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Well when i think on the modern humen from Brazil i think of passionate people like also the Carnival in Rio as when you see Folk vestivals one can sense the spirit of the people .
other Question did you or others now loooked at the contest as voting wise are not much participation aswell as some servant feedback in general few there ?
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the quality this contest was again very high. The exceptionally long ones gained the most votes so far. Perhaps you could not sell the Class itself well enough, because the others dont know the concepts behind it like I do. But dw, it is a good sheet. I still believe in this class
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Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
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Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
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Without being too attention seeking now , but i wonder as my Contest servants have until now get just few if any points if in contrast to the from the others how the Quality of my Contest servants are in relation to the others ? Is it the layout that in the last time had get attention bringing like a blinking Atvertisement sign ?
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How come there is no reviews for this new sheet?
Top Creator Notes:
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“Music is enough for a whole lifetime, but a lifetime is not enough for music.
But is your life worthy for music?
Is your music worthy to live for?
Can you live for it?
Would you die for it?
Could you kill for it?
Or...”
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"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
I can't say it was any one thing that did him in. It was a pretty high quality servant sheet and I liked it. However the same can be said of every entry. He was in fact in my top considerations. It's just that those three and one other eeked out ahead, for me personally. I can't speak for anyone else of course.
Rookie Lorekeeper, Amateur Extraordinaire, and all around nasunoob.
Now I can take a quick look over the newest servants:
Santa Muerte: There she is, was it actually planned to release her during halloween season? I really like the Presence of Life skill, it is weird, but makes sense at the same time. I quit like it.
The theoretical concept of Soul Decay is really good and explains all the spooky stuff around the world. I personally dislike that you made Santa Muerte an embodiment of all kinds of mythological death. Namedropping valhalla, weighing of the heart, etc. I do not think this is actually needed and mostly boils down to the "meta" of mythologies everybody knows, disregarding others on one side and on the other when you want to do another death related entity from another region, you wrote yourself into a corner, because well, their aspect is taken up completely. but that is just my opinion to reach too strongly into a big concept across the world.
Else her third NP is damn OP, but fitting of a grand. Explains your recent comments on "oh shit a Grand, Im gonna die."
the typical in-depth Fortuna experience that teaches you something new and concepts that could very well be canon. Nice stuff.
"Let's see the color of your coin, my friend."
Behold my vault of Heroes.
Where the Heavens and the Abyss breath the Music of Humanity.
The King's duty is to provide. And provide, I shall.
University of Formatting | Gallery of Potential | Memorandum of the Extra Class Kings
Our Kingdom will grow. And we shall know each citizen.
Create-a-Servant 4 soon.
Rachmaninov: holy shit that CE is edgy! I still don’t quite get it. I guess Rachmaninov was cursed by veles to have his creativity taken away.
Rachmaninov : Well that was somewhat scary and creepy the music and i don't know if you noticed it self Delrey you made basically a Forreigner servant outside the Particular class in build up and that you used the connection to the Slavic mythology were unexpected ,especially as i atleast from one side have Slavic ancestors must i admit well done as i had really a uneasiness.
As you are quite adept in musician servants have you tipps and hints for a Richard Wagner servant ?
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"You have questions, yes? A burning curiosity you'd give anything to know the answer to... well, worry not wanderer for I shall grant what you seek. The only price I ask...
...Is your peaceful dreams."
Watcher of the Dark Oracle:
Appearance:
True Name: Trophonius
Alternate Classes: Berserker, Caster, Assassin
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Strength- E-
Agility- B
Endurance- EX (D within his Noble Phantasm)
Mana- A
Luck- D
NP- EX
Personality
Class Skills:
Territory Infringement- B-
Denotes the ability to slip into an occupied territory without being noticed, bypassing any manner of barriers that'd bar entry. It's the hallmark of the Watcher Class who are defined by being able to observe anywhere undetected. Watcher's version is strengthened by the anecdote where he and his brother schemed to infiltrate the king's treasury using the weak-points they'd constructed to pilfer his riches there.
However as Watcher was ultimately caught in the ruse thanks to the king's diligent inspection and only escaped by sacrificing his brother, this Skill receives a - modifier. While he can enter most any territory unnoticed, even disabling security systems and Bounded Fields meant to keep out intruders, there's a high chance his presence will be detected when attempting to take action. A kind of curse.
