Create-A-Servant 3

**Morg van Destro** · April 30th, 2021, 01:12 AM

Forgive me White, but I literally copy/pasted this from one of your posts. The format, that is. All your secrets are revealed to me!

“Ah! Here we are. A tad jumpy, aren’t we? Forgive me for surprising you. I know it can be very strange for someone to simply appear when you're trying to enjoy your meal. Yes, I am a Servant and no, you didn’t summon me. Please, don’t mind me. I’m simply here to observe what you have done, or rather, what you will do. Or perhaps you’ve already done it. That is, perhaps you have already done it presently. Would be rather odd if you had, considering you’re set to either do it or die in *checks pocket watch* three months. No, I'm not early. You're late.”

WATCHER
The Time Traveler

Other Classes: Rider, Caster
Place of Origin: ———

Height: 198 cm | 6'6''
Weight: 81 kg | 178.5 lbs

Natural Enemy: ———
Attribute: Human, Immortal
Traits: Humanoid, Male, Timewalker

STRENGTH: C

ENDURANCE: A++

AGILITY: B

MANA: C

LUCK: E

NOBLE PHANTASM: EX

Class Skills

Bond 1

Bond 2

Bond 3

Bond 4

Bond 5

Bond 6

Bond 7

Bond 8

[Steins;Gate OST - Operation Skuld]

**BnEl15** · April 30th, 2021, 01:54 AM

H.G. Wells: *insert Doctor Who reference here*. There was another Wells sheet in one of the previous contests, and the time machine does sound like the most obvious NP to give him (either that or the War of the Worlds). That said, I like how you managed to weave the whole time machine idea to his character, and linking him to the Servant Universe is a good way to justify his powers (I can't imagine our OG wells could have that skillset unless he fused with a phantom, arrived from a Lostbelt, used a Grail, or other wacky shenanigans). That Professor Paradox fc also sells me further on his aloof-yet-wise professor image, and that bond ce adds another nice flavor to the sheet, as they tend to do, at least according to me.

On another note, yes, Laplace would have a field day with this guy.

**realcasually** · April 30th, 2021, 07:12 AM

Servant Universe Time Travelling TRON-Style Professor Paradox-expy H.G. Wells? Good god, man, no one sheet can contain this much raw power.

I love it and I love everything about it. The Servant Universe is an oft-untapped resource to flex the more technologically-leaning ideas we might have and you've made perfect use of it to justify the sheer endearing wackiness of this sheet to a far higher degree than I need to find it fantastic. The best part is definitely reading his (astoundingly well-written) dialogue in Paradox's voice.

I can definitely churn out a CE for you if you have a particular picture already in mind you'd like on it. Or even what you WANT it to look like and I'll find one myself.

**DelRey** · April 30th, 2021, 09:03 AM

Damn, great work Morg. So much cool stuff packed into one sheet. Character and writing are on point. A great addition to Watcher Class and the Servant Universe.
And I appreciate that you used Hyas and made his life...a bit more hopeless.
I would use 'eternity' more instead of 'infinity', it is not a nitpick, but I always try to not repeat the same words too much. I use Infinity for Space and Eternity for Time.

and I meant to ask u, Rick, how do you do the CE? is there a CE generator or something? 'Insert Picture' and it does it for you?

**Morg van Destro** · April 30th, 2021, 12:09 PM

Originally Posted by realcasually

Servant Universe Time Travelling TRON-Style Professor Paradox-expy H.G. Wells? Good god, man, no one sheet can contain this much raw power.

I love it and I love everything about it. The Servant Universe is an oft-untapped resource to flex the more technologically-leaning ideas we might have and you've made perfect use of it to justify the sheer endearing wackiness of this sheet to a far higher degree than I need to find it fantastic. The best part is definitely reading his (astoundingly well-written) dialogue in Paradox's voice.

I can definitely churn out a CE for you if you have a particular picture already in mind you'd like on it. Or even what you WANT it to look like and I'll find one myself.

It's the only way to read it. Though, doing so does allow you to see, or, technically, hear the differences between them. Took some time, too. Been a while since I've had to get in a character's head like that.

