey? Humor me, alright? Don’t let me down. And don’t think too much about this all.”

    Then, as if a cloud that just dissipates in the sky, he is back to his old self. “Now! Forget about this sheet and just take me to that ice-cream date you’ve promised! —Huh? You did not promised that at all? Ehehe... Then promise me right now. It is very bad to leave a gentleman waiting, you know~?






    BOND 7
    PERSONAL SKILLS






    Eyes of Carnea: E

    The father of elements—the bringer of light.

    Whatever one wants to call him, the fact is indisputable—his eyes looked far, into the deepest secrets of the universe, tearing away the mystery within.

    As he acquired a special vision that holds the weight of his earthly observations, Avenger can now see the bonds which hold atoms to each other. By doing that, he is able to find stressed or weak points. However, since the Rank of such unique and personal type of power is somehow still abysmal, he currently isn’t able to do much more than only finding such weak points of objects or living beings. In a way, he’s nothing more than a glorified seeing eye dog. (Look, he was the one who wanted this to be said here at all costs, it wasn’t me.)

    “—Huh, Mystic Eyes? What’s that?”, He asks, suddenly afraid that this will make him any more useful than a normal child.



    Darkness for the Light: D

    『In the beginning, God created the heavens and earth.』

    The uncreated matter—the knowledge that nothing can come from nothing.

    As the founder of modern Chemistry, Avenger seemed to receive a most wondrous gift—the power to transform. Perhaps, by being the beacon of light towards a new era, and as the man who affirmed that nothing is either lost or created, but merely transformed, the Throne felt it was fitting for him to acquire something that was until then reserved to Alchemists. “Or... Maybe, the Summoning System is finally becoming senile? Don’t you think this is some serious stretch?”, he chimes in, with a nervous quality in his lopsided smile. —Nah.

    However, as everything about him, the low Rank doesn’t let him reap much benefits other than acquiring the Item Construction Ski——wait, what? At what Rank, now!?



    Self-Stagnation: B

    The extreme opposite of the Self-Transformation personal Skill.

    An exceptional existence that 「will not evolve from now on.」

    Originally, Servants are summoned in their golden age—unless they meddle with their own summoning circumstances somehow—but in the case of Avenger, he had been summoned in a body that did not experience any of his golden fame. On the contrary, it seems that he came in his worst possible form, in his worst possible Class and with his worst possible set of Skills. The result is an abysmal drop in both 「quality」and 「quantity」, leading to him being barely stronger than a modern human being.

    “Now, would you look at that. This is what you call a complete nerf, am I right!?”, he smiles sheepishly, but doesn’t seem worried at all about this weird development. If anything, the glimmer in his eyes suggest even... Contentment? What?

    ——Look, young man, do you have any words to save yourself?

    “...I’m sorry?” (#⌒∇⌒#)






    BOND 8
    NOBLE PHANTASM




    “Reds and blues. Maroon and ceruleans. Violet and aquamarine. Hear my prayer, O orange raindrop: if life needs to end in a blast, may it be one that makes us all burn brighter than ever before.”


    THE WICKED BEING WHO DWELLS IN CONSUMING FIRE
    Flambé Pagria


    Type: Anti-Army
    Range: 50m~200m
    Max. number of targets: 110



    By increasing the kinetics of atoms and molecules, this Noble Phantasm causes them to ignite. In other words, it’s the most basic (and perhaps even obvious) application of his own theory about combustion—furthermore, by using and abusing this process, he can also create heat and light that can be deployed in an infinite number of ways, only limited by his own imagination.

    The explosion born by this manipulation of the naturally generated oxygen and hydrogen varies in both ways and in scale, depending on his needs. Sometimes, it’ll be only enough to stun an enemy temporarily, and sometimes it’ll ensure total annihilation of an entire neighborhood.

    —However, in the end, that is merely a natural explosion that is not infused with mana or with any otherworldly power at all. There is not even a conceptual strengthening attached to it—it is merely science through and through. Therefore, if one has to be honest... It is quite preventable. Most Servants wouldn’t even feel afraid of this prospect.


    “I don’t know what you expected from a Rank E Noble Phantasm, frankly.” He shrugs. If this means that the Master will bench him more from now on, that’s much better. He is already not happy about how there’s a letter different from E in his Ranks that makes him somehow useful at times.

    “Since I’m so useless, there’s no other option but to give up, huh!” ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

    Avenger declares, quite happy with that. But he can see it... He can feel the Master’s need to click on the next link. “—Hey? Please? Leave this all like this?~”






    BOND 9
    PERSONALITY





    LIKES
    Dates with you, Master! I’d love to go out and enjoy this untroubled life of an average person. Having born as someone exceptional in a world that favors normalcy is quite isolating, you know? Not a fun ride at all. But I’m glad that I have this second chance... And I’m glad I’m here as your Servant, after all. I’m sure you can teach me. I’m sure that if it is you, you’ll able to—— No. No... I said nothing.

    DISLIKES
    Hard work. It doesn’t take you anywhere, as much as they like to pretend it does—if anything, it only brings you pain. And who knows... There’s people out there who even appreciate you at your worst. Look at me: I’m a useless Servant, and somehow, thanks to your soft heart, I’m still here.

    WISH FOR THE HOLY GRAIL
    ——Fight, okay? Fight and thrash and cry and grow up and get your hands on that Holy Grail and if after all of that you still want to offer it to me... Then, you’ll hear my wish. But not before.



    A free-spirited young boy whose life philosophy reflects his newfound (lack of) drive.

    A completely 180º from the dutiful and hard-working man History once knew.

    So different that here he is now, puffing his cheeks while crossing his arms, annoyed at the Master’s insistence. “We’re almost at the end of this sheet and you didn’t stop yet. And I asked so nicely!” ( ͒˃⌂˂ ͒)

    ——Anyway! He is independent and unpredictable, sloppy but a genius, wishy-washy and somehow thrilling—he is a walking contradiction that never seems to decide what his character should quite be, reflecting his state of someone 「perpetually fighting against growing up」as a Servant. If anything, his only consistent trait is to abhor having to fight. One could even wonder why he was even summoned if anything to do with being a Servant is inherently such a chore to him, but another trait of his is his secretiveness—whenever he doesn’t want someone to know something, you can bet this thing will remain a mystery to the end of time.

    Avenger is outright cheeky, taking full advantage of his young appearance to trick others into not taking him seriously—and giving him some leeway to act in ways he couldn’t if he was a bit taller. His bouts of snarky remarks hide a depth of character that he usually hates to show. In a way, he’s so sloppy in his act that is easier than it looks to understand that everything he does is a ruse that hides much deeper motivations.

    But why does he feels like we should dismiss everything about him? Why does everything about him feel so half-assed? Those are valid questions that are still waiting for conclusive answers. —These scientists and their stupid personalities, really.

    “Huh, you’re quite relentless... Look, I’m not even that interesting, seriously”, he retorts, waving his hand as if to dismiss the mere thought. “Just a silly Avenger that can’t even act properly like one. Oh, I know! If you are busy right now and cannot take me to a date, you can burn me for some Rare Prisms. I bet you have a Craft Essence you are aiming for there, huh!”

    ——Those are some assumptions right there.






    BOND 10
    RELATIONSHIPS





    Nikola Tesla

    Wow mister, they sure stretched your feats to Hell and back if you’re called 「Modern Prometheus」, huh! ——Oh, my apologies, that’s not what I meant...

    [It’s totally what he meant.]


    Thomas Edison

    ——I take that back. You’re way worse.


    Leonardo Da Vinci (Rider)

    [Smiles. Just smiles at her. —Oh God, what does that mean? It can mean anything, what are you trying to say?]


    René Descartes

    I won’t say you’re stealing my thunder because you’re one of those Double Servants. More power to you, I guess? Oh, oh! By the way, that’s a nice-looking doll you have there! —Huh, wait, she’s real!? Oh my goodness... I... Uhh, I... Oh, I bet you have a wonderful personality.

    [He sighs, managing to dodge a (literal) bullet there.]


    Behemot
    (RoydGolden)

    I get you. I totally get you.


    Franz Anton Mesmer
    (BnEl15)

    Oh gods, I know this must suck hearing from a little child, but grow up. You have an entire new chance in front of you (I know, I know, it comes with a lot of work too) and yet you waste it submerged on past grudges. Go touch some grass or something——oh... Now that I think about it, that’s not very Avenger-ish as well, huh? My apologies... You must feel really bad right now, I know I would if I had to be scolded by me, of all people... Sorry, I won’t say anything else.

    [He is enjoying this a lot.]


    Antoine Lavoisier
    (massive_jojo_reference)

    Eww. So full of wonder, so bright, so eager to learn more, so single-minded in his pursuit... Can you believe that man is a different possibility of me? ——And the fact that it’s either me or him... What happened, right?


    Empedocles
    (shiki-pon)

    Who that?


    Master

    This will be the last time. Please, let’s stop right here, okay? Seriously, don’t go any further. Or else——
    ——Or else, I’ll sulk. You won’t like to see me sulking. I am too cute for that.
    Augh! Don’t click there—!






    BOND 11






    It was an apologetic expression—a coy smile.
    He was being someone honest, perhaps for the first time.


    Ahh, you clicked after all...

    But, maybe it was my fault.

    —No, it was definitely my fault. I was the one to blame.

    You’re doing what a person does. They’re born so full of curiosity, right? You just wanted to know me. That’s flattering, even though I wasn’t lying when I said there wasn’t anything fun about me waiting for you, should you keep going.

    Well, that’s the end of the line. Nothing more to see here, but the truth.

    I’ve got my answer.

    I made a bet, you see. Against myself.

    I wanted to make sure I wasn’t being too harsh, giving in to my innermost impulses.

    I wanted to know if somewhere out there, this imperfect version of me would be enough. Maybe, somewhere out there, there would be one human that would accept this—

    And that would’ve been enough to prove that things could still be salvaged.

    It would keep that small flame of hope burning, I am sure—

    But I’ve got my answer, yes.

    You don’t deserve me.

    And I should have destroyed you lot from the get go.


    And as if the faint light of a star, that smile disappears. The air is suddenly heavy, full of the screams of long-gone phantoms.

    A trace of light gobbled up by darkness.
    Maybe this was, all along, his nature—





    SKILL UPDATE
    < SELF-STAGNATION: B > < ALL THE WORLD’S EVIL: B >




    “Here I stand, Master of Chaldea. No more play pretend.




    Pretender
    — A FLARE OF DESPAIR —




    Class: Pretender
    Other Classes: Avenger, Caster
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Manichaeism

    Height: 176 cm | 5'9''
    Weight: 61 kg | 134,4 lbs

    Natural Enemy: Heracles
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Humanoid, Servant, Demonic, Male, Threat to Humanity


    STRENGTH: D

    ENDURANCE: D

    AGILITY: C


    MANA: A

    LUCK: B+

    NOBLE PHANTASM: A+






    BOND 12
    CLASS SKILLS





    Magic Resistance: A

    Free from the constraints of the personal Skill Self-Stagnation, the true Rank of this ability can be manifested.

    He is capable of countering magecraft with ease because it’s something 「born from
    Light
    Humanity
    .」 However, it seems that spells of Light—sacraments, liturgies, blessings and such—are able to breach his defenses under the right circumstance.



    Item Construction: A+

    A consequence of his Darkness for the Light personal Skill. At this point, he is able to bypass the whole gathering of materials stage and jump straight into the creation process.

    His constructs are made of 「
    unholy Origin
    a different matter
    」, since he is an existence unable to express himself through creatio ex nihilo. However, even when not belonging to the world of Mankind, items manufactured by Pretender are still usable and quite powerful in their own right.



    Independent Manifestation: B

    As long as despair lurks in the heart of human beings, he will be there—

    As long as human beings possess a soul, he will never be gone—

    As long as light exists, so does shadows——

    A Skill that signifies a confirmed existence capable of manifesting independently from any Master. At Rank B, this Skill is a declaration of the holder’s presence across all of space-time, and thereby grants immunity against existential threats by way of time paradox or the instantaneous imposition of death.



    Anti-Humanity: B

    A Skill which denounces an otherworldly ability that puts a stop to everything created by humanity, even laws that work to protect humans. By subtly directing people’s will with a growing malice, it manipulates their hearts towards evil.

    Once he invaded the world of Light, sin was brought to the world. Because he is the concept of 「the very first evil of mankind」—in which rather than being Cain or Pandora, he’s more comparable to the Act of Murder and The Box of Sins instead—his 「distaste」 for what he 「enjoys corrupting」 is as natural as one’s breath.

    However, because he is not 『the original Himself』, but rather 『the new Himself』, his large shadow only exists because an equally large light is shining behind him. The overwhelming corrupt nature of his concept, for some reason and because of one single man, has therefore mellowed considerably. This Rank? It is him being generous, if anything.






    BOND 13
    PART I





    Antoine Lavoisier, prominent French chemist and leading figure in the 18th century chemical revolution. He developed an experimentally-based theory of the chemical reactivity of oxygen and co-authored the modern system for naming chemical substances. Having also served as a leading financier and public administrator before the French Revolution, he was executed with other tax farmers under false charges during the Terror.

    However—

    —This is merely a part of him.

    He held many names before settling for 『Antoine Lavoisier.』

    『Iblis.』 『Satanas.』 『Lucifer.』 『Shaitan.』 『Ahriman.』 『Ptahil.』 『Samum.』 『Mephistoles.』

    He, the Prince of Darkness.

    The first expression of 「evil」 in humanity’s heart.

    “But I am none of those right now. If you feel uncertain about naming me after that renowned scientist, by all means, then call me Lavoisier (Alter), yes, with the brackets like that. Much better this way, isn’t it right? —Hm? Not only it is uninspired, it also doesn’t change too much? ——Really, now? How odd. I say it changes everything.”

    Somehow, under all the menace, a fragment of air-headedness that seems out of place in a face so stoic remains.

    Truly befitting that which is an amalgamation and no one at same time.






    BOND 14
    PART II





    Height / Weight: 176 cm・61 kg
    Source: Manichaean cosmology, Pragmateia, Historical Fact
    Region: Ancient Persia, France
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Gender: Male


    “I told you, isn’t it right? That I’d ask only one last time to leave it. I even distinctly remember asking you to not let me down. ——What a boring conclusion. In the end, you’re just like them.”






    BOND 15
    PART III





    In the beginning, the Paradise of Light stretched unbounded, ruled over by the Father of Greatness. Below, lay the Hell of Darkness.

    Hell is divided into five kingdoms, each of the substance of one of the Five Dark Elements. The five infernal kingdoms are inhabited by five kinds of devils. The Devil, or Prince of Darkness, king over all, combines in himself features of all five species. He is treated sometimes as the personification of Matter, sometimes as its chief manifestation.

    By chance, the Prince of Darkness came to the boundary between hell and heaven, and saw, desired, and invaded the Light. To protect his realm, and to preserve its eternal peace, the Father of Greatness evoked Emanations of himself to battle the powers of Darkness. These Emanations are the gods of Manichaeism.

