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    The Beast's Lair Fanfic Contest (2013 Edition) (Discussion Thread)

    Hello fellow BLer's, it's that time of year again!

    For those of you, who don't know or are new here, my name is Milbunk and last year I hosted a fanfic contest all about Type-Moon, and though there were a few bugs in the system, it was pretty successful in the long run, and because of that I would like to host it yet again!

    For the most part the rules and regulations will be the same as those seemed to work pretty well, they are as follows:

    Rules: (Last Updated: Jan 13, 2013)
    • You cannot enter an already posted piece of work. (Anything you submit must be new to us BLer's and no posting pieces that have been posted on sites like the fanfic forum, if you've been working on something but haven't shared it with the public you can enter it if you want.)
    • Instead of having a minimum limit this time, I've decided to have a softer maximum limit to keep stories from overshadowing the smaller ones. The soft limit for this contest will be 10,000 words but if you wanna go a little longer I won't just kick you out. (They key is to tell a good story while also not stretching too far to make it a 50,000 word epic.)
    • We have no official word count limit per se. Obviously, however, we do not want a 100 word fanfic, nor do we want a 100,000 word behemoth (unless it's really, really good). We will recommend that authors, in general, stick to a limit of 10,000 words, but again, this is not a hard-and-fast rule. You can go under this limit or over it, but please keep in mind the judges might have to read dozens of fics, so if yours must be longer, then that is fine, but make it worth their while!

    Being a Type-Moon contest, the story must be about Type-Moon of course, you guys can pick any stories or even something new altogether, just as long as it stays somewhere within the Nasuverse.

    There will three five categories:
    • Humor (Crack fics or fics to make ya laugh.)
    • Action (Fight scenes, fighting, and more fighting here.)
    • Drama (Emotional scenes or tense scene with characters can sometimes mesh with the action category a bit and in that case pick which one you think would fit the best.)
    • Romance (A very close relationship building between two or more characters.)
    • Lemon (A story where, for some reason or another, characters decide to do the dirtiest of dances.)

    You may include lemon content in the other genres as well, but it's not required in any of them (except in the Lemon category, of course). Just make sure that the lemon also has a decent plot to go with it, as all genres are scored according to the below rubric, including the entries in the Lemons category.

    Judges and Judging:
    As of now we have four judges, with the fifth slot pending to be filled. Feel free to apply to be a replacement judge, in case for some reason or another some of our judges are unable to do so. Keep in mind that if you decide to be a judge, you cannot enter the contest itself.

    The judging rubric is as follows:
    • Technical (30 Points): This is basically how good your grammar and punctuation are, and if you can follow the rules of the language. Clean (understandable!) sentences, well-structured paragraphs, and clear writing will all help your score here. Most people should get a pretty high score in this as long as you make sure to have your fics read through and checked for errors.
    • Artistry (30 Points): Everything that contributes to the enjoyment of the story. How did a fic make a judge feel? Emotional impact. Flow. Beautiful language. Engagement. In the case of lemons, how hot the pairing and events are. Does the fic connect with readers? Remember, a story is more than just a piece of technical writing!
    • Characterization (20 Points): Faithfulness to the source material (accounting for AUs). Accuracy in character mannerisms, thoughts, and speech. Realistic reactions to a given situation. Essentially, is this really a Type-Moon fanfic, or just a story with characters named the same? Would the characters have plausibly acted as they did in these circumstances? Do the rules of the world actually work?
    • Consistency (10 Points): What kind of fic you did. Did you make sure to keep to your category? How generic was the fic? Was it a simple talk between lovers or an exciting battle between rivals? (Note that there won't be points off for doing a plain idea, but they're also not as likely to get a maximum score here.)
    • Uniqueness (10 Points): What sets your fic apart from the rest of the pack (or general TM fanfiction)? Plot, character focus, a future world, a certain je ne sais quoi... what did you dare to attempt? Did it make the fic better... or worse?

    Each judge, according to the above rubric, will assign the story a score that will total to between 0 and 100 points. Since there are five judges, an absolutely flawless fic would have a maximium overall score of 500.

    At the moment we have three prizes:

    • There will be a cash prize of 30 dollars per category for any first prize winner, they either have a choice of the cash or the option below.
    • Dark Pulse has decided to offer five short-ish fics (about 7500 words) to the winner of each category (contents are up to the winner) as well as the grand prize winner, with the grand prize winner possibly getting an extra bonus.
    • Arashi has decided to add in a Figma figurine of Phantasmoon.


    If anyone wants to donate a prize or offer a picture or the like that would be much appreciated!

    The deadline for the contest will be 11:59 PM Eastern US Time on April 1st. Late entries may not be accepted after this cutoff, and if they are, they likely will have a lateness penalty applied to their score. Judging will take place over the next two weeks after that. If you guys have any questions about anything at all feel free to ask, and once again the most important thing you should remember about the contest is to have fun!

