Hm... I've been thinking, since No-Name Assassin is a candidate but not an actual Hassan, is it still possible to summon the rejects in a Grail Wars like the Moon Cell Holy Grail War and the False Holy Grail War)? Let's just say I'm planning one of my sheets.
...You're asking if Hassans who weren't officially accepted into the order can still be summoned? I don't see why not, as long as you have an interesting enough idea.
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Also, somebody really ought to get around to updating the OP by now... since we've now hit past 300 pages on the default setting...
When you consider a new sheet when you're stuck writing another sheet to take your mind off it but there's way too much info to parse through.
Alexander von Humboldt needs to chill.
Nah, it's alright, this is nothing to apologize over.
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Originally Posted by Ail Don
When you consider a new sheet when you're stuck writing another sheet to take your mind off it but there's way too much info to parse through.
Alexander von Humboldt needs to chill.
It's the opposite for me, where I can't find enough interesting info at times.
Soon, Margaret of Anjou, soon.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed. Coffee would be nice, though.
William Beveridge (1879 - 1963), born in Bangladesh while it was under British colonial rule, was a British Civil Servant. Earlier in his life he had been a Lawyer and made a name for himself as an expert on unemployment insurance by 1908. The Post-World War 2 Labour government then employed him as a Civil Servant and he was later the chair of a committee on social insurance. As the head of this chair he was instrumental in the publication of Social Insurance and Allied Services which would become better known as the Beveridge Report. The Beveridge Report argued for an expansion to the National Insurance scheme to cover all working adults, in return many benefits could be made manifest in society. Beveridge became quite famous in Britain for this as his report managed to appeal to almost all sides of the political spectrum, this report was what fueled the Labour welfare reforms in Britain that would define the British notion of "From the Cradle to the Grave". Though he did not gain fame outside of Britain and today is not as well known as his work Beveridge managed to remain a uncontroversial figure in Liberal history despite being a member of the Eugenics Society and ultimately his work had a profound effect on the Western world.
Parameters:
Strength - E
Endurance - D
Agility - E
Mana - D
Luck - C+
Noble Phantasms - B++
Appearance: While taking on the most publicly well known view of himself he is an old and composed individual. Though initial impressions of him may be thought of as "kind looking" upon closer inspection the sharpness of his character will be revealed. Truly a man with a purpose that makes itself apparent in his looks he rarely seems surprised. His dignity makes itself clear in his classic tweed suit and pocketwatch, all in all he is not as abnormal in appearance as many of the Servants he could be compared to.
Personality: Caster's belief system is in many ways incompatible with those of the present day, while he was very important in the establishment of Liberal ideas in Britain he also argued that Eugenics was the way forward for society, an aspect of his character that has been forgotten by many. He is polite and will usually treat his Master as an equal, expecting this respect to be returned. And while his wish for the Grail would probably be for the betterment of humanity (although maybe not as a whole) he has no qualms about sacrificing the lives of a few during the Grail War. Caster may seem kind in some of his actions but really his condescending and conceited nature will ultimately show through. In summation though he is a polite man, and one who believes his actions will ultimately help the human race as a whole, he can become quite unpleasant and thoroughly disagreeable under certain circumstances. A mention should be made that despite his pro-eugenic views he is still Lawful Good, as ultimately "Good" is a very wide category and not merely the purest possible character who best reflects the social beliefs of the day.
Alignment: Lawful Good
Likes: Centralised Planning, The Educated Upper Classes, well-structured meals
Dislikes: Laissez Faire ideals, The Uneducated Upper Classes
Talent: Creating sympathy
Natural Enemy: Pale Rider
Class Skills:
Item Construction (-) - While usually a staple of the Caster class, the capability to construct items is lost in favour of his Noble Phantasm The Five Giants.
