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    "For the sake of my prince, I will do anything. I will become anything. I will do so gladly. I will do so joyously. Even if I am to become a witch! Even if I am to become the devil! Even if I am to become all but falsehood! My loyalty will always be true! My love will always be true! That alone is genuine. That alone is all I need. My prince... no matter what... I will find my way to your side once more. And this time, I will remain by it to the very end."

    True Name: Boye
    Alignment: Neutral Evil
    Attribute: Man
    Class: Alter Ego

    STR: D
    CON: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: A
    LCK: C
    NP: C+

    Class Skills
    Divinity: E
    A Skill that denotes the measure of one's divine nature. Alter Ego possesses resistance to attacks rooted in demonology and can subjugate low ranking evil spirits and demons, but is vulnerable to interference of a holy nature, such as the rites of the Church. Alter Ego has been granted this Skill due to being frequently written about as being of demonic origins, with some even suggesting she might be the Devil in disguise himself. She has additionally been associated with the sorcery of Lapland, known to entail the ritualistic possession of practitioners by the demons and spirits in service to them.

    Personal Skills
    Man's Best Friend: B+
    A Skill that denotes the unconditional loyalty and devotion of a domesticated canine towards humans. A hunting dog with greatly enhanced senses, Alter Ego is able to see through low-ranking illusions and doggedly pursue quarry through even difficult terrain. Committed to being ever at her Master's side, she is especially skilled at determining their location and optimally making her way there. Even magical concealment of her Master from her will typically be seen through by her tracking skill. Alter Ego is also highly resistant to any mental interference that might turn her against her Master, or that would afflict her with fear or despair. There is nothing save her Master's own betrayal that can sever her unwavering faith. Finally, when taking action in direct defense of or service to her Master, there is a small chance of Alter Ego receiving a Rank-Up to all parameters. If it is for her Master, it is possible for her to push beyond her limits.

    The profound loyalty domesticated dogs bear towards humans has long been recorded in myth, history, and literature, with numerous stories and anecdotes such as that of Odysseus's dog Argos attesting to their incredible devotion. Alter Ego in life was no exception, ever at the side of Prince Rupert of the Rhine. A skilled hunting dog, a rare authentic account records her helping her master take down a deer during a hunt. She faithfully accompanied her master to the battlefield on enough occasions so as to become infamously associated with him. During the Battle of Marston Moor, perhaps somehow sensing her master was in peril, she escaped from where she had been tied up at camp and made her way to the battlefield to find him, perishing in the process. Aside from this genuine truth, Alter Ego was also alleged to have kissed Prince Rupert in public and slept in his bed, her faithfulness insinuated as being the pernicious desire of a witch's familiar.

    Innocent Monster: A
    A Skill denoting an attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter. This Skill is something like a curse and cannot be removed. Alter Ego's abilities and appearance have been completely transformed. She has been granted human form, language, and intelligence, the Skills Divinity and Witchcraft, her Noble Phantasm, and virtually all of her ability and qualifications as a Servant. To an extent rare in a Servant that truly lived in history, the near entirety of Alter Ego's Saint Graph has been provided by Innocent Monster, with her Skill Man's Best Friend remaining its only mostly genuine part. In that regard, perhaps it could be said there is nothing but merits.

    Alter Ego possessed an almost incomparably notorious reputation in life, to the extent of being by far the most infamous dog in England at the time. That reputation was falsehood, the result of a war of satire and slander waged during the English Civil War. Pamphlets were endlessly written by Parliamentarians and Royalists alike, either to cast Alter Ego in a negative light or mock the beliefs and efforts of the other side. Allegations included that she was bullet proof, could turn invisible, could find treasure, could predict the future, was a witch's familiar, was of demonic origins, was a shapeshifting witch, and so on and so forth almost endlessly. Despite much of it being written without serious intent, a superstitious general populace typically took it for granted, only enhancing Alter Ego's infamy.

    Witchcraft: B
    A Skill that denotes the usage of a system of witchcraft, in this case that believed endemic to to the witches of Lapland. Alter Ego is able to utilize a variety of versatile spells. She is capable of shapeshifting between human and canine form, ward away projectiles such as bullets and even take control of their trajectory, confer upon herself invisibility, detect hidden treasure, and discern deception and treachery. She can additionally utilize a limited form of divination, equivalent to that of even famous soothsayers, allowing her to see potential paths the future might take.

    One of the most constant allegations levied against Alter Ego was that she was a witch of Lapland, infamous for its sorcery in the 17th century. Many of the magical abilities she was said to possess also fell under the English notion of a Lapland Lady. In truth however, the witches of Lapland were an invention of English literature. Sorcery in Lapland historically was restricted to men, and defined by the usage of spirits and demons for divination and curing the sick. These spirits never appeared to women or entered their service, leaving there no such thing as Lapland witches.

    Noble Phantasm
    A Devil Without Doubt
    Elegy of Loyalty - Propaganda Overtake

    Rank: C+
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Range: 0
    Maximum Targets: 1
    Alter Ego's sole Noble Phantasm, one inextricably intertwined with her existence as a Servant.

    Boye the poodle held no especially remarkable qualities in life; her notoriety began solely with her owner, Prince Rupert. He was the famed and heroic cavalier of the Royalists, the bane of the Parliamentarians, who held an invincible reputation. Perhaps it was only natural, only inexorable human nature, that the dog that loyally accompanied him into battle would share in his fame and infamy alike. Perhaps it was only the natural course that an ignorant animal unable to protest would be made use of as humans saw fit. Boye became an innocent tool taken advantage of not only the enemies of Prince Rupert but his allies to push forward their own agendas, to mock, satirize, and slander each other. A simple dog became a living piece of propaganda, serving as the catalyst for endlessly multiplying rumors, falsehoods, and allegations. She was made into a witch, a devil, a sorceress, to stain her master's reputation, to mock those staining her master's reputation.

    Alter Ego's Saint Graph is composed almost entirely of malignant information; she is in some sense what might be called a 'Dead Face', born of the infinite propagation of negative emotion through her. She is an entity that exists for the sake of small-minded egotism, a piece of 'fake news' maliciously spread to further the agendas of some and to fool others. She is an Alter Ego created by the wishes and desires of humans to satisfy their grudges against each other, to hurt one another, to mislead one another. She is an accumulation not of something as true as hatred, but endless little grievances. Her Noble Phantasm is the embodiment of this nature, a constantly active type that could be said to be her herself.

    Merely by Alter Ego existing, the flow of negative discourse becomes directed through her. Though her Noble Phantasm is primarily classified as Anti-Unit (Self), it bears characteristics of an Anti-Mind type in this regard. Those who bear witness to her, be they human or Servant, will without mental resistance be subtly influenced to make use of her to satisfy their own negative emotions. Rather than even mental interference, she simply brings out the natural human tendency to take out their feelings on others, to attribute sins to others, to mock the beliefs of others. Any major action or sin of a Holy Grail War may be somewhat attributed to her, but of course only at the behest of her Master with an inevitably stained reputation. Any agenda rooted in malice, any negative emotion needing release, however small or petty, may utilize her.

    Her mere presence can impact relationships, engender discord between Master and Servant. It becomes easier for people to blame each other, to mockingly disbelieve each other, to want to get one over each other. If summoned in the presence of digital media, her prominence can multiply like a virus. Without information suppression, it would be possible for her within a week or two to have two major political parties satirizing each other over her, for conspiracy theorists to spread warning of her malign union with a celebrity to millions of people gullible enough to believe it, for the smugly self-aware to joke of her as the root of all sin, or at least that's what the crazies think. In comparison to a certain Avenger, rather than truly herself being a scapegoat, she is a means for humans to make scapegoats of each other through her.

