No one has done a Xingtian yet, right? Given that the Hessian is an Avenger, I would imagine that Xingtian would be, as well, if not more valid as before GO, I would have assumed that the Hessian would be a Rider.
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Hessian Lobo was a Rider
Then their Saint Graph changed to an Avenger
Not sure if it's stated how
Lobo was a Rider in Shinjuku 'cause why not. Same reason Jalter was Lancer.
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Name Ferdinand Schörner
Alias: Blutiger Ferdinand (Bloody Ferdinand)
Class; Berserker, Archer
Armament: Mauser C96, MP40 submachine gun
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Attribute: Human
Traits: Human, Nazi
Stats:
Strength: B
Agility: B
Endurance: D
Mana: D
Luck: B+
Noble Phantasm: A
Likes: The Third Reich, Mein Führer
Dislikes: Cowardice, desertion
Talents: Hypocrisy, Promoting fear in her army
Natural Enemy: Her own army
Wish: To restore her country's glory
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Lore
Personality
<I>Got remotivated by the Schindler sheet, decided to go balls to the wall and make a genderbent, Hitler idolizing, Nazi psychopath for the sole purpose of saying "Why not?"
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Last edited by Saron; October 12th, 2017 at 12:40 AM.
Minor thing, but from the personality and lore she sounds more like some kind of Lawful Evil instead of chaotic imo. I find it hard to see her as a chaotic individual when she's pretty consistently devoted to the Nazi's cause, or more precisely Hitler's cause.
Well tbh she's fine, if a bit one dimensional (?)
You put a disclaimer that you didn't meant to offend anyone, but there's barely anything to be offended at. I actually kinda wish you went a bit more over the top with her personality and backstory maybe since your intention seemed to be creating this dark/edgy (in the good sense) servant but outside of her really fun and cool noble phantasm, she feels a bit underwhelming compared to the images you have chosen.
On the 'technical' side of the sheet, it would be cool if she had some personal boost skill related to being summoned in germany, or one about her inheritance of Hitler's 'power'. Nazi's are very much recent, but there's so much rumors and mystery surrounding their entire history that it opens precedents for more powerful stuff I think. Yeah, that's pretty much it.
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Actually all Nazi servants should probably get some kind of fame-based boost skill when either in germany or in western countries like the USA where they're still this huge taboo.
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Argh! This void of creativity i am right now is awful
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So many unfinished projects...
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True Name: Fritz Haber
Class: Caster
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Attribute: Star
Place of Origin: Germany
STR: E
END: E
AGI: D
MAG: C
LCK: D
NP: A
Class Skills:
Item Construction: C
Haber's capabilities are entirely limited to chemical compounds and mixtures, mostly gases.
Territory Creation: C+
By himself, Caster is capable of establishing a chemistry laboratory. With the proper support and resources, however, it is possible to build a chemical factory for him to work on.
Personal Skills:
Aptitude for Slaughter (Chemicals): A++
Greatly increases the damage dealt to humans through chemical compounds. As the "father of chemical warfare", Caster naturally possesses the highest rank possible in this skill.
Pioneer of the Stars: EX
A skill awarded to Caster for his greatest achievement in life, the Haber-Bosch process. His discovery allowed for a huge increase in the production of fertilizers, which increased crop yields, which enabled mankind to grow explosively in the last 100 years. It is no exaggeration to say that the majority of humans living nowadays owe their existence to Fritz Haber.
Noble Phantasms
- Anti-Army, Rank AAzoteThe Skies fill the Earth with Life
The crystallization of Haber's greatest achievement - the synthesis of ammonia from atmospheric air. Though originally intended for the production of explosives, the discovery had its greatest impact on agriculture, by enabling the mass prodution of nitrogen fertilizers. If it can be said that Tesla usurped lightning from the sky gods, then Haber essentially took away the power fertility deities held over mankind - we could make the land yield as much as we wanted now.
Caster has absolute control over the growth of plants in his vicinity - how much they grow, how fast, how strong, which parts, in which direction, etc. Grass can become long and resistent enough to entangle Servants; saplings can become stakes that impale anyone above them; tree trunks can swell and explode, showering those nearby with high-speed wooden shrapnel... Though the damage from such attack will hardly ever be above that of Rank C Attack, this ability consomes very little mana, and its versatility more than makes up for its lack of power.
- Anti-Army, Rank C++KhlorosBreath of the Pale Horse
A True Name release-type Noble Phantasm. Though chlorine is one of the most famous poisonous gases used during World War I, Khloros is much more than just a chemical compound - it is the very concept of a "weaponized poisonous gas", and all the fears held towards such an idea. A gigantic, sickly green cloud of heavier-than-air gas that poisons all living things that breathe it, dealing damage to all parts of the body from the inside. The majority of humans will likely get immediately incapacitated and die an agonizing death, while Servants are required a successful END save every turn they remain within the cloud - failure results in poisoning and reduction of all physical parameters. While it is possible to avoid the effects by holding your breath or wearing a gas mask, even just remaining in contact with it can eventually lead to damage.
While he can choose where it manifests, Caster has no control over the cloud's movements - it simply starts to spread omnidirectionally, or guided by the wind if it is present. However, it cannot be "dissipated" - as long as it is being supplied with prana, the cloud remains in this world.
Lore & Personality
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Fritz: I really love this sheet. Nice contrasting NPs, simple yet appropriate Skills and well fleshed out personality. A little surprised he doesn't have the Natural Born Genius Skill at some rank though (probably B or C).
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Since they both have a "do whatever it takes to win" mentality and fought on opposite sides in history, I'm a tad curious how this guy could get along with my Arthur Harris Servant.
You'd find out which type has advantage over the other, Poison or Fire.
Somewhat ironically since I run the Servant contest, I haven’t really made all that many sheets. None in a while, either.
Mainly I just get stuck between my desire to do appropriate amounts of research and present a given person accurately and fairly with the inherent over-the-top larger-than-lifeness of Servants. One of them gets in the way of the other and any initial idea I might’ve had goes wayside.
Plus, a good bit of time I spent on this stuff is now spent on DND. I finally got a good group together and can meet more regularly, but that obviously takes up some time in preparation and such.
You just remind me of my old days of dungeon master in DnD.
all my friends from that time hate me know.
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
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