I want the say "The Timewalker", but other than that, it's up to your discretion. I personally have always seen it as a gravestone in daytime.

Originally Posted by DelRey

Damn, great work Morg. So much cool stuff packed into one sheet. Character and writing are on point. A great addition to Watcher Class and the Servant Universe.
And I appreciate that you used Hyas and made his life...a bit more hopeless.

I wouldn't have it any other way.

Originally Posted by DelRey

I would use 'eternity' more instead of 'infinity', it is not a nitpick, but I always try to not repeat the same words too much. I use Infinity for Space and Eternity for Time.

I know it can be hard to tell, but the repetition in this case is intentional. It's more like he knows that word would make sense to everyone, and constantly switching and specifying between the two would only serve to confuse others, so he's only using the one that can encompass both. Again, it would be pretty difficult to glean that, considering how often that sort of thing is found anyway.

**DelRey** · April 30th, 2021, 01:20 PM

I stumbled upon this here, The Red Queen Effect. It is based on the Alice in Wonderland Queen and I think it is an interesting concept to perhaps explore for those more interested in the Lewis Carroll World.

**realcasually** · April 30th, 2021, 02:13 PM

“You are the Master who has summoned me? For good reason, I hope. I don’t care what authority your Command Seals grant you over me, I won’t be distracted from what’s truly important. My research, of course! Ugh, fine, if it will remove your distractions faster, point me to the goal. I’ll see the problem swiftly solved so you’ll stop bothering me when I’ve work to do.”

Class: Caster
True Name: Isaac Newton
Alternate Classes: Berserker
Gender: Male
Alignment: True Neutral
Origin: Historical Fact
Attribute: Star
Traits: Brynhildr’s Beloved, Male, Humanoid, Servant
Catalyst: A copy of “Philosophiæ Naturalis Principia Mathematica”

Parameters:

STR: D

END: D

AGI: C

MGI: A

LCK: B

NP: A

Description:

When describing the personality of Isaac Newton, it would not be unfounded for the first word to enter one’s mind to be ‘unpleasant’. Among many, many other equally negative adjectives. And indeed, it is likely they would be accurate. Newton is antagonistic, offputting, irritable, obsessive and difficult. Though he obeys his Master mostly out of obligation and isn’t the type to betray them for his own ends, if he has another goal in mind it’s highly likely he’ll ignore direct orders unless they further his own studies into whatever it is that has captured his attention-- as well as things like ‘food’ or ‘sleep’ (even if they’re unnecessary to a Servant-- all the better!) or ‘imminent enemy attack’. The picture of the absent-minded genius with a side order of great exhaustion to be interrupted from his experiments by dullards who could not hope to understand the scope of his ingenuity.

All of these would render Newton a highly useless Servant if it wasn’t for his own sheer brilliance. There is no denying that Newton is one of, if not the, smartest individuals known to human history. His greatest asset is not his magical offensive power, but his mind. He doesn’t require the use of magecraft to make completely accurate snap deductions based on all available information, and though possessing no training in it, has near-unrivalled tactical and strategic ability through sheer intelligence and ability to calculate the odds of outcomes and dynamics of a battlefield.

Indeed, perhaps the only weakness in his great mind is his complete lack of ability to anticipate anything from the human element other than ‘what is expected’ due to his extreme antisocial tendencies that make him near impossible to work with in the first place...

But inside the infuriating shell made only worse by his paranoid, nearly alien mindset exacerbated by his Class Skills, there is a glimmer of a man who does love humanity as a concept, wishing to pave the future for the human order. His own nature means he despises the individual and can never reach an accord with the “ignorant and dull common folk” around him... for the most part. Those who share even an ounce of his passion for discovery may be able to find some common ground in the thrill of illuminating the dark mysteries of the world, just as a certain someone did many years ago.

Just don’t expect him to be grateful for the company. After all, he was a little too eager to burn those portraits...

Lore:

Isaac Newton was born in 1643 to a farming family, a fate he swiftly left behind in favour of academic pursuits. Attending first the King’s School in Grantham, he would enroll later in the University of Cambridge’s Trinity College in 1661.

