Not a big fan of this one.
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Alternate Classes: Berserker
True Name: Sisyphos
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Origin: Classical Mythology
Armament: Dagger, chains
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MANA: C
LUCK: A-
NP: B
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Notes
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Alternate Classes: Caster, Alter Ego
True Name: Thaleia
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Origin: Classical Mythology
Armament: Crook
Parameters:
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MANA: EX
LUCK: EX
NP: A+
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Knight of Sorcery
Caster Menw
Class: Caster
Alternate Classes: Rider, Lancer, Avenger
True Name: Menw Mab Teirgwaedd
Origin: Arthurian Myth
Alignment: Neutral Good
Armaments: Spear
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Male, Servant, Fairy, Weak to Enuma Elish
Wish for the Grail: To be rid of his curse.
Appearance: He wars blue pants (appropriate for his era) a blue chest plat and sparse armor on his arms and legs held there by leather. A blue wizard’s hat atop his head, his hair is a light, almost white, blue and his eye’s pink. He caries a blue spear with images of fairies etched in a lighter blue on it. Around him always are three pixies one red, one yellow, one blue. The sprite just has these pixies as glowing lights, yellow around his leg, blue resting on his shoulder, and red floating above him.
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Parameters:
-Strength: D+
-Endurance: E++
-Agility: C
-Mana: A
-Luck: E
-NP: B+
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Interactions with others
Other's interactions with him
Authors Notes: So this was an interesting one, Menw isn’t talked about much but there were a few interesting parts such as the fact he was a mage. I did add some elements such as his Fairy Eyes and his relationship with them, but things like the poison spear, the shape shifting, and being able to make people invisible were all parts of his legend.
Last edited by DracoFay; September 2nd, 2019 at 09:06 PM.
Very nice Shiki-pon! Will you be doing the other Muses as well?
Well, I'm sure you'll figure out a way to make each Muse very distinctive from each other.
About your Eigth Immortals Shiki,because you have in Depth researched them could you answer me why they all were immortals and in which way ?
How do you find actually my "Enigma" Berserker ?and would you have suggestions for a Aristoteles respective Platon Caster ?
and in General would you say im making improvements with my Profile making ,thanks beforehand for the answers !
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Menw: Welsh ancestry obligated to reapond, yadda yadda.
I'm puzzled by most of his parameters but I don't like to nitpick those unless there's something really egregious.
I do wonder why he has the spear when he didn't actually kill Ysbaddaden. As Caster, it just seems like it could be part of his Item Construction, with Cuhlwch having the actual NP.
No reference to the Great Enchantment that Uther taught him in the sheet itself?
And now I see that Shapeshift is the reference, disregard me.
Last edited by Bugs; September 2nd, 2019 at 06:07 PM.
Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it. I can understand your stance on the spear, but I couldn't think of a better NP so I went with the poison spear (also why would Culhwch have it as NP, even if he used it (and I don't know if he did or didn't) Menw owns it). In hindsight I could've used gotten rid of the Fairy Vale skill and have his second NP be his only one, but isn't it cooler that he has a bad ass spear that is the manifestation of grudges and hatred.
Considering Menw never actually made the spear, and instead was one of three warriors who used Ysbaddaden's own spears against him, it just seems strange. But if it's part of your fan history then I suppose there's nothing else I can really say.Originally Posted by Culhwch and Olwen
Depends on the immortal. Its not exactly enlightenment-based, though that plays a part. Usually the actual immortalization occurs through alchemy, namely consuming a concoction that induces their immortality. Some were also given their immortality candy by another immortal once they'd proven themselves.
As for "Enigma"... Too many EX ranks without justification of any sort. Also, is that an Aristoteles influenced by Plato or the other way around that you're referring to? I'm not curious, its just that your sentence structure makes it hard to grasp which one you mean.
And as for the last question: Yes and (mostly) no. Though you've lessened the amount of random EX rankings on your sheets, your discovery of plus modifiers and constant spamming of those sets back whatever progress you've made immensely. You ought to keep in mind that Servants (looking at the Theophrastos sheet) need limits or a striking personality to be interesting, and this one has neither, being capable of pretty much everything imaginable.
Lastly, even if grammar is giving you trouble, you could at least look up the proper spelling of common words and use those rather than winging it. It would certainly make your sheets less of a pain to read.
Also in case anyone cares, I've got some sheet ideas up for grabs again, because my to-do list keeps bloating every day. Most of them have at least a vague sort of statline and something resembling skills and Noble Phantasms of varying quality. If anyone happens to be interested, I can PM what I've got done on them and more notes on what they did. I guess most of these have the benefit of not having been done before.
Not that anybody ever picks up on these, though.
Robert Rogers: The first Ranger in the military sense. British soldier operating in the Americas who got fed up with the natives ambushing them all the time and decided to give them a taste of their own medicine. Besides some of his questionable activities involving guerrilla warfare, he also set up the Rules of Ranging which are (in a modified state) still followed by Ranger companies to this day.