    The malignant information born of Alter Ego, that flows through her, feeds directly back into her Saint Graph. Her magical energy, similar to the effects of Self-Replenishment (Mana), will generally be recovered once per turn to a varying amount. Likewise, any wounds she incurs will regenerate to a degree dependent on the output of malice she generates, sometimes even near instantaneously with sufficient output. It is even possible for her to essentially never exhaust her magical energy or recover from what would otherwise be a mortal wound if a truly extreme amount of malignant information is being produced because of her. At peak performance she is almost akin to a perpetual motion machine for negative emotion, endlessly generating falsehoods that endlessly maintain her.

    If the rumors and slander and satire and falsehoods and mockery and malice reach peak volume, if hundreds of thousands or millions or yet more believe her the devil, then the full activation of her Noble Phantasm becomes possible, warping her Saint Graph beyond her limits. Her form and mind will be twisted into that of a false demon, an unstable cacophony of mankind's indifferent cruelty. Her individuality burned away by the endless negative feelings of man, she will truly take on the semblance of a Dead Face, a seething mass of malignant information dyed a sickly black and purple.

    The plurality of her parameters receive a Rank-Up to no less than Rank A, her Divinity and Witchcraft likewise Rank-Up to Rank C and Rank A respectively, her Man's Best Friend is sealed, and her regeneration and magical energy replenishment become instantaneous. Her claws and teeth and spells are now imbued with curses, malice leaking out of her body to deliver wounds difficult to heal and amplifying negative feelings. The unstable negative energy stitching her form together can even be simply unleashed, a direct torrent of curses that can even rip through lower degrees of mental resistance. Even having become a vortex of grudges however, lashing out against the world, she remains able to heed her Master's directives and keep from hurting them. No matter what she becomes, her loyalty will never waver.

    Her Noble Phantasm is not without significant drawbacks. Her Master's reputation will invariably be stained for one, regardless of their innocence. Even low ranking mental resistance can easily negate her subtle influence, and just as she represents the pettiness of human ego, she can be surmounted by the ability of humans to rise above their negative emotions and believe in each other. It can be difficult to begin with depending on where and when she is summoned for her to create sufficient allegations and falsehoods, sometimes leaving her unable to even fully activate her Noble Phantasm. Finally, even if she manages to partially or fully activate her Noble Phantasm, the strain it places on her Saint Graph is immense. It cannot be maintained in perpetuity, and will inevitably deactivate after a short period of time. And if she puts all she has into bearing it even so, its usage will inevitably end with her quiet collapse and death.

    When Boye the poodle died, her significance to the war of propaganda immediately ended with little fanfare, and she became only a historical curiosity. So too is it when Alter Ego dies, whatever influence she has had, whatever war is being waged through her, will abruptly come to an end. For better or worse, human malice is fleeting.


    Background
    When the famed Prince Rupert of the Rhine was imprisoned in Austria during the Thirty Years War, the Earl of Arundel took it upon himself to provide him a companion to keep him company in confinement. That companion was a white hunting poodle to be famously named Boy or Boye, though it was likely the dog was actually female. Boye was in fact one of two poodles given to Prince Rupert; her counterpart, a black poodle, would perish shortly thereafter and be forgotten.

    Boye would accompany her master, the dashing and gallant cavalier of the Royalist faction, into many battles against the Parliamentarians during the English Civil War. Prince Rupert's fame and infamy alike meant he was the subject of a great deal of propaganda, and eventually his dog would be utilized for that purpose as well. Thousands of pamphlets from both sides would be published, some alleging Boye had magical powers to stain the reputation of Prince Rupert or because of genuine superstition, some mockingly echoing or exaggerating those allegations to point out how ridiculous they were.

    On July 1, 1644, Rupert would go into battle at Marston Moor and face his first true defeat, being shot off his horse and forced to take cover in a field. Though tied up at the allied camp, Boye would manage to escape and went to the battlefield in search of her imperiled master. Never making it to him, she was shot and killed by an enemy soldier, though Prince Rupert managed to escape the battle alive.

    A Dog's Elegy, or Rupert's Tears, was the best known of the many pamphlets written about her and covered her death. Here in her end she was depicted as a black dog of Satan, and she was mockingly purported to have been responsible for the Armada, the Gunpowder Plot and Prince Henry‘s death, and the poisonings of James VI and I. With that her significance reached its end, and she essentially had no further place in the public consciousness of the 17th century.

    Character
    Likes: Prince Rupert, loyalty, hunting
    Dislikes: Abandonment, propaganda
    Talent: Swimming
    Natural Enemy: Mephistopheles
    Alter Ego is in many ways what one might expect of a devoted hunting poodle granted sapience; she is bold, direct, without much regard for personal space, and energetic. Though she is reasonably alright at keeping calm and quiet at times, she's an active go getter that prefers to be up and about. She can be a bit aloof and introverted when it comes to meeting people for the first time, but once she gets used to them she can be quite personable and even somewhat talkative. In fact, it would be fair to say she has no thought mouth filter at all whatsoever. She'll absolutely blithely express whether she likes or dislikes someone, whether she thinks something is fun or boring, whether she's hungry or wants to play. Though, she does try to speak and carry herself with the dignified bearing of a prince's dog... to some extent.

    Quite sociable, she greatly prefers to be around people rather than be alone. Indeed, she gets lonely easily and will often express great displeasure at being left behind. Disarmingly cheerful much of the time, she'll just as quickly start pouting and whining if something isn't going her way. She's delighted at the prospect of playing physical games, even roughhousing, and will join in on sports and the like whenever possible. Her greatest passion is hunting, and unless told otherwise she will absolutely strike out on her own to terrorize waterfowl and strike down deer.

    Of course, she's no puppy devoid of restraint. Even if she's not especially good at social interactions, she's capable of reading the room and keeping silent if necessary. She's highly trained and highly obedient, capable of following even relatively complex instructions to the letter. She protests no order and will snap to attention to follow them; it would be fair to say she treasures obedience over her own pleasure any time. Indeed, so long as she's been given proper instruction, she's no trouble at all whatsoever, as far as her playful and oblivious canine tendencies go.

    Loyalty is of the utmost importance to her, and she takes great pride in it. Though she will acknowledge any given Master as her 'current owner', and devote herself utterly to them, her ultimate master will always be Prince Rupert. It would be fair to say that her beloved prince occupies her mind and emotions near constantly, and any action she puts thought into bears the consideration of how it might impact his reputation, how it might live up to him, whether or not he would approve of it. While much of her talking is often just simplistically saying whatever comes to mind, she makes an active effort to praise and extol the virtues of Prince Rupert whenever possible. She will take any given opportunity to express her pride in him as his dog, to smugly proclaim that she alone was his treasured companion, and to tell warm stories of the two of them. This high regard extends to a lesser extent to her Master; she is deeply loyal to her Master precisely because that is the sort of loyalty and devotion she must demonstrate as Prince Rupert's companion. Naturally personable, she will with time typically grow nearly as genuinely fond of her Master as her prince, and of course loudly begin to brag about what a fine owner she has and what a well trained and effective partner to them she is.

