Create-A-Servant 2

[Shiki-pon]

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Alternate Classes: Archer, Caster, Avenger
True Name: Sekhmet
Alignment: Chaotic Mad
Origin: Egyptian Mythology
Armament: Claws, teeth

Parameters:
STR: A+
END: B
AGI: A
MANA: B
LUCK: B+
NP: C

Skills

Class Skills

Mad Enhancement - Rank A+: The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange for hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason.
All parameters receive a Rank-Up, but the user is completely unreasonable. Rather than lacking reason, Berserker is unwilling to use it for anything worthwhile, and can only communicate her own desires to others. As for attempts at communicating with her, even if she does understand, she does not care in the slightest. As such, mutual understanding is fundamentally impossible, outside of certain perfect circumstances.

Personal Skills

Goddess’ Divine Essence - Rank E: A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.
Though born as a divine goddess, Berserker’s essence was divided and bestowed upon others in order to forestall another rampage. The darker aspects of her current class also reduce the rank of her divine nature.

Blood-Sucking - Rank EX: The act of absorbing another's blood to replenish their own health and physical and/or magical strength. It is one of the powers of a vampire. As the Rank raises, the power of absorption increase.
Berserker possesses a bottomless hunger for the blood of humans, being fully capable of drinking it in rivers.

Mystic Eyes - Rank A: A Skill where one has possession of Mystic Eyes, capable of imparting magical effects upon a subject and interfering with the outside world.
A power passed down due to her status as the Eye of Ra, gifting Berserker with what might be termed as Mystic Eyes of the Sun. Due to her violent nature, only the destructive side of this power can be brought to the fore, rendering her eyes as highly powerful versions of the Mystic Eyes of Flame.

Noble Phantasm

Slaughter of Humans

Khenfa Re Sekhmet

Anti-Humanity, Rank C

A Noble Phantasm manifesting Berserker’s purpose. She was created from Ra’s eye to wreak vengeance upon an uncaring humanity, punishing them for their neglect of their chief god. However, Berserker quickly went too far, coming close to causing the extinction of the human race. Not heeding Ra’s orders to stop, she was finally brought to a halt by a riverful of blood-colored alcohol, finally bringing her rampage to a stop.
Khenfa Re Sekhmet amounts to an order for Berserker to once again commence her rampage. Completely losing all reason, Berserker launches into the fray, her only objective becoming ‘kill more humans’. As long as a target is human, Berserker ceases to comprehend the difference between enemies and allies or combatants and bystanders. With every human slain, her bloodlust merely increases, with Berserker’s attack power rising along with it.
In this state, even Command Spells no longer affect her, their power being cannibalized to further Berserker’s rampage as though the order given was to ‘kill all of humanity’. However, if something like a stun or charm effect would get through her defenses, the rampage caused by Khenfa Re Sekhmet would stop.

Description

Likes: Being lavished with attention, human blood
Dislikes: Mankind in general, self-restraint
Talents: Slaughtering humans, dancing
Natural Enemy: Shuten-douji

Berserker’s true identity is Sekhmet, the Wrathful Eye of Ra.

Despite her violent tendencies, especially towards humans, it would be incorrect to describe her as malicious. She is as capricious as one would expect from a cat and delights in the suffering of those weaker than her. However, if she is praised and cared for, she can be almost benevolent towards those that venerate her.
As she does as she wills, Sekhmet chafes against any form of restraint, whether it be orders or rules. She regards those that would restrict themselves or others as weak, unwilling or unable to act as they would like. Because of this, she all but prides herself on her utter lack of self-restraint. Even if she can think uninhibited by the madness common to Berserkers, she scoffs at the idea of thinking her way through situations.
Among Heroic Spirits, Sekhmet, oddly enough, gravitates towards men of learning. Despite her chosen task and the resulting low view of humans in general, she is impressed with the heights humans can aspire to with intellectual effort. As royals could afford her with luxury and attention, she is naturally predisposed to view them and the rich preferentially. She does not actively dislike any among heroes, though she feels that those that fashion themselves as hunters are attempting to rival her.
As long as her Master treats her with respect and affection, Sekhmet will gladly serve, though only as a ‘killer’. Other than dealing death to those that oppose her Master, she will not usually lift a finger. Naturally, due to her unreasonable way of thinking, any orders that would restrict her carnage will result in her opinion of the Master lowering, as they are as weak as her father Ra in his old age. Though her Berserker state makes her view her Master as though they were ‘Ra’, she still regards them as ‘human’, and as such is likely to lash out violently if mistreated.
Sekhmet’s sole wish is to be able to fulfill her purpose and punish humanity. If allowed to complete her wish, she would likely go on to slaughter all humans. Except for those that would pamper her, perhaps.

Lore

The lion-headed goddess of war, Sekhmet, is one of the oldest known Egyptian deities. She protected the great pharaohs and led them in war. From the breath of the goddess, the desert was born. Her very name is derived from the Egyptian word for power, and she was known for being fierce and bloodthirsty.
As the myth of her creation is told, the god of the sun, Ra, having grown old, became angry with the people for not continuing his worship. They were not properly following the laws he had given them, and maintaining justice. As punishment for their disobedience, he pulled an aspect of violence from his eye in the form of a lion. He then sent her to Earth to destroy the dissidents. The Eye of Ra became Sekhmet. She ravaged the people and the land was covered with blood.
Upon witnessing the carnage, Ra began feeling sorry and tried to call off the lioness, but she was bloodthirsty and ignored his pleas. Anxious to stop the killing, Ra contacted some of the surviving humans and gathered thousands of jugs of alcohol. The humans shed their blood into the nile as the alcohol was poured in, coloring the river red. Sekhmet, thinking it was blood, drank it so quickly she became completely intoxicated and slept for days. With this opening, Ra separated most of her divine essence from Sekhmet, endowing it upon Hathor and Bastet so as to weaken the lioness.
When Sekhmet woke up, her blood lust had diminished and humanity was saved from her wrath. Also, as it happened, the first thing Sekhmet saw when she opened her eyes from her drunken sleep, was the creator god, Ptah. She fell madly in love with him. Together, they had a son named Nefertum. The family of three became the Triad of Memphis. She later adopted the ascended Imhotep as an adoptive son of sorts.

[Bugs]

Very cool. I remember seeing a Hathor sheet a long time ago where she turns into Sekhmet, also possibly alluding to Sekhmet proper being a Beast herself. Any thoughts on if she could qualify?

[Shiki-pon]

I subscribe more to the story of Sekhmet being part of Hathor only by shared divine essence (but since there's many, many versions of the myth, everyone is free to follow their chosen version). Everyone in a pantheon being everyone else gets annoying to me pretty quickly, so I tend to go the way of most named, distinct beings being their own dealies unless explicitly described otherwise. Hathor influenced by Sekhmet might qualify as a Beast, though, even if Sekhmet wouldn't on her own.

[Skull]

Just a general heads-up, but we're now less than 5 pages away from the usual 50-page milestone so if anyone's masochistic enough then they can start thinking about collecting all the past sheets to add to the OP.

[Shiki-pon]

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Alternate Classes: Rider
True Name: Mfumu Mpashi
Alignment: Lawful Good
Origin: African Folklore
Armament: Spear

Parameters:
STR: B
END: C
AGI: B
MANA: D
LUCK: B
NP: E

Skills

Class Skills

Riding - Rank A: A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
All vehicles and all creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. This rank is high enough to have an aptitude for the Rider Class.

Independent Action - Rank C: The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from one's Master; the ability that allows for action even in the absence of the Master. At higher ranks, it is also possible to remain for extended periods of time in this world without an established contract.
It is possible for a Servant to stay in the world for one day without a Master.

Personal Skills

Wisdom of the Ancestors - Rank EX: Wisdom passed down from one’s ancestors. Gives access to many common Skills at B~A rank. However, unique Skills and Skills that affect the body directly are unavailable.
Because of Alter Ego’s existence as a conglomeration of ancestors, many Skills can be exhibited at a time.

Malaila - Rank A: A ceremony held in honour of past chiefs. Through dance and song, the spirits of worthy ancestors can be called to the user.
By the means of celebration, Alter Ego can gather power from ancestor spirits. Upon completion of a ritual, physical parameters are ranked up for a long period of time before the summoned ancestors fade. Manifestation of the summoned spirits’ favored weapons also becomes possible.

Noble Phantasms

Lion Spirit Possession

Nfumpas

Anti-Army, Rank C+

A Noble Phantasm that encompasses Alter Ego’s existence. As a host of ancestor spirits serving as a single Heroic Spirit, Nfumpas is a collection of the bodies of the ancestors. Due to the beliefs of their people, the bodies of chiefs are represented by the physique of a lion, rather than that of a man. These lions, though carrying a human’s spirit, are closer to Phantasmal Beasts in nature.
Individually, each ancestor is an existence comparable to a very weak Phantom, but together, they are able to serve as a true Heroic Spirit. Nfumpas allows for the manifestation of more than one physical body at the same time, as well as allowing Alter Ego to dispel an injured body before it can be killed. As there is still only a single spiritual core, constantly manifesting multiple bodies can put a strain upon the core and cause it to be damaged. However, a group of up to three bodies can be maintained almost indefinitely, as long as sufficient magical energy is provided.

Description

Likes: Being remembered, celebrations
Dislikes: Trophy hunting, conflict between kin
Talents: Supplying ancestral wisdom, teamwork
Natural Enemy: Hassan of the Hundred Faces

Alter Ego’s true identity is Mfumu Mpashi, the Spirit of the Kunda Chiefs.

