Create-A-Servant 2

[WhatShouldNotBe]

Oh, and before I post his sheet, I'd like to note that they call him the "Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom", and yes, this refers to his dick.

[Ail Don]

Source: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.p...st_id=34743370
Class: Assassin
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Origin: Historical
Region: France

Parameters
Strength: E
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: B
Luck: C
NP: C

Height/Weight: 153cm/46kg
Gender: Female
Likes: Alcohol, science, alchemy, nice thick books
Dislikes: Killing nobility, the bloodthirsty, being called "La Poisson"
Talents: Palmistry, cremating dead babies, snacks
Natural enemy: Marie Bosse
Attribute: Star
Traits: Human, Female
Armament: Not enough

Class Skills:

Presence Concealment: (A)
Presence Concealment is the capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common skill to the Assassin class.
The servant is able to completely conceal all traces of their own presence, including sounds, and smells, they are able to blend in with their surroundings that when moving slowly or standing still they appear to be completely invisible. They will lose their concealment completely the instant they make ready to attack.​

Personal Skills:

Witchcraft: (A)
Witchcraft broadly means the practice of, and belief in, magical skills and abilities that are able to be exercised by individuals and certain social groups. Specifically, it includes methods to discern one's time of death and secret arts to obtain influence, such as methods to attain status and fortune (for men) and methods to gain the favor of influential individuals (for women).
After the death of her husband, Assassin turned to various means of witchcraft in order to supplement the income that was lost and support her family. As it was the 17th century France, employment opportunities for women weren't the greatest, so she took to practicing chiromancy (palmistry) and face-reading, a popular underground activity that the rich ladies of France at the time were more than willing to pay for, despite its heretical connotations. As for her practice in fortune telling, she was to say that she developed the talent God had given her. She was taught the art of fortune telling at the age of nine, and after her husband became ruined, she decided to profit by it.

She arranged black masses, where the clients could pray to the Devil to make their wishes come true. During at least some of these masses, a woman performed as an altar, upon which a bowl was placed: a baby was held above the bowl, and the blood from it was poured into the bowl. She had a large network of colleagues and assistants, among them Adam Lesage, who performed allegedly magical tasks; the priests Étienne Guibourg and abbé Mariotte, who officiated at the black masses; and poisoners like Catherine Trianon.

A natural when it came to reading the future through...disturbing means, at this rank her body-focused means of fortunetelling is refined enough as to possibly predict her Master's fate in the Holy Grail War (and all lesser prestidigitation this would imply).

Golden Rule: (D-)
Golden Rule measures one's fortune to acquire wealth.
Assassin had many clients among the aristocracy and made a fortune from her business. Among her noted clients were Olympia Mancini, comtesse de Soissons; Marie Anne Mancini, duchess de Bouillon; Elizabeth, comtesse de Gramont ("la belle Hamilton"); François-Henri de Montmorency, duc de Luxembourg; princesse Marie Louise Charlotte de Tingry; marchioness Benigne d'Alluye; comtesse Claude Marie du Roure; the comte de Clermont-Lodéve; comtesse Jacqueline de Polignac; duchesse Antoinette de Vivonne; marquis Louis de Cessac; marquis Antoine de Feuquieres and the marechal de la Ferthe.

Assassin resided at Villeneuve-sur-Gravois, where she received her clients. She tended to her clients all day and entertained at parties with violin music in her gardens at night, attended by Parisian upper class society. The house also included a furnace for the bodies of dead babies, who were then buried in the garden. She regularly attended the services at the church of the Jansenist abbé de Sant-Amour, principal at the Paris University, and the godmother of her daughter was the noblewoman de la Roche-Guyon. She supported a family of six, including her mother, and among her lovers were the executioner Andre Guillaume, Latour, vicomte de Cousserans, the count de Labatie, the alchemist Blessis, the architect Fauchet and the magician Adam Lesage.

Showered in riches for her skill at almost the instant she put them into practice, Assassin nonetheless has a proclivity to spend as exorbitantly as she earns.

Perversion of the Faith: (C)
An inversion of the Protection of Faith skill. If Protection is a Skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view, then Perversion is one possessed by those who have gained through the ill-gotten demonstration of said faith. Or worse, its bastardization and deliberate corruption. Despite being a form of divine protection, it is not a blessing from a lower existence. It is only the misery of one's body and soul, which is born from distorted faith. But if it is too high, it causes abnormalities in the personality.

Irreligious to the last, Assassin was pragmatic enough to see the French nobility's novel interest in Satanism and the occult, so she expanded her own knowledge of the subject to accommodate and profit. Carries the same effects of Protection of the Faith of the same rank, but from the opposite side of the "faith".

