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    Grail Works, Ltd: A Scattering of Roses (TYPE-MOON Multi X-over)

    Table of Contents:


    Prologue: Out of Anarchy . . .

    Chapter 1 - . . . And Still, Things Get Worse (And Weirder)

    Chapter 2 - Taking Stock

    Chapter 3 - Goddess(es) of Venus . . .?

    Chapter 4 - Considering Kunoichi, and Other Siblings

    Chapter 5 - Preparation is Paramount

    Chapter 6 - Multiple Points of Failure

    Chapter 7 - Enter Three Goddesses

    Chapter 8 - Darkness Gathers

    Chapter 9 - Sister Acts

    Chapter 10 - More Than Meets the Eye

    Chapter 11 - Tangled Webs

    Chapter 12 - The Curtain Rises

    Chapter 13 - Golden Theatre of the Deranged

    Chapter 14 - Night Falls

    Chapter 15 - Plotting and Portents

    Chapter 16 - Golden Opportunities

    Chapter 17 - Thunderclouds Gather

    Chapter 18 - A Hogwarts Sabbatical

    Interlude - Fraying Threads

    Chapter 19 - N.E.W.T.-Level Studies

    Chapter 20 - Of God(desse)s and Monsters

    Chapter 21 - Deep Thinking







    Informational and Side Materials:


    From the Files of Grail Works, Limited—Video Games: Dead or Alive

    From the Files of Grail Works, Limited—Video Games: Fate/EXTRA(verse) (An Introduction)



    Apocrypha - A Possible Future . . .?

    Apocrypha: Mysterious and Spooky

    Apocrypha: Altogether Ooky . . .?

    Apocrypha: What Happened to Caster . . .?



    OMAKE: Avalon Castle, Phantasmagoria Island (Ranger Base)

    OMAKE: Of Guys and Dolls (Another Possible Future . . .?)

    OMAKE: WHAT "Fourth Wall?" (Another Possible Future . . .?)

    OMAKE: How Godafrid and Erik Saved Christmas

    OMAKE: Where the Harem Route for Godafrid ENDS . . . (by RanmaBushiko)



    Side Material: Venus Festival Outfits

    Side Material: Ayane (Character Sheet) (Revised: 02-22-25)

    Side Material: Honoka (Character Sheet) Revised: 03-01-25

    Side Material: Z-Ranger (Character Sheet)

    Side Material: The Many Voices of Kasumi

    Side Material: DOA Universe (semi-)Official Timeline
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    Prologue: Out of Anarchy . . .

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    Outside Trifas, Romania
    Alternate Fate/Apocrypha Worldline
    Three hours after the Great Holy Grail War











    “There’s no real point to dragging this out, is there?”

    The man who had fought in the Great Holy Grail War Ritual under the name Godafrid Úa Súilleabháin—or “Frid,” for convenience’s sake—sighed as he asked the question, but it really wasn’t one. If the damages done to Trifas, and the world as a whole, were to be fixed, then this had to be done, and dithering about it only increased the odds that it would fail.

    What a frigging mess . . .

    Granted, it had to be better than what would have happened if the Works hadn’t been here—Rin had said Zelretch had picked this “facet” because it was doomed, after all—and neither Gaia nor the Counter Force had wiped them off the map, but . . .

    Hell, he thought, to be fair, the vanilla version of Fate/Apocrypha was just about as big a mess, albeit in somewhat different ways—this iteration just required a more literal version of “deus ex machina” than Sieg represented.

    Still, it had been a highly destructive, very confusing time, even for a Holy Grail War—which could be no better-exemplified than by the fact that he was dealing with the Pseudo-Servant Ruler Astraea, who was currently possessing the body of Jeanne d’Arc’s canon host rather than her own . . .

    And Frid wondered, exactly, how much of that was his fault.

    Sure, that might be a stretch—his presence was either down to the meddling of Zelretch, the pantheon of elven gods known as the Seldarine, or the force of Fate as it was represented in Scion, exploiting Erik’s presence—but it was possible. The more mystically inclined people in Grail Works Limited had observed that his metaphysical makeup had odd effects on reality before, coming as he did “from closer to the Root” than their version of Earth was.

    And while that sounded like a very self-serving pseudo-explanation for justifying self-insert shenanigans when someone from the “real” world dealt with a “fictional” one like the TYPE-MOON setting, the phenomenon didn’t exactly seem to pan out in his favour the way one might expect. Heck, Erik fit the power-gaming SI mould better than he did . . .!

    If nothing else, if it did work like that, Saber would’ve taken being turned into a dragon a LOT better than she did . . . But on the other hand, it was a literal hundred-to-one odds to even get that option, so—


    “Not ultimately, no,” Astraea agreed, drawing his attention back to the here and now, with her answer to his non-question—and then, she paused. “And yet, I feel compelled to, for one thing more . . .”

    Frid blinked. It was odd, seeing the Ruler-class Pseudo-Servant suddenly off-balance. Partly because he’d seen Luviagelita Edelfelt in similar positions through various anime, but never as a living, breathing person—but also because Astraea wasn’t possessing Luvia in this instance, but Jeanne d’Arc’s usual host, Laeticia. It made the already off-putting disconnect between her looks and her mannerisms even more pronounced.

    Honestly, if not for the blue streaks in her hair (and the outfit, of course) you'd never know she wasn't Jeanne . . .

    She did look adorable in her uncertainty, noted a corner of his mind—though he was quick to smother the thought. Astraea would doubtless smite him for the thought (the Olympians were nothing if not prideful), and Laeticia was less than half his age, his appearance notwithstanding (which was still a good six years older than her, assuming that she was Jeanne d’Arc’s age when she'd died).

    It was the same problem as dealing with Fiore—if only slightly less awkward because he didn’t have to play the role of fiancé to the French girl.

    Another sign of “self-insert syndrome”—I get the fantasy girlfriend, but . . .

    “A whim of my host’s, I think,” Astraea said, drawing his full attention back to her once more. “Or perhaps that you remind me of someone, in this act—either way, I feel it deserves recognition.”

    Frid blinked, unsure of her meaning, even as her mention of reminders made him wonder if she was referring to Ritsuka Fujimaru (and if so, which one), or some remnant of Luvia's memories of Shirou than she’d retained even when in another host. “Oh?”

    The smile that stretched across Laeticia’s face, just then, would have been far more at home on Luvia’s—or a cat, playing with the mouse in its grasp. And the comparison seemed all the more apt with the purring tone her voice took on, as she stepped very deeply into his personal space.

    “It is a rare reward indeed,” she murmured, “to be given a maiden’s first kiss. I do hope you treasure it sincerely . . .”

    He could not possibly have heard that corr—

    The brush of lips was light and chaste, as expected of a pure maiden, whether either mortal or divine. It was warm, sweet, and swiftly over, but still enough to set him reeling . . . And by the time Frid regained his senses, Astraea had manifested her sword, a golden, jewel-encrusted thing that looked far more decorative than functional—yet in her hands, radiated a deadly menace, all the same.

    “And so, an end is brought to anarchy,” she proclaimed. “Iam Redit et Virgo: Let Order Be Returned Here!”








    Even under normal circumstances, Iam Redit et Virgo: Let Order Be Returned Here had its limitations. The dead could not be raised, time could not be reversed, and that was in accordance with the Noble Phantasm’s nature and design—as its very name implied, it existed to restore balance, not to undo what had been done to disrupt it.

    These, however, were not “normal circumstances.” To begin with Astraea was hampered by the lack of her usual power sources. Forbidden the use of her full divinity by her Class Container, denied the support of the Greater Holy Grail, and bound to a host that was only passingly compatible and utterly powerless in her own right, she was forced to rely on outside help to activate it, which risked tilting the scales.

    She must be above bias—to do less is to destroy her—but the sources she uses nonetheless have their own metrics of what is “just” here, and it is all she can do to direct them, under these circumstances. Worse still was the being she was judging: a common human, by many measures, but by virtue of his origin, elevated to an existence akin to a demiurge.

    It was a strange sensation, truly, for a goddess to stand before one who might qualify as her creator—stranger still to be standing in judgement over such a one . . .

    It was only the fact that Astraea was the arbiter of mortal justice, and that he was mortal, ultimately, which gave her any authority over him whatsoever—and even that, she suspected, was limited. She was being allowed to do so, because he desired it, and the conceptual weight behind what he represented meant that same willingness permeated the energies suffusing him, surrounding him, and made them easier to bend to her will. Easier to turn against him, because too many foreign elements were present here, needed to be expunged, eradicated—and she had but one target to choose.

    The most important were those of the alien Aesir, and its ancient progenitor. Not simply the various radiations of their weapons, or the aspects of their divinities that had been impressed upon the World—no, far more dangerous were the very Legends which spawned such things. Connected as they were to the weaving and binding of Fate, they were far too dangerous to leave here. This world was, in many ways, already fixed in several facets; to eliminate what little variance remained (and to do so in such a fashion as to make it a self-recurring pattern) would inevitably lead to destruction. Put simply, it had to go . . . And so, with an effort of will, it went, easily and even eagerly—

    And it grabbed her on its way.

    It was the nature of the thing: Fate bound the Gods and their offspring to roles, recurring themes and actions that echoed throughout the World to build the foundations of the Legend that empowered them—but it required something to bind them to. And any attempt to alter Fatebindings inevitably created one between those whose Fate was being altered, and the one doing it.

    That, for a whole host of reasons, couldn’t be allowed; but even as a goddess (and especially as a Roman goddess), Astraea was beholden to the will of Fate. There was nothing she could do to stop it—but the tools to at least try, fortunately, lay close at hand. The “Lunar Exaltation” the mortal bore was, by design, capable of forging Fate to its whims, and the Essence it generated was also something that needed to be purged from this world. Desperation had her throw one divine energy against another—

    And watch the latter falter.

    Though Essence might in potential be powerful enough to overcome Legend, the fragment of divinity generating it was as yet too limited, not having been refined to the heights of which it was ultimately capable. But Astraea was judging the being wielding it—and to do so fairly, she had needed to see all of who he was, know all of what had happened, and what was possible—and she knew, therefore, that there was another way. Ignoring the fading Essence for a moment, she directed her focus upon the Exaltation itself, willing it into the form it ought to have . . .

    For it was not a true Exaltation, but an imitation perfectly crafted in its image. And crafted by the Seldarine, the gods of an elven pantheon; or, in the terms of the Exalted game itself, crafted by the Fair Folk, the inhabitants of the Wyld—and the natural enemies of the Creation the Exalted protected, for both the Fair Folk and the Wyld were Chaos itself.

    Quicksilver light blazed as the Exaltation cracked under her ministrations, the immutability of Fate struggling against that which would NOT be constrained—so much more powerful outside the limits of its Exaltation form, as it represented not a fragment of a single deity, but a full pantheon that was far older than the human species itself. . .

    And then, all of Astraea’s efforts went to containing the fallout. Puissant as they were, none of these powers were unlimited in reservoir; she simply had to endure until either one emerged victorious—at which point she could turn her full and focused might on the weakened survivor—or they burnt themselves out tearing against one another. The mortal, sadly, was unlikely to survive being at the confluence of such a conflagration; and Astraea was surprised to note that she was sad, and once again, unable to say whether the sentiment was her own or her host’s, nor what inspired it—

    And as if woken by her thoughts, the third power in the struggle flared, as a tattoo became chain links in the shape of protruding bone, wrought of eldritch ores alloyed with tortured souls to be both weapon and warning: Hel did not surrender easily that which was hers . . .

    In many ways, it was the least of the three. After all, it was not a true Relic, endowed with Hel’s own power for a Scion of hers to wield, but a mere token; a truly mundane, if divinely forged, item. At the same time, the “token” was a recognition, intended for a vassal no longer in her service. but valued for the service rendered; forged by her own hands (a goddess at least the equal of Astraea in standing, for Hel was younger, but grander in her power), and with the materials of her realm.

    The symbolism of such things, to say nothing of the eldritch materials, resonated in Legend—a resonance the power of Fate knew, and could manipulate—and with that tipping in the favour of Order, however slight, commonalities were sought (partially with the help of Astraea’s Noble Phantasm, as it sought to weigh everything involved). Important elements were identified, solidified, to try and define the chaos . . .

    Magic was first and foremost, though it had little direct influence; it had to be, as it was the foundation of all that had happened, was happening, in regard to the man. The Moon was the primary element otherwise, linked both to the Exaltation form itself and a major deity of the Seldarine who forged it, one of the three aspects of its queen. That said goddess was also the goddess of death (and magic, linking back to the first), and thus a peer of Hel, only strengthened that bond, as did the correlation between its “No Moon” configuration and the Darkness Purview over which Hel had mastery (and the touch of the Dark Powers unwittingly conferred). And from that starting point, the powers branched out, making links through the New Moon Caste of the Lunar Exalted’s various associations . . .

    Water—Frid’s own past exploits in Spira, a very aquatic world. Though forgotten by him, it had still occurred—which linked back to Yuna, who represented the Moon once more, further strengthening that connection. Winter—Hel’s mastery of the Frost Purview strengthened this connection, as did his own acknowledged exploits (at whatever remove) as Krampus. Other Purviews under Hel’s aegis, such as Forge and Health, could find no means to bind themselves to him, providing no avenue for Fate to reach for him. Passion tried, but he’d never been one to inspire fear—and nor had he inspired disgust in anyone so much as in himself . . .

    A series of unconventional avenues, on the other hand, were found—patterns which already repeated within the fledgling mythos he’d unwittingly begun to forge. Wealth was one; treasures, powers beyond mortal ken—all these things seemed to fall into his reach . . . And were sacrificed just as easily, in pursuit of his goals, including his life . . . And while subtle in some ways, he was even more deeply entwined with the concept of unrequited love, both as a subject of it (Yuna, Rikku, many others . . . Astraea was startled to see herself there, briefly—both of her hosts, as well), and as an object of it (Rikku, Fiore, MHX/A/X)—

    That connection rattled something, as time—and with it, the planet—stepped in. Predestination had a hand in what had happened here, and therefore what would and might be done with him. Whatever judgement was passed down, whatever happened, he was not allowed to be killed, for there was a loose end in all of this that he alone could tie . . .

