Oh. I'm so sorry for asking you to review them too much. I will look through the sheets and learn. Thank you for the comment.
Oh. I'm so sorry for asking you to review them too much. I will look through the sheets and learn. Thank you for the comment.
Class: Berserker
Alternate Classes: N/A
Source: Historic "Fact"
Origin: Hungary
Alignment: Lawful Good
Parameters
STR: A+
END: B+
AGI: C-
MGI: E
LUCK: A
Skills:
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement EX: Miklós Toldi’s Buster Performance is increased by 12%
Divinity EX: Miklós Toldi’s Attack is Increased by 250%
Personal Skills
Hero of Hungary EX: Miklós Toldi’s Attack Power is increased by 250% for 5 turns. He also grants himself the Guts Status for 5 turns.
Wolf Slayer A+: For 3 Turns, Miklós Toldi’s own damage against Beast and Demonic enemies & Servants with the Beast Attribute are Increased
Toldi Hatalmas A
Noble Phantasm:
Toldi IgazierejeThe True Strength of Miklós Toldi
Rank: EX
Type: Anti-Unit
Miklós Toldi grabs a hold on one enemy, and pile drives them into the two other enemies from a great height, damaging all three enemies. It also stuns the three enemies for three turns. As a bonus effect when overcharged, it also decreases the enemies’ attack power.
Last edited by BáthoryErszebet210; March 31st, 2022 at 01:45 PM.
Hi, nice to meet you. Congrats on your first post. I must admit I am a little confused by this sheet, because for example the noble phantasm doesn't have a description. But congratulations again.
Ah okay. Thank you!
Ay, great to see more people liking Pavlova. Related to what Alex said, I believe one of the sheet's high points was me actually integrating her character development into it, something I won't necessarily be able to reproduce in every other sheet.
And awww WF, you're too kind! Glad to have you back, queen, and looking forward to more of your masterpieces. Using your format was a real learning experience, and I can't wait to see where you'll go next after the amazing work that was Nannerl.
Also, welcome, Bathory! Not familiar with the figure, but I'm looking forward to see how you'll expand him, as well as your future sheets.
The clouds gather
The seas brew
Bow to his presence!
Susanoo-no-Mikoto
Y’know you didn’t have to introduce me like that
It’s what you deserve!
Saber of the Storms
True Name: Susanoo-no-Mikoto
Region: Japan
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Wish: The safety of Japan
Stats
Strength: A
Agility: B+
Endurance: A+
Magic: B
Luck:B
Noble Phantasm: A++
Profile
The legendary storm god of Japan and slayer of the fearsome Yamata no Orochi. Although normally a Divine Spirit he is summoned when he was banished from the heavens from Amaterasu. Saber is a figure who lives to his legend. Heroic, Chaotic, The Storm, Forester, Brother, Husband, and Father. Like a storm gentle at some times, wild at others.
Despite his image, Saber isn’t as arrogant as one would think. Confident but always looking for ways to change the tide of battle to his favor. Having experienced what it is like to be a human Saber sword is for humanity. This is in contrast with his sister who believes they are higher than the plights of humanity. No surprise that they have never gotten along.
Class Skills
Magic Resistance: B
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by greater magecraft and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected
Despite most of his godhood taken away. Saber was still born in the Age of Gods which allowed him to have strong resistance to modern magecraft.
Riding: C++
One can flawlessly manage beasts and vehicles if they have received the proper training and adjustments. Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill. However, they cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.
Although Saber has no anecdotes of being a rider, his former existence as aboosts his rank more than he should normally have.perfect beingGod
Personal Skills
Divinity: E
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. Can break through skills such as tection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig.
Although banished from the heavens. Saber has never felt more whole before.
Mana Burst (Storms):A
The increase in performance is caused by infusing one's weapons and body with Magical Energy and instantly expelling it. This is technically a composite skill as Saber can infuse his attacks with water, lighting, and wind.
This is his remnant of his Divinity as the storm god of Japan. It’s a deadly skill that can provide deadly combos.
Item Creation: B
Normally a skill belonging to the Caster class. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use.