Noble Phantasm

L'affaire Des Poisons
Oh Mama I'm in Fear of My Life

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: C
Range: 1-100
Max Target: 6

The Affair of the Poisons was a major murder scandal in France which took place in 1677–1682, during the reign of King Louis XIV. During it, a number of prominent members of the aristocracy were implicated and sentenced on charges of poisoning and witchcraft. The scandal reached into the inner circle of the king. It led to the execution of 36 people.

The origin of the case began in 1675 after the trial of Madame de Brinvilliers, who was accused of having conspired with her lover, army captain Godin de Sainte-Croix, to poison her father Antonine Dreux d'Aubray in 1666 and two of her brothers, Antoine d'Aubray and François d'Aubray, in 1670, in order to inherit their estates. The sensational trial drew attention to a number of other mysterious deaths, starting a number of rumours. Prominent people, including Louis XIV, became alarmed that they might be poisoned.

The Affair culminated in Assassin's arrest and subsequent burning at the stake after confessing to everything while intoxicated. Before Assassin's execution, her daughter was noted to have said that her mother's arrest would "mean the end of many people in high positions".
Activating upon her death, Assassin's curse and legacy of poison is spread throughout the leylines to a similar [network] of people, the six other Masters. Each and every one will immediately fall violently ill, unless separated from leylines or otherwise immune to poisoning. Though even in this final kiss of death, Assassin's self-consciousness about her skill persists. The poison isn't incurable, and while otherwise instantly fatal, in this guise the afflicted parties have approximately 24 hours to cure themselves.

Lore

Catherine Monvoisin, or Montvoisin, née Deshayes, known as "La Voisin", was a French fortune teller, poisoner, and an alleged sorceress, one of the chief personages in the affaire des poisons, during the reign of Louis XIV. Her purported cult (Affair of the Poisons) was suspected to have killed anywhere between 1000-2500 people in Black Masses.

During her work as a fortune teller, she noticed the similarities between her customers wishes about their future: almost all wanted to have some one fall in love with them, that some one would die so that they might inherit, or that their spouses would die, so that they might marry some one else. Initially, she told her clients that their will would be true if it was also the will of God. Then, she started to recommend to her clients some action that would make their dreams come true. These actions were initially to visit the church of some particular saint; eventually, she started to sell amulets and recommend magical practices of various kinds. The bones of toads, teeth of moles, Spanish flies, iron filings, human blood and mummy, or the dust of human remains, were among the alleged ingredients of the love powders concocted by La Voisin.

Finally, she started to sell aphrodisiacs to those who wished for people to fall in love with them, and poison to those who wished for some one to die. Her knowledge of poisons was not apparently so thorough as that of less well-known sorcerers, or it would be difficult to account for Louise de La Vallière's immunity. The art of poisoning had become a regular science at the time, having been perfected, in part, by Giulia Tofana, a professional female poisoner in Italy, only a few decades before La Voisin.

The most important client of La Voisin was Madame de Montespan, official royal mistress to King Louis XIV of France. Their contact were often performed through the companion of Montespan, Claude de Vin des Œillets. In 1667, Montespan hired La Voisin to arrange a black mass. This mass was celebrated in a house in Rue de la Tannerie. Adam Lesage and abbé Mariotte officiated, while Montespan prayed to win the love of the king. The same year, Montespan became the official mistress of the King, and after this, she employed La Voisin whenever a problem occurred in her relationship with the King.

In 1677, Montespan made it clear that if the King should abandon her, she would have him killed. When the King entered into a relationship with Angélique de Fontanges in 1679, Montespan called for La Voisin and asked her to have both the King and Fontages killed. La Voisin hesitated, but was eventually convinced to agree. At the house of her colleague, Catherine Trianon, La Voisin constructed a plan to kill the King together with the poisoners Trianon, Bertrand and Romani, the last being the fiancé of her daughter. Trianon was unwilling to participate and tried to make her change her mind by constructing an ill-fated fortune for her, but Voisin refused to change her mind. The group decided to murder the King by poisoning a petition, to be delivered to his own hands.

On 5 March 1679, La Voisin visited the royal court in Saint-Germain to deliver the petition. That day, however, there were too many petitioners and the King did not take their petitions, which foiled her plan. Upon her return to her home in Paris, she was castigated by a group of monks. She handed the petition to her daughter and asked her to burn it, which she also did. The next day, she made plans to visit Catherine Trianon after mass, to plan the next murder attempt upon Louis XIV.

