Create-A-Servant 3

**sentence** · September 3rd, 2021, 07:40 PM

Who do you think would be better host for Altrouge if not Raikou?

What do skills do I guess should be obvious from lore? Contracts is reference to contract with Zepia in MB, and Luminous Body shows in Tsukihime Remake.

**AAM1232** · September 3rd, 2021, 07:55 PM

It's Altrouge, my bad for misreading. The point still stands that Raikou is hardly the ideal candidate for a Pseudo (unlike Lakshmibai). Why not just make an actual Altrouge Servant? (Assuming that's the goal.) With a more well written sheet overall? You haven't really made much of an effort to make a proper connection between the 2 and the rest of the profile is not very interesting.

**BnEl15** · September 4th, 2021, 01:17 PM

Top-level creator's note

Lancer of Untainted ChivalryFaker of Questionable Chivalry

-- The Noblest of the Round ---- The Hero Without Hang-Ups --

"Greetings, you must be my Master, yes? Servant Lancer, Sir Lancelot du Lac, at your service. Rejoice, for you have summoned the most skilled and most virtuous knight among the Round Table! In the name of my compatriots, and the Once and Future King, I vow to lend my lance to your-"
"..."
"Oh? What's with the confused look? Eh? Out of character? Me? ...I have no idea what you're talking about, but if that's what you think, allow me to start over from the beginning."
"..."
"Right, from the top now, ahem... GRRRR... AAAARRRTHUUUUUU- Cough, cough, hack! Ahem, my apologies, my Madness Enhancement does not seem to function properly in this particular summoning. Let's turn it off, shall we? For the sake of my poor throat."

Source

"Do I regret my actions from back then? No, why would I? The fall of Camelot was a terrible thing, but it's not something I would endlessly torture myself over. Er, I mean, not under this particular Class, at least! The fleetingness of life is something to be celebrated, not mourned over!"

Ascension 2

Ascension 3

Final Ascension

Class: LancerFaker
Other Classes: Saber, Berserker, RiderSaber, Lancer, Rider
True Name: Lancelot (Alter)Sir Lanzelet
Alignment: Chaotic EvilChaotic Neutral
Origin: Arthurian mythos, the Matter of FranceArthurian mythos, German literature

Parameters:

STR: B
END: B
AGI: A
MGI: B
LCK: E
NP: A

Likes: His King
Dislikes: Himself
Talent: Jousting, swordmanship
Natural Enemy: Arthur Pendragon, Guinevere
Armament: Horse, jousting lance, Arondight(?)
Catalyst: Shard of the round table (small chance)

Class Skills

Magic Resistance (B)

Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancels spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected.

Riding (B)

An ability denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. Despite being summoned as a Lancer, his feats in riding and jousting is so legendary that he retains this Skill.

Personal Skills

Knight of the Lake (A)

Lancer was raised from infancy by the Lady of the Lake. Due to that, he is constantly affected by her blessing. Using this Skill, he is able to temporarily add a positive modifier to any parameter other than LCK (substantially doubling it).

Eternal Arms Mastery (A+)

Mastership of combat arts has reached the point of being said to be unrivaled in one's era. By complete the merging of mind, body, and technique, it is possible to make use of full fighting skills even when under the influence of any sort of mental hindrance.

Protection of the Spirits (A+)

A blessing from Elementals; the capacity to increase one's Luck in dangerous situations. Activation is limited to battlefields, where it is possible to perform feats of arms.

Noble Phantasm(s)

Strike True, O' Unwavering Light of the Lake
Imitation Arondight

"All right, here we go! This spear may be nothing more than a pale imitation, but my resolve is ever true! With that alone, I shall strike you down! Pierce through, Imitation Arondight!"

Source

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: B
Range: 1-5
Max Targets: 1 person

The Holy Sword Arondight, repurposed into a jousting lance to fit the Lancer-Class Lancelot (Alter)... or so it may seem. In truth, there was only one true Arondight, wielded by the one and only Sir Lancelot of the Round Table. This nameless lance is simply another weapon gifted to Faker from the Lady of the Lake made from leftover magical energy after forging the legendary blade. In a sense, it is not "an ultimate weapon bestowed upon a legendary hero" but more akin to "a consolation prize gifted to a runner-up", as Faker puts it himself.

At first glance, this lance is not too different from the true Arondight. Its power certainly pales in comparison certainly pales in comparison to the original, not to mention Faker wields it in a completely different manner when compared to his cousin, but overall, the lance still shares several similar attributes with the blade. For example, holding it increases all of Faker's parameters by one rank. Faker could also overcharge this lance with mana to increase its attack power, during which the lance would emit a beautiful blue light, similar to sunlight reflected upon a lake's surface.

That's where the similarities end, though. Due to the fundamental differences between Faker's legend with that of his cousin's, this lance possesses one more effect that even the true Arondight does not. Unlike Lancelot, whose life was burdened by tragedy and regret, Faker never experienced such things. He went through his fair share of adventures, yet he never lost anything, and his resolve never once wavered. Simply put, anything he sets his mind out to do, he will accomplish it, one way or another.

Reflecting his sheer determination and unwavering resolve, this lance acquired another effect. Upon unleashing its True Name while having a single target in mind, the lance would release magical energy in the form of "strings" that relentlessly pursues the target in question. Upon contact, these strings would powerfully bind the target in place. Furthermore, it also cancels out various forms of defensive magecraft. Essentially, it creates "the most optimal opportunity with which the target could be struck by the lance", regardless of the target's defenses. While it does not possess the ability to alter causality, a high amount of agility and/or luck is still required to outmaneuver these strings. Failing that, one would require a defensive measure that does not rely on mana to avoid the full brunt of the following lance attack.