He studied a classical curriculum, but soon became fascinated by the works of philosophers, and when plague shuttered the campus he would return home to the farm-- but only to formulate his theories on calculus, light, color, and soon-- after a certain incident when observing a falling apple and beginning to turn his insightful mind to the everpresent question of why-- gravity.

Returning in 1667 to Cambridge, he would soon begin to build his reputation as a genius. He constructed the first reflecting telescope in 1668, and the following year take over as the Lucasian Professor of Mathematics. In 1671 he would demonstrate to the Royal Society his telescope and be elected to publish his notes on optics but a year later. It was Newton who determined that white light was a composite of all the colors on the spectrum, and that light was composed of particles instead of waves.

It was around this time in 1675 that he would begin his public rivalry with one Robert Hooke... as history would record the incident, anyway. In truth, Roberta was one of the few individuals Newton could tolerate-- though that’s not to say the rivalry wasn’t entirely real. Nobody could truly be friends with Newton without some chafing of the egos. But Newton would propose a certain plan to see one of his few compatriots (and perhaps, so it seems, the only woman he could even remotely stand) see her credit due.

Regardless, it suited Newton perfectly to visibly withdraw from society over the ‘feud’, as it would give him more time to focus on his work. It was in hermitude that he would chart the paths of celestial bodies, and in 1687 publish “Philosophiæ Naturalis Principia Mathematica”, which would establish Newton’s laws of motion and the law of universal gravity, one of the greatest feats of the time’s modern science. He would become a superstar in his field-- ironic, given his hatred of most people. Still, he would use his influence to oppose the attempts at instituting King James II’s Catholic teachings in universities, be elected to represent Cambridge in Parliament, and be named warden-- and later master-- of the Royal Mint.

Then, in 1703, Roberta Hooke would die, and Newton would execute stage two of his plan. Portraits were burned and history was rewritten... but that’s someone else’s story.

As for Newton, though he would have ‘inferiors’ carry on Hooke’s work, he himself would publish “Opticks”, his second major work, a year later, and the following year be knighted by Queen Anne. There would be doubts around this time that Newton was truly the father of calculus, but he defended his position vehemently against German mathematician Gottfried Leibniz and proved his work at least his own.

It was around this time that his research would prove the existence of forces beyond those he could truly understand, and Newton began to be courted by two separate forces. The Church knew him to be a devout Protestant man, and sought to recruit him and his knowledge to fight their enemies, and the Mage’s Association had rarely seen such aptitude from one untrained in the use of magecraft, though he seemed to possess powerful magical circuits. Surprisingly, Newton would reject both offers-- he had no wish to place himself in the middle of a squabble between theology and discovery, valuing both aspects of his life equally, and simply wished to continue his own research and prove himself independently brilliant. It is rumoured, though, that he would frequently collaborate with members of both organisations in exchange for funding and the necessary assistance for new breakthroughs, and it is this exposure to the secret world of mysteries that accounted for much of his odder behaviour later in life.

In old age, of course, Newton’s health would deteriorate, and multiple illnesses would concurrently take a toll on his body. Still, he would never until the strength faded from his body give up the pursuit of true enlightenment. Isaac Newton died in 1727 at the age of eighty-five. His funeral was attended by all of England’s most eminent figures, and his coffin carried by noblemen in a funeral fit for a king.

His fame would grow only in death, and the impact he had on modern science would be second to none. Alexander Pope, the great English poet, wrote an epitaph that read as such: "Nature and Nature's laws lay hid in night; / God said, Let Newton be! and all was light."

As for Newton himself, he would be asked of his own achievements later in life. "I do not know what I may appear to the world; but to myself I seem to have been only like a boy playing on the seashore, and diverting myself now and then in finding a smoother pebble or prettier shell than ordinary, while the great ocean of truth lay all undiscovered before me,” he was quoted as saying.

If only he was summoned as that wise old man instead of the youthful egomaniac you see before you...