Unfortunately, this coincided with a rash of fortune-teller arrests after Louis XIV's sister-in-law died from a suspected case of poison. La Voisin was convicted of witchcraft and was burned in public on the Place de Grève in Paris on 22 February 1680. In July, her daughter Marguerite Monvoisin revealed her connection to Montespan, which was confirmed by the statements of the other accused. This caused the monarch to eventually close the investigation, seal the testimonies and place the remaining accused outside of the public justice system by imprisoning them under a lettre de cachet.

Personality

"People desire such simple things, it's a wonder why they bother with this magic cup. I'll grant their wishes myself. For the right price."
A businesswoman as much as she is a romantic, Assassin fancies herself as something of a perverse fairy godmother; distributing raunchy and illegal wishes to those who have solid coin. Despite this, she's not exactly confident in her poisoning ability--most likely due to Louise de La Vallière's unexplained immunity, which caused a minor shake to her reputation--so some coaxing beyond formalities and mundane activities might be necessary.

Tactics

Assassin is once and for all a utility Servant. While her poisoning abilities aren't in the league of Semiramis, she's still topnotch at her own game and able to craft more than just poisons. The Master will most likely want to secure the locations of the various Masters first and foremost--made especially easy with Assassin's own augury--after that, Caster will be the most likely first target.

[WhatShouldNotBe]

It would seem from your legs and muscular thighs that your pelvic thrust is particularly efficient, let’s see how you perform?
-Drukpa Kunley, singing to a woman in the high mountains

Name: Drukpa Kunley
Class: Lancer
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Personality: a deeply devout man, who deeply believes that life can be enjoyed while seeking enlightenment. He seeks to show the world that living life does not exclude you from religious devotion. Thus, he loves to party and have sex. If summoned in a grail war, he’d probably end up sleeping around with Servants and Masters, having fun before revealing his true identity, and battling them.

Parameters:

Strength:	D	Mana:	C
Endurance:	C	Luck:	C
Agility:	A	N. Phantasm:	A

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: B
in life, Kunley was still a holy man despite his actions, thus, he has MR at this rank.

Personal Skills:

Luck with Women: A
In life, Drukpa Kunley was known as the ‘Saint of 5,000 women’, and seduced a hilarious number of ladies in life. Thus, he has exceptional charisma affecting only women. His catchphrase when entering a town is ‘I have come without prejudice to help you. Where is the finest booze and the most beautiful women?’

Hidden Holiness: B
Kunley is outwardly a wild, hedonistic man, unlike his holy reputation. Thus, he is seen as a normal human by all until he reveals his holiness, revealing his status as a servant. By revealing his holiness, he gains Divinity at C-rank.

Riding: C+
Kunley was known for traveling the lands of Tibet in his life. However, his riding is counted as A ranked when facing beautiful females, for obvious reasons.

Protection of the Faith: B
Despite appearances, Kunley was a truly devout man. He thus has Protection of the Faith at this rank, enhancing his mental resistance.

Noble Phantasm:
Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom, ‘Crotch of Divine Power’: A {Anti-Personal}
In life, Drukpa Kunley was known for using his dick to bless homes and families, smack demons into submission [literally smack them. Using his dick as a flail.], in addition to using it for sexual activities. In ancient stories, his dick is always described as unspeakably enormous. This is not exactly true, while Kunley’s member was large, his mythological size is due to the face that he could project a pillar of solid light from his crotch, ornately carved with prayers as if a prayer wheel. While it does not exactly resemble a dick, it was tied into his legend as his dick due to the misconceptions of the time. This pillar of solid light is 1 foot long, and acts to fire beams of divine light at his enemies, and can be extended to 2 meters long and flexible, to be used as a melee weapon. This weapon deals bonus damage against enemies that are cursed or unholy. In addition, due to it's capacity as a weapon that exorcises spirits, Spiritual Beings, like Heroic Spirits, receive ranked-down parameters when facing this weapon.

Lancer is surprisingly proficient in the usage of this weapon in melee, having been said to use it to exorcise countless demons.

He prefers not to use it as a real spear, rather attaching it to his crotch and using it as a weapon that way. He can, still use it as a normal spear.

Lore: Drupa Kunley was a ‘Divine Madman’, a member of a sect that repudiated religious institutions. He taught that sex and the pleasures of life were not only to be accepted, but encouraged, as they were a natural part of seeking enlightenment. He traveled the land, performing many deeds, and achieved great renown for his practice of coming into a settlement, sleeping around and partying, all while preaching the practice of the Dharma. He is known as a Saint for his actions , as he blessed homes and smote demons. His actions even led to the practice of creating effigies of phalluses to place them outside houses, scaring demons away with Kunley’s titanic dick.

[RoydGolden]

Kunley: I have only one question. Why, oh why is he not a Lancer?

