
Originally Posted by
OnesFleetingGlory
Hi, INH.
I got some time to look into your fanfic. First things first, I admit I'm no expert in writing and stuff, so I'll just give my opinion about it.
From what I saw in AO3, you're only three chapters in, and it's a retread of FGO's prologue, which is still not over, so can't say much about it. Only difference I notice was the mysterious being that greeted Ritsuka during simulation test, which is a plot point I hope you'll elaborate further as you progress.
The way you describe the characters and the interactions are nice, not to mention the battle at the third chapter, which I expect will be frequent down the line. Are you planning to follow Part 1's plot with additional characters in play, or will there be any divergence at some point?