Class Skills:

Personal Skills:

Noble Phantasm:

Grid of Vulcan
Intelligent Dominion of the Beautiful System

Type: Anti-Army
Rank: A
Range: 1~50
Targets: 500 people

Description:
Newton’s Noble Phantasm doesn’t require a True Name release to access the most basic level of his power, being a command over, of course, the force he is most famous for officially discovering-- gravity. It is his main method of combat by using minor shifts of gravity to hurl projectiles with incredible speed, immobilise enemies, and defend against attacks. He also can gain a minor boost to his hand-to-hand skills by affecting his own heaviness and the weight of his punches versus an opponent upon whom the effects of gravity have been reduced-- however, he is still mostly terrible at hand-to-hand anyway, even with this edge, so he prefers focusing on a form of long-range combat by affecting the gravity of objects and singular opponents in a combat scenario.

That changes with the True Name release of Grid of Vulcan: Intelligent Dominion of the Beautiful System. To achieve this, Newton must first utilise his Alchemy skill in conjunction with his Item Construction skill to create “the Net”-- the keystone by which he can focus his power and use the Noble Phantasm.

The Net was first conceived of by Newton upon researching ancient Roman myth-- particularly, the story of the god Vulcan catching his wife, Venus, in bed with the god of war Mars. The smith god had forged a metal net for the purpose of capturing the adulterous couple and hanging them from a high ceiling to display their shame. Newton discerned this tale not as a moral against adultery but as an alchemical recipe. Using Vulcan as a stand-in for fire, Venus for copper, and Mars for iron, Newton created the first Net. The Net is a keystone constructed of a purple alloy, formed from antimony regulus, itself derived from antimony sulfide purified at a high temperature with the introduction of iron. Combining it with copper created the alloy which Newton observed to possess a latticework pattern of crystals on its surface, thus creating a net-like pattern.

When the Net is constructed, Newton can use it as a focal point for his Noble Phantasm. When Grid of Vulcan is activated in full, it transposes the net pattern of the alloy over a wide area of space that Newton can see and unlocks the potential for him to use the full potential of his gravity-based magic to affect this specific area. By defining the barriers of the affected area and separating it into a grid network, Newton becomes able to shift the scale of his power from ‘affecting’ gravity to ‘controlling’ it. He can designate each square of the grid to possess a different strength and/or direction of gravity if necessary, and he is capable of producing effects ranging from zero gravity to a pressure strong enough to nearly crush even Heroic Spirits. With full exertion, he could even create such a gravitational singularity that it forms a localised black hole. This is likely to drain mana extremely, though, and will be just as dangerous for Newton and his allies should they be in the area.

The main weakness of Grid of Vulcan is the fact that Newton requires the Net keystone to be able to focus his power on that scale-- using the latticework pattern as a form of ‘lens’ to affect the larger area of the Noble Phantasm. If the Net is somehow destroyed while the Noble Phantasm is in use, its effects will immediately cease and Grid of Vulcan’s full power will be sealed until such time as Newton is capable of creating a replacement. Fortunately, this is not too difficult a task to do, but it still requires resources and time which might not be immediately available in a combat scenario.

Additionally, Newton is not immune to his own Noble Phantasm’s effects. Though he is free to stay outside of the grid while still affecting it, he can move in-- however, he will be subject to the level of gravity he has designated for each grid square. This can obviously be circumvented by affecting each square with a level beneficial to whatever he requires as he moves through it while keeping his opponents in detrimental areas, and it is usually not in Newton’s interest to enter into the same square as an opponent anyway.

The main strategy of Newton is to hunker down in his Workshop and assume a defensive position, attempting to chip away at enemies with traps and attrition before using Grid of Vulcan to incapacitate them as they reach the point where its effective range will completely encompass them when activated from where Newton is barricaded, and he can proceed to attack them for a coup de grace at his leisure. As such, Newton has difficulty dealing with long-range specialists capable of bypassing said range such as Archers. Though Newton does not have to be close to an area to designate it for Grid of Vulcan, the entirety of its expanse must be in sight. If he loses sight of the area, the effect will also be broken.

(It should be noted that in conjunction with a certain other Servant’s Noble Phantasm who can expand the range of his sight and cancel out any defensive magics, the Grid can be deployed at a far greater distance at which Newton’s preparations are not detectable, removing most of the Grid’s weaknesses to devastating surprise effect. Newton will never mention this fact.)