    • Judges:
      • Milbunk
      • Dark Pulse
      • Alf
      • Elf
      • Black Sword



    • Humor:
      • Desu_Cake (Good)
      • Bloble (Good)
      • Frantic Author (Good)
      • legoguydude (Good)
      • Moczo (Good)
      • Tangerang (Good)
      • 1x Anon (Good)



    • Action:
      • Arch-Magos Winter (Good)
      • NamesAreHardToComeUpWith (Good)
      • hatori (Possibly withdrawn?)
      • Gaterjhonz (Good)
      • RanmaBushiko (Withdraw)
      • ItsaRandomUsername (Withdraw)
      • Arashi_Leonhart (Withdraw)
      • KAIZA (Withdraw)
      • Soldat der Trauer (Withdraw)
      • Virtue (Good)



    • Drama:
      • I3uster (Good)
      • Santo (Good)
      • captain_n00b
      • ZidanReign (Withdraw)
      • Vanilla
      • Epiren (Withdraw)
      • dminion
      • RacingeR (Withdraw)
      • Reekwind (Good)
      • 2x Anon (2x Good)



    • Romance:
      • Laith (Withdraw)



    • Lemon:
      • Kiiam (Good)
      • Xamusel (Withdraw)
      • DezoPenguin (Good)



    • Undecided:
      • ReverseLogic
      • Break (Possible entry?)


    Good luck to all the contestants! We can't wait to see what you guys come up with this year!

    Also you can send then in via pm to me or email at [email protected]
    Last edited by Milbunk; April 2nd, 2013 at 01:55 AM. Reason: DezoPenguin -> Lemon.

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    Hm... don't think I'll participate, but I'll be watching this for sure.



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    You may want to include a procedure for entry in your post. I'm assuming it's the same as last year's, but having it in the OP seems like good ideas.

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    I'm interested...but I'll have to think about it a bit.
    Might try Humor again.

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    If I can, I would like to judge. I have a lot of time free from work after the holidays so I would not mind reading through a bunch of fics in the coming 2 weeks.

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    Alright that's cool plenty of time to make your decision. (Also cause this side of the forum is often barren I made a second thread to get people's attention, you can post in either but I was just letting you know.)

    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...sion-Thread%29

    If you want to judge I can consider adding you but keep in mind that the contest isn't going to actually start judging until April.
    Last edited by Milbunk; January 4th, 2013 at 06:20 PM.

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    Last time was fun. Gonna join again.
    [04:55] Lianru: i3uster is actuallly quite cute

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    Alright cool which category are you interested in?

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    seeing the judges i'll stay out of this
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    it is my firm belief that regarding the ban of mike1984 I have been given insufficient reason for the affair and it's conclusion, further than this I feel that the light manner it has been treated in is appalling. It is my sincere hope that he is not regarded in the same way as actually malicious posters who have appeared on beast's lair or otherwise as a joke to be snickered at when spoken of in the future. I will not forget my friend or view him in the manner those in charge here have presented him and his actions, nor will I accept the situation as it stands where people snicker at him as if he were a joke.

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    Huh.

    'Looks at the last Contest that he participated in a forum'

    'Said Contest lasted 5 weeks and didn't even get to the second category.'

    Well it's either going to be entertaining or a learning experience so... good luck everyone!

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    Cant say that yet. Probably drama unless it gets more action than it should.
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    K, also Alf and DP have decided to return as judges, with the new category and a longer time to write stories hopefully we can have a better contest than even last year was.

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    10,000 (soft) max limit? I don't know man...

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    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    seeing the judges i'll stay out of this
    Then doing this is already worth it.
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    says the hater, you keep on hating, i'll be around ignoring your invalid, incorrect opinion.
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    Now now no need to be rude, it is his decision whether or not he wants to join or not.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    seeing the judges i'll stay out of this
    Gee, someone's awfully convinced we'll bomb their story just because of who they are.

    As opposed to bombing the story because of flaws we perceive.

    But hey, your choice!
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    Then doing this is already worth it.
    keep your opinion to yourself you hater
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    it is my firm belief that regarding the ban of mike1984 I have been given insufficient reason for the affair and it's conclusion, further than this I feel that the light manner it has been treated in is appalling. It is my sincere hope that he is not regarded in the same way as actually malicious posters who have appeared on beast's lair or otherwise as a joke to be snickered at when spoken of in the future. I will not forget my friend or view him in the manner those in charge here have presented him and his actions, nor will I accept the situation as it stands where people snicker at him as if he were a joke.

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    Unrelated to the established structure of this contest: I will provide one (1) black & white drawing of Iskander (King of Conquerors) to whomever wins the Most Awesomest Iskander Fanfic Category (Unofficial).

    Conditions and restrictions apply.

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    lol Froggie
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    Let's avoid the drama this time people. It was fun last year but repeated performances are tiresome.

    Also entering, just dunno if am doing Action or Drama this time. No deadline on deciding which category we are entering, right?

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