[WhatShouldNotBe]

Kunley: I have only one question. Why, oh why is he not a Lancer?

Not fast enough.

he always goes last, ladies.

plus, he doesn't hold his lance himself, but gets someone else to do it for him.

but the main reason is this way, he can have sex with say, Mata Hari, and then when they meet in the field of battle, the hilarity can commence.

[Historia]

No idea who the artist is. Pic had no source where I found it.

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And I'm not a tsundere, ya bunch of nerds.

[SpoonyViking]

Class Skills:
Presence Concealment: C
Kunley has a unique variant. As long as Kunley acts as a simple man who really likes to sleep around and party, he cannot be detected as a servant. However, he cannot use any skills and has E-ranked parameters. He can then reveal his presence as a Holy Man to access his skills and abilities, revealing his status as a Servant.

This seems like it should be a separate Skill, not a special variation of Presence Concealment - like Sasaki and Li Shuwen and their stealth Skills, for instance.

Divinity: C
Kunley was considered a Saint, despite his strange life. Thus, he has divinity at this rank, which increases his Strength and Luck.

Divinity doesn't directly affect Parameters, and there's a specific Skill for saints (though it seems to be geared toward Catholic saints specifically; Jeanne d'Arc has it, if I'm not mistaken).

Noble Phantasm:
Flaming Thunderbolt of Wisdom, ‘Crotch of Divine Power’: A

I'm going to join Royd in saying he really should be a Lancer, not an Assassin. :-)

[WhatShouldNotBe]

This seems like it should be a separate Skill, not a special variation of Presence Concealment - like Sasaki and Li Shuwen and their stealth Skills, for instance.



Divinity doesn't directly affect Parameters, and there's a specific Skill for saints (though it seems to be geared toward Catholic saints specifically; Jeanne d'Arc has it, if I'm not mistaken).



I'm going to join Royd in saying he really should be a Lancer, not an Assassin. :-)

hm, I'll change him up a bit then.

Edited: Changed it to Lancer.
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And I'm not a tsundere, ya bunch of nerds.

Ah, the rare Western Tsundere.

a very strange subspecies.

[SpoonyViking]

hm, I'll change him up a bit then.

Edited: Changed it to Lancer.

Lancers don't have Riding as a Class Skill.
I'd also suggest increasing his Hidden Holiness Skill to Rank B, maybe even A.

[WhatShouldNotBe]

Lancers don't have Riding as a Class Skill.
I'd also suggest increasing his Hidden Holiness Skill to Rank B, maybe even A.

I could have sworn the Knight Classes all had MR and Riding.

ah well, fixing it.

[SpoonyViking]

I mean, he could still have Riding with the same justification - Meltilith? Passionlip? One of the Alter Egos from "CCC" - has, but it would have to be a Personal Skill. :-)

[WhatShouldNotBe]

I mean, he could still have Riding with the same justification - Meltilith? Passionlip? One of the Alter Egos from "CCC" - has, but it would have to be a Personal Skill. :-)

Replaced his Kalaripayattu skill with Riding.

[Alexcoene]

Source: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.p...st_id=23211586
True Name: Scylla
Class: Berserker
Alternate Class: Beast
Alignment: Chaotic Mad
Origin: Myths
Region: Greece
Natural Enemy: Heracles, Circe

Parameters
Strength: A
Endurance: A
Agility: B
Mana: C
Luck: D
NP: A++

Height/Weight: 186m/70kg
Gender: Female
Likes: N/A due to Mad Enhancement
Dislikes: N/A due to Mad Enhancement
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Monster
Armament: Trident

Class Skills:


Mad Enhancement: (B)
Raises basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, also seals away Personal Skills. At this rank, all parameters are ranked-up, but she has lost most of her sanity.


Personal Skills:


Monstrous Strength: (A)
An ability possessed by monsters that grant a temporary rank-up in strength for a time limit determined by the servant's rank in this skill.
Berserker has been transformed into one of the greatest monsters of greek mythology.


Divinity: (E-)
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixture of a Divine Spirit , and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster raises. It can also decrease due to one's dislike for the gods. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig called "purge defense" in proportion to the its Rank.Berserker was originally a nymph, a sort of minor deity, and the daughter of a true god. However, her transformation into a terrible monster has lowered her rank in this skill.


Terror of the Seas: (A)
A skill belonging to marine creatures who preyed on innocent sailors. It allow perfect liberty of movements in underwater fights and a supernatural effect of terror will submerged. Indeed, any opponents that see the possesser of this skill while at least half their body is submerged will be assaulted with a supernatural fear effect. It can be resisted by skills that grant protection against mental interferance.
Berserker is a deeply feared and infamous sea monster that ate many unfortuntate sailors in her lifetime, including several of Odysseus's men.