Disrupting Faker's thought process enough to make him question his own actions could also cancel out these strings entirely, though doing that would would be much easier said than done, considering the effects of Krisenloser Held, as well as Faker's general uncaring attitude towards complex moral dilemmas.

Description

Lancer's True Name is Sir Lancelot... or so he says. The Lancer-Class seems to embody the knight's absolute worst aspects. Here, instead of the stalwart Knight of the Round Table or the raging madman burdened by regrets, you have a cynical, narcissistic knight who openly mocks the principles of chivalry, while remaining completely unrepentant on the topic of his past mistakes.

Having had his reputation tarnished by countless "Sir Lances-a-Lot-of-women" jokes, this Lancelot has given up on defending himself and instead embraces his new reputation without question, as a scummy, lecherous playboy who flirts with any women regardless of their marital status. At this point, even the name Guinevere does not seem to ring a bell to him, as he claims that he's bedded so many women that you can't expect him to remember all of their names. Furthermore, when questioned on his own feelings regarding the fall of Camelot, Lancer simply laughs it off, claiming that "So long as the King and her knights remained who they are, it was always fated to fall, one way or another; a single affair wouldn't change that".

A completely unrepentant villain who staunchly opposes the ideals of chivalry, one who blamed the fall of Camelot on everyone but himself. That is the true nature of Lancelot (Alter).

...Yet occasionally, one may notice small inconsistencies in his character. For one, his claims of not remembering Guinevere and not having any involvement in the fall of Camelot sounded genuine. Too genuine, in fact. As if he truly has no idea what he's talking about. One can only wonder why that is the case.Faker's True Name is Sir Lanzelet, a character from an ancient collection of German poems, thought to be one of the earliest iterations of the legend of Sir Lancelot of the Knights of the Round Table. In truth, despite the similar-sounding name and (arguably) identical visage, Faker was a distant cousin of the true Sir Lancelot.

For a time, Faker served under King Arthur alongside the rest of the Knights of the Round Table. However, compared to big names such as Sir Tristan, Sir Gawain, and his more famous cousin, Faker was, for lack of a better word, a completely inconsequential background character. Sure, he went on his own epic adventures, but aside from several instances of switching places with Lancelot during certain errands (arguably the only reason he qualifies as a true Heroic Spirit instead of manifesting as a Phantom or simply as a different aspect of Lancelot's character), he was largely absent from Camelot during the turbulent period which culminated in its fall.

Having lived under Lancelot's shadow for almost his entire life, Faker has developed something of an antipathy towards the ideals of knighthood and chivalry, which Arthur, Lancelot, and the other knights supposedly represents. He acknowledges that there are some good in their ideals, but binding oneself to lofty ideals of chivalry for an entire lifetime would only end poorly for everyone involved. The fall of Camelot only strengthened this belief, as he would sometimes rant on how the tragedy could have been averted if everyone involved just bothered to communicate their differences and be more honest to themselves and others. Therefore, instead of abiding by the principles of chivalry, Faker strives to seek his own happiness through his own means. To this end, he usually stays away from the complicated political or moral issues and instead prefers to "help only those he feels like helping", with no care for any deeper implications of his own actions, for better or worse.

Most of the time, Faker treats his summoning as an opportunity to kick back and indulge himself in his womanizing hobbies. Of course, his overconfidence and somewhat self-righteous pride ensures that his advances are unreciprocrated most of the time, not to mention his wife would purposefully sabotage the effects of Affection of the Enchantress if he ever goes too far All in all, despite his scummy, freewheeling attitude, Faker does genuinely love his wife. According to him, he finds her attempts to "bring him back to his senses" (through slapstick levels of sabotage) to be a semi-wholesome routine he could get behind. Honestly, he's just astounded that a woman actually bothered remember his name and love him as himself, instead of "that one background character who happened to be Sir Lancelot's cousin". He would never admit to these feelings, though, as doing so would harm his image as a casanova.

There are two wishes that Faker possesses as a Servant; the first is for the world to recognize who he really is, to be celebrated as his own person instead of a modified retelling of Lancelot's legend. The second wish, however, is one that even a Holy Grail could not fulfill. It is the very reason why he bothered to answer the summoning at all. An opportunity to "play pretend" and act out the duties of a true knight, like his cousin did back then. While he is still fundamentally opposed to the ideals of chivalry, perhaps by playing the part, he could finally understand Lancelot's perspective on the whole matter, and why he continued to insist on upholding these principles despite all the pain and loss it brought him.

Lore

Sir Lancelot is a character in some versions of Arthurian legend, where he is typically depicted as King Arthur's close companion and one of the greatest Knights of the Round Table. In the French-inspired Arthurian chivalric romance tradition, Lancelot is the orphaned son of King Ban of the lost kingdom of Benwick, raised in the fairy realm by the Lady of the Lake. A hero of many battles, quests and tournaments, and famed as a nearly unrivalled swordsman and jouster, Lancelot becomes the lord of Joyous Gard and personal champion of Arthur's wife Queen Guinevere. But when his adulterous affair with Guinevere is discovered, it causes a civil war that is exploited by Mordred to end Arthur's kingdom.In European (especially German) literature, Sir Lanzelet is commonly thought to be an early iteration of the legend of Sir Lancelot, one without the latter's tragic romance aspect (popularized by Sir Thomas Malory). A simple, feel-good hero who accomplished everything he set out to do without ever losing anything of value. A true "hero without hang-ups". The truth, however, is somewhat more complicated...