Mfumu Mpashi is not exactly a singular entity, but rather a conglomeration of all of the Kunda people’s chiefs and great ancestors. As such, there is no singular personality, even if their collective experiences are shared together. For the purpose of communicating with a Master, a ‘spokesperson’ is often designated from among them, acting as the “core personality”.
They possess an affection for younger generations in general, seeing it as their role to provide guidance from beyond the grave. Though they can be exasperated by stubbornness, defiance and thoughtless independence, the ancestor spirits of Mfumu Mpashi are quite patient and good at dealing even with the most unreasonable of people.
As they highly value teachings, Mfumu Mpashi has a good relationship with Heroic Spirits that were teachers. Since the methods between the ancestors vary wildly, they have no qualms with even extreme teaching methods. They also possess a soft spot for young warrior heroes, having guided similar individuals of their own people.
Mfumu Mpashi serves their Master loyally, though they are not above offering advice and teaching when they deem it necessary. In fact, they can be quite insistent about such things at times, especially if a Master should prove recalcitrant. It is hard to completely alienate the ancestors, but they can go to such lengths as to abandon their Master for a time to teach them a lesson. Perhaps due to the strange makeup of their Saint Graph, they have a tendency to be less affected by Command Spells used to control them.
The spirits of Mfumu Mpashi wish for nothing more but prosperity for their descendants, the Kunda people.

Lore

The Mfumu Mpashi is the Kunda tradition of ‘Spirit possession’, wherein the spirits of ancestors remain in the world to aid their kin. The spirits of chiefs, especially, take the form of great lions that watch over their people and punish them for their misbehavior.
The spirits of Mfumu Mpashi sometimes come to their people in dreams or as apparitions to speak of their needs. The ancestor spirits are celebrated yearly by the Kunda people in a festival called Malaila.

[Shiki-pon]

Oh and since nobody else seems to be doing this (double post be damned): Welcome to the thread, Verthranga.
The Cain sheet is fine, though there are a few places that would require a space between words. I'll refrain from going too in-depth on what I think about the Skills, but suffice to say that some of them seem a wee bit too powerful.

[Kabalisto Koga]

Behold the Dragonqueen...

Nofrusobek /Djedet-chau Alter
"Neferuseth"
(Rider/Avenger)




battle theme :Egoist
Height:178 cm
Weight: 74~ kg
Alignment: Lawfull/Chaotic Evil
Attribute: Earth
Origin: Egypt
Weapon: Khopesh and Spear
Other qualifying Classes: Caster,Lancer,Assassin,Berserker,Archer
Likes: Strong People ,demanding fights ,the Phrase "Survival o f the fittest",her "Babies"
Dislikes: other Women especially Queens,weak People ,
Talents/Hobbies/Goals:seek out strong Foes,to obtain the Rule of the World
Natural Enemy:Sobek,Dareios I,Loki
Seiyu:Kikuko Inoue


Parameters:

Strenght:B+
Endurance:A
Agility:A+
Luck:C~
Mana:EX
NP:EX

Backstory aka Lore

This Nofrusobek is the initially product of a Grailwar that happenened in Egypt were Nofrusobek were summoned as Rider and also other mainly mediterian originated servants were summoned alongside were a a great Mistake but later more,her Master were a talented and good natured Young Lady both had good Relations to each other,they had to fight at the start of the Grailwar together with the other in this War summoned Servants to fight agains the last servant of the previous which were the Berserker Behemoth but what all of the currently seven Masters and their Servants didnt expected were that Behemoths Master let through the usage of his remaining two Reijus(Commandseals) to weaken Berserkers states as his true Goal for causing this Grailwar were that by let his servant wreaking havoc in Egypt and let through this initiating in Egypt a Grailwar were that he could use this scenery of War ,Violence and Chaos as catalyst for his true wished servant (sidenote:He killed in the Grailwar were he summoned Behemoth ,a other Master before they were able to summon their servant and took their Commandseals),

the Egyptic Deity Seth in which he succeded and summoned him/her but not like he wanted as Caster instead appeared Seth as Avenger in their "Worst "/most malevolant form and the now recalled Deity were still (for a while) cooperative with this Shemer in to let the Grailwar take its Course and only intervere if its should take a disadvantagious route ,at the start has Nofrusobk feeled a ominuous aura in the Atmospehre and also Seth self sensed in the Empress a certain…"familiarity" which made Seth incomfortable in such a Degree that although he supported the currently sumoned Bereserker from the shadows earlier had he interrupted her fight against the currently summoned Archer which were Napoleon by an Reflex ,or like Seth said his Body acted on its own as she were nearly grasped by the stream of Archers Arc de Triomphe de l'Étoile cannon fire had he rescued her and and attacked Napoleon with Dark Crimson Lithning Blasts and vanished immediately from the Scene ,which let both Fighting parties baffled and both servants aswell their Masters agreed on an cooperation and alliance until they knew the identity and Goal of the appeared "Demon" and although Nofrusobeck had some guessess with Seth as one of the possible candidates were she uncertain,Seth on the other side were stunned why he did that ,and told his Master upon this occurance to Forget it and never bring it again on the tabel(it were Seth honestly mortifyingly embaresing ),Nofrusobeks Master and Napoleons Master thought now on Behemoths former Master which could flee the Battleground a while ago and suspected him ,then out of These suspicion that also the actual Grailwar could be treatened or manipulated by him and they contacted the War observer of the Church to let him announce a truce but could not accesing him as he was ccupied with the Master of Assassin which let his rvant Harvest the Souls of a desert vilagess People and thus they sended curiers to the Masters of Lancer(Jimmu) ,the Master of Caster(Dareios I),The Master of Saber(Augustus) and the Master of Berserker(Charybdis) they could all of them succesfull contact but only the two former were Ready for a alliance and Berserkers Master who did had a grudge against Casters Master thus said that he dont cooperate with them if the Master of Caster is also working with them .

The alliance out of the Five Masters and their Servants discussed the incident and what they could collect and falsify of Information of Behemoths former Master ,and found his shelter which were inside a cavewhich was tranformed into Seths underworld (not the same realm as the from Osiris governed Death Realm) and all four maked them Ready to enter the realm to defeat both as they were finally contacted by the Supervisor who were able to defeat Assassins Master and toke his Servant which were Saladin which were glad o be freed from his radical Master and the alliance told him all informations of the actual Situation and he agreed with them.

Seth on the other Hand were out of his mind and enraged thus made preparations in his Nubet/Ombos Realm and appeared before the Master of Berserker and manipulated him so that he used his command seal to order Charybdis to attack the alliance and cause as much havoc as posible ,which failed as Casters Master could pinpoint Berserkers Master due to a "old marking" and could kill him and through this weakening and through that Casters Master were capable of using the last spare Commandseal of Berserker to create for his allies a oppening which they harnessed to attack Charybdis and destroy her completely.

The Alliance consisting of the Five remaining Master,their Servants,the Supervisor who decided that his direct Involvement is necceasary thus joined the force alongside Saladin and also he took his threee assitences into the party ,then after they took care of heir wounds the fight against Berserker caused went they through the mountanous cave into Nubeto -Seths Dominion were they had at first to fight against Seths and his Masters familiars thanks that they had a set of top servants ,Combat proven Mages and four Veteran Executers were this fight against Seths army a more walkover than an real War but then reached they the central point .

Seths Black-Pyramide, during on the other side Seth understood finally why he did this and could explain himself his relation to the egypt Empress …..she possess blood and flesh of his Child (Sobek) thus has he acted out of f..atherly (?) instincts before he unsterstood it ,but now thought he in excitement that it would be excellent in that it could benefitt him so now after he observed their approaching had he divided the participants by teleport the Group seperate namely into the following Groups :

Napoleon,his Master and Lancers Master/ Jimmu and Dareios I/Nofrusobeks MAster alongside Augustus and the Supervisor/Sabers Master and one Assistent Executer/Saladin and the thrid Executer aswell Casters Master /and Nofrusobek alone as he put the others in diverent Trials and in a dungeon like Mace has he put the Empress into a Oasis like parardise and welcomed her into it personaly and seeked a conversation but before he could say anything has Nofrusobek attacked him with her Khopesh but it were rather effortless stopped by Seth who said that after he knocked the Sword back :

"Heh Daughter you are indeed share a lot charackteristics like Sobek !" Nofrusobek were out of the Concept and replied "Who are you calling Daughter i have no relation to you God of destruction and violence Seth !" Seth:"Haha you think you know something but you know Nothing ! Im the parent of many deities of which of my greatest you have received flesh and blood Sobek even your Name bear the Evidense !! Thus are you in an sense my progeny and not only that you are quite similar to him in personality ...are you also sharing many of my personal traits ….

Rider were shocked and needed some Moments to form thoughts as Seth continued your Prowess ,your intellect,your competitive pungnacity are all traits yyour share with me Daughter ! said he in a extatic but menacingly calm voice .

as Rider snappped out of her daze through her wrath and summoned some medium sized crocodils and let them attack Seth who called his Spear and killed on Crocodile after the other and said after the third row had he rather angered said he "could you stop with to let me kill one Avatar of my son after another besides it is fultile as i had plenty opportunities in exterminate Apophis and other Beasts so is this Noblephantasm of you simply fruitless aswell are they another evidense of our kinship you should accept" after that atttacked Rider Seth with one Spellblast respective manablast attacks after another but through Seths High Ranked Magic Resistence aswell his Metall Bones has he took only minuscule Damage ,then said Seth" Hm it Looks like your quite tired Right my Child ? i bet you have now drained your Master quite a lot Right ? Good i will retreat into my Pyramide and will await your coming home my Daughter !! said he laughing as he vanished into a black mist.

in the meantime had the Groups to endure and master the obstacles ,had Nofrusobek used a telephaty spell to connect the mind of the Groups so that they were able to unite in the Oasis were they found a box full of healing potions which left Seth there to maximise his "entertainmet".

after they entered the Pyramide and a conversation between Seth respective his Master and the parties members started the fight of the servants against Seth and the Masters and Executers against a from Seth enhanced Master ,during they human members of the Party succeded after a harsh battle against Seths Master had the Servants struggles against Seth divine powers but after they succeded in their former forged Formation tactics had they succeded in causing a massive wound on Seths Body but as Seth feeled that the caused Damage is not reversible without the aid of his (now dead) Master as anchor had he unleashed the "primordial Tide" the primoridial Ether which flooded the Cave as Seth impaled himself with his Spear and used a unknown curse on the "Chaos Tide" as he let himself fall into the Ocean . as the whole Ground with exception the pyramide break into the primordial sea ,the servants and the Master/Executer Group were pimched but Rider sumoned Chai nepter Spinos and some other mesozoic chrocodiles to carry the humans but each chrocodile succumbed to the mud and emerged asprimodial beasts which attacked he Group then used Jimmu Amenonuhoko to create new land on which they could stand but they soon had to accept that Lancer were stained to a Degree and Nofrusobek stopped as also Spinos showed Degrees of coruption hrough this summone Rider some more giant crocs and some Suchomimus to carry the others , healed Jimmu and sended her familiars to the cave gate,

and bid Farewell to her Master as she started to fight against her now rebelious Mount and let the other members of the Group give her the promise that they never will harm her Master as she heard their Affirmation had she ordered them to bring them on the Surface where they reached it and as she fought against Spinos caused the Dinosaur that a part of the Island crack apart and he alongside Nofrusobek falled in the Sea ,as then as she drowned into it has she heard again Seths (?)now piercing voice which said "now feel it that is the pulse of power and primordial might ? should be a familiar Feeling Right ? as Seth said that where she remained n her drowning in the Nil and her rebirth . as she feeled a Burning on and in her Body as her Body where covered in black mater as she feeled that the words of Sobek echoed in her head "take your rightfull place" as a similar inviting voice said "take your place as Queen of the World ! you have seen that the Humans are gotten weak without supreme ruler ,why let be another ? you are from a supreme ancestry ! and you are destined to become the Queen of These magnifent Creatures the Humans named "Dragons" go open your Eyes... She opened her eyes as she saw her former summned Crocodilians which now bowed themselves even Spinos were now timid and obedient as he bowd to her as she saw this feeled she a Feeling of intoxicating Lust , supremacy and glee ,as she slowly spectate her Mirror Picture .