Noble Phantasm

Dilitírio tis Kírkis
Transformation of the Sea Monster

Anti-Army
Rank: C
Range: 50
Max. Target: 200

Originally, Berserker was a extraordinarily beautiful nymph that won the attention of many admirers. Among these admirers was the minor sea god Glaucus. Unfortunately for the nymph, Glaucus was himself the target of affections of the powerful sorceress Circe. Terribly jealous, Circe poisoned the pool where Berserker was bathing, causing her transformation into a terrible sea monster. Now, this horrific transformation has been crystallised into a Noble Phantasm.

It will activate whenever she enter water. The area around her will then be tainted with the magical poison that served as the origin of her statut as a monster. Any normal human that enter this area will find themselves immediately transformed into Phantasmal Beasts that shares Berserker's appearance. In this state, they will become mindless, ravenous beasts without any memory of they previous life. They will attack any living being except their kind and Berseker's master. While they are far weaker than the original and generally weaker than a servant individually, fighting the already powerful Berserker along with her "offsprings" can prove to be very difficult indeed.

After Berserker's death, her transformed victims will die with her, no longer having enough mystery to remain in this world. It would be foolish to trie to cure them. Indeed, if even the gods couldn't remove Berserker's curse, then thinking that they could accomplish this feat would be pure hubris.


Charybdis
Other half of the Monstrous Pair

Barrier
Rank: A++
Range: 100
Max. Target: 400

A reproduction of Charybdis, a fellowsea monster that lived on the opposite side of Berserker in a narrow ocean-pass. While the two had no direct relations, they were nonetheless deeply linked by a single concept, that of a sadistic choice: to cross the path where they dwelled, all travellers had to choose between being attacked by either of the two beasts, and while confronting Scylla was indeed dangerous, Charybdis was sure to result in certain death.

This Noble Phantasm does not take the form of the true sea monster Charybdis, but rather that of the whirlpool that it was interpreted as by later scholars. It will manifest itself whenever Berserker enter a combat with another servant, surrounding the area of the fight. It need not to be underwater; it can manifest itself as a tornado of devastating wind on earth. It will then become impossible for the enemy to escape. Indeed, trying to cross the wall of either powerful torrents or storm will resuslt in the offender be mercilessly torn apart by it, resulting in their death. It cannot be negated or even resisted as it is a fundamental truth that anybody that meet Charybdis will die, no exception, and the only way to survive it is to avoid it.

In short, it offer the same sadistic choice of her legend to all of her opponents: either confront the mighty Berserker and hope to win, or be crushed by the undefeatable Charybdis.

Lore

Berserker's true name is Scylla, one of the greatest sea monsters that ever lived. Originally a water nymph, she was transformed by the magic of Circe into a horrible abomination that mindlessly fed upon the flesh of humans. She installed herself in a narrow passage to fed on sailors.

She was feared by all who sailed the ocean, and was avoided by many. Even the King of Liars Odysseus found no other solution to deal with her than "sail near her and hope she doesn't eat too many people". Yes, she could have been described as a true terror of the seven seas. She was a nightmarish and magnificent legend.

Yet even legends must end someday. One day, she met Heracles, the greatest greek hero, while he was on a trip to Sicily. They fought a most intense fight, but in the end, it was Heracles who won, and Scylla who was slain this day.

Personality

Due to the effects of Mad Enhancement, Berserker has not much personnality to speak of. She is a ravenous and feral beast, attacking anything that she recognises as potential food. She has barely enough reason left to not attack her own master or her "offsprings". It may be that she kept some memories of her past life, has it seems that she will grow slightly more violent when confronted by either Circe or Heracles, prioritizing them over her other adversories.

[Bird of Hermes]

Dang, I was gonna do that sheet at some point. Eh, I'll just make my own later.

[Adlet]

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Thanks. I kind of gave up after failing to find it through reverse image search. Updated my post with it.

Dang, I was gonna do that sheet at some point. Eh, I'll just make my own later.

Now you know how I feel about there being like 5 or so different variations of Roland, Diomedes and Louis XIV. Feel like if I made my versions it'd just be too similar to some of the ones already made. But oh well, the ones posted before are p. good so I don't really mind that much.

True Name: Scylla

My knowledge on Greek myth figures seems to have been failing me lately because she's another Greek I don't recognize by name. The sheet's nice. Her first NP seems a bit low ranked even though she's got an A++ ranked NP to make up for it. Transforming anything into powerful (?) Phantasmal Beasts seems a bit more worthy in rank than D since they're supposed to be strong enough to classify as Anti-Army. But your choice. I don't really mind you wanting to not make her overpowered.

