you can give Caster to scientists, musicians, writers, actors, magicians and actual wizards.
It makes sense that its the most popular class
Some people try to break the mold and be original fortunately. I still remember that Juan Luna sheet that made him a Berserker that could use magic instead of just going for a Caster, that I thought it was reasonably balanced and well made. As long as there's a good point in their lives that may allow you to stretch it a bit and consider them to have an alternative class, it's not a bad idea to try this, it may lead to interesting sheets.
true name:Hayk
class:archer
alignment: lawful, good
background: he was born during the late years of babylon, but when he grew to a man a tyrannical king come to power in babylon, so he left and went to set his very own village, were a large majority of his years were looking to be peaceful, until a warmonger known to be giant decided to try and take his village from him, he and about 400 men flight a bloody and vicious battle, killing the enemies leader and pushing the enemy back. the rest of life was one of peace and prosperity, and was probably one the few heroes to not die tragically.
skills:
strength:
B
agility:
A+
endurance:
B
luck:
C
mana:
C-
personal skills:
eagle eye:A
charisma: C
he can lead a small village and about 400 men with relative ease, but cannot lead armies or entire nations.
NP
the impossible shot that killed the giant: B-~EX
this is phantasm that takes his shot which ended his battle with what was considered an impossible shot, thus using it has the ability to make un dodge-able shot by reversing cause to effect. however what really makes it dangerous its its second ability, which takes him having a killed giant by turning that into part of the phantasm, as the average hight was somewhere between 4 and 5 feet at his time, for each foot a servant is over 5 Feet the phantasm considers them giant and then increases its rank by one for each foot the servant goes over that hight.
Last edited by venomking; March 2nd, 2017 at 10:57 AM.
true name: sherlock Holmes.
class: caster.
alignment: lawful,good.
background:as I'm pretty sure everyone knows his backstory i won't go into much detail exept say that he was mage.
he was a figure who was mage/detective in the early Victorian age, he locked up some of the worst criminals of victorian London.
skills:
strength:c
endurance:E
agility:B
luck:A
mana:A+
personal skills:
detective intuition: it is extremely simper to tracing and allows him to instantly gather information so long as he can understand it, thou he does admit he cannot use it on magecraft
item crafting: A++
he can craft phantams.
NP:
"it tis but elementary my dear Watson!" rank:A++
this ability can only be used at the end of the day which represents his ending catch phrase, when using it he can instantly understand anything he's seen, this includes phantasms,it can even let him understand things that are impossible to understand like EA.
"the law is just" rank: EX
this ability lets him create a reality marble which looks like an old victorian age court, in which the servant is then tried for whichever crime they committed in life, they do not even have to be criminals, they only have to have broken a law that was in place during the victorian time of London, for example pendragon could be tried for destruction of property, and murder, as crime sthey comiited during the holy grail war they are currently in as well as previose ones stil count as "part of there life" and then WHEN they are judged guilty they are then forced to undergo there verdict, for example jack the ripper would be forced to go to an mental institution, pendragon a prison, etc.
Last edited by venomking; March 2nd, 2017 at 11:09 AM.
i think these were my best!
Hey folks, It's been a long while since the last time I released a Servant sheet and to be frank my old Servant sheets were shit. I have worked a long time on this to make sure he was perfect. Also apologies as this sheet can be a little long winded and full of text walls, I have tried my best to cut them down but I just had so much that I wanted to talk about this guy, anyhow here you and enjoy.
Suppiluliuma
real life depiction
Animu depiction
“ You dare to impede my path, let my divine being allow you to experience your worthless existence before the wrath of my absolute judgement. It doesn’t matter whether you possess the most legendary of weapons or the most majestic of magecraft, nothing can protect you from my Wieght of my Tyranny!”
Class: Rider
True Name: Suppiluliuma I
Title: The Iron-Willed Divine-Tyrant
Source: Historical Fact
Region: Anatolia (modern day Turkey)
Alignment: True Neutral
Attribute: Sky
Height/Weight: 181cm/70kg
Stats:
STR: A MGI: A
END: B LCK: C
AGI: C NP: D~EX
Personality:
Skills:
Class:
Magic Resistance- C~A
The ability to resist magic and cancel spells - Under the influence of his Noble Phantasm he does not possess a fixed Rank in this skill. If targeted by curses, Rider experiences a Rank-Down
Riding- A+
The Skill to control and ride mounts - At this Rank creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.
Personal:
Charisma- B~A
the natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. - Under the influence of his Noble Phantasm Rider doesn’t possess a fixed Rank in this Skill.
Military Tactics- B
tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm. - In life Rider was a masterful strategist who through his military conquests was able to transform his country to a state that it could rival the great empire of Egypt
Eye of the Mind (True)- A+
heightened capacity for observation, refined through experience. - Rider is capable of calm analysis of battle conditions even when in danger and deduce an appropriate course of action after considering all possibilities to escape from a predicament. If Rider perceives something that he could recognize as an “opening” the skill vastly improves as he fully exploits it for the maximum advantage.
