True name: Apollo.
Class: archer.
Alternate classes: rider, caster.
Likes: healing, prophesies, and a good hymn or poem, music, and any instrument.
Dislikes: serpents, Hera, Zeus, his sisters cold demeanor, typhoon
(you fixed everything else but this mention of Typhon remains unchanged), self righteous
(righteous), Python mortals
(what is this referring to?).
armament: the golden bow of Apollo, golden armor, golden bracer.
parameters:
agility: B
strength: C+
Endurance: B
mana: C+
luck: C
background: the son of Zeus and Leto a Titan, he was born with godly qualities and lived the mayor
(majority) it's of his life as a god, that is un tell
(until) he decided to rebel against zuez
(Zeus), as punishment he was sent to earth and made mortal, in order to get his Immortality back he had to complete many quests given to him by the mortal who claimed him, thou
(though) since he was able to keep most of godly powers many of the jobs he had to do were easy, after his re ascension to be comeing
(becoming) a god, his mortal self was cast off and become a part of the throne of heroes.
personality: despite depictions of him being a play boy
(playboy), this is not the case in fact his personality is far more caring and logical then most of the other Olympians, and he and the fewest children of the gods as well the ones he did have children with he genuinely loved and there's
(their) deaths created great pain and anguish in his heart. Thou
(Those) qualities that are often depicted of him do exist such him being fun loving and mostly care free wrighting
(writing) poems, but he also likes to guide his master to be creative and appreciate being mortal, and is why he hates self righties
(righteous) mortals who always sacrifice themselves, and in truth the only reason he himself choose yo go back to being immortal is because of the fear of death.
appearance: a muscular man with golden bling hair, in a tight fitting simple yet elegant golden armor with a elegant golden bracer on his left hand, his eyes have a golden irises that burn with intense passion and his thighs
(either Apollo has insanely huge thighs or you meant to say "size" here) is around 8"1.
Class skills:
independent action, B--
archer was never independent and usefully did what Hera or zues
(Zeus) told him to do, and is likely why he even rebelled in the first place was do how easy he is to manipulate, do
(due) to this his independent action is only as high as it because of his fame and peoples depiction of him, at this rank he could survive around a week if he does not attack or use magic whatsoever.
Frankly, I can't see Apollo having anything less then an A-rank in this Skill just from sheer pride alone. The description you gave is closer to A-rank anyways, since B-rank only allows one to remain in the world for two days.
magic resistance, B+.
Do
(Due) to archer haveing been a god and able to keep most of his godly attributes, he has resistance to magic, and it would take tier 4 spell casting to do damage to him using Mage craft.
personnel
(Personal) skills:
divinity, B.
do
(Due) to having been made mortal his divinity has been ranked to down to high class Demi God, and he has lost his immortality.
divine archery, B++
a skill given to those who are gods of archery, it increases ones range, perception, reaction time, and accuracy to the point of godly levels putting them above the fetes
(did you mean 'feats'?) of normal heroes, the higher the rank the more these things will increase and at A rank one can be considered to have fetes
(ditto with the above) in the level of coming close to a phantasm and anything higher then A is sublimated into a phantasm.
Appolos rank allows him to target from multiple cities if necessary, and most of his shits
(...Either Apollo favors some seriously disgusting ammunition, or you meant to say 'shots' here) are both fast and a
(bit of a spacing issue here)
ways on point requiring a servant to have extreme levels of skill to block his arrows, his rank would be A if we're a sole God of archery.
Medicine, A.
to being a god of Medicine and healing, he has high rank in this skill, and can heal almost any injury.
Pythons curse(couldn't think of good name.)
a curse Apollo passively gives to servants whose legends involve serpent or have serpent like qualities, the curse decreases ones parameters in mana, luck, and endurance but increase there strength and agility do to him honoring Python by creating games in his name, somone
(someone) like Hercules who only has a small part of his legend haveing to do with serpent like beast would only get his stats increased and decreased by + and - modifiers while Gilgamesh and medusa who have serpent like qualities and have legends involving serpents would loose
(lose) and gain entire ranks.
NP.
The golden bow of Apollo, EX.
A weapon constructed by Hephaestus it is a high class God forged weapon, it's design is a simple golden bow with the image of the sun burned into its exterior, there are three three types of phanatsms
(phantasmic) if arrows the bow uses, one are arrows of plagues which give enemy servant a random illness which helps to weaken the enemy servant, arrows which can only be seen by servants with high classes in divinity, and it's most powerfull is an arrow that when shot into the sky causes a rain of arrows that are made entirely of mana that follow the movements of archers eyes and can by pass most defenses, however it uses up an extreme amount of mana.
Why no mention of the healing arrows here? Far as I know of Apollo's legend, his arrows were said to bring health and sickness. Plus the rank seems a little too high for the effects here. Just A or A+ should be enough.