Class: Assassin

I like her just because of the connections to Louis XIV. :j But jokes aside, I like the idea behind her NP. Makes her seem like a good mid-game threat if used properly. Though is there anything else to add as NP worthy? She seems kinda really weak if her only real trump card (if you can even call it that) is a post-death attack. Even super weak Servants like Mata Hari have something to use as a trump card without it being required to kill herself lol.

[Bird of Hermes]

Storytime, Uther Pendragon was my first ever servant and it frankly shows. I've joked about how generic he was and have wanted to remake him since... well ever since I posted him in the first place. However I've made plenty of Saber's so just a plain old remake wasn't gonna cut it so I'm pulling some stuff off here. It's a remake/total renovation. Anyways, as the Forum Disappointment ^TM I shall digress. Feel free to mock and tear apart this one too.

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Source: (X)

Servant: Caster
Other Classes: Saber, Berserker
True Name: Uther Pendragon Alter "The Half-Dead King"
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Place of Origin: Britain
Attribute: Man
Traits: Man, Dragon, (Saberface)
Armament: Armour, Cloak

STR: D
END: C
AGI: C
MGI: A+
LCK: E
NP: A++

Height/Weight: 186cm/76kg
Likes: Discord
Dislikes: Camelot
Talent: Benevolent Tyranny
Natural Enemy: Arturia, Morgan Le Fay

Class Skills:

Territory Creation: A
The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus.
With Territory Creation, he can create a domain that that simulates a certain "Castle of White Walls" that is superior to a Workshop. However due to certain personality defects, he doesn't "feel like it."

Personal Skills:

Charisma: E-
The natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. Leadership skills increase, but the morale of troops decreases extremely. A great king in his prime, the grails curse has lowered his rank significantly. Additionally, he appears to be actively fighting against his ideas as to what a "King" would do, lowering the rank even further to its lowest possible level.

Druid Magic: A
The ability to use the old natural magic of the Welsh, similar to Witchcraft. Separate to most magecraft systems by primarily relying on a external forces of nature, one can activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. He created and taught one of Britain's Three Great Enchantments (That of shifting ones form into a beast) to Menw, one of King Arthur's knights, who was also a magician.

He possesses this skill in the Saber class, but at a notably lower rank.

Faries Maddening: A
The ability to awaken the spirits sleeping within the earth and crushes the will of enemy forces. This mental interference causes a temporary decrease in STR and AGI in all enemies.

Prana Burst (Flames): B
The increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with magical energy and instantly expelling it. Simply put, recreating the effect of a jet burst by expending large amounts of prana. He is able to wrap himself in fire that enhances his physical power and sear away at any who would strike him. Additionally in this state he possesses the visage of a burning dragon.

Noble Phantasms

Cleddyf Mewn Carreg

Foothold For a New Legend

Type: Anti-Unit
Rank: A+
Range: 1~80
Max Target: 1

The crystallisation of Caster sealing Caliburn in the stone until his rightful successor arose to withdraw it. It is the manifestation of "Ending a Legend" in the form of a spell. By analysing a Noble Phantasm can see, Caster can seal it away from the remainder of the war.

There are several requirements in order for it to take effect. Firstly he must understand the origins of the Noble Phantasm, for example: A holy sword forged from another weapon (Balmung), summoning weapons from a treasury (Gate of Babylon), a blessing of immortality from the gods for completing trials (God Hand). Secondly, he must be able to see or touch the Noble Phantasm. However this only is ever required if the Noble Phantasm has a physical form. Finally, he must know the True Name of the Noble Phantasm, this becomes significantly easier to deduce if the targeted Noble Phantasm requires invoking its name.

When all necessary requirements are met and invoking the name of Cleddyf Mewn Carreg, Caster can dispel the targeted Noble Phantasm for the rest of the war.

Comed Coch

Chieftain Dragon of Britannia

Type: Anti-Army
Rank: EX
Range: 0
Max Target: 1

The ultimate Noble Phantasm Caster possesses in terms of destructive power. Caster was known as the fabled "Red Dragon", who fought against his rival Vortigern who was the "White Dragon" - possessing true draconic blood and indeed became one in true. After becoming warped by the curse of the tainted grail, he can invoke the power of his title and draconic emblem to forcibly modify his body into that equal to those of Dragonkind.

When the Noble Phantasm is not in effect, he will passively possess superior mana generation and every bit of mana supplied to him will be burned and multiplied tenfold in the heart of the Red Dragon. Even in the form of a human he possesses great mystery. However when he has unleashed his true power, he possesses the power of a great Dragon. He will generate mana by merely breathing, he will possess an Armour Class that requires attacks of Rank B or higher to affect him, tremendous physical abilities that cannot be accurately registered and Dragons Breath he can release in a torrent of flame that equals his constitution - that transcends humanity by far.

