Really neat concepts as always, IRUn.
Really neat concepts as always, IRUn.
Originally Posted by Seika
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Christian IV! One of my favorites.
He was a great help in making Sweden expand.
Class: Caster
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Mad
Attribute: Earth
Strength: E
Endurance: E
Agility: D
Mana: C
Luck: D
Noble Phantasm: B+
Class Skills:
Item Construction: -
Because Caster "constructs" using a personal skill, this skill is lost.
Territory Creation: C
Caster is capable of creating a laboratory to perform experiments and surgeries.
Personal Skills:
Mental Pollution: C
Provides great resistance to mental interference effects. Caster possesses a greatly distorted vision of this world, believing that all creatures should be civilized and brought to mankind's level.
Surgical Procedure: EX
Through decades of study and practice, experimental surgery and vivisection, Caster's skill as a surgeon reached unimaginable heights, enabling him to mold flesh whichever way he wants. He is not only capable of altering the bodies (and minds, through brain surgery) of humans and animals, but is also able to merge different creatures, creating chimeras without the use of magecraft.
Noble Phantasm
- Anti-Army, Rank B+Rational FaunaBeastfolk World
A Reality Marble, equals parts born from Dr. Moreau's dream, work and madness. Seemingly the island where the mad surgeon performed his experiments, but in the state which he aimed for instead of the state it was upon his death: a city of beast folk, seemingly no different from the cities of 19th century Europe, but entirely inhabited by the anthropomorphic, intelligent creatures Dr. Moreau created by performing surgery on animals.
Gorillas, pigs, foxes, bears, alligators, turtles, eagles - all species of vertebrates have a humanoid counterpart in the island. There are also several chimeric beast folk, composed of two, three, four or even more animals. All the best folk are considered low-ranking monstrous beasts, and all are completely loyal to Dr. Moreau, their creator, father and god.
This Noble Phantasm is not set in stone - it is possible for Dr. Moreau to "update" it by creating more beast folk while manifested as a servant - a clone of the creature will immediately be added to the Beastfolk World. A master who could provide Dr. Moreau with phantasmal species could very well end up with servant-level chimeras under their power.
Lore
Spoiler:
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Honestly I'm not super happy with the wording of some of the skills, but I think this is good enough. Here's Nimrod, The First To Be Mighty.
Class: Archer
Alias/Titles: King Of Humanity, The First King, The First Hunter
True Name: Nimrod
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Parameters
Strength: B
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: A
Class Skills
Independent Action (A) The ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from the Master. At the higher ranks, it is also possible to remain for extended periods of time in this world without an established contract.
Capable of remaining in this world for up to a week without an established contract. Also capable to live on for a short period of time after suffering extensive damage on his spiritual core.
A mighty hunter who rebelled against God himself and led humanity to new heights, his goal of making Mankind truly indipendant and greater then anyone else could imagine makes this an appropriate skill to have.
Magic Resistance (B) Grants protection against magical effects. Differently from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected.
Personal Skills
Charisma (A+) The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class. It is said that a rank of B in this skill is sufficient to lead a nation as its King.
At this point it is no longer popularity, but rather a kind of spell (curse) in itself.
Pioneer of the Stars (EX) The "unique" Skill given to heroes that became turning points in the human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized".
As the man that united humanity to rebel against the lord, and in turn led to the scattering of the unified language, Archer holds a high rank in this skill. He is able to make the Impossible Possible and unite man in great acts.
Migraine (D) A curse placed upon him by Abraham, after the routing of Archer's forces. It has the effect of making his Mental Skills have a lower success rate and being remarkably irritating for him.
This skill takes the form of the constant buzzing of a gnat in his ears, never ending and absurdly annoying. No matter what he may try, he can never force the gnat to stop it's biting and buzzing.
Unified Language (B) The language of ancient Babylonia, a time when no other languages existed and no distinction was made between the speeches of humans, creatures, and living and non-living things. The "truth" spoken before humans became scattered across the world can directly draw from the records, memories, and phenomena recorded by the world, similar in concept to the Akashic Records. It is spoken directly through the soul resonating with Akasha, allowing it to act as a powerful form of telepathy and hypnotism. The receivers must obey the speaker, known as a "Master of Babel", unquestioningly, as a human rejecting the words of the Unified Language would be the same as rejecting their own existence. Being able to speak the Unified Language allows resistance against this effect. It is considered several ranks above Divine Words in "power", though it lacks the Divine Words' ability to affect nature.