Stun all enemies for 1 turn.
Reduce their attack for 3 turns. <Overcharge>
Reduce their debuff resistance for 3 turns.
Grants party Ignore Evasion for 3 turns.

Relationships:

Roberta Hooke:
“Hm? No, I am completely unfamiliar with this blathering woman. The only colleague I know of is my late colleague Robert Hooke, and this is clearly not him. Hm? ...Yes, I’m glad it worked too. Of course it did-- it was my plan. Only an inferior mind-- such as yours-- could conceive of a plan with a possibility of failure. And for that matter, only an inferior mind requires such trivialities as sleep in the first place when striking at the heart of the beast of ignorance with the sword of discovery! Now stop distracting me, woman! There’ll be time for friendship later! What-- No, I don’t consider you a friend! Away or make yourself useful and prepare the athanors!”

Leonardo da Vinci:
“‘If I have seen further it is by standing on the shoulders of Giants...’ To think I would be in the very presence of such a giant here and now. I am honoured. Although... I understand the reason for your appearance-- I too would pay homage to such a legendary work of art had I been its creator-- I must admit I am still... unsettled. And must you act so flippantly...?! There is science to be done, there is no time for this frivolity!

Nikola Tesla:
“I see... As I stood on the shoulders of giants, so too did I inspire those who came after me. It sounds as if your work with this ‘electricity’ is as brilliant as my own. Together we can lay the ground for a new era of science and scientists, where knowledge and rationality reign supreme! Yes, perhaps this is worth laughing for! Hahaha!” (They continued for several hours and had to be forcibly separated by Hooke and Blavatsky.)

Sherlock Holmes:
“Our vocations may be significantly different, but we share a similar goal... to clear the fog of the unknown from the path of true understanding. Your Noble Phantasm is truly a blessing to those of us seeking the truth... Imagine all you could achieve with it even in a place such as this! Hm? ‘Now is not the time for that’?! What does that mean?! It is always time to expand one’s mind! You are a genius, are you not, why do you act like such a thunderous ignoramus?!”

Fundamental Interactions:
“Fascinating... Truly fascinating. So this is the culmination of my work, and of those who came after me... A champion of reason against the hordes of fantasy. Fascinating, absolutely fascinating... I must know everything about how you work. Explain it all to me and leave nothing out! There will be no breaks!”

Craft Essence:

CREATOR'S NOTES

**BnEl15** · April 30th, 2021, 04:00 PM

Newton: 0/10 no Okabe fc. Seriously though, I love how you managed to completely flesh out the dynamics between him and Hooke, which I largely left out in her sheet, down to that synchronizable NP. Their interchangeable boke-tsukkomi routines would be amusing to see in a story, as you've demonstrated here. Amazing work, man. It's always an honor to be able to inspire another great sheet.

**Serra** · April 30th, 2021, 04:32 PM

Class: Rider

Other Classes: Archer

Appearance

True Name: Konrad der Rote (Conrad the Red)

Alignment: Lawful Good

Source: Historical fact

Place of Origin: Kingdom of East Francia (Germany)

Parameters

Height: 180 centimetres

Weight: 70 kilograms

Likes: Reasoned arguments, giving it all in battle, showing respect to one's opponents (outside of very specific circumstances)

Dislikes: Continuing a battle after it's won, greed, appealing to an enemy's temptations to manipulate them, exceedingly happy couples (will not admit this last one)

Talent: Timing in battle

Natural Enemy: Lehel

Attribute: Human

Armament: Mount, miscellaneous melee weapons

Catalyst: Any heavily armoured means of locomotion that can be piloted by a human, as well as a sarcophagus

Class Skills

Personal Skills

Noble Phantasm

Lore

Personality

Interactions

Notes

**realcasually** · April 30th, 2021, 04:48 PM

Originally Posted by BnEl15

Newton: 0/10 no Okabe fc. Seriously though, I love how you managed to completely flesh out the dynamics between him and Hooke, which I largely left out in her sheet, down to that synchronizable NP. Their interchangeable boke-tsukkomi routines would be amusing to see in a story, as you've demonstrated here. Amazing work, man. It's always an honor to be able to inspire another great sheet.