    All of the above seems in stark contrast to Alter Ego's nature as a Servant, to the way she naturally furthers people's negative emotions via herself, to the malignant falsehoods that compose her. Alter Ego certainly isn't fond of it. She bristles with unbridled rage at any insult or offense or mockery of her prince or her Master, and will often be deeply apologetic and shameful if their reputations are stained because of her. Aside from that however, to some extent she genuinely doesn't care. She may be amiable, but she is at her core an animal bred to hunt. Some humans are friends, and some humans are prey like any other to be ruthlessly cut down. If anything, she doesn't mind at all embodying her vicious reputation in the hunt and upon the battlefield. She'll relish doggedly pursuing her quarry and ripping their throat out, take unabashed delight in destroying the enemies of her Master. After all, the simple unconditional loyalty of a dog towards their master means the enemies of their master might as well be pure evil. She has no qualms whatsoever about doing whatever her Master asks of her. Rather than actual moral considerations, she only cares if her Master might be displeased.

    But of course, she understands it. That to be branded as a devil and a witch is no good. That to be branded as evil is a dishonor upon most Masters she might have, and dishonor upon her beloved prince. She understands it is better to be regarded as a good girl than a bad girl, and she understands that the malice born from her tears away at her pride. She understands that not just enemies of her Master but innocent people who might otherwise pet her, might otherwise praise her and the owners she loves by extension, might be brought to ruination. While she will strike against the enemies of her Master happily, she has enough empathy to not want to cause pain unnecessarily, to not want to further the grudges of humans. And of course, she doesn't truly want to be consumed by falsehood, to be made into something she isn't. Her cheerfulness belies the existential terror of being overwritten, of being made into a monster. All she wants, all she ever wanted, is to happily be at the side of the masters she loves.

    But even so, Alter Ego will gladly become a devil.

    If it is for the sake of her Master, if it for the sake of her prince, if it is for the sake of being useful to them instead of being a hapless little dog, if it is for the sake of someday meeting her prince again, if it for the sake of someday being at her prince's side again... then she will gladly subsume herself in sin. She will gladly allow her memories to be tainted, her heart to blacken, her joy to fade away. She will gladly bear the weight of human malice. So long as her loyalty remains, so long as her love remains, so long as even the tiniest fraction of her is genuine, that is enough for her. That is more than enough for her. That is more than enough for a wretched dog used to stain her prince's reputation, that ignobly died without being able to help him at all. So long as her love remains true, she will gladly become anything.

    At least, that's what she tells herself.

    Relationships
    Prince Rupert of the Rhine
    It would only be redundant to speak of him too much again. Her life's purpose is to meet him once again, and this time to be at his side to the very end, to be of far greater use to him... but truth be told she has some fears about seeing him again. She cannot truly grasp the veracity of her love, the genuineness of her love, despite how fervently she clings to it. A dog will remain loyal to their owner long after they have died, waiting patiently at their grave. But the same does not go both ways. Prince Rupert lived a great many years after her, and it is said the happiest years of her life were those near the end, not those with her. He might not be able to accept the purity of her love... and she might not be able to accept after all her suffering that he was completely happy without her.

    Mephistopheles
    They are both false devils prone to loneliness, one devoted to devotion and one devoted to treachery. She who so highly values loyalty ought to despise him and hold him in contempt, and certainly that's what she outwardly indicates. But at the same time, she cannot help but wonder at his existence so opposite to hers... and wonder at his laughter. Is he happy, being what he is? Can he accept himself so brimming with falsehood? She wonders even now.

    Ushiwakamaru
    "A false dog! Owner, pay her no mind! Unlike this human pretender, I am the genuine article! It is I most deserving of head pats and ear rubs and cuddles, not this affection seeking charlatan! Her loyalty is no doubt deception; she is definitely trying to deceive you and gain your trust! I am definitely not jealous of her or anything! I definitely do not feel that my position as your number one dog is threatened by her! Such would truly be a false allegation!"

    Hessian Lobo
    "Splendid! Oh great wolf, he who yet bears the form of my ancestors, I cannot forgive your trespasses upon the humans that I treasure so! But even so, I cannot help but admire you! Such splendid loyalty to your mate! Such fierce power you hold! Perhaps if I held your primal strength... perhaps I could have done so much more."

    Tamamo Cat
    "... That is a fox. Why does she call herself a cat? Why does she bark like me? Does she have rabies? Owner, I think it best to stay away from her. She might try to bite you. What? I bite you? I do it playfully!"

    Unsinkable Sam
    "... A cat, hm? As the high class dog of a kindly prince, I shall generously overlook your incredible flaw of being a cat. But what I cannot forgive is your lack of swimming prowess! As a trained water dog, destroyer of many a waterfowl, I shall have to instruct you that you may live up to the dignified reputation of our Owner!"

    Lucifer
    "... Why? Why is it that humans made me of you, made me into you? All I wanted... all I wanted was to be my prince's dog."

    Bond CE
    Indelible Hunt
    It's my most treasured memory.
    There are others I love more.
    There are others more joyful.
    But this is the one I know to be truest.
    My one memory shared with the world yet untainted.
    There is no falsehood here.
    No lies, no mockery, no satire, no allegations.
    No magic, no devilry, no propaganda.
    I went out hunting with my prince.
    Together, we took down a deer.
    That was it.
    That was all.
    I must have done so many times, but this time...
    History recorded it, but did not darken it.
    But perhaps, now that I think of it.
    No matter how much more false I become...
    Because I am here with you, I can keep making true memories like this.


    Author's Remarks
    pupy, and also I consulted You's excellent Harambe since they're quite similar in some aspects (and hopefully significantly differ enough in others), totally go check it out.

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    Ooh, a traveler! Here in our kingdom!
    Have you come seeking the King of this place?
    Well, you have arrived at just the right time.
    A grand festival, full of fun and entertainment!
    Just for His Majesty!
    And it cannot start without you.
    After all...you are the Guest of Honor.

    King of the Fae


    Class: Saber
    True Name: Oberon
    Gender: Male
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Attribute: Earth

    Parameters

    Str: C
    End: C
    Agi: A
    Mna: A++
    Lck: B
    NP: EX

    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance: A
    Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Oberon, being King of the Fae and a creature of immense magical power, is immune to all but the most powerful of human magics.

    Riding: -
    Riding is a Class Skill denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Oberon, however, has decided he has no need for this Skill, and has thus sealed it away.

    Personal Skills

    Mind of the Fae: EX
    Oberon, being a Fae, has a mindset wholly alien to that of mortals, and is inherently unable to reach an understanding with them. However, being an ancient and powerful Fae King, even other Fae are unable to reach an understanding with him. The only being who can possibly do so is his wife, the Fae Queen, Titania.

    Majestic Fae King: EX
    A variant of Imperial Privilege. Being King of the Fae, Oberon is a whimsical being, and tends to do as he pleases. As a Servant, this facet has become a Skill which allows him to alter his Saint’s Graph so as to give himself designations he normally should not have, and even completely renaming his Skills to suit his desires. It is because of this, as well as influence from a certain series he has become fond of, that he has been summoned as a Saber.

    Grand Magick Authority: B (EX)
    In the Age of Gods, Oberon’s power was great enough that, in his rage, he could wrench control of even the very heavens away from gods and impose his will on reality with naught but a thought when in his domain. Alas, with the Age of Man having dominated the world, and Gaia actively eroding the presence of Mysteries upon it, this Skill has ranked down as a result.

