Mind you I didn't say as a politician. I'm well aware some of his policies aren't the best.
Unless you meant to say something about him being racist or sexist or whatever in which case, yeah... lets not go down that road.
Mind you I didn't say as a politician. I'm well aware some of his policies aren't the best.
Unless you meant to say something about him being racist or sexist or whatever in which case, yeah... lets not go down that road.
...Some?Originally Posted by Adlet
Stop. No more politics in the thread!
Got a servant sheet coming up, American Folklore Hero this time.
Alright. Then how 'bout this?Class Skills\
---ARCHER---
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Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
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Strength: C~A+
Endurance: C~A+
Agility: C~A+
Mana: A
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: B
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Character details
~Magic Resistance: [C]
A Servant's ability to resist thaumaturgical effects. At C-rank, Archer can nullify spells of two verses completely. She can't defend against High-Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals.
~Independent Action: [A]
A Servant's ability to remain independent even while rejecting their Master's magical energy. At the higher ranks, it becomes possible to remain materialized in this world without an established contract. At A-rank, it is possible to take action even without a Master. While backup from the Master would normally be necessary while using a Noble Phantasm of great magical consumption, neither of Archer's Noble Phantasms fall into such a category.
As such, Archer's Master is basically dead weight for her.
Personal Skills\
~Collector (False): [EX]
This skill embodies a Servant's "talent" at collecting high quality goods. It's a supreme luckiness that attracts a variety of rare items. The Master, of course, will receive no second-hand benefits from this Skill.
Archer wields the same rank in this Skill as her brother, but hers does not derive from her own history of collecting rare treasures. Rather, over her lifetime, she became a professional at pilfering her elder brother's treasury, following the lauded philosophy "What's yours is mine". As a result, she too is recognized as a supreme "collector" of rare treasures.
~Golden Rule (Body & Wealth): [A-]
A measure of a Servant's fortune at collecting wealth, as well as possessing a perfect goddess-like body. Archer has inherited the flawless figure of her mother, Rimat-Ninsun, a minor fertility goddess. This beauty is the natural state of her body which she will never lose. It prevents any of her physical stats from ever being lowered. Money problems are also nonexistent for Archer. However, due to all of her fortune being "borrowed" from her brother, she has received a minus modifier in this Skill.
If, by some extremely miniscule chance, her brother discovers that Archer's filthy hands have been pawing at his wealth; whether or not he has been summoned, she will be completely cut off (until she finds another way in).
~Divinity: [A+]
A Skill that denotes a Servant's capacity as a Divine Spirit. Due to being two-thirds divine - born from the union of Lugalbanda, King of Uruk, and the goddess Rimat-Ninsun - Archer possesses the highest level of Divinity among the many Heroic Spirits.
Her brother should wield an equal rank, but do to his "childish" hatred of the gods, his Divinity is lower than hers. If the two ever encounter one another, there is 100% chance that Archer will brag about it incessantly to him. Forbidding her from doing so through a Command Seal will lower it to 98%.
~Clandestine Nightingale: [---]
A Skill more prized than any Noble Phantasm Archer graces with her touch. It is Archer's ability to stay transparent to any form of visions or clairvoyance. To those who can predict the future, see into the future, guess at others fates, are following the revelations of a greater power, or are viewing time from outside its axis, Archer is essentially invisible. Even for the lower forms of Clairvoyance that only increase the user's vision a great deal or allow them to see through objects, Archer will be like a black cat in the dark - hidden in plain view.
This talent of hers has caused her brother a great deal of annoyance in the past. While he is omniscient of everything in his treasury, even he cannot see Archer until she allows herself to be seen, or interferes with his treasury to a great enough extent.
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Fate/Grand Order Doujins That Don't Suck [Updated: 3/2]
@Ma-Tur
poor Gil.
Name: Galvarino
Class: Berserker
Alignment: Neutral Good
Strength: C+ Mana: E Endurance: C+ Luck: C Agility: D N. Phantasm: A
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement: B+
At this rank, strength and endurance can be increased by one rank when going into a rage, as well as decreased rationality.
Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation: C
Able to fight despite debilitating wounds to his limbs, due to his legend.
Eternal Arms Mastership: B
A variant of Eternal Arms Mastership, no matter what wounds Lapuche sustains, his combat effectiveness will remain the same.