Territory Creation (B) - At average rank for the Caster class this allows for the creation of a Workshop, which Caster occasionally refers to as a committee room, though this would usually allow for increases to a Casters magecraft this is something Caster lacks, as such it merely aids in the use of his Noble Phantasm The Five Giants by reducing the time taken during construction.
Personal Skills:
Golden Rule (C+) - A skill representing the great wealth of a Servant untroubled by economic problems during their life, though Caster eventually rose to the Peerage and lived his life as an affluent Civil Servant he would not usually receive this rank anywhere above D, due however to the vast amounts of funds poured into the creation of his suggested plans for society he gains a rank up in this which allows him to acquire the resources necessary for the construction of The Five Giants.
Noble Phantasms
The Beveridge Report- Social Insurance And Allied Services (C, Anti-Army (Self)): A Noble Phantasm that epitomises the close ties between Caster and the Labour welfare reforms The Beveridge Report while providing benefits for Caster is a Noble Phantasm he is forced to activate. When any of The Five Giants are on the brink of destruction this Noble Phantasm automatically activates, acting through the link between Caster and the Noble Phantasm vast amounts of Casters mana is poured into the sustaining and repair of The Five Giants. As long as Caster is alive The Five Giants will also be sustained in the world, if one of them is brought to near destruction they will all be returned to their original states of health. Though this makes The Five Giants very robust it also makes Caster himself more vulnerable to death if The Five Giants are exposed to constant combat as ultimately The Beveridge Report will even draw on Casters life energy to sustain The Five Giants.
The Five Giants- Roadblocks on the path to Social Security (B++, Anti-Army): Undoubtedly Caster's signature ability, Caster constructs four Mystic Codes that act as Familiars. In The Beveridge Report Caster outlined the five major threats to British society as being Want, Disease, Squalor, Ignorance and Idleness. Use of this Noble Phantasm takes about 12 hours per Giant and although Caster is focused on his work he is also completely unprotected until at least one of the Giants is constructed, each of them takes a good deal of Caster's mana and physical resources to construct.
Each "Giant" can range from the size of a regular adult to the largest Skyscraper at will, and though they are not literal manifestations of the problems Caster attempted to address (Being merely pale imitations) they are powerful and possesses some minor personality traits. Each "Giant" has a passive form where it acts as a familiar, however they also operate as active Noble Phantasms but this will stop them from normally operating. The Giants have a direct link with Caster and as such act as extensions of Caster for the most part.
The Giants
Want- Deprivation from Resources:
Strength - B
Endurance - D
Agility - D+
Mana - E
Luck - D
Noble Phantasm - C
Materials Required: Various pieces of steel and iron, metal girders or other similar objects will do.
Appearance: Taking the vague, stick-figure style form of a human Want stands bipedal and has two arms, possessing no head it only has a single bit of metal that resembles a spine, at the end of its "arms" are three claws of steel which it often uses to pierce away at its targets. The metal is flexible and as such Want is not limited by the objects of its construction. It is easiest to imagine a steel construct of Avenger's "Shades".
Personality Traits: Want is the most aggressive of the Giants, furiously ripping away at its victims. As with all the others it is under Casters direct control but when retreating it will often rip up the ground as it runs. Want shows particular aggression towards those possessing the Golden Rule or Collector skills, and against a Servant like Edmond Dantes or Gilgamesh it would probably end up destroying random objects nearby upon sight.
Skill:
Murderous Instinct (B) - As one of the most fatal Giants Want is capable of acting without care for his own life. This will reduce his Endurance to E- but it increases his Strength to potentially A+, though this can be taxing on the mana supply of Caster as he is almost entirely dependent on Caster's mana.
Noble Phantasm:
Upon activation Mana is consumed to increase Want's speed to incredible levels, this is limited by the automated nature of Want's actions during his active form. Want can only move behind a single visible target and quickly attack them. This is perfect for Master elimination and in combination with Murderous Instinct makes Want a terrifying opponent, his movements can be predicted by a powerful Servant and the sheer amount of Mana that Want consumes is enough to leave Caster himself defenceless.