    But neither could he be allowed to stay, because the rampage of forces surrounding him threatened to break free, as they struggled against one another, building towards an increasingly volatile climax—

    There—a commonality point. When Scions grew too powerful, approached godhood, the World itself expelled them into the “Overworld,” one of the many shadows it cast, similar to but also unlike the Reverse Side; sufficiently powerful Exalts could also open portals to other realms. Moreover, this being had been touched by worlds entirely unknown to hers, including a different facet of the Kaleidoscope—to travel between and beyond them was also an inherent part of his “Legend,” were he ultimately to be bound by such . . .

    “BEGONE!” Astraea judged at last, her voice an echo of the Chief God’s thunder.

    Throwing the last of her power into the effort—and finding what little strength the World could muster to help aiding her—she hurled him out of her world entirely, before sagging to her knees, exhausted.

    It was the only decision she could make, unfair as it might seem. Let him wander through the infinite reaches of eternity, blindly, while the forces he’d invoked and invited had their way with him; whatever ultimately became of him would, with the influence she’d imprinted on the melee, be deserved. And neither he nor they would threaten her home any longer—if she had ultimately failed as a Ruler, then she’d at least succeeded that far as a Goddess . . .

    Even if the whole affair left a bad taste in her mouth, regardless.

    “I am undecided as to whether or not I would like a chance to re-examine the case without operating under so many restrictions . . .” she murmured—to whom? Herself? The no-doubt-listening compatriots of the one she’d just summarily exiled? Or perhaps to said departed soul himself?

    “Undoubtedly,” she added with grim humour, “had that ‘Fatebinding’ had its way, I would have—if it proves to have a lasting hold on him, perhaps I will . . .








    Arvandor
    The Pool of Evergold









    Hanali Celanil, counted amongst the Seldarine as the elven goddess of love and beauty, decided that no, she could not leave it alone.

    Never mind the mortal himself, or what he’d done for her charges (which was, again, considerable in its own right). Now that she knew of the situation, it itched at her. Her very nature as a deity of love insisted that she intervene—to do otherwise literally ran counter to the exact reason for her existence. She could not allow it to stand, being what she was . . .

    But because of what the mortal had done, neither did she wish to cause him strife—that, too, was a part of her nature. It was frustrating in a way that the goddess was wholly unused to; rarely did she have to act so delicately in the course of her duties . . . And, after all, she was a deity, and generally had the power to do as she pleased. She might not flaunt it as wantonly as Sune or Aphrodite—she was an elf, and thus more refined than the human goddesses—but love was about passion.

    Labelas, sadly, had been no more help after listing all that was wrong with the “Solar Exaltation” idea. It annoyed Hanali to have to ignore such a perfect concept—one that the mortal’s gift had literally been designed to employ—but if it would cause too much chaos within his home, and if none of those suited to it were suited to him, then it was precisely the sort of thing she shouldn’t do.

    (Aphrodite, after all, had been so certain of her actions with that poor princess . . . And Freyja’s efforts with the Valkyrie had been no better.)

    No, Hanali decided, if she was to achieve her desires—to end that annoying itch in her soul, and reward the mortal in the process (and possibly win her wager in the bargain)—she was going to have to be thoughtful about her next steps . . . And not nearly so clumsy in her dealings as her fellow love deities.

    Refinement, elegance, delicacy, she told herself. That was what the humans had lacked, as they always did in comparison to her kind—therefore, it behooved her to show it in her actions, if she wanted to win, and keep her pride in the bargain.

    As such, she considered the problem from the angle of the mortal, rather than the terms of the “Exaltation”—and the primary issue, she came to believe, came from the lack of compatibility between himself and those who might qualify. After all, those who could and did love him would work to minimise risks and friction, would they not?

    That, she thought, was probably the most important factor, secondary to power; that the one chosen be capable of loving him, and of being loved by him in turn. After all, the princess and the Valkyrie had been powers in their own rights, and it had ultimately done them no favours . . . Hanali did not delude herself that power was unnecessary to the equation, however—he was an adventurer and a hero, and thus routinely faced threats and dangers the average mortal could not cope with. The goal was to create an epic of lasting and beautiful romance, not one of tragedy.

    But how to go about it . . .?

    After all, he was no longer elven, or really connected to her influence at all; she either would need to enlist a human deity’s aid, like Sune, Aphrodite or Freyja—which the latter two would certainly consider grounds for her forfeit. Perhaps Sharess, then—his love of cats had been very clear to Hanali, and wasn’t “Bast” one of her aspects . . .?

    The alternative was to rely on the tenuous connection between his Exaltation and Sehanine. Tenuous, because Sehanine wasn’t a human deity, either, as well as largely subtle in her manifestations. That she had a subordinate with power over the Sun was a stroke of luck for the idea of a corresponding Exaltation, but her primary spheres of influence, beyond the Moon, were death, magic, and dreams . . .

    Hanali paused as a sudden thought occurred to her. Perhaps a dream of love realised, would suffice . . .?

    It was more subtle than her usual designs in concept, if not application—search his heart and bring to life his ideal love—but it might work. Granted, it would require a degree of power she didn’t usually employ, and influence that, again, she didn’t have over him, but while a vulgar way to go about it, it might work . . .

    Or perhaps simply a blessing, that he finds such a one, however it might happen. Far more subtle than her usual efforts, and rather vague—but well within her own sphere of influence to manage, without seeking outside help. After all, half-elves were under her purview as well, so she had some influence over humans who loved her children, by default. It was simply not enough for such a grand gesture as forging an Exaltation from whole cloth would require . . .

    Such a minimalist effort annoyed her—but it was, Hanali decided, the best she could manage by herself, and it would deal with two annoyances at a stroke, in that she could silence that itch in her being, and potentially win her wager.

    Hanali smiled. And the best part was that having done this, she could at least follow the thread of power to observe what happened . . . She was an elf, not a faerie, but the races were not unrelated; and curiosity was a shared hallmark, after all.

    She scooped up a handful of the pool’s water, which was the purest, clearest blue imaginable, flecked with gold, and shaped it with her power into the form of a tressym—a winged cat that was a favoured pet among mortal elves. As cats were beloved by the mortal, she suspected it would be more easily accepted by him.

    “Take him my blessing,” she instructed the creature, which was both spell and spirit in the shape of both water and feline. “That the love most suited for him be his, whomsoever or whatsoever that may mean, wherever or whenever they may be, that they both may be happy together.”

    Soundlessly, the water-tressym departed in search of its prey, and Hanali relaxed into the Evergold’s waters—she felt better already . . .







    Beyond the boundaries of time and space
    Unknown place, unknown time









    He tumbled through the emptiness as though on a storm-tossed sea—adrift, anchorless, barely able to stay conscious, far less coherent . . . But that annoying little voice in the back of his head, the snarky commentator who was both the best and the worst of him, kept talking . . .

    Breaking, not
    broken—it’s been damaged, not destroyed . . . The Wyld is dynamism, at its core; chaotic in nature and output, yes, but not malicious . . .

    . . . Oh,
    God, the things I’ve done—

    And the things he hadn’t done; Astraea was very thorough, and the consequences of apathy and inaction were no less brutal . . .

    Good.

    He’d never liked that about himself but seen no way to stop it. With the Works, he’d at least had a chance to believe that he could be better, a chance to do more—hell, to do anything at all. It was just a shame he seemed to be so terrible at it, succeeding in spite of himself, more often than not . . .

    But, Astraea’s judgement compelled him to ask, is that really my fault . . .?

    After all, he’d been a pawn of greater forces (the Seldarine, the Aesir) from the beginning; either that, or forced to work around their interference, whether well-intentioned, unwitting—or outright malevolent, in the case of Ymir. Things outside his control, well beyond his ability to handle, and seemingly thrown into the situation out of nowhere—with no context for their interference, aside from seemingly being placed there just to make things difficult for him.

    I always believed the universe hated me, but throwing actual deities into the mix is way more than a bit RIDICULOUS . . .

    Regardless—objectively, the point stood: what might he be able to accomplish if actually left to his own devices? No unexpected reactions with a curse he wasn’t really aware he was under creating Shadow Servants bent on killing him, no sudden divine incursions from ludicrously over-the-top characters created by absent power-gaming friends—just himself, the problem at hand, and whatever resources he could bring to bear.

    Could he actually do what the Works existed to do—what Shirou believed in—and save people? Or was he just wasting everyone’s time and efforts, a tired old man (all right, middle-aged, but if you were only as old as you felt, then he was bloody primordial) lost in a fantasy?

    God knew, it was hard to tell when you were surrounded by “fictional” characters on a daily basis . . .

    Once upon a time, as a youth, he’d read a quote attributed to Lincoln that he’d liked: “If there is a place and work for me, then I am ready.” As he’d gotten older, his attitude had shifted to the point where nowadays, his motto was more accurately described as “Let’s get this over with,” but the sentiment was the same, in many respects—a shift in thinking that braced him for the task ahead.

    Once more. He would try once more, to get this right. To do the job, wherever or whenever he might end up; and if it still all went down in flames . . . Then whatever happened to him didn’t matter—but for now, he had to fight.

    With an effort such as he had never made in any incarnation of his life thus far, he began to try to push past the agony ravaging his body; to master the riotous magical forces wreaking havoc on his form, on his fate—

    And as though simply making the effort locked things into place, it surged back, building towards a crescendo, some ultimate goal or destination that he couldn’t guess, or possibly even imagine—but he fervently hoped that it would be more in the vein of “Third time’s the charm” than “three strikes, you’re out”—

    Something
    chose that precise moment to smack him in the face, somehow, with enough force to send him spiralling wildly—and he suddenly felt like he was drowning, on top of everything else.

    As it had once before in his memory, and probably with consequences just as life-changing and reality-altering, the world went white . . .








    Between worlds and time
















    In the ancient world, one of the greatest possible sins was “hubris”—the overweening pride that led mortals to believe themselves to be above the gods, whether in power, skill, beauty, judgement, or whatever area was the source of that pride.

    Such arrogance was invariably punished, of course. From Gilgamesh onwards, no matter the culture or time period, mythology and history both were littered with such stories where those who forgot that their lives were ordered by higher powers—or at least that they were beyond such—were swiftly disabused of the notion . . . Less often spoken about, however, was the fact that hubris was a sin to which the gods themselves were not immune. . .

    And yet, it was hardly unheard of. In many variations of their respective mythologies, he Norse god Loki had been bound beneath a mountain, and the Greek Titan Prometheus to one, for their crimes against their pantheon, both to suffer near-eternal mutilation. Indeed, Greco-Roman myth, in particular, was rife with deities doing such things. Zeus’ attempts to defy his Fate to be overthrown by a specifically-born son, for example, had resulted in the births of the hero Achilles, and the goddess Athena—the latter of whom once worked with the other Olympians to briefly overthrow him, thus proving that even he was bound by the power of Fate.

    Still, it had to be said that the hubristic actions of the gods were as often done in ignorance, rather than malice—or at least, complete unconcern for the potential consequences their actions might have. Aphrodite, after all, had given no thought at all to the fact that Helen of Sparta was already married when promising the world’s most beautiful mortal woman as a wife to a prince-turned-shepherd, should he judge her “the fairest” of all goddesses . . .

    (The city-state of Troy, and without question its royal family, might well wish that she had—either might still exist today, were that the case.)

    Still, it was a pattern that recurred throughout mythology as often as self-fulfilling prophecies: that a careless action by a deity would invariably result in tragedy for the mortals with whom they involved themselves—and this world had seen many, recently.

    Such as a Norse god who had, for a prank, stolen a Heroic Spirit from the Throne, and bound it into a sword.

    And a Greek goddess who, seeking to purge all his influence (amongst others) from her world, had commanded that it “BEGONE . . .”
















    She was falling, fading—it felt like the blood was leaving her body again. She could feel pieces of herself slipping away, into nothingness . . .

    In desperation, she reached out for something—for anything—to hold onto; at first, to save herself . . .

    . . . And eventually, as she sank deeper into oblivion despite her efforts, just so that she wouldn’t disappear unnoticed (alone) a second time.

    “Please . . .”















    Across the omniverse
















    That which had been Nero shattered. What remained was propelled upon tides of chaos unleashed by a goddess’ judgement, dragged along in the wake of something whose mere presence caused reality itself to shudder in incomprehension—before it, the very tissue of existence was rendered as flimsy as paper before its most casual effort . . .

    Not even the immutable dictates of the
    Parcae, which bound even the gods, were immune—though Fate struggled to compel him, nonetheless. It thrashed and warped around the storm of maddened potential, seeking any means, even the slightest connection, by which such a being—and the maelstrom of seething unreality surrounding it—could be constrained within its patterns . . .

    Thus, Nero was pulled—yet, as a separate being, even in fragments, her
    own fate had a greater influence. Drawn into the chaotic vortex, following the threads whose weave made up her, to one degree or another, the Saber-class Servant was cast across the vast multiverse in a dazzling array of fragments.

    Some pieces were
    massive; entire personae and incarnations unto themselves. Others were miniscule, mere fragments of potential or possibility. Some pieces landed in times and places which were obviously natural to Nero, their connections blatantly obvious; others, obscure, or warped entirely by the lens of her proximity to the other, and its effects on matters.

    And some of those manifestations would have immediate effects—and others, much more far-reaching . . .










    Writer's Notes: So, as seems to be the Fatebinding of this particular series, here I go with a full retcon/rewrite again . . . My only solace is that they do seem to eventually work.

    Not much new in this one (a very little tightening up of text, and an additional music cue), for which I apologise - but I've been enslaved by Newton's First Law, and if it was getting to the point where if I didn't start something, I was never going to, so . . . *Shrugs* Do I have a better idea of what I'm doing, this time? God, I hope so.

    I am keeping the A Royal Mess thread for a bit, because it's easier to mine the bits and pieces I want or need to reuse, pre-formatted for the board, by stealing from it. Once that's done, it'll disappear - so if any of you want to keep it, consider yourselves warned. Hopefully, this means the next chapter will be soon, though whether it'll contain any new material, I can't say right now.

