Create-a-Servant

**Mcjon01** · February 13th, 2014, 05:33 PM

But Christemo had it right. EX doesn't mean comparing apples to oranges, it means "why on earth would you try to compare a nuke to a handgun?"
i.e., "So powerful as to render comparisons meaningless." Like it says.

**You** · February 13th, 2014, 05:36 PM

I was the using food's analogy of EX is banana to A-E. It's not exactly part of the scale but something else entirely and therefore cannot be the highest rank.

**Siriel** · February 13th, 2014, 05:38 PM

Originally Posted by Mcjon01

But Christemo had it right.

A sad day.

**Rafflesiac** · February 13th, 2014, 05:38 PM

So...it's not EX?

**YeOfLittleFaith** · February 13th, 2014, 05:46 PM

Probably not? Key word probably. I mean, he could have presumably erased a god with it and afterwards used its domain to create whatever, so...

**Brolaire** · February 13th, 2014, 06:26 PM

Class - Lancer
Name - Androcles
Alignment - Lawful Good
Noble Phantasm - B

Str - D
End - C
Mana - B
Agi - B
Luck - A

Skills

Pain resistance - B
(at this rank Androcles will still feel the full brunt of the pain, but will allow him to negate 90% of all mental and Physical interference caused by it)
Magic resistance - D
Animal Dialouge - E+
(Modifiers activate whilst communicating with the lion due to their long history together)
Charisma - E++
(Androcles presence will slightly boost the fighting skills of those who he considers(and who considers him) to be a friend)

Noble Phantasms

The Thorn (Lions Paw) - B
The legendary thorn which Androcles pulled from the lions paw. A massive spear like weapon with the concept of pain.Whenever the thorn strikes an object it will release an wave in its immediate vicinity that causes immense pain in all that it reaches,however this wave can instead be focused on the object it strikes, causing the pain to resonate along it.Such pain will inflict a large degree of mental interference on a foe, greatly decreasing their fighting skills.

The Thorn (Splinter) - B
By pointing the Thorn at an enemy Androcles can detach a part of the thorn and cause it explode, fragmenting towards the target. Each of these fragments is still capable of emitting pain a wave (albeit much smaller and less potent) . Using this ability will cause the thorn to shrink and will decrease its power by one rank.The thorn can only regenerate lost parts if an hour has past since the fragments dissapation.

The Lion (Gao Gao) - C+
Androcles eternal companion, a massive phantasmal lion, This noble phantasm can only be activated against an opponent who is superior to Androcles in fighting skill.During such a battle the Lion will manifest from behind androcles back and will assist Androcles throughout the battle.

**~~Christemo~~** · February 13th, 2014, 07:27 PM

Androcles is a runaway slave, he hasn't fought a day in his life, why would he have a magic spear or a magic thorn.

**Brolaire** · February 13th, 2014, 08:16 PM

Originally Posted by Christemo

Androcles is a runaway slave, he hasn't fought a day in his life, why would he have a magic spear or a magic thorn.

He stumbled upon the lion who hand managed to get the thing stuck in his paw and he yanked the thing out.Its part of his legend. The Thorn itself is the spear.

Im not going to argue against the fact he hasn't fought much, the point of his nps was to put servants on his level combat-wise.Majority would be better fighters which would allow him to summon the lion, and the thorn would possibly interfere with his opponents fighting skills (As as parry would cause them immense pain, and if he splintered the thorn dodges could make them step on the splinters causing pain etc)

**Viz** · February 14th, 2014, 04:12 AM

Originally Posted by Brolaire

Class - Lancer
Name - Androcles
Alignment - Lawful Good
Noble Phantasm - B

Str - D
End - C
Mana - B
Agi - B
Luck - A

Skills

Pain resistance - B
(at this rank Androcles will still feel the full brunt of the pain, but will allow him to negate 90% of all mental and Physical interference caused by it)
Magic resistance - D
Animal Dialouge - E+
(Modifiers activate whilst communicating with the lion due to their long history together)
Charisma - E++
(Androcles presence will slightly boost the fighting skills of those who he considers(and who considers him) to be a friend)

Noble Phantasms

The Thorn (Lions Paw) - B
The legendary thorn which Androcles pulled from the lions paw. A massive spear like weapon with the concept of pain.Whenever the thorn strikes an object it will release an wave in its immediate vicinity that causes immense pain in all that it reaches,however this wave can instead be focused on the object it strikes, causing the pain to resonate along it.Such pain will inflict a large degree of mental interference on a foe, greatly decreasing their fighting skills.

The Thorn (Splinter) - B
By pointing the Thorn at an enemy Androcles can detach a part of the thorn and cause it explode, fragmenting towards the target. Each of these fragments is still capable of emitting pain a wave (albeit much smaller and less potent) . Using this ability will cause the thorn to shrink and will decrease its power by one rank.The thorn can only regenerate lost parts if an hour has past since the fragments dissapation.