Sir Lanzelet was a hero. That much was true. He won jousting matches, slayed monsters, defeated a rampaging dragon, and found love... many, many times throughout his life. However, in the larger scheme of things... he was no one. A minor character that no one in Camelot had ever heard of. Sure, he may be a Knight of the Round Table, but he was effectively "obscure background knight #357". He was extremely forgettable, and if it weren't for his distant connection with his cousin, Sir Lancelot, one of the finest knights among the Round, history would have most likely forgotten him entirely. Then again, a minor character of one work could be the main character of another. It's all a matter of perspective...

Act 1: The Envious Knight

Lanzelet (not Lancelot) was born as the son of King Pant of Gennewis (not Ban, completely different people here) and Queen Elaine (this is purely a coincidence, trust me :nobunobu:). A wise and just King, Pant treated his people equally. He treated nobles the same way he treated commoners, and the common folk rejoiced under his rule. Unfortunately, this made him unpopular with the nobles, who schemed behind his back. Conspiracies brewed underneath the kingdom's peaceful exterior, and it finally erupted one fateful night, when the nobles staged a coup during a party thrown by the King. The nobles hired an army of bandits and mercenaries, and they slaughtered everyone in the castle, including the King. The only survivors were the Queen, and the infant Lanzelet, who managed to hide from their pursuers. Fearing that the kingdom was no longer safe, the Queen left, taking her son with him. Remembering a message from her late husband should her son's life be in danger, she left him under the care of the Lady of the Lake, believing that he's no longer safe with her.

It was during this time that Lanzelet first encountered his distant cousin; Lancelot, a few years his senior. For years, the two grew up together, and while Lanzelet looked up to his cousin as a talented elder brother figure, a part of him also envied the older boy. How the Lady of the Lake would praise him for everything he could most certainly do, how she gave him the legendary sword Arondight, how she personally accompanied him to Camelot to be knighted in service of King Arthur... Lanzelet cannot help but think that he had always been the second-favorite, no matter how much his mother figure tried to convince him otherwise. Raring to prove himself, he expressed his wishes to follow his cousin to Camelot in search of glory. The Lady of the Lake rejected his wish. Lanzelet was an exceptional knight in his own right, but according to her, he was not ready for what lies ahead. Frustrated, Lanzelet decided to seek glory elsewhere, much to the Lady's disapproval. After a heated argument, the Lady of the Lake finally relented. She gave Lanzelet a powerful lance as a gift to protect him on his journey. Before he set out, the Lady of the Lake warned him one more time on how he wasn't ready for Camelot just yet. Lanzelet reluctantly agreed, and promised to head elsewhere to hone his skills first.

And so Lanzelet spent the next few years roaming the countryside, causing mischief and helping others in equal measure, in his efforts to "prove himself". One of his earliest escapades happened when he fought the bandit leader Galandreiz. He had slept with the bandit's daughter one night when her father caught him in the act. Lanzelet killed Galandreiz in the ensuing brawl, and it wasn't until afterwards that he found out that he had unwittingly killed a notorious criminal (he initially thought of Galandreiz as a simple woodsman), earning him praise from the townspeople. Shrugging off this coincidence, Lanzelet proceeded to marry Galandreiz's daughter and briefly served as a lord before remembering that his journey was far from over.

Lanzelet's next escapade happened in the region of Limors, where he angered the local Lord Linier of Limors. The Lord threw him into a dungeon before he was brought to a battlefield filled with giants, lions, and phantasmal beasts, which he easily managed to defeat. Afterwards, he killed Lord Linier in a duel, earned praises from the people of the region (Lord Linier just happened to be an oppressive tyrant, who knew, right?), married his niece, Ade, without divorcing his previous wife, and briefly served as a lord of Limors (you... probably have some idea where this is going by now).

Lanzelet's third escapade happened not long after, when he went into the Castle of the Dead in pursuit of a villainous knight named Iweret. The castle held a strange power to invert one's mental state, turning courage into cowardice and vice-versa. Of course, as you would have expected by now, this did not impede Lanzelet in the slightest. He killed Iweret and married his niece, the enchantress Sibyl. And so the glorious tale of Lanzelet continues.

Act 2: The Unmemorable Knight

Lanzelet's first encounter with the Round happened during a friendly jousting match in the region of Djofle. There, he fought Sir Walwein, a Knight of the Round Table. He emerged victorious, and it was here that rumors of an exceptionally skilled wandering knight reached the court of King Arthur. Not long after, Lanzelet received a formal invitation to join the esteemed Round Table, which he finally accepted, believing himself to be ready. As he made his way to Camelot, he came across a lord abducting a damsel in distress. Believing that there was no harm in doing another good deed, he pursued the lord and defeated him in his castle. Just when he was about to do his... usual-routine-after-defeating-an-evil-guy-who-happened-to-be-related-to-a-hot-chick, another armored knight burst into the room, claiming that he was sent by the King to rescue the damsel in question. Lanzelet thought that this knight's voice sounded familiar, and sure enough, when the knight took off his helmet, Lanzelet saw the face of his cousin, Lancelot. There, Lancelot revealed that the damsel in question was Lady Guinevere, the Queen of Camelot, and he had been tasked by the King to save her from her latest abduction attempt. As Lanzelet struggled to process all of this, an army of knights barged into the room, following Lancelot. Seeing the scene before him, Lanzelet was sure that this would be his big break; he was just about to proudly display his feat before them... only for the knights to brush him off instead, and congratulate Lancelot for saving the Queen. Stunned, Lancelot awkwardly tried to deny their praises, only for them to praise him further for his modesty. Seeing his efforts completely unacknowledged, Lanzelet slipped out of the overenthusiastic crowd. In his anger, he scrapped the formal invitation and decided to apply for the knights through the old-fashioned way, in an attempt to prove that he too could rise through the ranks and become just as famous as his cousin.

