Nyarly is an actual character tho,
And others have their own human avatars and worshippers. Or their corresponding MC that they love to tease at for some reasons.
My biggest gripe for Hokusai is, unlike Abby, she can pretty much work as a Servant without involving Cthulhu. Take out Cthulhu and nothing really change except her class and her fluff.
Yeah and I don't like it, it's the reason I stopped trying to approach all the dream world stuff, they make these incomprehensible eldritch entities way too human and totally comprehensible.
I guess we're just total opposites on this matter then, I like that they took very minor thing to make a connection that shouldn't exist, it allows for cool powers and more importantly, an interesting dynamic with her father. I like Lovecraft stuff as justification for them to write the servants they want and as tools for the villains, but I definitely don't want to have servants fight one of them or see cute anime girl Nyarl/Cthulhu/whoever be summoned as a servant.
Tbh I don't really like Nyarly either. But he is your 'go to' for a Lovecraftian character.
I'm not really dislike they have powers drawn from them. Would change my mind if in an actual story chapter, Cthulhu start inducing madness or something, then, I'm on. But as right now, he is just an accessory.
OOkay i will Keep yself from foreigners because i know nothing about Outer Gods or Lovecraft.There i will rather make a Profile of Seth and Horus and finnaly Saladin .
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what are Nyarlas Motives actually ?
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Hm to bad ,please look one more time there and tell me your oppinion?
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Name; Fenrir, Great God Devouring Beast
Class; Beast
Armament: None
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Source: Norse mythology
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Divine, Beast, Male, Large
Stats:
Strength: B (A+)
Agility: B (A++)
Endurance: A
Mana: A
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: A
Likes: Divine blood, chaos
Dislikes: Cloth
Talents: Devouring gods
Natural Enemy: Odin, Tyr
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Personality<I>Wasn't really feeling like putting anything in this month's contest, but I've been dead for a bit so I figured I'd make this.
Fenrir: I remember writing up a moe girl version of Fenris back on the old thread, so it's fun seeing a more "traditional" take on his legend. Don't understand why you didn't post this in the contest thread though. It wasn't because you were feeling inferior after You's Harambe sheet, was it? If so, you shouldn't let that kind of thing get to you. Just make the best entry you can and don't worry about what others do.
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For a lore-related critique, I'm a little surprised by Fenrir's lack of Monstrous Strength, Natural Monster or any similar Skill. Seems like an obvious omission for a "giant monster" Servant...
Nah it's nothing like that, I'm just not really in a contest-y mood.
I debated it, but I wasn't sure if I could squeeze in another skill on top of his three others, as Monstrous Strength, and it feels like too much for another skill anyway when his teeth can literally delete your body parts from existence.
...So is Fenrir a Beast against the Gods?
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Hm, I don't like it, to be honest.
First of all it feels like you chose the Beast class just because of the class' name. His authority is against the divine instead of humans, he doesn't have the principle of a human evil, he doesn't have a Nega skill, and he doesn't even have any hatred born out of love towards humanity; seems more like a Berserker with the wrong class skills.
I do like his first skill though, it's a creative way to integrate his most famous legend into his abilities.
The reason for his designation as Beast is that it's the only class that really fits him, as even though hates the divine, he's still a signal of the Apocalypse which would bring about Humanity's end as well as the Gods. I tried incorporating the hate/love dynamic in with his love of his family turning to hatred and resentment towards them for fearing him.
That actually gives me an idea for an alternate version of Fenrir...give me time.
That was my intention, a Beast who kills Gods, but destroys Humanity indirectly. For example, if Odin's dead, who's keeping the absolute crapton of other monsters at bay and leading the other gods? Killing Odin is a necessary part for Ragnarök to come to fruition, almost destroying humanity save Líf and Lífþrasir.
As it is he doesn't fit the class though, for the reasons I listed. You should have put more work into adapting his character into the concept of the Beasts if you think his apocalyptic nature fits the class so much.
Also the hate/love thing is not for individuals, it's for humanity as a whole, and his family isn't even human. I get what you tried to do here but a Beast that isn't focused on humanity isn't a Beast at all.
For a case like this you might be better off making an original "Monster" Class, like I did for my Fenrir sheet.
I had been thinking about trying to make a Beast Fenrir, but I couldn't think of a human evil for him to represent. It could be 'an evil that humans themselves made' like that one Amaterasu sheet a while back, but it was the Aesir that made Fenrir into an enemy not humanity, so it didn't quite seem to fit. I thought that maybe Fenrir could be a 'natural evil' in that he's just doing whats in his nature but that doesn't really fit the 'human evil' thing the Beast Class has going. I ultimately couldn't think of a good evil for him to represent so I scrapped the concept.
Originally Posted by FSF 5, Chapter 14: Gold and Lions IThough abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
Consumption or Pride works, literally devouring the gods to bring about your age.
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Something related to distrust could be a fitting sin as well
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