Disease- The Giant of Pestilence:
Strength - D-
Endurance - B
Agility - E-
Mana - E
Luck - C
Noble Phantasm - E-
Materials Required: Human Waste, Vomit, Excrement, Bin Liner, Sewage etc.
Appearance: Easily described as a slowly moving mountain of filth, what resembles facial features are merely gaping holes in a towering pile of scum and stagnation. While two "arms" may be made out they are constructed from the same sewage water and (mostly) solid objects as the rest of the body and no legs exist to speak of. Staring at Disease too long is not for the faint of heart as compounded bodies of insects or animal fur may approach the surface, at the worst even a human limb.
Personality: While ultimately under the control of Caster Disease is more of a coward than the other Giants. Those with Golden Rule (Body) or Consummated Shape terrify Disease and it might shy away from them before attacking (though its attacks make little enough difference anyway). However it seems to take a perverse enjoyment in attacking those with Weak Constitution. It would probably jiggle with happiness (A sight nobody wants to see) to meet Pale Rider.
Skill:
Battle Continuation (A) - The ability to fight even with life threatening injuries, Disease can soak up attacks until its entire body is on the verge of destruction while showing no sign in its usual fighting ability being debilitated by such wounds.
Noble Phantasm:
A weak Noble Phantasm that has extremely limited use. Disease's body breaks down into a swarm of rats that distribute over a quarter of a mile. Though they can be recognised as a single familiar they have no magical attributes, the only real use of this Noble Phantasm is to distract a Magic user as the rats seem to be highly annoying. There is the potential for a large group of them to knock a human down but as they are uncontrollable (apart from the area they distribute over) this is unlikely to happen.
Squalor- The Lack of Proper Housing:
Strength - C
Endurance - D-
Agility - E
Mana - D
Luck - E
Noble Phantasm - C+
Materials Required: Bricks, cement, wood and other staples of house construction
Appearance: The closest Giant to the stereotypical image of a Giant or Golem, Squalor stands tall as an Adonis figure fit with muscled arms and perfect stature. However this is constructed from a body of brick dust, splintered wood and disarrayed clay that seems to not break the overall shape of the Giant.
Personality: The most stoic of the Giants, Squalor rarely expresses any of the minor signs of emotion that the other Giants do and as such little can be said of his personality. It does display some dislike for those possessing the Territory Creation and Item Construction skills which is only seen through a clenching of its fists.
Skill:
Masochistic Constitution (C) - A somewhat unwanted skill that draws the attention of enemies in combat. Squalor lacks the defensive capabilities to properly use this skill and as such is hampered by the hostility that all enemy Servants inevitably turn on it. It does however aid Squalor when used with its active Noble Phantasm state.
Noble Phantasm:
Squalor needs to be in physical contact with the target to activate its Noble Phantasm. Upon activation Squalor transforms into a heap of rubble and detritus, composed of building materials, that forces the target down to the ground. The force of this is unlikely enough to kill a person but the weaker than average may be crushed to death by Squalor. As such the immobilised enemy is now forced onto the ground, it is difficult to break out of and exceptional strength would be needed. The rubble created by Squalor does cover most of their body but generally Squalor opts to leave certain body parts (The Head, Arms) jutting out. The rubble will be recognised as Squalor and as such its Masochistic Constitution remains in effect, though any damage done to the rubble will not be redirected to Squalor upon reformation.
Ignorance- Lack of Training:
Strength - E
Endurance - E
Agility - D
Mana - B+
Luck - D
Noble Phantasm - D+
Materials Required: A large amount of black cloth
Appearance: Ignorance floats above as a large ethereal black robe, it moves almost as if it was a fish in water, propelling itself like a squid.
Personality: Ignorance is the only Giant which Caster can speak through and as such often has any trace of personality overridden by Caster. He has no particular interaction with any Skills.