After some selection process, Lanzelet was finally knighted under Arthur's minor Round Table. He was excited to finally prove himself... only for him to find out that things really weren't that different. The Minor Table hardly ever dealt with the more serious crises plaguing the kingdom. At best, they were occasionally invited to some important meetings, but even there, no one remembered Lanzelet beyond "that one guy who claims to be Sir Lancelot's cousin". Similarly, the only way he could gain some acknowledgement aside from bragging about how he was once raised alongside Sir Lancelot. Every praise and adoring fangirls he received, he received only due to this singular connection.

At the same time, Lancelot continued to garner fame as one of the finest knights of the Round Table. Lanzelet knew that it wouldn't be right for him to blame Lancelot entirely for his deep-seated feelings of envy. At times, Lancelot even tried his best to console him during his off-days, and the two embarked on minor quests together. Nonetheless, a part of Lanzelet gradually realized how Camelot might not be the right place for him after all. Besides, the knights' overly-uptight attitude and single-minded devotion to the concept of "chivalry", for better or worse, never really sat right with him. At least, that was how Lanzelet rationalized his next decision...

The fateful day finally arrived. Queen Guinevere had once again gotten herself abducted, this time by the evil prince Maleagant. Sir Lancelot valiantly volunteered to lead the search party, accompanied by Sir Gawain. Had Sir Lanzelet participated in this quest, his story would have most likely ended in tragedy as Camelot fell. However, standing before this crossroad, Lanzelet chose another option. He pettily refused to take part, not wanting another repeat of the last "Guinevere incident". Surely there were many more knights better suited for the quest than him. Besides, even if he were to somehow accomplish some great feat there, the others would most likely attribute his feats to the legendary Sir Lancelot once again. Therefore, what was the point of him being there?

"Today would be the day", Lanzelet thought to himself. He finally resolved to cut open his own path and make a name for himself, as the one and only Sir Lanzelet. As the knights headed for Maleagant's castle, Lanzelet rode for the opposite direction, once again becoming a wandering knight. "This should be fine", he thought. "There are many ways for one to attain fame and acknowledgement, and being a knight is far from the only path to become a hero".

Act 3: The Wandering Knight

Not long after, Lanzelet found himself in yet another escapade. This time, he came across a village terrorized by a terrifying dragon. According to the villagers, the dragon had abducted the village lord's daughter and resided in a nearby cave. Fortunately, the dragon had yet to take any casualties, and the village had largely remained intact. Even so, the terrified villagers still believed that it was only a matter of time before the dragon would descend upon the helpless villagers to devour them. Accompanied by a group of angry villagers, Lanzelet set out to resolve this issue, armed with his trusty lance (No, not 'that' lance!). The group finally cornered the dragon inside its lair, and the villagers began taking out their torches and pitchforks. Oddly enough, on top of not destroying anything in the village, the dragon did not fight back as the villagers attacked it. Lanzelet was initially puzzled by this, until he noticed an oddly-shaped birthmark on the dragon's body. Recalling a conversation he had with the village chief, the knight finally put two and two together. Yet what could he do despite knowing the truth? He did not know any healing or purification spell, and it would be unlikely for the villagers to believe him if he told them the truth anyway. Racking his brain for answers, Lanzelet finally recalled an old story that the Lady of the Lake once told him; a special blessing of sorts. And so he ran, pushing away the angry villagers before they could strike the killing blow. And then, the brave knight Lanzelet... kissed the dragon square on the lips, much to the surprise and confusion of everyone present. Sure enough, an otherworldly light shined upon the dragon, and it was revealed then that the dragon was actually the missing princess all along, having been inflicted by a terrible curse. As you'd have expected by now, Lanzelet married the princess and was made the new lord of the village, before continuing on with his journey.

Lanzelet's last major escapade happened when he was imprisoned by the Queen of Pluris, who demanded him to marry her. For once, Lanzelet was reluctant to do so, but the Queen insisted, claiming that despite his previous marriages, no one ever truly loved him like she does. To test this, the Queen held a competition to prove that she was her one and only love. She fashioned an enchanted cloak from the fairies, and the cloak could only fit someone who genuinely loves Lanzelet with all their heart. Many women applied for the competition, but none of them succeeded. The Queen was ready to gloat, until one woman appeared before her. It was Sibyl, Lanzelet's third wife. Using her own knowledge of magecraft, she cancelled the cloak's enchantments, creating the illusion that the cloak managed to fit her properly. It was here that Lanzelet finally realized that Sibyl was his one true love. Sure, she technically cheated the contest, but her sheer devotion to actually make an effort and cross an entire country for his sake, despite her number of suitors, really won him over. Together, the two defeated the enraged Queen before leaving the kingdom of Pluris.

