Juliet: She has the opposite problem as Romeo here. Four NPs for an Assassin with no exceptional heroic feats is just crazy. I'd advise scrapping the mansion one and just folding its effects under Territory Creation.
Juliet: She has the opposite problem as Romeo here. Four NPs for an Assassin with no exceptional heroic feats is just crazy. I'd advise scrapping the mansion one and just folding its effects under Territory Creation.
Last edited by RoydGolden; October 5th, 2017 at 12:28 PM. Reason: Fixed typo
Eh, that sorta bothered me as well.
I will do just that.
I also think Juliet should symbolise the tragedy of her love affair with Romeo. Does the sheet work in that regard?
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Well, you should see the Romeo Montagu Berserker sheet on the last page. He mistake mistake someone for Juliet. This actually works for him, given how fast he dropped Rosaline for Juliet in the play.
Last edited by Slick146; October 5th, 2017 at 01:03 PM.
So I just compiled all the sheets posted since ThirtyFour's last update. Hopefully the OP will get updated soon.
America:
Gunner- Joaquin Murrieta by Shield_Back
Avenger- Robert E. Lee by Aridwolverine
Archer- Wild Bill Hickok by Aridwolverine
Caster- Walt Disney by venomking
Rider- Captain Ahab by Saron
Saber- Abraham Lincoln by Slick146
Britain:
Saber- Elizabeth I by god of world-0
Assassin- Agatha Christie by TresserT
Berserker- Romeo Montague by Slick146
Assassin- Juliet Capulet by Slick146
China:
Berserker- Chiyou by Daneel Rush
Christianity And Judaism:
Avenger- Lunar Cain by zikari8
Saver- Job by Funderfullness
Demon Caster- Mephisto by Aridwolverine
Classical Mythology & History:
Lancer- Pheidippides by zikari8
Assassin- Helen of Troy by Omida
Assassin- Asklepios by ThirtyFour34
Archer- Commodus by RoydGolden
Avenger- Lycaon by Skull
Caster- Prometheus by RoydGolden
Caster- Herodotus by massive_jojo_reference
Lancer- Memnon by RoydGolden
Grand Caster- Proteus by ThirtyFour34
Fairy Stories:
Rider- Cinderella by TresserT (part of four sheet combo)
Finland:
Assassin- Simo Hayha by Saron
France:
Assassin- Marguerite de Bressieux by Daneel Rush
Assassin- Jeanne de la Motte by god of world-0
Ireland:
Berserker- Dorian Gray by Saron
Japan:
Assassin- Yamata-No-Orochi by Bird of Hermes
Germany:
Ruler- Friedrich Nietzche by TresserT (part of four sheet combo)
India:
Archer- Meghanda by TresserT (part of four sheet combo)
Scandinavia:
Rider- Tommelise by the god of world-0
Shielder- Skuld by Omida
Rider- Odin by god of world-0
The Slavs:
Saber- Arpad by Blarfingar
Uncategorized Others:
The Fool (Class N/A) by Aridwolverine
Grand Assassin- Grim Reaper by Clyton
Saver- Venus of Hohle Fels by TresserT (part of four sheet combo)
Nasuverse:
Caster- Illyasviel Emiya by Levnekov
Nice work.
Also Mephisto is from German folklore, not Christianity lol
Faceclaim:
Source:(X)
Name; Christina Alexandra
Class; Caster
Armament: None
Alignment: Neutral Good
Source: Sweden, Historical fact
Attribute: Human
Traits: Human, Queen
Stats:
Strength: E
Agility: C
Endurance: E
Mana: A+
Luck: B+
Noble Phantasm: A+
Likes: Art, Researching, Ebba Sparre
Dislikes: Doing nothing, poorly written erotica, being called a "Jezebel"
Talents: Collecting literature, Acting
Natural Enemy: Her mother, Belle's family
Wish: To reincarnate with Belle so they can live happily
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Tactics
Came in wanting to write a cutie Queen Servant, came out with Merlin's and the Riyo Gudako's rebellious daughter.
Last edited by Saron; October 5th, 2017 at 04:27 PM. Reason: Fixing FC
@SadisticOrange
It's an interesting sheet, but it's lacking details. The Naivety of a Fairy skill seems interesting and you created an interesting concept for his existence as a Counter Guardian, but the skill doesn't have any clear effects other than making him act like he has no common sense. Does it increase mental resistance or act like Bravery?
His Item Construction be a "~", as his Noble Phantasm is essentially his Item Construction skill.
