Oh, and before I post his sheet, I'd like to note that they call him the "Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom", and yes, this refers to his dick.
Oh, and before I post his sheet, I'd like to note that they call him the "Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom", and yes, this refers to his dick.
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Class: Assassin
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Origin: Historical
Region: France
Parameters
Strength: E
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: C
NP: C
Height/Weight: 153cm/46kg
Gender: Female
Likes: Alcohol, science, alchemy, nice thick books
Dislikes: Killing nobility, the bloodthirsty, being called "La Poisson"
Talents: Palmistry, cremating dead babies, snacks
Natural enemy: Marie Bosse
Attribute: Star
Traits: Human, Female
Armament: Not enough
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment: (A)
Presence Concealment is the capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common skill to the Assassin class.
The servant is able to completely conceal all traces of their own presence, including sounds, and smells, they are able to blend in with their surroundings that when moving slowly or standing still they appear to be completely invisible. They will lose their concealment completely the instant they make ready to attack.
Personal Skills:
Witchcraft: (A)
Witchcraft broadly means the practice of, and belief in, magical skills and abilities that are able to be exercised by individuals and certain social groups. Specifically, it includes methods to discern one's time of death and secret arts to obtain influence, such as methods to attain status and fortune (for men) and methods to gain the favor of influential individuals (for women).
After the death of her husband, Assassin turned to various means of witchcraft in order to supplement the income that was lost and support her family. As it was the 17th century France, employment opportunities for women weren't the greatest, so she took to practicing chiromancy (palmistry) and face-reading, a popular underground activity that the rich ladies of France at the time were more than willing to pay for, despite its heretical connotations. As for her practice in fortune telling, she was to say that she developed the talent God had given her. She was taught the art of fortune telling at the age of nine, and after her husband became ruined, she decided to profit by it.
She arranged black masses, where the clients could pray to the Devil to make their wishes come true. During at least some of these masses, a woman performed as an altar, upon which a bowl was placed: a baby was held above the bowl, and the blood from it was poured into the bowl. She had a large network of colleagues and assistants, among them Adam Lesage, who performed allegedly magical tasks; the priests Étienne Guibourg and abbé Mariotte, who officiated at the black masses; and poisoners like Catherine Trianon.
A natural when it came to reading the future through...disturbing means, at this rank her body-focused means of fortunetelling is refined enough as to possibly predict her Master's fate in the Holy Grail War (and all lesser prestidigitation this would imply).
Golden Rule: (D-)
Golden Rule measures one's fortune to acquire wealth.
Assassin had many clients among the aristocracy and made a fortune from her business. Among her noted clients were Olympia Mancini, comtesse de Soissons; Marie Anne Mancini, duchess de Bouillon; Elizabeth, comtesse de Gramont ("la belle Hamilton"); François-Henri de Montmorency, duc de Luxembourg; princesse Marie Louise Charlotte de Tingry; marchioness Benigne d'Alluye; comtesse Claude Marie du Roure; the comte de Clermont-Lodéve; comtesse Jacqueline de Polignac; duchesse Antoinette de Vivonne; marquis Louis de Cessac; marquis Antoine de Feuquieres and the marechal de la Ferthe.
Assassin resided at Villeneuve-sur-Gravois, where she received her clients. She tended to her clients all day and entertained at parties with violin music in her gardens at night, attended by Parisian upper class society. The house also included a furnace for the bodies of dead babies, who were then buried in the garden. She regularly attended the services at the church of the Jansenist abbé de Sant-Amour, principal at the Paris University, and the godmother of her daughter was the noblewoman de la Roche-Guyon. She supported a family of six, including her mother, and among her lovers were the executioner Andre Guillaume, Latour, vicomte de Cousserans, the count de Labatie, the alchemist Blessis, the architect Fauchet and the magician Adam Lesage.
Showered in riches for her skill at almost the instant she put them into practice, Assassin nonetheless has a proclivity to spend as exorbitantly as she earns.
Perversion of the Faith: (C)
An inversion of the Protection of Faith skill. If Protection is a Skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view, then Perversion is one possessed by those who have gained through the ill-gotten demonstration of said faith. Or worse, its bastardization and deliberate corruption. Despite being a form of divine protection, it is not a blessing from a lower existence. It is only the misery of one's body and soul, which is born from distorted faith. But if it is too high, it causes abnormalities in the personality.
Irreligious to the last, Assassin was pragmatic enough to see the French nobility's novel interest in Satanism and the occult, so she expanded her own knowledge of the subject to accommodate and profit. Carries the same effects of Protection of the Faith of the same rank, but from the opposite side of the "faith".