Epilogue

Relationships

Bond CE

Extra

Creator's Note

**DelRey** · September 4th, 2021, 03:35 PM

Sir Lancelot (Alter)(Lily)(Summer) next pls

great use of LorenzChamp. Typical BnEl Servant, nice. I started reading on a bus and when I got the final ascension i let out a loud "pppfffttt" and had to look away in shame from the weird looks. Laughing in Germany is frowned upon as you know.
also Sir Lance-A-Lot-Of-Woman, nice. let the group of penis=lance jokers grow. Athena will gladly bonk them

**BnEl15** · September 4th, 2021, 03:41 PM

Originally Posted by DelRey

Sir Lancelot (Alter)(Lily)(Summer) next pls

great use of LorenzChamp. Typical BnEl Servant, nice. I started reading on a bus and when I got the final ascension i let out a loud "pppfffttt" and had to look away in shame from the weird looks. Laughing in Germany is frowned upon as you know.
also Sir Lance-A-Lot-Of-Woman, nice. let the group of penis=lance jokers grow. Athena will gladly bonk them

I owe the Lances-a-Lot-of-women joke to FGO's writing/localization team. Cleopatra said it in a Halloween event iirc

Speaking of FE3H, he also has a bit of Felix edge in him, though I'm holding back the rest of the edge for later

Also summer Lanzelet, huh... not a bad idea.

**BoktaiMoon** · September 4th, 2021, 10:02 PM

DID YOU FUCKERS MISS ME
Name: Bleda
Class: Rider
Origin: Hun Historical Record
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

STR: D
END: C
AGI: B
MAG: D
LCK: C

Ruler of Huns and elder sibling of the famed Atilla, at the death of their uncle Rugila, the siblings united the tribes and engaged war against Rome, after a treaty they turned against the Persian Empire for the next 5 years. Defeated in Armenia they returned to Roman soil and rampaged there accusing the Empire of sacking the Royal Hun Grave by Danube's North Bank, their defeat by the Persian Empire did little to blunt their fangs for again they were unmatched and the Roman Empire only survived by agreeing to extremely harsh demands. After such event it is said that Bleda died on a hunting trip, either by accident or Attila's hands and the rampaging on the Huns would only grow worse as if without Bleda's guidance they became nothing but starving wolves endlessly consuming everything without thought and control

In truth Atilla is not a human but a being spawned from a giant's corpse found by the huns, although she possessed a human appearance her emotionless personality that only gave way to destructive impulses was both a boon and curse to the Huns who used her against their enemies but always feared her. Bleda seeking to prove herself approached Altera and began to speak endlessly, as Altera did not lash out and simply listened, without understanding, the elders decided to make her Altera's 'sibling' (caretaker). Inclined to Bleda's words and emotions for some mysterious reason Altera backed Bleda's dreams of kingship and thus the tribes knelled.

Bleda can be said to be an individual who possess all the attributes for kingship except overwhelming strength, in exchange she possesses great ability in 'wielding' people understanding their goals, personalities and dreams and slightly changing her plans to make them go along with it better, but ultimately she only acts for 'herself'. Understanding that eventually the ways of the Huns would be destroyed if they did not change she began to speak of treaties and deals with foreign kingdoms, such thing was seen as cowardice and the elders acted behind her back by talking to Altera how Bleda was limiting her destruction and that one day Altera would be discarded as well, like the many warriors that died at the fight against Persia.

Altera killed Bleda, became 'King' (Puppet) and not even 5 years later she would die and the empire collapsed via in-fighting for inheritance

Skills

Riding (A+): King of Nomadic People who nearly lived as one with their horses and such beasts were objects of worship. As expected Bleda possesses a high ranking in this skill. A mixture of dominance and negotiation that creates a strange understanding and establishment of hierarchies even among non-humans. All vehicles and all creatures up to the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.

"Eh I had to deal with Altera's moods. Beasties are way easier to deal with hahahahahaha!"

Magic Resistance (C): Skill acquired over years of exposure to Altera's rampaging magical energy and following her into the battlefield but its not a taught skill simply endurance so she doesn't know how to deal with enemy magical energy beyond brute forcing it away or manipulating it by going with the flow

Personal Skills
Engraving Arrow (B): Although among warriors Bleda cannot said to be special at any way her incessant unbreakable spirit marching forward sinks deep into all of her actions. Perhaps it was because of this characteristic that she gained the attention of Altera, without words Bleda's intentions are obvious in all of her actions a strange charisma that appeals to instinct alone and wards against mental corruption

"Eh? Scary. Sure Altera was scary all gloom and glare but we Huns faced a lot of scary shit, ya just get used to it I'd guess.....they didn't get used to it....Ah well whatever"

Crest of Stars (False) (A): Unique pattern mimicked after Altera's. Not a work of magecraft or blessings from a distant god but simply a whimsy and desire to be alike. An oath of sisterhood made without words or thoughts from either side. Bleda can temporarily attack as if she were Altera herself, but as she is ultimately human the body will crumble if she keeps at it for long or uses it repeatedly with little rest. A clumsy little sister gives blessings but even far away she is still to much of a brute

Military Tactics (B): Taking towns is something 'simple' to do. Their rampage would only end at the doors of Constantinople where surrender was given and a treaty was made. Someone who begins destruction by gnawing at the weakest link to provoke a chain reaction instead of achieving glory by brute forcing victory and facing the enemy at their strongest. A mindset closer to subversive activities but as the ways of the Huns did not allow it and Altera would rampage on her lonesome Bleda had to change mentality and tactics as well

Noble Phantasm

**Vance** · September 4th, 2021, 11:45 PM

Bleda: I was mostly observing passively throughout the day. But this sheet caught my attention, especially since I made a Bleda quite some time ago. This Bleda seems more like a sibling to Altera than mine ever was. And I like the noble phantasms, specifically T'angri Khan. Loved the symbolism it presents, and the function of it.

