Here is zikari8's sheet
Here is zikari8's sheet
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Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; April 28th, 2020 at 07:04 AM.
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When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...
You could contact zikari to ask them personally for any sources. The only thing in English I have found that talks about him is this as a link in a Reddit thread for the videogame Nioh. As a last resort, you could try translating his Japanese Wikipedia entry, which talks about some of his antics.
Last edited by King of Padoru; April 28th, 2020 at 09:13 AM.
AWAKEN MY RULERS
Your verified Chikara-production Studios !
Dont ship me with anyone unless i say so !
When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...
Come to think of it, why isn't there an Archer version of Tchaikovsky with a cannon orchestra? After all, the 1812 Overture is his best known piece...
It might also break some of the usual monotony of artistic Casters.
Would the Native American Peace Maker Hiawatha be a Saver as a Heroic Spirit? Also, has anyone done a Hiawatha Servant Sheet?
Probably not. Savers are usually saviours of religious origin (with Buddha being the only canon vantage point we have on this - and IIRC Kiara as well).
And on the first page, there are links to the prior threads. Create-a-Servant 2 has the most complete list of sheets done, so you can look from there yourself.
"What a beautiful story, Master. Hmm, who wrote it? Why, none other than my own self of course!"
Servant Berserker:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Girolamo Cardano 'The Mad Mathematician'
Alignment: Neutral Good
Alternate Classes: Caster, Ruler
Strength- C
Agility- D
Endurance- B
Mana- C+
Luck- ~
NP- B
Personality
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement- E+
A Skill that characterizes the Berserker Class. Raises parameters in return for sacrificing sanity and/or hindering mental capacities. Berserker had a notoriously impulsive temper and was sometimes diagnosed as mad by writers after his death. Normally this Skill doesn't rob away any of Berserker's sanity, but merely makes him somewhat more brash and impulsive than his usual self.
However when reminded of certain tragedies from his past, like the execution of his favored son Giovanni, Berserker may suddenly erupt into a sorrowful rage. In that case he'll begin furiously attacking his opponents, or even beating his own body, while wailing in rage and sorrow. During these moments his physical stats are ranked up.
Personal Skills:
Revolving Star Of Fortune- C
A Skill that signifies one's disposition to attract various misfortunes. At the same time, it expresses a strong will that overcame many tribulations in life.
This Skill renders Berserker's Luck parameter highly unstable. Whenever he's enjoying good fortune his Luck will drop sharply, drawing various disasters to him. But whenever he's cursed by ill fortune Berserker's Luck will boost greatly, letting him usually find a way out of whatever peril he's ensnared in. A double-edged sword of a Personal Skill, that ensures the bearer's life will always be accompanied by the peaks of tragedy and triumph.
Berserker suffered many disasters in life, from nearly drowning in a bathtub full of wine when he was but a babe to losing all his money gambling and being kicked out on the street to having his beloved son tried for murder and beheaded. Despite this, he retained a strong will and found optimism in life despite his innumerable misfortunes. He was accepted in many prestigious institutions, wrote books that are studied to this day, and made lasting friends. Berserker lived to 74 years old before dying happily, having obtained equanimity to his life and achievements. His life can truly be called a revolving-door of good and bad fortune...
Expert Of Many Specializations- C+
Grants access to and use of many expert-level skills. As one of the fathers of the Italian Renaissance, Berserker can access a wide range of Skills deriving from the fields he studied in life. Includes Numerology, Astronomy, Astrology, rhetoric, probability theory, mechanics, prowess with the sword and lance, medical techniques, horseriding and others at C~B ranked proficiency.
Infatuation With One's Own Works- A
An alteration of the Eye For Art Skill, that specifically denotes Berserker's fascination with his own scholarly works. Berserker often enjoyed rereading his many, many books, finding himself always surprised by the wit and brilliance contained therein. To the point he even retold the myth of Narcissus as about a scholar's pleasure in contemplating his own works.
