Create-A-Servant 2

**venomking** · March 2nd, 2017, 10:37 AM

sherlocks NP just allows him to understand anything he's seen or read throat the day, its takes his most well known catch phrase and turns into a phantoms, because he understands how the phantasm works, he can make a working copy, but it would take him months, and its not like he could make EA, he would just understand how it works. and hayks NP takes the fact that the shot he used to kill the warmonger was considered impossible and thus can change cuase to effect, but hes more legendary for killing a "giant" and as giant would have been any person who was 6 foot or higher, and i felt that it would not have been to wanked to do, as most servants are only about 5 foot 6 maybe two inches higher.

**WhatShouldNotBe** · March 2nd, 2017, 10:55 AM

Originally Posted by venomking

sherlocks NP just allows him to understand anything he's seen or read throat the day, its takes his most well known catch phrase and turns into a phantoms, because he understands how the phantasm works, he can make a working copy, but it would take him months, and its not like he could make EA, he would just understand how it works.

Months is too long for any grail war. It would basically be useless.

also, Sherlock never copied any weird items in life, so what you're saying is silly in the extreme.

**venomking** · March 2nd, 2017, 11:31 AM

imagine i could understand completely down to the last detail how something worked, or functioned, how it was made, i understood everything about it, so i could then make a copy of it, but it would take me at least a couple of days but an NP would take a couple of weeks at the very least, months if i wanted a perfect copy. that basicly sherlock. by the way i edited sherlocks sheet.

**Theoneandonlyz** · March 2nd, 2017, 11:52 AM

Originally Posted by venomking

i think these were my best!

Not by a long shot. Why would you think that?

As a matter of fact these two attempts are noticeably worse than even some of your earlier attempts.

So...here's a few questions.

How does Holmes have A+ Mana?
How does he qualify for crafting Noble Phantasms? Your explanation so is nonsense by the way.
Why he have Item Crafting as a PERSONAL SKILL when he is a CASTER and should have that as a CLASS SKILL?
A++ really? Medea "merely" has Item Crafting at A for being able to create potions of limited immortality. Did I forget something important about Holmes here?
Where is his other class skill Territory Creation...that he's supposed to get as an Caster?
What rank is Detective Intuition?

Do you realize that the Charisma C you gave Hyak IS specifically what qualifies a Servant for leading an army?
What does Eagle Eye even do?
4 to 5 ft really? You do realize that Nasuverse Age of Gods was an absolutely insane place with no basis on reality? That mythical actually means something? That the Giants were literally giants? That Iskander who was at the ass end of the AoG was shorter than his father? That people have become less than their ancestors in Nasuverse?
That NP reverses causality and gives a damage boost for big things and you think that qualifies it for EX rank?

What is your reason for never giving your servants class skills?

**Seika** · March 2nd, 2017, 11:56 AM

A little less personal and acidic, please.

**Theoneandonlyz** · March 2nd, 2017, 11:59 AM

Sure

I'll edit that

It's that *sparkle* thing that set me off

**venomking** · March 2nd, 2017, 12:05 PM

ah, it is ok.

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the reason it is under personal skills, is because i don't feel like doing whole skills thing for one or two skills.

**Bird of Hermes** · March 2nd, 2017, 12:15 PM

Doing yet another remake of one of my sheets from the old thread because that's what i'm feeling at the moment.

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Source: (Part of Stack)

Servant: Lancer
Other Classes: Saber
True Name: Percival "The Best Knight in the World"
Alignment: Neutral Good
Place of Origin: England (Arthurian Mythos)

Parameters:

STR: B
END: B
AGI: A
MGI: B
LCK: B
NP: A

Height: 167cm
Weight: 53kg
Likes: Hunting, Fighting, Gawain
Dislikes: Asking questions, book learning
Talent: All the requirements needed to be a knight
Natural Enemy: His Mother
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Human
Armament: Lance, Sword, Armour

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance: B
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected.

Personal Skills:

Blessings of the Holy Lance: E
The skill granted to wielders of the Holy Lance Longinus, also called the "Spear of Destiny". Lancer's bloody spear was actually the Holy Lance that pierced Christ, though he never found out until after his adventure which has resulted in a low rank. Luck is boosted during combat.

Martial Blessing: B
Alongside using his spear, he can perform with a sword as well - effectively summoning him as Saber as well and allowing him use of a second Noble Phantasm.

