Servant Caster:
True Name: Herbert George Wells
Alignment: True Neutral
Strength- D
Agility- C
Endurance- B
Mana- B+
Luck- B
NP- B
Appearance:
Ripped from Danbooru, links for Danbooru, Pivix and Imgur
Personality: A mundane man, one used to his own normal, polite life but his more inventive thoughts make themselves manifest in the smallest of ways, a slight flourish of the hands upon finishing a task for example. He is more of a lover than a fighter, but has a resentment of those who repress others in order to maintain their own power. Caster is perfectly willing to participate in the Holy Grail War but is more interested in the survival of himself and those he cares for. His personality has been warped to match those of his most famous protagonists from The Time Machine and The War of the Worlds. Thankfully each of these protagonists have a similar personality to Caster himself, and his personality does not become overly eclectic
Likes: Peaceful work between nations, the search for knowledge, the spirit of man
Dislikes: Eugenics, Social Darwinism etc.
Talents: Optimism, Orthodox Creativity
Natural Enemy: Howard Phillips Lovecraft
Class Abilities:
Territory Construction (C): Caster does not possess a workshop but a study, from which he can use his abilities more efficiently
Item Construction (N/A): Caster's Item Construction is replaced by one of his Noble Phantasms
Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation (D): A strange skill for a Caster to possess, Caster is infused with the insane resolve of a survivor leading to him being capable of pressing through conditions he would not normally be capable of achieving. This skill manifests when Caster faces inhuman foes whose power far outmatches his own, a mere fraction of humanities rage against an unbeatable, unstoppable foe.
Weak Constitution (C): Caster was bedridden in his early years and was a known diabetic, this skill leads to a random chance for his stats to drop, being disadvantageous in combat situations.
Expert of Many Specilizations (C): Caster was not limited to just fictional writing, for which he is famous for, but also wrote on many socio-political topics. At a C rank he gains a large amount of accurate knowledge on many subjects, allowing him to contend with modern day experts on many matters.
Noble Phantasms
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Not necessarily an original Servant sheet, but I wanted to contribute more and thought that the "Father of Science Fiction" deserved a Servant. It is likely that someone will have already conceived these ideas far better than I, which I discovered with my pale attempt at an Agatha Christie themed Servant. Hopefully there is still much I can do to improve upon this Servant, and clearly he fits the role of an overpowered protagonist better than others (what could be expected of an "Author" Caster class Servant).
Image Used:
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2331380
http://imgur.com/tInr2RQ
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust....st_id=56368799
Last edited by sherlock1110; April 28th, 2017 at 04:07 PM. Reason: Fixed image and image links
While HG Wells is a neato Servant idea, if you want the picture to show up you have to post it to Imgur first or something.
Also giving the original pixiv credit might be a better idea than the danbooru. Good job!
I'm sorry I will make those changes ASAP. Sorry I didn't realise that's how it worked, sorry. Also it's a fairly unoriginal idea, there's a lot of far-better Servants and Wells comes into the Caster Author type which is pretty common
That Wells sheet is pretty cool. Having an NP for each of his most famous novels works quite well, and the NPs themselves are creatively fleshed out without being too overpowered. The first one is particularly good. Outright time-travel fits poorly into Nasuverse lore so you did a good job limiting it into a defensive ability of being able to 'rewind' his own injuries.
I second Ail that the FC you linked doesn't work, though.
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Also, since Wells is big on the "spirit of mankind" and what-not, I'm curious as to how he'd get along with my own James Watt Servant. A dialogue between the two should be interesting, at least.
Weird... his FC showed up for me a few moments ago but when I refreshed the page it went blank again. You sure you uploaded it from Imgur properly?
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Also just in case anybody cares, I've changed the name of Odin's Bond CE from "Macabre Valhalla" to "Ever-Distant Valhalla". This way I feel better fits his endless journey in search of a meaningful struggle...