    Sorry for the trouble, thank you for sticking around - I hope this will prove entertaining.

    Am I getting rid of the A Royal Mess thread?
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    I think there's some merit in keeping the old thread for historical purposes. I'm actually a bit surprised to learn you could delete it outright, though obviously it won't serve too much narrative purpose at that point, I'd think it would naturally fall off the board. It's like how Lost in the Snow died fairly early or somesuch.

    Declaring the intent to start makes sense. As you say, not a lot new here, but it's pretty clear where you're coming from.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    It's like how Lost in the Snow died fairly early or somesuch.
    *Blinks* . . . I had actually forgotten that had ever existed, much less that it still did.


    Declaring the intent to start makes sense. As you say, not a lot new here, but it's pretty clear where you're coming from.
    Good - I was worried that, cutting-and-pasting as I was, it wouldn't hang together properly.
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    Chapter 1 - . . . And Still, Things Get Worse (and Weirder)

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    Unknown place, unknown time

















    Frid had drowned before, or come close to it, at least. The sensation of water filling his eyes, until he could barely see—filling his nose, mouth and lungs until he could barely breathe—was all-too-familiar, despite the intervening decades between incidents.

    Frantically, he sought the brightest point he could make out; where there was light, there was the hope of air . . . Unfortunately, he had neglected to consider (or outright forgotten, in his panic) that he was technically in motion as he did so.

    He didn’t actually see what hit him, only the world suddenly exploding in red as something collided with his head—

    Then darkness.
















    Avalon Castle, Phantasmagoria Island (Grail Works. Ltd. Headquarters)
    Beyond the boundaries of time and space

















    Ilya froze in shock. “What—?!

    The actinic light emerged in midair, etching itself into a familiar mandala . . .

    Shirou tensed at the sight, warily prompting, “Ilya—?”

    “It’s not me!” she protested immediately. “It’s a self-summon—and I can’t stop it!

    Lunch preparations were hastily abandoned, as Rider all but leaped out of the kitchen with Sakura in her arms, Rin charged up a Gandr even as she edged away to the same doorway—to give herself a wider field of fire and immediate access to an escape route—and Saber immediately summoned her combat gear. Shirou, for his part, quickly turned off the stove (no sense in giving a likely threat easy access to a gas explosion) and Traced Kanshou and Bakuya, moving to put himself between Rin and Saber as the second line of defence.

    Between the distances and his slightly hunched combat posture, he ought to be out of range of Saber’s swings, and not block Rin’s line of sight—she wasn’t unused to aiming past or through him, after all. . .

    “Class confirmed!” Ilya said tightly. “It’s a—”

    Blue-white light flared at that, and would’ve blinded him if he hadn’t thought to Reinforce his eyes to take the pain; as it was, he had a pretty good view of seeing the light coalesce into a distinctly female form. . .

    And a vaguely familiar one, he thought with an inward frown, trying to place it as the summons completed itself.

    Ruler . . .?!” Ilya trailed off in bewilderment.

    Ah, Shirou thought to himself, that was it.

    A trace of actinic blue remained after the light faded, visible in the highlights in her golden hair, which fell down her back in ringlets. Her clothes, on the other hand, were a much darker shade of blue, though adorned in nearly as much gold—actual gold—as the crown of her head. Her eyes held a metallic sheen that made them look nearly the same shade but held touches of orange and brown that made it hard for Shirou to actually define their colour.

    They were clear, however—and impressively determined.

    Pax,” she proclaimed. “I come not in judgement, but in supplication—no matter how humiliating it is to do so, my duty demands no less.”

    Indeed, even as she bowed in polite acknowledgement, her face, lovely as it was, was as twisted as someone trying natto for the first time.

    “My name is Astraea, a terminal of all good in this entire realm,” she introduced herself, “and I need your help.”












    “So, there’s a Heroic Spirit missing from the Throne,” Rin summarised, “and the pieces of its container are scattered across multiple worlds . . .?”

    “Yes,” the goddess affirmed. “As much because the Servant is critically involved in multiple worlds as because she was drawn along in the wake of your agent, whose is also a being of multiple worlds.” She sipped the tea Shirou had served her delicately—

    Her eyes widened fractionally, darting to him quickly before she composed herself and lowered the cup—still, they noticed the slip.

    “Genuinely first-rate,” she said politely. “I’ve rarely had its like before.”

    “Regardless, the loss of Nero Claudius could spell disaster for several of those worlds, so long as her data is missing,” Astraea continued, “and because of your agent’s nature, it’s possible that several fragments have wound up in areas beyond my reach—but not yours. Though I could likely trace their ultimate destinations with him at hand . . .?”

    “We lost track of him after you tossed him out of your world like yesterday’s kitchen scraps,” Rin said bluntly.

    The Ruler scowled. “. . . I am having to remind myself that your appearance, while irritatingly familiar, does not entitle me to follow my first impulse upon seeing it. Moreover, that I need your help, which is another important reason for me not to judge you. . .”

    “Yet,” was the unspoken end of that sentence.

    “But I will not apologise for doing that,” she concluded. “He was the only vector I could use to purge the corruptive influences which had infested my world—and no small one himself, honestly . . . But his absence only makes it more important that we track down the fragments which house Nero, and quickly. The collapse of the relevant world-lines caused by her absence is offset somewhat by the Throne’s asynchronous nature regarding normal space-time; there is a buffer of ‘quantum waveform uncertainty’ before the paradox will be unignorable.

    “How long?” Rin demanded.

    “Six hundred and sixty-six hours from the initial event, the collapse will follow,” Astraea said. “I don’t understand the significance of it, but I’m given to understand that it is a significant interval to Nero Claudius’ legend—and thus, the maximum amount of time her absence can be ‘overlooked.’”

    “Which gives us just under four weeks to track who knows how many iterations of a singular Heroic Spirit across essentially infinite variations of reality,” Rin groaned. “I can feel the migraine starting already . . .

    Astraea frowned. “I’m afraid the situation is even worse than that, when you contemplate all the implications. The damage that she could do to any number of unrelated world-lines in her current state is—”

    ‘Damage?’” Shirou repeated. “How, exactly, could she do anything in a state like that . . .?”

    “Because.” Astraea said grimly, “while the sword itself might’ve served as a reasonable catalyst for summoning her, and a mystical weapon of some potency in its own right, it had been modified to hold her totality as a Heroic Spirit. Fractured as it is, it’s entirely possible that several pieces hold complete Saint Graphs unto themselves, rather than simply fragments, capable of being used by those who know how, or who possess the right aptitudes . . .” Her frown deepened. “And not all of Nero’s potential manifestations are benevolent—even those that that are, however unintentionally, could wind up wreaking considerable havoc on a world not prepared for something like her.”

    He knew better than most the kind of damage a Servant could do to an ordinary person, or the normal world.

    “Then we’d better get started—”

    “Hold it,” Rin said sharply to Shirou, before turning her attention to Astraea. “While I agree in principle that we should help, the fact is, we’re still cleaning up your mess—I think that entitles us to some compensation, wouldn’t you agree. . .?”

    “And now I understand your compatibility,” the blonde muttered, very nearly growling the words. “Still, I am fair by nature. . .”

    Her eyes sharpened. “A bargain, then—in exchange for your assistance, I will gift you with sufficient magical energy to utilise your Holy Grail to grant a single wish. Does that seem like a reasonable incentive to you. . .?"
















    Outside the Tohno Estate
    Misaki Town, Japan
    July 8, 2004









    “A wish?”

    Akiha Tohno set her teacup down, to better focus her attention on her maid.

    Kohaku nodded. “Yes, Akiha-sama—so the ‘goddess’ said, though I was admittedly limited in what I could hear.”

    The Tohno heiress nodded. Kohaku had simply been dropping off groceries, after all, in anticipation of later needs—but even the little she’d overheard was potentially priceless . . .

    Akiha was no stranger to the supernatural, of course, though even as head of the Tohno clan, she’d had little knowledge and (even less experience) of “magecraft,” “magi,” and the like, prior to becoming involved with this “Grail Works, Limited” project. As such, it had taken some time to be convinced that it was more than could simply be explained an esoteric application of demonic or psychic ability; in her defence, she had ample examples of the latter.

    And having to add the actual existence of genuine deities to her knowledge of proven facts, as of recent events, did not help the stability of her worldview—or, in retrospect, the veracity of the Works’ claims. Had they said anything of the sort at the time, Akiha doubted they ever would have convinced her of their genuineness. However, once she grasped that they were entirely serious about the prospect of a reality-altering wish—well, demonic blood aside, in many ways Akiha was only human, no less vulnerable to temptation than any other. When she truly allowed herself to consider the possibilities . . .

    To have her brother’s life force and her own restored, or the impulses of her demonic blood eradicated, for all time; Or for all those other girls who kept sniffing around her brother to be swept away at a stroke—oh yes, Akiha could certainly see the possibilities.

    To date, sadly, the reality had fallen far short of her expectations.

    When she was of a mind to think rationally about it (a state of mind which generally only lasted moments before her irritation at the situation flared), Akiha conceded that little blame could be attached to the Works itself. As an organisation, they had operational needs for the Grail, and the energies which empowered it, of were of a higher priority than the Tohnos’; that was simply a reality of the world. As to the incidents which had directly involved her household . . .

    Well, she could only really fault them for not stopping ’Nii-san from going to rescue that blonde, and given her own past failures on that account, Akiha supposed she really had no room to complain. And from all reports, Kohaku had done as much or more damage to her kidnappers as had been inflicted, so again, her grounds for a genuine grievance were shaky, at best. Of greater concern, probably, was the fact that her people could be so easily attacked, or outright abducted by forces from worlds beyond—but could she really say that was the Works’ fault . . .?

    Possibly, she concluded—if one presumed that their association with the Works, and the Works’ credo to “save everyone,” was what allowed such things to take place—but their karma could be equally at fault. Her family had been the target of random, supernatural malevolence from outside their worldview before, after all.

    And I have grown heartily sick of it, Akiha thought fiercely.

    “What, precisely, were set as the requirements to earn this wish?” she demanded.

    As Kohaku explained, Akiha did her best to repress a frown. As impressive as the resources of the Tohno clan were, she wasn’t foolish enough to think that she could surpass the Holy Grail when it came to knowledge of a Heroic Spirit; nor in tracking such. She could, of course, direct her family and their associates to keep watch for signs of this “Nero Claudius” should they appear around their territory, in whatever form—but it would hardly be useful, given the remoteness of the possibility.

    After all, realistically, what were the odds that a Heroic Spirit, or a fragment of one, would just happen to fall anywhere near where she could lay hands upon it . . .? That would stretch the bounds of coincidence so far that Akiha might forced to truly believe in Fate . . .

    Wait.

    “. . . Kohaku,” she said carefully, because it took a genuine effort of willpower to keep her voice even and her face expressionless, “describe this ‘goddess,’ please.”

    As the maid did so, Akiha recognised the “Ruler-class Servant” of the “Great Holy Grail War”; more specifically, the second Ruler Servant, in her original host—which should not have been possible, as for better or worse, that Grail War had concluded . . .

    Akiha froze, as what she’d been told of that Servant’s last words sprang to mind—and with them, a hope.

    “Please direct Hisui to return to the castle,” she instructed her personal maid—who was admittedly better at sneaking, but her sister would be far better at discreetly pilfering documents and leaving no sign of it behind. “I want her to search for any of the Works’ records regarding the process called ‘Fatebinding.’

    “And while she is doing that,” Akiha added, “I want you to lead me to wherever the druid’s hideaway is on our property.”

    Because if the process called “Fatebinding” worked as the Tohno heiress thought it did, and it indeed played a factor in the goddess’ return, as she’d reportedly implied that it might . . .

    No, the resources of the Tohno clan could never match the Holy Grail when it came to seeking out traces of a Heroic Spirit—but they might yet be capable of doing so when it came to hunting down the man who was entangled with it.

    And in so doing, prove themselves an important consideration when it came time to decide who, exactly, got to use this “wish” . . .
















    Somewhere else
    Unknown time, unknown place









    Please . . .

    Frid snapped awake at the unexpected plea—because that hadn’t been his voice, but it sounded achingly familiar.

    Please,” the call repeated, with the speaker’s desperation and despair clearly audible, this time. “Not again . . .

    Tracking the source of the sound, Frid ran, barely noticing the world around him. Grey streets, stone buildings; all of it passed him by without any real consideration. The details didn’t matter—

    (And had he been thinking clearly that very thought might have tipped him off to something being wrong about all this . . .)

    —What mattered was that someone was in trouble, and he had to reach them!

    Frid slipped through the cracks of the boulevard, darting into the back alleys—far away from the lights and noise, towards the darkness and the and the silence. The darkness deepened, chilled, and yet Frid continued on, undaunted. Neither bothered him enough to slow his passage—or at all, really. Even so, something raised the hackles on the back of his neck . . .

    Well, no—not nothing, so much as a single, simple thought: that this would be a fantastic place to set a trap.

    Please . . . Someone—anyone . . .

    If it was a trap, however, it was too perfectly baited to resist; and so, he proceeded, if warily, to the source of the call, and found—

    NERO?!

    For a moment, he thought he was looking at Nero Bride, given her outfit, but no. It was a toga, or at least something much more similar-looking than anything he’d ever seen the emperor-turned-Saber Servant depicted in; the puffy sleeves, for example, weren’t a hallmark of the fashion of the era. Still, it was the kind of flourish Frid could actually see Nero wearing, with her natural flamboyance, and possibly even something she’d actually worn in life . . .

    (The outfit she’d died in, perhaps . . .?)

    Her appearance, however, wasn’t nearly as bizarre as the fact that she’d appeared at all. Why her, why here and now?

    . . . And come to think of it, where exactly was “here and now,” anyway?

    Something was very wrong here . . .






