We all know that modern figures lack the mistery to become servants, but you can always make a good enough excuse to justify It, like Edson
We all know that modern figures lack the mistery to become servants, but you can always make a good enough excuse to justify It, like Edson
Being a Heroic Spirit requies fame and worship, not mystery, although it does factor on the HS's power
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Caster
True Name: Shotaro Ishinomori
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Japan
Parameters:Face Claim
STR: D
END: D
AGI: E
MGI: E
LCK: C+
NP: A+
Likes: Justice, Children, Heroes
Dislikes: Evil, Nazis
Talent: Writing
Natural Enemy: Large Evil Orginizations
Attribute: Man
Armament:
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Class Skills:
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Personal Skills:
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Noble Phantasm(s):
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Lore:
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Personality:
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Creator Notes:
I’m a big fan of Shotaro Ishinomori and all of his works so when the contest this month was Writers I had to make a sheet honoring him. I think he might be a little overpowered for a very modern day servant with his Noble Phantasm but hey I only gave him one EX skill so that’s a plus. I know this is tooting my own for but I’m really proud of creating the Pioneer of the Stars(False) skill because the idea of making the impossible possible is very much something that his characters do a lot. The face claim by the way is Nakijima Kento who played Shotaro Ishinomori in the movie Shotaro Ishinomori: The Man Who Created Heroes.
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My Servant Compendium
Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
Fate Texas Night
Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.
Source
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: Caster, Avenger
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Place of Origin: Sulmona, Italy
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: B+
LCK: D
NP: B
Height: 167 cm
Weight: 62 kg
Likes: Rome, fame, love
Dislikes: Criticism, distance between loved ones, materialism
Talent: Writing poems, relationship advice, encyclopedic memory
Natural Enemy: “Ibis”
Attribute: Man
Traits: Humanoid, Male, Roman
Armament: N/A
Catalyst: A first-century statuette
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Lore
Personality
Relationships
Creator's Notes
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...I'm guessing that Virgil and Horace Servants will be presented soon for the regular Create-A-Servant thread?
Nah, Virgil's been done already. Horace might be up at some point.
Ah, right. Publius Vergilius Maro from the first Create-A-Servant thread.
Long time no see
Every two months I check if I have any idea for the theme and I guess I could work in this one.
I didn't had as much time to work on it like I had with my Fabre, but I guess I liked the outcome.
Saber Class Servant
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True Name: Venus Pendragon
Title: King of Knights, Goddess of Love
Class: Berserker
Other Classes: Lancer, Rider, Caster
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: The sea foam of Mediterranean? Medieval Britain?
Lore
Parameters and Skills
Noble Phantasm
Comments
You know when I first made my entry for this contest I thought that maybe I could place in the top three this time. But with the glorious bed of lies that is 'Venus Pendragon' and the just completely solid and unique design of Ovid and Corinna I can tell that this is going to be a real high quality contest. Quick question about Corinna though are the parameters for her or for Ovid or do they share the parameters as well as the skills?
My Servant Compendium
Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
Fate Texas Night
Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.
@VenusPendragon
Gosh darnnit, this is why you don't be a slowpoke in a contest because somebody will get in and use your idea first. Welp, I guess I'll have to think of something else then.
"Here's a bangin lil' tune about takin' on The Man!"
(Check out my Super Special Awesome Servant Compendium here)
Vril SaberClass: SaberFaceclaim
True Name: Edward Bulwer-Lytton
Alternate Class: Assassin, Caster
Alignment: Lawful Good
Region: England
Source: Historical Fact
Parameters
Strength: C+
Endurance: D
Agility: D
Mana: A
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: A
Height: 1.77m
Weight: 73kg
Likes: Writing, sharing knowledge, a warm cup of tea from a beautiful woman
Dislikes: Judgmental people, his ex-wife, corruption
Attribute: Man
Armament: VrilLore
Personality
Dialogue
Skills
Noble Phantasm
CN
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Bulwer-Lytton: I presume the reason he's a Saber is because of the "pen is mightier than the sword" quote attributed to him. Even though I knew about that one, I never knew he coined so many other famous English phrases. Sounds like the guy really deserves to be more well-known than he is. As for the sheet itself, it's very well done. The occultic elements are brilliantly interwoven, and I find it hilarious how his NP is basically a Vril-powered lightsaber.
