Don Quixote and Sancho- these two were great! Sancho prioritizing him over all else and Don being turn between his very human fear and his desire to still save the people around him really hit my heart strings and now I'm really excited to get them while I roll for Mori Mori. I don't think I have any criticism on their handlings
Constantine and Johanna- I already touched upon this in an earlier comment but now that I'm done I can say definitively- Johanna is a great character with an interesting struggle with her sense of identity but after her very nice talk with Charlie it was pretty de emphasized by the plot (despite the convo implying that Guda was going to try and do something to alleviate her bitterness but then they just did nothing) and while some of their banter is charming I actually just think that the way her and Constantine's romance was handled kind of just makes both characters worse. When she had to have Bradamante explain that the two were in love to her I was just kind of "?????????" And while Constantine redirecting his hard coded ruthlessness into a more noble cause wasn't necessarily a bad choice I just considering IRL Constantine did the some ruthless shit the game avoids mentioning it kind of ends up making him feel more like a prop for Johanna's more interesting character arc
Kriemhild and Siegfried- Truly, love is war. These two were fun! Kriemhild in peak murder everything widow rage was neat, while the core of her issue was the anger that her love was one sided despite all she sacrificed for the sake of it even then her grievances with her husband are very justified and Siegfried's way of bouncing off her and making her blush was cute especially in contrast to how Bryn and Sigurd are lovey dovey
Kadoc- We should uncomad him ages ago, I love this dude! He's snarky, sullen, and it's really fun to see him be a bit more relaxed now. The moment when Viy's spectre saved him and he had to hold back his tears and his insistence that Anastasia was the only servant for him, oh Kadoc what the man you are I could kiss you on the mouth (please let me kiss him on the mouth)
Charlemagne- I'm going to be honest, Charlie was kind of disappointing. His grand reveal saving Don was hype but he was so absent from the plot it felt like we never truly had time to bond with him. On that note, it felt like we never truly had time to bond with ANYONE, I don't think characters are beholden by their connection with Guda and I always rip the heroine of the chapter arc to shred but I don't know how to say it but the bonds of closeness between Guda and the other characters felt more....weak than usual? Not to mention he never even used his 3rd ascension and even his presence by the end just kind of felt....there. Like "please refer to fate/extella link to enjoy this character more!"
Sherlock- On that note I wish we had had more one on one moments with Sherlock than we got in this chapter considering this was his grand Goodbye even if it's telegraphed to be only temporary. I especially wish he had been the one who had a fun summer vacation event instead of Da Vinci Lily considering she's still well and kicking. I'm torn about his handling regarding young Moriarty because on one hand the story does basically make it seem that the reason he couldn't properly figure out how to handle him was because it would entail him releasing the mental block he had about his true identity but also young Moriarty is just so non threatening that him constantly going "what could this guy be planning???" was just kind of eh to me. I did cry when he fell over the river, wish the characters didn't turn it into a gag about self defense ten minutes later
Young Moriarty- He sat on a chair, monologued, won lost then died. He kind of utterly fails as a serious threat because he doesn't even really do anything, but it does make him ten over ten comic relief because Jesus Christ nobody likes this dude. I can't remember if Mash is nice to old Moriarty but I'm fairly certain she's at least nicer than she was to this one. He doesn't even get the grace of Guda being his friend even if he got a pity "open sesame" at the end. Fighting his boss at the end was kind of funny because I went in with a team that I was fully expecting to lose with only for Arjuna Alter to buster face card him to death lol.
The "I liked you a lots honestly"- Salome, Roland, Astolfo, Zhang Jue, Tametomo and Xu Fu. Salome's mini arc was nice, Roland and Astolfo are just good fun (God, enjoyable Astolfo writing, it's been so long), Zhang Jue was actually more neat as a threatening antagonist than I thought, Tametomo regaining his autonomy via the power of raw spite made me laugh my ass off and Xu Fu just being an absolutely fucking shit truly a queen I Stan I can't wait to get her later. Also a shout out to all the nameless servants thank you for all your services you wonderful bastards!!
The "You were okay I guess"- Bradamante and Sabermuid were both mostly just there for me, the former more than the latter but they fulfilled their roles at least and had some gags I actually liked so I don't mind them
The "literally what purpose did you have besides being goddamn plot devices"- Why did Kiyohime exist in this chapter? Why did Sugitani exist in this chapter? The former was such a pointless addition and her shallowness really gets highlighted when contrasted with her fellow Berserker Salome and the latter just does nothing then suddenly Deus ex machina's us a win with a betrayal where the closest thing we got to foreshadowing is that they didn't target us in the forest, only Salome. Such weird writing choices.