Now were she suddenly called back by this voice as they said to her"Now wake up Noferuseth you know what is to do …

Personality

She is vastlly differernt than her normal self or perhaps her final self of the Normal Nofrusobeck namely is her mind reverted into the Phase of her awakening of her newly infused divine powers has took root in mind and Body as despite Sobek infused his flesh carefully to not overwhelm her has Seth fixated this Moment and inverted her rather restraint and calm personality in this Moment magnified and used as new base of herself ,put under the pressure of the Chaos Tide and further contaminated by Seths own Maliciousness and the territorality of the Dragon kind,

Now is she fixated in her thirst of power furher contaminated by Seths Claim after the Rule and further strenghtened by the draining of her inhibitions isshe now fully Display her former hidden thirst of the rule as such has she now a raging almost sadistic hatred against other King and Royalist and despite the normal Nofrusobek paved the way for future Female Rulers has he now a sadistic Anger on other Queens as she recognice any other than herself or perhaps her future Daughters as sole eexception and in General has she became now the Mysognist she hated in life as that she now sees other (Human) Women as either carnal plaything or livestock like other weak peopleas as she now turn her oppinion of People on their strenght in that she sees the Weak as Prey .

She has also now adopted a Fighting thirst to such a Degree intense that she now could rival perhaps even Sekhmet in her battlelust as she now Glees in demanding and difficult battles where she is forced to go back at everything she has in her repartoire available means and sees every Victorious fight as further evidense of her Superiority as she views herself as the pinacle of creation especialy the female part as such sees she in every other Women as beneath her in state and existence and she has also adopted the carnality of a Dragon in that she herself revel in what normal People would entitle as deprave but as she is now entirely freed of hesitations and is now completely honest to her desires in every Way.

However are one of These desires in that every Queen wishes a equal King at her side thus is she Looking beside all Things in males that are possesing the certain strenght she seek for it must it not neccesarily particularly martial power of physical prowess as such Things are just a trivial matter which she can easily correct with her Thaumaturgy and through a Little Transfusion..~.

The First field where she search for her Counterpart is her Master where she is in comparison to normaly strict although she is concious about her state as Servant ,is she seees them as nourishment in the most cases,if her Master is a female does she is by default treat her in a humiliating way if she "smells" weak but if she sees in her a shared humiliation like to be denied their Position is she more mercifull and tries t lecture her ,if the female Master possess additionaly Might or power thirst and desire is this further pronounciated where she wants to make her into a "true Sister Queen" afterall even the Sole True Queen can use some Society.

In the case the Master is a Male does she treat him at the start not other than as mentioned before but she studies him if he could be a cccandidate for be her King if not then she will use him as as mean for her amusement but will Keep him in either case alive ,should the male Master be revealed to be "her King" will she test him if it should a misidentification on her side if he doesnt pass will he be discarded if he pass then will he be treated more friendly and she will do anything to lowly mold him into her King,he mustnt be as might hungry but she will let his Moral Compass fall and will put in his consience that he is no longer Humn and that he should act according to this fact also will she work in to that he he will lose his inhibitions and hesitations so that he will be as honest to his desires as herself and so that he will participate in her orgies and her conquest afterall even a True Queen deserve and seek a true King at her side.

Skills

Class-skills:

Self-Replenishment(Mana):A++
Avenger class-skill ,
One's magical energy endlessly surges until their revenge is accomplished.
Although she acomplished her hatred thuus would normaly only gain very minuscule amounts of Mana is this skill bosted by several occurances namely ,
that the Dragon (like) blood tooks full root in her is he now possessing enhanced even further by her Heka capabilities and the Chaos Tide is she now refilling Mayor parts of her MAna Output each turn and gains thus the same effects as Independet Action EX pendant in Terms of Mana backup efficience.

Avenger:A
represents the nature of an Avenger as one who gathers up the grudges and hatred of others onto themselves and turns it into strength.

Normaly due to that she were a very high holded Empress in her life and that even several centuries after her Reign enjoyed highly praisings for her acomplishments would she possess this skill at the lowest possible Rank but due to the effects of the Chaos Tide and the effects of her Noblephantasm Draconis Genesis has she now adapted as Dragon queen the Humane Hatred of her

Servants

"Babies"

and possess now their "Standing" ,thus is she now the feared and

adored

hated

Dragonqueen…

Oblivion Correction:A+
People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never Forgets.
Through Seths modifications on Djedet-chaus mind is her mental state now the from the Moment she felt that she should have the place of her Sister respectively her Brother further strenghtened by the ferocity of the Dragon typical Territory Claim ,thus is she until she has claimed the whole world in a state of envious hatred...

Riding:EX
Due to her contact with the primordial exxence has she now due to her Saint-Graph were Rider ,the Concept of operate a moveable object has she obtained the ingrained Knowledge and wisdom to operate any Vehicle and to mount any Creature ,Dragons obviously included,by the bluring of her former specialised/concepted riding prowess to the abbility to fulfille the Concept of Riding by the Authorithy of the "Root"

Magic Resistence:A
Although she would due to her corruption become more vulnerable to Magecraft is she through her prominent in her flowing Dragonblood has she instead adopted the average Reslience of the higher Dragon-Kind .additionally has she as side-effect of the staining with the Primordial essence now possessing hightened resistence against Conceptual Sorceries.
Personnal-skills:


Primordial Essence:??
Due to ist quantity also called "Chaos Tide" is the condensated true Ether Ocean which Seth created and called "Ocean of Chaos" which was created under the Ground of egypt as direct leyline created by leyline "juicing" and the usage of his homeculture bost and of his Authority as Chaos deity has he recreated the primordial sea a part of "artificial Gods Age" territory were neither the anthropocentric worldlaw nor the counterforce take effects as this sea is similar in nature of "Sereq-hetit" the Beginning state of the world,were Seth intended to create a Alternative World Concept similar to a Lostbelt spehre in many aspects but also different in that it functions as "Objectification of a Return" of the same if not higher realm as the Aylesbury Ritual in Magnitude.

in her particular sense has this through Seths contamination caused her heavy alternations on her self and Saint-Graph so that her Suchos-Formis were liquified and through Seths modifications changed alongside the blood in her and in her still flowing traces of the essence and granting her effects of Independet Manifestation in making her a being outsid the Course of time thus a independet form of her original.

Heka:A
The Sorcery of the old Egypt that were passed down from the Deities at the priests and Kings/Pharaon and then pas passd down through the Generations of Priests and Pharaoh in form of two types :the actualisation of effects through the Casting of Hieroglyphs passed down specially from the Deities Ammun-Re(respectively Ra),Seth ,Isis and Thoth and on the other the Manipulation and Interfernce of the Flow of Life-energy of which every other application where derived of.

Through the Modifications on her has she lost some subleties in her Thaumaturgical prowess but in Exchange has she obtained parts of Seths Divine Authorithy of his Domains aswell through the

Primordial Essence

Chaos Tide

whichs power has took root in her allows her to use thaumaturgic distortions and give all of her forged object gaining instantly the Magnitude of Noblephantasm equal mystery and passive effects of true magic.

Violent

"Innocent"

Dragonblood:EX
Is the modificated and on the Forefront forced bestial parts of she received from Sobeks flesh which were of Reptilian-divine blood which were through many mis-identifications carried over the Milenia as first case of a Noble Royalty which obtained blood of phantasmal beasts and mostly Dragon parts,so has she through the modifications caused by Seth "programmed" Chaos Tide now she embodimented the Concept of the first Mortal who received Dragonic blood and flesh which has manifested as that she possess now clawed and scaled limbs ,fangs and Horns aswell ears and her Body now in combination with Divinity(Chaos) reveived the effects of Natural Body as that the Queen of all Dragon shall entice Beast and Human alike with her never eroding allure. also does it gives her a perma bosted Monstrous Strenght and she obtain all abbillities a Dragon can dispose like ;

the abbility to grow a scaled armor and shoot her scales and claws,a in conjunction with her Heka healing magecraft and primordial Essence gained strong regeneratins Blessing,the Trademark breath attack were she is abble to select and evoke a wide Variety of Elements,the

overhumanly

average

sense of a Dragon.the same ranked Blood sucking skill equivalent.

Also has she the abbility to transform parts of her Body or her whole into a Dragon and is able to switch her physique in her Dragonic form like from a European Dragon type to a Seadragon as example with to the form corresponding abbillities.

Also is she possessing a skill equivalent of EX in Self Modifications as Symbol of her complete discardment of her originally Heroic nature…


Divinity(Chaos):B
Is in her case the combination of several types of divinity namely first has she through her weakening of the Divine blood she received from Sobek and her rejecting of her praise as Pharaoh went down the D- but she were infused by two Sources of Divinity namely some from Seth own Divinity has tranferred towards her and second has she through the Primordial Essence gained the first ever crytalised form of divinity namely being the Incarnation of the Divine unexplainable Forces of the World thus is she now comparable with a Growing Primordial Deity in the Age of Gods..