However, aside from a significant weakness to 'Dragon Slaying' weapons such as Balmung,and the sheer disgusting mana requirements that make it unsuable except for the most powerful of masters, he is not a true dragon and an imperfect one at that due to his corrupted nature. After use, it is designated as imperfect and a threat to humanity, therefore the Counter Force will allot Caster for immediate destruction and will empower an individual to do so.

If summoned in the Caster class without being corrupted, then his power in Dragon form will be notably weaker and with a reduced rank and time limit in the state - but as instead of a "True and Imperfect Dragon" but a "Perfect Fake" without an actual dragon form but a thick and dark layer of Ether enveloping him - looking like a dragon made of molten rock.

Form as a True Red Dragon

Lore

Uther Pendragon. The father of King Arthur and the Proud-High Knight-King of Camelot.

The youngest of four sons of Constantine II, his eldest brother succeeded the throne of Britain but was murdered by his brother advisor Vortigern. Uther fled to Brittany as a child to escape his treacherous brother but fortunately, Vortigern was not a competent king - with a disastrous alliance with the Saxons. He returned to his home with his older brother Aurelius Ambrosius who burned Vortigern in his castle and Aurelius assumed title of king.

With Aurelius as king, he along with his advisor/bff Merlin took the stones of Stonehenge and lead the armies against Vortigerns sons to root out any dissent. Armed with the holy sword Caliburn, both were easy tasks. On the way to the battle, he saw a red comet in the shape of a dragon, which Merlin interpretated as Aurelius's death and Uther's glorious future. Upon victory Uther took the epithet "Pendragon", and used dragons as his personal banners.
Upon finding out his last brother had been poisoned by an Assassin he became High-King of all kingdoms of Britain while ruling from Camelot and suppressed all uprisings of the Saxon people along Merlin and his retainer Gorlois. He met Gorlois' wife Igraine at a victory banquet. She was so sweet, so kind, so beautiful… Uther became utterly obsessed with her. Naturally a war started between the two for Igraine.

Gorlois sends Igraine to an impregnable castle while he himself is besieged by Uther in another town so Uther hits it up with his buddy Merlin who makes Uther look and sound like Gorlois for a day. Naturally he walked straight into the castle and spent a night with Igraine. The next morning, Gorlois was reported dead and Uther married Igraine and adopted Gorlois and Igraine's daughter Morgause who later married King Lot and mothered Gawain. Merlin wanted payment in the form of raising Uther's successor, which he was happy to oblige.

He had two daughters, Morgan le Fay who was born with the supernatural blood of her father and Arturia who had the 'Factor of the Dragon' inserted into her as the incarnation of a Red Dragon - akin to her father's namesake. Although Morgan le Fay was the proper and recognised daughter Arturia was made heir though Uther sent the latter away as he could not name his successor female. Although Uther was frankly apathetic to both children at best, Morgan felt suprned and Arturia grew up unknown to her birth which later caused the fall of Camelot.

Father of the Year.

Uther fell ill, but when the wars against the Saxons go badly he insisted on leading his army himself, propped up on his horse. He defeated a young and fit rival king, despite the Saxons calling him the "Half-Dead King." However, the Saxons soon contrive his death by poisoning a spring he drunk from.

The once proud king of Britain fell into despair as his kingdom started to fall into ruin. Even though he had an heir to take his place once he fell, she was a 'mere woman' who he had to put all his hopes and dreams on and he knew his body would give out before he could raise her to be king. So he walked to the stone and placed Caliburn there, where he told Merlin "Whoso pulleth out this sword of this stone is rightwise king of all England". Paving the pathway for his successor.

With his dying breath, Uther cursed the world and fell into a fit of rage at how could fate allow such a thing to occur before his very eyes. What's left of the once Proud-High Knight-King, is nothing more than a Half-Dead King who's filled with nothing but pure anger and rage towards the world that stripped him of everything... including his life.

Personality

Heroic Spirits that come into contact with the mud of the grail gain bodies of cursed flesh, and they are tainted by it as well. The contaminated servant's personality reverses toward the orientation of evil, the process is called Blackening. The blackened Servant is incarnated by the power of the Grail so the more concrete ties to the physical plane turns them into powerful beings. Their physical interference power increases, but at the same time, they lose the ability to return to spirit form. They no longer bother to restrain their magic energy consumption, so their fighting ability jumps significantly. They do not have precise control, but their destructive power is increased. Their momentum can be likened to a runaway car that never runs out of fuel, but fine handling is now impossible because it is out of control. They are fearful beings inflicting havoc and death upon the world.

