LunarFate: The World's Wrath / LunarFate Zero

[Nuclear]

What have I done...
And Kireifag?

Screwing with people emotionally out of curiosity? Providing false reassurances? Sounds pretty in character for Kirei, imo.

[francobull3]

He means your statement reminded him of Kirei, because you deliberately encouraged someone to do something that would be bad for them.

Haha, i see.
Well, I guess he is not wrong.

[Nuclear]

Don't side with me!
What I posted was never meant to be taken seriously in the first place!
It was another bad joke, hopefully the last, they are in the right.
I encouraged you, not out of goodwill, but simply out of curiosity to see what would you end up doing.
But do not think your idea is good enough to be... good.

Seriously, I am the last person you should listen to in this regard, especially when my argument had a bad meme in it.

...to follow his ideals? I don't think so, franco.

[francobull3]

Ummm, i don't see your point.

[Nuclear]

Ah, I thought I was about to catch you meme-spamming again, so I reminded you, just in case.

[Frostyvale]

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

[Nuclear]

Since everyone here's so hypocritical of my ways of writing stories, I'm going to have to repost this again and disable all your blind, negative comments.

Oh dear.

[Siriel]

Enough is enough!!! I'm not a guy who quits easily; so just leave Franco alone and let me make the most of this. UNDERSTAND?!!!!!!!!! Since everyone here's so hypocritical of my ways of writing stories, I'm going to have to repost this again and disable all your blind, negative comments.

This is a good trolling imitation of Lantz but I have to point out that you misused hypocritical.

[Ayr]

I'm a F/SN newb as well, but you clearly have an even lesser understanding of the setting than I do, somehow. I would suggest reading the source material and/or lurking a bit more, or ask questions on the questions thread in GD (which has an incredibly useful document in the OP that I suggest you peruse) until you have a decent grasp of how things work. It does wonders if, when writing a fanfic, you have even a semi-accurate understanding of what you are basing it on.

I would suggest scrapping this idea.

I hope I don't seem too mean (never weighed in on this sort of thing before, trying to be polite but honest), since writing is hard, but this idea is simply not good enough right now.

Then again, you have blatantly ignored the advice of the many more experienced members of this forum, and sided with the one guy who encouraged you when it was obvious he didn't mean it, so I would be a fool to expect you to listen to me.

[francobull3]

How can someone be hypocritical in your ways of writing stories?
English is not my mother tongue, but I do think that made no sense.

[You]

hypercritical?

[Nuclear]

I know, right? And he just makes it so he "knows" how "terrible" we are at writing fanfiction, so he can call us hypocrites.

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I'm a F/SN newb as well, but you clearly have an even lesser understanding of the setting than I do, somehow. I would suggest reading the source material and/or lurking a bit more, or ask questions on the questions thread in GD (which has an incredibly useful document in the OP that I suggest you peruse) until you have a decent grasp of how things work. It does wonders if, when writing a fanfic, you have even a semi-accurate understanding of what you are basing it on.

I would suggest scrapping this idea.

I hope I don't seem too mean (never weighed in on this sort of thing before, trying to be polite but honest), since writing is hard, but this idea is simply not good enough right now.

Then again, you have blatantly ignored the advice of the many more experienced members of this forum, and sided with the one guy who encouraged you when it was obvious he didn't mean it, so I would be a fool to expect you to listen to me.

And that's the gospel truth.

[francobull3]

This Type Moon noob speaks more truth than all of us could!
Listen to him author, this time I mean it.

[Siriel]

I'm a F/SN newb as well, but you clearly have an even lesser understanding of the setting than I do, somehow. I would suggest reading the source material and/or lurking a bit more, or ask questions on the questions thread in GD (which has an incredibly useful document in the OP that I suggest you peruse) until you have a decent grasp of how things work. It does wonders if, when writing a fanfic, you have even a semi-accurate understanding of what you are basing it on.

I would suggest scrapping this idea.

I hope I don't seem too mean (never weighed in on this sort of thing before, trying to be polite but honest), since writing is hard, but this idea is simply not good enough right now.

Then again, you have blatantly ignored the advice of the many more experienced members of this forum, and sided with the one guy who encouraged you when it was obvious he didn't mean it, so I would be a fool to expect you to listen to me.

This is good advise but it's rendered void by the fact that he's just trolling.

[francobull3]

He's trolling?
How can you tell?

[Christopher H2]

Whatever. Anyway is there anyway I can delete this thread? It seems like the Type-Moon fanboys and fangirls is a tough crowd to attract. Here I am - TRYING to make an original story Mr. Nasu could like but instead I'm surrounded by a bunch of assholes who despise people who do unconventional ways of doing stuff. I barely even wrote the damned episodes for LFZero and I am already sushi. So, continue; this isn't going to stop me.

[Techlet]

hypercritical?

Hypocritical. I think he means we're not harsh enough.

[Siriel]

He's trolling?
How can you tell?

I'm magic.

Also he's a blatant parody of Lantz.

[francobull3]

Whatever. Anyway is there anyway I can delete this thread? It seems like the Type-Moon fanboys and fangirls is a tough crowd to attract. Here I am - TRYING to make an original story Mr. Nasu could like but instead I'm surrounded by a bunch of assholes who despise people who do unconventional ways of doing stuff. I barely even wrote the damned episodes for LFZero and I am already sushi. So, continue; this isn't going to stop me.

But dude, they told you how to improve, and you refused to listen.
Don't do that.
A true writer always listens and takes note on feedback.

[Christemo]

I'm magic.

Also he's a blatant parody of Lantz.

If he's serious I feel genuinely bad for him.