Furry of the Dragon-Queen:C
Are the Remnants of her Queens Determination skill which gives her still the effects of Imperial Privileges at the same rank,aswell functioning as the same ranked Charisma which increases her Leadershipskills but also reduce the morale of her (Human) subordinates ,and in contrast to the original effect of this skill is this skill decrease the Rank of especially female Opponents Luck but

induce a supremacy feeling

Bosts the moral

of all of her Allies and subordinates aswell to inspire fear .

Noblephantasm

Chai Neter Seth Spinos

EX
Anti-Order
Desription:
Is the in contrast to the from the normal Version Bone Ward is it transformed into a Spear which obtained aspects of the Spear of Seth Apuet ,namely the passive Attributes of his Spear so has it adopted Apuets anti Dragon and Demon Attribute,the disintergration of concepts in weakened form as that it allows her in conjunction with her Distortive powers is able to fully break spells through sheer force ,but like her regular Counterpart is the true Noblephantasm the being she can summon with it namely the corupted Version of the Spinosaurus she once summoned as her steed.

In contrast to Djedet-chau self is Spinos stil in Possession of his aspects as Avatars Sobek aswell atleast parts of his powers in that it still possess strong healing abbilities that it Shares with her and possibly her Master but it were through the contaminated primordial sea corrupted into a Avatar of Chaos and Seth namely that it now instead of being provided wwith powers of Seth rival Horus does it now feed upon the Darkness and destruction it seeks as it is in comparison to before where it were more reluctant if not provoked or ordered to fight is it now hostile to anything but Djedet-chau or her Master and wants to spread its marking in world like his Queen,it now possess Seth powers over the Chaos and Storm so is it able to summon forth Storm blast type Mana blast asie its Water powers does gain strenghttened of the Darkness Seth once wanted to engulf Egypt in it.

Through the essence of the Chaos-Tide is it also now a being of destruction and anarchy a being completely equal to Apophis ,it is now a being which could be called "Divine Demon Beast" and gains all abbillities of a Dragonkind like its former self but instead of Flames it wielded does it now operate pure Darkness and its avoid the light of the Sun if possible as the Sun is inflicting him now immense pain (which is in reality the puryfying effects of Horus which tries to burn the Corruption away).


Draconis Genesis
EX
Anti-World
Desription:
Is the from the Chaos Tide in conjunction with Nofruseths modificated Dragonic blood in her remodulated Suchos Formis which were the crystalisation of Sobeks Avatar ship in form of every after him named being is it now a Noblephantasm that is the crystalisation of her existence as First Dragon-queen

The foundation of this Noblephantasm is the give birthing aspects of the primordial sea/soup of Sereq-hetit the process of giving birth thus is she now assigned to be the "Mother" of the Rebirthed Dragonkind thus giving her authorithies that resembles Potnia Theron in many aspects,also does this Noblephantasm allows her to first summon/recreate every being that the Mankind named "Dragon" unregarded if it were from the Dragon Kind in reality or not,named as such through misidentification or through false fictionalisation as such titled,second does it affect her in that now if she should give birth to a Baby begetted through copulation with a Human will it be Always a halv Dragon with it with acompanying Attributes.
Black Pyramide of Ombos


EX
Anti-Royality
Description:
Would be normaly be a part of the Reality Marble Nubet Noblephantasm of Seth as Avenger (or presumabl a seperate on in his other classes) but upon Seth own will has the Pyramide remained to be claimed by Nofruseth the "Beauty of Seth" the new Empress which should in his/her Name Claim the World thus is now her Noblephantasm,

This is were the "Mainbase" of Seth through this is Seth Magic still Course in form of demonic familiars and shadow like wraiths Guards which are patroling ist corridors ,Space distortions which direct invaders into trap Rooms or dead Ends ,amongst that is this Pyramide possesing like the Great Pyramide of Gizeh from Chufu tremendous capabilities as Mana conductur in that it is efficiently able to Siphon environmental Mana and manipulate Leylines aswell possess it like his Mortal Counterpart Astromancy atrributes…

Under Noferuseth has it although it is at the Moment stationary the capability to be resummoned on an other Location which then given ist dimensions be equal to a Anti-Fortress strike and its erect around tself a Bounded field in which Authorties based Skills and Noblephantasm of King type Servants are weakened by one rank and it allows Noferuseth to function as Magic Ward in that it reinforces her already immense spellcasting abilities aswell as to allow her to govern over Astromancy a Thaumaturgy she werent Adept in her life .

Beside the usage of a War-Fortress possess it facilities of Dormrooms,spas,Royal Chambers for Noferuseth,a collosal Workshop ,a Green House Hall ,a Throne room in the Central etc, other said in contrary to its terryfying ostility towards invaders does it is for its Guests a very Hospital and comfortable home which provide Maids/Bulter assistents,high quality beverage as the only adequate home for the Great-Queen....

Notes:im especially for this profile happy and gratefull for very Feedback as for that i honed and poli and on everything else .also know i that Alter servants an border on oc charackters.

[RoydGolden]

"Servant Class Foreigner, Hypatia, has answered your call Master. For the sake of protecting mankind's knowledge I'd gladly commit myself as your sword."

Servant Foreigner:

Appearance:

Source

True Name: Hypatia "The Last Scholar"

Alignment: Neutral Good

Alternate Classes: Caster, Ruler, Avenger

Strength- D
Agility- B
Endurance- E
Mana- A
Luck- C
NP- EX

Personality

Reserved and stoical. She always has a detached way of speaking, which makes her come off as emotionless.

But that impression is far from the truth. Foreigner is in fact a deeply passionate and inquisitive young woman with a boundless love of knowledge. She's a voracious reader, being nearly always found with her face buried in some old book. Belying her normally apathetic demeanour, Foreigner becomes far more excited and cheerful when talking about books, acting almost like an eager schoolgirl.

Foreigner values knowledge deeply. For her knowledge is the greatest proof of mankind's worth as a species, an affirmation that "humanity is beautiful". As such she can't stand anyone who would censor or destroy knowledge, considering them contemptible fools who'd cripple mankind's true potential for their short-sighted ideals. Foreigner believes that life is a constant journey to uncover the truth. Even after fusing herself with Yog Sothoth, the so-called "omniscent god", she still hungers for knowledge beyond her grasp. Foreigner has nothing but pity for those who'd give up on advancing because they believe they already hold the "absolute truth".

Due to how she died, Foreigner is naturally wary around those of the Christian faith. While she does her best to be open-minded, Foreigner can't help but regard them with instinctive suspicion.

Foreigner is grateful at how much knowledge she obtained from contracting with Yog Sothoth, but she's disappointed that she can't share it with others without driving them insane. As a scholar, to be able to pass on the fruits of her research to mankind would truly bring Foreigner joy from the bottom of her heart. Thus Foreigner's wish on the Holy Grail would be for a way to "process" her wisdom into a form more suitable for distribution to the masses.

Likes: reading, knowledge
Dislikes: the saying "Ignorance is bliss", superstition, lustful men
Talent: seeking forbidden knowledge
Natural Enemy: Cyril

Class Skills:

Existence Beyond The Domain- N/A
A Skill inherent to the Foreigner Class, asserting that one exists outside of time and reality. As an avatar of Yog Sothoth, a god whose influence extends across all time and space and to even more unfathomable realms, Foreigner would normally possess this Skill at a high rank. However, due to the unique way Foreigner conceives her relationship with her patron god, it has been sealed in favor of her Henosis Skill.

Insanity- B
A Mental Pollution-like Skill gained from contracting with an evil god that can easily erode the fragile common sense and morals of humans. However, the main qualification for the Foreigner Class is being able to defy this erosion, either by maintaining their integrity as they descend into madness or, instead of being consumed by the madness, they consume the madness itself.

Normally contracting with a being like Yog Sothoth would obliterate Foreigner's sense of self entirely. However, due to her sheer force of will and drive to learn and gain new knowledge Foreigner managed to keep her personality and sanity intact through the fusion. Thus she can use the god's power without succumbing to his madness. It can be said that this Skill is a testament to Foreigner's pride as a scholar.

Item Construction- C+
The talent to craft magical items. There's legends that Foreigner invented the astrolabe and hydrometer. This isn't true, as the tools were in use long before her lifetime, but Foreigner was still highly skilled in designing them. As a Servant Foreigner can manufacture all kinds of scientific instruments at a high degree of quality. She can create magical items as well, but due to associating them with her false legend as a sorceress generally dislikes doing so.


Personal Skills:

Librarian Of Stored Knowledge- A++
A Skill that permits a clear recall of knowledge from memory with a successful Luck check, even if the information in question was not consciously acknowledged at the time. A devoted scholar who mastered all kinds of subjects including philosophy, mathematics, astronomy and Magecraft, Foreigner's breadth and depth of knowledge are nearly unparalleled.

This ability allows Foreigner to clearly recall information from any of the fields she studied, as well as memorize new knowledge and skills at an alarming rate. If she merely glanced at the page of a book from the corner of her eye Foreigner could effortlessly recite all its contents from memory. Due to her inhuman learning speed and nearly perfect eidetic memory it wouldn't be an exaggeration to call Foreigner's mind a living computer database.

Incidentally, Foreigner's father Theon was the last lorekeeper of the Library of Alexandria. As a young girl Foreigner would often walk through the library's endless halls, marvelling at the countless books contained within. This experience sparked Foreigner's passion for knowledge. Due to her eidetic memory all the books in that great library are recorded in Foreigner's mind, along with all the other knowledge she obtained in life.

Henosis- EX
A Skill denoting the state of absolute oneness with Truth that's the goal of Platonic philosophy. The Platonics believed that the material world perceived by the senses was only an imperfect shadow of the true world of Forms. Thus the goal of philosophy was, through rigorous reasoning and devotion, to free oneself of attachment to the illusory material world and embrace the higher world of Truth.

In terms of modern Magecraft theory, this "Oneness" would undoubtedly be equated to the Root.