Class: CasterOriginally Posted by ’The Rich and the Poor Girl’, by Kim Larsen
True Name: Henrik Pontoppidan
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: Denmark (1857-1943)
STR: E AGI: E
END: D MGI: A
LCK: A NP: B
Height: 183cm
Weight: 79kg
Likes: Georg Brandes, victory by technicality, walking in nature.
Dislikes: Georg Brandes, organized religion, the prostitution of art.
Talent: Fitting in without being part of a whole.
Natural Enemy: Georg Brandes
Attribute: Man
Catalysts: His Baedeker travel guide, incomplete exam papers.
Class Skills:
Item Creation: E
The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Though he is no expert, Caster, being the son of a long line of vicars, can create minor wards against evil that provides protection to a small area around it.
Territory Creation: A
The Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. Rather than creating a Workshop, Caster can produce a ‘’, an area designated by a Bounded Field where all those that enter slowly have their humanity degenerated in relation to how misfortunate, unprivileged and miserable their lives are, or in the case of Servants, were. Those who make up the most downtrodden dregs of society, as well as those who overstay their welcome in this Realm of the Dead will suffer random mutations and diseases, a loss of empathy and other emotions that are key to one’s humanity, and a myriad of other conditions reserved for vermin and insects.De Dødes RigeRealm of the Dead
While it commands tremendous power, Caster personally dislikes this ability and prefers not having to use it.
Personal Skills:
Austerity: C
A serene state of mind that dampens the effects of Mental Interference. Similarly to the principle of Zen, Caster threw aside the pursuit of happiness and in its stead flew the banner of contentment. In addition to nullifying most forms of Mental Interference, Caster can drastically reduce the effect of certain physical conditions and pain by simply accepting them as part of his existence.
Originally Posted by Lucky Per, 1898-1904 by Henrik Pontoppidan: ADevil of ContradictionModsigelsesdjævlen
A disposition to never give up, whether the matter at hand is politics or great physical distress, a stubborn nature that maintains its unbending foolhardiness for good or bad. When confronted with despair, it manifests as an equivalent rank ofUnyielding Will. When confronted with bodily harm or imminent death, it manifests instead asBattle Continuation. In his memoirs, Caster details maintaining his sanity during an awful snowstorm in his climb of Mount Faulhorn by counting pages in his travel guide and rewarding himself with a piece of chocolate every time he counted them correctly three times in a row, staying up for days this way knowing he would not survive falling asleep. Despite having a tortured mind from his upbringing further tormented by the changes in society he helped bring about, as well his worn-out body bereft of strength, Caster lived ‘till the age of 86, stubbornly refusing to die even when surrounded by what he saw as a miserable misrepresentation of the ideals he and others had fought for for their entire lives.
Suggestion (Writing): A+
A powerful form of Suggestion only applicable through writing, whereupon it acts as a powerful mind-altering effect when read by the person it is addressed to. By addressing a letter to someone with the intent of influencing them or basing a book on a real person, the text itself becomes endowed with the power to change that person’s heart and mind when they read it. Caster’s desired change in that person will then be communicated to them and nothing but their own willpower can then resist it. This does not apply to simply the paper it is written upon, but all written instances of Caster’s words, even if displayed digitally or through fliers. Caster’s writings mended the bittered heart of Georg Brandes in a letter to the man in celebration of his 70th birthday, and exposed the twisted feelings of the artist L.A. Ring towards Ring’s best friend’s wife to the public, shattering their friendship and Ring’s reputation. Drawing upon his own contradictory nature that allowed him to get in the graces of all sorts of people while always maintaining his position as an outsider, Caster is said to be able to worm his way into the heart of anyone and change it, for better or worse, including his own...
Human Observation: C
A technique to understand other humans through observation and how to discover what makes each one tick. Always an outsider that peered into the worlds of both the rich and poor, the atheists and pious, the revolutionary thinkers and conservatives, Caster developed over the course of his long life the ability to hypothesize on the preferences, beliefs and convictions of others with great accuracy. It is an instrumental ability that brought him peace of mind when he was confronted with those he disagreed with, and filled him with inspiration when he gave critique and suggestions to aspiring writers in his older years, where many sought the wisdom of the aged Nobel Prize winner.