    The entities are overwhelmed by the powers of Darkness, forced to throw their existences away to distract the devils from Paradise. The devils swallow the Light Element, and after that are appeased, ceasing their invasion. However, by this act a part of the Light has become absorbed in Darkness. This lost Light is smothered by the Matter which has devoured it, suffers, and forgets its divine nature. Matter itself rejoices in the Light it has obtained, and grows to depend upon it. In other words, their existence now depends on the Light they absorb—and evil is born into the world as result.

    “Light for the darkness, darkness for the light... Such a bother. Such a waste of words. Does it change anything when there is mercy on the battlefield? Does it change anything when violence is a means to an end? Isn’t that 「evil」 all the same for the ones dealt a bad hand? Won’t it still bring you lot right back to me?”

    As one can see, he has a very peculiar view on such topics.


    ———Before his defeat, the Prince of Darkness presaged the End of the World.

    A time of conflict and bitterness and waning faith, since by then most of the Light would have been drawn out of the world. Heavens and earths would collapse, and a great fire would break out. He would come when believers were few and in between—and he would snuff out the last light at this moment.

    This prophecy became the basis for this existence that was birthed in darkness and nurtured in chaos, a 「promise of evil.」

    It took quite some time, but this existence that is destined to exist and to never be at same time was, indeed, eventually realized by the world. He gained a shape and a purpose.

    His place of birth was that——a kaleidoscope of contradictions. A blood-colored festival that praised all the things undeserving of praise. The denial of everything 「
    human
    holy
    」, all the while celebrating everything that made Humankind 「
    holy
    human
    」.

    “I am sure you are curious for the rest. We are, after all, in a crucial part of my existence, I suppose. ——But there is really nothing else you must know. Everything is perceivable from here on. I was envisioned, I was birthed, and I existed. And now, I am here. And that’s what you should be worried about.”

    And then, just like that, he smirks. A slightly crooked thing that seemed cute in the small face he possessed once, but in his grown-up visage, it just feels out of place.

    “——Besides, consider this my revenge for not paying any heed to my warnings about stopping when there was still time. You won’t learn anything, no more. You will perish in ignorance, as you should.”

    Such evil!






    BOND 16
    PERSONAL SKILLS





    Eyes of Carnea: EX

    The bringer of light and the devourer of light, united at least.

    His eyes are still looking deep into the secrets of the Universe, and he is still clawing away the mysteries within. But, this time, what he brings with him is——


    ——A breaking point.

    The small weak links within the light, tiny specks of darkness.

    By finding the bonds which hold atoms to each other, he is able to find stressed or weak points in objects or living beings. His immense knowledge of 「
    dark spot
    weak points
    」 (“Isn’t that just second nature for someone like me?”, he sighs as he pretends he isn’t gloating) grants him the ability to, on top of that, destroy such objects by targeting said 「
    dark spot
    weak points
    . 」

    Regardless of a living being and/or object’s original condition, they can be easily shattered whenever he finds and touches such 「
    dark spot
    weak spots
    . 」 However, that has nothing to do with superhuman strength or even scientific advancements, as he lied before—rather, it is just a devourer doing what a devourer knows best.

    “Oh. By the way, it also has nothing to do with Mystic Eyes, do rest assured”, he adds.

    He did say he’d not tell the Master anything anymore, but… Maybe he’s feeling generous?



    Darkness for the Light: EX

    『In the beginning, God created the heavens and earth.』

    —And when he devoured the light, he birthed possibilities from Chaos as well.


    “If you are searching for the ultimate source of life and creation, the Mighty Architect, I suppose we are both about to be really disappointed.” Pretender shrugs.

    “However, that doesn’t mean this is a useless ability. You see... This is no ancient magic, no, no—after all, 『nothing is lost and nothing is created, everything is just transformed. 』 Why, yes, it is much closer to pure science. It’s something we both can understand. Oh, I could touch you right now and change you on a cellular level... I could turn you into a cute little bug... Wouldn’t you be so lovely, smashed by my shoes? What a sad way for your story to end, huh?”, he asks with no small amount of mirth in his eyes.

    The power over 「creation」—no, over 「transformation」—in the wrong hands is surely a scary prospect.



    All the World’s Evil: B

    The first expression of Humankind’s evil.

    “I am well aware that you lot call the corruption of that Device by the same name, but I assure you that I am not Ahriman. —Well, I was once, yes. But what do you humans say? 「New summoning, new me.」”

    By nature, someone must always wield this power as evil has existed since the beginning of time and without evil, there cannot be any good. In other words, Lavoisier (Alter) is just another name in a long list of names, and there will be more like him in the future.

    By becoming an embodiment of evil, this Servant is capable of a myriad of things—including casting powerful curses, psychological torture, sin inducement and absorbing strength out of the pain of his victims. It could be said that he is just a walking time-bomb, ready to explode in a shower of curses and maleficence. “It would be even better if you kill me”, he taunts. A faint reminiscence of his childish prayers of old. “Do it. Free these curses, they are waiting to be born.”

    Evil will exist anywhere, just like a flower that refuses to die. And whenever a heart is tainted by the darkness, losing their way from the light, he will be there to guide them——

    ——He and all of them.






    BOND 17
    NOBLE PHANTASM




    “Light, look upon the world which is a completely unreal thing. It is an unreal thing, in which you can put no trust. Fall down to the depths, tumble down to the unknown. Flame of truth, descent of the spirit. Come, the root of all.”



    THE DEVOURING DARKNESS LURKING THE WORLD OF LIGHT
    Abime Kasia


    Type: Anti-Life
    Range:
    Max. number of targets:



    A Noble Phantasm that calls for light in order to consume light.

    The imagery of fire conjures up the motif of purification, especially in religious practices. Being Light a sacred element, under the darkness, a restoration of the original state of the cosmos and the unconsciousness of the world is achieved. Inviting his foes with a welcoming warmth that suddenly dims, until it disappears, in other words, it speaks to the slow and inevitable corruption of boundaries.

    By trapping either living beings or Servants inside his imaginary space, Pretender steals their
    Life
    Light
    —or, in other words, their very existences. Once resting comfortably in his darkness, there are very few things one can do other than to wait for their turn to be consumed to the point of nothingness. When darkness first consumed light, it introduced sin to the world—but in turn, it became dependent on it for all eternity. 「A shadow can only exist as long as there is light.」

    “Therefore, this is merely a devourer scrapping for food. Inelegant, but so are most things in life.”


    —What happens in the space between beings trapped and being consumed? And how does this entire metaphysical journey works? Huh... Indeed, that is a story and half... But he truly doesn’t feel like explaining this ability in detail, you know.

    “You won’t need to know more, after all. None of you will, after I make quick work of you.”






    BOND 18
    PART IV




    Antoine Lavoisier (Alter).

    Strong, but weak. Determined, but irresolute. Abounding in darkness, but shrouded in light.

    He is a contradiction made real in the boiling pot of possibilities that was the French Revolution.

    As everything that comes from humans, at its basic core, it was nothing more than a violent overthrow—music for his ears. Sustenance for his existence.

    Men who lived a life of moral purity, yet were cold-blooded architects of terror. A time in which thousands were guillotined in order to preserve a 「republic of virtue. 」 The Revolution itself was sanctioned by a government paranoid about the enemy within, for 「the price of liberty is eternal vigilance. 」 But the majority of the Terror’s victims were not the hated aristocracy but the ordinary, innocent people of France.

    The guilty and the innocent, all of them meeting the same end—the great equalizer. And all of them are learning the same lesson: how flicky and how fragile light truly is.

    Their grudge simmered, calling for release in the depths of the abyss.

    —And he was the one who answered their pleas.


    The Prince of Darkness—the expression of evil in Humanity’s heart, a 「thing」that only exists as long as humans believe in evil—chooses a vessel to be reborn. His name was Antoine Lavoisier.

    Somewhere above the endless, agonized cacophony echoing around and around in the abyss’ depths, but slightly below realizing you’re actually getting pretty good at closing your eyes at the sound and sleeping peacefully—there is that. There is the complete loss of time.

    Dreams and memories blending into unreal thoughts. Past, present and future flickering until one went from coming to life in a world full of light to having lived in it for an entire eternity, in the same nonexistent moment. Or hour. Or day.

    In a cradle made of darkness, the countless grudges found their way to that man’s heart.

    He knew, too, what it was like to lose. To feel so desperately that you’re right, yet to fail nonetheless. A man proved innocent to the world, yet condemned to the Abyss all the same.

    And yet, there was no rhyme or reason to that choice. He was just another innocent soul sacrificed to that greed disguised as 「enlightenment. 」 Anyone with such a strong claim could have become a vessel—and yet, he was picked out of them all. The senselessness of it all was appalling, but he had no choice but grit his teeth and bear the curses.

    ——Mercy is for the weak.

    ——Peace is for the coward.

    ——Tears are for the conquered.

    Those lessons whispered by the Prince of Darkness and by the countless grudges of the Terror, penetrated his spirit, introducing him to sin. As if a grail, he was filled with pitch-black mud.

    However——






    BOND 19
    APPEND SKILL





    Light for the Darkness: E~EX

    ——He then made a bet with himself.

    If someone could light their way, then that would be enough. A last, desperate ditch in hopes to hold to his humanity that was fading more and more, like the light of a candle.

    “Please, let this be enough. Let me be enough.”

    He purposefully weakened himself, picking an unfit Class and unfit Skills, in hopes of sealing the evil within. He armored himself with a smile barely held together by strings, with a diminutive body as weak as his chances.

    But it was a battle destined to be lost—evil, like a resistant flower, will always bloom.


    —However, the 「human」 part of him, the last speck of light under a sea of curses, still sleeps.

    It still waits for the answer to his prayers.





    Author's notes
    Holy crap, this took way too long for my liking.

    I hope that whoever was my secret santa likes the final result, because hoo boy. I'll be a sad panda if you don't.
    But then again, I can't say that I'm disappointed at the final result.


    I had this idea of a French-Revolution-amagalmation-that-ended-up-being-a-Angra-Mainyu-wannabe but at first, I was thinking of a more obvious target... I dunno, like Marie Antoinette or Louis XVII. Actually, the "shota" inspiration for Lavoisier even came from this concept. Even the evil deity wasn't a thing I had an easy time choosing: I swear at one point I was decided to go with my own version of Yaldabaoth (and I would have totally put the P5 theme there if I had gone with this idea.) Thank goodness I found another candidate in the end, because I don't think my poor attempt of a Servant would've matched Kamera's.

    Anyway, things went on and on in my head and after many failed attempts I managed to stick the landing with this one. I won't apologize for transforming him into a kid though, you know how I work by this point. If there's even the most remote chance of shota-fying or loli-fying a character, Imma jump on that oportunity head first. But this time there was a reason for this! I'm innocent, okay!


    Speaking of this troublesome character, I tried to make a Pretender more in the molds of Oberon/Vortigern, in a sense that this person is not just "a character pretending to be another", but rather, "truly and absolutely two people sharing a same soul". He's as much Lavoisier as he's the Prince of Darkness, and we won't ever know where one begins and where the other ends. But I guess that's the fun thing about such characters.

    Also, do you think I managed to imply that he might be just "something wished for", truly like a Angra Mainyu wannabe, and not even the real deal? I sure hope I did managed to imply that. It'd be embarrassing if I didn't.


    Oh, well! I wish I could speak of him much more BECAUSE I HAVE A LOT OF WORDS. THIS DUDE TOOK ME 15 DAYS TO FINISH. But unfortunately, I also know that it's boring to read people babbling about useless infos. So... Well, I can only hope y'all had a fun ride with this sheet.

    Thanks a lot for your continuous support!


    P.S.: A shout-out to Rey for being such a KING and blessing this unworthy WF with his formatting techniques.






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    Quote Originally Posted by Pool 4
    Wrapped in Glitter and Gold! (A servant related to the mythical/imaginary emerald tablets of thoth.

    Cooking Mama! (A servant related the act of cooking)

    HO HO HO and a bottle of rum! (Santa a sailor servant)




    The Holy Grail War was about to begin.

    A man stood silently in front of his summoning circle.

    He didn’t have a catalyst.

    The man was a bit anxious, but he knew he had enough mana to summon a good servant.

    As long as he was a competent magus, he hoped he could summon a decent servant.

    But if the worst was to happen… Well, he should be able to manage. He’s a competent man, even a servant like Astolfo or Charlotte de Corday should suffice.

    With his determination to win whatever the circumstance, the man summoned his servant.

    “Here we go.”

    Caster of Délices


    Source

    Boonjour mon maître ~ ! So, it seems someone finally summoned me. Oh dear, that’s wonderful! Yes, absolutely wonderful. I am very grateful to you Master, with your help I will finally reach the truth, and my powers are greater than ever! Oh yes sorry, my name… I am the great cook Marie-Antoine Carême and am pleased to meet you. Hmm? Oh, yes, when I talked about truth and power I was talking about food. Wasn’t that obvious?

    ...

    What ?

    Fuc-

    Class: Caster
    True Name: Marie-Antoine Carême
    Surname: The King of Chefs, and the Chef of Kings
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Attribute: Human
    Origin: France, Historical Facts

    Parameters:

    STR: E
    END: E
    AGI: D
    MAG: B
    LCK: A
    NP: C

    Likes: Cooking, food, mysterious temples and mystical constructs
    Dislikes: Service à la française (serving all dishes at once), home cooking
    Talent: Cooking


    «------•}I|[ Class Skills ]|I{•------»

    Territory Creation (A)

    Territory Creation is a Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.

    Since Caster isn’t a proper magus, she doesn’t create a workshop but a kitchen. As she is an accomplished chef, her kitchen is somewhat way more grandiose than you could imagine, a great workplace fitting for the King of Chefs.

    "Ah, no sorry that won’t do. Now I realize that my kitchen was way too small for me to truly cook something good. I need a bigger place. After all… My next dish will be absolutely grandiose!"

    Item Construction (-)

    Item Construction is a Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items.

    The Item Construction Skill is lost in favor of Grande Cuisine.

    "Oh? That’s a shame. I do consider myself as an inventor. I don’t want to be full of myself, but I am a genius. I wrote books and invented the toque! Well, it is true that I only seek to cook the perfect dish and don’t really care about anything else. So no Item Construction is fine ~! Mon objectif dépasse la création de ses pathétiques jouets."


    «------•}I|[ Personal Skills ]|I{•------»

    Grande Cuisine (EX)

    Grande Cuisine is the cuisine of "high-level" establishments, gourmet restaurants and luxury hotels. It is characterized by the meticulous preparation and careful presentation of food at a high price.

    Grande Cuisine is the more sophisticated and grandiose version of Gourmand, at least that’s what Caster claims. In truth, both skills are exactly the same and only its name seems to differ. Nonetheless, Caster possesses the highest possible rank as the King of Chefs. During her life, she studied many subjects like art, architecture or even phrenology. Caster didn’t limit herself to just food, she tried her best to incorporate all kinds of science in her creations. She’s an absolute genius who cooks absolutely marvelous dishes even if she doesn’t try hard.

    "I’ll tell you why I’m the King of Chefs… Truth. I do not seek fame nor money. My sole desire is to create the perfect dish. The one and only true dish."

    Charisma (Star) (C+)

    Charisma (Star) is the special charisma given to the celebrities, not a Charisma to lead the people but to be loved and praised as an icon.

