It's kinda funny that your Caster has C-rank in Strength after you told Wizard about Caster's base parameters, although seeing he has qualifications as a Saber, it can be valid (then again, Cú Chulainn has E-rank in Strength as a Caster). Can't really say if the Mystery-altering music is wanked or not, as I don't really know about this guy, but seeing how he has a harp-like instrument, why not giving him Harp of Healing?
I have to correct you on the subject of parameters, since what I said (or meant to say) was that the parameters can't differ from the container without justification. Väinämöinen is a warrior as well as a mage, and even in his mage-y legends has certain physical feats attributed to him. Granted, that STR is kinda on the edge of C and D as far as I'm concerned.Originally Posted by King of Padoru
The Mystery-altering music is mostly conjecture and stems from connections. There's also the fact that Kalevala has been ballparked as occurring after the Age of the Gods, but tons of magical stuff happen anyway and there's some minor Divine Spirits running around. All of that goes away with Väinämöinen's departure, implying that there might've been a connection with the retained Mystery. Still a bit wanked, but at least sorta justified.
I did consider Harp of Healing, but figured that adding it would bloat the sheet unnecessarily and wouldn't be fitting, considering the Servants who do have Harp of Healing as well as what they did to earn that Skill in their legends.
Heres is my Genoskwa 2.0 profile i hope it has really become better.please everyone look inpartial/candid at it.
The fear of the Iroquois and Seneca
Genoskwa
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(Berserker/Assassin)
Other names: ot ne yar hed(Stonegiant)
Height: 275 cm
Weight: 195kg
Alignment: ??
Attribute: Earth,Elemental
Origin: Indigen Myths of the Iroquis
Likes: ???
Dislikes: ???
Catalyst: a from Iroquis shaman blessed earth or a mud piece that touched the Genoskwa skin
Parameters
Background
Behavior
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Relationships:
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Genoskwa: What is going on with the last sentence of his Stone-Coat NP? Something censored out?
I see, I misunderstood you then.
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Queen Elizabeth I
Class: Archer
Other Applicable Classes: Saber, Caster, Leader
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Sex: Male
Height: 165 cm
Weight: 54 kg
Armament: Custom-Fitted Armored Combat Dress (not-pictured)
STR: B
CON: B
AGI: D
MGI: C
LCK: C
Noble Phantasm: A+
Legend
When the young princess Elizabeth grew resentful of her life and of her father, she took a kitchen knife to her own face. The result was a large bloody scar that could not be hidden in time for her father’s return to the sleepy town where Elizabeth hid from the plague. There was no time to scour the country for a replacement, but one appeared as if by miracle. A young boy, a playmate of the young princess, bore an uncanny resemblance to her. The king’s visit came and went, with no issues whatsoever. However, as the ruse continued, the governess found the boy a much more palatable princess than the rebellious girl he had replaced. As such, an arrangement was made: Elizabeth would be granted her freedom if she gave up her name to the peasant boy who had been her shadow. She agreed, of course, and the two maintained contact even when he became Queen and she became a notorious captain.
Elizabeth became a mighty queen as he grew into his role. Under his rule, Britain reached new heights of power. The Anglican church flourished and strengthened its hold over the nature. With the help of his occulted left hand, John Dee, Elizabeth strengthened the magical and mundane defenses of his Empire. Under his 44 years of wise rule, the nation’s self image had been cemented despite the turmoil caused by King Henry VIII’s other children. After his death, his legacy blossomed as other kings and queens paled in comparison to him.
Tactics
Archer is not actually Elizabeth’s most suitable class; in fact, it might be the worst. Despite the potential for direct catastrophe made accessible by the class container, in the form of the Archer variant of Uriel Gloriana, his other Classes grant him greater benefits. The Saber class bestows the sacred relic Curtana, Caster draws directly upon the legend of his court sorcerer John Dee, and Leader improves his capacity to lead others to total victory by improving their base abilities. Regardless of class container, Elizabeth functions best as support for stronger allies. Rosethorn Basiliscus may be able to decimate enemy lines at incredible range, but his personal skills improve his ability to negotiate with others and thus improve upon their inherent strengths.
Despite how amicable and well-meaning Elizabeth can be, he is a ruthless queen at heart. He cherishes his allies and wishes the best for them, but his enemies must be taught to fear him and his own with every fiber of their being. Such behavior can be seen clearly in his historic treatment of England’s Catholics, as well as the other claimant to the throne: Mary, Queen of Scots. A master with a differing opinion on how to properly administer mercy may find their orders disobeyed before they can even properly react. A master with an appreciation for the works of Bram Stoker may find themselves shot.