By reciting passages from his books in his head, Berserker obtains a strong protection against mental influencing thaumaturgy. Immersed in the contemplation of his own erudition Berserker can completely tune out the outside world, mental attacks washing off him like oil from water. An egoistic absolution of the mind that isn't born from divine protection or even an overwhelmingly strong will, but simply Berserker's overwhelming self-obsession.
High-Speed Incantation- D
The capacity to recite spells at an accelerated pace. In Berserker's case, rather than a talent for traditional spellcasting it reflects the vast amount of scholarly works he wrote and published over the course of his life, to the point where he had to make compendiums just to keep track of them all. Would be ranked higher if he were summoned as Caster.
Noble Phantasms
So here's a brand new sheet from me. I've been reading this guy's autobiography lately, so I felt inspired to write him up as a Servant. Pretty satisfied with how he came out overall, especially how I fleshed out his personality. Guy was a really colorful character to be sure, and I couldn't do justice to even half his wild anecdotes in the sheet. As usual, comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 24th, 2023 at 05:28 PM. Reason: Resolved contradiction
I made him as an Archer.
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
List of Servants I've made
Servant Berserker:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Diogenes "The Dog-Philosopher"
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Alternate Classes: Caster, Ruler
Strength- C
Agility- C
Endurance- B+
Mana- B
Luck- C
NP- C
Personality
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement (False)- B
A Skill characterizing the Berserker Class. Raises parameters in return for a loss of sanity and/or hindering mental capacities. At this rank, all Berserker's parameters are ranked up, but most of her reason is lost. At least, so it seems.
Berserker was often called "mad" for her bizarre behavior that flaunted social norms. However in reality it wasn't madness but a carefully crafted act to expose the arbitrariness of society's laws. As such she possesses a False version of this Skill, that doesn't truly drive her mad but merely makes her seem that way.
All her parameters appear one rank higher than their true values, and this Skill presents itself on Berserker's stat sheet as ordinary Mad Enhancement at the same rank.
Personal Skills:
Innocent Monster- C
A Skill for those whose true history and existence have been distorted by false reputation and gossip accumulated over the course of their life and thereafter, without regard for the actual person's will or appearance. As consequence the Servant's abilities and appearance have been altered to conform to the specifications of their legend.
Berserker greatly loved dogs, admiring their simplicity, trueness to their own desires and lack of regard for societal mores. Indeed, she believed that humans had much to learn from their canine companions. Berserker was often ridiculed as the "dog-philosopher" for her vulgar actions like dining on scraps in the marketplace. She didn't mind these comparisons, but actually embraced them, feeling grateful to be likened to her beloved animals.
These comparisons- and Berserker's own adoration for the species- have culminated in her being ascribed literal canine traits upon manifesting as a Servant. She has a pair of fluffy dog ears sticking up from the sides of her head (in addition to her regular human ones), a large bushy tail sprouting from the small of her back and her teeth are sharpened into pronounced canines.
Berserker's sense of smell is especially heightened from this tranformation, letting her track targets from a great distance away just by their scent.
Cosmopolitan- EX
Berserker was the first in history to proclaim herself a "", one who swears allegiance to the World itself rather than any one city or nation. In an age of Greece when loyalty to one's city-state was esteemed nearly above all, this branded her as an outcast.Cosmopolitescitizen of the world
Having rejected ties to her own birthplace, Berserker can freely sever them from others. This Skill allows her to nullify any bonuses a Servant would obtain from being summoned in their native territory or cultural sphere.
For Servants revered mainly in their own homeland like Vlad III this can deal a truly crippling blow, weakening their parameters and even sealing certain Skills or Noble Phantasms due to a lack of fame to support their manifestation. Conversely, "heroes of the world" like Heracles and Achilles whose tales are sung all over the world will be relatively unaffected by this Skill.
Discernment Of The Poor- B
An insight to see through the opponent's true character and attribute. Berserker's ascetic way of living and separation from society allow her to see the truth of things that most people would rather keep hidden. This Skill allows Berserker to accurately glean the true nature of those around her, seeing past their facades and hypocrisies to grasp the target's "real self".