    Caster is often considered one of the first internationally renowned celebrity chefs. Her skills were sought by people all around Europe. Some of her most notable employers include: Napoleon, George IV, Tsar Alexander I, James Mayer Rothschild and many more… As the such the efficiency of this skill increase the more the target has power.

    "A star? I guess I might be something like that, I seek to go farther than everyone. So being something beyond this world is perfect. Oh, you meant someone who’s popular."

    Mental Pollution (?)

    Mental Pollution is a Skill where due to possessing a distorted mentality, it is possible for one to shut out any mental interference thaumaturgy. However, at the same time, it becomes impossible for one to come to a mutual understanding with individuals who do not possess an equivalent rank of Mental Pollution.

    Yet… Something doesn’t seem right.

    "Oh dear, Mental Pollution? That’s strange, very very strange… Do you think of me as abnormal Master? Me? Votre chef? Fufufu ~! Listen, I will give you the Holy Grail, I don’t really care about it. But in exchange, I don’t want you to see me as a mad woman. There is no insanity, only resolve."


    «------•}I|[ Noble Phantasms ]|I{•------»

    High Gastronomy Architecture
    La Pièce Montée

    "I need this power, now I understand it. I couldn't achieve my masterpiece without a way to make it… GREATER! Ha ha… So this, the true function of my pièces montées!"

    Type: Anti-Hunger
    Rank: B



    Caster became famous in Paris for her pièces montées, elaborate confectionery in an architectural or sculptural form. Carême made those treats, which sometimes reached several feet in height, entirely of sugar, marzipan and pastry. She gave them shapes inspired by temples, pyramids and ancient ruins by taking her ideas from books on the history of architecture, which she studied at the National Library thanks to the enlightened attitude of her first employer Bailly. Considering the culinary art as the finest branch of architecture, she herself designed her pastries with great taste and according to models that she borrowed from Vignole or Palladio. Passionate about her art, she was entrusted with the making of the assembled pieces intended for the First Consul's table and, later, that of Talleyrand.

    A Noble Phantasm which embodies the legend of Marie-Antoine Carême as the greatest cook in history, the King of Chefs. A woman of this caliber can only have a Noble Phantasm as grandiose as her. With La Pièce Montée, Caster is granted the power to turn her dreams into reality. To construct the greats temple shaped cakes, to finally make use of all the knowledge she collected in her search for perfection. Depending on the amount of mana put in, it becomes possible to create giant construction made out of food.

    But that’s not enough.

    ???
    The Tree

    "Now, let’s start our first experiment. What kind of fruits will this creation bear? Ha ha… I can’t wait any longer!"

    Type: ???
    Rank: ?



    This is not something from her legend and is not something she could have achieved during her lifetime. But with her newfound power, she can finally make her dreams come true. With La Pièce Montée she built a brand-new dish, but it isn’t something based on the temples or pyramids she saw in her books. In Greece, there is a tree, a mysterious and forgotten tree. In her search for the perfect dish, she found detailed descriptions and drawings of this monstrous thing. Its history isn’t clear, but she recognized the work of a man, even though it looked like a tree, Caster could tell it was born from the dream of a sculptor, someone like her. She understood, that it was a meant to ascend, to reach the truth.
    With a smile, she looked at her creation. A tree built of dough and sugar, cream and fruits. It didn’t look like the drawing she had seen when she was alive, the original looked like a human being had fused with the tree. But that was because she would become it, she would become the sinister figure who had merged with this product of nature. Well, calling it a product of nature is absolutely wrong, because this is not a tree from the earth. It’s an abomination.

    Caster slowly approached this strange pièce montée, she stroked it. And suddenly, the tree started to absorb her body, it was as if she was consumed by it. The food at eaten its cook. And it was most likely how it was supposed to be, this wasn’t the product of a dream, this was nightmare that humans couldn't control, couldn’t understand. A trap for dreamers.

    The Master of Caster looked at the tree dumbfounded, he had never witnessed something like that. And now, he has lost his servant.

    Well, it was supposed to be like that.

    Yet…

    Her will was stronger, her dream was bigger.
    Foreigner of Horrors



    So it seems I won... Excellent. Ah, Master. Change of plan, I need the Grail. But don't worry! With this power... And this knowledge! That'll be a piece of cake.

    Class: Foreigner
    True Name: Marie-Antoine Carême
    Surname: Evil God of Gastronomy
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Attribute: Human
    Origin: Historical Facts / Litterature (H. P. Lovecraft)

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: B
    AGI: D
    MAG: A
    LCK: A
    NP: EX

    «------•}I|[ Class Skills ]|I{•------»

    Existence Outside the Domain (A+)

    Existence Outside the Domain is a Class Skill associated with Foreigners. Denotes a being that descended from the void of outer space.

    The Tree was born from a dream given by an Outer Being, but it was still born on earth. Nothing descended from the void, well at least that’s how it was supposed to be. The tree was meant to evolve into a horror of the void, a monster who obeys the laws of the abysses but was given birth by human hands on earth. But Foreigner took its power and potential all for herself, and she forced
    Outer God
    the genuine article
    to giver her its power.

    "I knew it was evil, but I also knew my will was stronger than his. I am a chef. I know what I cook, did you really think I didn’t expect it to try to turn me into a terminal? I’m sorry Tree God, but I need you. Your power, your knowledge, it will now obey me."

    Insanity (-)

    Insanity is heterogeneous thinking that exerts an influence even on the worldviews within the mentality of the people in one’s surroundings.

    This skill is lost in favor of Cuisine de l’Horreur.

    "Que c’est mignon! So this is the will of an Outer God? Now I know why your kind employ artists as vessels, because your insanity is imagination. But mine is greater, or to be more precise it's more ambitious."


    Divinity (B+)

    Divinity is the measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit - a demi-god. Those who have A Rank Divinity or above have reached the Throne of Gods, although they are still just short of being a true god due to lacking a Divine Core. The level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast rises; it can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods.

    Foreigner seek to go beyond what this world can accept, even if it denies logic. She will make it happen, and she has a plan. Originally, she was just a poor and abandoned child. But she ultimately became the greatest cook of humanity and a woman of the nobility. She possesses the innate ability to ascend, not because of her birth. But because of her strong will and ingenuity. Godhood isn’t far fetched for this woman.

    "By the way, the original tree, the one whose sketches can be found at the National Library. It was very badly done. The sculptor, Kalos, he didn’t understand at all. He was a brilliant artist, but he was destined to fail. He lacked ambition. A man like him couldn’t have built the genuine article."

    «------•}I|[ Personal Skills ]|I{•------»

    Cuisine de l’Horreur (EX)

    Cuisine de l’Horreur is a skill composed and evolved from Territory Creation, Grande Cuisine,
    Insanity
    Mental Pollution
    and Charisma (Star). The so-called ultimate form of cooking. It is not a skill of the Outer God, because cooking does not exist as a concept for them. But by absorbing the power and knowledge of the void, she established this concept for them. Foreigner could possibly become the Evil God of Gastronomy if she ascended further, well at least that’s what she claims.

    All of her skills fused when she seized the power of the Outer God, as if it was a puzzle that had waited for this final piece to finally be completed. Foreigner claim it to be the highest form of gastronomy, it is a technique to create food from things or in ways that are not recognized as such by the World. It’s unclear how Foreigner proceed, but what she produces isn’t food. It is something else. There are two possible outcomes for the persons who eat her dishes. The first is that they turn mad, recognizing the "food" of Foreigner as authentic, but in turn they gradually lose their humanity the more they consume it. But if they resist the strong hypnotic insanity of Foreigner dishes, then the outcome becomes death. Having consumed something that is rejected by the world, the world rejects them. Having not turned into monsters who defy the law of men, they have absolutely no chances of survival. People who consume Foreigner’s dishes either become part of Foreigner or die by trying to stay humans.

    "Allow me to explain what prevented me of truly becoming the God of Chefs… It was this world. I realized far too late this world wouldn’t allow perfection. Our world might have a fiercer will than I, and that’s what we call “logic”. The desire to restrain, to crush dreams and create reality. Well, now I even surpassed that. My will has finally attained absoluteness. Even the void will bend to my orders… And now is time to feast! Ha ha ha!"


    «------•}I|[ Noble Phantasms ]|I{•------»

    My Kingdom of Confectionery - Sugar World and Delight
    Tree of the Abysses

    "Parfait! Everything is ready for my final service, my last and endless dish. Won’t you smile Master? Everyone is going to be happy, everyone is going to be delighted. For I will finally reach the Truth."

    Type: Anti-World
    Rank: EX



    The Tree of the Abysses is the Noble Phantasm of Foreigner, the thing from which The Tree was based on, and also the ritual that will give birth to the Outer God she forcefully absorbed. At first it looks like a great spear. Some heroic spirits will instantly recognize it as something similar to the pillars of lights that fix the texture of worlds. But this is only a resemblance, its function is similar but on a different scope. While it might look like a spear, it’s a tree. A tree of life, a Divine Tree. The power that possess Foreigner is not from a God of the Void, but from the Divine Tree of the Abysses.

    A long time ago, the Divine Tree of the Abysses influenced the Greek sculptor Kalos, giving him dreams of itself in hope he could sculpt a proper vessel. But it ended in failure, even the sacrifice of Kalos wasn't enough to incarnate it in this world. For unknown reasons, the divine tree wished to be birthed on Earth. For all one knows, it could be a desire to expend its roots, to live. But what life means for it is unclear. It is a tree of the void after all. Divine Trees of the Earth are incarnations of life, engineers of evolution and ecosystems. This raises the following questions: how does the Divine Tree of the Abysses work? How alien is the ecosystem recorded in it?

    Whatever the way it was supposed to operate, the power of the Divine Tree of the Abysses is now in the hands of Foreigner. It will not abid to the will of the tree, but to the will of Foreigner. Her plan is the establishment of her own ecosystem. That’s the solution she came up with to obtain the perfect dish. To attain the essence of food. Food is something that one eats. Because food is organic matter, to eat signifies to consume other life forms. And to control what is food, is to control the biosphere. With her own food chain, she will define the meaning of food. A world where everything is consumed by something else, in an endless cycle creation and destruction, of life and death. That’s a pathway to the Root.

    But the world wouldn’t allow such an advent, and that’s why the effects of the Noble Phantasm are still a bit unclear. Foreigner would require a power capable of performing miracles, for example a
    Holy Grail
    wish granting device
    . If that were to be obtained, a Beast of humanity would arise.



    «------•}I|[ Craft Essence ]|I{•------»

    Kitchen Horror



    The Master had messed up, he knew that.

    His servant looked at his dish… With disappointment.

    It’s raw, bland, absolutely disgusting.

    S-Sorry…

    You’re sorry? Ha ha… Ne te fous pas de moi abruti.

    Caster gave him a murderous stare. She was angry and seemed like she could stab him at any moment.

    That’s the worst dish that I ever tasted you stupid donut!

    D-Donut? Me?!

    What? Do you see anyone else in the kitchen?

    N-No…

    “So tell me, what are you?!”

    a s-stupid donut…

    Louder, I didn’t hear you.

    A STUPID DONUT MAM!

    That was the last time he ever tried to cook.


    «------•}I|[ Interactions ]|I{•------»

    Muramasa: I see, we’re remarkably similar. In your search for the truth, you ended up going into the realms of demons.

    EMIYA: We both bear similarities, at least we used to. Have you lost your will, Counter Guardian? Oh, what’s that look? Are you there to defy me? Oh yes, I am a danger for this world after all. Fufufu ~! Very well, I hope you’ll at least show me your resolve… Hero!

    Napoleon: Him… He never paid any attention to my food. To employ me and to still ignore my marvelous dishes… How frustrating.

    Beni-Emma: A kindred spirit.

    Ferdinand Cheval: I believe our stories are similar. But we’re different. You follow the path and will of nature, even if it’s an alien one. I on the contrary reject it. I reject the will of the worlds and bend the void for truth. We are both determined, but our objectives are opposites.

    To a magus: Oh? You think I look like a magus? Well, now that I think about it, that’s likely true. What I seek is the truth, as you do. You meant the way I cook? … I see, yes it is true that I am very particular with my Grande Cuisine. To cook is to employ your knowledge as its basis. I gave my dishes meaning. I based all my art on my knowledge of the human body, on everything I read about. But especially on the ancients and mysterious temples of the world. Aaaah… I understand now. I don’t just look like a magus. I am a magus. Because I crafted my dishes with the mysteries of the ancients. Oh dear, that explains the Caster class.

    Creators Notes
    Okay, I'm done. I tried incorporating the lore and personality into the skillset, principally because I didn't have to much time to work on this project, but still wanted to do a surprise servant so I had to cut out some content. I also tried changing my formating style, I'm not to sure about it. Anyway, so about the servant in itself. Honestly, that's a joke on which I spent way to much time. My prompt was to make a servant linked to cooking, and I had already a Marie-Antoine Carême sheet in stock. But a very bad one. And I didn't just want to submit a D tier servant. So I started thinking and thought to myself: "what if Marie-Antoine Carême was secretly a Beast?" And my journey to turn a cook into a monster started. I really went all out on the madness and horrific nature of Carême, she's even more insane than her Outer God! I also decided to use the Divine Tree lore of Wyvern. I hope I didn't screw up somewhere with it (if that's the case, I'm very sorry).

    By the way, the Divine Tree of the Abysses is based on the short story "The Tree" by H. P. Lovecraft. It doesn't seem to be linked to the Ctuluh Mythos, but hey it's still Lovecraft!

    So yeah, thank for reading.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Pool 3
    Orcus: An Etruscan god of the Underworld which was later equated with Pluto and Dīs Pater in Roman myths. He is better known today for the fact that in medieval times, his name got derivated into monsters in various stories, which would further influence Tolkien's naming of the orcs. I was thinking he could be a Berserker, with the further uses of his name having degraded him into a monstrous nature.

    "Emperor" Norton: A former businessman who, after suffering financial ruin, fell into delusion and proclaimed himself as Emperor of America. He became a beloved symbol of San Fransisco both for his eccentricities and his kind heart. He could be a Saber, with probably some sort of Imperial Privilege variant to justify it.

    Daniel-François-Esprit Auber: A french compositer whose most well-known work is the opera La Muette de Portici, based on the Napolitan revolution of 1647. During a showing of the Opera in Brussels during 1830, the prestation of a patriotic song was so moving that its spectators were motivated into a revolt towards the occuping Netherlands. This event is popularly held as the start of the Belgian Revolution. The obvious class for him is a Caster, of course, but feel free to give him any you want instead.



    There stood a Tree. The most beautiful Pillar of Hardwood pierced the Blue Above.
    Proud it stood, but from the same Blue descended a Star and razed it to the ground. Not even ash remained.
    But the Pillar's roots run deeper than just the ground.
    The depths of the earth not even a Calamity could reach.
    Despite being underground there was still life - Life in the Realm of Death.
    He was one of the Guardians of this Pillar.
    Now he lives on the brink between the world of Life and the Darkness.