Class Abilities
Independent Action: AAs someone who had to rule without allies for much of his tenure, Elizabeth has a high rank in this skill. He is able to stay in the world a week without any mana whatsoever. He is theoretically harder to control than a normal servant and he likes to make sure his master knows that.Magic Resistance: D
Weak magic resistance that lessens damage somewhat and cancels low rank spells. As John Dee’s assistance primarily manifests in the form of his Noble Phantasm, Rosethorn Basiliscus, his Magic Resistance does not take into account Dee’s usual aid.
Personal Skills
Looks of Loveliness (Queen): AA variant of Looks of Loveliness that endows its bearer with a beauty that leaves those who behold them with the impression of a faultless Queen. Bonuses are provided when negotiating with both men and women, and chivalrous figures are drawn to him.Charisma: B
The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. It is said that a rank of B in this skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its King… or perhaps as its Queen.Queen's Request: D
A unique personal skill that bestows Elizabeth with a variety of abilities designed to improve the performance of his allies. The effects of Incitement, Enchant, and Self-Field Defense are manifested at will. This skill would be of higher rank under other class containers.
Noble Phantasms
Rosethorn BasiliscusBreak Every Barrier, My Little Dragon
Rank: C+
Type: Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasm
Range: 100 km
Maximum Targets: Single Target
A custom made Basilisk cannon commissioned by a Dutch Nobleman and offered as a gift to Queen Elizabeth on his coronation day. The cannon, created with the best metalworking the Dutch could offer, far outperformed any and all cannons of that day and age. As though that were not enough, the weapon was further enchanted by Elizabeth’s court mage, John Dee. His magecraft allowed it to be a self reloading weapon that formed its cannonballs out of ambient mana. Elizabeth has lovingly nicknamed this weapon his “pocket pistol.”
Asa servant of the Archer class, Elizabeth can summon this cannon at his behest. He has chosen to do away with the carriage that carried the cannon in life and has instead decided to carry it with his own two hands. The Archer class container has bestowed him with a surprising amount of strength, enough so that he is able to resist the recoil of the weapon on top of its incredible weight. The cannon’s incredible range and raw damage output make it an excellent weapon for extreme distance artillery, but its slow reload speed make it ill-suited for the high speed combat typical of close-range servant encounters. Its legendary feat of shooting cannonballs across the English Channel seems to be almost conservative upon viewing first-hand the sheer firing range of the real thing. Since Elizabeth does not have the Clairvoyance skill, he is unable to make much use of this distance.
Uriel GlorianaThe LORD Shall Scatter the Enemies of the Rose
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Army Noble Phantasm
Range: 20~40
Maximum Targets: 20 Ships
A Noble Phantasm derived from the divine storms sent down from the heavens to decimate the Spanish Armada. As a result of being the “greatest mystery of the Elizabethan era,” it is a Noble Phantasm that stays with Elizabeth regardless of his class container, but also one that changes to better suit the class container. The Archer and Leader class containers best suit this Noble Phantasm, which is reflected by the A+ Noble Phantasm rank shown by those containers.
Under the Archer class container, this Noble Phantasm manifests as a large, hefty “cannonball” which looks like a sovereign’s orb containing a swirling hurricane. It can either be used by launching it into the heavens, where it will explode and immediately blot out the sun with storm clouds, or into the sea, where it will begin to churn the seas. This barely contained turmoil is released by invoking the true name of this Noble Phantasm. Doing so will either create a category 5 hurricane or a rank 10 tsunami, depending on the location into which it was fired. The storms and waters are bound to Elizabeth’s will, so he may spare his subjects or their property should he desire it. Despite the strength of the storms, they are extremely localized.
Author's Notes
Last edited by gyrowins; September 21st, 2019 at 12:56 PM. Reason: Clarified something in the tactics section
Elizabeth: Cool sheet, but is it just me or is the description for his Looks Of Loveliness (Queen) Skill copied verbatim from Crowley's Charisma Of An Evil Genius? I guess it could be intentional (if you have a very cynical view on monarchy) but in any case it struck me as a little odd.
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To explain: I still haven't actually made a proper template for this new sheet style, so I've basically just been copy pasting the previous entries and editing them like some kind of animal. This sort of thing will happen occasionally until I get around to making a template.
Nice sheet, Gyro. Funnily, the second NP reminds me of an astra. I can't wait to see Traplizabeth as a Leader
Good sheet. Though it does raise the question of what happened to Drake, as I recall that Queen Elizabeth is purported to have switched places with them. I always figured that the "Queen Elizabeth" would have been the original Francis Drake from then on.