Noble Phantasms
So here's another philosophical Berserker from me. I've had this one lying around my WIP folder for a few weeks now and just felt inspired to write it up. Commentary on her and Girolamo would be appreciated.
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 24th, 2023 at 05:30 PM.
Happy~ Sunshine~ Love~Ahaha, look at you shivering in disgust, how cute…Come on, don’t hide your true feelings! Let your emotions flow!
Open~ Your~ Heart~
…
Yep! I’m an Avenger class Servant proper, you have any questions?
Hehe~ were you expecting someone more sinister-looking, perhaps?
Could it be that I am too sweet and cute to be a spirit of vengeance?
You’ll see! My burning vengeance for you for underestimating me will shake the world!
Kidding~
…
Come on, don’t be so down! Are you giving up just like that? Lame! Pathetic! Trash!
Ah, sorry~ I though you’re the type to be fired up when insulted, hehe~
Then, allow me give you some proper encouragement, get ready!
Master, do not give up hope!
…
Ah… How unfortunate…
I-I’m really sorry… This is really what I am—a bringer of evil.
This is what I am created for, to spread suffering and chaos upon your kind.
I had no choice in this matter, I-I did not wish for this…
You’re free to hate me for this, but I certainly won’t ever hate you.
That’s why—
…
Just you know, I could leave you at any time you know, I don’t really need a Master.
Uh, the reason I, uh, stay with you is because it’s convenient, t-that’s all!
E-eh, it’s not that I—ahem…
What I want to say is… Master, I had chosen to be with you.
It’s purely my selfish desire that I remain by your side. So please—
…
Class: Avenger
True Name: Pandora
Gender: Female
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Origin: Greek Mythology
Region: Greece
Attribute: Earth
Pandora is an Avenger which is both born and speaks of love as well as hatred equally.
At the beginning of humanity’s creation, it is said, mankind lacks both “wisdom” and “desire”, and they lived in a blissful ignorant contentment, it was a Golden Age. Although they are immortal, they desire nothing nor do they learn anything, living for nothing but to serve their gods.
Pitying their state of existence, a titan named Prometheus stole the Heavenly Fire and gave them to mankind, thus mankind acquired “wisdom”. Afterwards, the gods sent mankind a gift in the form of a pythos containing “desire”, carried by the first woman, All the World’s Gifts, Pandora.
Although she was warned not to open it, being the first human afflicted with the disease of “desire”, Pandora developed the first primal form of “desiring”, she became curious. Her curiosity, desire in the crudest sense, led her to open the forbidden pythos, thus releasing “desire” into the whole world. This “desire” manifests itself through various symptoms in human; anger, sorrow, joy, love, and various other forms. And from those, it evolves into what human call “evil”.
Thus All the World’s Gifts brought All the World’s Desires which in turn incites All the World’s Evils.
Parameters:
STR: E
END: E
AGI: D
MGI: A++
LCK: C
NP: EX
Class Skills:
Avenger: EX
Any emotion inherently has evil potentials; Pandora, who once caused “evil” to infest the world, was condemned by humanity as the “harbinger of evil” comparable to entities such as Angra Mainyu. As an Avenger class Servant, Pandora is capable of converting any and all human psyche directed towards her into power. When those emotions, feelings and desires are put back into Pandora’s Box, it is processed into magical energy and can be released back out as mental interference-type attacks which paralyze the target’s psyche.
Oblivion Correction: A
The existence of happiness, anger, sorrow, humor, and the fundamental human emotions is proof of what Pandora had once blessed and cursed this world with. It is what defines the “humanity” in humankind, the origin of human desires, and also the root of their virtues and vices. In other words, as long as human retains this “humanity”, Pandora will never forget her role in this world.