Saber despite being a storm god is quite crafty from making good Sake, to trees, to even fully fledged gods.
Noble Phantasm
Kushinadahime: The Princesses Comb
Type: Anit Unit (Self)
Rank: B
Range: 1
Maximum Target: 1
The last daughter of Tenazuchi and Ashinazuchi and the wife of Saber. She acts like a sort of guide in a video game giving out advice and giving out info on items Saber comes across. Of course how she knows about things she has never seen before is a mystery.
You’re just using Wikipedia aren’t you?
Am not!
She also acts as Saber’s extra eyes on the battlefield. In addition she sort of acts like a mental resistance with her scorning Saber if he's under any influence.
Susanoo! How are you getting charmed when I’m right here!!
Overall she’s a useful assistant to Saber. Although the Master might have a small problem with them.
Wow look at you hunk~ so strong and mighty
Oh Kushinadahime you making me blush
They are very lovey dovey with each other and as the Master has a telepathic link with servants. The master will have to be forced to bear their love dovey conversation with each other.
After the Storm
Kusanagi-no-Tachi: Offering to the Sun God
Type: Anit Unit (Self)
Rank: A++
Range 1
Maximum target: 1
The legendary sword of Japan and one of the Imperial Regalia. Found within the dragon god Yamata-no-Orochi. Normally a sword with great power it cannot be used by Saber as there’s no recorded instance of him using the sword. Instead he can offer the sword up to Amaterasu symbolizing his completion of his journey as a human. He will then be granted all of his divinity back and be the great thunder god of Japan once more.
Unfortunately due to how much power is flowing within Saber the servant container will probably break destroying saber from the war. Like a lightning bolt strong but quick.
Last edited by Glazy; May 30th, 2023 at 12:09 AM.
Oh I loved every single bit of Kushinada in this. It really makes the whole sheet a delicious read.
Thank you I really appreciate you putting DB in your robin hood sheet
Eh Rider's are suppose to have multiply NPs in exchange for low stats. This is has been since f/sn
Thank you.
Noted as you can see that I added more short stories in my servant sheets. Also thanks for the face claims it just fitted with the description of Cannon euclid.Originally Posted by Kamera;3178636
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Last edited by Glazy; March 28th, 2022 at 12:17 AM.
"Servant Archer, Lyudmila Pavlichenko. It appears even beyond death I've been called on to serve my country. Now then, how many heads will I need to shoot?"
Servant Archer:
Appearance:
Source
True Name: Lyudmila Pavlichenko "Lady Death"
Alignment: Neutral Good
Alternate Classes: Assassin, Avenger
Armament: A Mosin-Nagant sniper rifle.
Strength- D
Agility- C+
Endurance- B
Mana- E
Luck- C
NP- A
Personality
Class Skills:
Independent Action- A
The ability to sustain oneself in the World without a supply of magical energy from one's Master. At this rank the Servant can linger in the World for up to two days in the absence of an active contract. As a sniper used to operating for long periods without support Archer possesses a high affinity for this Skill.
Magic Resistance- E+
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank it doesn't negate magic at all, but merely reduces the damage a little. As a heroine from the modern day who never brushed against the occult in life she obtains only a measly shard of resistance by virtue of her Class Container. However due to her experience enduring harsh conditions on her career as a sniper Archer has a bonus in defending against Magecraft derived from adverse elements like storms or cold. As "Lady Death" there is also a minor resistance towards instant-death effects.
Personal Skills:
Determination Of Steel- B
A composite Skill, combining the effects of Bravery and Calm & Collected, that allows one to completely ignore pain and endure superhuman speeds. While a kind girl who loved her home and family Archer chose to suppress her emotions and become a ruthless killer to protect her country. Allows her to ignore mental interference like pressure, doubt and fear that would disrupt her sense of aim while also blocking out the physical pain of waiting hours in harsh conditions to line up a perfect shot. In a duel with another sniper Archer once spent an entire winter's afternoon hidden in a patch of sharp briars that cut her skin, enduring the freezing cold and sound of artillery fire roaring around her to wait for her target to make a false move. Their patience broke first, and the Queen of Snipers lived to claim another kill.