Well since I am too much of an idiot to know what an Imgur is... I am looking into it. Sorry, but thank you for notifying me.Weird... his FC showed up for me a few moments ago but when I refreshed the page it went blank again. You sure you uploaded it from Imgur properly?
"Master? No, I don't think we'll be having that kind of relationship, Kumuhana."Source: http://genzoman.deviantart.com/art/Pele-196894047
Class: Berserker
Alternate Class: Lancer, Rider
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Origin: Folklore
Region: Hawaii
Epithet: She Who Devours The Earth
Parameters
Strength: A
Endurance: A
Agility: D
Mana: EX
Luck: C
NP: A+
Height/Weight: N/A
Gender: Female
Likes: Her sisters, holua, fighting
Dislikes: Everything really
Talents: Rage
Natural enemy: Na-maka-o-ka-hai
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement: (EX)
Mad Enhancement is the Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms.
Parameters are Ranked-Up, but nothing seems to be inherently changed about Berserker’s disposition or mental state. Because she is one who embodies an extremely violent and unpredictable force of nature, Berserker is simply the Class that suits her the most naturally. However, that’s not to say that retaining insight means her personality is any more pleasant.
Personal Skills:
Kupua Form: (A)
Kupua are a race of semi-divine superhumans appearing in Hawaiian mythology. While usually equated to the likes of demigods and actual gods--especially by the Western visitors to Polynesia who rationalized the kupua belief system to fit within their own mythos--kupua are more closely related to the Tuatha De Dannan of Ireland; Ancient superhumans who more or less function as gods would. Hawaiian myths and legends abound with such characters. They are traditionally described as monsters having the power of appearing in different kinds of bodies. They usually have cruel and vindictive characters and are ready to destroy and devour any persons they can catch. There are, however, many kupuas of kindly spirit who give watchful care to the members of their own families.
While inherently transformative in nature, Kupua Form establishes that one is a perfected quasi-divine being since birth. A composite Skill that comprises Divinity (which is always treated as Rank E), prevents the body from growth, and prevents the figure from (unintentional) change no matter how many calories are consumed.
Although human in appearance, kupua share many metaphysical and physical attributes with the element or aspects they preside over. In Berserker’s case, her body has taken on some of the attributes of molten lava. Her fists are hard when the lava cools. Wherever she walks, the ground splits and lava flows. The sea and water are a deadly allergy to her, yet it’s only the combination of these two elements that realize Berserker’s full potential.
Demonic Mistress of the State: (A+)
A variant Skill of Demonic Defender of the State, privy only to those heroes and spirits with authority over the creation of the land itself. A Skill that could be considered one step “to the side” of the Caster Class Skill Territory Creation, it allows for the terraforming of land that contains leylines in order to reinforce one’s capabilities as a territory spirit.
Thus, as the Heroic Spirit in charge of expanding the islands of Hawaii through her ever-spewing lava, the land upon which she walks with this Skill active will eventually turn into a familiar volcanic wasteland. Because of her conceptual authority, the growth of the lava fields is inexhaustible unless stopped by an outside force. Incidentally, this technique destroys the leylines already in place--forcing them to change into lava veins--but it doesn’t seem to have any adverse effect on Berserker. However, if it were to rain enough on the newly changed land, it’s quite possible that the leylines will return, more potent and even more numerous than before. This might cause some unintended consequences in Berserker’s personality, however...
Shapeshift: (C)
Shapeshift is a Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change. It is a method used by the millenary spirits of foxes and badgers of China that are put on par with Tamamo-no-Mae. It is also one of the powers of a kupua.
While it’s implied that Berserker possesses the full range of shapeshifting abilities belonging to the kupua, she’s made little--or rather simplistic--use of it throughout her life. An obvious choice for a Skill to be nerfed by Mad Enhancement, Berserker is nonetheless capable of turning into all manner of people, as well as certain species of plants and animals.
Battle Continuation: (A+)
Battle Continuation is a Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. It is also one of the powers of a vampire. The best result is achieved when a resilient body is combined with this Skill.