    Y̶̡͖̜͇̰͕̮͉̲̭͓̻̥͈̜̞̊̿͌͌̏̔̆͛̒͂͗͋̒̚ͅÖ̵̢̢̮̳̟̤̜͙̪͕̟͇̜͝ ̠͈ͅU̴̧̢̻̮̰̤͇̱̩̻̜̦̺̲̽̈́͌͆̄̇͘͘ͅͅ ̶̛̲̰͔͓̫͊͐͑͑̈̌̂̿̿͐Ķ̴̡̡̜͓͓̮̣͙͈̲͒͗̅́͜͜͜N̶͓̲̪̱̥̑O̵͂͝͝ ̗͖̂͘Ẁ̸̧͖̗͖͍͊̽̉͂͌͠ ̵̖̒̌͂͆̌́͌T̷̛̻̱̺͍̹͕͍̝͓̩̋͂̈́̇̀͘̕͝Ḧ̶̰̮͔̰͓̦̺́͊̾͛̈͊͒̕ͅE̵ ̢̨͍̪͔̰̱̰̤̮̲̹̯̗̦̲͐̐́̊̀͊̏͠ ̵̧̧̧̤̙̻̘̼̘͇͈͍̉ͅT̸̯̿͐̌̉̈͆́̋̓̓̾̀̕͝Ṙ̸͚̦̟̼̞͎̝̠͍̐̽͘͘͝U ̷̫̠̼̙͖̽̊̂̍̑̆̊̇̌̇͌͋͛T̵̼̳̋́͜Ḣ̶͖̇̂̓̋͆̌̑̈́̈́͛̊̎͝͝.̷͒̈́̇͘ ͙̯̞͚




    “Who calls . . .?” The white-clad Servant turned, seeming to flicker as she did so, like a guttering candle flame. “Is someone there . . .?”

    Her throat was bloody, dripping crimson like tears, an equally bloody knife in her hand. Still, her injury didn’t seem to be bothering her, as such; there was no sign of physical agony, and the blood loss wasn’t near what it ought to be, with that wound. Still, her eyes looked glassy, like she was barely hanging on to consciousness—considering the wavering of her form, it was possible she was barely hanging onto existence. But it honestly looked like she was drugged . . . Or dreami

    Frid stopped as the realisation hit: that was what this was. This was a dream . . .

    . . . And the knowledge didn’t force him awake, which was equally surprising. He’d had a few lucid dreams in his life—at least, lucid to the point he knew he was dreaming, even if he could never do much to guide it—but they were rare things. Once-a-decade events, if that; even one or two with the sensation of touch, though conventional wisdom had always told him you couldn’t feel things in dreams.




    R̴̡̖̭͍͚̤̈́͗̊͗͠Ư̶̧̛̲̮̮̲̭̤̼͕̞̺̗͖̪̳͊̀̅̎̈́̿̍̈͘̕̕͝ͅN̷͌͑͗ ̧̳̱̦͓͓̞͔̌͑͆ ̷̛͔̲̖͇̯̄̉̍̅̏̀͠Ȧ̶̭̦̭͕̘͕͓͇̞̝̰̟̭͍̭̳͖͗S̴̉͌̔̆͐̉̾͑̀̏̽̀͘ ̺̯̭͇̼͕͍ ̵̡̘̲̠̠̺̳̞̪͎͊̓͊̄͊͊̊̈́͝͝͠͝͝F̷̡͇͈̫̮͍͇͓͍̭̜͕̟̣̭̄̓͒̾̕͜͜A̸ ̡̖̫̥͕̜̭̞̫͚̘̊̄̎R̶̛̠̖̣̮̟̣͆̈́̒̈͛̀̇̽̔͜͠ ̵͉̘͎̜͍̜̰̦͓͍͎̲̼̳̼̮̏̍̃̕Ä̵̛̦̱̜̬̗̝̹̲̘́̆͑̎͗S̴̾̈́͂͑͑̇̅́̕͝ ̢̛͉͉̰̝̟̻̙̺̹̭̟͙͒͆͗͋̈́̅͜ ̴̧̛͉̉̿̓̽̀̕̕̕Y̷̡̻̖̻͛̅̅̊̈́͊̂̀̊͘͘̚͠O̸̗̱̲̩͖̣̯̝̬̰͉̊̃̇͂͘͜ ̜̫͇̻͜U̷̪͍͍͑̓͑̈ ̸̧̨̧̘̯͔͚̥̥͈̭̤̻͍̯̒͒͐͌̄͠W̴̩͋͌̓͂̊̂͛̇̍̽́̓͝͝I̶͉̝̱͂̈́̏͒̑͘ ̨̮̺̙̰̱͙̘̱̱S̸̡̧̢̲͓͍͔̰̙̼̫̖̼̭̜̯̀͒̀ͅḦ̷̰̲͓̟̲̤̟͍̮́̍̋̑̒̽̐ ̨̰͉͕̳͓̱ͅ.̸̟̜̼͇̰̱͙͕͈̂̋̄̀͒̒͗̀̐̉̂̅̀͊̍̕͠ͅͅ




    He winced as the sound tore through the world, but despite its volume, remained wrapped in the shell of his dreaming self nonetheless, even as part of him curled inward in pain (fear). That had been . . . Static, claws on a chalkboard, the whispers of some thing that he couldn’t fail to hear, but still couldn’t quite make out.

    (But he knew it was close . . .)

    The ripple through the dream affected Nero worse, however; if she’d been flickering before, its passage warped her wildly, like a candle flame been blown out—

    “NO!” He lunged, trying to grab her, literally hold her steady; an irrational impulse, yes, but also as logical as “dream logic” got.

    His hand closed around her, and Nero stilled, her form fixing itself in place.

    Who . . .?” she said weakly, her eyes still unfocussed, but she gained a touch of solidity, and an internal glow. “. . . Praetor . . .? Master . . .? Performer . . .?”

    With each name, her gaze sharpened, fixing on his as she fought her way through whatever was affecting her—and the light illuminating her brightened with each passing heartbeat.

    “No,” she declared at last, “Maestro.

    She grabbed onto him back—




    H̸͖̀͊̽͐̃͜I̸̢̩͚͈͉͉̗̩͔̰̮̲͇͚͒̕D̴̨̯̬͎͇͑͊̒̒̎̀̔͊́̅̍̆̑̃͋̚ ̻̫̞̲̝̘͓̞E̷̳̅̾̿̑͐̈́̊͑̽̉͆͌͊̊̕͝ ̴̞͕͉͖̯̲̜̲̬̊̍̑̇̇̾̈́͂̇̈́̈́͘Ḁ̶̫̟̜̣͎̭͆̄̔̅̉́̈̒S̵̫͛͐̄͆͂́̄̓ ̣̭̜ ̴̹͕͕̪̬̘̯͙̭͇̤͗͆̄͐̈́̋̽̓̀͑̎̔͠͝ͅD̵̨̙̹͎͎̥̭̰̺̹̰͂̀̐̽̊͘̕͘͜E ̸̧̛͙̱̫̺̘͉͔̜͓͑͐͆͒̌́͐̀̉͑͛̚͜͠E̸̡̛̥̙̩̦̖͙̯̮̥̳̍̀̑̅̓̉̆͗̽̕ ͎̳P̷̡̬̮͖̻̱̖̯͕̲̣͎̾́̈́̔̉́̈́̀͂̾L̶̢̡̨̦̻̺̱̺̫͆̿͂̐͒̋̕ͅÝ̸́́ ̧̡͙̮͈̻̦̦̟̬̤̯̣̐̽̓̆ ̶̛̭̮͇̩̠͎̳̭͎̳̤͓͙͗̄̐͑̀̏̎̃̋̂̕͜͜A̷̹͙̲̲̰̪̪͇̰͓̹̽̉̒͛͊͋̉̔̽ ̳S̸̙̩̩̿͋́ ̵̧̡͉̳̤̭͔̥̠̙̺̠̾͑̿͊̕͝Y̵͕͖͍͛̍͌̋̿Ǫ̸̌̋̏͆͒̕U̶̽̅̐͑̎̈́̌̉͘͘ ̖̦̫̲̄͑̿̎̎̊͠ ̷̨̮̘͇̳̤̇͌̈́̎͋̓̀͂̀͆̇̀̈́͗͒͑Ċ̶͎̳͕͐̿̓̔͆̚̕Ȃ̷̛̊͑͗͗̆̈̋̽̀̋ ̱̠̝͙̪̆̓̕ͅṈ̴̞̦̿͂̋̀̃́̀̂̀͐̎̊̌̈́̈́̚.̴̨̡̨̤̲̖̻̣̟̮͔́̓̋̐̑͜ͅ ̻͉




    The ripple was stronger this time, sending tremors through the alley; Nero’s aura flared to blinding—




    Y̴͉̝̺̼͋̓̑̀̉̒̏̀̀́O̴̡̥̬͈̹͚̪̓Ư̷͔͍̥͖̪̫̮̗̈́̋̄̈̂̈́̒̕͠͠ ̷̡͉̋̿͂͛̓̄Ç̸̪̯̰̭̰̙̳̻͛̌̆̈͛̇̈́̔͋̔̃͘̕ͅȂ̵̛͙͙̣̦̯̒̃̽́̔̅̚ ̡̨͎͎͓͖̳̹̘̟̳ͅŅ̴̡̯̪͎̫̳̂̀̓̓̊͗̎̒̄͂̈́̅̚͜͝N̸̘̥̝̝̟͔̻̩̔͐̎̈́ ̧͕̦̗͉͖̜̺O̵̡̦̩̱̹͆ͅT̴͍͍̣̬̫͙̭̆ ̵̛̺̪̮̇̀́͐́͗̅͆̚̕̕͝Ȩ̸̟͓̦̬͍̲͚̺̟͍̼̩̽̈́͌̋̈́̃̚ͅͅS̷̒́̐͒̓̐͝ ̢̲̉C̶̲̮̲̊̆̌́͝A̶͇̯̻͕̬̺̦̰̖̰͙̬͐̄̈͆̊̾͊̏̃̑͌̑̏̐́̕͜ͅP̵̘̠͝ É̵̢̛̲͈͙̹̭̘͖͖͂̂͂̈́́̉̉̅̈̌̃̀́͠ͅ ̶̜͔̼͎̼̔̒͛̑Ȋ̸̡̨̨̙̹̹̬̜͍͓̍̋̊̏́̈͗Ţ̸̛̯͕͕́͊̀̈̈́̊̌̃.̸̇͐̋ ͇̼̟̗̮͂͜




    A sharp pain suddenly pierced his side—had she stabbed him . . .? There was no time to even ponder the question, as with the subsequent quaking Nero abruptly exploded in fire, like a star going nova, hurling him away . . .

    Frid’s last sight before the darkness took him was of the glittering remnants that had been the Emperor of Roses, scattering across the heavens like a meteor shower. Then there was only the icy, clinging darkness, dragging him into oblivion . . .

    And a voice whispered, like a final breath, “Not yet . . .”
















    Somewhere else
    Unknown time, unknown place

















    As he drifted in the darkness, dragged down by its weight, distant sensations reached him.

    Cold.

    Wet.


    The sensations shocked him, the darkness lightening to gray, bringing with it awareness, to a degree. He thought—did he hear voices . . .? Were they familiar? He struggled to recall, to fight against the sluggishness; the heavy, opaque weight that seemed to press down on him from every angle—but try though he might, he was just so tired . . .

    How deep into the darkness he went, he couldn’t say. How long it took, he’d never know. He only knew it ended when he felt a sudden jolt—



    When his vision cleared, his mind said, “hospital room,” which made the colours make sense.

    More importantly, his brain reminded him, where was he, what exactly had happened—and how the hell was he going to deal with this? He didn’t exactly have the money for an extended hospital stay—or a legal ID, so far as he knew. And depending on where he was . . .

    Seriously, where would that be, exactly? If he was still somewhere in Romania, he’d have to fend try to link up with the Works, somehow, before the Clock Tower caught up with things.

    But it sure as hell felt like Astraea had thrown him somewhere . . .

    Experimentally, Frid tried, “Ilya . . .?

    No co-opted reflections or tiny pseudo-holograms were forthcoming.

    Maybe the whole “Grail Works” thing was a dream . . .? It would explain the overall chaos of it all: the multiple disparate elements, the constant shifts in his nature and abilities, the sheer absurdity of it all . . .

    A sudden twinge from his side, right where he’d been stabbed, argued otherwise—then again, that might’ve just been his subconscious’ way of coping with whatever had actually happened.

    (That part had definitely been a dream, right . . .?)

    Glancing around, Frid could see a number of buttons, but couldn’t actually read which one was the “call” button.

    So, he tried calling out experimentally, louder than he had for Ilya, “Hello . . .?”

    There was no response—in fact, the whole place seemed eerily quiet.

    I swear to God, if this is a Walking Dead or 28 Days Later scenario . . .

    Frid’s thoughts were interrupted by the door suddenly slamming open, allowing a man in a wheeled office chair to roll through. He turned, revealing himself to be seemingly dressed for a university campus; or perhaps a game of golf, garbed as he was in red suit pants and tie with a white shirt, but also a mauve vest, a green jacket with pinstripes, a flat cap and black-on-black sunglasses.

    None of which, a corner of Frid’s mind noted, meshed well together, much less with the man’s ebony complexion—but then the man opened his mouth and spoke Japanese, with the kind of enthusiasm reserved for “next episode preview” voiceover announcements.

    “Do you happen to know . . .” the stranger announced. “About those glorious days? About my dream island filled with love . . .?”

    Frid blinked, bewildered—before sudden realisation broke in.

    Ah,” he said. “Now I understand—I’m still under the influence of whatever drugs they’ve given me.”

    Closing his eyes, Frid rolled over and did his best to fall back to sleep.

    “Hey! I had a whole routine practiced and ready to go, you know . . .!”

    Hopefully, things would start making more sense once the chemical cocktail was out of his system.

    HEY!

    Seriously, where the hell had that hallucination even come from . . .? The whole “Nero” thing had more context than—

    Hands suddenly seized him by the collar, hauling him half off the bed, and began shaking him.

    However!” the sunglasses-wearing, apparently-not-a-hallucination screamed into his face (and revealing a desperate need for a breath mint). “When tragedy struck, and the island I built up twice in the past collapsed along with my dream, I did not give up!

    Dropping Frid back onto the bed, he gestured expansively with one hand. “Just look at that view!”