I'm also curious as to how he would fight under normal circumstances, given the cannon's possible unwieldy nature and slow firing speed. Could he just use Queen's request to have someone else fight for him while she supports (or doesn't) from the back? The Skills granted by that seem to be tailor-made for that sort of thing.
Also, good research on the part of the Noble Phantasms.
I basically conflated the Bisley Boy and Francis Drake. I just didn't explicitly name Elizabeth "Francis Drake" in this sheet, but the intent was they were the same person. Typically, he does get other people to fight for him, but he is also capable of "quick-drawing" the cannon to fire it at a close range foe, but that's more of a one-trick pony since it takes a long time to reload.
Last edited by gyrowins; June 1st, 2018 at 08:44 AM.
I mean being fair, "Francis Drake might be Queen Elizabeth" was a literal throw away line in Extra, and so far nothing else has really given any focus to that, not even Drake's GO Mats info.
I just mostly take that as the justification for Drake's gender flip, hence my latching onto it.
Funny, I just noticed that Elizabeth's NPs are natural counters for my Philip Alter. History repeats itself..
Now you're making me imagine him firing the Uriel Gloriana cannonball straight into San Lorenzo de Escorial. I assume a huge battle's going on too, with demons fighting whatever allies Elizabeth could get a hold of.
Now that sounds pretty damn cool!
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Class: Archer
Other Classes: Ruler, Caster.
True Name: Pay Sumé
Alignment: True Neutral
Place of Origin: Brazil
Parameters:
STR: B
END: D
AGI: A
MGI: B+
LCK: A+
NP: EX
Height/Length: 1,80 m
Weight: 75 Kg
Likes: Humanity, Planet Earth, helping people;
Dislikes: Humanity, arrogance, destruction.
Talents: Inventivity, teaching, medicine;
Natural Enemy: Altera, Gilgamesh, other Culture Heroes;
Attribute: Star;
Traits: Servant, Humanoid, Male, Divine, Resistant to Enuma Elish.
Lore 1: The Lemurian Odyssey
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Lore 2: The Tale of Sumé
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Thats now really interesting have you thought intenionally on somethink like that ,when not its a real cool coincidence, i musty say oh and how would actualy Spearfnger react upon Genoskwa would she have fear or perhaps could she gets interest in the case Genoskwa is a different being as Nûñ’yunu’wï ?
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Okay, here's the Servant template I said I was working on. Wish I'd checked on the April contest... Thanks for the picture, too, @RoydGolden; I'm just going to say that it's an especially flat-chested woman
The First Labor of Heracles
Class: Berserker
Name: Heracles?True Name
Appearance: A flat-chested barbarian woman clad in nothing but the fur of a monstrous lion. Much like how a classical Heracles would look if he were a she.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Lore:Maybe I'm a Lion
Personality:A Wild Huntress
Parameters:
Strength (A)- Parameter boosted under Mad Enhancement, Monstrous Strength, and Leo.
Agility (C)
Endurance (A)- Parameter boosted under Mad Enhancement and Leo.
Mana (E)
Luck (D)- Parameter boosted under Leo.
Noble Phantasm (B)
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement (B)- Raises basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. Ranks up most parameters but takes away most of one's sanity; however, Animalistic Logic enables Berserker to retain higher-level thinking, albeit more in the thought processes of a cunning hunter rather than that of a human.
Personal Skills:
Animalistic Logic (A)- A combative way of thinking resulting from transforming into a beast. It's not useful for finding weak points, but the speed of thinking focusing on killing the enemy swiftly increases. It also enables Berserker to retain a larger level of her thought processes when under Mad Enhancement.
Divinity (E)- A measure of one's aptitude as a deity, the skill enables the user to pierce past skills relying on divine protection. Plus, its purge defense reduces special defensive values in proportion to the user's divinity rank. As an ancient mother goddess, Cybele has divine blood, but it has been diluted due to her primary record in myths as the monstrous Nemean Lion, something anathema to the gods. Ranked lowered when drawing upon the Monstrous Strength skill. Rank raised when Leo is active.
Monstrous Strength (B)- Borne from one's nature as a monster, it temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit determined by the ranking of the skill. As the first of Hercules' 12 Labors, the Lion of Nemea was one of the greatest monsters in Greek mythology. The power of the skill can only be accessed when Berserker transforms into a full lion.
Shapeshift (D)- Enables Berserker to shift between the form of a human woman wearing the skin of a lion and the form of a monstrous, truck-sized lioness.