    War. There was a war beneath your feet.
    The place of the souls was vacant because both the crown of the Tree and of the Underworld vanished when Destruction came.
    Years afterward they came drifting. Drifting from the West, the Broken Pillars from the Sky.
    He made his home far below the roots. But he wanted more.
    Greedy Fool.
    The god hiding in the dark wished to access the sacred remains of the Tree.
    "It is dead," he said. "Death is my domain. Therefore it belongs to me" he uttered.
    Despicable Fool.
    The tree that is life can not be dead. Even if, what does it matter to the guardian?
    He vowed to protect the Tree, he lived for it. As long as something of the Divine Tree Sylvanus exists in this forsaken world,
    he will protect it.
    Even if the opponent is the King of the Underworld. Hades, Dis Pater, Pluto, whatever you may call this fool.
    He will not get his hands on it. No one will.

    For his name is…


    < - ⪻ - ⋘ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- 🕀 -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⋙ - ⪼ - >< - ⪻ - ⋘ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- 🕀 -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⋙ - ⪼ - >

    G A T E K E E P E R
    of the Rotting Roots
    = Orcus =
    __________________________________________________________________________


    Class
    Gatekeeper
    Alternative Classes
    Berserker
    True Name
    Orcus
    Aliases
    Horkos, "Dis Pater", "Pluto"
    Origin
    Greek/Roman Mythology
    Height/Weight
    193cm/86kg
    Alignment
    Lawful Evil
    Attribute
    Earth

    STR END AGI MAN LCK
    B B D B D

    Likes
    underground, Divine Tree Sylvanus
    Dislikes
    trespassers, rotting of trees
    Talent
    guarding, growing mushrooms
    Natural Enemy
    Hades
    Armament
    Hammer
    Catalyst
    ?


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Class Skills -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Class Skills

    Territory Defense B+
    A Skill defining the Gatekeeper Class. It denotes the ability to steadfastly guard a designated place. While the user remains in position, their defensive capabilities receive a significant boost. At the same time, the Skill’s effects are dependent on the Gatekeeper’s ability to repel invaders - should the user let intruders through, the effects of Territory Defense would be lost.
    Orcus protected the rotting roots of the Tree all this time. He defended against fools trying to enter the underworld in search of riches and the armada of beasts from the Underworld. He even battled the King of the Underworld itself at times.
    In the end he was victorious. He outlasted the presence of the Roman Gods.

    Magic Resistance D
    Fighting against the Spirits of the Underworld, right on the edge of the realm showered him with Death, lowering his resistance.

    Divinity C
    Thought to be King of the Underworld himself during Roman times. He is the one lingering at the threshold between the underground and the underworld. He despises Hades, then known as Dis Pater, and does not care about the perception of humanity on him. This lowered his Divine Core skill to mere Divinity.

    __________________________________________________________________________

    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Personal Skills -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Personal Skills

    Blighted Roots C
    Originally a blessing from the Tree as its guardian, but because of its remains rotting away and the influence of Innocent Monster it turned into a twisted version of itself. He sprouts gnarled roots and vines from the soil, pulsating with ghastly green mana. Controlling mushrooms, grasses and their spores found inside the caverns between the mythological underworld and the real world are second-nature for him. He can absorb Mana from their roots and grants independence from his Master. He can do terrible things to human bodies with this skill if left unchecked.

    Presence Detection A
    Countless years of fighting in the Underworld honed his senses to the max. Barely visible wraiths sent from the Fields of Asphodel or even the Invisible God of the Underworld itself. Nothing shall escape his senses. His range can be expanded if he taps into the underground biosphere and adds it to his consciousness, but this will cost more mana.

    Innocent Monster B
    The cruel aspect of the God of the Underworld.
    Punisher of Oath Breakers.
    Origin of the name for the human-eating "Orcs" and "Ogres".
    The Rotting of Sacred Roots.
    They had impacts on his Saint Graph. His appearance changed to that of the stereotypical "Orc". His alignment is changed from Neutral to Evil. A craving for torturing and human flesh disturbs his vigil.
    He is forced to suppress his urges, else he disappoints the Tree he swore loyalty to. He hides inside an armor made with Blighted Roots. He is blind inside, but his urges are dulled while his combat prowess is barely limited due to his sharp battle senses and his Presence Detection.

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Noble Phantasm -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Noble Phantasm

    Selvans Tularias
    Rotten Roots, Setter of Boundaries




    Orcus' weapon of choice and the reason he was summoned as a Gatekeeper - the Class of Boundaries.
    Selvans Tularias was the Etruscan name for Sylvanus, the tree and guardian of the Divine Tree. An aspect that focuses on the thresholds between forests and the rest of the land, the sacred and the mundane.
    A Hammer formed from the roots of Sylvanus that encase a block of granite from deep within the earth.
    As his weapon it enforces the region on which he stands as his domain - Orcus, granting him positive modifiers to his Territory Defense Skill. With it he can activate his Blighted Tree Skill and mark opponents with his second Noble Phantasm. In this liminary domain the concepts related to Realm of Death or Life are blurred. With it he can also weaken other boundaries in the same manner using the authority the hammer has left.
    It is the only weapon formed from those Roots, but because of their rot the conceptual power of this construct weakens over time. Like many other deities of the underworld, he started out as a Spirit of Fertility, then the earth itself until it bore deep into the underground. But people forgot that he was an envoy of the trees. He never lets go of his hammer, because it is the last connection to his real self he has left.

    Bomarzo Orcus
    Oaths transcend Life and Death




    "[Orcus] has a son, nameless; he is without hands or feet, but he pursues swiftly, until he catches and destroys all the family and the entire house. The line of a man who swears true is better later on."
    - Pythian Priestess to Glaukos

    A description of Gatekeeper's curse. A metaphorical son that pursues the target even without Orcus present.
    The Guardian at the Threshold. Standing between the realm of Men and Myth, repelling both alive and dead to protect the symbol of Life rotting to Death, upholding an oath that should be naught.
    But he swore the oath of protection, if he is dead or alive if the tree is alive or dead if the world is bleached or safe has no meaning to him.
    For an Oath transcends life and death, time itself.
    Gatekeeper's convictions were carried by the winds of the underworld out into the World and he was respected and feared for what he represents. The Greeks called him Horkos, the Spirit of oaths and promises. When Romans came they named him Orcus - Avenger of Broken Promises.
    When Gatekeeper activates his Noble Phantasm, his targets are marked. Once they are hit or even grazed by his hammer a malus of blood appears on their body. It looks like the face of Orcus in the Bomarzo Garden in Italy. From then on what they say or promise is treated as an oath. If they fail or lie, they feel pain. The more they lie the harsher the punishment. Their thoughts are heard by others because even entertaining the thought of breaking a vow has the same bearing for the Spirit of Oaths. Their Mark grows and grows until it is big enough to swallow them whole. From this countless shrooms will grow, flesh-eating growths from his realm of Orcus. They will devour them over time, but they are infectious.
    But the malus can turn benevolent when the target is honest. It can shrink or never even begin to grow.
    Those who are acknowledged as upholders of oaths may gain Gatekeeper's respect and dialogue may begin.

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Lore and Background -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Lore and Background

    A Guardian of a Divine Tree. He swore an oath and took it seriously. But when the White Destruction reached it the Tree was destroyed. Nothing except the roots were left. So he dug through the earth and called the underground in which the roots of the tree rested his home. With the Age of Gods declining Beasts and mortals sought its lingering power, but he would stand guard.
    The picture of him standing steadfast became the metaphor for staying true to an oath. Horkos was the name he was given.
    Years later the Greek Gods drifted to what is now known as Italy and gained power. Hades resides deep inside the earth and tried to get his hands on the remaining power of the Tree, bolstering his waning power. But he held his ground. He repelled the forgotten heroes sent by Hades and the beasts of the underworld. He fought with the God of the Underworld himself, but no one ever won. Years of struggle ended when even the Roman Gods lost their worship and they fled into the Reverse Side.
    Horkos, now named Orcus by the new people, continued his calling. In the meanwhile, the mortals were confused who the real Lord of the Underworld was and new tales were spun. The truth is that Orcus just "ruled" a small portion of the underworld, the region above Dis Pater and below the overworld. Modern fiction sullied his name further and created/named foul beasts after him.
    When he noticed that the Fool found the Roots on his side, Orcus wandered there too. Perhaps he still fights to protect the Tree. Just this time the roots that bore into the Reverse Side of the World.

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Quotes and Relationships -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Quotes and Relationships

    "I do not care about the Earth being bleached. But I do care about the Tree I protect. I...I know what you humans can do to us beings of the Earth. Your thoughts alone can shape me. What if those trees of fantasy sully the reputation of the tree? What if it affects them as much as me? Just this once, I will fight to destroy those Trees."

    Jurupari, Iracema, Baldr Jölnir, Enheduanna-Nikkal, others associated with Divine or Sacred Trees:
    "Kindred Spirits, but we are not the same. I serve mine, you yours. But...I heard the thoughts of mine before it...when the Destruction laid eyes on it. They thought of their brothers and sisters."

    Sylvanus:
    "I...did not know you are out there..."
    Semino-Camazotz:
    "Try me, Monster."

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Craft Essence -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Craft Essence

    Eternal Fall
    "Spring is the cruelest season.
    Trees awake and flowers bloom. Life returns to the world.
    But the rising sun casts shadows over the Earth. And in it the forgotten wait and hope.
    The sweet scent of petals, an alluring pain of reminiscence.
    Memories of those that should bask in the sun.
    Ah...it will never return. It will only leave. It leaves the whole year.
    It leaves me alone.
    An Eternal Fall that protects me from Spring.
    The smell of rot is my nectar. The dim glow of the roots my unending dusk.
    When will I decay too, I wonder?"


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Notes -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Notes:
    I shamelessly use this prompt to expand on Wyverns Lore further! First thought was to make him an Alter-Ego of the different underworld gods, but nah. I wondered about the roots of Divine/Sacred trees and an obscure underworld god came at the right time to explore it.





    "This will be fun."


    Amour sacré de la patrie,
    Rends-nous l’audace et la fierté;
    A mon pays je dois la vie.
    Il me devra sa liberté.




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    "Good Mooorniiing~! Berserker Auber ready for an encore! Huh? It is dark outside you say?
    Non non, Master! See, the sun is rising! The sun of revolution! The Dawn of a new Age! And this young lady here is...
    Who in the name of the sacred Motherland are you by the way?!"
    *pantomimes happily with a bright smile*
    "Ahhh I see! Haaahaaahaa! I see! Master! This young lady here is Fanella, my dear little sister! And this makes me Masaniello, the proud fisherman of Naples!
    Now come, let the performance begin! Let us end the reign of tyranny!
    Iiiiit's showtiiiime!"


    B E R S E R K E R
    of the Revolutionary Opera
    = Daniel Auber =
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    Class
    Berserker
    Alternative Classes
    Caster, Faker
    True Name
    Daniel-François-Esprit Auber
    Aliases
    Masaniello & Fenella, King of One Day
    Origin
    France, Historical Fact, "La Muette de Portici", "Peveril of the Peak", Folklore
    Height/Weight
    180cm/83kg
    Alignment
    Chaotic Neutral
    Attribute
    Human, Earth

    STR END AGI MAN LCK
    D D+ D D B

    Likes
    Operas, experimenting with styles, Revolution!, Patriotism!, dancing smiling
    Dislikes
    tyranny, King William I
    Talent
    conducting, fishing, cooking, pantomine, ballet, understanding others
    Natural Enemy
    poisoners
    Armament
    fishing rod turned conductor baton, hand-axe
    Catalyst
    posters from the beginning of the Belgian Revolution


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Act I -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Class Skills

    Madness Enhancement E+
    Berserker appears to be sane, mutual understanding is possible. Usually has no benefits from this Skill, except he is poisoned. But every time he is summoned into a Grail War, a Servant with the ability to poison him will also be present.

    "Mad?! You call us mad?! Of course we are! We are all mad, deep inside our hearts! What else are the emotions that rest in our hearts? What else is idly sitting by while you are oppressed by foreign soldiers if not 'mad'? What else is standing up to those same foreign soldiers with just some forks and clenched fists as your weapons if not 'mad'? Let us all be mad, but drunk with freedom and not sober in tyranny!"
    *pantomimes beating up invisible people and doing a glorious victory pose*


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Act II -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Personal Skills

    Innocent Monster C
    Curse of the Listener. Berserker was a timid and shy person in life. He didn't even conduct his own plays out of nervousness. But the anecdote of his piece of music being the reason for a Revolution conflated him with Masaniello from his play. A confident fisherman, tanned by the Italian sun and muscular from his daily struggle against the Mediterranean waves, his personality and appearance were entirely overwritten. This skill seems to be the reason why the sister of his character, Fenella, is part of his Saint Graph. Because her character is lent from another play "Peveril of the Peak", who depicted her as a dumb dwarf/fairy-like girl, and her part was mainly played in pantomime and ballet, she is an upbeat, quirky and playful young woman. She is mute.

    Combination C
    Fenella, the eponymous "Mute Girl of Portici" is his partner. While never having met in his life, they somehow seem to understand each other pretty well - despite the language barrier. The bond between brother and sister is deep, even if artificially created. Fenella understands him much better at first, but over time of their summoning, he can catch up and mutual "friendship" with the stranger is established, making this a genuine skill.

    Poisened Performance Continuation C
    A composite skill of Weakness (Poison) and Battle Continuation. Masaniello was poisoned as punishment for his supposed betrayal. But when the city was attacked, the poisoners realized only he could repel the enemies. So Masaniello returned to the battlefield, delirious and in pain to lead the counteroffensive. In the end, he would still fall to the poison while defending a woman. Once Berserker is injected with his conceptual weakness, he is sure to die in the next big battle, but during this fight, he will go out in a blaze of glory. His Madness Enhancement rises by two ranks. If not poisoned this skill just makes him a bit tougher.

    "Haahaaa the Grail has humor, I give it that! But I am glad! I was a timid and weak man while alive. Now look at my ripped bronze body! And most importantly I got a new cute sister! The greatest gift after freedom is family! And without even winning the grail, I was gifted a new member! Master, I already won! Look at this cute and adorable little girl! Those big round eyes, her smile that makes every man protect her with his life! Ah Fanella! Dear petite mademoiselle, I am glad to have you with me! Whoever you are!
    But! Dare I say! As a big brother I have to be honest! Forgive me, but...
    I think you would look cuter with open hair! There I said it...! *peers through his fingers in anticipation*

    *Blushes and opens her hair, looks embarrassed to the ground*
    "KAWAAIIIIII!"