Skill:
Weak Constitution (C) - A skill attributed to those who in life lacked strength or were later seen as physically weak. Due to this Ignorance has a small chance for his parameters to drop. Though not often dangerous it can be difficult to deal with in combat. For Ignorance this will only affect his Mana parameter, this is important as Ignorance's main role is supplying Caster with Mana.
Noble Phantasm:
By connecting itself to the ground Ignorance's Active state efficiently accesses the laylines in the surrounding environment. This can be redistributed among any in contact with the ground. Ignorance is completely unprotected in this state and it's presence is easy to detect as a large parasite in the laylines, being horribly apparent to any Masters.
Idleness- Curse of Inactivity:
Strength - -
Endurance - E
Agility - C
Mana - E
Luck - E
Noble Phantasm - C+
Materials Required: Idleness forms automatically after the other four Giants have been constructed and consumes a very small amount of Mana in its creation, Idleness does not have a direct mental link with Caster and as such information is not transferred between the two
Appearance: Idleness takes the form of dust floating in the air that forms the shape of a person, it possesses no offensive capabilities.
Personality: While Caster treats Idleness as an annoyance Idleness is quite happy to linger amongst Caster's foes waiting to do... something assumedly. Idleness is particularly displeased by hard work and abhors Servants with the Single Minded skill, though Idleness can do practically nothing to express it's unhappiness.
Skill:
Presence Concealment (C) - A skill that makes it difficult to detect Idleness, suitable for spying even magical methods of discovering the target are ineffective. While moving to attack this skill becomes ineffective and the presence of Idleness can be discovered.
Noble Phantasm:
A simple curse in which the body of Idleness covers the target in dust. Their mental capacities become slowed and decision making becomes incapacitated, this is not a powerful curse and is easily dispelled even without Magic Resistance, Bravery or Single Mindedness and as such it is unlikely to be used. Against more immature Masters however it could potentially be an important Noble Phantasm.
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It took me a while working on this sheet so getting to look back at it offers a better retrospective than usual thankfully. I feel the weakness is most certainly the Second Noble Phantasm as I could've developed it far more. However it seems this is as best as someone of my lack of skill can make this sheet, sorry. Any advice or criticism would be helpful especially for similar sheets in the future Have a nice day
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
STR: E - EX
END: E - EX
AGI: E - EX
MAG: E- EX LUCK: E
NP: EX
Class Skills
Mad Enhancement (EX): The Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms. Parameters are Ranked-Up, but is deprived of most reason. Even when under Mad Enhancement, Typhon can maintain a conversation. However, his mentality is completely divorced from that of humans, being comparable to an automaton programmed by Gaia with no wishes or desires other than complete destruction of the Olympians and their works. Due to his restraints, he is physically unable to speak.
Personal Skills
Earthborn (EX): A skill denoting one who was birthed by an Earth Mother Goddess, and as such carries her blessing. So long as Typhon is in contact with the ground, all his parameters will gradually increase, starting from the E-ranks across the board in his bound state. As a being divorced from humanity, he receives reduced damage from beings and weapons rooted in humanity, and due to his denial and rejection of the gods, the same applies to divine weapons, save the lightning of Zeus. As a child of Gaia, Typhon’s body is constructed of earth and stone, and magma runs through his veins even if they appears to be flesh and blood.
Self-Modification (A): The aptitude to remould one's own body or merge one's own flesh with body parts of others. The higher the ranking in this Skill, the further away one is from being a proper hero. Typhon is able to modify his Saint Graph by overpowering the bonds that restrain him once his strength has reached a certain level. He has three levels of transformation, starting from the tortured, imprisoned state he is summoned in, growing to a beastly fusion of his human and monstrous selves, to his true, original form as an incarnate natural disaster who’s mere presence brings ruin and calamity to human and gods alike.