Upon contact with the cursed mud, his temperament reversed. Normally his sense of values is that of a matured man as virtue and goodness, and will ascertain those that bring atrocity. He is not the image of a lively hero one can feel good about in this state. He is quiet, reserved and unnerving. He speaks, and even laughs, without any significant change in tone or display of emotion. Under the effect of the grail, he is prone to more extreme outbursts of violence under a cold, calm mask - brutal but with an unwavering and blank expression.

While typically in the Caster class, he would see himself as a "Druid" who he regards as a "Friend and Mentor" and not as a "King" as he would in the Saber class. So he would model himself after Merlin and attempt to emulate him, despite being ill-fitting for the role. However after his corruption he distances himself away from being a "King" as far as possible, noting how then and now he is only capable of destruction and has no idea why anyone genuinely liked him. Now he sees himself as a constant thorn in the side of those who should lead. He exists only to torment, destroy and derail. Which was coincidently what Merlin could be considered by some as well.

However, it cannot fully hate himself as a king, and will also occasionally lament as to "missing his sword."

Tactics

Caster is a very versatile servant. His basic combat prowess does not exactly stand out amoung his class and famous witches such as Medea can be considered to be superior. Although very capable of grand destruction with use of his Noble Phantasm, the mana requirements of Comed Coch are too great for most masters to handily and is essentially considered to be unusable except in rare circumstances such as if he were backed up by the grail directly.
However Cleddyf Mewn Carreg can be considered to be by far his greatest asset. If a servant and master pair cannot adequately hide their information or are found out, they will quickly find their greatest tools are lost - making arrogant magi who reveal their servants name openly as a show of confidence to be shown as the pathetic children they are.

[RoydGolden]

Uther: Funny that you've gone back and made a new version of your first Servant since I'm currently in the process of doing the same to one of my earliest. On a pure 'idea' basis she was actually one of my favorite's, but my writing style for Servant profiles has improved (I feel) quite a bit since then so I want to try and bring her up to my current level.

But enough about me. Uther's pretty cool. Definitely a lot more interesting and flavorful then your original take on the guy from way back when. His first NP actually reminds me a bit of the one I gave Alan Turing, what with sealing enemy NPs so long as he knows their true name and understands the basis behind them. Was that an inspiration, by any chance?

[Bird of Hermes]

Uther: Funny that you've gone back and made a new version of your first Servant since I'm currently in the process of doing the same to one of my earliest. On a pure 'idea' basis she was actually one of my favorite's, but my writing style for Servant profiles has improved (I feel) quite a bit since then so I want to try and bring her up to my current level.

But enough about me. Uther's pretty cool. Definitely a lot more interesting and flavorful then your original take on the guy from way back when. His first NP actually reminds me a bit of the one I gave Alan Turing, what with sealing enemy NPs so long as he knows their true name and understands the basis behind them. Was that an inspiration, by any chance?

One of your first female is being redone? Should be interesting. I guess it'll be one of these.

1. Alice Pleasance Liddell
2. Don Quixote (Genderbent)
3. Annie Oakley
4. Squanto (Genderbent)
5. Library of Alexandria
6. Sleeping Beauty

Regarding his first NP, I was looking over Uther recently to see what I could have done better (Which as you can see was a lot) But I was thinking of what the 'Sword in the Stone' could be. I first thought it could be giving a Noble Phantasm but that can be done anyways in some circumstances so I re imagined it as him sealing it away. I added all the extra stuff as restrictions just to stop him going *poof* and getting rid of everyone's Noble Phantasms.

[RoydGolden]

One of your first female is being redone? Should be interesting. I guess it'll be one of these.

1. Alice Pleasance Liddell
2. Don Quixote (Genderbent)
3. Annie Oakley
4. Squanto (Genderbent)
5. Library of Alexandria
6. Sleeping Beauty

One of those is definitely the right one; though I won't be telling which. You're just going to have to wait for the sheet itself!

[Bird of Hermes]

True Name: Scylla

Anyways, since I forgot to comment on the actual sheet...

Terror of the Seas is a good skill and pretty similar to one i had in mind for her, in fact a lot of it is similar. I also like the creation of monsters aspect but considering I had a similar deal with Echidna at a far higher level, I think you can change the rank a bit. Or alternatively add more flavour text to it to make it more rank appropriate to what you've given it.

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One of those is definitely the right one; though I won't be telling which. You're just going to have to wait for the sheet itself!

I guess either Don or Squanto as you've mentioned them both more previously than the others.