    On cue, the drapes opened, revealing a vast swath of sunny, tropical-looking beachfront. Compared to the relative dimness of the hospital room, the change in light and colour was quite literally dazzling . . .

    “But unfortunately,” said the screaming crazy person, “I’m current busy working on another super important job. So, you see . . . I’m appointing you to be the owner of this place while I’m gone!”

    He pointed at Frid dramatically and declared, “I’m counting on you!”

    . . . What.









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    Well, that certainly answers the hint we got about fighting games. I missed it by virtue of it not exactly being a fighting game, but it's famous-enough I should have considered it, and tends to have licensed songs. That's of pretty-comparable absurdity to the previous iteration, but a little more dangerous. Nothing established either way about powers yet.

    And we're introducing a rather strict time limit this time around. Good for pacing, though it does seem pretty tight. If the Works can run at different time rates from other realities (which they're done in some snippets, but I'm unsure about full stories) that might be more generous than it seems, but I'm unsure if that's been established as a thing. If not, seems like you may be tapping a lot of the Works cast, though that depends on how many fragments actually need to be recovered, and how many they can find.

    Minor typo: “[I[Ilya . . .?[/I]”

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    Minor typo: “[I[Ilya . . .?[/I]”
    Argh - I thought I got all the errors . . . *Sighs* The perils of doing cut-and-paste on prior scenes, I guess.

    Fixed, thank you.


    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    Well, that certainly answers the hint we got about fighting games. I missed it by virtue of it not exactly being a fighting game, but it's famous-enough I should have considered it, and tends to have licensed songs.
    Particularly Aerosmith, yes.


    That's of pretty-comparable absurdity to the previous iteration, but a little more dangerous.
    And best of all, theoretically compatible with taking place in the TYPE-MOON universe, as long as I'm judicious about which of the extended elements I allow. Fatal Frame, for example, which Ayane is a DLC heroine in, is probably doable; things like SPARTAN Nicole-458, on the other hand, probably not . . .

    (Although given Erik's entanglement with shipgirls at the moment, I'll admit there is a temptation to invoke Vacation Lane . . . )


    Nothing established either way about powers yet.
    We'll get there . . .


    And we're introducing a rather strict time limit this time around. Good for pacing, though it does seem pretty tight.
    Particularly since the "island vacation" is supposed to take two weeks, yes. But I realised I couldn't ignore the potential repercussions of Nero's being gone - so that's pretty much all the time I figured I could allow and still keep things tense.


    If the Works can run at different time rates from other realities (which they're done in some snippets, but I'm unsure about full stories) that might be more generous than it seems, but I'm unsure if that's been established as a thing. If not, seems like you may be tapping a lot of the Works cast, though that depends on how many fragments actually need to be recovered, and how many they can find.
    Exactly.
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    Outside the Tohno Estate
    Misaki Town, Japan
    July 8, 2004


















    The half-elven druid who had made his home on the Tohno estate’s grounds had freely admitted a distaste for Kohaku’s presence (if one chose to obliquely call it that, rather than bluntly naming it the outright terror of her that it truly was). Despite this, she had arguably had the most frequent interaction with him, of all the mansion’s inhabitants, since it was her garden that he (literally) worked his magic on—if indirectly, as she only ever dealt with the results of that work, or the occasional note.

    As such, Kohaku could not tell her mistress where precisely the druid laired, though she could certainly guess, as the grounds were, after all, only so large; the fact that she, specifically, found an area of the surrounding woods impassable was another clue. That the trees of said area seemed remarkably resistant to blades, fire and any herbicide she had on hand (or could think to mix up)—she’d gotten bored one day and decided to experiment—was another.

    As a result, however, Kohaku could do little but wait for Akiha to return from her errand—which took, somewhat to her surprise, well over an hour.

    Could he warp the space within the grounds, to make them larger? Kohaku wondered. Or were his defences hostile to everyone, rather than just me . . .? No—Hisui-chan never had problems going through that part of the grounds . . .

    Her train of thought was interrupted by the heiress’ sudden reappearance; her face tight and her stride swift and purposeful—no, it was more than that. Akiha’s movements were almost manic as her legs ate up the distance between the forest and the main house, her arms wrapped around a cardboard box with an air of desperation.

    “Kohaku,” Akiha said sharply, “fetch Hisui—and Nii-san, if he’s back yet—and meet me in the parlour at once.

    “Yes, my lady,” Kohaku said, almost automatically, her eyes scanning her mistress, and the box.

    It was an empty laundry soap box, one of the ones she’d put out for the trash, last month, she realised. Why would the druid have kept a box . . .?

    And then, Kohaku remembered.








    The Tohno Estate
    Six weeks ago
















    “Wouldst thou be so kind, Lady Tohno,” asked the foreign half-breed of the native, “as to attempt to slake thy dark appetites ‘pon me?”

    Akiha stiffened, making her rapidly paling face achieve the look of polished marble, before she began to redden even more swiftly, her expression twisting in repugnance.

    “I beg your pardon . . .?” she demanded icily—and his own countenance twisted into a grimace before the words had finished leaving her mouth.

    “A plague ‘pon this cursed tongue, that it doth ever twist my meanings out of joint,” he muttered. “I abash myself before thee, fair maiden; I am bound by the limits of the words I know, which are akin though not always alike to the tongue of thy sinew. Prithee, give me leave to begin anew.”

    Kohaku, despite herself, suppressed a smile at her mistress’ expression; his words were so flowery and archaic that they were ridiculous, yet the tone was so earnest, and the face so exotically pretty, in a bishonen kind of way, that Akiha-sama seemed genuinely uncertain of what to do.

    Apparently taking her silence as assent, he continued, “The path I trod yields many gifts; powers which might turn pallid and sickly when placed afore the marvels of Lady Arcueid, the lady knight, or e’en Tohsaka Rin—and yet, I am not without strength. My ilk are accounted priests, after a fashion; while true miracles lie far beyond my grasp, still, in the healing arts, I account myself fairer than most. And whilst spring’s first bloom is still visible ‘pon my cheeks, to my mind, that time is far beyond my grasp. In the passing since, I hath learned that cunning may carry the day where strength falters.”

    He gave Kohaku a knowing glance as he said it, and apparently read Akiha’s incomprehension at a glance, because he sighed.

    “Matters of the spirit lie beyond my ken,” the druid said, visibly and audibly choosing his words with care. “I am cloistered, by preference, but no man of the cloth. Yet when it comes to preserving limb or health—or restoring it—I have no small talent. I wouldst heal thee, and thy brother, if ‘tis within my power; yet I must know more of the affliction, afore I possess the courage of my convictions. I must know wherefore thy nature does as it does, and the manner of its actions.

    “And so, I ask again,” he said gently. “Feed thy darkest desires ‘pon myself, that I might have the proof of my suspicions.”

    “. . . You don’t know what you’re asking,” Akiha said, though her voice was shakier than Kohaku suspected anyone but herself, Hisui, or Shiki might realise. And having observed Akiha for as long as she had, Kohaku believed that at least part of the girl’s uncertainty came from the fact that it was a rather attractive man asking. The demon in Akiha hardly cared where its nourishment came from, but the heiress tried so hard to be human, and humans liked pretty things.

    And she ought to know—hadn’t Makihisa had called her such, often enough . . .?

    (At the beginning, at least . . .)

    I, in many ways, am less human than thee,” he chided. “The world will not mourn my loss—nor should it. ‘Tis its way . . . And should I prove aright, sweet child . . . Thou wouldst have no need of a Holy Grail.”

    Once more, he sighed.

    “In a time and place thou can scarce imagine, she who is named for the inevitable slumber, thy brother was a source of comfort and inspiration; and above all else, I despise being indebted. I wouldst cleanse the slate between us, even if he sees aught owed; I beseech thee to allow me to try.

    And so it went, and Akiha, who despite her position, was still a teenage girl, found herself surrendering to the older being’s arguments . . .

    And it was shock, as much as anything else, that allowed her to regain control over her demonic impulses when her attempt to drain him failed.

    For his own part, the druid nodded in satisfaction. “As I’d hoped . . “

    What had you hoped?” Akiha demanded, her eyes wild, and all attempts at decorum tossed to the wind. “HOW did you DO THAT?!

    “Thou draws sustenance through blood, but the true nature of thy feeding hath common roots within what is named the ‘Negative Energy Plane,’” the druid said—which explained nothing at all, of course. “And amongst the many spells at my command, there is that which is named ‘death ward . . .’

    He smiled. “I know not whether the cure for thy ills lies within my power, Lady Tohno, but of this much, I can say ‘certes’—that protecting thy loved ones from thyself is most assuredly amongst my limitations . . .”
















    In the present, secreted with her mistress and her sister. Kohaku locked eyes with her mistress.

    “He did it.” It wasn’t a question.

    “He did it,” Akiha repeated, by way of affirmation, before setting out two woollen collars—there was no other word for them—sewn with leather patches.

    “These are ‘gorgets,’” the heiress said, pronouncing the word with some care, “or what we would call nodawa—

    Kohaku corrected herself; apparently, there were other words for them.

    “And they are enchanted to protect the wearer from the sort of life-draining performed by the Tohno bloodline,” she finished heavily. “Though they will not protect you from injuries caused by such, like impalement by fang, or claw”—or hair, she didn’t say—“they will prevent any sort of ‘death spell’ or ‘negative energy’ from afflicting you, which should offer you a chance to flee, if nothing else . . .” Her face fell, for a moment, before firming and she continued, “As such, I want you to wear these as part of your standard uniforms from now on—ideally, always.

    “Of course, Akiha-sama,” Hisui said, bowing.

    “They will clash terribly with our outfits,” Kohaku observed with a smile, as much to twit her employer as anything else.

    (In truth, the child that had existed before the doll would have given much for such protection . . .)

    Akiha’s face cracked a small, amused smile. “Oh, indeed—but with a word . . .” She picked up one, narrowed her eyes in concentration, and said carefully, “Rykiir.”

    With a shimmer like moonlight on water, the leather-and-wool piece became a slender, lace-ruffled choker, ideal for Hisui’s standard European dress.

    “It means ‘jade gem’ in the tongue of his species of yokai, apparently,” Akiha said, examining it. “Simple enough to remember, not too difficult to pronounce—and not something to say in casual conversation. It apparently loses none of its protective qualities in this state, but will assume its heavier, armoured configuration in response to sufficient force, like a car crash, or a sharp edge swung at your throat.”

    She turned to Kohaku. “The command for yours is ‘fetekiir,’ or ‘fire gem’—I assume that he either doesn’t know the word for amber, or it’s too close to a Japanese one you might say accidentally.”

    She passed the collar to Kohaku, who repeated the word, and saw it change into a short silken scarf—closer to a bandanna in length, but something would go unnoticed amidst her usual kimono.

    “Between this and Nii-san’s item,” Akiha said decisively, “I would say he has more than paid for his brief tenancy here . . .” Her face set determinedly.

    “And now we absolutely must find him, wish or no,” the heiress continued firmly. “Because like him, I very much despise debts.”

    “And because Akiha-sama is now feeling bad for disparaging him before the others,” Kohaku added cheerfully, “because he actually did come through before surrendering those powers . . .?”

    The heiress flinched, and Hisui gave her a look, but Kohaku chose to twist the knife just a little.

    “Or perhaps,” she added in a thoughtful tone, “Akiha-sama is feeling bad for disparaging such a good-looking, if unusual, man . . .? My, my—whatever will Shiki-san say . . .?”

    “. . . You know, Kohaku,” Akiha said in an almost conversational tone, “it occurs to me that I’ve been remiss in making proper preparations for your future—you and Hisui both, in truth. If you are so taken by him, then surely—

    Hisui paled, Kohaku stared, and the three teenagers traded ominous looks in silence.

    “. . . I understand that Sakura-san and Ilya-san”—neither girl being fond of their family names, Kohaku used their given ones despite the implied intimacy—“consider Tohsaka an auspicious match . . .?”

    Akiha relaxed and accepted the peace offering for what it was.

    “I see no issue with sponsoring a wedding, should it come to that—it seems the least the Tohno clan could do.”

    For items that prevented their wearer from being fed upon, Kohaku expected that Akiha meant every syllable—they would be a treasure beyond reckoning to the clan as a whole, never mind to her . . .

    No doubt, the heiress of the Tohno clan would apply every resource available to her to make such a wedding happen, without flaw or fail.
















    Avalon Castle, Phantasmagoria Island (Grail Works. Ltd. Headquarters)
    Beyond the boundaries of time and space

















    As the most awful chill shot up her spine, Rin was at a loss to explain her sudden desire to do violence to something—or someone . . .















    Zack Hotel
    Venus Islands, South Pacific

















    Zack couldn’t believe his luck.

    And honestly, that statement could describe several of the events of the last few years, because it applied to both the good and bad aspects of his luck . . .

    For example, he’d failed to win the third “Dead or Alive” tournament, his third attempt to do so—and then proceeded to clean up in Vegas. He’d used his winnings to open his first “island of love” . . . And it was summarily destroyed by a volcanic eruption. Zack then went on a treasure-hunting expedition with his girlfriend, Nikki, and found the lost tomb of a crazy-wealthy pharaoh—which turned out to be guarded by the undead. He and Nikki (barely) escaped, and he managed to use his restored wealth to build “New Zack Island,” to revive his dream . . .

    And then a freaking meteor landed on his resort—and ignited a second island-destroying volcanic eruption, just to add insult to injury.

    Still, despite all the damage, nobody had gotten hurt—except for one guy, who Zack found floating in the water during the evacuation of New Zack Island. Judging from the flash in the sky prior to the meteor strike, he must’ve been skydiving over the island when it destroyed his plane. The resulting fire had torched all his gear, his clothes—and the impact with the water had done him no favours. Still, the stranger had actually managed to survive the fire, and the fall—even if it was only Zack’s intervention that kept him from drowning . . .

    The stranger was at least as lucky as himself, in Zack’s opinion—which was a very good thing, as it turned out, and not just for the stranger.

    Contrary to a lot of his behaviour, Zack wasn’t an idiot; fun-loving and clownish, sure—he was a D.J., it was part of the expected persona—but not stupid. A freak volcano eruption destroying his island once? Bad luck, sure; but twice? And having it happen by dropping a meteor out of the sky . . .?