A rank worthy of a king who's command of the Unified Language was enough to raise him from a mere hunter to King of the World. At this rank he can issue complex Absolute Commands to any creature that with a soul. Though these commands can be resisted by those with sufficient willpower, Magic Resistance, Nature Of The Rebellious Spirit, or other comparable abilities. The act of resisting is actively harmful and will cause immense pain and damage the further the listener gets from the Master Of Babel's Commands.
Noble Phantasms
Utu
First Bow Of The First Hunter
Anti-Unit, Anti-Beast
A+
The chosen weapon of the Beast Slaying Giant, a massive golden recurve bow as long as many men are tall. Merely drawing the bowstring back is a feat that would be impossible for anyone lesser then the First Man To Be Mighty, and due to this it imparts an absurd amount of power even compared to other Archer Class Servants. A missile compared to a normal Archer's arrow.
Each of Utu's arrows are imbued with the Sun's Fire, heat so intense as to burn nigh anything it comes in contact with and leave nothing but smoke and ash, burning away the targets defenses and protection. The arrows, which explode violently upon impact with their target, release highly viscous flames that stick to most anything they touch. As long as the fire burns, it continuously drains prana from whatever it is in contact with and weakens all defenses. An Enemy servant that received a direct shot from Utu would have to bypass a Luck check to avoid having their defensive Noble Phantasm's sealed for as long as they continue to be within the flames, consecutive shots force the check to be repeated and more fire makes the check more difficult even as they damage the Servant as well. Even after the flames are stopped, Defenses and Noble Phantasm burnt away by the Fire will remained weakened and sealed for a time.
The Tower Of Babel
The Endless Marvels Of Humanity
Anti-World
EX
A Reality Marble born of his absolute belief in the supremacy of mankind and his actions as the creator of the first Architectural Marvel, a tower that has not been surpassed by anything since. Upon activation a massive and spiraling tower grows from the ground, centered upon Archer. The tower is so tall as to appear infinite, continuously rising into the sky endlessly no matter how high one may climb. The outside of the tower, regardless of what floor you may be on, is always simply open sky so high up as to make the ground seem miles away at best. Within the tower lies all that was crafted and born from humanity. Countless bounded fields that are draw upon every architectural marvel, every room, every armory, every workshop, every temple, every treasury, and everything that lies within them. Every building that ever was or will be, and anything that could possibly be defined as as room is held within. As one moves around within the tower, each door or stairway leads to a new room and floor, with little rhyme or reason as to what leads where. The rooms are not limited by size, time period, shape, or condition, with everything from sunken ruins flooded with water to enormous wide open temples that are a room in only the loosest sense of the word. Archer, though even he does not know the exact contents of his Tower, is able to navigate the rooms freely and find his way without issue. Even without calling upon the full Reality Marble he retains the ability to call upon singular rooms as bounded fields that lay over other established buildings and rooms. And most importantly, he retains the ability to move between buildings and rooms even outside his tower. By passing through a rooms threshold he can move freely from building to building and room to room, allowing for a massive advantage in mobility as he fires upon his enemies from all directions, just as he fired upon Heaven in life.
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Class: Archer (Alternatively Saver, Rider, Caster, Berserker, Assassin)
True Name: Ashoka
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: India
Original Lifetime: 304-232BC
STR: A AGI: A
END: A MGI: A
LCK: A++ NP: EX
Class Skills:
Independent Action: A
Can remain in the world for a week without an established contract. Just as food and drink should only be consumed in amounts enough to maintain one’s existence, mana can also be skimped upon. However, a Master is needed to unleash Archer’s full powers for a sustained period of time.
Magic Resistance: A
Cancels magic of A-rank and below. In effect, Archer is untouchable by the Magi of today. Rejecting petty sorceries is nothing compared to rejecting Maya, and thus even the spellcasters of old will have a hard time affecting Archer with such temporary sufferings.
Personal Skills:
Charisma: A
The ability to lead. At this rank, one’s force of personality bleeds into all those around them and to lands far away. Among the few who ever managed to rule a unified India (disregarding minor border states that had no real influence at the time), Archer’s leadership plunged India into an era of self-realization and unity.
Clairvoyance: A+
Connotes both superior perception through eyesight and the ability to see visions. Archer is capable of tracking high-speed objects in a twenty kilometer radius, and additionally can look into other worlds within our own, such as the Buddhist hells or the Inside of the World. However, the obsession with seeing what was in front of him instead of reflecting upon what was behind him was what made him fail to realize the consequence of things in the past, and as such, Archer is careful not to rely too much on vision alone.