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It would seem from your legs and muscular thighs that your pelvic thrust is particularly efficient, let’s see how you perform?
-Drukpa Kunley, singing to a woman in the high mountains
Name: Drukpa Kunley
Class: Lancer
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Personality: a deeply devout man, who deeply believes that life can be enjoyed while seeking enlightenment. He seeks to show the world that living life does not exclude you from religious devotion. Thus, he loves to party and have sex. If summoned in a grail war, he’d probably end up sleeping around with Servants and Masters, having fun before revealing his true identity, and battling them.
Parameters:
Strength: D Mana: C Endurance: C Luck: C Agility: A N. Phantasm: A
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: B
in life, Kunley was still a holy man despite his actions, thus, he has MR at this rank.
Personal Skills:
Luck with Women: A
In life, Drukpa Kunley was known as the ‘Saint of 5,000 women’, and seduced a hilarious number of ladies in life. Thus, he has exceptional charisma affecting only women. His catchphrase when entering a town is ‘I have come without prejudice to help you. Where is the finest booze and the most beautiful women?’
Hidden Holiness: B
Kunley is outwardly a wild, hedonistic man, unlike his holy reputation. Thus, he is seen as a normal human by all until he reveals his holiness, revealing his status as a servant. By revealing his holiness, he gains Divinity at C-rank.
Riding: C+
Kunley was known for traveling the lands of Tibet in his life. However, his riding is counted as A ranked when facing beautiful females, for obvious reasons.
Protection of the Faith: B
Despite appearances, Kunley was a truly devout man. He thus has Protection of the Faith at this rank, enhancing his mental resistance.
Noble Phantasm:
Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom, ‘Crotch of Divine Power’: A {Anti-Personal}
In life, Drukpa Kunley was known for using his dick to bless homes and families, smack demons into submission [literally smack them. Using his dick as a flail.], in addition to using it for sexual activities. In ancient stories, his dick is always described as unspeakably enormous. This is not exactly true, while Kunley’s member was large, his mythological size is due to the face that he could project a pillar of solid light from his crotch, ornately carved with prayers as if a prayer wheel. While it does not exactly resemble a dick, it was tied into his legend as his dick due to the misconceptions of the time. This pillar of solid light is 1 foot long, and acts to fire beams of divine light at his enemies, and can be extended to 2 meters long and flexible, to be used as a melee weapon. This weapon deals bonus damage against enemies that are cursed or unholy. In addition, due to it's capacity as a weapon that exorcises spirits, Spiritual Beings, like Heroic Spirits, receive ranked-down parameters when facing this weapon.
Lancer is surprisingly proficient in the usage of this weapon in melee, having been said to use it to exorcise countless demons.
He prefers not to use it as a real spear, rather attaching it to his crotch and using it as a weapon that way. He can, still use it as a normal spear.
Lore: Drupa Kunley was a ‘Divine Madman’, a member of a sect that repudiated religious institutions. He taught that sex and the pleasures of life were not only to be accepted, but encouraged, as they were a natural part of seeking enlightenment. He traveled the land, performing many deeds, and achieved great renown for his practice of coming into a settlement, sleeping around and partying, all while preaching the practice of the Dharma. He is known as a Saint for his actions , as he blessed homes and smote demons. His actions even led to the practice of creating effigies of phalluses to place them outside houses, scaring demons away with Kunley’s titanic dick.
Last edited by WhatShouldNotBe; November 28th, 2016 at 12:29 PM.
Kunley: I have only one question. Why, oh why is he not a Lancer?
Not fast enough.
he always goes last, ladies.
plus, he doesn't hold his lance himself, but gets someone else to do it for him.
but the main reason is this way, he can have sex with say, Mata Hari, and then when they meet in the field of battle, the hilarity can commence.
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And I'm not a tsundere, ya bunch of nerds.
This seems like it should be a separate Skill, not a special variation of Presence Concealment - like Sasaki and Li Shuwen and their stealth Skills, for instance.
Divinity doesn't directly affect Parameters, and there's a specific Skill for saints (though it seems to be geared toward Catholic saints specifically; Jeanne d'Arc has it, if I'm not mistaken).Divinity: C
Kunley was considered a Saint, despite his strange life. Thus, he has divinity at this rank, which increases his Strength and Luck.
