Originally Posted by
venomking
Class:Assassin
True name: Death by Self, Suicide Rose
Strength:A[not sure why it's A, but okay]
Endurance: A+ [Again, silly. Also, missing luck. And NP.]
Agility: A++[These high ranks also feel really wanked. Even if it is death.]
Mana:C
Luck: E
NP: A++
Class Skills:
Presence Concealment: [to be honest, she would fit more as Avenger.
Personal Skills:
Fighting ability: [seriously, fix this. The description reads like how you'd describe a bad Mary Sue.]
NP:
Crow McCullough Death Game
Rank: A, (anti personal): a spirit of Appalachian myth who is said to serve to death,in truth thou he is in fact one of her idols , who both serves the true death as well as her. He is able to enact the powerful death spell deaths game
Which places the opponent it used on In reality marble were they may choose one game, if they loose no matter what kinda of defence they will die completely, not even gods hand can stop it, if successful it kills that servant completely, however even if it fails the servant won't be able to attack death for two days and all wounds inflicted on that servant are healed as well as deaths wounds upon failure.[This isn't an A-ranked NP. This is more OP than EA. It's fucking bullshit.]
Temptation of sweet death
Rank: A ( anti personal.): It's an abilty that compels a servant to kill themselfs and cannot be disobeyed, however if the servent as has mana resistance of A class they can avoid death but will still have to gravely injure themselves no matter what. [I don't even..... no. Just.... just no. This has no justification for its power, and completely breaks the one cardinal rule several times over, that nothing is more powerful than Gilgamesh.
The scyth of death
rank: A++. [Needs an Anti-something.]
It is the scyth created from mankind a image of death, it basic abilty is to cause whatever part of a living thing and non magic I team it touches to decay and eventually die, this includes servent, however it can't kill a NP as most were never living in the first place.[The A++ NP is weaker than the A one. And also silly.]
Background: she is not the actual death but rather one of the twelve spirits who are responsible for a certain type of death, who can on occasion take the name and power of death, she does admit that if all twelve of them were to get together they could summon the true death and thus cause the end of humanity. She was in fact a person from the time of new knowledge, a period of time not recorded by even the Mage council, and was the first human to ever commit suicide. And thus she become the 1st spirit of suicide. [There is no Mage Council. ]
Personality: she is shown to be have an extreme intellect, and often appears to be battle harden and ready, however her eyes betray incredible sadness, likely her aches is caused by her own death and the deaths of those she caused. Her wish for the Grail is to ha never commit if suicide and for no one else to comity it ether, however she does know deep down that this wish is impossible to grant.
[More edgy than UBW]