    He’d done some poking around while acting as an agent of DOATEC, as reformed under Helena Douglas—and could’ve smacked himself. Really, with the guardians the tomb had had, Zack should’ve figured there was a curse.

    And to anybody who thought believing in curses was nuts, he would point out that the tomb had been guarded by animated skeletons. And if they tried to argue “animatronics,” or crap like that? Zack had been knocked out of every DOA tournament at some point by an honest-to-God ninja of one sect, clan, or another—several of whom had shown the ability to teleport during the match.

    . . . At that point, accepting the existence of an actual curse wasn’t all that far-fetched, really.

    It had taken a while to narrow down the specifics of the curse; or for DOATEC to, anyway—that kind of thing wasn’t really Zack’s strong suit, though he could if he had to (like, for example, to impress Nikki). Still, DOATEC, under Helena’s father, had been the ones looking into the ninjas and stuff; they had a lot more experience when it came to the idea of researching curses. What had eventually been dug up was enough to give Zack a way out—even if it meant spending all of what he’d had left of the treasure. Because the curse, as it turned out, was laid on “he who profited from the theft; until Osiris’ judgement.”

    It sounded like a lot more complicated of a curse than those old movies made them out to be, but it also sounded like so long as Zack didn’t actually make any money off the island, he ought to be fine. Still, he’d thought of a couple of workarounds, and done his best to put them into play. First, while Zack did the hiring and whatnot, the actual profits went to Helena, to be reimbursed from another account—because the curse did say “he,” and stuff like that could be surprisingly literal . . .

    The other factor was to put somebody else in charge of running the place, just in case—and the candidate of choice was obvious . . . Hey, the stranger had been lucky enough to survive the curse once, when by all rights he should have been collateral damage; Zack reckoned that if anybody could manage to do it again, then this was the guy!

    Besides, he wasn’t completely heartless; he’d built the new resort on the Venus Islands—not far from New Zack Island, true, but a place with a reputation of being divinely protected in its peace. And he believed there was some truth to that. Why else would a South Pacific archipelago be named for the Roman goddess of love, of all things . . .?

    More than that, though, Zack could feel something special about the place—he might’ve chosen to start again here even if he hadn’t known about the curse. As it was, though, he thought he’d given the stranger his best chance of beating the curse, by setting up everything here. It was just a matter of persuading him to accept the job.

    And while he was far more confident in its efficaciousness regarding the ladies, Zack had full faith in his charm, nonetheless . . .
















    How,” Frid asked of himself under his breath, “did I manage to let myself get talked into this . . .?”

    Because no matter what’s happened to you, you’re still a sucker for a pretty face—and especially one in distress, retorted that cynical voice in the back of his head.

    While unwelcome, Frid supposed the statement was in no way untrue. Though he felt that the “distress” part could be debated in this instance, going by the letter he’d been handed.



    “To the new Owner,

    Welcome to the Venus Islands. Upon your arrival, please proceed to the pier at Nikki Beach. Your personal staff will apprise you of your duties, as well as the details of the Venus Festival. We eagerly await your arrival.”



    Far from being a plea for help, the message was professional, in fact, downright corporate in its contents; it was remarkable only in the fact that it was written in Japanese, and Frid could still read it, on top of understanding it conversationally. If nothing else, that proved that the whole “Grail Works” scenario hadn’t been a dream, after all . . .

    (And neither had Erik, and all the meta stuff that his existence implied—but Frid was never going to poke THAT particular anthill, if he could help it . . .)

    Of course, that raised the question of where the hell he actually was. That sunglasses-wearing lunatic had had the “dual-overlay” quality to his voice that Frid heard whenever he dealt with a dubbed Japanese property. In point of fact, the English aspect had been so cacophonous that he suspected multiple voice actors on that side, on par with Arturia if not worse . . .

    Needless to say, Frid had concentrated on the Japanese—it gave him less of a headache. But the very circumstance implied that this was someone he ought to know, if the property was that well-developed and/or widespread . . . Unfortunately, “fit, good-looking black guy in sunglasses” wasn’t exactly a rare character design—and he couldn’t think of one who had a penchant for wearing suits.

    I know the voice wasn’t
    deep enough to be Rodan—not to mention that Rodan prefers leather—so I’m not in the Bayonetta universe. But other than that, I’ve got no clue . . .

    Regardless, Frid had been willing to tolerate the man’s clowning as long as he was in the room (ignoring someone willing to manhandle a patient in a sickbed did not strike him as wise), and then promptly forget his existence . . . And then he’d handed over a photo of the letter writer, who was the aforementioned “personal staff” (and implied to be the only staff, at that) a gamine Japanese woman—or girl, more probably, but Frid had always been terrible at guessing ages.

    As with the lunatic, she wasn’t someone he recognised—though she was pretty, in a waifish sort of way—but the simple look of her had the polite, neutral language of the letter take on an earnest, “desperate to be taken seriously” tone in his head.

    A sucker for a pretty face, the voice repeated tauntingly.

    Regardless, he supposed he owed them for the medical help, at least; he didn’t seem to be injured anymore, but Frid had seen the notes detailing his condition when he’d been brought in, and—well, been promptly horrified. Not just for the state of him, but for what it had meant.

    If he’d had anything like sufficient Essence left, Halting the Scarlet Flow would’ve activated—because it could be activated while he was unconscious. Even if his Charms were somehow rendered inoperable, Exalts, like Scions, healed four times faster than mortals as a baseline; that kind of recovery differential should absolutely have been noticed by somebody in the hospital.

    And cutting him off from regaining Essence shouldn’t be possible, either, because it was generated by the Exaltation grafted to his soul, not drawn in from the environment. The only thing he could think of that might hypothetically accomplish that would be a seriously “low mana” environment, where magic and similar forces didn’t exist at all. In that case, without one of Ilya’s “paradigm shields” to prevent it, the sheer vacuum would draw the Essence into the general environment as the universe sought to stabilise the imbalance.

    That would prevent his healing at any kind of accelerated rate—but there was no way he’d NOT notice the Essence being sucked away from him . . .

    It was gone.

    That was the only possible conclusion. His Exaltation had been stripped from him, and he was just a lowly mortal, once more.

    A kaleidoscope of emotions ran through him at the realisation. Hollowness, at the loss: he’d had the Exaltation for mere days, and now it was gone—and so swiftly after the loss of his druid identity and its powers; he’d barely started getting used to the difference . . . This was followed swiftly by panic—what was he supposed to do NOW?! He was a useless, middle-aged weakling who, to quote another such, was among the number who “historically speaking, people like me have been victims and FOOD . . .” He had no equalisers at all; no powers, no way to contact the Works, not even a truly legal identity—!

    It was followed swiftly by anger—how dare Astraea do this to him . . .?

    I knew that Luvia could be petty—Prisma Illya made that RIDICULOUSLY clear, with how she couldn’t seem to go thirty seconds without insulting somebody, when she was first introduced—and the Olympians go without saying . . . But I’d honestly expected better of Astraea, and maybe even more so when she was using Laeticia as a host; the more fool me, I guess . . .

    But it was more than that—it was the fact that it might not have been a true Exaltation, but he had fucking EARNED it. The memories of actually doing it, the details of how and why, had been taken from him as part of the price, but Frid knew that the Seldarine had considered the Exaltation an equivalent exchange for whatever services he’d ultimately rendered. No one, least of all gods (and less still elven gods, to a human), would simply give away the kind of power that represented; and he had done something that they considered worthy of it . . .

    And now it was gone.

    I’m back to square one, if not square
    ZERO—

    Frid stopped, as a horrifying possibility suddenly occurred to him.

    I wanted a chance to prove that I could do the Works’ job—to save people—when there wasn’t any outside interference in my attempts to do so. No gods or forces from beyond time and space meddling to screw my plans or my chances . . . And also, no supernatural powers, or meta-knowledge about what I’d be facing . . .?

    He silently apologised to Astraea; he’d apparently disrespected her without cause. It appeared that the goddess-turned-Ruler had, indeed, been scrupulously fair, as he’d initially expected of her, and balanced the scales precisely—and all the while, as per his luck, still managing to incidentally screw him into the proverbial ground . . .

    So, he was in an unknown place, with no resources to speak of, save for what appeared to be a body in much better condition than his original life, and an identity he’d apparently bargained for fairly enough to be allowed to keep. To further frustrate him, said identity did not come with the Magic Circuits, Mystic Eyes, and thaumaturgical knowledge that went with it, nor could he contact the Works—most probably because this was a universe without magic altogether. All the same, Frid presumed this was a place that had a Works-level problem, because why would Astraea send him anywhere else, given what he’d asked for . . .?

    This is really, really bad, remarked his inner voice.

    Still, lacking better options or directions, what else was he supposed to do . . .? He’d manage the resort, as best he could, until something turned up to point him along whatever path Astraea expected him to try to walk—and with luck, maybe the Works would actually turn up at some point, if there was the kind of problem that they were meant to solve involved in all this.

    With that in mind, Frid stepped out of the building’s confines, onto the island proper—

    And was promptly assaulted by a full-body tingling across his skin that practically screamed “magic.”

    “. . . OH, COME ON!
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    Minor formatting glitch, there's a "[I]remembered" pretty early. I've never seen the word "gamine" before, but always nice to learn something new.

    Good balance between newer and reused elements. So we're still going to be doing something with the Tsukihime cast. And of course it's the "Venus Islands" DOA, perfect place for a Summer Nero, plus a bit of Sune's influence. You'd think Godafrid would be removed enough from "profiting" to be unaffected by karmic curses, but I doubt he's that lucky.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    Minor formatting glitch, there's a "[I]remembered" pretty early.
    Aw, crap - that was supposed to carry over into the next scene change, which is why I left it open - and I guess it didn't. Fixed, thank you.


    I've never seen the word "gamine" before, but always nice to learn something new.
    I do love to show off my vocabulary when I get a chance.


    Good balance between newer and reused elements.
    Thank you. I figure by Chapter 4, I'll be out of reworkable stuff - but I still have a little bit I can use to speed the posting.


    So we're still going to be doing something with the Tsukihime cast.
    Yeah - I'm still not completely sure what, at this point, but they do need attention, I think.


    And of course it's the "Venus Islands" DOA,
    I'll admit to playing a bit with the continuity - and I will put up an "Informational" post about that, because it's complicated in MULTIPLE ways - but the short explanation why is that it's got something approaching an actual plot (kind of), and supposedly still a version of DOA Xtreme Beach Volleyball 3, even though parts of Venus Vacation imply that it's a sequel . . .

    Like I said, it's complicated.


    perfect place for a Summer Nero, plus a bit of Sune's influence.
    OK, you've figured half of it out already . . .


    You'd think Godafrid would be removed enough from "profiting" to be unaffected by karmic curses, but I doubt he's that lucky.
    Make that three-quarters . . .
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    . . . And as I organise my "informational post" in my head, it occurs to me that I should ask - how familiar is everybody with Dead or Alive? The last game was five years ago, after all.
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    Not really at all, for me. I've heard of it, and I'll usually skim information about the wider plot for context when I feel like I'm missing something.
    I can infer we're in DOA Xtreme 3, meaning after DOA 5.

    Also it feels pretty bizarre that the entire "cursed egyptian treasure" thing is actually DOA canon, but I suppose I shouldn't be that shocked. Fanservice excuses being paper thin isn't exactly unusual.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    Not really at all, for me. I've heard of it, and I'll usually skim information about the wider plot for context when I feel like I'm missing something.
    I can infer we're in DOA Xtreme 3, meaning after DOA 5.
    That's where it gets a bit tricky - speaking technically, Venus Vacation is the PC port of Xtreme 3, but it also acts. at times, like it's a sequel . . . Which is part of what I plan to go into, among other things - OK. It also means you're not likely to have heard of any of the girls, or have any preferences - all right.

    I can assure you that I won't be bringing in 18 new girls, while ignoring most of the original cast . . .

    (Although having written that, now, I'm half-tempted to bring Takara in, just because - but that's another one of those fun ideas, I know.)


    Also it feels pretty bizarre that the entire "cursed egyptian treasure" thing is actually DOA canon, but I suppose I shouldn't be that shocked.
    It being detailed like this is mostly my conceit; it lets me drop Frid here like I have, and explains WHY Zack hires a literal no-name schmuck to run things for Xtreme 3, at least. And it will also allow me to do some . . . potentially interesting things, later.


    Fanservice excuses being paper thin isn't exactly unusual.
    Especially for this series - see the Neptunia, Azur Lane, Senran Kagura and Fatal Frame crossovers . . .
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    Chapter 3 – Goddess(es) of Venus . . .?

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    Far-off in the distance, somewhere in space-time
    Universe Era, Season 4.75


















    “Has the analysis been finished, Munenori?” the leader of the Space Shinkageryu demanded.

    The only reply was a bout of heavy, mechanised breathing.

    She scowled. “. . . I’ve told you to stop that—take that ridiculous thing off!”

    The Warrior of Darkness did so and bowed, chastened. “Apologies, my lady . . . And yes, the analysis has been completed.”

    When no further elaboration was forthcoming, she put her hands on her hips—not quite going for her swords—and demanded, “Well?

    “They are metallised fragments of a Saint Graph, it appears,” he said offhandedly, summarising the results even as he passed her the data. “Their origin is unusual; they appear to be made of common siderites, but are atomically dissimilar to any known material—further, they register simultaneously as being both only a few years old, and older than the universe. . . Beyond a scientific curiosity, however, I can see no strategic value in them.”

    “Oh, I can,” she assured him, her eyes alight with wicked possibility. “A collection of portable items containing the full metaphysical data of a Saber Class Container, that’s otherwise blank . . .?

    “No, Munenori—I think we can do a lot with these . . .”

    Even as she spoke the words, however, the leader subtly began glancing around, suddenly certain, somehow, that she was being watched—
















    Avalon Castle, Phantasmagoria Island (Grail Works. Ltd. Headquarters)
    Beyond the boundaries of time and space


















    The Grail spirit pulled back sharply.

    “What’s the matter?” Astraea demanded.