Foreigner never attained such a state in her life, but possesses a version of it as a Servant due to her relationship with Yog Sothoth. As Yog Sothoth is a god who suffuses and transcends all time and space, Foreigner identifies him as the "Oneness" sought after in her philosophy. Having unified herself with the world of Forms, Foreigner's body itself is close to a Platonic Ideal.

This applies the benefits of the Natural Body Skill to Foreigner, giving her a perfect body that can never age or tarnish. Additionally, as one who grasped Ultimate Truth, Foreigner is completely immune to any mental interference. She can never be deceived by words, beguiled by illusions or have her judgment tampered with by any means.

All-Seeing Fathomless Eyes- A
An ability Foreigner gained from pacting with Yog Sothoth, the All-Seeing Mad God. This Skill allows Foreigner to open portals in space resembling eyes that lead to Yog Sothoth's realm. Foreigner can peer through any of these portals as if they were her own eyes, letting her vastly extend her visual range.

Naturally this is an excellent ability for spying. With enough prep time Foreigner can set up eyes around the entire city the Grail War takes place in, giving her a constant bead on the presence and activities of everyone within. While there's no limit to how many portals Foreigner can produce, it's worth noting that the human mind, even one as great as hers, can only process so much sensory input at once.

Thus, using this Skill carelessly could incapacitate Foreigner from sensory overload.

Foreigner can also fire a beam from any of her "eyes". These rays are actually a physical emanation of Yog Sothoth's boundless knowledge. Being hit by one of them overloads the target's mind with excessive information. A single shot merely stuns the victim as their mind temporarily shuts down from trying to process the overwhelming information, while repeated blasts can induce insanity or even death. Truly knowledge can be a dangerous thing.

Noble Phantasms

Witch's Kiss

Black Kiss Of Corruption

Rank: C

Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Mind

According to legend Foreigner used diabolic magic to seduce the prefect of Alexandria, Orestes, and stoke his feud with the rival bishop Cyril. These rumors lead to her death when fanatical Christians blamed Foreigner for the religious riots erupting across the city and decided to assassinate her. While the accusations against Foreigner were wholly meritless, the legend that she was a temptress who wielded occultic powers is enough to manifest into this Noble Phantasm.

Witch's Kiss allows Foreigner to beguile others with her words, slowly but inexorably warping their minds to her will. While at first this is only a mild charm, it grows stronger the longer one spends around Foreigner, eventually making the victim slavishly infatuated with her. As an attack on the mind, it can be warded off by Skills and Noble Phantasms granting mental resilience at rank C or higher.

It can also be resisted by those who simply possess an unnaturally strong willpower. Furthermore, since being able to hear and understand Foreigner's words is a necessary precondition for this Noble Phantasm, it's useless against those incapable of rational thought like most Berserkers, as well as the deaf who simply can't hear Foreigner.

As a visual effect, a distinctive purple marking appears on the back of the neck of those affected by this Noble Phantasm. At first it looks like a mere faint blemish, but as they fall deeper under Foreigner's thrall it coalesces into the shape of a crown with butterfly wings. Due to Foreigner's strong morality and rejection of the legends painting her as a "witch", she refuses to use this Noble Phantasm normally.

Bibliotheca Celaeno

All The World's Forbidden Knowledge

Rank: EX

Type: Reality Marble



The legendary library of Alexandria, built by Ptolemy I to house "all the knowledge of the world". As her father was a lorekeeper of the library and due to their shared nature as "bastions of Hellenic knowledge", Foreigner can manifest it as a Reality Marble. However, due to her contract with Yog Sothoth, it has been conflated with the Library Of Celaeno in H.P Lovecraft's mythos, an alien library said to house countless tablets containing knowledge stolen from the Great Old Ones and Elder Gods.

When Foreigner activates this Noble Phantasm, her surroundings are painted over by the likeness of a masive otherworldly library. It's utterly sprawling, seeming as if to stretch on forever with no end in sight, and composed of an unknown, almost chitinous material that pulsates as if alive. Rows of shelves twist off wildly at impossible angles and directions, making the library labyrinthine to traverse. Some even float in the air, in defiance of known physical laws. Bizarre squid-like creatures can be seen gliding lazily down the library's endless halls. They're not aggressive and don't even seem to be aware of intruders, but will attack if provoked.

This Noble Phantasm is the culmination of Foreigner's boundless hunger for knowledge, to the point where she was even willing to contract with dark gods to gain the wisdom she sought. The library's maze-like shelves contain countless works of mathematics, science, philosophy and far more esoteric fields never seen by human eyes. There's also grimoires of Magecraft, which would surely qualify as spellbook Noble Phantasms of the highest order.

However, the chief drawback of this Noble Phantasm is that Foreigner doesn't have any instinctive knowledge of what part of the library goes where. Thus if she wants to find a particular book Foreigner will have no choice but to search through the entire library for it. This isn't as bad as it sounds, since Foreigner can magically float through the library and reform shelves with but a wave of her hand. But it's still a tedious chore that makes this Noble Phantasm impractical to use in a Grail War.

...Or so it would normally be, but Foreigner in her infinite ingenuity has found a way to use this Noble Phantasm offensively. The books within the library contain knowledge alien to humans, so even looking at them risks eroding one's sanity and mind. Weaponizing this aspect, Foreigner directs all the books in her library to open and point simultaneously at the opponent, bombarding their mind with forbidden knowledge.

Visually, countless rays of luridly many-colored light shoot out from the books to converge on the opponent. These are actually the forbidden knowledge held within the books manifested as beams, similarly to Foreigner's All-Seeing Fathomless Eyes Skill. Like a magnifying glass that focuses all the sun's light on an ant, this attack concentrates all the forbidden knowledge in the library upon a single target, crushing their psyche under a deluge of incomprehensible information.

Simply put, a powerful Anti-Mind, Anti-Sanity Noble Phantasm. Closing one's eyes isn't a suitable defense, as the forbidden knowledge burns directly into the target's very soul. The only ways to defend against this Noble Phantasm (apart from physically dodging the beams) are to have a strong enough mind to withstand the onslaught of information.

Usually this equates to mental resistance Skills or Noble Phantasms ranked A or higher, but possessing an overwhelming will and single-mindedness can also allow one to survive. Also by its nature as a "revelation of the unknown", this Noble Phantasm is less effective against fellow Foreigners, who would already have some experience with the forbidden knowledge.

Key Words/Craft Essence

Scholar's Pride
"Do I hate humans?
What an odd question, Master. It's true that I suffered a torturous death because of human ignorance and envy, but I would never say that I hate mankind.

After all, loving books is the same as loving humans. Each and every book is a window into the soul of the person who wrote it.
Their loves and fears. Their most cherished dreams and convictions. Everything is preserved on the pages for all time.

For me, reading is an expression of my love for humans. That's why more than anything I can't forgive those who'd destroy books.
Destroying books isn't just erasing precious knowledge, it's spitting on the writer's whole life.

That's something I could never accept. Even if their lives were foolish or pitiful, everyone has the right to let their story be heard."

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So Yggdrasil's deleted Foreigner sheet inspired me to try writing up (a not plagiarized) one myself. I know Yog has already been used in canon for Abigail, but I couldn't think of any other eldritch god that fit the "forbidden knowledge" theme. I'm quite proud of this sheet, so I'm curious to hear what people think of it. Thanks for reading!

[cooldownnow]

Hypatia: Wow I loved this sheet. I remember when I was younger a movie about her came out and I watched it with my dad so that's bringing back memories. The sheet itself is well done and as much as I hate sealing class skills due to personal skills in FGO I absolutely love it narratively. Insanity felt a little low because of how extremely well she handled Yog but I'm also not that familiar with the skill and don't understand it completely. The NP was fun but also I find it a little weird that the shelves contain all knowledge even harmless ones and she needs to search for specific books, yet when she fires her knowledge beam she would have to know which books are regular and which are eldritch or else she just might show a dozen dictionaries and an almanac to her enemies.

[Shiki-pon]

FC Link
Alternate Classes: Caster
True Name: Blasco de Garay
Alignment: True Neutral
Origin: Spain (16th century)
Armament: Various machines

Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: C
MANA: E
LUCK: C
NP: D+

Skills

Class Skills

Magic Resistance - Rank E: Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Cannot cancel spells, but magic damage is reduced somewhat.

Riding - Rank B+: A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. When Rider is using a vehicle as a mount, the vehicle’s performance is greatly improved.

Personal Skills

Golden Rule - Rank D: A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth.
Though not wealthy in his own right, Rider was granted a significant sum of money for his inventions. As such, he possesses the ability to finance his projects.

Engineering - Rank A+: An offshoot of the Skill Item Construction, allowing the user to create items that function according to the laws of physics, rather than those of Mystery. The power of this Skill is measured by the user’s proficiency by the standards of their own era.
At this rank, almost any kind of machine can be constructed with the right resources. Rider works from the basis of his own era’s learning, resulting in machinery that can be considered unorthodox by today’s standards. He is particularly adept with marine technology, even for military usage.

Noble Phantasms

The First Steam Engine

Motor de la Trinidad

Anti-Machine, Rank B

The very concept of an ‘engine’ distilled into a Noble Phantasm. It is written in the Spanish National Archives that Rider proposed to the Holy Roman Emperor Charles V the concept of a steam-powered boat, among other inventions. This engine was apparently tested, having been outfitted onto a ship, and performed as expected. However, the project never took off and Rider vanished into the annals of history, taking the engine he had installed on the ship Trinidad with him.
The original ‘trinity’ of the motor - fire, metal and water - has been transformed into something not entirely similar due to its transformation into a Servant’s Noble Phantasm. Contained within the chassis of a Noble Phantasm, magical energy is converted mechanical energy, allowing Motor de la Trinidad to power just about any type of machine. With the Noble Phantasm serving as a power source, the normal logic of a machine’s function is suspended, and the machine being powered is itself counted as Rider’s Noble Phantasm. Breakage from stress and physical factors that would reduce the machine’s efficiency are ignored entirely, allowing the target of Motor de la Trinidad to far suppress an ordinary machine’s performance - in the same manner that Servants exceed the performance of ordinary humans.

