Gally is so grumpy
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I think they are very cool, even if they are a little OCish, i just like connected sheets for some reason. the different Awakened origins for each one are really nice, And alter's NP seems the more interesting of the three.
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
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What do you think about my last profil ?
Have i improved myself /has it become better as the last?
Full-power Ea level NP. Dafuq
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From what I could understand (your grammar is still painful, sorry) and what I've read about Sethos, you've made up practically all of his background, and that NP is excessively OP. I mean, the restraints don't really have any purpose since he could just hold back and fire a weaker blast like practically every beam Saber does. There aren't any conditions that prevent him from breaking all the seals consecutively and become a god-tier because of yes, and that power scale is insanely high for a Pharaoh that isn't relatively famous.
Summarizing, it's not an enjoyable profile, at least for me
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Too many skillz, for one. It's still really hard to read because of the bad formatting and you should really improve it.
Still not good and pretty much reminds me of venomking's sheets.
Would the people who are having trouble with formatting on here like it if I uploaded a blank sheet/the sheet format I use (or, well, the one I'm planning on using from now on)?
There’s a blank sheet format in the OP of the contest thread
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Servant Class: Caster
Alternate Classes: Rider
True Name: Zenobia, Queen of the Palmyran Empire
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: Middle-East (3rd century)
Parameters:
STR: D
END: E
AGI: C
MGI: C
LCK: C
NP: D
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
Notes
Last edited by Shiki-pon; March 3rd, 2018 at 10:46 AM.
Alright dude, I'll show you a simple one.
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It would be a good idea to type it up in word or a google doc or whatever before posting rather than doing it all in one go because that never ends well.
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here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
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He is not breaking the rules, the character inspired inspired by Shu, but is a original concept . The "gentle king" is also a real world concept, just look into the "forrest king" on Nier: Automata.
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
Uhh... Wouldn't that still belong in the thread for Servants from modern fiction instead of here? I mean, if he's based off of (or inspired by) an anime character, doesn't have an actual legend attached to him and has no connection to the Nasuverse in any way (other than being a Servant), then what is he doing in this thread?
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"Nice to meet you, master. If you are worthy, then let be the sword that pierces your enemies"
Class: Saber
Alignment: Lawful/good
Region: Wales
Height: 160cm
Weight: 48kg
Likes: honorable man, hard work, flowers
Dislikes: treacherous man, stuborn cowards, suffering of others
Talent: raids, gardening
Armaments: Rapier
Natural Enemy: normands
stats
Str: C
End: B
Agi: B
Mna: C
Lck: D
NP: B
Skills
Noble phantasm
background
Personality
craft essence
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria