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    Class : Caster

    Name : Benjamin Franklin
    Alignment : Neutral Good
    Likes : Good Humor, Pretty Women, New Discoveries,Virtue
    Dislikes : Slavery

    Weapon : Guns.

    Personnality :
    At first glance, Caster is not the type of person one would think when they hear of Heroic Spirits. He makes constants ( admitetly pretty good ) jokes, stuff his mouth with whatever he can find and makes passes at any woman that happens to catch his eyes. In truth, he is a really intelligent man fascinated by new discoveries and who followed many interests in his life, even dwelling a bit in the occult. He also believe firmly in freedom, both individual, political and religious. He particuliarly abhores slavery and thoses who trample over freedom, feeling ashamed by the fact that he himself owned slaves in his life. Indeed, in the end, Caster is a great man who devoted his life to both freedom and science.



    Stats-
    Strength- E
    Endurance- E
    Agility- C
    Mana- B
    Luck- A
    NP- C



    Class skills-

    Territory Creation- B


    The ability to build a terrain that is advantageous to one as a magus. At this rank, creation of a workshop is possible.

    Item Construction- B
    The ability to manufacture magical objects. At this rank, Caster can create amazing wonders that incorpore both technology and magic.



    Personal Skills-

    Pioneer of the stars- A

    A ability belonging to heroes that became turning points in the human history. Actions that are considered "impossible" can turn into "events that can be realized". Caster's experiment was a crucial step in the mastering of electricity by man and he was one of the main actors of one the most famed revolution known to man.


    Founding Father- A

    Unique skill given to those who founded the United States. Each of them will immediatly identify americans servants and Noble Phantasms. Attack against such individual are determined by Luck checks. Furthermore, due to their actions in the revolution, they benefit from Nature of a Rebellious Spirit at rank B.


    Protection from Thunder- B

    The servant is protected from electrical attacks. Damage that he would recieve from them is naturally diminished such that only those of A-rank or above can truly harm him. Caster's fame as the one who tamed lightning without getting hurt has granted him the use of this skill.

    Expert of many specialisations- B
    The servants as access to many expert skills. At this rank, all skills related to politics and science can be used at C rank. Caster can be said to be one of the last true "Renaissance Man".

    Noble Phantasm-

    Lightning Conduction ~ Capturing Thunder

    ( C-A, anti-personnal )
    Caster's most famous feat was by far his experiment that proved that lightning was in fact nothing more than electricity. To do that, Caster erected a kite that conducted the electricity from a thundercloud to charge a special jar that he had prepared. This act of « catching lighting » is now immortalised as his Noble Phantasm.

    Normally, it take the form of a shield in the form of a kite attached to Caster's arm. By directly blocking electric attacks with it, Caster may stock energy to empower further his next attack with it. Indeed, by invoking it's true name, the shield will eject a long wire that will wrap itself around a opponent. It will then unleashe a powerful electrifying attack on the opponent, thereby reeanacting the famous experiment with Caster in the role of the thundercould and the opponent in the role of the cage. Furthermore, since Caster's experiment made available to mortal what was before reserved to gods, this attack is ranked-up against beings with divinity and is ranked-up further against those related to thunder gods.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The Bird of Hermes View Post
    True Name: Kubali Khan
    Pretty good sheet. To be honest, despite usually disliking army summoning NPs since they tend to be boring (since there's not that much you can add to them imo), I actually liked that first NP. Even more than the second one even. The horde mode and him losing control of his troops is a pretty neat idea actually, would make up for a dangerous Servant to have around as far as civilians go anyway. Since his horde might flood the town and devour most of the residents.

    Admittedly, I haven't really heard of this dude before (mostly because I didn't really tread into Mongolian history or myth past Genghis Khan) so you were right on him being the ''greatest conqueror no one has likely heard of'' in my case.



    On an unrelated side note, I was playing around on Wolfenstein: the New Order and now I have this urge to rewrite Hitler, ugh...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alexcoene View Post
    Class : Caster

    Name : Benjamin Franklin
    Hmm. Interesting to see a Benjamin Franklin Servant here since I'd planned on doing one myself once. Albeit, I imagined him as a rather unconventional Lancer (with lightning rod as his primary weapon) while you went for a more straightforward approach as a Caster along the lines of other artists, scientists and statesmen to have shown up so far.