Personal Skills:
Divine Endowment: A+
Upon her creation, the Olympian gods gave a little piece of their self as a gift, and thus the clay doll was named Pandora, the All Gifted, and was animated to life. Her form fashioned from the flesh of Gaia. Her beauty sculpted to utmost perfection by—the god who lacks it most—Hephaestus, her crafty hands taught by Athena, her lovely affection and longing by Aphrodite, her wifely conduct from Hera, her temperamental wrath from Zeus, and so on. The result is a woman who would embody the most common archetype of femininity itself, the most womanly woman, who would later be known to the Greeks as the “first woman”. This skill allows her to demonstrate abilities that could be said to be “a woman’s specialty” in any custom and cultures.
Independent Action: EX
Driven by self-centered individualistic desire, Pandora only wishes to live by her impulses, disregarding orders and expectations, in order to walk the path her heart most desires. Acquiring magical energy solely from her Avenger class-skills and anchored into the world directly by Pandora’s Box itself, Pandora has no need for a Master and can stay materialize in the world indefinitely.
Light of Hope: A-
Hope, the only daemon which is left inside the pythos Pandora once opened, it thus is the only one that remains apparently “good” and uncorrupted by All the World’s Evils. It is the hope that shows light in dark times, the hope that sustains the will to live, the hope that wishes for happiness to the world—such is this hope. When one hopes for something, that thing becomes more likely to happen, but only if one acts in accordance to that hope. Even if that thing seemed outside one’s reach, this hope transcends time and space. This hope grants Pandora the ability akin to future precognition, a shining beacon that guides one’s action towards “the most desired future”.
As Pandora’s Box continues to be opened, this light slowly fades, which degrades the rank of this skill down. When hope is extinguished entirely then surely only despair follows. However, trials and hardship merely fuels hope, even if the overwhelming tide of raw desire pouring forth Pandora’s Box threaten to stifle hope, as long one is facing a danger so great that one’s desire is focused solely to overcome it, then this shining hope shall ever persist. In other words, a sufficient target to direct one’s desire as “hope” is needed so that it won’t be dissolved into the ocean of chaotic raw desire.
Noble Phantasms:
Pandemonium
Unshackle Desires, Then All Rules Shall Be Broken
Type: Anti-Thaumaturgy
Rank: B
The sole purpose the gods made Pandora for—a key to open the pythos which is the source of all desire. This Noble Phantasm is Pandora’s own Saint Graph functioning as a key, which “unlocks people’s hearts” so to speak.
Often times, men are creatures that bind themselves, often unconsciously, with their own tangled and complicated rules, laws, oaths, duties and morality, therefore locking their true desires in a forbidden box. This Noble Phantasm allows Pandora to unshackle the constraining chains which humans constructed for themselves to repress their feelings and emotions, and limit their actions, a key which unlocks the carnal desire deep inside men’s hearts, as well as unbinding any chains which prevents the body to act according to their carnal desire. In essence, it is an “anti-repression” ability that negates all kinds of abilities, magecrafts, skills and noble phantasms that utilizes “order, rules and contracts”, the ultimate rejection of the super ego.
Inversely, this key, like most keys, is designed so that it can lock what it has unlocked, to close what it has opened. In emergency, to avoid the worst possibilities, she can choose to contain the excessive impulses she had gathered back into the pythos where it came from.
Pandora’s Box
All the World’s Gifts
Type: Anti-Wisdom
Rank: EX
Pandora’s Box, a gift sent by the gods to humanity, it is none other than “the source of desire”, the force which manipulates the hearts of man, which is sometimes called the root of all suffering, but it is also undoubtedly also the origin of all happiness.
It is a Noble Phantasm that is comparable and can be considered as a type of a Holy Grail. Originally an earthen pythos made of the same material that Pandora is also created of, this Noble Phantasm is independent of Pandora herself, and normally she cannot use it unless, for example, it was used as her summoning catalyst. After acquiring this Noble Phantasm, Pandora can customize the form and size of this Noble Phantasm however she likes, as long it is a “container”.