Description

Likes: Experimenting with machinery, old texts
Dislikes: Stingy treasurers, obsession with military matters
Talents: Mechanical engineering, invention and reinvention
Natural Enemy: Robert Fulton

Rider’s true identity is Blasco de Garay, the Father of Steam Navigation.

Oddly for a military officer, Blasco is quite laid-back and lacking in discipline. He is bookish and places great value in texts of older make, believing there to be a great number of untapped discoveries to be made in their contents. Though he is mostly quite charming, drawing attention to the questionable nature of some of his deeds and inventions can render him surly and irascible.
Rather than fighting, Blasco is fascinated with mechanics, often spending his time tinkering with whatever materials he has gotten hold of, or poring over scientific texts. Despite considering his works to be “his” inventions, he gives credit where it is due and praises the scientists and philosophers of ancient times to high heavens for their achievements, which he merely mimics.
Blasco is, naturally enough, drawn to other men of science and natural philosophy, even among Heroic Spirits. Out of all the ancient scholars, the man he would most like to meet would be Archimedes, as he never found the methods necessary to replicate some of the great man’s works. As for his relationship with his would-be rival, Robert Fulton, as inventor of the first steam-powered vessel, he is quite dispassionate rather than heated on the subject, preferring to let each man’s works speak for themselves.
As something of a layabout, Blasco prefers not to battle, even if his Master would expect him to. His interest lies mainly in machinery, and he is all too willing to construct engines of war to fight in his stead. In fact, he has designs to allow his Master to fight personally in the Holy Grail War, with himself serving merely as their mechanic and assistant. Of course, as a Servant he still feels dutybound to place himself in combat if explicitly ordered to, even if he makes his displeasure at the idea clear.
Blasco’s wish to the Holy Grail is for the treasurer that was sent to evaluate his works to be replaced with someone he would deem more competent. With this, he feels, the triumph of his engine would be assured and perhaps his other inventions would’ve received more worthy notice as well.

Lore

Blasco de Garay was an officer of the Spanish Navy, reputed to have constructed a steam engine capable of powering a ship in the 16th century. The demonstration of this engine’s workings was suggested to the Holy Roman Emperor Charles V, and the test on the ship La Trinidad overseen by the emperor’s officials. Blasco was awarded a sizable sum for his work, but his ideas were not taken up for further consideration, and his other suggested inventions were ignored.
Blasco de Garay vanished from the history books, taking his steam engine with him once the test was completed. Due to the lack of documentation on the subject, Blasco’s claim as the inventor of steam navigation is a matter of some dispute.

Notes

I mostly don't like how this sheet turns out, as it seems to be lacking in something. Probably anything resembling a personality.

Despite the idea having some interest and being one of the rare Spanish people that don't seem to be either overdone, boring sciencey/literary types, or incredibly evil, it seems I managed to mess this up. This might go into the Hall of Shame as well.

[DracoFay]

Origin of Assassin
Assassin Hashashin

Class: Assassin
Alternate Classes: Caster, Avenger
True Name: Hashashin (Hasan Sabbah)
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Armaments: Book of the Metatron
Attribute: Human
Traits: Genderless, Brynhild’s Beloved, Humanoid, Servant, Weak to Enuma Elish

Wish for the Grail: “Oh I’ve so many having all those inheritors in the throne, rebuilding the Hashashin, my old friends wish for the void. I suppose I need three grails don’t I?”

Appearance: Faceless darkness in a roughly humanoid form, cloaked in a simple black cloak.

BioBio: It was in the year 1050 that the man Hasan Sabbah was born, the child of a family belonging to the Twelver Shī‘ah. Early in life this family would come to live Rayy where he would learn many things, palmistry, language, astronomy, philosophy, and mathematics.

It is also in Rayy that Hasan Sabbah would encounter Amira Darrab, an Isma’ili missionary. Though initially unimpressed by Amira and the Isma’ili doctrine, over time the missionary’s passion and convection lead Hasan to delve deeper into this alternate interpretation of their faith. Ultimately Hasan came to believe in Ismailism fully converting and planning to give all efforts to his faith.

For years afterwards Hassan traveled abroad, continuing his studies and gain more tutelage from other missionaries and eventually becoming one himself. His eventual end goal was Cairo where he further studied, preached, and eventually came to earn the ire of Badr al-Jamali Chief of the Army. Hassan was placed in jail where he encountered an unusual old man, one whom claimed to be an immortal from a long-forgotten time. In the few short hours he stayed in the jail the two men conversed, becoming fast friends as the old mans tales intrigued Hasan, and Hasan’s passionate sermon bring the old man great joy.

When one of the jails minarets collapsed near the two, their miraculous survival unscathed was taken as a good omen in their favor, and the two were set free. The two were deported by ship, only for their ship to be wreaked, and yet again they were both unscathed as a rescue brought them to Syria. For a short period Hassan traveled with the old man, his faith growing ever stronger, and his passion bringing the man to convert to this same faith.

Eventually Hassan made his way to Persia fully dedicated to his mission, a mission to convert as many followers as possible to the Isma’ili faith. As he came across the Alborz mountains, Nizam al-Mulk would hear of Hassan and fearing him a threat ordered his capture. Hassan and his companion evaded capture by moving deeper into the mountains, and the deeper into the mountains the came the more their mission changed. Soon not only did they wish to convert people to the faith, but they also came to desire the elimination of those whom threaten it.

One day the two encounter a castle fortress within Alamut, the perfect base to guide their mission. Slowly but surely, they took over the fort, sending followers to win the peoples favor, converting key figures to their cause, and finally taking over the structure in 1090. With a fortress to act as base Hasan and his companion began expanding, converting many to their cause, many whom would lay down their lives for their cause, and many whom did.

To purge the corruption and evils of their faith, they trained many of their followers to become experts int the art of death. To further add to their faith Hasan abandoned his name, it soon taken up by his immortal friend whom became an imposing figure to inspire fear in enemies and hope in allies. Both the new Hassan and their followers would go out, taking the lives of their enemies all in an effort to purify and protect their faith.

Soon enough the Old Man of the Mountains became an entity feared by many, as much so for his prowess as a killer as for his ability to convert yet more followers. To slander their efforts legends were created claiming that their followers used drugs to achieve a certain state of mind for their mission. They were branded the Hashashin a name derived from a famed drug the Hashishi, at first this infuriated the Nazari, however the now nameless man once known as Hassan Sabbah laughed and said “Do not be angered at this for it is proof of their fear. These faithless whom blacken out efforts so fear us as to craft rumors and slander us so they may find respite from that fear. From hear on I shall wear their fear with honor thusly I ask to be known simply as Hashashin.” And so he fully abandoned his name, for his organization.

Not long after Hassan-I Sabbah retreated fully to the Shrine of Azrael and his loyal servant Hashashin set about creating his successor, grooming many men to become the greatest of Assassins, the name that they created from their actions. There were three that stood out, and as a final test Hashashin would tell them to create an ultimate technique the Zabaniya, giving aid to them through the magecraft he had learned in his many years of study. One prospect died in the process, another failed entirely, but the last returned with the arm of the demon Shaytan, an arm Hashashin would help to graft into the first successor to Hassan-I Sabbah.

Over many years Hashashin would create many more Hassans, from Hassan of Intoxicating Smoke, to Hassan of Serenity, until he create the final successor Hassan of the Hundred Faces. The end had come to Hashashin, both the man and his organization, as all their enemies came together in a final assault against their stronghold. The first Hassan, surrounded by death for years, and sacrificing his body for the sake of his faith had long lost his immortality, and would too fall in combat.

Hashashin was already dead, continuing as a physical Wraith for many years until that point, and continuing many more as an incorporeal one. By some miracle he was summoned briefly as an Assassin class servant, and soon after was recorded into the Throne of Heroes not as Hassan-I Sabbah, but as Hashashin, as a physical embodiment of the organization he had created and dedicated himself to.

Parameters:

-Strength: E
-Endurance: B+
-Agility: B
-Mana: B++
-Luck: C
-NP: A+

SkillsClass Skills:

Presence Concealment EX: A skill offering the ability to conceal one’s presence from others, allowing a servant to stealthily move about. In life Assassin hid himself so well it is was only when he wanted to be found that others could even now of his existence. He sacrificed so much and hid so well that it is only through becoming the embodiment of the organization he dedicated himself to that he was able to be recorded into the throne in the first place. At this rank he can completely erase his presence from the world, to the point that even Alaya and Gaia cannot find him when he does not wish to be. This comes at the risk of permanently erasing his existence if he is not careful to maintain an anchor to the world, fortunately his faith provides him this anchor.

Independent Action B+: The ability to remain manifested even while rejecting a master’s magical energy, a missionary and mage whom obtained a faith so pure that even the sacrifice of his name and body were trivial, there exists nothing save his faith that can keep him from fulfilling his will. At this rank Assassin is capable of remaining manifested in the world for a couple days, assuming he does not use skills or his noble phantasm.

Personal Skills:

Skin Reading B: A unique magecraft developed by Assassin as a method of learning another’s history and personality, it allows him to do so by simply touching the person in question. At this rank Assassin is able to learn the names, likes, dislikes, and the most basic personality traits of another with but a single touch, though getting an in depth understanding these qualities their history and skills all require prolonged touch. The skill can even be used on dead parts of another’s body though Assassin will only be able to learn facts from up to the point the body part was removed from the person. Due to the nature of servants this skill requires Assassin to have touch them for a longer period of time, and he will learn their personality and skills first and their true name and noble phantasms last.

Guiding Hand A++: A denoting a servant’s ability to help another to find and follow a particular path in life, it allows Assassin to guide others towards goals wither sit by the person in question or Assassin. Thanks to Assassin’s Skin Reading skill allowing him to find out the necessary information of another’s life, his charisma, his willingness, and ability to help others find their path in life he has earned this skill at a high rank. However as his personal main goal is to create assassins this skill has been slightly de-ranked.

Assassin Creation A+++: A skill born of Assassin’s ability to create new assassins, it allows him to turn even ordinary humans into capable assassins’ worthy of being servants of said class. Having had a hand, either direct or indirect, in the creation of every assassin of the Hashashin Assassin would normally have this skill at its highest rank, however as the leader of the organization never fully acknowledged the other assassins it has been kept from EX rank just barely.