On this particular one, your praise is the one that matters the most to me. I'm glad you like it. And I'll defend this FC with my dying breath, it's got the long white hair, the fancy clothes, the magic hands, the absolute 'mad science' look, Add is PERFECT.

Honestly? the NP thing was COMPLETELY unintentional. That last part was added WAY after the rest of it when I realised how accidentally perfect I'd left the hook for it.

**Justiciar Hux** · April 30th, 2021, 05:53 PM

There is no end to the crimes of mankind.
Humanity will always oppose itself.
Humanity will always destroy itself.
Humanity never changes.

Their knees will always bend to the conquerors.
Their blood will always spill to the warriors.
Their bodies will always wither from hunger.
Their lives will always be consumed by death.
They will always fumble for prosperity.
They will always crumble in stagnation.
In seas of blue and green will they drown.

You will gutter.
You will choke.
You will drown.
Your faces will always be pale.
Your faces will always reflect sin.
You are obscene as cancer.
You are bitter as cud.

Arrows will shoot the undefended back.
Wings will fly the war banners.
Hearts will dedicate themselves to death.
Requiems will sing out too late.
Corpses will litter the conqueror's path.
Humans--

Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori?

How sweet and fitting is it, to die for the Fatherland?

Second Seal Dilation Operation Complete
Class: Rider
Alternate Classes: None.
True Name: None.
Gender: Conceptually lacks any such state.
Alignment: True Neutral
Attribute: Heaven (?)
Height: Variable.
Weight: Variable.
Source: The Bible.

Parameters
Strength: Variable.
Endurance: Variable.
Agility: Variable.
Mana: C
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: EX

Identity

da Vinci: Master! Get out NOW!
Ritsuka: It's... a red mist?
da Vinci: Do not let it touch you! Get out NOW. That's an order!
Holmes: ... Interesting.
Goredolf: Is now really the time, Holmes?
Holmes: If I might ask for some time to observe it, da Vinci? Once Ritsuka is out of the room, of course.
da Vinci: Sure, but I don't know what you'll obtain that its profile won't tell us.
Holmes: Call it a hunch.

A Bow of Remembrance

Class Skills

Ritsuka: Geez. I think I like Enki a lot more than them. He's way more fun.
Iskandar: That's a truly treacherous foe, isn't it, Master?
Ritsuka: Eh?
Alexander: I think I can translate what the big lug here would say. The fact that this Red Rider goes off of everyone's ability to feel impulsive violence, to engage others in a battle for your beliefs, even if it's a war of words... that's what makes it threatening. There's nothing worse than an enemy who always holds advantage. That's why the King of Heroes is such a menace. This thing holds advantage even against him. Doesn't that send shivers up your spine, Master?

Banner of War

Personal Skills

da Vinci: And there we have it. We can't let it out of its little box.
Ritsuka: Da Vinci, I understand the problems it could cause, but shouldn't we at least try to talk?
████ ████████: Sure you can! No Mad Enhancement, so you can get into their mind easily, as long as you speak their language.
Holmes: Why am I unsurprised that someone new shows up mid-conversation?
████ ████████: I'm just a passing magus, don't worry too much about it.
Ritsuka: Even if it doesn't operate on human logic, you can communicate?
████ ████████: Sure! You're doing it right now. In principle, there's no reason why you couldn't do the same with Super Sword Soul! It might be a different question if it was Godzilla or Ghidorah, but I'm sure you of all people could manage those as well. Well, I think I can hear my teacher calling. Maybe I'll be back some other time? Oh! I'll bring

le Chien

my dog

along, he'd love your scent! Well, seeya!
Risuka: ... My scent?
Holmes: Regardless, I believe it's prudent that Mr. Fujimaru never comes into contact with Rider directly. It would be most unwise to lose our most valuable asset.