    Fair Folk: B+
    As King of the “Fair Folk”, Oberon is, as the rest of his kin, inhumanly beautiful, inhumanly alluring, and inhumanly cruel, but to an even higher standard than other Fae. His appearance is beautiful beyond imagination, entrancing even the most hardened Men. His words are smooth as silk and sweet as honey, enchanting even the most bitter of Men. His behavior is incomprehensible even to the mad, and his cruelty, when invoked, is beyond even by the standards of maniacs.

    Noble Phantasms

    Moonlit Fairy Festival
    Kpo Ji H Ncjr Ajm Hn (Put On A Show For Me)

    Rank: B
    Type: Anti-Unit
    The fae are known to enjoy the entertainment provided by humans, and will kidnap or otherwise lure them into their realm to entertain them. There is no-one who enjoys this more than Oberon, and there is no-one who will go to greater lengths to provide entertainment for him than the Goodfellows.

    When the Festival begins, the Goodfellows will disperse to find humans to present to their King, who will then spend the night entertaining him nonstop. But the night is long, and full of fun! The entertainers will sing, and dance, and paint, and play, and whatever else the King desires, slowly wasting away as their lively energy is drained by Oberon to sate his appetites. By the time the sun finally rises, all the entertainers will have collapsed, exhausted from the endless demands of Oberon.

    The Eternal Ephemeral Kingdom
    Ocn Lmjri Ldot ja Hqhgji (The Crown City of Avalon)

    Rank: EX
    Type: Conceptual
    Upon activation of his Noble Phantasm, the fairy city of Avalon swaps places with the area designated by Oberon. The land twists into an alien place that mortals cannot hope to comprehend, slowly driving them mad the longer they linger. Furthermore, Oberon, being King of this land, can manipulate its geometry and dimensions at his whim, making it nigh impossible to escape unless he allows it.

    This Noble Phantasm is neither a Reality Marble nor a Marble Phantasm. Rather, it is more akin to Oberon twisting the Texture of the designated land inside out, allowing Avalon to be pulled from the Reverse Side of the World and planted into Gaia’s Texture. Within the borders of the city, Gaia has no control over anything. Mysteries cannot be eroded, natural order cannot be restored, and neither can the Counter Force affect the city or those within it. The only ones who can command the city are its King and Queen.

    Fortunately, Oberon is not one to share his toys, and so the likelihood of him invoking this Noble Phantasm are extremely low, so as to avoid his subjects or his lover from interfering with his fun.

    Bio

    Fae are wonderful. They provoke wonder.
    Fae are marvellous. They cause marvels.
    Fae are fantastic. They create fantasies.
    Fae are glamorous. They project glamour.
    Fae are enchanting. They weave enchantment.
    Fae are terrific. They beget terror.

    The thing about words is that meaning can twist just like a snake, and if you want to find snakes look for them behind words that have changed their meaning.
    No one said Fae are nice.
    Fae are bad.


    Fae are mischievous and manic, doing whatever amuses them, whether it be malevolent, benevolent, neither, or some completely different categorization incomprehensible to mortal minds. They can be helpful one moment, but completely obstinate the next. They can be your greatest enemy in one instance, only to be your closest ally in another. With Oberon, these traits are magnified hundredfold. While fae can typically understand the reasoning of their kin, even the fae cannot understand why their King does as he does. Yet, being as fickle as they are, they do not think much of it.

    Oberon himself is as much a mystery to the fae as he is to mortals. His origins and history are completely unknown, but his power and charisma are unquestionable. When he declared himself King of the Fae, there was no one who wished to dispute his claim, as they either feared his wrath, or welcomed his rule without further thought of the matter. Even then, with his kingship decided, not much changed. The fae continued to play their games with mortals, only now they also played at being subjects to a King, a game they found enjoyable most of the time.

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    Boye: A very good boye, pun intended. This is the first time I read about her, and you conveyed that simple tragedy in her story well. That NP is pretty creative (better than that Harambe sheet you based her off of, imo), and that bond CE just gives me the feels.

    Oberon: Not bad, I particularly like the NPs (though I feel it would suit a Caster better than a Saber, but I guess some depictions of hin do show him wielding a sword, so it's just a minor nitpick, if anything), and the Skills are well-thought of as well. I totally sense that chaotic energy emanating from this sheet.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BnEl15 View Post
    Oberon: Not bad, I particularly like the NPs (though I feel it would suit a Caster better than a Saber, but I guess some depictions of hin do show him wielding a sword, so it's just a minor nitpick, if anything). I totally sense that chaotic energy emanating from this sheet.
    I was thinking Caster, but the Saber bit is an example of how much he just doesn't care. He does as he wants, even if he really shouldn't.


    Also, I actually took some heavy inspiration for the Avalon NP and borrowed the "Fae Speak" from a certain thing. I do wonder if anyone can figure out what?

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    Boye: Great entry, cant say much else. Good girl with tragic story, conveyed really well.

    Oberon: Guess that is seven deadly sins or so, never watched it, so it is just the clue the faceclaim gives me. Anyways, the second NP gave me typical Foreigner vibes. His weirdness cme across and how dangerous he and his kind are. The Bio is done particularly well.
    I wonder, do Faes qualify to have Divinity?
    "Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."



    Behold my vault of Heroes.
    Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.


    The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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    Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
    Create-a-Servant 4 soon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Boye: Great entry, cant say much else. Good girl with tragic story, conveyed really well.

    Oberon: Guess that is seven deadly sins or so, never watched it, so it is just the clue the faceclaim gives me. Anyways, the second NP gave me typical Foreigner vibes. His weirdness cme across and how dangerous he and his kind are. The Bio is done particularly well.
    I wonder, do Faes qualify to have Divinity?
    The faceclaim is from 7DS, yes. And I thought about it, but decided they don't, since they're more like Spirits than Gods.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DelRey View Post
    Boye: Great entry, cant say much else. Good girl with tragic story, conveyed really well.

    Oberon: Guess that is seven deadly sins or so, never watched it, so it is just the clue the faceclaim gives me. Anyways, the second NP gave me typical Foreigner vibes. His weirdness cme across and how dangerous he and his kind are. The Bio is done particularly well.
    I wonder, do Faes qualify to have Divinity?
    Remember, eldritch, as a term, used to refer to the Fae. Anyways, great sheet Enigmatic! Really loved the chaotic energy he has.

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    Oberon: The moment I read King of the Fae, I was scared. My fears were realized when I saw Oberon.
    I love that he's a Saber just because he wants to be, and his personality and abilities are on point. I'd love to see Titania berating him in a Grail War. Oof. Don't get between those two.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Morg van Destro View Post
    Oberon: The moment I read King of the Fae, I was scared. My fears were realized when I saw Oberon.
    I love that he's a Saber just because he wants to be, and his personality and abilities are on point. I'd love to see Titania berating him in a Grail War. Oof. Don't get between those two.
    Titania is probably the only one who could do that and not be brutally deadified. Both because she'd be just as powerful, and because she's probably the only thing other than himself and his entertainment that he actually cares about.

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    Foreigner of Mount Hermon
    -- He Who Had Seen --

    "To be human is to embrace sin and imperfection. To drown in pleasure and decadence. That is the essence of free will. Yet humanity had never been truly free. A part of them craves order and submission... yet who decides what 'order' actually looks like? Fufu, be not afraid, for I shall guide you. Do not fear the unknown. Walk with me into the light. This... is your salvation."