When used by Pandora, the mud doll crafted by the gods, it becomes a Noble Phantasm which is capable of “generating infinite amount of desires”, as opposed to fulfilling them. It is the ultimate pandering ability capable of manipulating a sentient being’s psyche, granting her complete and total “domination of the self” be it her own or others, the “self” here defined as collections of desires and reflections. In addition, the mass of raw human psyche she accumulated through the Avenger class skill is converted into magical energy, and can be transformed into various mental interference-type attacks that pulverize both the target’s body and psyche.
Although in theory this Noble Phantasm can generate infinite amount of “desire”, prolonged excessive use might awaken the daemon slumbering inside it, the reactor core which generates all the “desires”, akin to a machine overheating. If past a certain threshold and allseven souls of heroic spiritsconditions have been met, the true purpose of this Noble Phantasm will be activated. Elpis, the daemon of Hope, the last entity still imprisoned inside the pythos, will be finally released upon the world, and when it does, true pandemonium shall ensue.
Girolamo: I like this one. The skills are rather clever, especially the faux-Eye for Art (though its effects seem closer to Mental Pollution). Only High-Speed Incantation seems a little out of place, and even that probably has some justification I'm just no aware of. As for the NPs, I'm not a huge fan of the first one (mostly because the format just looks like adding another Servant on top of another - then again, Oryou....), but the second one is curious. Since it seems to be a physical representation of Girolamo's Saint Graph (and thus editable), will tampering with it affect possible other summonings of him? And if it does work like that, does harming it also work in the same way?
Diogenes: Of this one I'm not such a fan. Not least because the FC looks more like a cat than a dog (and that confusion is Tamamo Cat's shtick). Although I suppose there are some grounds for that sort of thing, given how much Diogenes stood apart from 'humanity' with his actions. NPs are fine, though if memory serves, the second NP's basis is usually recorded as being a barrel.
Pandora: Nailed it mate
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Blindfold your eyes, so that the approaching night may strike no fear in you.
Let it not burden your soul, nor numb your strides.
Why doesn't Diogenes have a NP in which she throws you a plucked chicken?
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What are you talking about, that's clearly a man!
Face Claim
Credits to Dheeraj Verma, from his Graphic Novel The One
ARCHER
True Name: Abhimanyu
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Heaven
Gender: Male
Height: 171cm
Weight: 65kg
Place of Origin: India
Armament: His bow Raudra, Arrows
Likes: A normal life, Having fun with those he cares about and love
Dislikes: War, Those who seek to harm his Master and loved ones
Talents: Archery, Warfare, Ruling
Natural Enemy: Kauravas, Karna
Eligible Servant Classes: Saber, Archer, Rider
PARAMETERS
STR: A+
END: B+
AGI: B+
MGI: B
LCK: C-
NP: A+
CLASS SKILLS
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PERSONAL SKILLS
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NOBLE PHANTASMS
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LORE
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PERSONALITY
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RELATIONSHIPS
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NOTES
A thorough reworking of an old Servant sheet I made a while back. Feels like I went too much in detail at certain parts, and I might have missed what I wanted to convey in here. Feel free to give your thoughts on it!
Last edited by AAM1232; July 10th, 2020 at 09:04 AM. Reason: Image fixing
High-Speed Incantation has the same justification as Andersen, in that it's based on the sheer speed and volume of the works he composed. And changes to his second NP only affect his current summoning. If it affected his record on the Throne it'd probably warrant being an EX-ranked NP...
Fair enough. I picked the FC more on a whim because I thought it'd be amusing to have Diogenes as a cute doggo girl. And I've heard various versions of the object Diogenes lived in, with some calling it a jar, barrel, winecask, amongst other things. I just decided to go with a jar for no particular reason. Anyway, thanks for the feedback mate!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 30th, 2020 at 11:31 AM.
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Alternate Classes: Saber
True Name: Alfred the Great
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: Britain (9th century)
Armament: Sword, shield
Parameters:
STR: C+
END: C
AGI: B
MANA: D
LUCK: B
NP: B+
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Lol, you couldn't have timed that better if you tried since Alfred appears in the trailer as the antagonist for the latest AC game that dropped a few hours ago.
Last edited by Skull; April 30th, 2020 at 02:08 PM.