**Morg van Destro** · September 5th, 2021, 01:37 AM

Sir Lanzelet: You are not forgiven, for you have offended me on fundamental level. You have committed the crime of doing something I never would have thought to. You make me sick.
This guy's kinda a pathetic tool, isn't he? He knows nothing of real struggle, it's his world and he has to share it with everyone else, and it's exactly this self-centered nature that makes him such a background character. I can't even really buy some of the slightly more emotional lines in Relationships or implications in Craft Essence because of how his story unfolds and is described in, well, Description. The emotional depth implied in them doesn't feel genuine from the character, even if it can be argued to have a basis.
Some fun joke Skills. Kinda makes me thing of the TAIGA Servant I had an idea for a long while ago. Gen has gone on record saying she has EX Luck, so that was a fun idea to play around with. Saw the Graham Chapman dialog, and remembered loving that Servant when I first saw it.
I like him. I just kinda wish you had gone full bore on making him a complete egotist, though I'm one to talk with Edern.

Oh, and for anyone wondering where I've been, just slowly dying inside. Thing about that is I'll eventually rise from the grave, but, until then, the dirt is comforting.

**Kamera** · September 5th, 2021, 10:45 AM

The greatest scourge Rome faced were not the Barbarians at its gates -- but the ones within.

Class: Saber
True Name: Flavius Aetius
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Origin: Historical Facts and Rumors
Attribute: Man

A military commander considered to be the most powerful man in the Western Roman Empire during the last phase of its decline and fall. He was most famously known for defeating Attila the Hun at the Battle of Catalaunian Fields, significantly slowing down the rampage of the destruction incarnate, and spared Rome from another sack -- if only for a few more years.

His achievements almost saved the collapsing empire from much of its existential threats, but in the end he was only rewarded with the most anticlimactic demise -- executed by an envious Emperor. With his death, Rome once again, for the last time, spiralled down into decay.

Parameters:
STR: B
END: A
AGI: B
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: B

Class Skills:
Riding: A
Can ride any and all mounts and vehicles, with the exception of Phantasmal Species and Divine Beasts. This is the skill Saber learned from his father, a Scythian who was the Magister Equitum (Master of the Cavalry) of the Roman army, and the fact that he grew up among the Huns, the world’s best horsemen of the time.

Magic Resistance: B
Cancel spells with chants below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected. It seems that this rank is received not from Saber’s natural resilience, but a charm provided by Pope Leo the Great, whose intercession caused Attila to retreat from Italy.

Personal Skills:
Civilization Reinforcement: A
A subconscious instinct which imbues oneself and allies with a unique Anti-Purge defense, which can only display its true value when facing opponents that threaten the very concept of civilization itself. It is a blessing obtained for such achievements as “defending Rome from the Barbarian hordes”, and “defeating the Scourge of God”.

Taming of Destruction: A
A highly specific version of Hero Creation, devised for discipling and civilizing an entity known as destruction incarnate. It is a careful guidance and development meant to lessen the danger posed by a “threat to humanity”. It is a proof of an unique bond shared between Aetius and Attila, both outsiders raised within the Hunnic tribe.

Exemplifying the unique circumstances of the period, Aetius was sent at a young age as hostage to the court of Alaric the Visigoth, who had sacked Rome a few years earlier. Later, he was brought further east, to live with the Huns, and soon became close as family to them. That was when Aetius met her -- a woman wielding the Sword of the War God, a monster that knew only of destruction and combat.

For much of Aetius’ military career, there were little battles and campaigns where his Hunnic allies and friends did not take part. Throughout these wars, the young Attila was put to use as a weapon of mass destruction under the Roman banner. She was tempered to control her destructive urges and most importantly -- she was trained to become more human.

Noble Phantasms:
Ultimus Romanorum - Bellum
Twilight Soldiers of the Eternal Empire
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: C
The Last of the Romans. A title bestowed to various individuals throughout the later stages of Roman history. It signifies an individual who embodies the core concepts that represents “Roman values and strength”. It is said that with their death, it’s as if Rome lost a part of itself.

As a Noble Phantasm, these Roman values become conceptually embedded in their Saint Graph, and whatever object one grasps will be enhanced with such concept. In this case, what Aetius embodies as the last great military general of the Empire is the concept of “War” itself. While this Noble Phantasm is active, Aetius can access skill related to warfare at B or A rank proficiency. In addition --

Romae Photon Ray
Light of Civilization, War God’s Sword
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: A+
The Sword of Mars. Having become the embodiment of the concept of “War”, Aetius also receives access to the Authority of the War God. An identical Noble Phantasm as Teardrop Photon Ray. In essence, Aetius uses his own Saint Graph as a beacon to invoke an orbital strike from Mars to decimate an area. It is a recreation of the events that happened at the Battle of the Catalaunian Plains. By establishing a connection with Mars, Aetius turned Altera’s Photon Ray against herself, bringing down Mars’ light of authority to incapacitate the Scourge of God herself.

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That's Archer and Caster left before I'm finally free from this stupid self imposed Faceclaim challenge

**Vance** · September 5th, 2021, 05:33 PM

"Oi, oi. Show some respect, ya here? You summoned the charioteer of Cu Chulainn himself!"

True Name: Laeg
Class: Rider
Alt. Class: Faker, Lancer
Region: Ireland
Source: Celtic Mythology
Alignment: True Neutral
Armament: Chariot, Blades

Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Mana: D+
Luck: B

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance C
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

Riding -
This skill has been subsumed into King Of Charioteers.