    Source

    "How about you, Master? Aren't you tired? All the lives lost, the sacrifices you made, the guilt weighing down your heart... Don't you ever wish you could run away from it all? For all those burdens to simply disappear? Yes, yes, you don't have to suffer anymore. Everything will be okay. All you have to do is close your eyes, breathe... and go to sleep. Ufufu, good night, Master."

    Class: Foreigner
    Other Classes: Watcher,
    Beast(?)
    True Name: Samyaza
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Origin: Book of Enoch, Book of Giants, Apocryphal Abrahamic traditions


    Parameters:

    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: B
    MGI: A
    LCK: C
    NP: A

    Likes: Freedom, humans, granting salvation, sin and debauchery, beautiful women
    Dislikes: Boredom, order, "the greater good", those who fear the idea of freedom
    Talent: Persuasion, moral degradation, living in the moment
    Natural Enemy: Enoch/Metatron, Michael
    Armament: Magecraft
    Catalyst: A page from the ​Book of Enoch

    Class Skills
    Entity of the Outer Realm (-)

    A Skill of those under the Foreigner class, denoting an existence beyond human comprehension and asserting one's existence outside of time and reality. Rather than any Outer God, Foreigner is a fallen angel who once served under YHWH. This makes him inherently antithetical to the Human Order; one who lives outside the boundaries of humanity. While his mere existence would normally warrant an EX-rank in this Skill, its effects are overwritten by his personal Skill, Between Heaven and Earth.

    Divinity (D-)

    At high levels, one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit, and the level declines when the Heroic Spirit's own rank as a Monster or Demonic Beast raises. Before his fall, Foreigner occupied the rank of Seraphim within the heavenly hierarchy. His fall from grace greatly diminished his Divinity. At its current rank, his status is closer to that of a demonic entity rather than an angel.


    Personal Skills
    Between Heaven and Earth (EX)

    A Skill denoting the unique circumstances of Foreigner's fate. For his transgressions against both Heaven and humanity, it was said that he was rejected from both; he eternally hangs upside-down, suspended between the two realms. According to Foreigner himself, his "true body" is still facing that punishment, and his current body is nothing more than a conduit of sorts linking him to the world of man. Foreigner is highly resistant to most physical and mental damage, simply because his true self exists outside of the boundaries of Heaven and Earth. At its current rank, he is borderline immune to most divine concepts and Gaia's authority. In game terms, it's not that he possesses high defensive abilities against these concepts. Rather, since he was rejected by Heaven and Earth, the two concepts just refuse to acknowledge his existence, instead harmlessly phasing through him in most cases.

    Universal Bird's Eye (Fallen) (B-)

    Vestiges of Foreigner's time as leader of the Watchers, a group of high-ranking angels tasked with observing humanity. The ability to observe and understand any event in which the user is summoned. At this rank, the scope of observation is strictly limited to sight and sound. Due to him being stripped of his position, this Skill's range has been considerably reduced, and he can only use it in short bursts as opposed to the "true" Universal Bird's Eye Skill possessed by most Servants under the Watcher-Class.

    Bringer of Forbidden Knowledge (C-)

    The Watchers' greatest transgression was to teach and instruct humankind various forbidden arts, sciences, and celestial "secrets" or "mysteries" of the true heavenly
    knowledge
    gnosis
    , including the secrets of war (from magic, metallurgy, and weaponry to seductive ornamentation, jewelry, and cosmetics), all of which ultimately, though unsurprisingly, brings down the wrath of Heaven. Replicating this feat, Foreigner is able to bestow Skills such as Magecraft, Tactics, Knowledge of Melee Combat, Pheromones, and more to any human he desires. Its rank may vary, depending on individual talents and capabilities, in most cases ranging between E to C. In exchange for bestowing these Skills, however, Foreigner's luck parameter gradually drops with every gifted Skill, as if he once again earned the ire of Heaven. By reversing this process, Foreigner can restore his luck parameter, while completely erasing the targets' memories of learning and using said Skill.

    Human Observation (A)

    A technique to observe and understand people, as opposed to events. For the longest time, Foreigner observed humanity with fascination. He had always been curious on what it means to be human. And so he set out to live as one, even if it means defying his fundamental status as an impartial agent of God and earning His wrath. Despite all that, he never looked back and drowned himself in both the glories and vices of humanity. Contrary to his Class as "a being completely antithetical to humanity", Foreigner considers himself extremely human, knowing full well their beauty and depravity. He is especially talented in grasping the true desires of people, and using said desires to lead them to his "salvation".


    Noble Phantasm(s)

    Lost Father of the Nephilims
    Defterokanónio

    "Oh my, to think they would go so far as to erase my very existence... how sad. Yet I do not mind. After all, no matter how much the world tries to obscure my presence and erase traces of my actions... I alone know that I exist. Ufufu, as your savior, it is a sacrifice I would willingly take."

    Type: Anti-Populace
    Rank: C
    Range: 1-500
    Max Targets: -

    A Noble Phantasm denoting Foreigner's obscure origins. According to the Book of Enoch, Foreigner was leader of a group of fallen angels who impregnated human women and fathered the Nephilims, a race of hideous giants who dominated the Earth before they were driven to extinction by the great flood. By the fourth century, the Book of Enoch was mostly excluded from Christian biblical canons, omitting Foreigner's existence altogether. Instead, the origins of the Nephilims were officially left vague to this day, with no one being quite sure on where they came from.

    This constantly-active Noble Phantasm is more akin to a curse imposed by the world in an attempt to deny Foreigner's existence. It works in a manner similar to large-scale Information Erasure, where after a few hours, information regarding Foreigner are removed. It naturally obscures his True Name, abilities, and appearance, yet it goes one step further to obscure traces of his actions. Instead of simply "removing" information, it "rewrites" them instead to fit a narrative that he "does not exist". For example, let's say he dropped an item to the ground, and numerous eyewitnesses saw him dropping said item. After a few hours (as long as they do not enter any other engagement with Foreigner during this period), these eyewitnesses' memories would be rewritten to exclude Foreigner out of them. Perhaps they would believe that another individual had dropped the item, or that the item had been on the floor since the very beginning. Certain individuals possessing high-ranked mental fortification Skills may resist this effect. Furthermore, the more one falls victim to this Noble Phantasm, the more likely it is for them to notice inconsistencies with their memory and put two and two together, potentially revealing Foreigner's identity.

    Secondly, this Noble Phantasm also represents Foreigner's status as the father of Nephilims, allowing him to summon a small number of giants using a certain incantation. However, due to the canonical bible denying their connection, he cannot exert control over these summoned Nephilims, leaving them as mindless, rampaging phantasmal beasts.

    Deplorable Fallen Star, Bring Salvation Unto Us
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    "This is your salvation. The complete liberation you've sought for so long. Don't fight it anymore. Embrace your deepest desires and take the leap of faith. Drown in pleasure and decadence. Ufufu, Truly, this is the beauty of unrestrained free will! The true essence of being human!"

    Type: Anti-Populace
    Rank: A
    Range: 1-50 metres (per projectile)
    Max Targets: -

    "A star fell from heaven, and it arose and ate and pastured amongst those oxen. And after this I saw the large and the black oxen, and behold, all of them changed their pens and their pastures and their heifers, and began to moan, one after another. And again I saw in the vision and looked to heaven, and behold, I saw many stars, how they came down and were thrown down from heaven to that first star, and amongst those heifers and bulls; they were with them, pasturing amongst them. And I looked at them and saw, and behold, all of them let out their private parts like horses and began to mount the cows of the bulls, and they all became pregnant and bore elephants and camels and asses. And all the oxen feared them and were affrighted at them, and began to bite with their teeth and to devour, and to gore with their horns. And they began, moreover, to devour those oxen; and behold all the children of the earth began to tremble and quake before them and to flee from them..."