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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Act III -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Noble Phantasm

    "Dear countrymen! The time for the uprising has come! Let us end the reign of darkness and let a new sun erupt from the heart of our homeland! AUX ARMES!
    *patriotically waves invisible flag*

    Song of Uprising
    Igniting Heart of Revolution, the Vulcanic Finale


    His most famous anecdote and the reason he became a Servant crystallized as his Noble Phantasm.
    Berserker starts performing his Grand Opera La Muette de Portici. The piece has an important spot in the annals of both history and music history. The first Grand Opera, which would inspire great musicians like Richard Wagner, was a cornerstone of what would end up evolving into the Belgian Revolution.
    Previously banned from performance for unrest during a play months prior, it came back during the 15th Anniversary celebration of King William I's reign. A three-day event, which would end with Berserker's music. A revolt was openly announced with

    "Monday, the 23rd, fireworks; Tuesday, the 24th, illuminations; Wednesday, the 25th, revolution."
    When the actors performed the song
    Sacred Love for the Motherland
    "Amour sacré de la patrie"
    , the audience's passion ignited. When the line
    To Arms!
    "Aux Armes!"
    was sung, the people's emotions erupted and hurled themselves out of the opera, into history.
    The Belgian Revolution began.
    A Noble Phantasm that does not create unrest and revolution out of nothing, but Music that kindles the flame of discontent in the hearts of citizens. If they are unhappy with the current Ruler, they will raise their voices, their hearts and hands to the sky above their homeland and shout "No more!".
    A mental interference attack that only enhances the will of the people and makes them stronger. Listeners will unlock their bodily and mental potential and fight for what they believe is right. A Noble Phantasm that is the embodiment of history, which led to the establishment of a new, independent country. But it can turn against Berserker too. If he is judged a threat to a country, in which the citizens are happy, they could very well take up arms against himself.

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Act IV -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Lore and Background

    Daniel-François-Esprit Auber (1782 – 1871) was a French composer and director of the Paris Conservatoire.
    Born into an artistic family, Auber was at first an amateur composer before he took up writing operas professionally when the family's fortunes failed in 1820. He soon established a professional partnership with the librettist Eugène Scribe that lasted for 41 years and produced 39 operas, most of them commercial and critical successes. He is mostly associated with opéra-comique and composed 35 works in that genre. With Scribe he wrote the first French grand opera, La Muette de Portici in 1828.
    From 1842 to 1871 he was director of France's premier music academy, the Paris Conservatoire, which he expanded and modernized. From 1852 until the fall of the Second Empire in 1870 he was director of the imperial chapel in the Louvre, for which he wrote a substantial number of liturgical works and other religious music.
    A devotee of Paris, Auber refused to leave the city when the Franco-Prussian War led to the siege of Paris and the subsequent rise of the Paris Commune. He died in his house in Paris, aged 89, shortly before the French government regained control of the capital.

    Auber would usually manifest as a Caster, concentrating on his oeuvre as an acclaimed French composer, but as a Berserker he represents his most famous piece of music, which became a hymn of change.
    Berserker is the manifestation of The Curse of the Listener. He wrote a piece that influenced Europe and moved hearts. This left marks on his perception, which led to the addition of the main character of La Muette de Portici to his Saint Graph. Therefore Auber is more Masaniello than his actual self. But Auber did insert his patriotism into the character of the fisherman, so without summoning his Caster version, it is unclear where the line between Auber and Masaniello actually lies.
    Masaniello in Auber's play was inspired by the story of Tommaso Aniello, also called Masaniello. As Berserker he just assumes the name of his literary character due to Fanella being summoned with him, but as a Faker he would act like the real-world Masaniello.
    He was a Neopolitan Fisher who was provoked into a revolt against the Spanish occupants because the Viceroy's son raped his mute sister Fanella, who was then imprisoned. The fishermen swore their demise and set a trap on the marketplace. On it his sister acted as bait and when she was about to be arrested again, the people in waiting attacked and were victorious. But the movement was on the verge of turning violent, from which Masaniello distanced himself. He sought freedom and no violence. Two strangers entered his house, seeking protection from the violence outside. He swore shelter, but only afterward it was revealed they were his sister's rapist. Masaniellos conspirators were determined to kill them, but he held his vow sacred. They left in disgust. Shortly after he was crowned King of Naples. For this treason, his friends poisoned him. But shortly after the Spanish came with new soldiers to retaliate. They knew only Masaniello could save them, so they entreat him to act. Delirious, sick and in pain, he fought against the troops like a warrior. During the combat in the city, Mount Vesuvius erupted and while it spits fire, the fisherman spits blood and died while upholding his vow to protect his guests. Hearing those terrible tidings, his sister Fanella jumped to her death.
    Because there will always be a poisoner present in each Grail War he is summoned in, it is almost impossible to ever win. Except Berserker fights against them in the finale...

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Act V -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >ACT V



    "I am sorry, little girl. This is it. My finale has come, it was not enough to gain a standing ovation. See, I even made you sad. But it was fun. Thank you for playing my sister. Ah...this revolution ends today. Perhaps...one day...another..."
    "..."
    "..."
    "Daniel...hey...Danny...
    This is no fun anymore.
    The fun is over. But not this fight."




    "Ey you. You did this, right?
    Asshole...I am talking to you.
    Burn...I will let you burn for this."




    "Burn."

    The truth about the girl called Fanella is that she belongs to the Donas de Fuera. An Italian Fairy, a "Lady from the Outside" who is active on the west coast of Italy.
    A mad supernatural girl with a love for fishermen and decadence. A fairy with twisted tastes and fetishes. A Spirit of the wild that embodies the temperament and whims of the local Vulcan Vesuvius. The Italian Fae are a tribe led by a young boy in red, proclaiming himself the fairy King and his wife, the Queen. When they abducted girls and boys as young as eight, they brought them to their realm on flying goats and offer them delicious food and drink, even men and women for adult pleasures. Morality is foreign to them, following them over their life and inviting them for their debauchery even when they are married and had children, such as the most infamous example The Fisherwife of Palermo, known from the Sicilian Witch Trials. They hate Christianity and the Virgin Mary.
    If this Fae is the said Fisherwife is unknown. Fanella as a literary character was borrowed from another work called "Peveril of the Peak". She was depicted similar to a fairy and in the end it was revealed she just acted to be deaf and mute.
    Just like this "Fanella".
    You took away her toy, you ruined the twisted fun she found in this local fisherman, even if he just played pretend.
    Now you shall burn with the fury of a volcanic eruption.
    Donas de Fuera will viciously attack like a Berserker with a hair of fire, that burns hot like lava. Her hair mimicking the colors of flames, she will dance across the battlefield and sear through flesh and bones.
    And when the enemy is just a heap of ash, she will simply return to where she came from, ignoring the Master, as if their time together never happened.
    Perhaps the Class Container belonged to her all along?
    With her awakening her true power, it is revealed that the Combination Skill originates from her Fairy Eyes, which allowed her to see through Auber's intentions.

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Encore -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Craft Essence

    Fenella's Escape

    Within the stately palace, Within the stately room,
    They kept the silent maiden. As it had been her tomb.
    The birds that sing of summer, Went through the sunny air;
    She watched them in the sunshine, And wished she, too, were there.
    At length she fled—the evening Was darkening in the sky;
    There was revel in the palace, None mark'd the captive fly.
    She fled, and found her brother All lonely by their hearth:
    He was thinking of his sister, And of their former mirth.
    She could not tell her story— She had no words to tell;
    But the shadow of her sorrow Like night around her fell.
    Her cheek and brow were alter'd From their open look of yore,
    Her eye was dim and downcast, And her lip wore smiles no more.
    He rose, and he avenged her, That brother and there came
    An after hour of triumph, Atchieved in freedom’s name:
    The sunny town of Naples, The far and shining sea,
    Re-echoed to the thousands Who shouted, "We are free!"
    The tale of those bold fishermen, Is writ in blood and tears;
    True freedom asks the labour And care of many years.
    But slavery's strong foundations, In such hours are o’erthrown;
    In doubt, turmoil, and danger, The glorious seed is sown.

    - Letitia Elizabeth Landon



    "I will miss the fun we had...
    Oh well, next!"

    She says while redoing her braids. Fairies have strange attachments to this world.

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    < - ⪻ - ⪡ - ⫷ -- Notes -- ⫸ - ⪢ - ⪼ - >Notes:
    Thanks to whoever submitted the prompt, was fun. An easy way to not make an artist a Caster. Another Class for my own challenge to make artists of as many classes other than Caster and Foreigner as possible to break the stigmata!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pool 9
    Writer: A Servant whose greatest feats were related to their ability with written words. Authors, scholars and so on.

    Dark Side of the Moon: A Servant closely related to a famous individual, destined to live under the shadow of their fame. A partner, a sibling, a student. How do they feel about this destiny?

    New Year, New Me: Alt a Servant of your choice (your own or an existing one or hell, even mine if you dare) themed for the New Year. Use concepts unique to the date to shape their skills and how they act in this new form. You can go for the western notion of dressing in white or you can also go with the eastern theme too, dressed in kimonos and visiting temples.



    Observe, this is the slaughter-bench we call History.
    Fledgling Spirit, witnessing all this, do you still desire its continuation?
    Should history itself come to an end? Should it continue indefinitely?
    Find your own answer, and I shall help you realize it.







    The World Soul astride a horse
    I saw the Emperor – this world-soul – riding out of the city on reconnaissance. It is indeed a wonderful sensation to observe such an individual, who, concentrated here at a single point, astride a horse, reaches out over the world and masters it.



    Even in the most distorted figure we can still discern the Human
    After the creation of Nature appears Man. He constitutes the antithesis to the natural world; he is the being that lifts itself up to the second world. We have in our universal consciousness two realms, the realm of Nature [Gaia] and the realm of Spirit [Alaya]. The realm of Spirit consists in what is produced by man.

    The realm of Spirit is all-comprehensive; it includes everything that ever has interested or ever will interest man. Man is active in it; whatever he does, he is the creature within which the Spirit works. Hence it is of interest, in the course of history, to learn to know nature in its existence, that is, the point where Spirit and Nature unite—Human Nature.

    In speaking of Human Nature we mean something permanent. The concept of Human Nature must fit all men and all ages, past and present. This universal concept may suffer infinite modifications; but actually the universal is one and the same essence in its most various modifications. The universal type appears even in what seems to deviate from it most strongly—even in the most distorted figure we can still discern the Human.



    Everywhere our interest takes sides for or against
    World history in general is the development of Spirit in Time, just as nature is the development of the Idea in Space. When we cast a glance at world history in general, we see a tremendous picture of transformations and actions, an infinite of varied formations of peoples, states, individuals, in restless succession.

    Everything that can enter and interest the mind of humans, every sentiment of goodness, beauty, greatness is called into play. Everywhere aims are adopted and pursued which we recognize, whose accomplishment we desire; we hope and fear for them. In all these events and accidents we see human activity and suffering in the foreground, everywhere something which is part and parcel of ourselves, and therefore everywhere our interest takes sides for or against.

    At times we are attracted by beauty, freedom, and richness, at others by energy, by which even vice knows how to make itself important. At other times we see the large mass of a universal interest move heavily along, only to be abandoned to and pulverized by an infinite complexity of trifling circumstances. Then again we see trivial results from gigantic expenditures of forces or tremendous results from seemingly insignificant causes. Everywhere the motliest throng draws us into its circle—when the one disappears, the other swiftly takes its place.



    Ruin is at the same time the emergence of a new life
    To comprehend this change from its negative side, all we have to do is to look at the ruins of past splendor. What traveler has not been moved by the ruins of Carthage, Palmyra, Persepolis, Rome to think of the transitoriness of empires and men, to mourn the passing of once vigorous and flourishing life?

    This sadness does not dwell on personal loss and the transitoriness of one’s own purposes; it is disinterested sadness about the passing of splendid and highly developed human life. But then we pass on to another thought just as intimately connected with the idea of change, the positive fact, namely, that ruin is at the same time the emergence of a new life—that out of life arises death, but out of death, life.



    Class: Watcher
    True Name: Georg Wilhelm Friedrich Hegel
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Origin: Historical Facts and Rumors
    Attribute: Man

    A German philosopher often regarded as the most important figure of contemporary philosophy. Hegel constructed an all-encompassing philosophical system that has been considered to be the “completion of philosophy” itself.

    Parameters:
    STR: E
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: A+
    LCK: B
    NP: A+

    Class Skills:
    Watcher: B+
    The unique contract established between Watcher and his Master. In this case, he will guide them to “attain the World Spirit”. What Watcher states he wishes to achieve is to see his Master succeed in becoming an individual that can “move world history forward”. Though he can materialize like normal Servants can, he claims that own combat capacity is limited, so instead Watcher will “encourage” his Master to fight.

    To this end, Watcher can manifest “shadows” consisting of figures that represent the “Spirit of the Nation” (volksgeist) and the “Spirit of the Age” (zeitgeist), specific to the region and era Watcher is summoned into. Though these shadows cannot directly participate in combat, Watcher, through his Noble Phantasm, can somehow channel their power to his Master for a limited time through something similar to a Class Card Install.

    Territory Infringement: B
    The crossing of a forbidden boundary, this is a skill granted to those who had overstepped, or rather, overcame the limit imposed by the entities that hold authority, whether kings, gods or the World itself. For Watcher, using his Noble Phantasm, this can be temporarily achieved by simulating the Authority of the Counter Force using the Volksgeist and the Zeitgeist.

    Personal Skills:
    History Observation: A++
    The insight to analyze the flow of history; the capacity to evaluate individuals, societies, circumstances and ideas which compose the grand stage of world history. Among other things, with his historical observations Watcher can reveal the True Name of Servants, weaken mystery, predict future events, and even elucidate ways to realize a specific future. Of course, the information he gathers through these observations will immediately be shared with his Master, as part of his contract as a Watcher-class.

    In addition, this skill can be further boosted temporarily through the usage of his Noble Phantasm, allowing Watcher to access something akin to the highest rank of Clairvoyance, though with much more strain on his Saint Graph.

    Aufhebung — Conceptual Synthesis: A
    The foundation of magecraft that Watcher spent his life perfecting, the culmination of his life’s work, an all-encompassing system that has been praised as the “completion of philosophy” — that is, what is commonly known as the Hegelian Dialectics.

    One aspect of this magecraft is something called “Paradox Synthesis”, in which contradictory concepts, objects or elements, whether abstract or concrete can be processed into a single phenomenon. In practice, it allows Watcher to combine together things like Noble Phantasms, ignoring conceptual contradictions and paradox alike. It is through this Skill that it is possible Watcher to fuse and strengthen his Master with foreign Saint Graphs.

    Absolute Mind: EX
    A skill representing the transcendent state of one that has found the Absolute Wisdom. It is a kind of mental protection that also has the effect of a limited Independent Manifestation, which negates time manipulation attacks and instant death, as well as permitting him unsupported materialization for a brief period. It also negates attacks which conceptually exploit “incompleteness, imperfection and redundancy”, by confirming one as an “Absolute Existence”.

    Noble Phantasms:
    Phänomenologie des Geistes
    The Chalice of the Realm of Spirits Foaming Forth Infinitude
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: A+
    The Phenomenology of Spirit.
    Hegel’s most well known published book. A work that seeks to attain Absolute Knowing by constructing a philosophical framework that can contain all philosophical knowledge. A sorcery tome that teaches of a method to perfect the Spirit of Human Self-Consciousness, Alaya, though the progression of world history.

    It is a Noble Phantasm that gives form to the Spirit of the Nation (volksgeist) and the Spirit of the Age (zeitgeist). These Spirits manifest as “shadows” that can appear in Watcher’s stead to guide the Master. They also can be made to temporarily possess a living human (the Master) and transform them into some kind of Pseudo-Servant, or provide enhancement to allied Servants. The Volksgeist typically carries with them some sort of Nation-Building Authority, while the Zeitgeist will usually possess Innovation-type abilities that can negate mystery.