    That our missing target was not just serious, but completely right when he said there were things that might be able to spot us, things that we don’t want to get the attention of, Ilya thought sarcastically.

    All she’d intended to do was read the history of the “Foreigner-class” (and wasn’t that a nightmare to contemplate . . .?) Servant known as “Mysterious Heroine XX.” It should have been simple. That was, after all, part and parcel of what the Grail had designed to be capable of as part of its ritual, in order to fulfill its “compatibility summon” function. And that same function had been responsible in the first place for establishing the contract between the Servant and the person she was now seeking . . .

    Whoever or WHATEVER he happened to be, now.

    Of course, “simple” did not mean “easy,” by any means, and Ilya lacked the framework and support mechanisms an active Holy Grail War would provide. There was no decades-long storehouse of magical energy, no summoning circle, no seeking Master to provide an anchor—nothing that would give her “legitimate” access to the Throne, for a given value of the word. And if it was so easily penetrated, the summoning of a Heroic Spirit as a Servant would not be the pinnacle of magecraft that it was held as.

    Moreover, Ilya herself was not actually capable of comprehending everything the Throne was or could show her—not without completely subsuming her identity within the framework of the Holy Grail, anyway. It was simply Something Man Was Not Meant to Know, as the saying went . . . And all of that was without even going into the fact that the Servant in question was from another universe entirely—and the majority of her records upon the Throne seemingly dealt with a third one altogether!

    But Ilya was a Grail spirit, if less than she should be (by both choice and desire—both Shirou’s and her own), and she rested within a realm in the shadow of the dreams of Faerie; very far removed from the “common sense” of the mortal world. If there was a better place to attempt what she had, even within the limitations she had to work under, she was hard-pressed to think of it—as proven, when it worked . . .

    Well, kind of, at least.

    And then that unexpected Servant sensed me . . .

    The Grail spirit shuddered. Being what she was, Ilya had seen enough to know some things, even if the omniscience of the Throne’s records had been denied her regarding its nature. That had been an Avenger-class Servant; and worse, one with a divided Saint Graph, somehow. But the shadow of what it could be, completed, had lingered around it . . .

    If it had been complete, I’d have had no chance in my present state, Ilya realised. Not with the amount of magical energy I have right now; fully-charged, I could’ve shut that Servant down—but like this . . .

    . . . And she obviously has something to do with “Mysterious Heroine XX,” at some point in her past, quite possibly something to do with her errant Master—and she sensed me.

    “Do you hear me?” Astraea demanded imperiously, her sharp tones breaking into Ilya’s thoughts as a perfect counterpoint to the thunderous look on the goddess-turned-Ruler’s face.

    “I demand an answer!” she snapped. “Just what is the matter with you . . .?”

    Ilya opened her mouth—

    And abruptly realised what she’d actually witnessed in the scene she’d been shown, over and above the monster waiting there.

    “. . . You mentioned the possibility of Nero’s fractured Saint Graph causing damage in other timelines?” Ilya asked grimly. “I think that exactly that is in motion right now . . .”















    Just beyond the pier, Nikki Beach
    Venus Islands, South Pacific

















    As a sudden cry rang out, Misaki started, letting out one of her own. Feeling legs start to fall out from under her, she desperately latched onto the table she’d been polishing, trying to regain her balance.

    Once she’d steadied herself, the resort worker stood up, and began looking for the source of the yell. No one was in sight . . .

    That sounded like a man’s voice—but it wasn’t the crazy sunglasses guy, and I didn’t think there was any other man on the island . . .

    (“Crazy sunglasses guy” might be a disrespectful way to refer to one’s ultimate boss, especially for a high-school student turned part-time resort worker, but Misaki couldn’t help it—it was totally accurate!)

    Hearing no follow-up to the sound, and ultimately just putting the whole episode down to hearing things due to nerves on her part, Misaki resumed wiping down the table in front of her, humming a tune to try and calm herself. Her nervousness, at least in her mind, was understandable: today was the day that her new boss—another man, according to the crazy sunglasses guy—was supposed to arrive, and who knew what he’d be like . . .?

    Deep down, she knew that part of her anxiety was just the fact that she was . . . Well, Misaki was shy (she wore a hooded parka over her swimsuit for a reason, after all), particularly around men. But it wasn’t as though men like that crazy sunglasses guy were easy for anyone to deal with, either!

    And since he’s the one picking the new Owner, what kind of lunatic am I going to end up working for . . .?

    She really hoped he wouldn’t be as hard to deal with as the current boss. Misaki liked being here, and wanted to make sure the Venus Festival was a success; it would be a major first step into turning this place into the ultimate resort—!

    An errant swipe of her cleaning cloth sent the clipboard on the table flying to the sand below.

    “Oh, gosh . . .” Misaki chided herself, going around the table to bend over and pick it up, putting it closer to her so it wouldn’t get struck again. She briefly resumed polishing, then stopped and straightened up.

    “He’s late . . .” she muttered to herself, glancing around in hopes of spotting someone else—anyone else—approaching the beach, but seeing no one. “The Festival is about to begin . . .”

    Misaki turned away from the pier in disappointment—

    And a large human form loomed in the corner of her vision.

    She startled violently, letting out a shriek which combined surprise with no small amount of panic—and the latter of which greatly increased as her momentum, unbalanced by her sudden change of direction, unbalanced her again, sending Misaki toppling backwards—

    To land directly on a pair of very sturdy, suddenly-there arms, rather than the expected sand.

    Fast! Misaki thought, knowing that the interloper had been at least three paces away from her when she fell. She wasn’t quite able to make out details of her rescuer, owing to the sun being above and behind him—but it was definitely a “him,” going by the sheer size of the arms braced across her back, and the muscles she could feel there.

    Easy,” came a deep voice, in oddly accented Japanese. “I’ve got you—it’s all right. Do you think you can stand?”

    Her legs did feel a little rubbery, right now, but . . .

    “. . . Um,” Misaki tried experimentally, before taking a breath and trying again. “Ah, yes . . .?

    Carefully, she tilted her hips forward to straighten herself up, noting the arms slowly following the arc of her body—and pulling away after a breath once she’d reached full verticality. Once she had, the stranger lifted himself up from a kneeling position.

    And up—and up . . .

    Now that she had a better view of him (even if she had to crane her neck), Misaki boggled at it. If he wasn’t a full thirty centimetres taller than she was, he didn’t miss the mark by much; and he seemed broad enough to make two of her! He was even bigger than the crazy sunglasses guy, though his skin was as pale as the other’s was dark. Likewise, the newcomer’s eyes were as blue as the ocean beside them, in contrast to the black sunglasses she was used to seeing on the only foreigner she’d ever really dealt with until now—though they certainly shared a muscular build in common . . .

    (Misaki fought down a blush at the sudden tingling along her back at the thought.)

    But while the stranger definitely had the blue eyes and pale skin stereotypically associated with foreigners, his hair was only a somewhat darker shade of brown than hers, making it seem both familiar and odd at the same time.

    “W – who are you?”

    The question slipped out before Misaki realised it—and the obvious answer occurred to her just as quickly. “Are you . . . The—” She hesitated over possible titles, before finally settling on “Owner?”

    “I have no idea how or why, but if that’s the proper title, then I guess so,” he said in an exasperated-sounding tone.

    Once again, the depth of his voice surprised her; it sounded like it was coming from the bottom of a well. Then again, with a chest that size . . . Misaki fiercely fought down another urge to blush, as well as a squeak of embarrassment. She’d already caused more than enough a scene—and in front of her new boss, at that!

    (And regrettably, despite her fervent prayers, the island’s God did not cause the earth beneath her to suddenly swallow her whole and end her mortification.)

    Apparently unaware of her thoughts (thank heavens!), the Owner asked, “More to the point, are you alright?” He leaned in as he spoke, tilting his head to inspect her closely as he added, “I’m terribly sorry—I didn’t mean to startle you like that . . .”

    Nonplussed by his audible sincerity (and closer proximity), Misaki found herself babbling, “Ah, um . . . Well . . .”

    The last word to slip out of her mouth suddenly reminded her of what she should be doing, and she bowed, hoping it didn’t look as awkward as she felt.

    “W – welcome to the Venus Islands . . .” she said—hesitantly, at first, but gaining steadiness as she fell into the professional speech she’d been taught. “I am your personal assistant, Misaki—pleased to meet you!” Realising she’d slipped a bit at the end, she hastily added, “Owner!”

    Prepared speech over and delivered, she let out an uncontrollable sigh, suddenly exhausted—but no less nervous over the situation.

    Please, please don’t fire me . . .


















    Frid found himself repressing a chuckle at Misaki, lest he upset her further by making her think he was making fun of her; but he couldn’t help it. In person, the girl was adorable—with delicate Japanese features, she was roughly the size of Arturia, but visibly lacking the Servant’s muscle tone, with a personality akin to Fiore’s.

    (The thought of the Yggdmillennia magus sent a sudden pang through him, which he ruthlessly suppressed—now was not the time to dwell on the magnitude of that particular fiasco . . .)

    Regardless, Misaki had a waifish charm to her that made him want to pat her head and tell her everything was going to be fine (again, like Fiore)—but that was hardly the sort of thing allowable between strangers, much less employer and employee, and especially in Japan. Instead, he let her lead him through the specifics of her job here (essentially, helping him do his), and her assurance that she’d been here “a while,” and was therefore knowledgeable about anything he needed to know during his working hours here.

    (And unlike the guy in the suit, her voice came through in clear Japanese; there were no additional overtones. Did that mean this wasn’t a fictional universe, after all? Or was her character from an undubbed bit of media; or just not voiced by anyone he’d find familiar—or did it mean something else altogether? He never had been totally clear on how or why that whole aspect of his perceptions worked the way it did. . .)

    She was also startled, though not surprised, to find that Frid had no idea what, exactly, he was expected to be doing—going so far as to cross her arms and groan when he nodded after she demanded that he confirm that.

    “Man,” Misaki griped, “the boss never gets it right, walking around all day with those sunglasses on . . .”

    (Frid idly wondered if there was a Japanese cultural prejudice against sunglasses that he was unaware of; Zombie Land Saga’s Kotaro was generally referred to in the same tone by his staff, after all.)

    She placed her hands on her hips, drawing him out of his thoughts. “I’ll just have to show you the ropes.

    “We’re about to have a huge event called the ‘Venus Festival’ here in the Venus Islands!” Misaki explained. “And your job as the boss is to make all the girls in this festival shine like Venus!” She clenched her fists in obvious excitement as she added “Then amass unimaginable wealth to turn this boring island into the ultimate resort!”

    Now Frid did chuckle, causing Misaki to stop short in obvious realisation of how she sounded.

    “Or at least,” she concluded, somewhat lamely, “that’s it in a nutshell, I guess. I’ll fill you in on the rest later.

    “First off,” Misaki said firmly, “you’ll have to choose one of the girls playing in the Festival to be your partner—”

    ‘Partner’ in what sense?” Frid interrupted. “And I thought I was supposed to be looking after all the participants—if I’m hosting the festival, isn’t that unfairly biasing things?”

    She had phrased it as “playing in,” which implied some form of competition, after all—or at least a production of some kind—and the ambiguity of it all, on top of this sudden need for a “partner,” set alarm bells were ringing at the back of Frid’s mind.

    Please, please tell me that this isn’t another Holy Grail War, somehow . . .

    “No, no,” Misaki assured him. “You will be interacting with all the girls over the course of the Venus Festival, of course. But issuing an ‘Owner Invitation’ is like selecting a ‘special VIP guest,’ to test the resort’s top-class staff and services on. We need to be able to deal with those kinds of high-level clients too, after all.”

    Frid let out a breath he hadn’t realised he was holding. That was much less concerning than he’d thought, so he just nodded in acknowledgement.

    She handed him a clipboard. “Here. This is a list of girls invited to the island. You need to partner with a ‘Venus’ to get things started.” She giggled. “It should be easy for you—picking up girls is obviously your specialty.”

    He smiled at the joke, pleased she was obviously feeling better—though her cheeks were very visibly pink.

    “Now that you’re here, we’ll start the ultimate event of beauty and strength, the Venus Festival!” she said enthusiastically. “Let’s do our best, OK?”

    “Will do,” he said, turning to the list—

    And sucking in a breath, because the top page was of a twin-tailed blonde who, at first glance, could’ve passed for Death Note’s Misa Amane . . .

    . . . Well, a really good cosplayer, Frid supposed, since she was very obviously not Japanese—but having a given name starting with “M” had taken him aback for a second.

    “Marie Rose,” he read silently. “Age: 18 years old, Height: 147 cm, Measurement”—

    This tells me basically
    nothing! In what universe is THIS considered sufficient information? I’ve seen more comprehensive statistics in fucking PLAYBOY!

    (He hadn’t, actually, having never actually read the magazine—or seen more than a cover—but he knew what it was, and it was the most ridiculous comparison he could come up with on the spot.)

    Flipping the page proved no better, as “Honoka” had no more information given on her than had Marie Rose; he learned only that she was the same age, but obviously Japanese to Marie Rose’s Caucasian, as well as taller, with vastly different measurements—and by her accompanying headshot, was what TVTropes called a “Rose-Haired Sweetie.”

    . . . No wonder Misaki is frustrated by “the boss,” if this is how he ran things.

    Frid sighed at the sheer inanity of the task before him.

    I thought I was going to be getting a Grail Works-level crisis to deal with, with lives on the line—not a “resort simulator” mission. Although I suppose it is challenging, if this is the amount of information that I’ll have to work with—and the tangible presence of magic is just bizarre . . .

    He flipped the page—

    And dropped the clipboard as if it was suddenly red-hot, on seeing the face abruptly staring back at him.

    Kasumi . . .?!










    Writer's Notes: Apologies for the delay - real life has been distracting, this week . . .
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    You have a bit of messed-up formatting at the very first bit of your disclaimer text.

    Interesting to see an external perspective on what Space Ishtar is. You kind of take her for granted in Saber Wars, with some of the other multi-form servants in Grand Order around that time, but from the point of view of a less-insane setting, she's pretty terrifying.