Wisdom of the Chakravartin: EX
Knowledge earned by one who is an “ideal ruler” through comprehension and reflection of himself and the world without being bound by Maya. All skills, including some of those possessed only by specific heroes, can be obtained at A+ or higher ranks. As long as the disciple is good of heart and willing to learn, these skills can be taught to others.
Projectile (Vajra): A
The expertise in deploying ranged weapons. In this case, Vajras held by the gods, summoned and fired by the Chakravartin as were they arrows. Combined with his incredible sight, precision strikes from over twenty kilometers away becomes possible with these divine diamond thunderbolts, annihilating those who would challenge the ideal ruler of the universe.
Bhuja-Yuddha: EX
Bare-handed fighting taught by the principles of the Gatka martial arts from the North Indian states. An art from an age where martial arts were more violent, it utilizes anything from punches and kicks, knee and elbow strikes, to grappling techniques and pressure point strikes, primarily targeting eyes, the throat and the groin. Complete mastery of every cell in one’s body has been reached at this level.
Affection of the Gods: A
Known by such titles as “Piodasses” and “Devānāmpriya”, both meaning “Beloved by the Gods”, Ashoka receives a Rank Up to all stats from the power invested in him by higher beings.
Noble Phantasms:
Ashoka’s HellSañjīva Ashoka: A+
Anti-Unit
A legend about Ashoka’s days as a sadistic tyrant, where it is said that he built a most beautiful and inviting palace full of luxury, decorated with flowers, fruit trees, a beautiful gaol. Within this palace however, was a most horrible torturing chamber from which all guests would never escape alive. So horrifying were the tortures inside that it was said that Ashoka must have visited Naraka for inspiration in its creation. Prisoners had, among things, hot iron stakes driven through their hands and feet and molten copper poured down their throats. It contained, among other Things, a bottomless well, where they were only able to keep themselves from Falling
As a Noble Phantasm, it does not appear as a something so dramatic, but rather as the antithesis of all those who place value in the world of Maya. When brought forth, it appears as the most possibly desirable thing the onlooker can imagine. Whether that is a deceased loved one brought back to life, a hundred beautiful women ready to serve one’s every need, the object of one’s dreams, their artistic magnum opus that might not even have been made yet. It will no doubt be the thing they want the most of all, presented in a most believable manner.
Should one be unable to resist this Maya of Mayas, even as much as laying a finger on it, the person will lose all combat ability as they are entranced by the illusion, and it will transform. Instantly, they shall be confronted with their deepest fears, greatest hatreds and sights they dreamed they would never have to see. Fires and molten metal will consume them entirely while they are struck lame from indulging in fleeting things, and within a minute, nothing but ashes shall remain.
Twelve And Twenty-Four Causal LinksAshoka Chakra: EX
Anti-Being
The symbol of India, and all of its accumulated wisdom and enlightenment. The many-spoked wheel of existence, spun by Ashoka’s own hands. The wheel of Dharma, which recycles the life-force of all those who have not achieved enlightenment through reincarnation. A circle, perfection, effective whether or not the opponent is following its principles.
When activated, it appears as a blue ring floating around Ashoka’s waist wherever he goes. From this ring, depending on the opponent, manifests either twelve or twenty-four spokes, blue spines that point outwards. If the enemy is defying dharma, twelve spokes, if virtuous, twenty-four. On Ashoka’s mark, each spoke unleashes rays of blue light that seek out the target regardless of distance or angle; As part of the circle of Dharma, a person cannot avoid the rest of the circle, only delusionally try in vain to escape.
If the target is contrary to Dharma, they will be bombarded by attacks targeting their; Ignorance (Avijjā), Volitional Formations (Saṅkhāra), Consciousness (Viññāṇa), Name and Form (Nāmarūpa), Senses (Saḷāyatana), Contact (Sparśa), Feeling (Vedanā), Craving (Taṇhā), Attachment (Upādāna), Being (Bhāva) and finally Birth (Jāti). The greater each suffering is, the more powerful the corresponding attacks shall be.
If the target is not contrary to Dharma however, the power of the Noble Phantasm actually increases. Twenty-four spokes, rather than twelve, will then manifest and pacify, rather than kill, the target, using the 24 Rishis.
Love, Courage, Patience, Peacefulness, Magnanimity, Goodness, Faithfulness, Gentleness, Selflessness, Self-Control, Self Sacrifice, Truthfulness, Righteousness, Justice, Mercy, Gracefulness, Humility, Empathy, Sympathy, Spiritual Knowledge, Moral Values, Spiritual Wisdom, The Fear of God and Hope.