Projectile (Javelins): B
The expertise for throwing projectile weapons; in this case, Javelins. A single thrown weapon can destroy vehicles and even brick walls.

Pure Soul: A
A skill possessed by those few who are true of heart, grants one resistance from mental interference. At this rank, a bonus effect is granted meaning one cannot be affected by seduction.

Strong Arm: A+
One said to hold an "Invincible sword arm". In a feat of arms, he can apply a temporary rank up to any of his stats. This boost can be continually moved around these three stats to maintain combat superiority and greatly increase the chance of victory. The boost is lost once the battle has ended. Additionally at this rank, If the stat is already at A-Rank it will gain a '+' modifier.

Noble Phantasms

Lore

One of the Knights of the Round Table. He was the original hero of the Grail Quest and remained a key component in every telling even after the introduction of Galahad.

Fourth child of King Pellinore and he was biologically female and raised as a girl. After the death of his father and his brothers, Percival's mother took him into a secret castle in an enchanted forest to keep her child away from the chaos of the world. Though she kept him ignorant of the ways of men and battle for all of his childhood, Percival happened upon a group of knights travelling through the wood when he was fifteen. Inspired by them and after defending his family from an evil knight and a cockatrice, he leaves to find his calling as a knight.

He met Lancelot and Kay in his travels, after duelling Lancelot to a draw and unhorsing Kay, he was made a Knight of the Round Table.

Incidentally, the act of unhorsing Kay made him Best Friends Forever^TM with Gawain. Notably it was one of his earlier fights and here Percival was fighting with weapons he had minimal experience with and his only armour was a white dress his mother made him wear.

Returning home to visit his mother he comes across a crippled fisherman who was lord of a castle, who invites him to stay. Percival was granted a fine looking blade but was warned it would shatter and fail him when he needed it most. He also met a knight in passing and received advice in the form of three commandments for a knight; Don't kill those who are unarmed, be courteous to maidens and not to ask questions.

Upon arriving at the castle, he meets the fisherman who was sitting in the throne. Here he witnesses a strange procession in which young men and women carry magnificent objects from one chamber to another. First comes a young man carrying a bleeding lance, then two boys carrying candelabra. Finally, a beautiful young girl emerges bearing an elaborately decorated grail, passing before him at each course of the meal.

Percival, who had been warned against talking too much, remains silent through all of this and after the feast wakes up the next morning alone. Upon leaving the abandoned castle he encountered a maiden who revealed that the Bleeding Lance was the Lance of Longinus - the weapon that wounded the king in the first place and the cup was the Holy Grail, and if he asked what the items were or even 'why the lance was bleeding' would have cured him. And the cherry on top was finding out his mother and sister had been killed by a chimera.

He later accompanied Galahad and Sir Bors on the final Grail quest. Although they found the Grail in the castle of Carbonek, due to their purity of heart, they never brought it to Camelot as Galahad - who was the only one to actually see it, ascended to heaven. He remained at Carbonek as its Protector but he died of natural causes shortly after, just before the Battle of Camlainn.

Character

Key Words

**Theoneandonlyz** · March 2nd, 2017, 12:34 PM

Originally Posted by venomking

ah, it is ok.

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the reason it is under personal skills, is because i don't feel like doing whole skills thing for one or two skills.

If you don't care why do you post it at all?

**Historia** · March 2nd, 2017, 12:35 PM

Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes

Doing yet another remake of one of my sheets from the old thread because that's what i'm feeling at the moment.

This boy is well endowed.

**venomking** · March 2nd, 2017, 12:35 PM

hawks phantasm increases its rank on size, against mythologically speaking don't have to be big or huge especially in a armenian mythos, and it takes his most famous feet killing a giantwith an impossible shot and turns into a phantosm. its not that there giants at all his phantasm just dense know the difference between a talk persona and a giant.

**RoydGolden** · March 2nd, 2017, 12:40 PM

Percival is transgender? That's... sort of odd. Not bad obviously, but unusual and I'm curious as to what made you decide to go with that take on the character.

**Historia** · March 2nd, 2017, 03:09 PM

I bet if the Nibelungenlied was adapted in a modern setting, it would be so Sin City gangsta.

**Bird of Hermes** · March 2nd, 2017, 03:39 PM

Originally Posted by RoydGolden

Percival is transgender? That's... sort of odd. Not bad obviously, but unusual and I'm curious as to what made you decide to go with that take on the character.