Clairvoyance- C
Connotes enhanced visual perception. The most awarded female sniper in history, known for pulling off shots at impossible distances and in heavy rain that obscured visibility. Her unerring eye that earned infamy amongst the German ranks has been further exaggerated as a Servant, giving Archer the ability to accurately aim in a two-kilometer range. Also able to track moving targets with considerable ease.
Ghost Of The Battlefield- A+
A variant of Presence Concealment that denotes the ability to completely vanish one's presence and stalk foes like a ghost across the battlefield. Having hunted in the rain and amidst artillery barrages to mask the sound of her gunfire Archer became a ghost that terrorized the German army, striking fear as a specter out to take back the blood shed by her countrymen. As well as the effects of C-ranked Presence Concealment while Archer is "on the hunt" this Skill emits a curse-like mental interference that destabilizes the psyches of enemy forces, imprinting the primal sensation of being watched by an implacable predator. This can provoke a target into revealing themselves and sows disorder into enemy ranks during group battles. Both these effects are boosted should the confrontation be taking place amidst adverse environmental conditions like storms.
Sadistic Constitution- D
A Skill that augments one's aggression in battle. It appears to be a positive Skill, but the longer its owner stays in battle, the more their abusive disposition will grow, causing them to lose their usual composure. It's possible to say that this is just one step short of the Skill that drives Berserkers to sink into madness. The more one attacks, the stronger one becomes, but on the other hand, one's defensive abilities drop.
After her husband's death she grew crueler, shooting German soldiers in the leg to keep them alive while picking off any allies who came to rescue them. Corpses begat more corpses, feeding the Queen of Snipers' rage. As she loses herself in her work Archer becomes more brutal and cruel, a demon that luxuriates in the carnage of the battlefield. However as she usually won't lose her composure enough to reveal herself Archer has only a low rank in this Skill.
Great Multicultural Exchange- C
A Skill granted to those who metaphorically "unified" the world by facilitating an exchange of culture. A unique variation of Human Observation and Eye For Art, there is a chance that the user might be able to deduce an enemy Servant's True Name, Skills, and Noble Phantasm(s) by observing traces of their "culture", consisting of their clothing, accent, speech patterns, and armaments. After her tour of duty, Archer was sent as an ambassador to America to build support for the war's European front. There she met the First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt who became Archer's lifelong friend, partially thawing the shell of ice around her heart...
Noble Phantasms
So the talk of banning Russian Servants recently made me think of writing a Ukrainian one in solidarity with the war going on. Got inspired to do her after coming across her name on the Rejected Princesses site (a good source for finding lesser-known female Heroic Spirit candidates). Thanks to BnEl for his Great Multicultural Exchange Skill. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading y'all!
Last edited by RoydGolden; April 22nd, 2023 at 05:51 PM.
WOW - Oh my gosh I had her on my list but couldn't think of a Noble Phantasm. You just blew me away! Amazing job!
Thanks man. Coming with NPs for sniper figures can be a bit hard because the obvious "super shot that pierces defense/instant-kill" NP is well... obvious and not that interesting. So in this case I tried to take more peripheral parts of her legend and make them into interesting NPs.
Pavlichenko: Cool sheet with creative NPs aside, you have my thanks for pointing me towards Rejected Princesses. Now excuse me, as I have a fair bit of reading to do.
Source: Pinterest, JJ
Class: Rider
Other Classes: N/A
True Name: Sergei Prokokiev
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: Ukraine
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: B
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: C
Height: 185 CM
Weight: 180 LB
Likes: Children, teaching music
Dislikes: The Soviet Union, rude people.
Talent: composing
Natural Enemy: mozart
Attribute: Man
Traits: Weak to Enuma Elish, Hominidae, Male
Armament: An orange and a stone flower.
Catalyst: A manuscript of his compositions
Class Skills:
Riding C: He wasn't great at riding horses in life, and so gets an average rank not allowing him to guide anything better then a horse.
Magic Resistance E: He never actually faced magic, so has a pittance provided by his class container.