Unyielding Will: B
Grants resistance to physical damage and mental damage, however, it will not defend against illusions or effects that mislead.
Noble Phantasm:
Knife-Hands, ‘Fight on, My People’: E-A
Galvarino begins the War completely unarmed. However, once a limb or hand/foot is cut off, a blade, which he can control as a limb, replaces that body part. The more limbs cut off, the higher the rank of the blades becomes, eventually becoming A-rank noble phantasms. It has a secondary ability of granting bonuses to Galvarino’s allies as if it was Charisma at the rank of the noble phantasm, since his sacrifice inspired his tribe to resist Spanish occupation for more than a hundred years.
Lore: Galvarino was an indian war-chief who fought against the Spanish in South America. To send a message to his tribe about the punishment for resistance, they cut off one hand.
He calmly, without saying a word, put the other hand on the stump.
They cut it off too.
He put his head on the stump.
They stopped, and sent him back to his people.
He proceeded to tie sword-blades to the stumps of his arms, and led an attack on the Spanish, where he was captured and executed.
But even still, he ascended to the throne of heroes for SWORD. ARMS.
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Also, next sheet will be Conan the Barbarian.
Galvarino: ...Pretty flat. While the idea of a Servant with SWORDS FOR ARMS is certainly fun, the sheet as a whole feels very sparse and lifeless, as if you were pretty much only creating it as a way to show off that (admittedly badass) NP. I'd suggest adding more flavor like Personality and Appearance (either a faceclaim or your own description).
Sorry. Something like this?
Name: Galvarino
Class: Berserker
Alignment: Neutral Good
FaceClaim:
Personality: Galvarino is a resolute and stalwart man when not in battle. He absolutely refuses to flinch from anything, and has a particular hatred for wanton conquerors. In battle, however, he goes apeshit, becoming a whirling avatar of death that might as well be called a Demon.
Strength: C+ Mana: E Endurance: C+ Luck: C Agility: D N. Phantasm: A
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement: B+
At this rank, strength and endurance can be increased by one rank when going into a rage, as well as decreased rationality.
Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation: C
Able to fight despite debilitating wounds to his limbs, due to his legend.
Eternal Arms Mastership: B
A variant of Eternal Arms Mastership, no matter what wounds Lapuche sustains, his combat effectiveness will remain the same.
Unyielding Will: B
Grants resistance to physical damage and mental damage, however, it will not defend against illusions or effects that mislead.
Noble Phantasm:
Knife-Hands, ‘Fight on, My People’: E-A
Galvarino begins the War completely unarmed. However, once a limb or hand/foot is cut off, a blade, which he can control as a limb, replaces that body part. The more limbs cut off, the higher the rank of the blades becomes, eventually becoming A-rank noble phantasms. It has a secondary ability of granting bonuses to Galvarino’s allies as if it was Charisma at the rank of the noble phantasm, since his sacrifice inspired his tribe to resist Spanish occupation for more than a hundred years.
Lore: Galvarino was an indian war-chief who fought against the Spanish in South America. To send a message to his tribe about the punishment for resistance, they cut off one hand.
He calmly, without saying a word, put the other hand on the stump.
They cut it off too.
He put his head on the stump.
They stopped, and sent him back to his people.
He proceeded to tie sword-blades to the stumps of his arms, and led an attack on the Spanish, where he was captured and executed.
But even still, he ascended to the throne of heroes for SWORD. ARMS.
Yep, that's definitely better.
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Also, you know that you can just edit your original post right? There's no need to make a new one every time, especially when there's very little in between.
It's the weirdest of bad habits.Yep, that's definitely better.
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Also, you know that you can just edit your original post right? There's no need to make a new one every time, especially when there's very little in between.
CONAN TIME!
Name: Conan the Barbarian
Class: Saber
Alignment: Neutral Good
Faceclaim:
Spoiler:
Parameters:
Strength: A+ Mana: C Endurance: A+ Luck: A Agility: A N. Phantasm: A++
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A+
Conan fought countless forms of mage craft in life, from summoned terrible demons to terrible wizards. He was also born in the HyperBorean age, a time from just before the establishment of truly powerful Gods, just after the severing of Humanity from Gaia, and the destruction of Atlantis. Extremely powerful magic and great warriors characterized this time. His rank in this skill allows for near-invulnerability to magic, as well as the reflection of most low-level magic.