Sell Thy Heart

Noble Phantasms

Rest in Peace

Author Notes

**RoydGolden** · April 30th, 2021, 06:52 PM

Getting major Attack On Titan vibes from the "war poetry" here. Was that an inspiration perchance? Overall this is a pretty solid sheet, and the flavor you put into the execution (the dialogue-snippets and poetry) helps set it apart from other ones with a similar concept (the "Nameless Soldier/Embodiment of War being an idea I've seen used a few times here). I wonder if its Ceaseless World Skill means that Rider could theoretically be defeated if all opponents in the Grail War stop giving any hostility to "feed" it (a la Azrael in Blazblue) or if something like Jeanne's exorcism of Jack the Ripper from Apocrypha could work that's technically a "blessing" rather than an "attack".

**DelRey** · April 30th, 2021, 06:55 PM

Wow.
Too much input.
Cant comprehend this amount of talent.

Newton: Mad Maniac Newton in the house. His NP is so weird, but so unique and powerful, yet still one knows how one could counter it in the best scenarios. That is what makes interesting NP. Really cool kit concept. The FC remembers me of that evil yugioh guy and despite that, i read his lines in a weird old grampa voice.

War: U sick freak made ALL the poetry? I randomly googled passages to see if you copy pasted them from somewhere, then i thought you translated some asian ones, then i read "I was inspired by war poetry, so I decided to add poems all throughout the sheet." and thought, knew it, he used some he read.
"Big, big mistake because man did it take a while to make.... those."
Literal kekwait moment (RIP Risitas)
And then you end of with a hint you are a german speaker as well.

The sheet itself, besides the cool poetry, is cool and broken as suspected. The idea of Red Rider being a sword or them possessing the master or host is nothing new here, but damn the presentation just elevates the whole thing

Dammit, cant believe I belong to your ranks, guys. I need to step up my game.

Edit: I think the only way to Kill Red Rider is a combination of a Reality Marble Phantasm, that simulates a world without human and a non-human combatant that has attacks that would be strong enough to eradicate it with 'kindness', similar how vampire bites are considered. I wonder how Sun Tzu would handle Red Rider. And who was the random guy with the dog?

**Kabalisto Koga** · April 30th, 2021, 07:27 PM

Sorry one Question how did you (Morg and Realcasually) did you made the Parameter counter ? Look admittedly stylish?

**Justiciar Hux** · April 30th, 2021, 08:31 PM

Royd:
I've been had! Someone saw the inspiration behind each poem!
But yes, I did indeed draw upon Feuerrotter Pfeil und Bogen, Die Flügel der Freiheit, Opfert euer Herzen, and Requiem der Morgenröte for the main four poems. Not enough to be just a copy-paste, but enough that it's visible.

Rey:
As said above, while inspired by other works, I did indeed write those all of my own power. Naturally, it's taken quite a hit on my energy reserves, but I'll recoup soon enough. As for Sun Tzu... well, any of the master tacticians in combination with Red Rider would be a terrible sight to behold.

The guy with a dog is just a wandering Magus from the Clock Tower, though you might find yourself feeling quite exhausted if you try to figure out who he is.

Beating War:
Certainly, non-attack-based methods could work, but something like Nightingale's Noble Phantasm is their natural counter.
If the main body was affected by Nightingale's anti-violence field, you'd find that it would collapse and die rapidly due to a conceptual rejection.
But of course, that's not an exhaustive list, but the general idea is like the situation with Angra after the Third Grail War; he corrupted the Grail irrevocably. Rider would have to be pretty unlucky to strike a Grail War with someone who can completely eradicate them in it, but that's just the sort of upset that could happen in a Grail War too.

**the god of world-0** · April 30th, 2021, 08:46 PM

"I am the Servant Lancer. Say, Master, how would you rate your own abilities?"

Class: Lancer
Alignment: Neutral/Evil
Region: Italy
Height: 173cm
Weight: 60kg
Likes: Power, respect, luxury
Dislikes: Disrespect, gossip, goody-two-shoes
Talent: Lying, bribing
Armaments: Spear
Natural Enemy: Jeanne d'Arc, Shirou Amakusa Tokisada

Stats

Str: C
End: C
Agi: C
Mna: B
Lck: D
NP: A

Skills

Noble Phantasm

Background

Personality

**Cursed by Fortuna** · April 30th, 2021, 11:32 PM

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**realcasually** · May 1st, 2021, 02:14 AM

Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga

Sorry one Question how did you (Morg and Realcasually) did you made the Parameter counter ? Look admittedly stylish?