Natural Monster (E - A++): A Skill that permits the augmentation of its holder's Strength parameter by one rank for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill. This Skill is borne from the holder's nature as a monster or Demonic Beast. Typhon’s rank in this skill rises as the monstrousness of his form increases. At his strongest, Typhon’s power exceeds the gods and Titans, as he was able to overpower and cripple Zeus in a wrestling match.
Monstrous Progenitor (C): Indicates one who was a parent to various monsters, and has the power to birth new monstrosities into the world. With his mate Echidna, Typhon was the father of many of the creatures confronted and/or slain by heroes in Greek myths, including Cerberus, Orthrus, the Hydra, the Chimera, the Harpies, Ladon, the Nemean Lion and the Colchinian Dragon. This skill is largely symbolic, as without a being capable of bringing any theoretical children to term, Typhon is unable to father any monsters.
Noble Phantasm
Genesi Aitna
Blood of Flame, Flesh of Stone, Breath of Ruin
Anti-Land, EX: The prison that was used to seal away Typhon after his defeat: the volcano Etna on the island of Sicily, whose eruptions were said to be caused by Typhon struggling against his bonds. Even imprisoned, Typhon’s struggles and screams are capable of causing seismic tremors, and even in his weakest form, by exerting his power he can cause the ground to crack and lava to fountain into the sky. As Typhon’s restraints weaken, the calamities caused by his struggles increase in scope and magnitude, until in his unleashed form, his mere presence is accompanied by scorching heat capable of boiling the seas dry, his footsteps cause the earth to tear open, and his roars summon cataclysmic volcanic eruptions. This Noble Phantasm is the Typhon's very power made manifest.
Lore
Likes: Mother, Echidna…?
Dislikes: Gods
Talents: Destruction
Natural Enemy: Zeus
The youngest child of Gaia from Classical mythology, fathered by Tartarus, mate of the monstrous serpent Echidna and father to countless mythological monsters, Typhon was birthed by Gaia specially to overthrow and destroy the Olympian gods, and his presence was comparable to a natural disaster. Such was his power that the Olympians, save Zeus and Athena, were forced to flee in the face of his onslaught. He stole Zeus’s thunderbolts, forcing the god to face him in close combat where he was easily overpowered and crippled. He was eventually defeated when the thunderbolts were recovered, and was driven back, bound, and pinned beneath Mount Etna for evermore.
A final boss-type Servant and Anti-Heroic Spirit, comparable to the Beasts of Calamity in scope of power and threat. Nevertheless, his imprisoned and tortured form can’t be called anything other than pitiable, being a mere shadow of his true majesty. He has no real personality other than the hatred of the gods that drives him forward, but there are signs that he struggles against his ‘programming’. He genuinely loves Echidna and his children, and hearing of their deaths caused him great sorrow and only deepened his hatred of the gods and their works. Nevertheless, do not make the mistake of pitying or attempting to connect with him; he is fundamentally inhuman in body and mindset, and cannot help but bring disaster to any human that draws near to him.
Originally Posted by Sandstorm77
He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya
Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
Originally Posted by Five_X
Fate Zero is just Fate Stay Night for people who think Shirou is too girly
Typhon: First off, that imprisoned FC is certainly... erm, something. Between this and your Prometheus sheet, I'm starting to question whether you have some kind of bondage kink.
All jokes aside though, this sheet is pretty damn good. You've really managed to convey the sense of sheer ridiculously obscene power that he possesses, which for a monster of Typhon's stature is most certainly appropriate. This is someone I can easily see showing up as one of the Seven Beasts in canon, though I'm not quite sure as to what human evil he would exemplify. (Destruction, perhaps?)
One thing I can say is that I'm a little surprised you made no mention of the whole 'tearing out Zeus' sinews' aspect of his legend. For instance, you could've given him the sinews themselves as an NP that he can whip around as well as infuse with residual lightning from Zeus, plus maybe wrapping them around his fists for extra punching power. Then again, that is pretty gross (plus it's not like he really needs another NP, so it'd be more for flavor then anything).