    (1 En 86:1-6)
    A disastrous vision of the end times brought about by Foreigner should he ever escape his punishment, witnessed by the prophet Enoch. Foreigner possesses the ability to create a reproduction of this vision because his manifestation as a Servant technically means that he had "escaped" (though his true body still being contained also means that its power is but a tiny fraction of the original, only usable on a much smaller scale). Rather than personally annihilating humanity, Foreigner bestows upon them the ultimate
    curse
    blessing
    ; absolute, unrestrained freedom accomplished by "liberating" them of every conceivable law, ethic, and moral value.

    Upon its activation, Foreigner releases condensed mana in the form of numerous projectile beams from the sky (up to 200 in number, representing the number of fellow Watchers who pledged themselves to Foreigner's cause), akin to a beautiful cluster of falling stars. Upon every impact with the ground, the point of impact is marked, and with each mark, a bounded field is established, each having a radius of roughly 50 metres. Afterwards, every human (and creatures possessing similar human sensibilities) within every bounded field would experience a rapidly growing compulsion to madly indulge in their desires, completely stripping them of any principles, ethics, and morals they may have had. In that sense, it is a completely horrendous Noble Phantasm that facilitates large-scale moral degradation, where even the most "civilized" beings would be reduced to raving lunatics drowning in their own self-serving desires. Foreigner's personal brand of salvation; one that completely liberates humanity from the burdens of their existences and brings them ultimate bliss.

    Yet such warped definition of salvation is fated to fall. As the world descends into sin and decadence, this Noble Phantasm seems to alert a certain higher being. Failing to erase the marks within roughly 24 hours using certain purification rituals will draw the ire of said higher being, activating the second stage. There, dark clouds would cover the sky, sounds of rumbling thunder would be heard from the distance, and finally, a single devastating thunderbolt would fall from the sky, decimating each remaining bounded field and everything in it. In essence, this "mark of decadence" designates established territories as a target of divine retribution, a replication of what happened in Sodom and Gomorrah. Perhaps ironically, Foreigner himself could emerge almost unscathed from this attack due to the effects of Between Heaven and Earth​.


    Description
    Foreigner's True Name is Samyaza, leader of a group of fallen angels known as the Watchers. At first glance, Foreigner appears to be a perfect messianic figure; his gaze is benevolent, his words kind, his touch gentle, and his judgment merciful. He preaches the wonderful idea of free will, empathetically tailoring his teachings to suit his followers' needs. To some, he appears as a wise mentor, while others see him simply as "their best friend Shem". All in all, for a supposedly blasphemous fallen angel who had defied the will of God, Foreigner is surprisingly human, as he would gladly experience every joy and sorrow of being human, inflicted by their free will. Foreigner is human. There's no doubt about it...

    Too human, perhaps, to the point of there being something inherently inhuman about him.

    Foreigner possesses a warped vision of complete, unrestrained free will. Humanity should be free to build or destroy themselves without a second thought, unrestrained by the chains of obligation and morality. "Do something because you feel like it, with no other consideration in mind". That is how humanity may attain the ultimate bliss, however fleeting it may be; a state of absolute, all-encompassing freedom to the point where there is no need to think about anything else. To this end, he believes that the true "villains" are not the devils who tempt humanity into sin and chaos. Rather, it's those who establish "order", forcing humanity to conform, abandoning their base impulses and sacrificing their happiness for a vaguely-defined "greater good". Yet even then, he does not truly resent those "villains". Even when faced with those who harshly oppose his values, his composure remains intact, and he regards them not with animosity, but with a patronizing sense of pity, simply believing them to be "misguided". That is the extent of his messianic
    inhumanity
    compassion
    .

    As a Servant, underneath his charming exterior, Foreigner is a complete hedonist through and through. He does not believe his actions to be wrong. Instead, he believes them to be necessary in order to get "the fullest experience of being human". He is extremely unpredictable, not because of his genius and tactical planning skills, but due to his complete lack thereof. In his mind, there is no plan, no "greater good" to strive for. He lives solely in the absolute anarchy of the moment, doing things simply because he "felt like it", becoming a wise messiah in one second and a complete party animal in the next. That is how he makes full use of his free will.

    Foreigner does not have any desire for the Grail. To him, conforming to its rules would mean surrendering his freedom. So instead, he believes that he should be the one taking an active role in realizing his own wish; the complete "salvation" of humanity, achieved by liberating them of every physical and metaphorical chain there is. Instead of a messiah that aims to "bring humanity into paradise", he instead aims to "bring paradise into humanity". That is the salvation he desires; not for himself, but for humanity.


    Lore
    Once upon a time, there lived a certain angel. He and his brethren, known as the Watchers, were tasked with observing humanity in all its glories and failures, and reporting them straight to the Father. Bearing the rank of Seraphim, this angel served dutifully... at least he did, at first. Seeing the beautiful wonders of humanity, something began to gnaw at the back of his mind, sowing the seeds of doubt and envy in his heart...

    He was bored. That's it. He never resented the Father, his duty never felt unsatisfying, nor did he have any deeper philosophical reason for the things he did. If anything, he loved them all. He loved humanity for all its wonders, and he loved the Father for granting them the gift of free will. Therefore, what better way is there to express this love than to live amongst the humans he loved so much? And so the angel Samyaza made a pact with his brethren, and together they descended upon the world. Technically speaking at that point, he did not exactly qualify as a "fallen angel", as he left Heaven out of his own free will.

    Upon their descent, Samyaza and his brethren granted various forbidden knowledge to humans. Magecraft, weaponry, warfare... all of them introduced untold bloodshed to humanity. The Watchers also mated with human women, giving birth to a race of hideous giants known as the Nephilims. Within a few years since their descent, the Human Order is at the brink of destruction. The Watchers led humans to abandon every semblance of morality, drowning them in sin and debauchery, all while Nephilims roamed the land, destroying all who opposed them.

    During his time on Earth, Samyaza came across a man named Enoch. Enoch was a virtuous man, perhaps the last of his kind. He followed the word of God, and no matter how many times Samyaza tried to tempt him, he stayed true to his devotion to the Lord. Intrigued by his piety, Samyaza spent more time around him, and eventually the two became fast friends and begrudging rivals. Enoch would try to reform Samyaza, Samyaza would continue to tempt Enoch, and the two would always fail at their endeavors. For the longest time, their friendship was based upon this stalemate.

    One day, God finally decided that enough was enough. As long as the Watchers remained in the picture, the Earth was beyond saving. Therefore, the only way to reestablish the Human Order would be to wipe the slate clean and start anew. He aimed to do this by calling down a great flood, sparing only the most virtuous of men. Enoch's grandson Noah was informed of this plan, while God sent the Archangel Michael to execute punishment upon the Watchers and the Nephilims. A great battle soon ensued, and by the end, most Nephilim forces were eradicated, and the leaders of the Watchers were captured. During their trial, God appointed Enoch as an intermediary between Him and the Watchers. The Watchers begged for mercy, and for a second, Enoch did take pity on them, if only out of his friendship with Samyaza. However, God presented him with a disastrous vision of the end times should the Watchers be released, making it clear that mercy was not an option. Finally, for his transgressions, Samyaza was banished from both Heaven and Earth, eternally suspended between the two realms. It is said that he is constantly falling with one eye shut and the other open, forced to see the chaos he brought upon humanity. After the conclusion of his trial, God appointed Enoch as an Archangel, granting him the name Metatron. Samyaza objected to this, unwilling to see his only friend transformed into another mindless agent of God.