Personal Skills:
Zdravitza C: The sublimation of the time which he was forced to write a cantata for Stalin under threat of the death of his wife and children, and made it seem like it was glorifying Stalin, but instead sung the praises of the people. If someone he cares about is in danger, this triggers, granting him High-Speed Incantation at rank D and the ability to easily conceal hostile actions as helpful actions.
The Three Oranges C: The sublimation of his opera The Love Of Three Oranges. He has a single small orange in his pocket. If he opens it, a familiar will emerge but immediately need mana supply. Also, if he loses the orange, he cannot summon the familiar, which has E ranks in everything.
The Stone Flower B: A powerful spell sublimated on a small piece of stone carved into a lily in his pocket. This is the embodiment of his ballet The Tale Of The Stone Flower. When it is shown, it causes mental interference, causing those affected to fixate on it.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Madiel
The Angel Of Fire
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 30M
Max Targets: 20
This noble phantasm is the sublimation of his opera The Fiery Angel. When it is invoked, a large fire elemental resembling an angel is summoned. It has D rank stats but can apply painful Mana Burst (Flame)s.
Peter And The Wolf
The Fearsome Wolf
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: C
Range: 30 m
Max Targets: 1
This noble phantasm is his mount and capability to be summoned as a Rider. When it is invoked, it summons the fearsome Wolf from his piece by the same name. The wolf is a fairly powerful Phantasmal Beast with high speed and a dangerous bite.
Lore: Sergei Prokokiev was a famed Ukrainian composer. He was known for writing many operas and his tale for children, Peter and the Wolf. He was born in Sontsivka. When he was 5, he wrote his first piece. Early in his writing, he went through many struggles before becoming a well-situated composer.
Personality: A genuinely kind and helpful person, always wishing to assist others. He especially also enjoys helping children learn. His wish for the Grail would be to be able to write many more pieces.
Relationships:
Mozart: "Master, did you know Mozart was so... vulgar? I truly respect his compositions, but I have lost all respect for him as a person."
Marie Antoinette: "Ah, how can you get along with him?"
Child servants: "So, this note goes here, this note goes here... Oh hey master, I was just teaching the kids some music theory."
Creator Notes: Update!
Last edited by jishara; June 14th, 2022 at 01:51 PM.
YEEEES I SAW THAT. So proud of you guys and of all your amazing creations, I swear y'all inspire me so much.
OMG I'm so honored you liked her, king! I hope I won't disappoint with the next servant.
Lyudmila Pavlichenko: What is this sound? Is this the Best Girl Alarm I'm hearing? What a great Servant she is. You've managed to take something that would be bland in anyone else's hand and transform into an interesting concept. Parroting others' opinions, I think the NPs are the strongest part of her character, I was even taking notes on them. What a cool concept they hold, especially the first one.
Sergei Prokokiev: I've seen you're trying to expand your Servants with quotes and such, that's amazing. Experimenting with your formatting would do wonders for your sheets and make them easier to read too, like playing with colors or using bold/italic letters sometimes in titles and such. But those are my only gripes, as for the Servant itself I think it's a strong concept. You're definitely far ahead in the game than I was when I started doing this, at least.
Hello, long time Create-a-Servant accountless-lurker here. I've finally gotten through to properly formatting my first Servant and I hope it is alright that I just let myself in by dropping the sheet in here.
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Twas a frosty Xmas morning
In our trenches on the Lys
And a fog was hanging thick along the fields
You could hear the Bosches singing
But no Xmas bells were ringing
’Cept the tinkle of the bullets on shields.
When the fog at last had lifted
And the Bosches glances shifted
On our parapet in front of them they saw;
On a notice board in writing
From the men that they were fighting
“Merry Xmas” and Kaisers heads galore.
Then the Bosches started shouting
“Will you come and take an outing?”
And a row of heads along our line appear
For two Saxons greatly daring
To our trenches were boldly faring
With a barrel of the most indifferent beer.
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Hi WhiteFrenzy, thank you so much for the kind comment.
Hi DesReploid, welcome. Nice to meet you. I really enjoy the sheet. Great job!
Last edited by jishara; March 28th, 2022 at 10:13 AM.
Bros I can't keep up chill out