As I thought, looks like all those apologies in the notes weren't needed after allCongratulations WF!!!
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As I thought, looks like all those apologies in the notes weren't needed after allCongratulations WF!!!
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Congrats on a well-earned victory, White!
SAY SIKE
But really thank you guys so muuuuch I really don't have words you are the best wtfffff ;_;
And also big shout out to zikari and Comun for their places in the podium as well!
Did I mentioned y'all are the best? Good. THANK YOU AGAIN ;_;
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Prompt: Color
Description: The Mage’s Association refers to special magic circuits that are innately so special that are of a “noble color”. A Mystic Eye that shines prismatic like a jewel to indicate an otherworldly being. A collection of shiny rocks that are holding the accumulation of a lifetime.
In short, color is a very distinct element in the world of magic.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Voting on the prompt has closed and the results meet the acceptance threshold.
Submissions can be submitted starting 1:00 April 1st PST. Submissions will close May 23rd, 23:00 PST.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
5 weeks left until submissions are due.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Ocular Seiryu
Ryotaro Mochizuki
Alias: Ocular Seiryu, Hiroden Ichi Magecraft: Ocular Seiryu Date of Birth: April 16 Origin: Protector Height/Weight: 180 cm/73 kg Attribute: Tracking Country of Origin: Japan Element: Wind Affiliation: Self Circuit Quality: High Servant: Rider of Heaven Circuit Quality: Average Day of the Decisive Battle: Azure Dragon's Ultimate View Circuit Composition: Abnormal
Child of Hiroden
--Open: The Hiroden Project--
Self Declared Knight
--Open: Self Declared Knight--
Eyes on the Prize
--Set Your Sights--
Creator Notes
Ryotaro Mochizuki: And that makes two! Seeing the next addition to this series was a wonderfully pleasant surprise, and I love how simple yet effective his kit is. Definitely a fun character, and a great way to kick off the contest!
Butterfly Phenomenon: Goddamn this is a brilliant piece of work, Salt! Although probably not the best thing to read less than an hour after I woke up; my sleep-befuddled brain was having trouble keeping track of it all, so I really appreciate the summary in the endnote! But yeah, definitely need to go back and reread this once I'm a little more awake to better appreciate it, because it's such an intricately constructed and beautifully designed story that it deserves my full attention and cognitive function. Gorgeous stuff!
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I do hope you read the sheet again with a clearer mind because this is a behemoth of interconnections and misdirections. Im rather proud of how it turned out tho if I had the nerves of some other people down here I'd go double the length and show more case studies. I'm simply not built for producing aesthetically pleasing novellas, at some point of length I regress back into plain text
Alright, second read-through complete! And while I still think I have a ways to go before I can fully comprehend the twists and turns this sheet takes, I can definitely say that my understanding of it has improved substantially, as has my appreciation of its intricacy! It truly is a gorgeously crafted sheet, and I look forward to pouring back over it again and again to find everything I might've missed!
Submissions will be closing in a little under a week.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions I
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Drip.
Drip.
Drip.
Mucus fled flared nostrils to drip in sickly metronome upon the taught canvas. It ran, swimming along the contours of upraised brush strokes, to pool in a corner of blue where its offering produced a new admixture. It was by no means the only time this had happened, nor was this accidental constructive advice ever unwanted.
A tight hot ball of lead weighed down on Shasta’s back, the sum of the strain he purchased by laboring on hands and knees for hours on end. Elbows and knees sported flaky snake scales of dried paint, where they seeped into split calluses and burst scabs to trickle into his bloodstream. A film of familiar carmine bubbled up unceasingly from the lip of his thumbnail, adding warm highlights to whatever corner of the canvas his hand found itself. Even his unthinking flesh sought to aid him in this task. Sucking briefly, Shasta allowed himself the brief pleasure of tasting sharp iron overlaid atop a foundation of strong floral essence, silently thanking his body for the meal. It was likely to be the last for a while yet. A quick swipe of his hand on one of the less grimy corners of his shirt, and the matter was put out of his mind.
Vertebrae popped in a rhythmic 21 gun salute as Shasta stumbled to his feet. Scraps lay discarded around his workstation in penumbra, folded over themselves in a limp sign of submission. Fresh ideas swiftly nixed in utero. Shasta did his best to remember them all, but long days have a habit of sapping the mind of its potency. Edges blur until all that remains is a compacted core that devours everything else like a black hole. That is what it meant to do the Work.
Still, some days it took him twice as long to accomplish so much. Ahead of schedule for once. The regularity with which the Work was inflicted upon him bordered on the Sisyphean. Shasta could acknowledge that much, on some level. But to dwell on it was useless, not when there were orders to fill and no one to do so but him.
For centuries, the primary concern of visual art was the accurate portrayal of the real world. Artists labored not to promote original ideas, but to contain a fragment of reality within their chosen medium. A simple invention like the camera proved a devastating invention to the archaic institution of art at the time. Now there was no longer a question of accuracy or personal skill when expressing the world on a canvas or chiseled out of marble, any amateur off the street could pick up a camera and immediately deduce truth with the press of a button.
Coinciding with the invention of the camera, there was a small controversy brewing in France. The argument centered around whether or not a horse at full gallop is ever truly airborne–do all four legs of a horse ever leave the ground at the same time? Had this same question occurred decades prior, and no doubt it surely had in some form or another, the onus of the event’s replication would be on the visual artist. No longer. The question could be answered definitively: yes, a horse does leave the ground while running. Unparalleled verisimilitude had been achieved.
This had an immediate impact on the cultural consciousness of France when it came to the expectations of art, one which blossomed outward to infect the rest of the world. The camera obscura style of Vermeer was dead. Suddenly, art found itself with a freedom it always possessed but never interacted with. Color. Form. These things could be altered, played with as never before. Art was no longer interested in the expression of the world, but the expression of the artist’s soul.
This implied that gradation existed among the immaterial. Certain pieces of art weren’t to the tastes of everyone, obviously, it was something that should be expected as a matter of preference. Did this mean that art could be “bad” by its own merit? Was it the fault of the artist somehow? Objectivity still existed, it just wasn’t readily obvious. The hunt for which formed the basis of the Department of Creation, in a sense. The only disagreements, then, the only point of contention possible, was over methods.
Those methods which worked could be defined as just. Those that didn’t were evil, as proven by their failure. But to reject even the methods available, to deny even the potentiality of success, that was nothing short of anathema. A zoo animal to be pointed at as a cautionary tale for others, only humored when it was at the discretionary leisure of the adventurous.
Shasta rocked on his heels, stimulating feeling back into aching calf muscles. It had been a nice break, but it was time to get back to work. He was far from finished. Mr. Agnumday had been quite specific about how he wished for his commission to be presented.
Shasta Dogwood Rumata: Fascinating work as always, Bugs! Shasta's Magecraft is exceptionally fascinating, and I love how well you blend its associated concepts together! Fitting for a paint-based system, I suppose. And the story of the Rumata is certainly both powerful and tragic in equal measure! However, this sheet does have a major flaw, and that's just how little we learn about Shasta himself. All we have is the opening blurb and the Likes and Dislikes, and while said opening blurb is a fantastic character study, it doesn't provide the same insight that a proper Personality section would, and it leaves the sheet feeling somewhat unfinished. Nothing that's presented here is at all lacking, but there is something here that's missing. But even so, there's a lot to love here, and while I wish I knew more about Shasta, everything that you have here is fantastic, so it evens out! Good work!