Noble Phantasm:
Over the Bridge, Away from HumanityPontem Oppōnō Humanis: B
Anti-Unit
The conclusion that Caster reached in his writings on the matter of the absoluteness of human inequality, weaponized as a tool against those who, knowingly or not, stand above the common man. This is a Curse that can only be activated against Servants who have, even briefly, stepped into Caster’s, whereupon it can no longer be avoided so long as Caster activates it. From this point on, the target will begin to forcibly adopt the mindset Caster ascribed to the elites of society, seeing nothing wrong with themselves and inflating their ego by regarding all those not as well-off or powerful as themselves to be beneath them, as if they were not even part of the same species. The more exposure they have to these perceived ‘vermin’, the quicker this mindset will accelerate, and it commands absolute power against those who were champions of righteousness in life, who could never have thought of a reason to disapprove of humanity.De Dødes RigeRealm of the Dead
The pendulum swings both ways, for Heroic Spirits are by definition great humans who lend their aid and protection to humanity, and by distancing themselves from the insects they now see humanity as, their power will begin to fade. Just as they are unwilling to receive worship and power from the belief of ‘vermin’, the common man will never lend strength to a Heroic Spirit that hates humanity. While the exact length of time before belief in the cursed has completely vanished, and the cursed along with it, varies from person to person, those who once stood as champions of mankind cannot endure for long, while those who keep a healthy neutrality towards humanity as a whole may last upwards of a week before their spiritual body falls apart. It goes without question that Pontem Oppōnō Humanis has no effect on those who already despise humanity.
Lore
Personality
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
Hey everyone, long-time lurker, first time poster. I've been following the Create-A-Servant thread for a while now and I had an idea for this contest, so I decided to write up a sheet for it. Please let me know if there's any mistakes or errors in it - any critique is appreciated.
___________________________________Class: Archer
Archer of Strategies
Faceclaim
True Name: Sun Tzu
Alternate Class(es): Caster, Saber, Lancer, Rider, Assassin
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Region: China
Source: Historical Fact
Parameters
Strength: C
Endurance: D
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: A
Height: 185 cm
Weight: 75 kg
Likes: Peace, discipline, order, reading
Dislikes: Lazy people, warmongers, loud noises
Attribute: Star
Armament: Bow, sword
Lore
Personality
Lines and Relationships
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasms
Creator's Notes
ADVENT BEAST
"No longer can Humanity remain content in ignorance. Your salvation lies in the unity of all. No longer will you be lead astray by your faulty perceptions."
Source:https://www.deviantart.com/sigu/art/...rlds-100721572
Servant: Beast V/L, Sin of ConformityTrue Name: Hermes Trismegistus?
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: A
Mana: EX
Luck: A
NP: EX
Lore:
Class Skills:
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
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Sin:
Relationships
This was an odd idea I had the ended up sort of working for the contest so I decided to submit it. Originally he wasn't a Beast but then I got to the idea to make him one after finishing the first sheet and decided this idea was better. I might later upload the first sheet but I won't submit it to the contest.
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My first contribution to this thread. Luckly, I already had a half-finished profile that fitted the bill for this month's contest.
Class: Caster
True Name: Galileo Galilei
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Attribute: Star
faceclaim
STR: ***** E
END: ***** D
AGI: ***** D
MGI: ***** E
LCK: ***** A++
NP: ***** B
Keywords
CLASS SKILLS
Territory Creation: B
The technical skill to build up an advantageous encampment to oneself as a magus (scientist). Thanks to this skill that allows to create in the shortest time a workshop that displays the very best effectiveness on any kind of terrain condition, Caster boasts the greatest advantage in regards to defensive fights among all Servants. At B Rank, it is possible to mold a workshop (science lab).
Item Construction: -
The technical skill to produce devices that carry magical power. It has been lost in exchange for the “Conceptual Improvement” skill.
To begin with, Galileo would never possess this since he is not a magus. As a bona fide scientist, he can only manufacture genuine “products of science” – no matter what sort of wondrous performance his inventions might display in the end.
PERSONAL SKILLS
Appreciation for Fine Arts: C
Understanding, or maybe attachment towards artworks, products of the fine arts. In case a Noble Phantasm that possesses anecdotes related to performing arts is seen, it might possible to see through its True Name. Chances of success depend on the rank on this skill.
Conceptual Improvement: A
A cheat-like privilege that adds further merits to all tools, from all times and places. A bow is made stronger, a sword sharper, an axe bulkier. The extent to which improvement is possible depends on this skill's rank. At A Rank, virtually all tools produced by human wisdom can be enhanced.
As an exception, he cannot apply this to items deeply rooted on mystery.