Divinity- C~A+
One’s measure of aptitude as a Divine Spirit - Like the Egyptians, the Hittites believed that the King was an agent of the divine and was often identified by the moniker The Sun. On death they were believed to fully ascend to the heavens and became fully Divine. Thus Rider who in life was considered a God-King has acquired this skill. Under the influence of his Noble Phantasm Rider doesn’t posses a fixed Rank in this skill.
Noble Phantasms:
Hattusa Throne - Armaments of Divine Tyranny
Rank: D~A++ Type: Anti-Army
Range: 3~200 Maximum # of Targets: 150
Main effects
The Throne
Kingship in Heaven - By my hand, I shall usurp the Throne of the Divine
Rank: EX Type: Anti-Unit(Self)
Range:? Maximum # of Targets: 1
“Now the Time of Revolution has come. All things things are inevitably surpassed, whether they are Great Kingdoms, Mighty Heroes or Absolute Deities. That is will of Creation, its Authority. And shall I claim it. Come forth the Thousand Gods of my people and witness my coronation, as I realize my dream, my Ambition!! Behold, by my will alone I shall take forth the world as my garden and ascend as a God, no matter how short. Behold, as I grasp and take hold of the Kingship in Heaven!!”
Kingship in Heaven
Lore:
Notes, Relations, and Wish for the Holy Grail:
Wish
Relations
Bond CE
Miscellaneous Notes
I really want to see this guy actually a part of the Nasuverse, even if he were to be genderbent I wouldn’t mind. I found out about this guy when I was researching some stuff on Ozy, specifically looking through his rivals the Hittites. As much as I like his backstory and rivalry with Moses, I really want to see him address his historical rivals that was the Hittites. This guy is awesome because he was basically just the Hittite Ozy just about a century earlier and it was thanks to him that the Hittites could even stand up for the Egyptians. While obscure I think he would definitely make an interesting Servant.
Last edited by Iceblade44; March 1st, 2017 at 07:02 PM.
"Only in my company, will you not be a monster"
anywhere than here
...I've been gone from the forum for a little bit, but just how quickly did you churn these out in succession?
Needless to say, they're about as rushed and sloppy as your usual stuff. Hayk is okay at least (though I don't understand why one of his Personal Skills is simply called 'archer' with no description). His NP is basically a long-range version of Gae Bolg with some rather slapped on anti-giant attributes, but I'll at least admit that coming up with a creative NP for such a sparse legend is rather tricky (for my own Hayk sheet, I twisted the legend a lot to make his NP basically a mini-Ea with space-warping shenanigans).
Sherlock Holmes... you know that he already exists in canon right? And I don't really understand the logic behind his NP either. Equating a conclusion of guilt at the end of a crime investigation to being able to replicate Noble Phantasms wholesale seems like quite the hefty stretch, to say the least (and including incomprehensible NPs like Ea is utter wank).
If you want to go with that sort of concept, far more interesting would be something like "Upon deducing the opponent's true nature and crimes, Sherlock can declare them 'guilty' upon which fate will be rewritten to result in their defeat/arrest". Kind of like what happened with the 100 summoned detectives at the end of the Shinjuku singularity or whatever. That'd fit Sherlock's legend a lot better and be quite powerful, but have the limitation of needing to know the foe's identity and also only working against those with "crimes" in their legend.
Also, you really need to go back and add some personality to the above. A Servant profile without any personality is basically just a bland stat sheet, and frankly not any fun to read. I'm doing my best here to be charitable and give constructive feedback, but these are getting increasingly tiresome to go through.
Last edited by RoydGolden; March 1st, 2017 at 04:29 PM.
One of the things I like about this thread is finding stuff out about various characters and historical figures you normally wouldn't otherwise.
It's clear you've put in a lot of time and effort into the dude, we all have our favourite figures we wanna see in the Nasuverse and this guy is a clear contender or you. Everything is well rounded and balanced, even the EX Noble Phantasm which I admittedly raised an eyebrow to at first but the time limit works in his case. His personality in particular is nicely fleshed out and it shows in the sheet as well.
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A question: What kind of alignment do you think a Man attribute Ashoka would have?
Suppiluliuma I: Like Bird of Hermes said, you definitely put a large amount of time working on this sheet, great job! Out of everything on this sheet, I liked the Personality Section; it's always enjoyable to read a fully developed character from a equally well-made sheet. It's obvious that you definitely put a lot of time, since there's really nothing wrong with this Servant.
Last edited by SleepMode; March 1st, 2017 at 06:27 PM.
Thanks, yeah ever since I found out I was obsessed with making a sheet for the guy. I tried my best to fully Balance the sheet so it didn't lean one way or another. All and all I can just say that I'm completely proud with it and it was nice to try to create a sheet again. Whether it'll be this guy or another, It be nice to see Fate try to tackle the Hittites, while obscure they were certainly an interesting bunch. Anyway thanks for the praise.