The Lion (Gao Gao) - C+
Androcles eternal companion, a massive phantasmal lion, This noble phantasm can only be activated against an opponent who is superior to Androcles in fighting skill.During such a battle the Lion will manifest from behind androcles back and will assist Androcles throughout the battle.

Holy shit.
A Lancer without a Low Rank of Luck?
How can this be real?
Owh Wait...
Karna in Fate/Extra C.C.C had high Luck too.
But there he was called Launcher.

**~~Christemo~~** · February 14th, 2014, 04:23 AM

Originally Posted by Vizorsan

Holy shit.
A Lancer without a Low Rank of Luck?
How can this be real?
Owh Wait...
Karna in Fate/Extra C.C.C had high Luck too.
But there he was called Launcher.

Except Karna was lying about his Luck on the report card, he simply reported it as such because he felt that lucky getting Jinako as his master.

Get your facts straight.

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Originally Posted by Brolaire

He stumbled upon the lion who hand managed to get the thing stuck in his paw and he yanked the thing out.Its part of his legend. The Thorn itself is the spear.

Im not going to argue against the fact he hasn't fought much, the point of his nps was to put servants on his level combat-wise.Majority would be better fighters which would allow him to summon the lion, and the thorn would possibly interfere with his opponents fighting skills (As as parry would cause them immense pain, and if he splintered the thorn dodges could make them step on the splinters causing pain etc)

Not sure if you've seen a thorn before but they look like this

Please for the love of Zeus's sexual appetite tell me how you are gonna split that and have it do any kind of damage, even if you handwave it with concepts and shit.

**aldeayeah** · February 14th, 2014, 09:05 AM

It was a very big thorn.

**Brolaire** · February 14th, 2014, 09:44 AM

The idea was that a part of it detaches and just fragments like a grenade (Yes im hand waving it as magic and shit), The idea was less about damage it would inflict and more that the area would be littered with fragments that would give out a pain blast if stepped on,

The Thorn itself would Interfere with enemies who would deflect/parry attacks, and the splinter effect would interfere with enemies who would just flat out dodge his attacks.

**Huitante** · February 14th, 2014, 10:11 AM

Originally Posted by Christemo

Not sure if you've seen a thorn before but they look like this

**Der Ritter** · February 14th, 2014, 05:38 PM

Bullshit. I made a Lucifer sheet way before you did. >.<

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Originally Posted by XarksTheHunter

Trying to make the Devil's Servant stats. A bit rough around the edge, but meh.

Lucifer

Bull. Shit.

**XarksTheHunter** · February 18th, 2014, 04:13 AM

^lol, keep it together man, no need to be all sour puss.
but yep, that one is pretty much trash. made another one tho~

Iblis

**~~Christemo~~** · February 18th, 2014, 10:50 AM

"weak-sauce servant"

*is literally immortal*

Good job m8.

Also 1. Iblis would be a Divine Spirit, who cant be Servants and B. you're ranking is absolutely awful if you want this to be weaksauce. Stop giving every Servant 5-6 A+ or higher Noble Phantasms.

**Zork Knight** · February 19th, 2014, 01:51 PM

Pretty straightforward servant. Just another bulky brute, but with a horse and an axe.

Servant Info

Skills

Noble Phantasms

**Vagrant** · February 20th, 2014, 06:54 AM

William Tell
First Confederate of Switzerland

Class: Assassin
Alternate Classes: Archer

Parameters:
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: D
Mana: E
Luck: C

History:

William Tell was a mountaineer who lived in Switzerland in the late 13th century, and was the man who would eventually become known as Switzerland's first confederate. A simple man who lived a simple life, Tell was strong and hardy, a superb woodlands hunter and tracker who supported his wife and his son with his skills. He was not a man accustomed to unnecessary or ill-earned authority and respect, a trait that would eventually land his family in all sorts of trouble.

Tell was travelling through the bustling town of Altdorf with his son one day when he came across a large pole in the centre of the village square with a hat perched on the top of it. Having not seen it before in his previous visitations to Altdorf, Tell asked a local what it represented and was fearfully informed that it was the hat of Albrecht Gessler, an important bailiff of the Austrian House of Habsburg, who ruled the town with a cruel hand. Gessler was present in the village square that day and proclaimed that all were to bow before his hat, the symbol of his authority over the town. While the locals all bowed as ordered William Tell did not, an act that infuriated Gessler. The bailiff, recognising that Tell was a strong, skilled man who was likely a talented hunter, offered Tell a cruel choice, to be executed or to attempt to shoot an apple off of his own son's head with his crossbow.