Elucidation of Theories: EX
The ability to understand, explain and prove the principles behind all sorts of phenomena. Also, the techniques to elucidate roughly all equations referred as magical formulas and restore them. It restores not only magecraft, but even damaged magic circuits・magic crests... however, since he employs an entirely scientific approach for this, chances are that some sort of accident・abnormality will occur.
Originally, this is something that would be of no use in combat, but in his case, it seems to play a critical role during the employment of his Noble Phantasm.
Pioneer of the Stars: EX
A unique skill bestowed to a hero that became a turning point for human history. All difficult voyages・penances turn from "impossibilities" into "events that can be realized". Rather than something limited to a few geniuses, this is the power to completely burn the "pride" that is common to all humans – to overcome a penance that is one level above from that era's descriptive power with pure human strength.
Polymath: A+
Multi-talented. Competent in all fields. Versatility obtained through extensive study and accumulation of experience. A total of 32 vocational skills can be employed with a proficiency level of B Rank or above.
NOBLE PHANTASM
Il Saggiatore – All Formulas Ought to Be Solved
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Magecraft
Great solving method. Caster's own interpretation on the Book of Nature. The original manuscript of his work on natural sciences was ironically transformed into a grimoire that rejects mystery upon being sublimated as a Noble Phantasm.
Upon release of the True Name, any and all magecraft within his field of vision will be negated so long he can provide a rational, scientific explanation for its phenomena. In theory, even high-thaumaturgy on the level of Reality Marbles can be dealt with. On the other hand, it is fundamentally ineffective against the Magic that still lies beyond human understanding.
A pioneer of natural philosophy (physics), Galileo is often regarded as the founder of modern science. Arguably, his greatest contribution for that field was introduction of the "scientific method" – the idea that, in order to achieve a proper understanding of the natural world, phenomena must be scrutinized by means of empirical observations and logical reasoning.
Science – in other words, the Authority intrinsic of humans to relegate mystery and render it powerless.
Eppur si Muove – Celestial Revolution
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-World
The final Noble Phantasm of Heroic Spirit Galileo. Something that sublimated his most famous achievement – the redefinition of the cosmos. Furthermore, in a sense this is also a crystallization of human deeds (karma). Ever since it awakened as an intelligent life form, humanity has slowly endeavored to pioneer the world around itself and change it into something that suited its needs and desires.
Mapping out the unknown. A conceptual interference・revision towards the observable universe. Once activated, this Noble Phantasm will spread out a conceptual bounded field over Galileo’s surroundings. Those caught within that territory will have their attributes・way of being converted into “something that can be explained through modern human wisdom”. While this may seem completely outrageous at a first glance, its effects are not instantaneous, but rather something gradually enforced as time goes by. Furthermore, although the bounded field can potentially extend itself as far as he can see, consumption of magical energy increases exponentially the greater that range is.
Although nothing but a minor nuisance against most opponents, this works as the ultimate trump card against foes that maintain their superiority by remaining beyond human understanding. In other words, the final weapon to be used in anti-Foreigner combat.
Background
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i'll reserve further commentary after voting but i must say that i really like this Galileo sheet.
3.) Vril Saber. A very interesting take on a writer servant without going too far away from his orgin. The corruption of some of his famous sayings were pure genius in my opinion. The Noble Phantasm might be one of my favorites I've read in general but I just straight up love energy manipulation powers.
2.) Venus Pendragon. So what can I say about the fusion of the King of Knights and the Goddess of Love by what seems to just be a deranged mind. The Self Suggestion Skill being so powerful it replaces mad enhanement and essentially makes Berserker into a Saber is a nice twist that while technically is not needed is what pushes the servant up a tier in my mind.
1.) Hermes Trismegistus. Whenever I see a Beast Class servant I become excited and this didn't disappoint. I think this sheet wins in the sense of the most presentable of the sheets however I think the other sheets I voted for have technically better writing I think and the Noble Phantasms are better. Emerald Tablet is a good NP but it is so passive it sort of brings the whole sheet down. Maybe of he had a second NP he would have gotten first place for me.
Just realized I sort of had things backwards. I had the one I wanted to give 3 points to as 1 and so on. Fixed it.
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My Servant Compendium
Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
Fate Texas Night
Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.
3 points: Edward Bulwer-Lytton
2 points: Miguel de Cervantes
1 point: Galileo Galilei
Honorary Mention: Venus Pendragon
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