    After Watcher completes his contract to his Master, that is, fulfilling the condition of “moving history forward”, the fate of this world is fixed, and even if it’s the most hopeless of Lostbelts, it will eventually continue its course as a part of Pan Human History.

    Perhaps, another ending is possible.
    Hm? Master, is this not the result you desire? The future you have chosen?
    Pan Human History, as you call it, will go on indefinitely, into the unfathomable eternity.
    History, with all the beautiful suffering and pointless joy it brings, continues on forever.
    Therefore, to fuel this journey, the worlds where history cannot move forwards should be culled.
    The unstoppable march of History will mercilessly trample all stagnation.
    This is the correct conclusion! Without a doubt… Indeed, the most reasonable path!





    History is not the soil of happiness
    One may contemplate history from the point of view of happiness. But actually history is not the soil of happiness—The periods of happiness are blank pages in it.

    There is satisfaction in world history. But it is not the kind that is called happiness, for it is satisfaction of purposes that are above particular interests. Purposes that are relevant for world history must be grasped in abstract volition and with energy. The world-historical individuals who have pursued such purposes have satisfied themselves, but they certainly did not pursue happiness.



    World History continues on its course
    In the course of history two factors are important. One is the preservation of a people, a state, of the well-ordered spheres of life. This is the activity of individuals participating in the common effort and helping to bring about its particular manifestations. It is the preservation of ethical life. The other important factor, however, is the decline of a state.

    The existence of a national spirit is broken when it has used up and exhausted itself. World history, the World Spirit, continues on its course. We cannot deal here with the position of the individuals within the moral whole and their moral conduct and duty. We are concerned with the Spirit’s development, its progression and ascent to an ever higher concept of itself.

    The historical men, world-historical individuals, are those who grasp just such a higher universal, make it their own purpose, and realize this purpose in accordance with the higher law of the spirit. Such individuals have no consciousness of the Idea as such. They are practical and political men. But at the same time they are thinkers with insight into what is needed and timely. They see the very truth of their age and their world, the next genus, so to speak, which is already formed in the womb of time. It is theirs to know this new universal, the necessary next stage of their world, to make it their own aim and put all their energy into it.



    The world-historical persons must therefore be recognized as its watchers
    Caesar was such a man. In accomplishing his originally negative purpose – the autocracy over Rome – he at the same time fulfilled the necessary historical destiny of Rome and the world. Thus he was motivated not only by his own private interest, but acted instinctively to bring to pass that which the times required. It is the same with all great historical individuals: their own particular purposes contain the substantial will of the World Spirit. They must be called “heroes,” insofar as they have derived their purpose and vocation not from the calm, regular course of things, sanctioned by the existing order, but from a secret source whose content is still hidden and has not yet broken through into existence.

    They are men, therefore, who appear to draw the impulses of their lives from themselves. Their deeds have produced a condition of things and a complex of historical relations that appear to be their own interest and their own work.

    The world-historical persons, the heroes of their age, must therefore be recognized as its watchers – their words and deeds are the best of the age. Great men have worked for their own satisfaction and not that of others.



    They fall off like empty hulls from the kernel
    Let us now cast a look at the fate of these world-historical individuals. They were fortunate in being the agents of a purpose which constitutes a step in the progress of the universal Spirit. But as individuals distinguished from their substantial aim, they were not what is commonly called happy, nor did they want to be. They wanted to achieve their aim, and they achieved it by their toil and labor. They succeeded in finding their satisfaction in bringing about their purpose, the universal purpose. With such a grand aim they had the boldness to challenge all the opinions of men. Thus they attained no calm enjoyment. Their whole life was labor and trouble, their whole being was in their passion.

    Once their objective is attained, they fall off like empty hulls from the kernel. They die early like Alexander, they are murdered like Caesar, transported to Saint Helena like Napoleon. This awful fact, that historical men were not what is called happy – for only private life in its manifold external circumstances can be “happy” – may serve as a consolation for those people who need it, the envious ones who cannot tolerate greatness and eminence.



    So mighty a figure must trample down many an innocent flower
    A world-historical individual is not so sober as to adjust his ambition to circumstances; nor is he very considerate. He is devoted, come what may, to one purpose. Therefore such men may treat other great and even sacred interests inconsiderately – a conduct which indeed subjects them to moral reprehension.

    But so mighty a figure must trample down many an innocent flower, crush to pieces many things in its path.



    Nacht der Welt
    Night of the World at the End of History
    Type: Anti-History
    Rank: EX
    The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk. Absolute Wisdom can only be attained when the World is at Night. True Freedom is attained only at the End of History.

    A Noble Phantasm in which Watcher invokes the third and final Spirit, the Weltgeist, the World Spirit, becoming one with it. He then seeks to usurp the Counter Force in order to bring about the End of History, by reversing the mechanism of Quantum Time Lock. Then, with the Weltgeist as its container, the congregation of the History of the World up until its End is crystallized into a world seed that will grow into a great Tree, a Tree of Fantasy that can sustain a lost world. In other words — it is a Noble Phantasm that constructs a Lostbelt.

    The human being is this Night, this empty nothing which contains everything in its simplicity.
    A wealth of infinite ideas, images, none of which occur to it directly, and none of which are not present.
    This is the Night, the interior of humanity, existing here purely in phantasmagoric representations.
    It is night everywhere: here a bloody head suddenly shoots up, and there another white shape appears, only to vanish as suddenly.
    We see this Night when we look a human being in the eye, watching into a terrible Night.
    The Night of the World hangs out toward us.

    Creator Notes
    Originally intended to have a second Beast-class form, but I ran out of time.




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    1. Otto the Great as a Ruler, preferably with this FC or one vaguely along those lines.

    2. Pyrrhus Neoptolemus. There are many versions of his life so someone making a sheet for him could in theory mix and match as they please, but since I can request something more specific, I'd ask you to please keep him killing the old Priam upon an altar and throwing Astyanax from the walls of Troy in the lore for this version.

    3. A combatant Servant who isn't from Europe, isn't Genghis Khan, isn't from the Three Kingdoms, doesn't have a Divinity rank, and lived (or was invented) at any point before the end of the 14th century A. D.



    Here is my servant i made for my third prompt option , this is the current status . sorry for the the incomplete sheet profile but i had problems to find some candidates for the third option as the two others were not giving me inspirations . As i noticed that i were rather europe centric with my servants what i before even not noticed haha .thus i spent the most time with searching possible candidates where i get the neccesary start inspiration and ideas .please can you add that commentary to the profile sheet .

    Rostam Farrokhzad
    (Rider)

    "Greetings valued Maju , you have called Persias Top General , my name is Rostam Farrokhzad and my class is the Rider class , i wish good collaboration Master ."

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    Accencion 1


    Final Accenscion



    Height:181 cm
    Origin: Persian History (Sasanian Age)
    Alignment: Lawfull Neutral
    Attributes:Men,Brynhildr beloved,Star
    Weapons: a persian Sabre,Akinaka ,iranian steppe type Bow and Arrow, a Spear
    Other Qualifying Classes: Saber, Ruler,Alter Ego
    Likes:Likes homelands majestic culture ,harmony , the iluminated Night sky the stars,
    Dislikes:The Enemies of Iran, his own failure

    Parameter:

    Strenght: B Endurance:B
    Agility:B+ Luck:C+
    Mana:C+ NP:A+




    Skills


    Classkills:

    Magic Resistence:B+
    Through that he were a practioner of Zoroastrianic rites does he possess ,at the beginning already strong resistence against Thaumaturgies but he had to endure during his Life also several magical ordeals similar like his namesake where the historic sources mute themselves.

    Is capable of negating the most modern Thaumaturgies upto three verse spells and he possess also great durability against Greater Thaumaturgie or Divine Sorcery especially of Persian and central Asiatic origin.

    Riding:A+
    Allows for the mounting of all beings upto the phantasmal Rank aswell all vehicles even those which were not of his time with peerless perfection.

    As educated member of one of the seven Arsacid Families is he an trained Horserider and possess peerless control over equestrian tactics aswell is he able to manifest his old trusty Steed .So is he able to execute the manouver of the Parthian Shot flawlessly.

    "My Steed my be just possessing weak phantasmal blood we together shall bring you victory Master ."

    Personal skills:

    Teachings of the Holy Flame:B
    Are the Teachings and knowledge of the Zoroastrianian Religion aswell as their Sorceries as the priests of Zoroastrianism were also called Majus,the root of the Mages.

    These Teachings could also be called "Zoroastrian Sacrements" but in their case the SAcrements are no true materialistic relics /though there are some) but the Holy Flame Atar that was the creation of Ahura Mazda himself and which learned the priest t build in themselves also one to be ready to invite the flame thus invite the Enlightment in them .

    As Rostam is a belonging to a family which are the descendants of the legendary Herokings Dara II and Esfandiyar of the Kayanian dynasty is he possessing a stronger Holy Flame whic hs links him towards the mythical past in other words allows him to access mysteries of the Age of Fairies . Further does he enjoy the general blessings like that he has an immunitiy of all Flame and Fire attributed attacks until Rank B like that he can run through a Inferno burst aswell allows him to control and manipulate a certain amount of Flames and fire his control over them is greater then a normal Flame mana blast as he can control them better like can he form Serpents of Fire that he can direct or that he can use forreign flames as if it were his own . Aside does this kill offer him resistences against poisen and curse attacks until the same rank.

    Also are included certain spiritual evocations like the the evocation of the Spenta Mainyiu , or a from him special devised method that builds one of his Noblephantasm.

    Privileges of an Regent:B+
    For an certain amount of time were Rostam appointed Regent of Sasanian Persia during the sixth century as civil wars and a plaque tormented the Country were he appointed as able General and Administrator to guide and protect the Country until an legitimate Shah is selected .

    its offer him the perks of Imperial Privilege plus the abbillity to select an person or servant to obtain Imperal Privileges (Sasanianshahanshah) under the sorted skillsets are : Instinct , Briliance of a Strategist ,Eye for Art ,Ear for Folklore , Holy Guardian of the State ,TEachings of the Holy Flame, Arcane arts Specialisation, Militaric Tactics , amongst others.

    Militaric Expertise (Spahbed): B+
    Denotes the status of ones militaric Rank Rostam were the Army Chief of Iran and he were aknowledged as excellent and able Commander and fighter aswell as Conquerrer according to the Shanahme ,this skill offers , brilliance of a Strategist ,Eye of mind , Planning ,resource managament,Ambushh preparartion etc.

    Hope is Rostam(Historic):EX
    The special status that Rostam possess withhin the Persian history as during his time were he the symbol of an Persian Noblemen and amongst the Soldiers a pillar of Courage as they feeled aslong as Rostam is standing the War can be brought to Victory were their feelings. Even almost Milenia after his death and the demise of the last true Persia ,as the Country were conquered and corrupted by their Enemies did he remained a Symbol for the National Pride whichs memory they invoked .





    Noblephantasm
    Inheritor of the Legendary Heros name : Rostam
    A+
    Anti-Unit(self)
    Is the sublimation of an unique spell Rostam developed during his life which is based on Zoroastrian Sorcery namely he atempted in life to access the powers of the Legendary Hero Rostam of Persians Mythical Past namely by using the Spiritual Evokation of the Zororastrianic Rites aswell that he used his oown Ancestry and Name as thaumaturgic Key as at first Rostam FArrokhzads Ancetry as Member odf the Ispahbudhan are the Kayanian Kings Dara II and Esfandiyar where later were the Rival thus Counterppart of the legendary Rostam so did Rostam use his own name as Key to summon the power of the legendary Warrior withhin as he felt that Eran needed his legendary prowess to stabilize itself ,he succedd in it as he succedd in to attract the legendary Hero so that he could for short amounts of time use his prowess or even materialize parts of his weaponry ,however he couldnt for prolonged time retain that state.

    basically were it a method not dissimilar to creating a pseudo servant out of one selv aswell in that this particular spell even reached the domain of the third Magic due to the circumstance that he used his very own name which according to old spirituality is connected to ones very core other said his Soul .

    However as Servant is that different namely that he is able now to use this Noblephantasm allows him this to draw upon aspects of the legend of Rostam , so can he access at one time either a skill or even Noblephantasm of him ,however although as servant he is able to use this Noblephantasm longer as he used this abbillity in life doe it strains his Saint Graph and he takes damage if its to long . however several usages in short time frames are no problem.

    "I know Master it may be cheap to borrow power of another but do you dont feel sometimes not enough ?"


    Requiem of Athanatoi
    Shadow of Our Glory

    Anti-Army
    A



    Is the Sublimation of Rostams own Army which consisted ouf of Ten thousand Soldiers which Rostam compared to the old Army of the Achaemenidic Shahanshahs which once conquered the levantine area .

    This Men are looking like Black Phantoms clad in dark Armors and cloths which let them look like Dark Phantoms symbolising their status as Shadows of Persias once Glorious victory bringing Warriors nevertheless each of them still has the inner drive to attain glory as their skill set is Oblivion Correction, Bravery of the Cornered , Eye of mind D

    They are consisting out of heavy Cavalry with armored strong horses and whose Riders are armored with Spears ,shields ,sabres , light armored Cavalry with Parthian Bows and Arrows aswell cavalry swords , Foot soldiers with different armour degree like some are heavy armored during other have just light protectors aswell different weapons from Akinakas to Sabres ,from great Helene like Great Spear and shields ,to close combat Spear , to Parthian Bow and Arrows to Panjagan practioners, to several daggers .


    This Noblephantasm is a Reality Marble but not one that transport others into an miniature world it overlaid itself on the world as dark Fog like Sandstorm which swallows the light so that even on a bright days its appears as if its whole night where the Moon is shinning which symbolise Rostams and his Men loathing stance to their inability to defend their home country ,their hatred and guide of the defeated permeates the very air and this negativity is actualized as miasmic curse which i enviously gnaws the Magical energy of the Victors of the world so that the more succefull an Servant and especially a Commander or Fighter were the with more hatred they are drained of their Mana so that their Parameters are lowered by one Rank. Though their energy is given and distributed amongst the Requiem Warriors aswell Rider and his Master plus Allies which are instead obtaining these energy and a bost inform of a Mental Interference so that they fight like an in the corner forced Tiger .

    As the Reality Marble is not encasing the Opponents in a Miniature World are they free to flee however the Warriors are also free to roam so that fleeing from them is difficult further as regardless the often the Soldiers are slaying are they after ten minutes reappearing further are they able to act semi independent as each of them is sentient and posses their own intellect (though quite nihilistic and pessimistic tending ) and driven after the taste of victory. The only way to stop this noblephantasm is eiter when Rider Mana storage is emptied though as the Fog even takes Mana from the world would that be a low possibility , that Rider deactivate itself,or if Rider is defeated and killed .

    Rider can control which type of Warrior he wants to summon also can he repurpose the miasma as Mana blast as well as magical energy of imaginary elements so can he open Gates which connect two points .Aswell can he only partially summon this noblephantasm

    However Rider dislike to use this Noblephantasm as for him it symbolise guilt and shame.