Percival was described to look very feminine, was also made to wear a white dress by his mother. I've seen a few sheets genderbend him as a result. In a few others he follows the way of the knight as it as "Manly" and his mother insisted on raising him as a woman.

They're admittedly very stereotypical codifiers.

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Originally Posted by Gally

I bet if the Nibelungenlied was adapted in a modern setting, it would be so Sin City gangsta.

I can actually see it that way now.

**Gallereon** · March 2nd, 2017, 03:48 PM

Here is a fun little sheet I did in my free time. I did this for fun because the idea was stuck in my head, but this is mostly for laughs.
And so... I present you, the richest, most wealthy, least combat capable servant I ever made.

Servant Rider:

Parameters

Noble Phantasm

Lore

John V, known as the Magnanimous and the Portuguese Sun King, was a monarch of the House of Braganza who ruled as King of Portugal and the Algarves during the first half of the 18th century. John V's reign saw the rise of the prestige of Portugal and its monarchy, which had been in decline among European courts, to a new level of prosperity and wealth.

John V's reign saw an enormous influx of gold into the coffers of the royal treasury, supplied largely by the royal fifth (a tax on precious metals) that was received from the Portuguese colonies of Brazil and Maranhão. John nearly depleted his country's tax revenues on ambitious architectural works, most notably Mafra Palace, and on commissions and additions for his sizable art and literary collections. Owing to his craving for international diplomatic recognition, John also spent large sums on the embassies he sent to the courts of Europe, the most famous being those he sent to Paris in 1715 and Rome in 1716.

Disregarding traditional Portuguese institutions of governance, John V ruled as an absolute monarch. As a continuation of a Braganza dynasty policy that stressed the importance of relations with Europe, John's reign was marked by numerous interventions into the affairs of other European states, most notably as part of the War of the Spanish Succession. On the imperial front, John V pursued an expansionist policy, with significant territorial gains in Portuguese India and Portuguese America.

John V was a very pious man who devoted large parts of his day to prayer and religious study. He rewarded his long-awaited recognition as a lawful monarch by Pope Benedict XIV with a fervent devotion to the Catholic Church and some very large donations to the Holy See. The Pope granted John V the style "Most Faithful Majesty," which appealed to him greatly. However, John's relationship with the papacy varied at different periods in his reign; there were both close relations and conflicts at different times during the reigns of five different popes.

Mafra Palace

Personality

**4score7years** · March 2nd, 2017, 04:14 PM

Like Hermes was saying yesterday, it's cool to learn about new figures in history that you otherwise might not have heard of. John is a pretty well-made and fun sheet in general. His skills blend together to form a theme that is well-complemented by his humorous and detailed personality. His wish(es) in particular were a nice touch. This guy might not be a physical powerhouse, but the sheet is very nice.

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Originally Posted by Gally

"Revised" version. All I did was change 1 word and the FC, plus a song choice.

What was the word? A typo or something?

**asterism42** · March 2nd, 2017, 04:32 PM

Originally Posted by Gallereon

John V of Portugal

What's a coche? It is just a different way of saying coach?

**Gallereon** · March 2nd, 2017, 04:38 PM

Originally Posted by asterism42

What's a coche? It is just a different way of saying coach?

Coche is a portuguese word derived from a french word that basically means carriage, in this case, a very fancy and expensive carriage normally used by kings and wealthy nobleman.

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For example, this is a coche:

**Historia** · March 2nd, 2017, 04:41 PM

Originally Posted by 4score7years

What was the word? A typo or something?

Changed NP from "Those Fated to Die" to "Doomed to Die". In various renditions of the tale, the line "doomed to die" is used.

- In the midst of the night Kriemhild bade her, followers to set fire to the hall. That they did right gladly. The flames raged furiously, and one of them within cried: "Woe is me! we are doomed to die.

- Then enow did call: "Nearer, heroes, nearer, that we may do betimes what we must bring to an end. Here dieth none that is not doomed to die."

- Seeing this, Hagen now knew that he and his fellow knights were doomed to die.

- Then spake, in anguish praying, the hero doomed to die;

- For all was evil faring, whom he with broadsword caught,Doomed to die that instant, or wounded sore to fall.

- They alone die that are doomed.

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Also I found a great FC for Brunhild:

Spoiler:

**Bird of Hermes** · March 2nd, 2017, 06:08 PM

That mention of Brynhild reminds me that I have a half finished Gudrun laying about that I could finish up.

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