She's a bit...hm...unclear? I guess that's the intention due to who she is. But this is one of the cases where you need to see her in a certain story to evaluate, because the profile alone doesn't say much. Some quote examples or interactions with characters similar to her (or contrast with her) would help, especially if she is Chuang Tzu.
Class: Assassin
Alignment: True/neutral
Region: Himalaia
Height: 884,800cm/135cm
Weight: 810,000,000,000,000kg/43kg
Likes: sunrises, sunsets, offerings
Dislikes: climbers, disrespect, modern world
Talent: being impressive
Armaments: snow and ice
Natural Enemy: Edmund Hillary, Tenzing Norgay
stats
Str: B
End: B
Agi: D
Mna: A
Lck: A
NP: A
Skills
class skills
Presence concealment(N/A): This skill is lost in favor of the skill Overwhelming Presence.
personal skills
Child of Nature(EX): A skill that represents one as a child born in the Reverse Side of the Worldthat will eventually become the same. As a high ranking Nature spirit, Assassin receives great blessings from the World.
Divinity(D): The level of one's aptitude as a Divine spirit. Assassin has a minor rank for been considered a sacred location for Tibetan and Nepalese people.
Eternal Ice(C): A skill representing the unmelting ice at the top of Mountains. It is used by Assassin as her main way of combat and unlike regular ice, it cannot be melted by any form of heat even if of Magical nature.
Overwhelming Presence(EX): A skill representing one as a exist so big it cannot be completely perceive as a whole. As the literary top of the world, being in her pressence will usually cause others to be unable to process it, being either paralysed with awe or ignoring her. However, if one has a similar great existence or has behold something similarly great, they will be able to block off the effects of this skill.
Noble phantasm
Holy Mother of the Sky
Sagarmatha
rank: Mountain, A+
Unlike most Servants, the human shape who interacts with the world is not actually her real form, but a Cerebral Corpus. Her real body only manifests when this Noble Phantasm is Summoned.
It is not a Reality Marble, but a Magecraft summoning the concept of the "Top of the world" in the shape of a mountain. On it, the air is extremely thin, making survival hard for those without some sort of protection.
Furthermore, the Mountain is a Karmic point of the world, a place where one's actions have their weight amplified. This manifests as a kind of pressure on those of "Evil" alignment that reduces their stats and sealing their skills.
Background
Assassin is Mount Everest, also called Sagarmatha in Nepali and Chomolungma in Tibetan, the world's highest mountain.
More specifically, she is a Nature spirit who embodies the Mountain. As the "summit of the world", the local carries a lot of mystery even in modern times. It's a place that is revere as sacred by several cultures.
As of 2019, over 300 people have died on it, many of whose bodies remain on the mountain. Some of the most famous of such occurrences are the 1970 disaster, the Lho La tragedy and the 1996 disaster.
personality
Assassin is very proud of her status as "the summit of the world". She considers herself the greatest and will often look down upon others. When meeting someone who can equal or surpass her greatness, Assassin can get very competitive.
Her relationship with the Master will most likely be a good one, so long as they threat Assassin with respect and doesnt impose too much on her. Her prideful nature actually makes her quite easy to manipulate if one takes advantage of it, but getting caught would not be pretty.
Last edited by the god of world-0; February 3rd, 2020 at 08:57 PM.
She's a bit...hm...unclear? I guess that's the intention due to who she is. But this is one of the cases where you need to see her in a certain story to evaluate, because the profile alone doesn't say much. Some quote examples or interactions with characters similar to her (or contrast with her) would help, especially if she is Chuang Tzu.
From what I understood she's more of an idea, a something like Jack the Wristwatch.
Although I like the concept of Everest-chan, I think you kinda went with the most uhhh, basic possible version of it? Like, it's got ice powers, the NP is the summit, yeah, but there's no uhhhh, no hook, ya know? Other than being a cute girl.
Although I like the concept of Everest-chan, I think you kinda went with the most uhhh, basic possible version of it? Like, it's got ice powers, the NP is the summit, yeah, but there's no uhhhh, no hook, ya know? Other than being a cute girl.
I have to agree. None of the skills are interesting and the NP is very basic.
You could've done much more with the concept, I think.
Her being an Assassin is really cool though (also you called her Caster on the Background.)
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Originally Posted by TheLordOfAwesome
edit: Made the changes! Lowered the rank in Explosives and gave Barnum a second NP as well.
i am tryimg to be a little more experimental with this and the last sheet, i guess is working?
i was going to includ something about her being "a point that connects the sky and earth" but could not thing of anything.
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she was originaly going to be a caster, but honestly i am getting tirred of the class. i mean, just look at how many i've made lately. i'll fix, and also probably refrain from making more Casters for some time
Well shoot, this makes me want to make my Flat Earth Servant idea. >_>
Wow. That is...interesting.
...Base her personality off the classical Karen stereotype; short, dyed blonde hair, antivaxxer, regularly demands to see the manager, and overall an entitled idiot.
...Base her personality off the classical Karen stereotype; short, dyed blonde hair, antivaxxer, regularly demands to see the manager, and overall an entitled idiot.
...Base her personality off the classical Karen stereotype; short, dyed blonde hair, antivaxxer, regularly demands to see the manager, and overall an entitled idiot.
Flat earth? Karen? Anti-vaxxer? I don't get what you're saying at all.
No, obviously I know what they are. I just don't get how those three things relate. Particularly the "Karen" one.
A denial of facts and smug superiority from their faux intelligence at knowing "something" that they perceive others not knowing. A "Karen" is typically a woman who is incredibly entitled, nosy, and belligerent.