    Your take on him is pretty solid, though a bunch of stuff is kind of overly high-ranked. As an early modern inventor and scientist, he really has no business whatsoever having Territory Creation and Item Construction as high as Medea (a proficient Magus from the Age Of Gods). Lowering both of them to B rank should suffice, IMO.

    Pioneer Of The Stars seems like a bit of a stretch, but I guess you could justify it the same way Tesla got it. Though, when it comes to 'turning points in human history' I'd assume his role in fostering the American Revolution would be more important then the lightning rod thing.

    And how does Protection From Thunder work, exactly? There's a vague mention of 'protecting' him from electrical attacks but it's not clear at all how that operates in practical terms. Do lightning bolts magically veer off course to avoid hitting him (in which case it'd clash oddly with his first NP which relies on getting struck by lightning) dispersed harmlessly into his body, simple reduction in the amount of damage dealt or what? Clarifying would help, since as of now it's kind of vague and underspecified.

    I also don't think he should have Natural Born Genius at the same rank as Tesla. In fact, that Skill seems kind of generic and not really fitting him very well. If I might crib a little from my own aborted Franklin sheet, I'd advise scrapping that one as well as Charisma and instead giving him mid-ranked Expert Of Many Specializations representing all the skills he mastered as a politician, scientist and diplomat.

    On the plus side, his Lightning Conduction NP is quite well-done and probably more interesting then the one I had in mind for my own Franklin profile.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    When I saw the FC, I was sure Kublai was going to be a genderbend. But nope. He's just a really pretty dude I guess. (To be fair, it is justified given his second Skill)

    He sounds like a rather interesting character for sure. However, given he's an Archer, it's kind of odd there's no mention of a bow or anything. I get you couldn't think of any that'd qualify as an NP but at the very least there should be a mention of some kind of bow somewhere (hence why I include an Equipment section in some of my sheets). Personally, I'd recommend trying to give him a bow NP of some sort, even if it means taking some other feat he was associated with and turning it into a bow or making it something he inherited from Genghis or what have you. Just tossing things out here.

    His first NP isn't exactly bad. An army summon, but you at least tried to add some flavor with the skeletal warriors and how it can 'tear itself apart'. His second NP is more creative as you said, and I like the contrast in how one represents his nature as a conqueror and the other as a more peaceful and hedonistic ruler.

    It's interesting to see Kublai here given I've made sheets for both Marco Polo and Khutulun in the past. You described pretty well how he'd get along with Polo so I don't really need to ask you that, but their interactions could be quite amusing with Polo spinning all kinds of extravagant stories in her usual fashion and Kublai being all gruffly like "I was there. That never happened."
    Good point about the Bow. I should get that bow NP done soon. Bow NP made.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adlet View Post
    Pretty good sheet. To be honest, despite usually disliking army summoning NPs since they tend to be boring (since there's not that much you can add to them imo), I actually liked that first NP. Even more than the second one even. The horde mode and him losing control of his troops is a pretty neat idea actually, would make up for a dangerous Servant to have around as far as civilians go anyway. Since his horde might flood the town and devour most of the residents.

    Admittedly, I haven't really heard of this dude before (mostly because I didn't really tread into Mongolian history or myth past Genghis Khan) so you were right on him being the ''greatest conqueror no one has likely heard of'' in my case.
    There are plenty of Mongolians of that era who deserve more recognition:

    • Jebe, the arrow. A general of genghis ho was a better shot than him and unseated him in combat
    • Tsubodai, the Valient. The greatest tactical mind of his time, perhaps ever. It was his strategies that actually won most of genghis' battles and steamrolled a good portion of europe in a few days.
    • Jochi. First born son of Genghis (who wasn't actually his son but that's another deal) who was the only general to ever rebel against Genghis and took his sword
    • Ogedei. 3rd son of Genghis and second khan - who built the capital of the mongolian empire.


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    Regarding Frankin: He's unconventional and a bit different to how I imagined him. I still may do a sheet on the guy.
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    Quote Originally Posted by The Bird of Hermes View Post
    Good point about the Bow. I should get that bow NP done soon.
    Looking forward to it!

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    Is Kubali Khan supposed to be Kublai Khan? Because Kublai Khan is more famous than a lot of heroes I see here but I have genuinely never heard of anyone called Kubali Khan.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arha View Post
    Is Kubali Khan supposed to be Kublai Khan? Because Kublai Khan is more famous than a lot of heroes I see here but I have genuinely never heard of anyone called Kubali Khan.
    Since the sheet mentions Marco Polo and the like it's pretty obviously supposed to be Kublai. Just... misspelled.