Even after being torn into pieces by her sister--her severed ribs becoming a famous Hawaiian landmark, for example--Berserker was still able to return to battle after she had been thought dead. Expounding on the Skill’s concept of a resilient body, it was Berserker’s lava-like form that kept her from dying. Can continue fighting even with wounds that place them on the verge of death. An ability representing the strong will to stay alive on the battlefield. It is probable that she will not completely die so long as one ember still burns within her.
Noble Phantasm
Lore
That's awesome! You've done really good formatting alongside a heroic spirit befitting of the mythological character! Also that NP is far more of an expressive interpretation of how a berserker type deity would work, thereby combining both the instantaneous, active wrath of force but also the slower more grudge style hatred.
=Berserker=
Artist:http://decolanlan.tumblr.com/
Name: Helgi Hundingsbane Volsunga “The Hero-Hearted”
Title: Slayer of Hounds
Other classes: Saber, Rider
Height/Weight: 197 cm / 98 kg
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Iceland (Saga of the Völsungs)
Theme: At the Beginning
Parameters:
Strength: A
Endurance: B+
Agility: D
Mana: B
Luck: C
Class Skill(s):
- Riding (A):
one can ride all animals and any vehicles with exceptional expertise, save for beasts of phantasmal, divine, and dragon origin.
Vigblær is the name of his horse.
- Magic Resistance (B):
Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for a Servant to be affected.
Personal Skill(s):
- Divinity (C+):
the strength of one’s god-like nature. The more god blood flowing in the veins, the higher the rank.
Saber was a descendant of a god and when he died was personally granted a seat in the afterlife.
- Charisma (B-):
the innate ability to lead an army.
The majority of Saber’s armies were gifted to him by others, and fought out of payment or fear of becoming a part of his body-count.
- Ultra-Violence (A):
the longer this Servant participates in combat, the greater their fervor for violence grows.
All attacks by Saber consume more and more of his opponent’s mana while replenishing and increasing his own.
Noble Phantasm(s):
- Again-Walker (C, Anti-Personnel):
when Saber is struck down, he will rise again for a total of three times. Though, with each death, his body grows weaker and his personality crumbles until, on the final life, he is just a shadow of his former self.
The representation of his various reincarnations, all stats are lowered by one subsequently. Furthermore, the way in which to kill him must be different every time, otherwise he cannot die again.
Last edited by Historia; April 19th, 2018 at 03:37 PM.
@Pele. That's a fine sheet.
I'm a little jealous I didn't think to make a Hawaiian Servant myself, then I could finally use my knowledge of the Hawaiian language rather than it just collecting dust in my brain. ;P
True. I was perhaps going to base it on the theory that he was meant to represent the Emperor "Glycerius", whose name was commonly misspelt as "Lucerius" and Geoffrey possibly continued the trend by making it "Lucius".
But whatever I plan to do. I'm definitely fired up to give a crack at it.
Are you from the island or is there a place that actually teaches the language? I don't think I've ever heard of Hawaiian language classes, but that sounds cool.
Is Geoffrey the most OP literary Caster possible.
Haha, sadly no. I am not from Hawaii, although I would love to go there one day. It was just one of those things where I just happened to learn it over a Summer.
As for Geoffrey, I probably wouldn't use that angle in my sheet personally since I already kinda did that in my Rothbart sheet with the heavy implications that he was the dethroned Ludwig II in disguise.
Servant Rider:
Servant Identity
Strength- C (A)
Agility- B (A)
Endurance- B (A)
Mana- C (A)
Luck- B (A)
NP- B+
Appearance:
Really should be missing a tail though
Servant Identity
Class Skills:
Riding (B+) - At this rank almost any vehicles can be ridden with proficiency and almost natural expertise, though high-ranking celestial beings are out of reach Rider is especially suited to riding his horse (And shows particular skill at running away in these circumstances)
Magic Resistance (D) - Rider was not particularly famed for his endurance to magic, but he did escape the forces of hell and as such has particular resistance to magic from such sources, and a cancellation of low-level magecraft
Personal Skills:
Beauty of Trouble with Women (A) - Rider partially suppresses this though it becomes more apparent through use of his Noble Phantasms, Rider can become easily distracted by good-looking women or really any at all.