    Notable that Godafrid has presumably kept his physique. That's at least something of an advantage, even if he doesn't have the ability to enhance himself further. And presumably the pin has dropped on exactly what setting he's in.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    You have a bit of messed-up formatting at the very first bit of your disclaimer text.
    Now why did that - ah, I see where I went wrong; fixed, thank you.


    Interesting to see an external perspective on what Space Ishtar is. You kind of take her for granted in Saber Wars, with some of the other multi-form servants in Grand Order around that time, but from the point of view of a less-insane setting, she's pretty terrifying.
    Her composite form is, as I understand it, basically known as the primordial goddess of the "Azure Galaxy's" original universe. Not a planet, a UNIVERSE . . . That's a scale that nothing in TYPE-MOON has ever even really tried to touch before. You have to assume she's literally on another level; her Noble Phantasm supports this, since it's noted as being "Anti-STAR" - and last I checked, the Sun, as an example, is 109 times larger than Earth . . .

    You have to figure that, if anyone in that setting could sense the Grail (even without a listed Clairvoyance Skill), it'd be Space Ishtar; of course, as she is divided, she's not conscious of what she's sensing - but she can tell there's something, on a cosmic level.And the same, of course, would apply to her other half, as well.


    Notable that Godafrid has presumably kept his physique. That's at least something of an advantage, even if he doesn't have the ability to enhance himself further.
    Astraea is a fair goddess, after all - and the setting itself doesn't exactly lack for options . . . Of course, there's still the question of what, exactly, the setting is. The temptation to make Akiha aware of Helena Douglas (or maybe Ryu Hayabusa, since it's implied that the "Dragon Ninja" is both demon hunter and demon hybrid), for example, or Rin a sometime opponent of Kokoro's in bajiquan matches, is strong . . .


    And presumably the pin has dropped on exactly what setting he's in.
    Oh, yeah - there's no way it couldn't. Kasumi and Ayane were my go-to girls when it came to playing against my friends; Ayane more than her sister, because she was more button-mashing-friendly, so I could actually win as often as I lost (as long as I didn't accidentally expose her back, anyway).

    Of course, Frid's certain knowledge of DOA ends at 3, with a few tidbits regarding 4, so he's a bit behind the times . . .
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    From the Files of Grail Works, Limited—Video Games: Dead or Alive

    As always, I’m aware that it’s more than a little presumptuous to lecture you guys on a Japanese franchise—and as always, I note that KOHAKU is the only one of you that actually plays video games, and I doubt that a fighting game semi-infamous for its “jiggle physics” is among her tastes. I suppose you could always try Ayako Mitsuzuri, but unless Rin’s either gotten a lot better at hypnotism than I’ve heard, or you trust Arcueid not to accidentally SANDBLAST the poor girl’s mind . . .

    (Note to self: ASK about whatever the hell happened to Ciel—she’s got the skill set for that kind of thing.)

    Anyways, so far as I know, the first Dead or Alive game premiered in arcades in 1996, with a console adaptation in 1997—but my first exposure to it was with Dead or Alive 2: Hardcore on the PlayStation 2, in 2001. I’m aware of about five games; maybe something like seven or eight if we count “remastered compilations” like Dead or Alive Dimensions or the beach volleyball spinoff, Dead or Alive Xtreme.

    (Yes, it existed—and YES, I played it. The controls were awkward as hell, the casino gameplay NEVER made sense, and my friend group collectively gave up after about two hours. The girls, pretty as they were in their swimsuits, were not worth the aggravation.)

    In any case, Dead or Alive (at least at first) revolves around the eponymous fighting tournament, sponsored by megacorporation DOATEC—which, as it turns out, is short for “Dead or Alive Tournament Executive Committee.” It’s an ODD name for an arms-dealing company, but I suspect this is their attempt at a rebrand using competition fighting and possibly other extreme sports as a source of more legitimate income. I expect that Ilyasviel or Akiha would be able to make more sense of it than I would, given their family histories . . .

    Moving on now.

    One of the competitors is a red-haired, copper-eyed girl named Kasumi—runaway heiress of the “Mugen Tenshin” ninja clan, given the in-game epithet of the “Kunoichi of Destiny.” She’s entered the tournament to face Raidou, her uncle: a renegade of her clan who crippled the PRIOR Mugen Tenshin heir, her elder brother Hayate—and not incidentally, was responsible for the conception-by-rape of her half-sister Ayane almost seventeen years earlier.

    Other competitors in the tournament, so far as I know (again, I came in for the SEQUEL) include the following:


    Gen Fu, a retired martial artist who’s hoping to pay for an expensive medical procedure his granddaughter needs with the winnings. I can’t recall his fighting style off-hand, but it kind of looked Chinese, I think. (And seriously, could we look into helping the kid if we run across them . . .?)


    Ryu Hayabusa, the protagonist of the Ninja Gaiden game series (see separate file for details), and someone who regards Hayate as not just his friend, but his equal in skill—which makes Raidou’s casual effort (to the extent that it was ANY effort at all) to put Hayate into a coma into perspective.


    Zack, a black DJ (and capoeira fighter, if I remember right). He’s loud, annoying, obsessed with the ladies (particularly Tina, to her father’s displeasure), and the guy behind the “volleyball spinoff” game.


    Bayman, a big Russian mercenary. Apparently, the guy who killed Fame Douglas, the head of DOATEC, at the behest of Douglas’ partner, Victor Donovan (more on that below).



    The rest of the game’s fighters are paired as sort of opposites to one another. There’s Leifang, a Chinese university student who’s entering the tournament to kick the crap out of Jann Lee, the series’ obligatory Bruce Lee clone. Why, you ask? Because she wants to prove that he didn’t have to intervene in an attempted mugging a couple of years back, she could’ve handled it herself.

    (Given that this is still her motivation in DOA2, however, I presume she either didn’t wind up facing him, or their fight did not go well for her).

    There’s also Bass and Tina Armstrong; big, blond, blue-eyed Americans, and a father-and-daughter wrestling team—or formerly, at least. She wants to prove that she’s a “real” fighter—and later, to make it in Hollywood—given American wrestling’s reputation; he wants her back in the ring with him—and nowhere NEAR Zack, in later games.

    (Can’t say as I blame him, really . . .)

    The last competitors are meant to rival Kasumi. There’s Raidou, of course, who is not only much more experienced, but has the ability to learn (or copy) any martial arts technique he sees. It’s why he attacked Hayate, to obtain the “Torn Sky Blast” (read: ki lightning blast) that’s the Mugen Tenshin’s secret succession technique.

    (Now, whether Raidou’s ability is magic, some innate skill, or who-knows-what, is never made clear. Given that DOATEC, under Victor Donovan’s leadership, is interested in creating the ultimate fighter/weapon, it MIGHT be something that they did to him, because Ayane doesn’t have it. But if they did, they never managed to replicate the feat—and believe me, they would have tried.)

    Before facing Raidou, however, she has to face Ayane—a slightly bustier, possibly albino kunoichi (she has purple hair and red eyes, which fits the “Rei Ayanami” aesthetic Japan was using for albinos at the time), whose orders are to kill Kasumi at all costs; and at this point in time, at least, she has every intention of fulfilling them . . .

    Sakura and Ilya will sympathise here, I’m sure: Kasumi and Ayane, to the best of my knowledge, were childhood friends—and UNAWARE that they were half-sisters. However, Ayane was treated as a “poison child” because of the circumstances of her birth, and Kasumi was the clan’s princess, discouraged from associating with her. She was eventually adopted into the clan’s “Hajin Mon” sect (the behind-the-scenes supporters to the “Tenjin Mon” sect Kasumi and Hayate belonged to) by its leader, where she excelled as a means of proving her worth.

    But only Kasumi, Hayate (who WAS aware of their relation, being seven when Kasumi was born, a year before Ayane) and her adoptive father ever showed her any kindness, regardless of her admittedly-prodigal skills—she was only 16 at the time of the first tournament, but capable of holding her own against fighters more than twice her age, experience, and MUSCLE MASS. This lack of loving care would become a MAJOR factor in her story arc in DOA 3—but when her mother finally revealed herself to Ayane, the younger kunoichi resented that she had to be blamed for her father’s sins, while her sister was treated so kindly. Meanwhile. Kasumi (who, to the best of my knowledge, may not actually have known that she and Ayane were related at this point), was merely baffled and hurt that her closest friend pursued her so maliciously. Especially when she, of all people, should understand Kasumi’s desire for revenge, because Ayane loved Hayate, too . . .

    Regardless, Kasumi won the tournament, and killed Raidou; at some point between the first and second games, however, she was captured by DOATEC, and cloned as part of their “Alpha series” of experiments to create the ultimate warrior . . .

    DOA 2 is kind of light on story; the cutscenes don’t make much sense, taken by themselves. At some point, an honest-to-God tengu is unleashed as the final boss, and there’s no build-up or explanation as to WHY—which is AT LEAST as frustrating as fighting the bastard (and BELIEVE ME, it’s FRUSTRATING!). Regardless, DOA 2 (or at least, the version I owned) gave cutscenes that explained Kasumi and Ayane’s history, and depicted Raidou’s attacks on their village, including Hayate’s near-fatal “fight” (really, Raidou barely looked like he was trying). And that alone is worth the price of admission, to me . . .

    DOA 2 also introduces the following fighters:


    Helena Douglas – Blonde, French opera singer, heiress to DOATEC, and intent on finding her mother’s killer, but not her father’s; Ayane doesn’t deny having done it when questioned, but it’s not until DOA 3 that the actual killer is revealed.

    • Ein – At some point, DOATEC manages to get their hands on Hayate, and revive him as part of “Project: Epsilon” (in counterpoint to the “Project: Alpha” which involves Kasumi). What exactly this is meant to accomplish or prove, I have NO idea—but when he somehow escapes, it leaves him amnesiac, under the identity of “Ein.” His fighting style as Ein involves more karate than ninjutsu—the reason for which, along with the significance of his name, will be revealed in DOA 3.



    • Kasumi Alpha – Kasumi’s clone, who dresses in the traditional ninja outfit (albeit in red) and laughs like a LUNATIC—if she has any further characterisation, it doesn’t show up in cutscenes.


    • Leon – I know nothing about him, and frequently confuse him with Bayman. Sorry.


    • Tengu – Final boss. Actual tengu. Prone to shouting “EVERYTHNG! IS! MY! DELUSION!” Also a bitch to fight, so if you can help it, DON’T!



    Ryu Hayabusa is credited with winning this one, so onto DOA 3—where Ayane’s adoptive father has been kidnapped by DOATEC and transformed into Project: Omega, introduced along with the following . . .


    • Brad Wong – Drunk-style fighter. Don’t ask me any more about him—I don’t know, and never cared to know.


    • Christie – British assassin for hire, and the actual killer of Helena’s mother. Do NOT trust her as far as you can throw her.


    • Hitomi – Half-Japanese, half-German karate enthusiast; her family owns a dojo. Has a crush on “Ein,” since her family found and re-trained him, as well as excellent taste in desserts.



    Ayane kills “Omega,” which leads her to start softening towards Kasumi, presumably since only she and Hayate are left in terms of people who actually care whether Ayane lives or dies . . .

    Dead or Alive 4 had the Mugen Tenshin clan going to war against DOATEC (finally!) for their attacks against them, and has Kasumi Alpha being evolved or transformed into Alpha-152, a being made of pure energy (or possibly made of living water)—which is BIZARRE, considered that there’s no basis in genetics for ANY of this . . .

    Sadly, I never played it, because I had health issues that had me have to give up video games, so I only know that it introduced Alpha-152, and four other characters:

    • Eliot – Blond kid who is Gen Fu’s apprentice.


    • Kokoro – Violet-eyed Japanese girl trained as a geisha; also Helena’s heretofore-unknown half-sister.


    • La Mariposa (AKA Lisa) – A dark-skinned wrestler who was imported from DOA Xtreme Beach Volleyball.



    • SPARTAN Nicole-458 – A crossover character from HALO (see separate file for details), because DOA was exclusive to the Microsoft Xbox at this time. Neat concept, but never seen since.



    As of this point, Kasumi is still under a death sentence, DESPITE Hayate having recovered and presumably having taken control of his clan—certainly, you would at least assume he could argue on her behalf . . .

    After this, though, I have no idea what really happens, plot-wise—I saw pictures of a blonde girl in “loligoth” clothes on one art site, but I have no clue what her deal is—or if there are more added characters . . . I DO know that crossovers have occurred; Ayane appears in the Xbox Ninja Gaiden games, at least—and as a DLC character in the last Fatal Frame game, as well. Also a movie adaptation (see separate entry for details, because it IS different).

    In short, be careful if you wind up dealing with this setting, just in case, but nothing here should REALLY cause problems, so far as I know of . . .


    (Addendum, six months later: I just had to TEMPT FATE, didn't I . . .?)










    Writerès Notes: Apologies - between March Break at work, and other issues, my energy and concentration have been kind of shot, the last couple of weeks. Have this as a tide-over.
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    Does help a bit with the "how familiar is everyone" question. It's kind of useful to get "your" perspective on how clear the plot of various games was; it's usually kind of a background consideration for fighting games, so "light on story" isn't that surprising.
    Fighting games do seem like the sort of games that are rough for RSIs.

    The amount of time Kurai had to have been writing files to capture all this miscellaneous detail for different settings, spinoffs, etc must have been immense.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arbitrarity View Post
    Does help a bit with the "how familiar is everyone" question.
    I was hoping that doing it this way might be entertaining for you.


    It's kind of useful to get "your" perspective on how clear the plot of various games was; it's usually kind of a background consideration for fighting games, so "light on story" isn't that surprising.
    It's worse than you probably think - DOA 2: Hardcore really was just a bunch of random cutscenes, and Wikipedia didn't really exist at the time - not to the degree it does now, anyway - so it was years before I got enough information to understand what on earth was going on . . .


    Fighting games do seem like the sort of games that are rough for RSIs.
    "RSI" . . .?


    The amount of time Kurai had to have been writing files to capture all this miscellaneous detail for different settings, spinoffs, etc must have been immense.
    Oh, absolutely - fortunately, he had access to both lycanthropic endurance and healing magic at the time.
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