"Only in my company, will you not be a monster"
anywhere than here
Work in progress but too lazy to really finish,
Caster
Name: Morgana “Morgan” Pendragon (Alter)
Title: The Fay, Lady of the Isles, Queen of Shadow
Other classes: Saber, Ruler
Gender: Female
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: Britain
Theme: Turn It Off by Paramore
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: B
Agility: C
Mana: A
Luck: B
Class Skill(s):
Territory Creation (A):
The skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus.
Item Construction (A):
The skill to manufacture magical items.
Personal Skill(s):
Protection of the Faeries (E):
One is granted the blessings of the supernatural. Increased chance of success in everything Caster does, as well as keeping her safe from harm.
Due to her desires becoming corrupted by selfishness and being thwarted at nearly every turn in her more malicious schemes, Caster’s rank in this dropped considerably.
Crafter of Illusions (A):
Akin to Shapeshifter with the ability to both change one’s appearance and borrow another’s body for personal use, this skill also allows for the change in appearance of others and objects.
During her adult life, Caster was known as a schemer, a weaver, and a wearer of many forms.
Familiar (C):
Gives one the ability to create a familiar through magecraft, or bind one from the existing world. At this rank, only small and some larger animals are able to be utilized in either.
Caster mainly utilized ravens and other birds of prey for her purposes and, thus, never cared to learn more in this area.
Dark Arts (A+):
A powerful form of magecraft which taps into the darker realms within True Magic.
Can only be used with careful preparation and care.
Noble Phantasm(s):
The Perilous Vale of No ReturnFate Morgana (Barrier, EX):
As the true owner of Britain, Caster is able to manifest a Reality Marble that can be whatever she chooses it to.
It is the afterimage of Avalon—the mirage of the golden land that many may indeed behold, but never hope to attain entrance there into.
Within, she has the capacity to see through time and alter the course of human history. Though, due to her nature becoming corrupted, it is a a place to ensnare what she desires and ruin those she resents.
When someone unpermitted attempts to gain entrance, their worst sins manifest in physical form to haunt and harm them.
One-Hundred Blades Fall As One (Anti-Army, A):
Caster has the ability to bring back exactly one hundred deceased warriors of renown from long ago into the living world underneath her rule.
These warriors are shadows of their former selves, and thus lack wills of their own. They move as one, guarding Caster’s territory from intruders and slaying whoever she demands.
Notes:
Spoiler:
Last edited by Historia; March 1st, 2017 at 09:50 PM.
(This NP is a WIP, so if there's any problems, please inform me and recommend ways to correct it.)
Bhutapala Snehiti - The Decimation of Kalinga - EX~B - Anti-Unit~Anti-Army -
Serving as Berserker!Ashoka’s most lethal Noble Phantasm, it represents his conquest of Kalinga, Ashoka’s vile and most violent deed. It was so gruesome, that upon witnessing the aftermath of the battlefield, Ashoka became so sickened and appalled by the carnage that he vowed to embrace Buddhism and abandoned violence.
A simple but powerful NP, Ashoka will receive a major mana spike, where his Strength temporarily goes through the roof. Blinded by his drive to kill for a Perfect World, Ashoka will go on a manhunt to kill all of his opponents. And upon encountering his opponents, Ashoka will unleash a frightening barrage of savage strikes, too quick and powerful for anyone to resist. Combined with the ferocity of his attacks, the chances of even a powerful Servant surviving the onslaught are slim.
Depending on the number of targets, Ashoka can increase the coverage of his attacks, allowing him to assault multiple foes. However, because of his diverted focus, the concentration of power decreases, making survival possible.
However, with an NP this powerful there are also drawbacks that are equally harsh. Ashoka's will be unresponsive to the Master's orders, and only using a Command Seal can force him to obey. Since this NP completely focuses on attack, Ashoka is unable to defend himself from enemy attacks. This state of pure devastation will last from 15 minutes, with each minute representing a year of his conquest. The execption to this rule is the number of opponents; the more opponents there are, the shorter the time limit.
The biggest effect, however, happens during the aftermath. Assuming that Ashoka survives, the Mad Enhancement Skill will deactivate, and he will regain composure. After realizing his berserk state, Ashoka will grieve for the unnecessary damage caused, before sealing away both Bhutapala Snehiti and Asneya Ksurapatra. Additionally, certain Skills will change, either becoming unsealed or ranked down. All of this symbolizes the emperor’s change of heart, casting away his violent nature and embrace a bloodless way of life. However, due to being an Alter Servant, parts of Ashoka’s ruthless nature will remain.
Last edited by SleepMode; March 2nd, 2017 at 12:13 PM.
I plan to split her depictions between this and her regular caster, and just for the hell of it her saber and ruler versions too cause, well, arturia has a ton so her sister should get the same treatment (and im bored of making regular sheets at this point)
I'll add more to this sheet (NPs and all) after I get more into that Dark Souls vibe.
Last edited by Historia; March 2nd, 2017 at 12:04 AM.
@Morgana
All I can think of when I see that face claim is that Morgana looks so stoned in that FC. Other than that, Iceblade's already said all the criticism.
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