Wild Charisma (A)- An enhanced version of the Animal Dialogue skill, this ability enables the user to not only communicate with animals but gain their loyalty and obedience. As the king of beasts, the lion naturally has the unquestioned loyalty of all wild animals, such that they will fight in its defense, flee its domain with their tails between their legs, or kneel and submit to be eaten should it but ask. The charisma is ineffective on humans and other beings who have rejected the natural world, but people with some level of wildness or connection to nature may be affected by the skill to some degree (see Tympanum noble phantasm). Rank raised when Leo is active.
Noble Phantasms:
Fifth Zodiac of the Divine Skies ~ Leo (B)- After being killed by Heracles, the gods placed the Nemean Lion in the sky as a constellation, which later became venerated as the zodiac sign Leo. When Berserker can see either her constellation in the sky or the sun (which is the sign attributed to Leo), she can activate this noble phantasm. It enhances several key parameters and skills such as her Strength, and it also surrounds her with a fiery aura that burns on contact. However, the noble phantasm can only function if the constellation or the sun is fully visible.
Tympanum ~ Wild Heartbeat of Mother Gaia(C/B)- A traditional tambourine drum used first by the devotees of Cybele and later for worshipers of Dionysus. The wild music was often used in rites where maenads and other followers would descend into animal-like frenzies. Every beat of the drum reverberates through your body and soul like the clap of thunder on an empty plain, the pounding stampede of a thousand wildebeest, the aqueous roar of a waterfall crashing on the rocks - the very heartbeat of the planet. Everyone who is exposed to the music, unless they have sufficient Divinity, Magic Resistance, or general willpower, will have their natural instincts heighten and begin to behave like wild beasts. This can boost skills that draw upon affinity for nature or natural instincts, but it will also cloud human reasoning and connection to civilization. The effect lessens when exposure to the music ceases, but people who fell to the music long enough or found that they liked their wild selves may come to desire that wild state and actively seek it out. As Berserker primarily targeted women, females are more susceptible to the call. Berserker can also unleash a concentrated form of the music through a lion's roar at close range; this higher-ranked version generally affects fewer people due to its limited range but has a greater potency on said individuals than the standard drum). The noble phantasm itself does not make those affected naturally loyal to Berserker, and in the hands of a foe strengthened by the wild regression it may in fact hinder her, but keep in mind that with the targets now more like beasts than men, Berserker's Wild Charisma skill has greater effect in turn.
Nemean Lion's Hide ~ A Skin Defiant of All Works of Humanity (B)- A thick lion's fur that Berserker wears across her entire body as a coat. She wears it all the time and becomes hostile if anyone tries to remove it from her person. The hide embodies nature's resistance to civilization, and as such it is invincible against unnatural weapons such as swords, lances, arrows, and bullets. That said, there are a few weaknesses to the natural armor. First, it does not protect the user against "natural" weapons such as one's own hands. This also exposes the fur to elementally-charged weapons to a degree; a fire-infused sword, for instance, would fail to leave any cut on the target, but the flames would leave burn damage. That said, the skin is still very thick, so it will still be hard to leave lasting damage with all but the strongest attacks, especially if Berserker is in full lion form. Second, only the exterior of the hide protects the wearer. If one were to find a way to get past the armor and hit the actual wearer, Berserker would suffer critical damage.
If the wearer of the armor is killed without having first destroyed the armor, the Nemean Lion's Hide will remain intact instead of fading alongside the Servant, as it sustains itself with natural prana from its surroundings. The coat is rather flexible, and one could easily put it on to receive the same protection as Berserker did. However, though it is not immediately noticeable, one must make a save check as soon as you put on the furry coat. If you have sufficient Magic Resistance, Divinity, or overall willpower, you will be able to wear the coat without any effects other than its invincibility against weapons; men also have a slightly better chance of resistance. However, those who fail the check slowly begin to change. The most immediate effect will be increasingly feral behavior - bestial aggression, taste for raw meat, claustrophobia in artificial spaces, etc. After 24 hours, the hide will have shifted to fit the user like a second skin, and said owner will refuse to take off the coat; their strength and endurance will also have increased by 1 parameter. After 48 hours have passed, the wearer gains access to the skills Mad Enhancement and Wild Charisma as well as the Leo and Tympanum noble phantasms; in addition, the user will be tempted to incessantly play the Tympanum drum, which accelerates his or her descent into nothing but a wild animal.