I'm going to join Royd in saying he really should be a Lancer, not an Assassin. :-)Noble Phantasm:
Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom, ‘Crotch of Divine Power’: A
I mean, he could still have Riding with the same justification - Meltilith? Passionlip? One of the Alter Egos from "CCC" - has, but it would have to be a Personal Skill. :-)
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True Name: Scylla
Class: Berserker
Alternate Class: Beast
Alignment: Chaotic Mad
Origin: Myths
Region: Greece
Natural Enemy: Heracles, Circe
Parameters
Strength: A
Endurance: A
Agility: B
Mana: C
Luck: D
NP: A++
Height/Weight: 186m/70kg
Gender: Female
Likes: N/A due to Mad Enhancement
Dislikes: N/A due to Mad Enhancement
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Monster
Armament: Trident
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement: (B)
Raises basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, also seals away Personal Skills. At this rank, all parameters are ranked-up, but she has lost most of her sanity.
Personal Skills:
Monstrous Strength: (A)
An ability possessed by monsters that grant a temporary rank-up in strength for a time limit determined by the servant's rank in this skill.
Berserker has been transformed into one of the greatest monsters of greek mythology.
Divinity: (E-)
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixture of a Divine Spirit , and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig called "purge defense" in proportion to the its Rank.Berserker was originally a nymph, a sort of minor deity, and the daughter of a true god. However, her transformation into a terrible monster has lowered her rank in this skill.
Terror of the Seas: (A)
A skill belonging to marine creatures who preyed on innocent sailors. It allow perfect liberty of movements in underwater fights and a supernatural effect of terror will submerged. Indeed, any opponents that see the possesser of this skill while at least half their body is submerged will be assaulted with a supernatural fear effect. It can be resisted by skills that grant protection against mental interferance.
Berserker is a deeply feared and infamous sea monster that ate many unfortuntate sailors in her lifetime, including several of Odysseus's men.
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Last edited by Alexcoene; November 28th, 2016 at 03:48 PM.
Dang, I was gonna do that sheet at some point. Eh, I'll just make my own later.
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Thanks. I kind of gave up after failing to find it through reverse image search. Updated my post with it.
Now you know how I feel about there being like 5 or so different variations of Roland, Diomedes and Louis XIV. Feel like if I made my versions it'd just be too similar to some of the ones already made. But oh well, the ones posted before are p. good so I don't really mind that much.
My knowledge on Greek myth figures seems to have been failing me lately because she's another Greek I don't recognize by name. The sheet's nice. Her first NP seems a bit low ranked even though she's got an A++ ranked NP to make up for it. Transforming anything into powerful (?) Phantasmal Beasts seems a bit more worthy in rank than D since they're supposed to be strong enough to classify as Anti-Army. But your choice. I don't really mind you wanting to not make her overpowered.
I like her just because of the connections to Louis XIV. :j But jokes aside, I like the idea behind her NP. Makes her seem like a good mid-game threat if used properly. Though is there anything else to add as NP worthy? She seems kinda really weak if her only real trump card (if you can even call it that) is a post-death attack. Even super weak Servants like Mata Hari have something to use as a trump card without it being required to kill herself lol.
Storytime, Uther Pendragon was my first ever servant and it frankly shows. I've joked about how generic he was and have wanted to remake him since... well ever since I posted him in the first place. However I've made plenty of Saber's so just a plain old remake wasn't gonna cut it so I'm pulling some stuff off here. It's a remake/total renovation. Anyways, as the Forum Disappointment TM I shall digress. Feel free to mock and tear apart this one too.
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Servant: Caster
Other Classes: Saber, Berserker
True Name: Uther Pendragon Alter "The Half-Dead King"
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Place of Origin: Britain
Attribute: Man
Traits: Man, Dragon, (Saberface)
Armament: Armour, Cloak
STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: A+
LCK: E
NP: A++
Height/Weight: 186cm/76kg
Likes: Discord
Dislikes: Camelot
Talent: Benevolent Tyranny
Natural Enemy: Arturia, Morgan Le Fay
Class Skills:
Territory Creation: A
The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus.
With Territory Creation, he can create a domain that that simulates a certain "Castle of White Walls" that is superior to a Workshop. However due to certain personality defects, he doesn't "feel like it."
Personal Skills:
Charisma: E-
The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. Leadership skills increase, but the morale of troops decreases extremely. A great king in his prime, the grails curse has lowered his rank significantly. Additionally, he appears to be actively fighting against his ideas as to what a "King" would do, lowering the rank even further to its lowest possible level.
Druid Magic: A
The ability to use the old natural magic of the Welsh, similar to Witchcraft. Separate to most magecraft systems by primarily relying on a external forces of nature, one can activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. He created and taught one of Britain's Three Great Enchantments (That of shifting ones form into a beast) to Menw, one of King Arthur's knights, who was also a magician.
He possesses this skill in the Saber class, but at a notably lower rank.
Faries Maddening: A
The ability to awaken the spirits sleeping within the earth and crushes the will of enemy forces. This mental interference causes a temporary decrease in STR and AGI in all enemies.