Riding: C
In life, Conan rode across the lands adventuring. Thus, he has the Riding Skill at this rank.
Personal Skills:
Independent Action: B
In life, Conan bowed to no man, killing and fighting his way across the lands of Hyperborea.
Unyielding Will: A
Grants resistance to physical damage and mental damage, however, it will not defend against illusions or effects that mislead. Conan was able to fight through terrible odds, succeeding against all opposition with nothing but his sword and the strength of his will.
Charisma: B+
In life, Conan led many bands of men to conquer many lands. He was even able to take control of an entire kingdom, strangling the former ruler on the steps of his throne. He gained a reputation for being a great leader of men.
Bravery: A
Conan fought against terrible, otherworldly monsters, and overcame them. Whether a foe was man or terrible beast, they still all died before his blade. Grants resistance to mental interference, ad a bonus to melee damage at this rank.
Noble Phantasm:
Sword of Alaya, ‘Glorious Paragon of Mankind’: A++ [Support/Anti-Personal]
Conan is not truly the first hero of Mankind, that being taken by Gilgamesh of Uruk. However, what he is the first Pure Human Hero, as all Heroes before him had been at least somewhat divine in nature. Conan, however, is nothing but mortal, and thus is the closest thing one can get to an embodiment of Alaya, as a concentrated form of the Human Spirit.. The first great ability of this is the fact that he can use a function of this Noble Phantasm, that makes it far harder to kill him, taking Anti-World or Anti-Humanity noble phantasms to kill him, as he becomes representative of Humanity itself, and Humanity can’t be killed by anything less than the destruction of their world or the annihilation of their people. This, naturally costs ludicrous amounts of Prana. His secondary ability is the ability to charge his sword with prana, and unleash a single strike. This strike is not like Excalibur in that it does not exhibit a large prana projectile; instead, the sword itself glows with prana as it is brought in for a strike, the energy being honed into an edge that can cut through nearly any defense as it delivers it’s death-blow. This attack has the conceptual effect of ‘the Apex of Humanity’, representing the culminated force of Humanity brought to the fore. The more powerful Humanity is when it is used, the more powerful the attack will be. In the modern era, when Phantasmal Beasts are all but extinct, Divine Spirits are sealed away, and Gaia itself is slowly dying, the sword will be nigh-unstoppable save for an equally powerful concept such as Excalibur, Enuma Elish, or other transcendental noble phantasms. This attack can only target a single opponent, as in the end, it is still a simple sword-swing.
Personality: Conan is a rough, swarthy figure, with a barbaric sense of chivalry. He refuses to attack or endanger the helpless, and will help a woman as long as she is not opposed to him. He is an indomitable man, who will not back down when faced with any opponent, no matter how powerful. Arrogant figures will find him particularly vexing, as he could not give two shits about their status or fame.
Last edited by WhatShouldNotBe; November 27th, 2016 at 01:04 AM.
Conan: Nice sheet, but wouldn't he fit better over in Modern Fiction? Conan pretty 'modern' by the standards of the literary Servants to have shown up so far (both in canon and this thread). Other then that, I like how you didn't just copy/paste stuff he had from his books as NPs (which can be easy to do with modern fiction Servants) but actually gave him one that's a unique crystallization of his feats and also fits within the scope of Nasu lore in an interesting way.
Well....
he first appeared in literature in 1932, but if we take him to be canon, he'd be at least as old as Gilgamesh in his legend. So he's not really modern fiction.
Plus, nothing from the books actually stands out as an NP worthy of the name, for some reason.
Molto bene
I think more important is the time of a Servant's legend rather then when they actually lived, but whatever.
Then we get into the weird distinction between legends and life, and that's a rabbit hole I don't want ot circle.
Conan is a book. There is no "legend" for it to be based on because the legend is the entire book.
Jekyll was a contemporary for the Victorian period in which he was written, so it kind of worked with him. Conan belongs in the modern fiction section unless you bullshit it was based off a guy who was real
They've done it before.
Still violates the "nobody is allowed to be older than Gilgamesh" rule but okay.
He's specifically not older than Gil. He's the very first pure Human Hero. Gil and Enkidu were both Divine.
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