You also could've included something to reference how he was ultimately defeated when Zeus got a satyr to lull him to sleep with beautiful music (so he could take the thunderbolts back), which feels like it could "humanize" his character a little. (If there's one thing Clockwork Orange teaches us, it's that somebody who appreciates beautiful music can't be all bad)
Of course, these are just my own ideas I'm throwing off, so don't feel deficient for not including them or anything. As I said, this is still a damn good sheet.
Last edited by RoydGolden; May 17th, 2017 at 07:30 PM.
He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya
Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
Originally Posted by Five_X
Fate Zero is just Fate Stay Night for people who think Shirou is too girly
Monstrous Progenitor (C): Indicates one who was a parent to various monsters, and has the power to birth new monstrosities into the world. With his mate Echidna, Typhon was the father of many of the creatures confronted and/or slain by heroes in Greek myths, including Cerberus, Orthrus, the Hydra, the Chimera, the Harpies, Ladon, the Nemean Lion and the Colchinian Dragon. This skill is largely symbolic, as without a being capable of bringing any theoretical children to term, Typhon is unable to father any monsters.
Okay it's confirmed you definitely have some kind of ulterior motive with this sheet. That imprisoned fc and a skill purely related to making babies? But seriously it's a cool sheet although I feel the NP is a bit redundant considering how much Destructive Power he already has, it makes sense but it's only a minor nitpick sorry.
Actually I'm probably wrong in thinking this but I'm going to be stupid sorry. Considering that his Noble Phantasm implies Typhon is already imprisoned in Etna does that mean Etna itself is the summoning catalyst? It's not like they are going to summon and construct Etna at Fuyuki or Snowfield so doesn't that seriously Nerf him? Okay sorry to have been a bother.
Actually I'm probably wrong in thinking this but I'm going to be stupid sorry. Considering that his Noble Phantasm implies Typhon is already imprisoned in Etna does that mean Etna itself is the summoning catalyst? It's not like they are going to summon and construct Etna at Fuyuki or Snowfield so doesn't that seriously Nerf him? Okay sorry to have been a bother.
It does raise the question of whether he could be summoned from the Throne at all, seeing as like Arthur he's technically just hiding/sealed in some far-off place rather then ever truly dying. Of course Typhon almost assuredly couldn't be summoned as a proper Heroic Spirit anyway (being a monster and all), so one more barrier doesn't really matter all that much. He'd still make more sense as a Beast, IMO.
Actually I'm probably wrong in thinking this but I'm going to be stupid sorry. Considering that his Noble Phantasm implies Typhon is already imprisoned in Etna does that mean Etna itself is the summoning catalyst? It's not like they are going to summon and construct Etna at Fuyuki or Snowfield so doesn't that seriously Nerf him? Okay sorry to have been a bother.
Fionn is technically still alive, just sleeping. It's probably the same case here.
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Originally Posted by RoydGolden
Typhon: First off, that imprisoned FC is certainly... erm, something. Between this and your Prometheus sheet, I'm starting to question whether you have some kind of bondage kink.
Actually I'm probably wrong in thinking this but I'm going to be stupid sorry. Considering that his Noble Phantasm implies Typhon is already imprisoned in Etna does that mean Etna itself is the summoning catalyst? It's not like they are going to summon and construct Etna at Fuyuki or Snowfield so doesn't that seriously Nerf him? Okay sorry to have been a bother.
One example is my Kiviuq sheet, where he isn't technically dead, but stuck in a coma while his body is mostly petrified.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed. Coffee would be nice, though.
Hey, I'm not shaming. Those who've looked through some of my posts in the Fanclub section should know why I'm the last person with any right to do that...
As a general reply to the points raised I'm sorry to have occupied your time with such a trivial matter but I found the idea of, on the last day of the Holy Grail War, the Berserker class Servant finally appearing with EX in all parameters and then probably wiping the board with whatever poor opponents were left.
Originally Posted by Zh1212
Have a nice day
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