Prana Burst (Flames): B
The increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with magical energy and instantly expelling it. Simply put, recreating the effect of a jet burst by expending large amounts of prana. He is able to wrap himself in fire that enhances his physical power and sear away at any who would strike him. Additionally in this state he possesses the visage of a burning dragon.
Noble Phantasms
Cleddyf Mewn CarregFoothold For a New Legend
Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A+
Range: 1~80
Max Target: 1
The crystallisation of Caster sealing Caliburn in the stone until his rightful successor arose to withdraw it. It is the manifestation of "Ending a Legend" in the form of a spell. By analysing a Noble Phantasm can see, Caster can seal it away from the remainder of the war.
There are several requirements in order for it to take effect. Firstly he must understand the origins of the Noble Phantasm, for example: A holy sword forged from another weapon (Balmung), summoning weapons from a treasury (Gate of Babylon), a blessing of immortality from the gods for completing trials (God Hand). Secondly, he must be able to see or touch the Noble Phantasm. However this only is ever required if the Noble Phantasm has a physical form. Finally, he must know the True Name of the Noble Phantasm, this becomes significantly easier to deduce if the targeted Noble Phantasm requires invoking its name.
When all necessary requirements are met and invoking the name of Cleddyf Mewn Carreg, Caster can dispel the targeted Noble Phantasm for the rest of the war.
Comed CochChieftain Dragon of Britannia
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: EX
Range: 0
Max Target: 1
The ultimate Noble Phantasm Caster possesses in terms of destructive power. Caster was known as the fabled "Red Dragon", who fought against his rival Vortigern who was the "White Dragon" - possessing true draconic blood and indeed became one in true. After becoming warped by the curse of the tainted grail, he can invoke the power of his title and draconic emblem to forcibly modify his body into that equal to those of Dragonkind.
When the Noble Phantasm is not in effect, he will passively possess superior mana generation and every bit of mana supplied to him will be burned and multiplied tenfold in the heart of the Red Dragon. Even in the form of a human he possesses great mystery. However when he has unleashed his true power, he possesses the power of a great Dragon. He will generate mana by merely breathing, he will possess an Armour Class that requires attacks of Rank B or higher to affect him, tremendous physical abilities that cannot be accurately registered and Dragons Breath he can release in a torrent of flame that equals his constitution - that transcends humanity by far.
However, aside from a significant weakness to 'Dragon Slaying' weapons such as Balmung,and the sheer disgusting mana requirements that make it unsuable except for the most powerful of masters, he is not a true dragon and an imperfect one at that due to his corrupted nature. After use, it is designated as imperfect and a threat to humanity, therefore the Counter Force will allot Caster for immediate destruction and will empower an individual to do so.
If summoned in the Caster class without being corrupted, then his power in Dragon form will be notably weaker and with a reduced rank and time limit in the state - but as instead of a "True and Imperfect Dragon" but a "Perfect Fake" without an actual dragon form but a thick and dark layer of Ether enveloping him - looking like a dragon made of molten rock.
Form as a True Red Dragon
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Uther: Funny that you've gone back and made a new version of your first Servant since I'm currently in the process of doing the same to one of my earliest. On a pure 'idea' basis she was actually one of my favorite's, but my writing style for Servant profiles has improved (I feel) quite a bit since then so I want to try and bring her up to my current level.
But enough about me. Uther's pretty cool. Definitely a lot more interesting and flavorful then your original take on the guy from way back when. His first NP actually reminds me a bit of the one I gave Alan Turing, what with sealing enemy NPs so long as he knows their true name and understands the basis behind them. Was that an inspiration, by any chance?
One of your first female is being redone? Should be interesting. I guess it'll be one of these.
- Alice Pleasance Liddell
- Don Quixote (Genderbent)
- Annie Oakley
- Squanto (Genderbent)
- Library of Alexandria
- Sleeping Beauty
Regarding his first NP, I was looking over Uther recently to see what I could have done better (Which as you can see was a lot) But I was thinking of what the 'Sword in the Stone' could be. I first thought it could be giving a Noble Phantasm but that can be done anyways in some circumstances so I re imagined it as him sealing it away. I added all the extra stuff as restrictions just to stop him going *poof* and getting rid of everyone's Noble Phantasms.
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Anyways, since I forgot to comment on the actual sheet...
Terror of the Seas is a good skill and pretty similar to one i had in mind for her, in fact a lot of it is similar. I also like the creation of monsters aspect but considering I had a similar deal with Echidna at a far higher level, I think you can change the rank a bit. Or alternatively add more flavour text to it to make it more rank appropriate to what you've given it.
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I guess either Don or Squanto as you've mentioned them both more previously than the others.
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