    In other news, I see you've added that bow NP as per my suggestion, Hermes. Not so powerful but it works, given that his others more then make up in the 'powerhouse' department.

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    C'mon. "In Xanadu did Kubla Khan a stately pleasure dome decree." He's as obscure as white bread.
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    Very famous.

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    I'm not complaining at all but lol I had to wait a minute and a half for the Kublai Khan mention

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    @RoydGolden: I followed your advices. You're right, Expert suit him much better. And I'm glad you like the NP. In fact, I designed it first and pretty much wrote the rest of the sheet around it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alexcoene View Post
    @RoydGolden:And I'm glad you like the NP. In fact, I designed it first and pretty much wrote the rest of the sheet around it.
    That's almost always how I write sheets, actually.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    it's pretty obviously supposed to be Kublai. Just... misspelled.
    I noticed he did this a few times. Misspelling of names, that is. (unless there are alternative spellings I've unaware of, hm)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    I noticed he did this a few times. Misspelling of names, that is. (unless there are alternative spellings I've unaware of, hm)
    There are alternate spellings but that wasn't one of them. I'm just a dumb dumb for not noticing.

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    Hello

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    Class: Caster
    True Name: Dietrich Eckart
    Alias: Mentor of Hitler
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Region: Germany
    Origin: History

    Strength- E
    Endurance- E
    Agility- C
    Mana- B+
    Luck- B
    NP- E~A++

    Height/Weight: 173cm, 50kg
    Gender: Male
    Attribute: Man
    Likes: Himself, Adolf Hitler, Aryan ideology, Jesus Christ
    Dislikes: Hebrews
    Talents: Manipulation, black magic, tutoring
    Armament: Ceremonial daggers
    Traits: Demon
    Natural Enemy: Joseph Stalin, the Holy Church

    Class Skills:

    • Territory Creation (B) - The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus. Dietrich is capable of creating a workshop where he can practice his Black Magic and summon demons through rituals. Described as the center figure of the Thule Society and the man who led all the dark rituals, Dietrich attains the high rank of B.
    • Item Construction (B) - The skill to manufacture magical items. At this rank, it is possible to create magical items required for black magic and rituals used to summon demons.


    Personal Skills:

    • Innocent Monster (B) - An attribute possessed by Servants whose history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Due to being referred to as a demented Satanist who led the dark rituals of the Thule Society and has often communicated with demons as well as is the person who helped shape Adolf Hitler's mindset to that of a genocidal monster, Dietrich's rank of Innocent Monster is particularly high, thus turning his appearance into that of a disgusting, smiling black demon. However, to Dietrich - who was filled with ecstasy at his deathbed knowing he had trained Hitler to be the suitable Anti-Christ (though in his mind, Hitler was the ''Second Coming of Christ'') - there are nothing but merits and delight in this transformation. He attains his capability of summoning evil demons and using Black Magic.
    • Innate Wisdom (C) - After his death, Dietrich was elevated to the level of a major thinker by the Nazi party. This skill allows him to grasp the concept of many incomprehensible situations or objects just by giving it some thought for this skill makes his thought level much higher than that of a simple human. Considering this, it is no shock that Dietrich managed to put into motion all the horrible things that the Nazi party had committed during it's existence.
    • Protection of the Faith (B) - A skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view. Despite his appearance and actions, it was said that - ironically - Dietrich was a man who loved Christ and dedicated his whole life to the views of Christ he had and finding the Holy Grail, however, it seems that his views were quite twisted. He believed that Christ did not tolerate the Jewish people and often whipped them for their crimes. To Dietrich, the Thule Society was an organization created to retain genuine Christianity and defend the genuine Christian foundations without mental reservations, turning his mind to the dark side of Christianity and becoming a Satanist as well as making the Catholic Church his sworn enemy. Both Dietrich and Hitler decided to oppose the Catholic Church and quest for the Holy Grail.
    • Clairvoyance (False) (B) - Connotes superior visual perception and dynamic occipital capture. At higher ranks, it is possible that the bearers of this skill have acquired such abilities as precognition and other forms of perception beyond standard eyesight. However, what Dietrich possesses is not genuine Clairvoyance but rather a false form that he obtained through the contact with the dark ''Gods'' he often made communication with and received visions of the future from, such as Adolf Hitler becoming the next Anti-Christ. At this rank, he will receive visions and instructions on things he is supposed to accomplish in order to complete his objective, making limited future sight possible.