    After the Watchers were dealt with, the remaining Nephilims were left weak and uncoordinated. Finally, they were wiped out by the great flood, allowing humanity to start anew through Noah and his descendants.

    All the while, Samyaza continued to fall, eternally doomed to face his punishment...
    Yet he never considered it a punishment. Surely this is nothing more than a test! One devised by the Father to see just how devoted he is to the concept of free will. After all, if free will truly is a gift, what point is there in punishing someone for exercising it to its absolute fullest? Even as he fell, Samyaza continued to smile. One day, he will prove to the Heavens above that his love is genuine. Once that happens, once he is free... He will bring salvation to them all.


    Relationships
    Metatron:
    "Ah, Enoch, old friend! How delightful it is to see you again! I hope Father treated you well this whole time. Me? Ufufu, now, now, there is no need for you to regret anything. You did not condemn me to some gruesome fate. In fact, after a while, I find it quite comfortable here! Sure, it is a pity that I could not take a more... proactive role in all this, but you granted me a front-row seat to observe the humans I loved so much! So please do not blame yourself for anything you did. You have my utmost gratitude."

    Lucifer:
    "You are absolutely right, Lucy! Free will tastes amazing! It leaves you wondering why more people don't crave this absolute state of freedom... Content with such narrow-minded definitions of good and evil, seeking Father's approval in the name of 'faith' and 'the greater good'... It would be much better for all those complexities to disappear, don't you think? Humanity should always be free to build and burn as they see fit! That is the only way they can attain ultimate bliss!"

    Michael:
    "How sad, even after all this time, you chose to turn your eyes away from the truth. You continued to regard me as some diabolical evil with some overarching conspiracy to overthrow Father and everything He stood for. With such thinking, you miss the entire point! Or on the contrary, you are trying too hard to find a point that was never there to begin with. Perhaps you would finally open your eyes someday, but for now let me answer this: the reason why I did the things I did... it's no different from back then. An answer so simple that I cannot fathom how someone of your caliber could fail to comprehend it... why not?"

    Laplace's Demon:
    "Aren't you ever tired of simply watching over them? Waving through some invisible window that forever separates you from the rest of humanity? Don't you think it's about time that you shatter that window and truly live amongst the humans you love so much? Experiencing their virtues and vices firsthand... I suppose that might just serve as the ultimate cure for your boredom."

    Kiara Sessyoin:
    "A self-proclaimed messiah... yet who am I to doubt you? Ufufu, you seem well-acquainted with the carnal desires of humanity. Why don't we try to simultaneously 'save' each other, right here and now?"

    Queen Medb, Gilgamesh (Archer), Ashiya Douman, Cambyses II, Liu Pengli, Oberon:
    "Someone with the courage to take what they want, when they want it. Ufufu, impressive. It seems you have seen glimpses of the light that lies beyond your preconceived notions of order. I await your next exploits with bated breath."

    Noah (Lostbelt):
    "Ah, you must be Enoch's grandson, yes? He told me stories about you back then. He said- hm? Oh dear, that is quite the scornful look you have there. Just what happened to you in that other world to warrant such hatred? Is it perhaps... the work of another 'me'?"

    Jim Jones, Joseph Smith:
    "Oh my, to think that is how you make use of your freedom... decadently indulging in your desires under the guise of 'order' and 'faith'... How abhorrent! How dreadful! How wonderfully human! Alas, it must be exhausting. Walk with me. In a world that is to come, there will be no more need for you to maintain your facade. To deceive yourselves and your people. To shamefully restrain your desires and hide who you truly are from the world. There is only... bliss."

    Johann Adam Weishaupt, Jeremy Bentham, Sir Thomas Malory:
    "Your misguided delusions on the 'greater good', your plan to grant salvation to the masses... It saddens me to see how blind you all are. You concern yourselves so much with visions of a glorious, distant future that you forget to simply exist in the moment. Alas, no one is ever truly beyond redemption. Walk with me, and one day, you too shall see the light."


    Creator's Notes/Fun Facts
    Mom said it's my turn to write angels. Anyway, here it is, the unexpected second entry I wrote up in 12 hours, and the realization of my idea back then on how angels could qualify as Foreigners as well due to being 'out of this world'.

    - As someone who made so many villains who work for 'the greater good', going the complete opposite direction and writing a completely chaotic villain is a pretty fun experience for a change.

    - He was initially teased more than a year ago on my Lostbelt Noah sheet (my first contest entry). Then I was originally planning to write a Canaan Lostbelt with Lambda featuring Shem and Cain (Avenger) as the joint LB-Kings. Looks like Lambda is preoccupied with other projects at the moment though, and I'm getting increasingly tempted to write my own take on Shem, so here he is. At least this Shem here is his Pan-Human history version. If you're reading this, Lambda, the LB version is still up for grabs if you're interested.

    - Technically by using a very limited release of his second NP, Shem could use those 'stars' as simple projectiles without inflicting the mark of decadence. It gives him an extra bit of versatility, though they're not that much stronger than your average magic bullets.

    - If you don't know, the motif song for the sheet 'Tsubasa Wo Kudasai' is played in a number of anime amidst some... really messed up scenes such as Evangelion's Third Impact and Danganronpa 3's Student Council Killing Game. Hopefully I can convey the same level of musical dissonance here, especially while you picture the effects of his second NP.

    - Finally, as usual, if you like both of my entries, don't forget to vote for whichever has the most votes at the moment.
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    Oh damn, that is a nice fallen angel. I really like how creepily serene you made him and honestly, your description of his relationship with Enoch kinda makes me curious to see what you take on the latter would be.

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    Quote Originally Posted by realcasually View Post
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    After watching Jujutsu Kaisen I can't help but hearing that in Todo's voice now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by realcasually View Post
    B R O T H E R


    Samyaza: We're just really in love with crazy angels this prompt, huh?
    Defterokanónio reminds me of the effects of Hali's illusions. The concept of not being able to trust your own memories even when about something so important is a pretty scary one, especially when said important thing is crazy freedom obsessed angel.
    I was a bit surprised when you put Jones and Smith in a speech about the 'greater good' when, unlike the others, Samyaza of all people should know that's not what they're about. For them, all their posturing is a front for their own self-indulgence. Honestly, they kind of exemplify the freedom Samyaza is about. Doing whatever they want when they want it, even at the expense of others. They just go about it in a way of manipulating others and raising themselves up.
    Well, actually, if I can give Jim anything, it's that he actually was a true advocate of racial equality for all it can be worth from such a horrible man.

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    Huh, good point on Jim and Smith. I guess you can make the argument that his initial impressions of the two are doomsday-cult leaders similar to Weishaupt, but once he sees their true colors, he'd applaud their actions, though he's not one for long-winded, complex manipulation tactics... or so he says, which is kind of hypocritical on his part considering he occasionally resorts to psychological manipulation as well with his "gentle messiah" persona. Then again, having a coherent moral code would mean "conforming", and he hates that, so he just doesn't care. Anyway yeah, might as well remove the two in an edit, or maybe give them a separate line entirely.