Protection of the Faith (Servitude) EX: A variant of Protection of the Faith denoting a servant’s devotion to their faith not in their own actions to protect and serve it, but in their service to others whom would go on to protect and serve their faith in his place. It allows him to give resist the mental attacks and manipulation of others, as well as the ability to convey this resistance to others. Additionally he is also able to temporarily increase the parameters of other so long as they show faith of some kind which can acknowledge.

Noble PhantasmsNoble Phantasms:

Zabaniya Process: Thus Thou Bearest the Name Hassan-I Sabbah A++:

A Noble Phantasm born of his efforts to create worthy inheritors to the name Hassan-I Sabbah, it allows him to use unique techniques based upon both science and magecraft to turn regular humans into superhuman assassins. These humans must be loyal and faithful members of the Islamic faith, willing to give life and limb for the sake of protecting and purifying it. For the vast majority of the Assassins Hashashin creates, while superhuman they will not be close to the level of a servant, but on rare occasions Hashashin is able to find one able to create a true Zabaniya. In such cases depending on what Zabaniya they end up creating they will be capable of going toe to toe with even high ranked servants.

Book of Metatron: Records of Allah’s Blade B+:

A book Hashashin created as a sort of record of the organization he dedicated himself to, only he is able to read it as it requires not only the Skin Reading technique to read, but another form of magecraft to decrypt what one reads. The leather of the books cover was made from the skin of the First Hassan, and each page was made from the skin of all later prospective inheritors of the title Hassan-I Sabbah, both those that failed and those whom succeeded. This noble phantasm allows Hashashin to temporarily summon all of the Hassans he created. Depending on how many he summons they may be as strong as they would be if summoned normally, or weaker than even the weakest of servants.

Interactions with othersInteractions with others:

Summon: “I am Hashashin, the origin of the Assassin, do not worry master even if you are a heathen whom does not believe in Allah, I shall still give my aide.”

First Hassan: “My lord I am surprised to see you again, I suppose this means Allah still has plans for you.”

Hassan of the Cursed Arm: “Ah such a brave child, seeing you brings found memories.”

Hassan of Serenity: “Your dance is as beautiful as ever, and as lethal as ever, I am so proud.”

Hassan of Hundred Faces: “Zayd your well it seems, Macour your speed seams to have improved, Gozour now you have the large body to match your strength, Asako you are quiet alluring, perfect to lure targets.”

Japanese Assassin Servants: “I am quite curious about eastern assassination techniques.”

Assassin Li Shuwen: “One strike?!? You need only one strike to kill, my that could be quite useful.”

Charlotte Corday: “To have had success with your assassination despite all the odds, Allah must’ve sent Azrael to help you. *Talking to the Angel…thing* You are not what I expected but none the less I am happy to meet you.”

Heathen Gods: “My deepest thank descendants of Allah’s will for your help in humanities development.”

Other's interactions with himOther’s interactions with him:

First Hassan: “Hashashin my friend, Allah is merciful to reunite us.”

Hassan of the Cursed Arm: “*laughs* I still don’t know which hurt more, when you grafted Shaytan’s arm to me or when you helped replace my face with this mask.” *laughs again*

Hassan of Serenity: “I have you to thank for teaching me, and for giving me the right doses of poison, and for a lot more.”

Hassan of the Hundred Faces: “We never would’ve learned so much without you, nor would there be so many of us. Our deepest thanks.”

Charlotte Corday: “Is that his name Azrael, well its nice to finally know.”

Authors Notes: This took a long time, a looooooooooong time. Anyways it was inspired by this one sheet I saw on Beast’s Lair its been so long I don’t remember much beyond the basic concept of someone acting to give the First Hassan’s orders to his followers. Latter I saw a video on YouTube about Hassan Sabbah and changed the sheet even more. Thus came the idea of the original Hassan Sabbah sacrificing his name to the Old Man of the Mountain. Speaking of if your confused about the immortal old man part in the bio, its implied that the First Hassan was Ziusudra a man “blessed” with immortality by the gods, and I came up with this idea.

[Kabalisto Koga]

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Alternate Classes: Caster
True Name: Blasco de Garay
Alignment: True Neutral
Origin: Spain (16th century)
Armament: Various machines

Parameters:
STR: D
END: D
AGI: C
MANA: E
LUCK: C
NP: D+

Skills

Class Skills

Magic Resistance - Rank E: Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Cannot cancel spells, but magic damage is reduced somewhat.

Riding - Rank B+: A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts. When Rider is using a vehicle as a mount, the vehicle’s performance is greatly improved.

Personal Skills

Golden Rule - Rank D: A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth.
Though not wealthy in his own right, Rider was granted a significant sum of money for his inventions. As such, he possesses the ability to finance his projects.

Engineering - Rank A+: An offshoot of the Skill Item Construction, allowing the user to create items that function according to the laws of physics, rather than those of Mystery. The power of this Skill is measured by the user’s proficiency by the standards of their own era.
At this rank, almost any kind of machine can be constructed with the right resources. Rider works from the basis of his own era’s learning, resulting in machinery that can be considered unorthodox by today’s standards. He is particularly adept with marine technology, even for military usage.

Noble Phantasms

The First Steam Engine

Motor de la Trinidad

Anti-Machine, Rank B

The very concept of an ‘engine’ distilled into a Noble Phantasm. It is written in the Spanish National Archives that Rider proposed to the Holy Roman Emperor Charles V the concept of a steam-powered boat, among other inventions. This engine was apparently tested, having been outfitted onto a ship, and performed as expected. However, the project never took off and Rider vanished into the annals of history, taking the engine he had installed on the ship Trinidad with him.
The original ‘trinity’ of the motor - fire, metal and water - has been transformed into something not entirely similar due to its transformation into a Servant’s Noble Phantasm. Contained within the chassis of a Noble Phantasm, magical energy is converted mechanical energy, allowing Motor de la Trinidad to power just about any type of machine. With the Noble Phantasm serving as a power source, the normal logic of a machine’s function is suspended, and the machine being powered is itself counted as Rider’s Noble Phantasm. Breakage from stress and physical factors that would reduce the machine’s efficiency are ignored entirely, allowing the target of Motor de la Trinidad to far suppress an ordinary machine’s performance - in the same manner that Servants exceed the performance of ordinary humans.

Description

Likes: Experimenting with machinery, old texts
Dislikes: Stingy treasurers, obsession with military matters
Talents: Mechanical engineering, invention and reinvention
Natural Enemy: Robert Fulton

Rider’s true identity is Blasco de Garay, the Father of Steam Navigation.

Oddly for a military officer, Blasco is quite laid-back and lacking in discipline. He is bookish and places great value in texts of older make, believing there to be a great number of untapped discoveries to be made in their contents. Though he is mostly quite charming, drawing attention to the questionable nature of some of his deeds and inventions can render him surly and irascible.
Rather than fighting, Blasco is fascinated with mechanics, often spending his time tinkering with whatever materials he has gotten hold of, or poring over scientific texts. Despite considering his works to be “his” inventions, he gives credit where it is due and praises the scientists and philosophers of ancient times to high heavens for their achievements, which he merely mimics.
Blasco is, naturally enough, drawn to other men of science and natural philosophy, even among Heroic Spirits. Out of all the ancient scholars, the man he would most like to meet would be Archimedes, as he never found the methods necessary to replicate some of the great man’s works. As for his relationship with his would-be rival, Robert Fulton, as inventor of the first steam-powered vessel, he is quite dispassionate rather than heated on the subject, preferring to let each man’s works speak for themselves.
As something of a layabout, Blasco prefers not to battle, even if his Master would expect him to. His interest lies mainly in machinery, and he is all too willing to construct engines of war to fight in his stead. In fact, he has designs to allow his Master to fight personally in the Holy Grail War, with himself serving merely as their mechanic and assistant. Of course, as a Servant he still feels dutybound to place himself in combat if explicitly ordered to, even if he makes his displeasure at the idea clear.
Blasco’s wish to the Holy Grail is for the treasurer that was sent to evaluate his works to be replaced with someone he would deem more competent. With this, he feels, the triumph of his engine would be assured and perhaps his other inventions would’ve received more worthy notice as well.

Lore

Blasco de Garay was an officer of the Spanish Navy, reputed to have constructed a steam engine capable of powering a ship in the 16th century. The demonstration of this engine’s workings was suggested to the Holy Roman Emperor Charles V, and the test on the ship La Trinidad overseen by the emperor’s officials. Blasco was awarded a sizable sum for his work, but his ideas were not taken up for further consideration, and his other suggested inventions were ignored.
Blasco de Garay vanished from the history books, taking his steam engine with him once the test was completed. Due to the lack of documentation on the subject, Blasco’s claim as the inventor of steam navigation is a matter of some dispute.

Notes

I mostly don't like how this sheet turns out, as it seems to be lacking in something. Probably anything resembling a personality.

Despite the idea having some interest and being one of the rare Spanish people that don't seem to be either overdone, boring sciencey/literary types, or incredibly evil, it seems I managed to mess this up. This might go into the Hall of Shame as well.

because he is lacking something you say ? could you elaborated please wahat are his machines respectively designs are ? you could add this as additional info to his Engineering skill or as seperate Armament section as example and is his Motor del la Trinidad now only the engine or the "whole" ship ? just to be shure i mean ?

and i saw also your Horsemen servant ,he is realy interesting could you give me some info for the other horsemen because i want to make a connglomerate servant of the four and Reaper servant ?

and have you seen my Nofrusobek servant i would be happy to hear your oppinion !

[Shiki-pon]

because he is lacking something you say ? could you elaborated please wahat are his machines respectively designs are ? you could add this as additional info to his Engineering skill or as seperate Armament section as example and is his Motor del la Trinidad now only the engine or the "whole" ship ? just to be shure i mean ?

and i saw also your Horsemen servant ,he is realy interesting could you give me some info for the other horsemen because i want to make a connglomerate servant of the four and Reaper servant ?

and have you seen my Nofrusobek servant i would be happy to hear your oppinion !