Personal Skills:

Derisive Encouragement B+
A skill that acts as the crystallisation of the mocking words said to Cu Chulainn that spurred him into a berserker rage. When used it has a charisma-like effect on the target increasing morale but also has the chance of inputting the effects, both positive and negative, of Madness Enhancement so it can be a double edged sword. It is particularly effective towards individuals that have qualifications for the Berserker class.

King of Charioteers EX
Dubbed this as she was struck by the spear prophesied to kill a king. Serving as the personal charioteer to Cu Chulainn, she drove the Sickle Chariot that was harnessed to the two divine beasts, Liath Macha and Dub Sainglend. This skill combines both the effects of Riding and Territory Creation to allow Rider exceptional dominion over any vehicle or steed she puts herself upon. It is this skill that gives incredible synergy with The Sickle Chariot.

Battle Continuation C-
A Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. A spear meant to kill kings was taken to the chest but even then she was able to get her final words even if that was all that could be done.

Noble Phantasms:

The Sickle Chariot: Blades At All Corners Of The Wheel
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Army
The chariot driven by Rider. The noble phantasm that is the bread and butter of her legend. A chariot that holds blades upon blades within itself, connected to all corners of itself. This is due to the chariot, in truth, existing as a mobile armoury imbued with the concept of Hosting. Used across many battlefields, it has taken in all weapons of the users it had rendered deceased through being run over. Such weapons are added to the collective mass of blades and relocated to be among the many other weapons of fallen warriors. This includes Noble Phantasms that take form as weapons though their ranks will be degraded by two. Rider holds a special connection with the chariot, enabled through her King of Charioteers skill, that partially fuses her Saint Graph with it. This allows her to summon the various parts of the chariot including the taken blades due to being a host for them as well. This does create backlash when the chariot is destroyed, risking significant damage to her spirit origin.

Capaill Linn Liath: Blazing Mares Of The Morrigan
Rank: A
Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Army
Divine beasts given to Cu Chulainn by the goddess Macha (or Morrigan). The two horses are more akin to war machines with their ability to breath fire and cause up great clouds of debris by only trampling. Liath Macha, in particular, is said to have gone on a rampage, killing many warriors with his teeth and legs, after the death of his master before disappearing. It is a noble phantasm automatically invoked when the Sickle Chariot is summoned, for they are hosted by the vehicles, bound to it until its destruction.

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Personality

**RoydGolden** · September 5th, 2021, 06:53 PM

Laeg: I've heard several people talk of doing a sheet for this figure but always thought it'd end up too similar to Cu to be interesting. You've done a pretty good job fleshing her out though. I like that Derisive Encouragement is basically "tsundere: the Skill" where she insults her allies to motivate them to fight harder and her main NP is a cool twist on the "bladed chariot" concept.

**Kamera** · September 5th, 2021, 09:28 PM

Bleda, Aetius.. Is it Attila's birthday or something?

**the god of world-0** · September 6th, 2021, 03:02 PM

"Oh, Nice to meet you! I am his Majesty's Royal Wife, hope we get along together."

Class: Rider
Alignment: Lawful/Good
Region: Egypt
Height: 184cm
Weight: 68kg
Likes: Sunlight, flowers, her husband
Dislikes: Unnecessary violence, traitors, people who don't believe in love
Talent: Protecting, smiling
Armaments: Boat, claws
Natural Enemy: Her husband's enemies

Stats

Str: D
End: C
Agi: B
Mna: A
Lck: A
NP: A+

Skills

Noble Phantasm

The Boat of Million Years

Mandjet

Rank: Anti-Army, A+

The first of Rider's Noble Phantasm. One of the two ships used by the sun god Ra, to which Rider is allowed use by her Affection of the Sun(EX). Just like its sister

The Solar Ship of the Night Sky

Mandjet

, this Barque possesses the powers of "The Serpent That Slaughters Serpents", The Uraeus.

The ship flies autonomously, with Rider being able to control it from the ground and summon parts of it at will. It embodies the might of the sun, and the rays of concentrated heat and light burn not only the opponents but even the earth itself. The destructive power of this vessel is such that it is touted to be able to destroy all of Tokyo in a matter of hours.

Resting Place of Dazzling Beauty

Ta Set Neferu

Rank: Anti-Army, A+

Rider's second Noble Phantasm. The name refers to the famous "Valley of the Queens", the final resting place for the wives of the Pharaohs and a secret land consecrated to the goddess Hathor. It is a type of grand magecraft similar to a Reality Marble and an embodiment of Nefertari's radiance, which was at one point called "The one for whom the sun shines".

On the confines of this space, Rider is capable of manifesting a plethora of powers and blessings onto herself. Abilities such as flying through the air, incredible regeneration from even fatal wounds, knowledge of the position of everyone inside the boundary field, and even the skill to completely reshape the landscape.

The Eye of Ra

Ra Jtr

Rank: Anti-unit(Self), A+

The third and greatest of Rider's Noble Phantasm. In Egyptian mythology, the Goddess Hathor came into existence as the appeased form of the War Goddess Sekhmet, the Eye of Ra. As an avatar of Hathor, Rider can also manifest within her the Warrior aspect of this divine spirit to become an even more powerful heroic spirit.

When this Noble Phantasm is activated, Rider's Strength, Endurance, and Agility received a boost great enough for her to physically rival members of the Berserker Class, along with her nails extending into extremely sharp claws. However, Rider's personality suffers a drastic change, becoming violently aggressive in nature, which consequently causes her Manifestation of Beauty Skill to be temporarily sealed.