Noble Phantasms
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Thank you for persevering with yet another one of my awful creations, this time I had to resist going for all the edge and instead only managed to include about 50% edge in the final product. Rider is once again a Servant many have probably done better than me, and I was really restricted by the fact that I couldn't find an appropriate image to use. About three quarters of these sheets are feedback though, so anything would help . Sorry to be a bother.
Pivix Link:
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust....st_id=60662809
Tam O' Shanter: If you're concerned about your sheets, here's several things I would suggest to improve this sheet:
First, maybe change the header of either one of the two 'Servant Identities' section, since two sections having the same name can be pretty confusing.
Second, Maybe add a little Background for him, since some people might not know the lore/origins of the Servant.
Third, Faceclaims aren't the most important thing in the making of a Servant sheet, so it doesn't have to fit every criteria for the Servant.
This one is a more personal nitpick, but maybe add at least one more personal Skill for Shanter, so it'll be more fleshed out.
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Really, the NP you make are pretty creative, so the sheets you made aren't "awful creations." So don't fret and take all the time you need in making the sheets!
Thank you... I'm really bad with writing so it takes quite a bit of time but thank you for your support. Thanks for pointing out that people might not know about the story... I kind of grew up on it so I made a stupid assumption sorry
"Oh my children, my children! Please, please come back to me! Please forgive me!"
Berserker
La Llorona
Alignment: Neutral Insane
STR: C
END: C
AGI: B
MAG: B
LUCK: E-
NP: C
Class Skills
Mad Enhancement (EX): The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms. All parameters are Ranked-Up, but she is deprived of most reason. Even when under Mad Enhancement, she can hold a conversation, but she will pay no attention to words addressed to her, and will just cry out for her children. Communication is theoretically possible but practically improbable.
Personal Skills
Dreams of the Beyond (A): The mindset of one who possesses an impossible dream, which they will never stop pursuing. The thoughts of that which once was but will never be again drives La Llorona and so long as these images are with her, her parameters will be ranked up. Falling into despair or abandoning her dream will strip away her buffs, even those gifted by Mad Enhancement. In this respect, attacks that target the psyche are especially devastating against her.
Curse of Misfortune (C): The aura possessed by one who is rumoured to bring bad luck to others. It is whispered in her legends that glimpsing La Llorona is a harbinger of terrible misfortune or even death. Thus, all Luck parameters in her vicinity are reduced to absolute minimum, even her own. A double-edged sword of a skill.
Imaginary Numbers (D-): The magical affinity of Sakura Matou, Berserker’s host body. A power highly effective against spiritual beings, but not so potent against those whose body is not made from Ether. When the Matou clan restraining spells are used along with this, it is possible to imprison and skewer the target into a separate dimension composed entirely of shadows. Though useful in a conflict of Servants, La Llorona has no skill in wielding this ability, almost using it out of instinct. Her unfamiliarity and unwillingness to learn about it have weakened this ability considerably.
Noble Phantasm
La LloronaTears of the Weeping Woman
Anti-Unit, C: The prayers and lamentations of La Llorona combined with the curse that was placed on her unite to form this Noble Phantasm. Taking the form of water, the almost-sentient curse, directed by La Llorona’s will, seeks out children to ensnare and drown, forever re-enacting her crime. Normally taking the form of a shower of rain, when directed to attack, the water will shape itself into a river in flood, sweeping away obstructions, or a sphere to entrap and drown people. La Llorona can use pools of water as gates to swiftly travel between locations, and can walk on the water’s surface. A cruel ability who’s only purpose is to drown.
Lore
Didn't use Aoi. 0/10, try again.