When the user has worn the Nemean Lion's Hide for 72 hours nonstop, there will be one final save check. If that fails, his or her soul will permanently shift to a "Wild" Origin, and he/she is now considered Berserker, with all of her memories, parameters, skills, and noble phantasms returning to her. Any skills or abilities that the wearer personally had will be infused with Berserker to further enhance the lion's powers. It is also possible for Berserker to willingly give the coat to someone who has accepted the call of the wild, causing that person to instantly and voluntarily become the Nemean Lion. The initial wearer of the coat, being a composite of the past wearers, will fade away to nothing, but any subsequent wearers who pass on the coat will return to their original form, albeit with a permanently altered Origin and the ability to shapeshift into a lion; as a result, with enough time Berserker can form a small "pride" of lions ready to aid her in the hunt.
Relationships:
- Heracles- Despite having died at Heracles' hands and being worn by him as a trophy, Cybele does not feel any particular hatred for him. Rather, she sees him as the closest thing she has to a worthy rival, and she welcomes a rematch.
- Asterios- Berserker has mixed feelings about Asterios. She feels hunger for him, as bulls are her natural prey; hostility, as solitary monsters perceive each other as rivals; and pity, for she empathizes with his longing for the refreshing freedom of nature. She prefers to address him as the Minotauros, for she considers it to be a compliment.
- Orion/Artemis- Cybele views Artemis as the only Olympian deity she can truly respect, and she happily welcomes the Goddess of the Hunt. She also thinks that Orion is really lucky to have such a kind mate who gave him a beast's form instead of leaving him as just another unfortunate human.
- Atlanta- Cybele feels a sense of kinship with Atlanta and would love to have the opportunity to hunt alongside her. In fact, Cybele was the one who turned Atlanta and her mate into lions, though both Cybele and Atlanta considered it more of a blessing than a curse; Cybele understands the utility of having a human form for hunting, but she offers to turn Atlanta back into a full-fledged lion if she but asks.
- Circe- The Nemean Lion admires how Circe turns humans into animals and encourages her to indulge in her hobby, even wondering why Circe hasn't gotten around to "helping" her master become a wonderful animal.
- Jackie the Ripper- Cybele pities the little girl as an unfortunate victim of civilization's horrors, and she tries to take on a motherly role, treating the abandoned wraith like a little lion cub (that's not necessarily just a metaphor).
- Frankenstein's Monster- Cybele would encourage her to give in to her wild side fully and reject the ways of man that created and abandoned her.
- Kiyohime- Cybele's advice for how Kiyohime should keep her mate with her is simple: shed her skin, become the skin she sheds, make Anchin wear her skin, and then the two of them can fuse and be together forever.
- David- Cybele is rather interested in David, musing that he reminds her of a shepherd boy she was once fond of (a callback to the myth of Attis). Unfortunately, as she is quite taller than him, any potential romance is never to be.
- Arturia- Cybele feels a mix of fear and longing toward the King of Knights, as while her history as a monster-killer and her dragonic lineage makes her the natural enemy of monsters, her connection to Avalon's natural paradise fills the lion with a sense of longing.
- Lion King Arturia- In contrast, the Lion King deity, as anathema to Cybele's own emphasis on freedom in the wild, is nothing but a sworn enemy that Berserker wants to tear apart and devour.
- Tamamo no Mae- Cybele is unsure how she feels about Tamamo, who is in some ways a parallel to her own story - only, instead of a monster becoming a goddess, Tamamo was a goddess who became a monster. Cybele respects Tamamo as a worthy rival and companion to fight against or alongside of, though she sometimes like to smugly point out that lions eat foxes as snacks.
- Kintoki- The Nemean Lion feels a sense of affection and pity for Kintoki, believing that it would have been better if he had stayed in the wild and eventually become a beast himself. She is interested in fighting him and seeing how he compares to her old foe Heracles.
- Raikou- Cybele, as an overly protective mother of her "pride", agrees with the overall philosophy of Minamoto that "mother knows best."
- Shuten-douji and Ibaraki- Being a monster who at best could only pretend to be human, the Nemean Lion understands and empathizes with the Oni sister's similar inhuman values. Like Ibaraki, she does not take pleasure from bloodshed, but simply does it as a predator fighting to survive in the world. Also, as a deity whose cult became intertwined with the later drunken rituals to Bacchus, Cybele appreciates the joy of rich wine and partying, and she is interested in indulging in that hobby with Shuten - and she's curious to taste the wines they have in the Far East, beyond even the eastern boundaries of her homeland.
- Jaguar Man- This wild, proud feline deity has a certain appeal to the Nemean Lion, and she would quite like to be its mate. The fact that the body of said being is female does nothing to discourage her and may in fact encourage her given her liking for women.
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