All of these will rain down upon the target until they have been utterly relieved of suffering, essentially causing forceful enlightenment much in the way of Amita Amitabha.
Lion Capital of AshokaAshokmudra Ke Sher Rāājādhāānee: A++
Anti-Mind
The emblem of India, an elaborate pillar top depicting four lions standing guard towards all four directions on a base with four other animals who symbolize the Buddha’s growth. An elephant that represents the Buddha’s initial idea, a bull that represents his desires as a prince, a horse that represents his departure from palatial life and a lion that represents his shining accomplishment.
When unleashed as a Noble Phantasm, four columns topped by the Lion Capital appear in the cardinal directions around Ashoka, from which is unleashed a cacophonous lion’s roar that can be heard for miles. All those who hear this divine noise, resembling the universal Om, are affected by it, and only razing the pillars in time will make its effects come undone.
Truth alone triumphs; not falsehood.satyameva jayate nānṛtaṁ
Through truth the divine path is spread outsatyena panthā vitato devayānaḥ
by which the sages whose desires have been completely fulfilled, reachyenākramantyṛṣayo hyāptakāmā
where that supreme treasure of Truth resides.yatra tat satyasya paramaṁ nidhānam
Such is how the minds of all listeners will understand the ‘Om’ that affects their minds. As they listen to it, they start to physically change from becoming one with the universal Om. Their skin turns green, then pink, and they shrink in size, and soon enough, they will transform into a lotus flower going into bloom, becoming the symbol of purity of the mind. Once transformed, they cannot return to their original form, and all one can do then is pursue nirvana, as all should, as a beautiful long-lived flower that knows no pain or suffering.
Classes
Personality and power
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My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
mmmh a true monster, indeed, however I think his stats are a little too high. It should be adequat in his Berserker form, indeed, but no in Archer, where the stats are not sooo big. And he is not truly known for being a physical beast, unlike others. Although I admit that he is a consequencial one.
But, his skills and his Noble Phantasm are quietly efficient to not have a true physical monster after this. And he has more skills and Noble Phantasm than lots of servants, so... it is quite powerful as a monster for servants.
Allow me to propose this for Ashoka:
STR: B AGI: B
END: B MGI: A+
LCK: A+ NP: A++
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Someone needs to make a Frederick Russell Burnham sheet, AKA the guy who tried to bring hippo farming into America. He's certainly hardcore enough to be a Servant, he even has a "king of" nickname (King of Scouts)! I'd make the sheet myself except it's been a while since I last read the article about him and I'm not sure if I could capture him faithfully enough.
This is a place to post sheets not request them.
Well, I have seen people make borderline requests (in the form of "I wonder what x would look like as a Servant") in this thread before, like the Count of Monte Cristo for example. I understand that isn't what this thread's intended purpose is though, so my post was (somewhat) off-topic. Gomen nesai.
Please don't weeb it up.
nasai
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Saber
Theme
True Name: Saint Philopater Mercurius
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Cappadocia
Original Lifetime: 224-250AD
Weapons: Two Swords
Faceclaim
Stats-
Strength- B (A+)
Endurance- B+ (A++)
Agility- C (B+)
Mana- C
Luck- C
NP- A+
Class Skills-
Magic Resistance- A
Cancel spells of A-Rank or below. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a "Magus Killer".
In addition to the Magic Resistance of the Saber Class, Mercurius demonstrates high Magic Resistance due to his unwavering piety.
Personal Skills-
Saint- B
Indicates being acknowledged as a saint. When summoned as a Servant, the ability of saint is selected one among "raising the effectiveness of sacraments", "automatic HP recovery", "1 Rank-Up to Charisma" and "production of a holy shroud is possible".
Soul of a Martyr- B+
Mental protection that negates mental interference.
Mercurius is the owner of a strong faith who was pressed to renounce his religious beliefs many times and, despite receiving countless tortures, never bowed to his persecutors or gave into their demands. Some of these tortures included being flayed with nails, or being burned alive, or being hung upside-down from a tree with a rope around his neck that was weighed down with stones slowly suffocating him. He doesn't have the title "Great Martyr" for nothing.
Grace of God- C
The greatest body and good looks. Chance to charm those of the opposite sex, bonus to persuasion. This skill will only work if the target can see his face.