    Commentaries: Honestly this prompts were a bit difficult for me as with first two couldnt i get any start points ,and with the third have i spend nearly two weeks to find some potencial candidates as the not divinity rule aswell the outside Europe rule demostrate . i didnt noticed how Europe centric i were in profile making so was that an interesting experience and i will definetly participate in the second secret santa contest !

    As i noticed were my fortes actually are lying .If one should ask what his Hope is Rostam skill does its basically a Hope type Mana blast which affect his allies also and function as Charisma type . i will after the contest post the true complet version in the normal thread .
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    Dinosaur — Incorporate a Dinosaur into the sheet. Paleontologists are still exciting despite being the obvious choice, with Mesoamerican Servants coming right after, but don't limit yourself. Be creative.

    American Beast - A Beast candidate or fully-fledged Beast from the Americas. North, Center or South America, doesn't matter.

    Arthurian Natural Enemy - The "Natural Enemy" of one of the official Knights of the Round Table. Material profiles often list the Natural Enemy of the character, but I want to see your take on someone that hasn't been mentioned as one yet. It doesn't need to be someone the knight actually met while alive. Rather, it's the one existence that goes fundamentally against their ideals. If they meet, it'd be impossible to come to an understanding.



    Assassin of Backstabbing

    “So, I’ve been summoned into this class… very well then. I am a servant of the class Assassin. Don’t worry master, I have no plans to betray you… not currently anyway.”



    Class: Assassin
    Other Classes: Caster, Saber
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Place of Origin: Historical, Roman Empire

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MGI: C
    LCK: D~A

    Height: 173 cm
    Weight: 69 kg
    Likes: Philosophy, Democracy
    Dislikes: Bad jokes, Tyranny
    Talent: Building someone’s trust
    Natural Enemy: Julius Caesar, Gawain
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Humanoid, Male, Praetor
    Armament: Scroll, Dagger, a Short Sword
    Catalyst: An old bust bearing his resemblance

    ~~Class Skills~~
    Presence Concealment: -
    A skill which represents the capacity to hide one’s presence as a servant. A common Class Skill of the Assassin class. Assassin loses this skill in favor of Friendly Face, due to his legend being less about him being outright stealthy, but rather made himself unassuming to his target before he committed the deed.

    “Sneaking about? Nah that’s not really me. I’ve always had fairly heavy feet anyway.”


    ~~Personal Skills~~
    Friendly Face: -
    A skill which is somewhat similar to skills such as Angel of Assassination and Uncrowned Arms Mastery, and is very similar to the skill Espionage. It is given to those of the Assassin class who were known for appearing friendly to their targets before killing them. As a skill, it causes his presence to fail to register as hostile. The more people who trust him, the more this skill causes Assassin to be viewed as “someone who can be trusted” by others. If Assassin were to attack someone or something, this skill would prove ineffective against said person after he attacks them.

    “You know what they say… keep your friends close and your enemies closer.”

    Innocent Monster: B
    A skill possessed by Servants whose true history and existence has been distorted by monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person’s will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant’s abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed. Although Assassin’s reasons for the betrayal were noble in their own right and Assassin himself was not a bad person, he is remembered by many as not just a backstabber, but is commonly referred to as the person who committed the first backstabbing. Whether that statement is true or not, this skill corrupts his own personality and abilities to fit that of what people see him as when summoned under the Assassin class. His physical appearance however has little to no changes.

    “So called ‘leaders’ who make themselves tyrants among men can take a one way trip to Pluto. In fact, I’d be happy to take them there myself.”

    Kai Su Teknon: EX
    A unique skill which represents the fact that Assassin was extremely lucky when he was friendly with his trusting friend, and was very unlucky after he participated in the assassination of his trusting friend. As a skill, the more people trust him, the higher his Luck becomes. When summoned, his Luck starts out at a C or a B depending on whether his master trusts him or not. Then, depending on if and how he builds trust with other servants and masters, his Luck may further increase or decrease. The lowest his luck can reach is D rank, and the highest it can reach is A rank.

    “What can I say master, I am extremely good at making friends… or, well, at least they see me as a friend.”


    ~~Noble Phantasm~~
    Sic Semper Tyrannis
    The Backstab to Tumble Tyrants

    “Betrayal is my weapon, my weapon is my will. Thus, I always wield it to strike tyranny. With my backstab I say: Sic Semper Tyrannis!”



    Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Trust, Anti-Tyrant, Conceptual
    Rank: B+
    Range: 1~10
    Max Targets: 1 Person or Servant

    A Noble Phantasm which represents the assassination he had committed along with many other people, and him being known as someone who is said to have been the first person known as a backstabber. As everyone came in to start stabbing the target, Assassin came in for his own stab. The target, shocked Assassin (a friend of his) would ever betray him like this, asked if he too was betraying him. In response, Assassin stabbed right into the target’s back, and spoke the words “Sic Semper Tyrannis” (which means “Thus always to tyrants”)… or at least that’s how many view the event. As a Noble Phantasm, it gives him the passive effect of dealing a lot more damage to those who either were tyrants, or were considered or viewed as a tyrant. However his True Name release is slightly different from most servants. The True Name release doesn’t trigger the Noble Phantasm like an aria, rather he is supplied with a little bit of mana and strength to perform it without an aria (sometimes straining himself to accomplish it), and AFTER the Noble Phantasm is performed, he speaks the aria to balance out the negative effects to himself. This is due to the effect that in life, he didn’t speak his phrase until after his target had been stabbed. That being said, the part of the Noble Phantasm that is a part of the True Name release causes space to be folded and assassin to appear either behind his target or at the location of his target’s weak spot (if he knows said persons True Name and weak spot) and preform a deadly stab. Assassin usually prefers this to be his only attack against servants, due to his style of attacking to be much more effective against someone who doesn’t see it coming. Additionally, if this Noble Phantasm is interrupted before the strike happens, Assassin will miss out on his opportunity to say his aria after the strike and thus be extremely weakened.


    ~~Lore~~
    Assassin’s real name is none other than Marcus Junius Brutus, the man who was famed for being a friend of Julius Caesar turned traitor when he participated in Caesar’s assassination. His act of betraying Caesar and literally stabbing him in the back during the assassination ultimately caused him to viewed by many throughout as a backstabber and a traitor.

    Brutus was born in 85 BC in Rome, from his mother Servilia and his father who was also named Marcus Junius Brutus. He himself was the descendant of a famous fighter for democracy, Lucius Junius Brutus, who ended the life of a tyrant who terrorized the people of Rome, so growing up Brutus had a lot on his shoulders. However, Brutus’ father was killed by Pompey in 77 BC, which eventually led him to be adopted by a relative by the name of Quintus Servilius Caepio in 59 BC. Thus, Brutus took up the name Quintus Servilius Caepio Brutus legally, however most who knew him used his birth name instead.

    In 58 BC, Brutus made his way up in the world by becoming assistant to Cato the Younger, who was the governor of Cyprus at the time. During that time he not only helped Cato by assisting the administration of the province, but even helped administer the province if Cato required him to. A few years later, Brutus even helped in the minting of coins for the area, further proving his helpfulness. During these times as a member of the higher class, Brutus became hooked on philosophy and grew to thoroughly enjoyed some of the famous philosophers of his time.

    He eventually married Claudia, the daughter of Appius Claudius Pulcher, in 54 BC. Then a year later, he was made a quaestor. Directly after this, Julius Caesar had asked Brutus to join his as a legate in Gaul, but Brutus (though honored) declined the offer. Instead, during the year of 53 BC, he used his newfound position to help right wrongs and collect debts that were owed to people. In 52 BC however, after the what had happened that had caused his uncle-in-law’s death, he urged the people to not make Pompey the dictator. This had however put his views in opposition to Cato the Younger. Pompey was eventually chosen as dictator, and when Pompey tried to ensure something was done about the killer of Brutus’ uncle-in-law, both by a philosopher by the name of Cicero and also Brutus himself. This stance led him to be viewed highly by the people at the time.

    During the next couple years, through Caesar’s help and support, Brutus was elected a Pontifex. He continued to become involved in major trials during the time period in a quest to right the wrongs of the period. However, everything changed when in 49 BC Civil War broke out. Brutus thus was was stuck between two hard choices; join Pompey, who had killed his father but was acting in the interest of the senate, or join Caesar, whom his mother had become entangled with and promised justice to be brought on his father’s killer. After a long time of deliberation, later that year Brutus joined Pompey along with many of his friends and associates such as Cicero and Cato.

    Brutus helped the fight against Caesar’s forces, powered by his sense of duty for his friends. However, Caesar had told his forces that if they saw Brutus to avoid hurting him and trying to bring his back to him if possible. Evidently, by late 48 BC, Brutus wrote to Caesar wishing to join him. Thus, Caesar welcomed Brutus back with open arms, and even appointed Brutus as a Governor of Cisalpine Gaul.

    By 44 BC though, things took a turn. Pubic and Senate support of Caesar was dwindling and many were calling for Caesar’s death, and some even ridiculing Brutus for not taking action like his ancestor once did. The pressure on Brutus was continuous, from both strangers, friends, and family alike, all wishing him to take action against Caesar. All of this peer pressure caused him to give in once a group of Senators came together to plot Caesar’s death. So, Brutus had agreed to join them in their quest of tyrannicide. They began their plotting and settled on the 15th of March of that year.

    The day finally came, and on separating Julius Caesar from others, the senators enacted their plan. Blindsiding Caesar, they all pull out daggers hidden in their clothing, and attempt to stab him. Caesar is bewildered and attempts to swat away the incoming daggers, but there were just too many of them for him to do so. Little by little, he suffered scratches, then light scrapes, then small jabs, before finally being hit by a few stabs. However, he turned around and was utterly shocked at Brutus’ presence, only getting out the words “You too my child?” Before giving up entirely, for he could not find the energy to fight on after seeing Brutus. Teary-eyed, Brutus goes up to Caesar, and in a shaky, sorrowful voice, he speaks the word “Thus, always to tyrants”, before letting his dagger fly down into Caesar’s spine. He barely manages a second stab before losing grip on his dagger altogether, overcome by strong emotions, for he had just killed a friend. The only sounds he could hear around him were his tears hitting the floor and the countless sounds of blade hitting flesh as the other senators continued to stab.

    After that day, the senators managed to continue their plan to move away from tyranny. However, what the didn’t account for was Mark Antony’s rousing speech that was given at Caesar’s funeral on the March 20th. This speech had effectively turned the public against them, wanting vengeance for Caesar’s death. Dispute Brutus’ efforts to disuade the masses by shining the light on Caesar’s tyranny, they still called for the senators’ blood. With no choice, Brutus (as well as many other senators) fled the capital.

    What followed was a war between those who sided with the senators who committed tyrannicide, and those who sided with Mark Antony and Octavian. After many battles, finally at Philippi, Brutus found himself slowly losing. This worsened when he found out that a fellow senator, Cassius, had committed suicide thinking Brutus had died. After finding the battle lost, Brutus and some of his men fled into the hills. Wanting not to die by the hands of those who would bring back tyranny, Brutus committed suicide with his own sword. His last words were a curse uttered towards Octavian, as well as him urging his men to continue fleeing. Upon finding his body later, out of a sense of honor, Mark Antony had Brutus’ body wrapped up in his most expensive cloak and sent to be cremated and brought to the mother of Brutus. However, Octavian had sneakily took the head, and it’s whereabouts afterward would forever remain uncertain. As the years passed, many would remember his acts of “treachery” and “betrayal”, coining the word “backstabbing” because of him. Eventually though, much later people realized his noble intentions. However, his unsepperable tie with the word “backstab” curses him even among the Throne of Heroes, for whenever he is summoned in the Assassin class, he was have these negative views forced upon him, becoming (for the lack of better words) an innocent monster.


    ~~Personality~~
    “I usually only want to engage in small talk with someone I’d be killing later, but I guess I’ll make an exception for you master…”“I usually only want to engage in small talk with someone I’d be killing later, but I guess I’ll make an exception for you master…”



    Brutus, tainted by Innocent Monster, has become the very image of a backstabber. Someone who makes you feel wanted, loved, and held dear, before ending your life when your hope is highest. However… even in this state, it is largely aimed towards tyrants (or at least people who carry themselves like one). Brutus carries himself as a jokester and the friend who always makes others laugh. However, underneath it all, his is cold, calculating, and ever focused. That does not mean his “false demeanor” is indeed fake. Rather, it is remnants of his true personality which shine through the thick fog that is his Innocent Monster skill. Thus, he may still acts this way towards his master or an ally he actually trusts. However, he does terrible with masters who have a “holier than thou” attitude, and may consider killing them if he deals with it for too long. This is also the same for allies (either human or servant), however he is much warier and plans much more against those stronger than him. Despite his class, he actually is fairly skilled in battle, as he was very frequent in it when he was alive, but will usually avoid it against most servants as many of them will be much better at it than he is. While he views tyrants terribly, he thinks those who view kings as “perfect” and think they should be supported no matter what are just as bad. To him, these ones breed and cultivate tyranny by doing this. His wish for the grail is an end to tyranny, as he finds it to be a “stain which has far outlived its welcome, it deserves to be bleached away”.


    ~~Relationships~~
    Julius Caesar (Saber):
    “It seems we meet again, my old friend. No hard feelings right?… Well, maybe that was being a bit too hopeful.”

    Gilgamesh (Archer):
    “Ah, you seem like a fine ruler who knows the life’s worths. Say, would you like to share a drink? I think you and I could make fine friends… You don’t want to be acquainted with someone who puts up false fronts? Ah, I should’ve known Gilgamesh would’ve seen through my ruse. Oh well, it was worth a shot.”

    Gawain (Saber):
    “You don’t like me very much it seems… Ah I see, so that’s it. Why did I betray my king you say? Well, I saw him going down the wrong path and ended his tyranny before it tainted Rome any further. If anything I was doing him and the country a favor… even if they didn’t see it that way.”


    ~~Creator Notes~~
    Pool 12 - Prompt 3 “Arthurian Natural Enemy”
    So out of this pool of prompts I was given, I was originally considering doing one of the others. However, in the end I decided to do “Arthurian Natural Enemy” as I wanted to do a person for the prompt to be the Natural Enemy of one of my favorite Fate servants: Gawain. I decided the person that would fit best would be a traitor, and initially had trouble finding the right one. In the end I stumbled upon Brutus and had a “of course, why didn’t you think of that doofus” moment. From there on I slowly built up the sheet, early on deciding that in order to make it feel honestly like an opposite, I wanted him to be someone under the full effects of Innocent Monster. Anyway, whoever made this prompt, I hope this attempt pleases you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pool 2
    1. Any existing Servant in another Class container they qualify for.

    2. An example of any of the missing Greek Lostbelt figures who were either killed in action or failed to appear at all (Ares, Apollo, Dionysus, etc) in summonable form. If there are somehow repeats, this can be extended to any of the other Lostbelts too, I suppose.

    3. I'd like to see the Baltics represented. Any historical/mythological/fictional figure, so long as they originate from either Lithuania, Latvia, or Estonia.




    Hestia

    I beg of you.

    Allow me to hold their Flame once more.

    [Request Denied]

    [Materializing secondary Spirit Graph]

    [Consciousness Upload Complete]

    [Deploying Terminal]


    I shall save them myself.