    Noble Phantasm(s)


    666 Black Sun
    Rebirth of Atlantis



    Type: Anti-Civilization
    Rank: E~A++
    Range: 1~100+
    Max. Target: 1000+ people

    A Noble Phantasm that crystallizes Dietrich's legends and legacies as the devoted Satanist of the Thule Society who shaped Hitler's mind and created the Nazi party. It was said that Dietrich made communication with something he called the ''Powers'' - Dark Gods who aided Dietrich in his evil tasks. In the case of a Holy Grail War, Dietrich will make communication with the Demon hiding inside the Holy Grail -- Angra Mainyu -- and ask for it's assistance in order to bring about the realization of his dreams; a world where Atlantis is reborn in the form of Nazi Germany and is ruled over by the Aryan race. Angra Mainyu will aid Dietrich by releasing the corrupted mud from the Grail into the world - much like Gilgamesh did in the end of Fate/Stay Night's Unlimited Blade Works scenario - which will proceed to expand and travel across the globe (unless it is stopped). It's objective is the realization of Dietrich's dreams; the death of all lower races unrelated to the Aryans. The rank of the mud's effect raises depending on the individual or the country's relevancy to Germany.

    If it reaches a continent such as Africa - which is unrelated to Germany - it's rank will raise to A++ and have devastating effects on the country's people and wildlife. However, on the other hand, if it reaches a country such as Netherlands which has germanic ancestry, the effects will be severely weakened and the possibility of humans surviving will be possible. As per Gilgamesh's statement, only humans who can survive this mud can be considered powerful and worth ruling over. In this case, only the Aryans will survive.

    There are, however, conditions to the activation of this Noble Phantasm. In order to be able to realize a communication with Angra Mainyu, Dietrich is required to materialize the Holy Grail, effectively making his Noble Phantasm useless for a major part of the Holy Grail War. Even when such conditions are met, Dietrich will have to expend a large amount of mana to be able to command the spilled contents of the corrupted Lesser Grail and his desire to engulf the world in it's contents will be unattainable. He will, however, be able to control the spilled contents as his personal weapon in the form of tendrils and such. Only when he has reached the Greater Grail will he be able to realize this Noble Phantasm's power to it's full potential.

    Once such conditions are met, Dietrich will immediately try to engulf the town in which the Holy Grail War is taking place in. The reason for this is not to immediately start the ''purification of the World'', however. He has a much more sinister desire than that planned. With his command, 「All the Evil in This World」 will swirl to a single place, taking with it the flesh of the victims it acquired in the town. Creating an artificial dislocation in space and time, the flesh will slowly shape itself to the form of a construction. What he is creating is the reconstruction of Braunau am Inn - a construction that will once again serve the purpose of being the birth nest of his beloved pupil Adolf Hitler. For what Dietrich desires from Angra Mainyu foremost is the rebirth of Adolf Hitler - not as an adult, but as a child that would be raised from start to finish by the hand of Dietrich Eckart himself. According to him, in order to realize the birth of such a ''Holy'' child, he is required to do two things. First, purify the immediate area of any rotten blood (people of other races) in order to create a truly ''Holy'' place and second, gift the child the Greater Grail upon it's birth. Only when the birth of the child is realized will Dietrich proceed with his plan of world purification, instating the child as the 「Herald of the New Age」 - the age of the Fourth Reich in which Christianity will once again be retained in it's most genuine and pure form. Ironically, using 「All the Evil in This World」 as a medium to give birth to what is considered the 「Most Evil Man in the World」 is almost like an edgy joke on his part...

    In the scenario where the Holy Grail's contents are not corrupted such as the Fate/Apocrypha scenario, the summoning of Dietrich Eckart or Adolf Hitler will become impossible. This is because the Grail needs to be truly rotten to be able to summon either of them as they represent the 「De-evolution of Human Civilization」 for rather than being carriers of creation and peace, they are carriers of destruction and savagery. They are existences that leave nothing but destruction in their wake. Such contradictory existences cannot be summoned by the genuine Grail. Only due to the intervention of Angra Mainyu is their summoning capable of realization.


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    Ok, that's enough Wolfenstein for today...

    I'll throw in the personality and legend parts a bit later
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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post
    Nazi glorification

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    Don't click in Germany

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    Cute, here's another one

    Spoiler:

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    Damn, that's a pretty dark sheet. I like the false variation on Clairvoyance but the NP really stands out and ties to the more sinister aspects of the grail.

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