Magic Resistance- C+
Confers protection against magical effects. At this rank spells with a chant below two verses are cancelled. Cannot cope against the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals. Having no anecdotes of encountering or combating magic in life Watcher's resistance is nothing special amongst Servants. However a son of Apollo who became venerated as an oracle after death, Watcher obtains greater defense against light and fate-manipulating spells.
Personal Skills:
Familiars (Bees)- A
Watcher can summon endless amounts of familiars in the form of ghostly dark bees, his patron animal at the Oracle of Trophonius. These bees comprise his usual "body" as Watcher is unable to manifest in the physical world with his real body. Watcher can freely glean anything his bees see as well as directing them to attack his foes, in which case their sheer numbers are capable of harassing even a Servant while a normal human will be easily swarmed to death.
Daemonic Existence- EX
Having ascended to the level of Daemon after death, Watcher is a spirit that personifies an abstract concept. In this case he passively agglomerates the "questions" and "wishes" of those around him and grants them, even at the cost of driving the requesting to madness. Closer to a phenomenon than a physical being, akin to a certain Night of Wallachia.
This Skill serves as a curse that keeps Watcher from acting directly in the World, while also protecting him from most harm due to his ambiguous body. Humans looking at Watcher will see a vaguely humanoid swirl of darkness showing shards of their memories floating within. His only distinguishing features are a tuft of blonde hair and pair of piercing green eyes to testify that he was once a man at all. Conversely mindless observers like security cameras will be unable to perceive Watcher's presence altogether. Offensively physical blows simply pass through Watcher, merely disrupting his body that easily reforms while magical attacks have more of an effect but only temporarily incapacitate. Only Conceptual Weapons specifically designed to counter the concepts Watcher embodies are capable of permanently destroying him.
However this Skill doesn't apply to Watcher's "true" body within his Noble Phantasm, in which case he only possesses Endurance at rank D.
Madness Swallows Madness- EX
A Skill Watcher possesses as patron of the Oracle of Trophonius, which was said to grant the burning questions of those who came to it in return for madness. Watcher is untouchable to even the highest level of mental interference attacks, as they're merely swallowed up and overwhelmed by the greater "madness" he embodies and nurtures within him. Conversely Watcher's very presence is a mental interference of the highest order, assaulting those who glimpse him with feelings of fear, confusion and unease.
Noble Phantasm
Day two of the edgy Light FCs commence. I was mainly inspired to write this guy up by his portrayal in Riordan's The Dark Prophecy which was how I found out about him at all. This is my first try at the Watcher Class too. I considered others like Caster or Avenger but ultimately decided it was the most fitting to represent this aspect of him. Also a very unusual NP that basically mocks the purpose of a standard Grail War (straightforward clashes between Servants) but since Watcher is meant as an anomalous Class I thought it'd make sense.
Might write up a lighter Caster or Assassin version of him sometime since there were interesting bits of his legend I couldn't work in here. As usual comments and critiques would be welcome. Thanks for reading!
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3 Ridiculously edgy sheets in a row! Lets see if someone can keep it up and make a fourth ridiculously edgy sheet!
I think all of the servants posted today seem pretty swell to me, I think I like watcher the most as his first personal skill makes me think of the famous scene in Wickerman with Nick Cage and the bees lol
Sergej:
Bruh, give me yer creative juices you use to make these sheets. I demand your juice
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Maybe we should all release our dark and edgy sheets over Halloween and post all our “cute” and “sweet” sheets over Christmas.
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Funny enough, I only have one somewhat "dark and edgy" servant and I'm taking my sweet time with it (I've been doing little bits and pieces for months now), so it probably won't be done anytime soon. However, I do hope to get about one or two "non-spooky" sheets done this weekend.
Ater-Ego Rachmaninoff: Damn, DelRey really came here just to prove he could've won his own contest. Ruthless.
Rey's style has evolved into a Mr. Perfect Cell amalgamation of all the creators' good stuff. His own collapse magecraft + my tables + the coloring and font use of Frenzy. Who knows how many others strains went into making this chimera that threatens to put us all out of business!
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