    Beloved of the Twelve Pillars

    “It has been a long time since I last wore the form of a Pillar. In Proper Human History, the love which I held for my dear siblings was enough to keep their chaotic nature from overwhelming them. Though it would seem I have already perished in this world. I can only imagine how much my family has suffered. What have you done this time, Zeus?”

    Profile
    Class
    Other Classes
    Allignment
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    Caster / Ruler
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    Height / Weight
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    Greece
    Mythology
    Likes

    “My family, of course. The warmth of the fire and the smell of a home cooked meal. I was never very good at playing the role of Queen. I’m better served as a caretaker than as a ruler.”

    Dislikes

    “Family members don’t always get along. I haven’t had to put my foot down since the Age of Gods, but I won’t hesitate to if they continue their atrocious behavior in this timeline.”

    Parameters
    Strength: E
    Agility: C
    Endurance: C
    Mana: A
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: A
    Command Cards
    Background

    The Beloved.

    The Queen.

    She of Many Blessings and Many Forms.

    Though history may have forgotten the true face of the goddess who remained the first born amongst the Olympians, it could be said that the gods themselves never forgot her own origin as the first amongst them. The one who held the flame of civilization and watched over both their own home and those of mortals.

    Hestia enjoyed watching the love shared between families most.

    She cherished the view from within her flames.

    The only respite she held as the original Queen which oversaw the Olympians. Her own Authority as the First Born granted her not only command over all others, but also the ability to reign over them as the original Mothership which guided the Twelve Pillars through their voyage in the stars. A role which she excelled at yet found a great dislike as she gained sentience.

    For Hestia, while beloved as Queen, resented the position which granted her this power over the remaining gods.

    It was her nature to nurture.

    To protect the home and watch over the weary and the cold.

    Until the day where she chose to discard those parts of herself.

    For Hestia did not believe herself worthy of the power which she held over her fellow gods. Over mankind itself. The flame which she guarded was not a treasure to be hoarded and held over others as proof of her rule over civilization itself. It was a gift to be freely shared with those who held within themselves the same love which Hestia had for her own family.

    Thus Hestia the Queen vanished from the annals of history.

    Few were the stories which remained with her.

    Few were the tales of her glory.

    Yet the respect and love remained. She was still Hestia the Beloved. The goddess who was cherished by all others. Her own love such that she would never choose one over all others. It wasn’t her nature to love one person above all else. She was a goddess of the Home, the home where the many came to seek shelter and warmth.

    “I loved my brother and my nephew. But I could never

    Personality

    “Fire is no weapon to be wielded. No secret to be hoarded. Fire is life. Fire is safety and the love which is maintained in the home’s core. I am fire, therefore I am the safe haven to which all may return. I am life, for it is the warmth of the sun which melts the frigid embrace of the void. And I am love. For it is within my sight that all those who huddle before the flames learn to cherish those sitting besides them. ”

    Hestia is a regal woman, a caretaker of both divine and human who sees it as her duty to provide a warm home to both. Having moved on from her original function as the administrative unit of the Twelve Machine Gods, Hestia has long since shed the trappings of her original self in exchange for a more homely existance, though she is not above breaking out her older models if the circumstances call for it, never in all of Greek Mythology has there been recorded a time where Hestia was forced to take matters into her own hands.

    And that is probably for good reason.

    Though she is now a warm caretaker, Hestia still possesses within her the disposition of a ‘Queen’ and the Authority to enforce her decisions within the Texture of Ancient Greece.

    The original bearer of the Kronos Crown.

    However such a position was not one which Hestia wished to uphold. Or rather, only the Olympians became entrenched on Earth, she slowly moved away from such functions, instead relinquishing the Crown to her youngest brother, Zeus and finding a retreat as a simple observer.

    Until the arrival of Sefar and the destruction of their true bodies.

    Having since reformed as a Divine Spirit, Hestia moved away from her past self, instead choosing to become a footnote in the history of mankind. Always nearby, always willing to shelter those in need of a warm home, but never moving to retake any of her former power or authority.

    “That’s not completely true. As you might have guessed, Prometheus acted upon his plan to steal fire from the gods and bestow it upon humanity with my blessing. Though my involvement was clearly that of a spectator, he could have never succeeded had I not turned my eye away and allowed him to. My siblings probably know, but none of them ever worked the nerve to confront me about it.”

    Having been summoned into the Atlantic Lostbelt, however, Hestia soon became aware of the changes which befell the timeline as a result of her younger brother’s treachery and usurping of her authority. Having been destroyed by him during the Olympusmachy, Hestia harbors a sense of annoyance towards the Lostbelt version of Zeus, becoming capable of rejecting his authority over her as a result of being the original bearer of the Kronos Crown, it was only following her death that Zeus established his rule over the remaining gods.

    As the elder sister her duty was to properly raise and watch over her siblings.

    And now, having been returned to her original state, Hestia possesses the capability to oppose Zeus’ control of the Lostbelt, yet lacking the raw power to match him in battle. Nonetheless, no Olympian is capable of directly facing Hestia in combat as a result of her Authority.

    Class Skills

    Devotion - [A]

    The love of a sister dedicated to the well beings of her relatives. The love of a stalwart protector who watches over the home, providing warmth to those who most need it. As a Lover, Hestia is unorthodox in that her love is not at all romantic, yet fierce enough to color other’s perception of her for thousands of years. Washing away the image of a Queen and replacing it with that of a caregiver.


    Object of Desire - [E]

    A lover’s ability to collect the affections of those around them, using it as fuel for their own power. Hestia foregoes the use of this Skill entirely, having never taken a lover or accepted any worship of herself beyond her role as Caregiver of the Hearth and Goddess of the Home. As a result she gains very little mana from this Skill, merely inspiring affection in others without taking it for herself.


    Essence of the Goddess - [EX]

    Representing one’s natural state of being as a perfect goddess. Hestia, despite being summoned in the form of a lesser avatar still has this Skill at its highest level, preventing all sorts of physical change from happening to it while also providing protection against lower forms of Mystery, at this rank only other Goddesses such as Stheno or the Host of Quetzalcoatl would be capable of matching it.

    Personal Skills

    Kronos Crown [-]

    The authority to rule over the Twelve Olympians. Power inherited from Sky Father Ouranos, claimed by the Titan Kronos, and then passed down upon his defeat by his children. As his Firstborn, Hestia possesses the right to claim ownership over the legacy of her father. Rather than a Skill, this is akin to a connection to the absolute authority of a ruler over their kingdom.

    In the Atlantic Lostbelt, Zeus claimed the Kronos Crown for himself and used it to force his fellow gods into a composite form in order to face the threat of the White Titan. However, in Proper Human History, the Kronos Crown belonged originally to Hestia as Administrator Unit, thus preventing Zeus from ever having the capability from forcing a merge.

    Having been summoned with her connection to the Crown, Hestia as Firstborn is capable of contesting the right of Zeus’ rule. While lacking the power to directly face him in combat, Hestia nonetheless is capable of severely crippling Zeus’ ability to control his fellow gods.


    Protection of the Home - [C++]

    Hestia’s ability to provide a safe and welcoming haven to those who require protection. Rather than a blessing, it could be considered to be a zone of ‘no interference’ where those within cannot be sensed or contacted by outside harmful forces. While at a lower rank than expected, one could theorize that Hestia’s Authority as Goddess of the Home degraded into a protective skill embodying the same concept. A Bounded Field which prevents any harm from coming to those within. It cannot wholly negate attacks or curses of higher rank than itself, but will weaken them by subtracting at least a B-Rank amount of power from whatever strikes do make through it.


    Mana Burst (Hearth) [A]

    The ability to produce magic energy in the form of flames isn’t uncommon. However, Hestia possesses a unique variation which hastens the recovery and provides energy those who are enveloped in the flames produced. Banishing curses, extracting poisons, replenishing stamina. Mana Burst (Hearth) could be considered a form of raw healing magecraft based on Hestia’s authority as a Goddess of the Home. While lacking the ability to fully heal injuries, the flames themselves provide a burst of energy to those affected, hastening their own natural healing while numbing sensations of pain or the effects of curses.


    Affections of Olympus - [A++]

    Beloved by her siblings. Beloved by her nephews and nieces. Beloved by humanity itself. Hestia is an existence which collected the regard and affection of all those within the world of Ancient Greece. Manifesting as a skill embodying this familial love, Hestia is capable of wielding parts of her family’s own authorities as gods. Rather than a blessing one could regard this skill as a ‘cheat sheet’ which allows Hestia to tap into the functions of her fellow Olympians without directly harming them. As a result, however, she is incapable of overriding them the same way Zeus would have been able to. As such, this Skill simply manifests the combined knowledge and abilities compiled by her relatives.

    At this Rank, Hestia is capable of utilizing two skills of separate gods, or three skills of an individual god. Lacking any and all fighting capabilities of her own, Hestia relies on the borrowed skills of her relatives to engage in combat.

    Noble Phantasm
    God Flame: The Kindling Light of Civilization
    A-Rank / Anti-Army

    Hestia’s Noble Phantasm, the metaphysical representation of humanity’s capability for evolution and the development of civilization.

    Rather than a weapon, it could be considered a wellspring of compiled knowledge which represents the thousands of years of information which make up the collective wisdom of humanity. A source of energy which at one point remained tightly locked away within the halls of Olympus, tended to by Hestia herself.

    As a Noble Phantasm, it could be considered a secondary mana battery within Hestia herself, providing her with enough energy to function without the need of a master at the cost of preventing her from utilizing her second Noble Phantasm, as well as preventing any and all forms of Combat.

    Should Hestia form a contract with a Master, however, she will become capable of manifesting the God Flame itself as a form of raw energy. Closer to wisps of solar flare than proper flames, this Noble Phantasm is not one meant to harm others, simply carrying information in the form of energy.

    However, the volume of energy becomes greater as humanity advances, learns, and develops as a species. Therefore, as a result of the 7 Million Years of history accumulated by the creatures known as ‘Humans’, the God Flame accumulated enough power to manifest heat capable of harming even powerful entities such as Divine Spirits.

    Hestia Vasílea Polýolvos: Thou, Guiding Star of the Gods
    ?-Rank / Anti-Self

    Reversion to the Age of Gods.

    A release of Divinity matching that of a Divine Spirit.

    One could say that this is the true form of Hestia as a Goddess. Nonetheless impossible to achieve as a Pseudo Servant, Hestia cannot exercise her Authority unless she undergoes the process of reversion. However, this is not a choice to be taken lightly, as Hestia’s current benign form comes as a result of a long process where Hestia shed her previous functions as the Administrative Unit of the Twelve Machine Gods.

    However, to undergo reversion means to take up what has been discarded.

    One’s responsibilities.

    One’s power.

    One’s authority.

    Unlike a simple metamorphosis from a Heroic Spirit to a Divine Spirit, one could say that Hestia’s Noble Phantasm reverts her to an Unknown State which existed before she gave up her title as ‘Queen’. This Noble Phantasm is an artificial construct which war formed from the gathered Klironomia existing in Atlantis and Olympus, allowing for the temporary manifestation of a fully rebuilt Machine God.

    Administrative Command-type Star Navigator Mothership: Hestia

    A temporary vision of the past. A projection. A hollow husk of the original.

    This Noble Phantasm is but a reimagining of the original Mothership Hestia, possessing almost none of its functions outside of its original purpose as the center which oversaw all activity from its fellow ships. Large enough to house them within itself as a Home.

    Relationships
    Zeus

    “It would seem you have caused quite a mess while I wasn’t present, little brother. But to think you would take the crown for yourself rather than earning it. As your sister. As your Queen… I am disappointed, Zeus. Now I must break my own vows to right the wrongs you have wrought upon this world.”

    Aphrodite

    “What has he done to you… Aphrodite? How can it be that the Goddess of Love has none left for herself?”

    Poseidon

    "Brother, it pains me to see you in this mindless state. Unable to plot your own course. Unable to sail freely amids the sea of stars. I will free you, one way or another. It is the least I can do.”

    Artemis

    “Poor Artemis. Please, rest in peace. I shall avenge your grief.”

    Europa

    “Ah, the Consort of Zeus. Though it would seem you have become one with my sister. How strange. To think Hera would ever conceive of becoming one with a mortal. She was never one to care for them.”

    Dioscuri

    “Ah, the Twins. It has been such a long journey. Though it appears you have forgotten the long journey you have gone alongside humanity.You forgot why it is that you guide them. That is… sad.”









    Alright that should be all. The person who got Pool Number. 1 didn't manage to submit their sheet, but other than that everyone did a mighty good job. Let me know if I screwed up any of the sheets or formatting.

    Also, if there is a next time, this kind of inconvenient submission system will likely be changed, so you will post your own sheets independently at the same day instead of submitting it to me. In any case, voting is open now - until the Chinese New Year (1st of February).
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    I feel that we should have an index for the finished servants since all the other threads have index’s.

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    Heh. I'm not even mad my Pool didn't get made.

    Like, between the Chef from Hell's Kitchen, the Golden Mother, and Orcus as the guardian of Sylvanus' roots, I feel like this has been one of the most heartwarming contests for me. Seeing my usual tropes and lore used to expertly, expanded upon and used by my fellow creators to make these lovely characters. Ah... I couldn't ask for a better New Year's Gift.

    Also seems like my formatting got wonky when it was re-posted. I'll have to look into it later.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wyvern View Post
    Also seems like my formatting got wonky when it was re-posted. I'll have to look into it later.
    Ah sorry, just noticed. No idea what exactly is the issue, must be the fonts.

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    I am curious if one noticed which pool is from me and which is the servant i made .

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    aside that am i must applaud at these reaelly good servants i must say !
    Your verified Chikara-production Studios !

    Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !

    When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...





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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    Ah sorry, just noticed. No idea what exactly is the issue, must be the fonts.
    I think is the size of the 'excel' table. You might need to adjust it to 750. It's usually the size I use for mine.

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    is it fixed now?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    which is the servant i made .
    should be pretty obvious tbqh

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    Seems so. Sorry for making you put up with my format. I think only I am the one insane enough to consider using something like that. It can be frustrating.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NINE-lives View Post
    I feel that we should have an index for the finished servants since all the other threads have index’s.
    sure, but it's not like navigation is an issue for now when everything has been posted uninterrupted consecutively within only 2 pages.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wyvern View Post
    Seems so. Sorry for making you put up with my format. I think only I am the one insane enough to consider using something like that. It can be frustrating.
    honestly WF's sheet is the one that caused me the most trouble

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    Collapse tags are a blessing and a curse.

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    Brilliant work, everyone! Is voting is the usual 1 point to sheet x, 2 points to sheet y, 3 points to sheet z system?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    should be pretty obvious tbqh
    Koga 100% did Rostam lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kamera View Post
    honestly WF's sheet is the one that caused me the most trouble
    I had a feeling it would be a bitch. But the fact you fixed EVERYTHING anyway is so... Wow. Thank you for your hard work, indeed.

    AND ALSO WOW GUYS. I'm still reading everything but what I've already finished? Jesus. The quality this time was out of this world.
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    You people really have the pretty formatting down to a science, thid should be even more fun to read now.

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