    Edit: Added line to Jim and Smith, which I feel works well with Shem's own character and arguably makes him even more terrifying somewhat. Thanks for the heads-up, Morg.
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    Servant: Caster
    True Name: Mammon
    Alignment: Neutral Evil

    Strength: D
    Endurance: D
    Agility: B
    Mana: EX
    Luck: A+
    NP: A+
    Lore

    Mammon is commonly considered one of the seven princes of hell and presides over one of the Seven Deadly Sins. Generally it's believed that Mammon presides over the sin of greed.
    Albert Barnes in his Notes on the New Testament states that Mammon was a Syriac word for an idol worshipped as the god of riches, similar to Plutus among the Greeks, but he cited no authority for the statement.
    No trace, however, of any Syriac god of such a name exists, and the common literary identification of the name with a god of covetousness or avarice likely stems from Spenser's The Faerie Queene, where Mammon oversees a cave of worldly wealth. Milton's Paradise Lost describes a fallen angel who values earthly treasure over all other things. Later occultist writings such as Jacques Collin de Plancy's Dictionnaire Infernal describe Mammon as Hell's ambassador to England. For Thomas Carlyle in Past and Present, the "Gospel of Mammonism" became simply a metaphoric personification for the materialist spirit of the 19th century.
    Mammon is somewhat similar to the Greek god Plutus, and the Roman Dis Pater, in his description, and it is likely that he was at some point based on them; especially since Plutus appears in The Divine Comedy as a wolf-like demon of wealth, wolves having been associated with greed in the Middle Ages. Thomas Aquinas metaphorically described the sin of Avarice as "Mammon being carried up from Hell by a wolf, coming to inflame the human heart with Greed".
    Under the influence of the Social Gospel movement American populists, progressives and "muck-rakers" during the generation of 1880-1925 used "Mammon" with specific reference to the consolidated wealth and power of the banking and corporate institutions headquartered on Wall Street and their predatory activities nationwide.


    Personality
    While possessing an intelligence Mammon should be considered less a person and more the output of the thoughts from hundreds of people condensed into the form of one. While working with a cruel mentality that couldn’t be considered within the common sense of man, Mammon is in a way, undeniably human. An abstract existence born of thoughts and emotions, they are entirely human but distinctly not, like a patchwork creation born of human parts held together by the notable demonic influence which makes Mammon a demon proper.


    What this means is the entity which is Mammon is variable in personality based on who summons them and who they meet. When they first manifest they usually produce a minor and simplistic identity based on their summoner,channeling their greed. Then as it spreads their influence to everyone it comes into contact with, its personhood exponentially increases as a more solid personality and ego develop. Within the span of normal grail war they can probably produce something considered human passing, but they do not stop growing there. With enough time their personality will grow into something beyond human in mentality, viewing reality in a way closer to that of divine spirits than mortal men. Regardless of how many humans they are able to incorporate the greed of into themselves, the true Mammon is an entity which can never fully materialize for they live as embodiment of all human greed, and would thus require contact with every human to ever live.


    Regardless of form they come to take, the character of Mammon tends to have a few common traits. The most obvious of which is an insatiable greed for anything and everything depending on that which their hosts desire. The second commonality is an emotionless efficiency towards satisfying their goal. They will do and say whatever without consistency or concern for ethics or the moral weight of their actions.

    Likes: Wealth
    Dislikes: Poverty
    Talent: Generating Wealth
    Natural Enemy: Karna, Saints


    Class Skills
    Territory Creation (A++)
    A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. With the use of this skill Mammon is capable of constructing his Noble Phantasm.

    Item Construction (A)
    A Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. By possessing numerous riches Mammon is capable of crafting numerous cursed treasures, many of which can possess magical abilities. All that he creates is cursed by nature, possessing those who covet it with insatiable lust for his wealth.





    Personal Skills
    Golden Rule (A)
    A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. A demon of greed it is in Mammon’s nature to pursue and build up wealth. When he was a demon god it could have been considered his authority.
    As a demon, his existence is a vortex in which infinite wealth resides. All things that exist, all things which are coveted by the hearts of man exist within their domain. Once greed possesses you, that which is yours is also his.


    Master Mammon (A)
    The embodiment of Mammon as the personification of greed, a twisted force which enslaves the minds of men. So long as someone is range, so long as they desire something of the material world above a certain threshold their heart becomes fertile soil for mammon to grow. Literally inside their being an extension of mammon will be born, a black muck like tumor deep within, slowly compelling its host to pursue wealth without concern for morals or standards or anything else. The more they indulge the more they are slowly consumed until a terrible monster is all the remains.
    With enough monsters these beings can begin to merge together forming an even more terrible existence which grows like fungus and destroys all in its path.


    Profit Calculation (EX)
    The embodiment of a mind built to maximize cost benefit analysis to a truly inhuman degree. Functioning on a mix of gathered knowledge and instinct, in any situation Mammon is capable of calculating the most efficient method to generate a profit in a given situation. At this rank the calculations can be extensively planned and constructed to all small fine details in a matter of seconds. These plans do not take into account things like morals or ethics or any emotional reasoning, rather it simply turns Mammon into a supercomputer programmed with the simple task of generating wealth without concern for any other factors. When using this skill even if they had to skin half the planet alive for a mere penny of profit they would follow that decided path without fail.



    Noble Phantasm
    Pandemonium
    High Capital of Hell

    Type: Fortress
    Rank: E~A+

    After the fall of Lucifer and those who served him a capital was constructed in hell to operate as a base of operations. The one tasked with the construction of such a base was none other than Mammon who used his treasures to construct it. Serving as the embodiment of his treasury and the extent of wealth in his dominion, Pandemonium is a twisted, internally nigh infinite realm of treasure and cursed materials. Ostentatious in form and filled to the brim with valuable and sometimes powerful artifacts, all of which are used to construct the very building itself.


    The capital itself is not something which exists in the world proper but instead manifests at Mammon’s will, crawling out of the depths of hell. At his command selective sections of the capital can be summoned to obey his will. It’s function can vary wildly, as a demonic building possesses more than just walls and rooms but all sorts of unnatural features like metal tendrils or maws. Despite its numerous capabilities its most dangerous attack is simply having someone walk inside it. Due to not existing in the mortal world, if someone is inside as the fortress is recalled they are trapped inside until the building manifests again. Even then the building is large and complex so it’s easy to get lost inside the extensive structure, filled to the brim with numerous unnatural existences befitting the home of the devil.




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    Mammon: So many inhumans with personalities reaching into humanity, many of which relate to Abrahamic religion. Weird trend.
    I'm definitely a fan of the trap room NP. It's not what I was expecting, but it's something unique and interesting, which is something always fun to see A moldable personality also seems to be a minor theme with some, as it was with my Penn, but I feel those are always served best when there's something for them to build around like with yours. I like it.

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    With all these Abrahamic figures being submitted, makes me glad I decided to go with a toy submarine with a clay dinosaur attached to it. lol

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    I said I wouldn't to preserve the state of my entry as I wrote it to be fair, but the SECOND the deadline's up I'm going to go back and edit quotes into Lucifer for all the other entries. I am. I swear. I can't NOT with these last two amazing entries and how perfectly they fit.

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    I just compiled the entries of the month, 20 so far! And we still have a bit of time for some surprise attacks.
    Last one were 25, which was incredible in of itself.
    I am happy that this weird prompt birthed so many unique and cool sheets! I will post the compilation tomorrow, again with little descriptions to help your memory or to draw your attention if you did not read them yet.
    Good job everyone
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