Not lacking in content, lacking in character. I don't think there are fitting images on the web and I don't have the interest to dig any up. Primitive-looking steampunk machinery, essentially. And given that Motor de la Trinidad mentions the NP being transferable to other machines, you can hopefully draw a conclusion on whether or not it's an engine or a ship.

As for the horsemen, I invite you to once again do your own research. I'm also fervently hoping that the mentioned composite Servant of them and the reaper aren't a single entity.

[RoydGolden]

Ok, I know that Walker and I both created accounts and posted servants really close together but we are not the same person, we are just friends. Now, I know this is a really, really stupid sounding excuse, but he and myself are both part of a group running a D&D campaign based on Fate where the DM wanted us to create a servant of our assigned class and post it on here. Me him and the guy who got Saber were the only ones without an account, somehow, so that's why they are created close together. I also now wouldn't be surprised if you expect me to make another account to post a saber class servant, the guy has Uther btw, but believe what you want.

Either way, thanks for calling out Walker, and nice design. (If you want another outer god other than Yog, I believe Volgna-Gath also counts as a god of knowledge.)

Also, if anyone does choose to respond, anyone know if anyone has designed an Iskander alter?

I presume you're replying to me, first of all. You could have quoted part of my post just to be clear. And sorry about assuming you were the same guy as Yggdrasil. It's just that you both have pretty similar writing/formatting styles and Yggdrasil deleted his sheet at around the same time you posted up yours. I'll edit my post to remove that accusation.

And no, as far as I know there hasn't been an Iskandar Alter sheet. Would be an interesting idea though. Maybe he'd have something to do with the Massacre of Persepolis as an NP, since that's one of the most infamous deeds in Iskandar's legend. Feel free to write it up if you'd like.

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[King of the End, Verthranga]

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...And now his post is gone for some reason, so it looks I'm replying to nothing. What's with people deleting their posts lately? Can get really confusing..

Thanks, I just wanted to clear that up. And about the delete, I was actually considering not writing it as it felt more like I was attacking you. I took it down to re-write. Sorry.

Also still kind of new so trying to figure out how the sight works. Also, the similarities stem a lot from the fact that the skeleton we used to create the servants was provided by our DM. Here I'll show you

Class:
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Parameters:Normal (Skill/Noble Phantasm enhancement)
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Interesting Anecdotes:

Oh, and thanks for giving me my next servant idea.

[King of Padoru]

Blasco de Garay: I'm the first one to acknowledge that Spanish Servants are incredibly hard to do. The sheet does feel lacking in character, but I'm afraid I can't be of much help with it. I would suggest adding another skill like Pioneer of the Stars (Fake), given he's technically the father of steam vehicles.

I personally believe you've done a decent sheet, you shouldn't feel down

[RoydGolden]

Thanks, I just wanted to clear that up. And about the delete, I was actually considering not writing it as it felt more like I was attacking you. I took it down to re-write. Sorry.

Also still kind of new so trying to figure out how the sight works. Also, the similarities stem a lot from the fact that the skeleton we used to create the servants was provided by our DM. Here I'll show you

Class:
Other Class:
True Name:
Alignment:
Region of Origin:

Parameters:Normal (Skill/Noble Phantasm enhancement)
Strength:
Endurance:
Agility:
Mana:
Luck:
Noble Phantasm:

Height:
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Gender:
Blood Type:
Birthday:
Likes:
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Lore:

Personality:

Class Skills:

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Interesting Anecdotes:

Oh, and thanks for giving me my next servant idea.

I honestly didn't feel attacked at all, but I appreciate your consideration. And looking forward to your next sheet!

[Kabalisto Koga]

Blasco de Garay: I'm the first one to acknowledge that Spanish Servants are incredibly hard to do. The sheet does feel lacking in character, but I'm afraid I can't be of much help with it. I would suggest adding another skill like Pioneer of the Stars (Fake), given he's technically the father of steam vehicles.

I personally believe you've done a decent sheet, you shouldn't feel down

One Question Padoru woul you say that this \/ is a decent faceclaim for El Cid or Ferdinand III of Castile ?

Spoiler:

and could you please look at my Nofrusobek Alter sheet and tell me your oppinion About her ?

[Shiki-pon]

Blasco de Garay: I'm the first one to acknowledge that Spanish Servants are incredibly hard to do. The sheet does feel lacking in character, but I'm afraid I can't be of much help with it. I would suggest adding another skill like Pioneer of the Stars (Fake), given he's technically the father of steam vehicles.

I personally believe you've done a decent sheet, you shouldn't feel down

Pioneer of the Stars (Fake) would feel kinda... Fake, honestly. The distinction wouldn't be necessary if it was commonly believed that someone contributed enough. One wonders if Innocent Monster could grant something like that. Oh well.
And as for the quality, it's decent but not good. It mostly annoys me since this was one of the few Spanish sheets that I was willing to attempt.
Anyways, onto the next one:

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Alternate Classes: Assassin
True Name: La Bête du Gévaudan
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: France (18th century)
Armament: Teeth

Parameters:
STR: B
END: C+
AGI: C+
MANA: D
LUCK: B
NP: C

Skills

Class Skills

Mad Enhancement - Rank C: The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange for hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms.
Rank up for all parameters except Luck and Mana, but in exchange, one can no longer think and speak properly. As Berserker possessed the mentality of an animal from the start, Mad Enhancement is mostly beneficial to him.

Personal Skills

Innocent Monster - Rank B: An attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed.
Due to the varying and questionable descriptions of Berserker in life, his appearance has been altered into something that no longer truly resembles the animal he started out as.

Lycanthropy - Rank D-: The quality of one’s existence as a traditional werewolf. A compound Skill granting the user several abilities associated with the legend of werewolves, among them natural weaponry in the form of claws and fangs, enhanced senses and the Skills Monstrous Strength, Shapeshift and Weakness (Silver). In addition to this, Lycanthropy forces a strong thirst for blood and human flesh on the Servant, growing stronger as the rank of the Skill increases.
Though Berserker may not have initially possessed this Skill, the circumstances of his death along with rumours concerning his rampage have granted him Lycanthropy. Though he cannot take the form of man, he can alter his anatomy to take human features while remaining mostly in the shape of a monstrous wolf.

Beast of the Dark Forest - Rank C: The capacity of a hunter dwelling in the forest, striking from ambush like a beast and fading into the wilds just as quickly.
Grants Berserker the benefits of Presence Concealment while within a forest.

Noble Phantasms

The Nightmare is Yet to End

Il en Existe un Autre

Anti-Unit (Self), Rank C+

A highly unorthodox Noble Phantasm, Il en Existe un Autre could be considered the Noble Phantasm of a Master than Berserker himself. As Berserker is driven to insanity by Mad Enhancement, the Noble Phantasm can only be activated by a Command Spell.
Il en Existe un Autre’s common activation method relies on Berserker’s own death. Should the Master have received the proper memories from Berserker or studied his Servant’s legend, he might glean the Noble Phantasm’s effect. By using a Command Spell, Berserker can be commanded to return to life, his Saint Graph and form preserved by Il en Existe un Autre.
However, as Il en Existe un Autre’s effect is to ‘manifest another body’ for Berserker, there is nothing preventing the Noble Phantasm’s use while the original Berserker is still alive. This will result in a single Servant possessing two to four single-minded bodies, vastly improving their prowess in combat. Of course, as this directly contradicts the usual operation of a Holy Grail War, the cost in magical energy for Berserker’s upkeep is ramped up significantly.

Description

Likes: Causing fear, hunting humans
Dislikes: Silver, others targeting those of his packs
Talents: Hiding from pursuers, constant activity
Natural Enemy: Cú Chulainn

Berserker’s true identity is La Bête du Gévaudan, literally translated as the Beast of Gévaudan.

La Bête is a beast, and his Mad Enhancement has rendered him into a nigh-constant state of fury and bloodlust. Due to being a wolf, this does not make him a howling monster, but a silent creature, eerily still with deliberate, almost stilted movements while outside active combat. Due to retaining his instincts, La Bête is fully willing to retreat in the face of overt opposition and hide rather than confront enemies needlessly.
Even in life, La Bête seemed more than a simple beast, and continues hunting humans out of pleasure even as a Servant. He enjoys the thought of a beast causing terror in humanity, seeing it as a reversal of the usual state of affairs. The knowledge granted by the Holy Grail has granted him a dangerous amount of information on human society, furthering the amount of havoc he can cause.
As they are mostly humans, La Bête does not feel much towards other Heroic Spirits. He has an instinctive fear of great hunters and those that wield firearms, but thinks little of them beyond that. As for the great beasts that can manifest as Servants, La Bête understands his relative weakness and the youth of his legend in comparison, acting subservient.
Rather than seeing them as a human, La Bête sees his Master as the mate he had in life. Despite this, he does seem to understand that they are physically human rather than wolf, and as such does not approach them too closely for fear of their safety. He is, however, fiercely protective of them and springs to their side if the Master is ever in danger.
As La Bête is not only a Berserker but originally an animal as well, their wish to the Holy Grail is uncertain.

Lore

La Bête du Gévaudan was a man-eating wolf that terrorized southern France in the 18th century, being responsible for an estimated 210 attacks. The attacks, which covered an area spanning 90 by 80 kilometres, were said to have been committed by one or more beasts with formidable teeth and immense tails, according to contemporary eyewitnesses.
Over a period of three years, the Beast attacked even groups of armed men wantonly, with hunters proving unable to catch him. Though some claimed to have killed the wolf, the attacks continued unabated.
Finally, the end of the attacks came when a Gévaudan-born hunter met and shot the Beast on a hunt organized by a local noble. The fact that the hunter used bullets made with silver only contributed more to the Beast’s reputation as a supernatural entity, with legends even claiming that the monstrous wolf had turned into man upon dying.

Notes

This is probably the third time I wrote this sheet, which always ended up getting scrapped for some reason or another.

[Kabalisto Koga]

That is a really good Beast of Gevauden sheet you made Shiki i like the rule contradicting Noblephantasm which is quite tricky but also powefull in it own Right albeit it is limited by the regular three command seal Limit but in the case of that the Master could ge hold on more and offer a high amount of mana it could be interesting … (this was just a spontan Imagination)

and please what is your oppinion of my Nofruseth ?