Confident in his abilities, Tell decided to shoot the apple and so drew two bolts from his quiver while his son was tied to the pole in the centre of the town square. Tell fired his shot from the very edge of the square and cleanly pierced the apple, saving his life as well as the life of his son, but Gessler became curious about why Tell had drawn two bolts instead of one. When questioned about this oddity Tell admitted frankly and honestly that had he missed or injured his son the second bolt would have been fired right through Gessler's heart before his soldiers killed Tell.

Enraged by this admission, Gessler sentenced William Tell to life in a dungeon and sent him away on a prison ship. The ship encountered a heavy storm and as the best sailor on the boat Tell took the helm, using the opportunity to sail to shore and escape. Utilising his tracking and mountaineering skills Tell was able to quickly travel cross-country to where Gessler would be headed, keeping ahead of any soldiers bringing word of his escape. He assassinated Gessler with the very same crossbow bolt he had drawn earlier in Altdorf, triggering a rebellion of the Swiss against their Austrian rulers, and would later become the head of the rebellion's forces, driving it on to victory over Austria and securing confederacy for the nascent Swiss nation.

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment: The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant, or even as an individual in general.

D+: As a huntsman, Tell is skilled at waiting and hiding in ambush, concealed from his prey. Suitable for spying, this skill masks his existence as a Servant to a reasonable degree, though Servants who are particularly keeping an eye out for enemies may still sense him with a successful Luck Check or the right skills. When hiding in mountainous terrain the ability is improved, totally hiding his presence as a Servant, causing him to seem like a normal human. Attacking causes the masked signature to be revealed.

Archer-class Skills:

Personal Skills:

Crossbow Mastery: Proficiency at the usage of a crossbow so great as to be considered a "master", negating various penalties that would normally impede the ability to use a crossbow optimally.

B+: With his preferred weapon, the crossbow, William is so adept that he ignores penalties against his weapon’s usage under moderate levels of mental interference or being placed under reasonable mental and emotional pressure. This is how he was able to shoot the apple on his son’s head so cleanly whilst having the pressure of shooting at his son weighing on his mind. The bonus modifier is applied when Tell is having to make a difficult shot to save someone he truly cares about, and essentially bumps his mental defenses through this technique to Rank B for a single shot.

Subversive Actions: This is the talent to reduce the enemy forces in the preliminary stages, before going into battle.

C: This skill has resulted from Tell’s acts of coordinating and directing the Swiss rebellion against the Austrian lords. At this rank Tell is able to both identify and set up basic ambushes and traps, and is skilled in the art of guerilla warfare. Phantasms that summon multiple additional beings have that number reduced by 20% when facing William Tell.

Surprise Attack: The ability to catch the enemy unaware, reducing his capacity to defend himself.

C: Attacking from concealment or when the target is unaware of the impending attack causes the attack to be treated as Rank Up. Has the bonus effect of returning battle conditions to how they were at the start of the battle if a successful surprise attack is executed in the middle of combat. This ability is reduced to Rank E while in the Archer class.

Appleshot
The Shot That Transcended Punishment to Become Legend

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: E
Targets: 1
Range: 1-20

Description: By pointing at and visualizing a particular spot, whether it be on a person or on terrain, Tell can manifest a glowing red apple-shaped mark at that spot. From that point on until the mark fades away, all of Tell’s crossbow bolts will be drawn to that mark, homing in on it through the most direct line possible. Any bolts that strike the mark piece slightly deeper and more effectively than they normally would. The mark fades within a few minutes and can also be removed by Tell with a simple revoking of the Phantasm. A cheap, effective technique to enhance Tell’s already impressive crossbow accuracy.

Gessler's Bane
The Liberator of Switzerland

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: C+
Targets: 1-2
Range: 1-25

Description: The crossbow used by Tell to assassinate the tyrant Gessler and become the first Swiss Confederate, this weapon possesses impressive penetrating power. As an Archer-class servant, this Noble Phantasm would require no reloading, materializing bolts as needed, and could fire bolts much faster than a regular crossbow could ever hope to, but in the Assassin class it trades rapid reliability for more powerful killing shots. Though only able to be used as fast as Tell can load bolts and cock it, the bolts it fires are imbued with prana and are heavy iron shafts, which can pierce and penetrate most armour relatively easily. If a target has been marked with Appleshot then invoking this Phantasm will allow a single highly-imbued bolt to penetrate through obstacles at great speed to strike the apple mark with significant power and without interference.

**Kat** · February 20th, 2014, 08:30 AM

Tell me, what are Durandal's and Caliburn's approximate ranks?

**Vagrant** · February 20th, 2014, 08:44 AM

Nobody knows. Caliburn seems likely to be at least A+ since the crappy projection of it made by Shirou is still able to pierce Godhand, and Durandal is never specified. Given it's just really sharp and indestructible, in common legend at least, you could reasonably assume a Rank C weapon like Excalibur's normal swordy form, if you had to pick a rank. Depends on what you interpret the three miracles said to be held inside to be.

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