Background

Personality

**DelRey** · September 6th, 2021, 05:51 PM

There they walk. The many thousand
leaving homes, towards dear land's end.
On their path to their destination;
It is their duty, their determination.
The sand is dry, the sun burns in gleam,
a cooling shadow nowhere seen.
Their gait is heavy, their brow is shining,
eyes glaring towards a bright horizon.
With bricks and dust in their possession,
towards the Holy City walks the procession.
But all carried smiles, or so was it told…

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**Der Ritter** · September 6th, 2021, 06:21 PM

Appearance

Class: Saber
True Name: Chrysaor
Title: Prince of Demonic Beasts
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Region: Greece - Greek Mythology
Trait: Earth, Demonic, Humanoid, Weak to Enuma Elish

Parameters

STR: C
EDR: C
AGI: A+
MAG: D
LCK: E
NP: B

Magic Resistance: C

Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

Riding: B

Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.

Personal Skills

Spoiler:

Golden Rule (Body): A-

The lingering remains of the twin goddesses. Originally a composite skill that prevents alteration of the psyche or physical body.

Though he was undoubtedly born with a masculine form, he still bears some rank as a "perfected goddess from birth." Regardless of how much physical training he puts himself through, he always loses muscle mass if it exceeds what his family considers a proper figure.

A skill that would be a boon for someone who is attentive to their appearance, but is a pure demerit for one who tries to act as a warrior. As a result, a "-" is applied.

Child of the Sea God: C

In some legends, Chrysaor was born when the blood of the Gorgon mixed with sea foam, forming a union between the demonic beast and Poseidon. Others say they laid together as lovers, while another says she was a victim of Poseidon's lust.

A blessing that marks him as Poseidon's son gives him protection from attacks made by the sea. Additionally, as Poseidon is said to have sired many giants and heroes of great strength, even the status of an adopted child empowers Chrysaor and permanently increases his STR and EDR by one rank.

Armed Gorgon: C-A

A formal wear created from the tattered remains of fallen heroes and clothing that were meant for a goddess. A blind fold bearing the ability to act as Mystic Eye Killers. A torn up dress. Gauntlets that miraculously did not turn to stone. He didn't understand how these were supposed to look, so he cobbled them together into something that fit. The rank of the skill is affected by the quality of the material used. Bronze and iron give the lowest effect at C, while mystic silver and gold display the highest rank at A.

However, all that changes is the rank. No other benefits are observed.

By pure coincidence, it seems like he caused it to become a

divine battle dress

S*int Cl*th

that can generate magical energy from absorbing starlight… or something like that. By exploding that power, an emulation of the Mystic Eyes of Petrification, Cybele, becomes possible. This is represented as a beam that takes effect once it hits a target, restricting their movements.

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**asterism42** · September 6th, 2021, 07:01 PM

Mansa Musa was, I think, one of the very first sheets I ever did, maybe the actual first, and I do like to see him again.

very interesting figure from history and deserves to be more well known

**RoydGolden** · September 6th, 2021, 07:28 PM

Chrysaor: Interesting sheet with a well fleshed-out personality. I like how you hinted at other characters' personalities/natures through his like Callirhoe and Geryon. Out of curiosity, is "Mysterious Maid M" meant to be some other character of yours? I can't find anyone with that name in TM...

**Der Ritter** · September 6th, 2021, 07:47 PM

Originally Posted by RoydGolden

Chrysaor: Interesting sheet with a well fleshed-out personality. I like how you hinted at other characters' personalities/natures through his like Callirhoe and Geryon. Out of curiosity, is "Mysterious Maid M" meant to be some other character of yours? I can't find anyone with that name in TM...

I dunno what you're talking about, Mysterious Maid M is a perfectly ordinary maid who absolutely isn't a Heroic Spirit, swear on me madre.

I mean, does this look like some kind of relevant character to you?

**RoydGolden** · September 6th, 2021, 07:58 PM

Originally Posted by Der Ritter

I dunno what you're talking about, Mysterious Maid M is a perfectly ordinary maid who absolutely isn't a Heroic Spirit, swear on me madre.

I mean, does this look like some kind of relevant character to you?

The image isn't showing up for me so that question might be more mysterious than intended. That said, having given it a little thought my only guess is that she might be Mordred, using Chrysaor as a test-run to resolving her own mother-issues/sympathizing with him because they share similar issues. The forceful way of speaking could fit Mor and I have seen art of her in a maid-costume, though I don't know if it's ever been official.

**Der Ritter** · September 6th, 2021, 08:03 PM

Fucking wikia- okay, replaced it with a discord image, hopefully it shows up now.

Funny enough, I did consider that Chrysaor and Mordred would probably get along because of their parental issues, though I feel like that'd be something I'd actually have to write out instead of just leaving as a blurb in a sheet.

Likes	people, Islam, salt
Dislikes	impoliteness, greed
Talent	gifting
Natural Enemy	Gilgamesh, Jesse Livermore
Armament	gold dust, golden staff
Catalyst	Gold mined from the Mali Empire

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Class	Voyager
Alternative Classes	Rider
True Name	Mansa Musa
Aliases	Musa I, Kanku Musa, Golden Voyager
Origin	Mali Empire, Historical Fact
Height/Weight	179cm/71kg
Alignment	Neutral Good
Attribute	Human

*STR*	END	AGI	MAN	LCK
D	C	D	B	B