Just... insert pictures? It's literally that simple, I don't understand the question.

**Morg van Destro** · May 1st, 2021, 05:13 AM

Summer may be a month away, but I honestly can't contain him any longer. I'll get a better look at all the sheets that came out today after I get some shut-eye.

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Class: Summer Rider
Other Classes: Archer, Saber, Berserker
True Name: John ‘Mad Jack’ Churchill
Alignment: 'Mad' Neutral
Place of Origin: Colombo, British Ceylon
Height: 182 cm.
Weight: 69 kilo.
Likes: Beach warfare. Competition. Excitement.
Dislikes: Boredom. Sunbathing.
Natural Enemy: Mordred

Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: A
MGI: E
LCK: A
NP: A

Class Skills:
Surfing (M):
A Skill with the impossible rank of M, this Riding allows him to ride surfboards with expertise far exceeding human capabilities. It is equivalent to an EX-ranking, allowing him to steal and ride the surfboards of others and even ride Phantasmal Boards with little effort.

Independent Manifestation (B):
It is unknown how Rider acquired this Skill nor how he was given such a high rank. When asked, he simply says “I was really missing the beach. The sun in the sky, wind in your face, riding across the rushing waves. So, here I am.”

Personal Skills:
Properly Dressed (Summer) (A):
"Any officer who goes to the beach without his surfboard is improperly dressed."

His own personal belief warped to fit his current summoning, he gains two ranks to his Strength and Agility when in possession of a surfboard.

Beach Crisis (EX):
A man that makes a scene wherever he goes, his mere presence calls the attention of everyone on the beach particularly when he first manifests as he is in full military regalia. Even after taking on more appropriate beachwear, people can’t help themselves but be drawn into the ‘madness’ that seems to follow in his wake.

Pioneer of the Surf (D):
A Skill given to surfers who have surfed where none have surfed before.

Having been the first to surf the River Severn, Rider has been given this Skill at a low rank to exemplify this. While it is not enough to make the unsurfable surfable, it does make the unsurfable have a possibility to be surfed, which is all Rider needs.

Noble Phantasm
Mad Jack: Surfing till the Joy has Faded (C)
Anti-Mind
This Noble Phantasm is the manifestation of his reputation and the perceptions others had of him during his military career adapted for his beach ventures.

A madman that rushes into the surf without a hint of fear, shame, or restraint. A fervor that is unmatched, and, if it is, it won’t be for long. He empowers and applies positive buffs to all Summer or Swimsuit, regardless of their allegiance while applying intimidation, fear, and a sense of embarrassment to everyone else. He doesn’t mind his opponents gaining benefits from the first half of his Noble Phantasm though. Just makes things more interesting.

The Severn Bore: Rolling against the Flow (B)
Anti-Wave
The fourteen-foot-long surfboard Rider made in life given the name of his most well-known feat while riding it.

Acting as his mount and also a conceptual substitute for the outdated yet effective weaponry he used in life, this board breaks free from typical conventions by flexing the definition of “what counts as a wave” to its breaking point.

“Is not the air full of ‘waves’? When the ground shakes, are not ‘waves’ created? Did you know there are waves in space?”

It’s this honestly contrived logic Rider uses to justify using his board to travel through the air or anywhere else he happens to be using it. Thusly, anything he defines as a ‘wave’, even an attack, is something he can surf.

To further compound the ridiculousness, there is a distinct possibility his board has a mind of its own, but proof of this is flimsy at best. When asked, Rider simply shrugs and says it hardly matters. So long as it allows him to enjoy the beach, it could want to destroy the world.

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**DelRey** · May 1st, 2021, 05:46 AM

Wonderful, i can imagine how he uses his board sometimes to bonk others in combat. Or how some servant uses a wave based Novle Phantasm, sure to eradicate the enemy and he just rides on it, having a good time.
Especially the latest Newton sheet "Havent you heard of Gravitational Waves, old man? Keep up with the times!"
I keep him in mind when i do my summer servants

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