"Having said these words, the brave Mercurius stripped off his military cloak and took off his golden belt and threw them at the emperor’s feet. Stupefied, Decius stared into the face of Mercurius for a long time. He marvelled at the youthful beauty of Mercurius as the blessed man was of a most goodly presence; his countenance was very handsome and his complexion was red and white. His body was adorned with both, beauty and strength. The looks of many were directed after him and the people admired him."
Military Tactics- C
Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.
Before his death, Mercurius was made the supreme commander of the Roman Armies while under the rule of Emperor Decius. Before he was made Supreme Commander he was described to be "Intrepid on the field, a bold and efficient leader of men in the campaigns, he was sought in the social circles of Rome. He was also the best swordsman in his regiment, in battle he was a tactician that assured victory in every encounter with the enemy.
Divinity-C
As the Servant was revered as a saint in the post-classical era, the strength of his nature as a divine spirit is equivalent in rank to the deities of minor cults and the forgotten gods of yore.
Mercurius is also said to be the cousin of Saint George
Noble Phantasms:
Wielder of Two Swords
Abu-Seifen- A+
Anti-Army
When activated Saber gains a rank up and a plus to Strength, Endurance, and Agility. Mercurius' holy sword, given to him by Saint Michael the Archangel, begins to glow and a halo appears over his head. In addition Mercurius' attacks gain the ability to fire blasts of holy light at the cost of paying extra mana. The mana cost of this Noble Phantasm is equivalent to that of Arondight.
"He held the sword in his hand and felt the Holy Spirit and Godly power overwhelm him. Thus, at the height of the conflict, Mercurius dashed with his sword into the midst of the barbarians. He displayed wonderful courage, mowing the enemy down like grass. He attacked with such violence that he was able to slay their king, his company and many others. His sword was so drenched with blood that he lost his grip on it and his arm fell powerless by his side. The success of Mercurius so terrified the barbarians that they broke down and fled and victory lay with the Romans."
The blasts of holy energy would look something like this
Michael's Chosen Champion
Blessing of the Archangel- A+
Anti-Personal
After combat ends Saber is instantly healed completely, and cured of any status ailments/curses due to NP being holy, this effect is passive and doesn't cost any mana. This Noble Phantasm can also be used in combat, if used this way, Saber uses most of his mana to release a wave of holy light that pushes back and damages all within a 10 Meter radius. To halve the mana cost Saber can also choose to use his own health to cover the mana. The damage he takes from this cannot be healed by the passive effect of this Noble Phantasm, as the act of taking damage is like a sacrifice to God for more power.
"Afterwards, Decius ordered them to tear off his flesh with sharp blades and scatter red hot coal under his body to burn him alive. But, gradually, the flames were extinguished by the flowing blood of the righteous man. The holy saint endured all these pains calmly."
“When the soldiers lifted him up, the saint was half dead, but there was still a little breath of life left in him, although the emperor thought that he was undoubtedly going to die that night”
“The angel stretched out his hand and wiped all Mercurius’ wounds. Immediately, he was healed and free from any trace of torture.”
“We swear by your might, o pious emperor, that his whole body is sound, and that there is no diseased spot on it; it looks like one whose body has never been touched by a finger.”
The blast of energy would resemble this (but with a blinding light added in)
Personality
For his full backstory click HERE
Attached image is an example of what his face looks like under the armour
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Giving him both Divinity and Saint is a bit redundant in my opinion. I could see him having one or the other, but not both. His NPs are also a little generic to be sure, though the quotes from his legend definitely add some much-needed flavor. Other then that, it's an interesting sheet for a somewhat lesser known Christian Saint.
They do different things and have different origins.
Although Sainthood doesn't grant Divinity, so it doesn't belong anyways.
Martha?
Why do both George and Martha have it? I'll remove it for now because Jeanne doesn't have it, but more information would be nice.
Should I add the whole "Saint Basil summoning him 100 years after death to kill Julian the Apostate" as a NP? It could be something like "After death Saber's body turns snow white (as it did in his legend) and the master of saber could give him a servant to hunt down by saying "Saber find and kill Lancer"(or any other servant). He would only go after that one target and only has a day to kill the servant specified.
I thought Martha didn't have it? I prolly remembered wrong, whoops. Sorry about that. Disregard me.
honestly i'm surprised no one has written a Tecumseh sheet yet.
but now that i've said it i call it pls don't steal it'll take me a while since i need to read a 511 page biography about him first
I know that this is kind of late, but if someone could help with the personality to make it more unique I would be very grateful.
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