Mfumu Mpashi: A weird one. Essentially a tradition of ancestor worship (a communal Heroic Spirit formed of Phantoms, essentially) walking around as a Servant. As a side note, the ancestor spirits of chieftains happen to be lions, so the Servant can ride those or sick them on people.
Mechi: Still the son of the Morrígan, appears as a young child due to being killed when he was young. Has a heart infested with a trio of snakes that were prophesied to one day grow and destroy Ireland, but getting killed put a stop to that. Probably has severe mommy issues due to the Morrígan just stepping aside and letting him get murdered.
Skanderbeg: A warrior king from Eastern Europe who was raised by the Ottomans to be their commander. He promptly switched sides as an adult, converted to Christianity and started fighting the Ottomans. Contemporary of Vlad, but got far more recognition for his actions, being named the Bulwark of Christianity by the Pope. Apparently had a big hand in holding the Ottomans back, as even they remarked that Christendom had lost its sword and shield with his death. Named after Iskandar, also has a magic sword and a magic horse in legend. The horse's whinny scares enemies, but I can't find any source on what makes the sword magic, other than it belonged to some sultan.
Lostbelt Vlad: Born from listening to the Dracula musical (West End version) one too many times. Essentially "what if Vlad had somehow managed to become one with the Night of Wallachia on the night of its appearance". He'd then have gone on to murderize the Ottomans, got a papal condemnation for his sins (despite acting in their best interests), then decided to embrace his monstrosity and became the shadowy overlord of the Vampiric Lostbelt. Arch-enemy of the regular Vlad.
Hugh Glass: Very durable person par excellence. Traipsed across history, coming across a few famous pirates and spending some time with them, living with the Native Americans on amiable terms, almost got killed by other Native Americans, almost got killed (again) by a bear (which he killed), abandoned into the wilderness by his travelling companions and finally proceeded to track them down to engage in some sweet, sweet vengeance. Ended up forgiving them in the end, though.
Enepsigos: A demon I've mentioned in this thread earlier. Double- to triple-headed demon connected to the moon, with the stated goal of wishing for it to crash to earth. Foiled by some Archangel. One myth describes her seeing as far to the future as Solomon (or rather, giving him a vision of the future). Might be Hecate wearing a mask, all pissed off that Artemis supplanted her as the chief moon-goddess (sort of).
Kamapua'a: A Hawaiian kupua (divine-ish entity with a double form - one human, one something else) and on-off boyfriend to Pele. Oddly for a kupua, he looked like a humanoid pig but his other form was a tree. Apparently was also really, really handsome, which Pele didn't like for some reason. Might be a Lancer wielding his alternate form? This one is on the list mainly because of the fact that I can't stop thinking of Inosuke (from KnY) as his faceclaim.
Wologor: A strange Polish mystical entity that guards the rest of some sort of mountain god. Takes time out of his busy schedule to watch over the dreams of humans as well. The main myth dealing with him relates to his infatuation with a mortal woman. He burned her house down by accident (apparently through sheer burning passion). Also has a bull/bison head.
You can PM me about those Hugh Glass and Enepsigos ideas, since I'd considered working on those sheets myself a while back. For Hugh Glass, I imagined he'd be a false Avenger due to being conflated with the popular movie about him where he did end up completing his revenge against the men who abandoned him.
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Well now I think I know who Rider in Fate/Mythologie is, thanks Shiki :^)
First thanks for your answers ! and second Enigma has Nothing to do with Aristoteles or Plato i asked About just About some suggestions or tipps for them .
and please send me a message pm with Lostbelt Vlad and Skanderbeg they Looking like a good idea !
Thanks beforehanded,Shiki !
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Class: Ruler
Other Classes: Saber, Rider
True Name: Duke Naimes
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: France
Parameters:
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: B+
LCK: E
NP: A
Likes: Roland, Charlemagne, Truth, Peace
Dislikes: Deceit, War
Talent: Trusting Others
Natural Enemy: Canabeus
Attribute: Man
Armament: His Sword
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The last Paladin before Roland. I am not really sure what to think about that. As for Naimes himself he wasn’t a Paladin in any of the texts really but I liked the idea of one Paladin having survived due to not being at the battle. I’m obviously exaggerating his trusting nature a ton but I like that idea as a concept. It is not necessarily the right way of existing but it is an extremely charismatic one that draws people in. It has the potential to change the world under certain circumstances or with the Holy Grail but 99% of the time it will end in tragedy. The faceclaim is Theo from KNights Chronicle and I'll probably be using a lot of FCs from there since there's just so many distinct fantasy type characters.
Also I might not have completely seeded what I'm doing with Roland properly but does anyone have a guess as to what his deal in my sheets is?
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Naimes reminds me of a quote about the titular character in Medaka Box: "It's not that she doesn't know how to doubt people, it's that she knows how to trust people". Overall, a very interesting and well fleshed out character. It also occurred to me he'd probably get along well with my Deianira Lily, since they both strongly value trust and have distrusting people as one of their core dislikes.