I'm not saying his Magic Resistance should be lower, but as evident by EMIYA, the connection to Alaya doesn't give a Servant greater Resistance to magic.
Other than my nitpicks, it's really good and I applaud your creativity!
Hello. This is a pretty solid first attempt, but a few things of note:
Magic Resistance isn't a Caster class skill. If you want it under the Class skill heading, there should be a reason why.
His Noble Phantasm seems to do the exact same thing as Mana Burst (Frost), which is understandable because Jack Frost hasn't really ever done "one single famous thing". Maybe he can turn into Old Man Winter, since that's what he's based on?
Naivety of a Fairy is basically Evaporation of Sanity with a different name, and I'm not sure how he qualifies as a Counter-Hero but I'm interested to learn more.
And welcome to the forum!
Wait no come back you didn't have to delete it
Last edited by Express; October 5th, 2017 at 04:04 PM.
Class: Caster.
Name: Jack Frost.
True Name: ???
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral.
Parameters
Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: B
Mana: A+
Luck: B
NP: A
Class Skills
Territory Creation: (B)
Allows for the creation of a Village resembling those of medieval times. Instantaneous transportation becomes possible within it.
Item Construction: (~)
Caster does not have any talent in the construction of any magical items.
He can however make a physical replica of almost anything using Ice.
Personal Skills
Naivety Of A Fairy: (D)
Grants the Servant an allure of Naivety. At this rank, he is seen as someone lacking common sense.
Grants Mental Resistance (D) and Bravery (D).
Even though Caster is far from Naive, the distortion of his 'Legend’ grants him this skill.
Counter Hero: (B)
At Rank B, it reduces all of the opponent’s parameters by two ranks. It’s weaker against anti-heroes, reducing their parameters by one rank.
Prana Burst (Frost): (A)
Allows the user to dissipate his Mana in the form of bursts of Frost.
Noble Phantasm
Frost av vinterånden
Frost Of The Winter Spirit
Type: Anti-Unit/ Anti-Army
Rank: E-A++
Grants Caster the ability to manipulate Snow, Ice, Frost and all others that come under the concept of [Frost].
Can be used in various ways from making Ice Cubes to blasting an object to Oblivion with Frost.
LORE
Not much is known about Caster.
Caster is a former Counter guardian who had sacrificed his soul to prevent from destroying humanity through overheating, thus allowing the relatively warm Ice Age we are in to continue on.
Though nowadays his efforts are weakening due to Science interfering with his Magecraft.
Character
Caster is in a world of his own. Often cynical, he has a mischievous side that he rarely shows.
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Yeah, thanks for that but.
Tried to edit the original post, but for some reason it deleted it. So...*shrugs*
Last edited by SadisticOrange; October 5th, 2017 at 04:33 PM.
Christine: FC doesn't work, but that actually seems to be a problem with the original image rather then your uploading of it, seeing as even the one you linked on Danbooru isn't showing up properly. Other then that, the idea of a "lesbian princess wizard" is awesome and hilarious, so congrats. She sounds like she'd have a lot of 'fun' reactions around other female Servants, that's for sure...
Huh. Didn't see this one.
So Magical Resistance doesn't fit? But I thought all classes have Magical Resistance.
Oh well, what do you suggest. Should I delete it or should I give a reason for it.
Oh and I did not delete my sheet. Tried to edit my post and it deleted itself or something.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
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I'd say come up with a valid and realistic reason he would have it, or remove it.
Feel free to accuse me of bias, but wouldn't a couple of those female Servants be loli? Juliet at the end of the story was just barely 14. Skuld from at least 2 anime that I know of are portrayed as loli. How old was Helen when she originally kidnapped? I've seen images of loli Chiyou, but I understand if you don't want to go that route. That being said, Chiyou in Dynasty Warriors is portrayed as Lixia's dark side, but Lixia is pretty petite.
Yeah. Thanks guys. Removed Magic Resistance.
And I'd argue that Naivity Of The Fairy is not the same as Evaporation Of Sanity. Both are fundamentally different. One makes someone Naive or someone unknowing of Human character (which was what I was going for) while the one basically makes you a chatterbox. But not Naive.
Juliet probably could be a loli (or at least petite) with that FC, the way the image is styled just makes her look more mature.
With Chiyou, her Caster self as far as I can recall was a loli, but that just wouldn't fit her Berserker incarnation at all. For Helen her looks have probably been adjusted to match the present era's conception of a "perfect beauty" (un/fortunately modern society isn't as lolicon as ancient Greece). And for Skuld, "being portrayed in an anime" is a pretty weak logic to justify anything.
I think that just about covers it all.
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